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Lessiker Business Communication Solution-Part15

The document provides examples of rewriting sentences in a more conversational style. Some key changes include using less formal language and structure, acknowledging the other perspective, and suggesting alternatives rather than prohibiting actions. The summaries focus on the high-level goal of making the language more conversational rather than technical or legalistic.

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Lessiker Business Communication Solution-Part15

The document provides examples of rewriting sentences in a more conversational style. Some key changes include using less formal language and structure, acknowledging the other perspective, and suggesting alternatives rather than prohibiting actions. The summaries focus on the high-level goal of making the language more conversational rather than technical or legalistic.

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Lessiker Business Communication Solution

Using a Conversational Style


Instructions: Rewrite Sentences 31-41 in conversational style.
31. You cannot visit the plant except on Saturdays.
You may visit the plant only on Saturdays.
32. We are disappointed to learn from your July 7 email that you are having trouble with our
Model 7 motor.
We appreciate your bringing your experience with the Model 7 motor to our attention.
33. Tuff-Boy work clothing is not made from cloth that shrinks or fades.
Tuff-Boy work clothing is made from shrink-proof, fade-proof material.
34. Our Stone-skin material wont do the job unless it is reinforced.
Our Stone-skin material will do the job if it is reinforced.
35. Even though you were late in paying the bill, we did not disallow the discount.
For the month of May, we have allowed the discount even though payment was received after
the 10th.
36. We were sorry to learn of the disappointing service you have had from our sales force, but
we feel we have corrected all mistakes with recent personnel changes.
Changes in our sales force will ensure that you enjoy the quality service you have come to expect
from us.
37. We have received your complaint of the 7th in which you claim that our product was
defective and have thoroughly investigated the matter.
As you requested in your December 7 letter, we have thoroughly investigated the performance of
your Samsung Copier.
38. I regret the necessity of calling your attention to our letter of May 1.
Please refer to our letter of May 1.
39. We have received your undated letter which you sent to the wrong office.
Your recent letter has been forwarded to us.
40. I regret to have to say that I will be unable to speak at your conference, as I have a prior
commitment.
Because I have a prior commitment on the date of your conference, may I suggest that you invite
Ms. Clara Shattle to speak?
41. Do not walk on the grass.
Please walk on the sidewalk.

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