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Question: Compare representations of war from two texts studied this term

Compare show how things are similar or different.
It is VITAL that









Introduction:

Body Paragraph 1 - Similarities

Point:
Evidence:
Explanation:
Link:





Points to Note
Thesis examples:
- The deliberate choice of language
shapes the representation of war.
- A composers experience of war
ultimately shapes the representations
shown.

Evidence can include:
- Composers attitudes towards war
- Language techniques used

Evidence Sentence Starters:
- For instance
- This can be seen in
- An example of this is
- For example

Embedding Quotes:
Quotes from each text need to be
incorporated into sentences.
- direct quote
- Paraphrase from author (Author name in
brackets at end of sentence)
E.g. Owen describes soldiers to be
coughing like hags which clearly
suggests

List of Connectives:
Also Just as
In the same manner Unlike
In spite of Likewise
Have in common Compared to
In contrast All are
Although Contrasting
However Similar(ly)
Conversely Even though
Both As well as
On the other hand Rather than
Besides The same as
As opposed to Instead
On the contrary Despite

Conclusion:
You must make a judgement related to the
similarities and differences in the topic.

Body Paragraph 2 - Differences

Point:
Evidence:
Explanation:
Link:


Conclusion and judgement:

Restate thesis:
Sum up body paragraphs:
Concluding sentence:

Body Paragraph 3 - Similarities

Point:
Evidence:
Explanation:
Link:






Body Paragraph 4 - Differences

Point:
Evidence:
Explanation:
Link:

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