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This document appears to be feedback from a teacher (T) on a photography student's (Mia Farrell) coursework. The teacher provides comments on several assignments: 1) Three artist analyses where the student is asked to expand their analysis and use more photographic vocabulary. 2) A "Force of Nature" assignment where the student captured flowers growing through buildings and could further develop close-up shots. 3) An "Applied Force" assignment where the student's water shots were excellent and creating multiple responses helped demonstrate experimentation. 4) The teacher concludes by asking the student to complete their three final selected images for the course. Overall it was strong work but could be improved by always using photographic

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Mia Farrell

This document appears to be feedback from a teacher (T) on a photography student's (Mia Farrell) coursework. The teacher provides comments on several assignments: 1) Three artist analyses where the student is asked to expand their analysis and use more photographic vocabulary. 2) A "Force of Nature" assignment where the student captured flowers growing through buildings and could further develop close-up shots. 3) An "Applied Force" assignment where the student's water shots were excellent and creating multiple responses helped demonstrate experimentation. 4) The teacher concludes by asking the student to complete their three final selected images for the course. Overall it was strong work but could be improved by always using photographic

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Name: Mia Farrell

Ao1
Analysis.
How well have you
understood the work
of other
photographers

A02
Progression from 1st
to 2nd response.
How have the photos
been refined

A03
Quality of the
photographs. How
has the subject been
recorded

Unit1.5 Force

Task

Teacher Comment

3 artist analysis (9 photos)

A strong section but I would like you to expand


your analysis making sure to use more
photographic vocab. use the sheets provided
when talking about the photographs.

Nadav kander (3 Photos)

Well done an excellent section you have looked at


the images in more detailed and analysed in
greater details. I would however still like you to
use more photographic terminology

Francois Delfosse

Well done you have thought about artistic content


as well as technical considerations.

Berd and Hill Becher (3


Photos)

N/A

Force of nature

Really like this section the different shots of


flowers growing out of cracks in the buildings are
really strong and could definitely be developed
further. The second response work could have
been shot at a more close up angle emphasising
the battle between man and nature in even more
detail.

T+

Applied force

Well done a strong section with all responses


demonstrating a great understanding of the
techniques discussed in class. The water shots
are excellent creating and have a really
atmospheric feel to them . Creating more than
two responses helps to demonstrate experiments
and refinement..

T+

Imposing Architecture

A strong section the shots taken around school


have an imposing feel. The second response is
even stronger the choice of location is great and
works really well.

T+

3 Strands

Excellent work in this section three clear strands


that demonstrate experimentation and refinement
well done. I would just say be careful when
resizing your images as you have slightly distorted
some of the pictures i9n your portrait section

T+

Application of technique

You have taken on board what has been taught in


class and used this knowledge when taking your
own photographs you have an extremely strong
photographic eye well done.

T+

Composition

You have thought about your composition


throughout the project

T+

Location and subject matter

Your chosen subject matters are really strong and


your choice of locations are well thought out and
well executed.

T+

3 final images

Where are your final selections of images.

T-

Grade:B+

WAG:B+

Target:B

Final Comment
Some really strong work here please can you complete the final section demonstrating your chosen three final
images. Also make sure to always use photographic vocab when analysing work to create even stronger artist
sections.

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