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When you quote a conversation, begin a
new paragraph each time the speaker changes. Remember to keep the words that describe who is speaking in the same paragraph.
Mark, did you see that? she whispered, her eyes wide with fear. She took two steps backward and bumped into an easy chair. I looked at her and said, Lisa, you are always seeing things. I have no idea what you are talking about.
2. A comma separates the quotation from the words that tell who is speaking. A question mark or exclamation point takes the place of a comma. Stop whispering, I almost shouted back. Stop whispering! I shouted back.
3. Quotation marks show where the EXACT words of a speaker begin and end. Mark, did you see that? she whispered. (direct quotation) She asked Mark if he heard that. (indirect quotation)
4. Some quotations are divided. a) If a divided quotation is one sentence, use commas to separate the quotation from the speaker. Dont capitalize the second part of the sentence. If you look, she exclaimed, you can see the shadow over there. b) If a divided quotation is two sentences, use a period after the words that tell who is speaking. Capitalize the first word of the second sentence. See that shadow over there? she exclaimed, pointing to a dark corner of the room. Dont you see it?
5. Place ending periods and commas inside the end quotation mark. Mariah said, I want an elephant for my birthday.
6. Remember to capitalize the first word of a quotation it is a sentence inside a sentence. She whispered to Mark, Did you see that?
Punctuating Dialogue
Peter called to tell me Donna has been arrested, Sarah burst out as I walked in. Donna . . . arrested? I was astounded. Donna was mouselike, anything but likely to be in trouble with the police. What has she done? Sarah was distraught, eyes puffed and red from crying. Wadded tissues were piled on the table next to her chair. She went out shopping, she said, trying at last to speak clearly. And she stole . . . she stole . . . . Well, for heavens sake, I said, thousands of people shoplift. So why all this excessive drama? She stole a baby. --adapted from Dick Francis, Twice Shy 1. new paragraph started with new speaker 4. Divided quotation 3. Quotation marks around spoken words 5. Periods and commas inside quotes 2. Comma separating the quote from speaker