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The presentation by Anthonesha Henry and Germaine Daley on genomics and translocation went over the allotted time due to technical difficulties. While the visualization of translocation was clear, the density of information assumed some prior biological knowledge and the presenters spoke fast in the video without allowing enough time for synthesis. The topic was highly technical but appropriate for the intended student level and the presentation was found to be comprehensible and stimulating with helpful visualization.

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Commentbyc Gabbadon

The presentation by Anthonesha Henry and Germaine Daley on genomics and translocation went over the allotted time due to technical difficulties. While the visualization of translocation was clear, the density of information assumed some prior biological knowledge and the presenters spoke fast in the video without allowing enough time for synthesis. The topic was highly technical but appropriate for the intended student level and the presentation was found to be comprehensible and stimulating with helpful visualization.

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Presentation by Anthonesha Henry and Germaine Daley

Characteristic

Aim

Observed

Duration of presentation

Approx. 10 minutes

Start time.......
Finish time........
Total duration...........minutes

The presentation should be given in


comprehensible language.

The presentation is sufficiently comprehensible.


Comprehensibility should be improved.

The presentation should be accompanied by


selected elements of visualization.

The following forms of visualization have been


used:

Went overtime due to technical difficulties


Comprehensibility
Persons without some knowledge of biology may
be lost
Visualization
satisfactory and the graphics of the translocation
was clear. You tube video was good but the
presenter spoke fast on the video, not giving
enough time to synthesize the information

slides
handouts for the participants
pin board

Use of powerpoint slides satisfactory

flipchart
white/black board
The visual elements assist the understanding.
The visual elements should be improved.
Density of information
quite dense including spontaneous mutation and
especially the mechanisms causing cancers,

Further observations
ADDIE model could have been explained in more
detail.
The topic was highly technical and assumed some
prior knowledge of genomics and translocation on

Density of information should be high. However,


it must not overtax the learner.

The density of information seems to demand too


much of the learner.
Density of information is rather high.
Density of information is rather low.
The density of information seems to demand too
little of the learner.

Presentation by Anthonesha Henry and Germaine Daley


chromosomes. This was probably appropriate for
the level of students being taught. There were
some technical issues re the sound on the video
which caused the presentation to go overtime.

Table 2. Characteristics of a good quality presentation. (Tick Yes or No when assessing)


Is the presentation comprehensible?
Yes but requires technical background

Is the presentation stimulating?


I found it stimulating

Is the visualization helpful?

- speaks freely

yes

no

- short sentences

yes

no

- terminology is comprehensible

yes

no

- presentation is well-structured

yes

no

- conciseness

yes

no

- use of examples

yes

no

- eye contact

yes

no

- speaker varies his position

yes

no

- participants are encouraged to contribute

yes

no

- use of humor to create a relaxed atmosphere

yes

no

- presented with commitment

yes

no

- friendly/respectful behavior

yes

no

Presentation by Anthonesha Henry and Germaine Daley


Yes

- visualization is clear and well-structured

yes

no

- includes graphic elements and optical stimuli

yes

no

- easily legible writing

yes

no

- colors help to focus on the important aspects

yes

no

- comprehensible visualization

yes

no

- affectionate layout

yes

no

Critique by CG (Summary)
The topic was highly technical and assumed some prior knowledge of genomics and translocation on chromosomes. This was probably appropriate for the level
of students being taught. There were some technical issues re the sound on the video which caused the presentation to go overtime. Other comments are as
follows:
Duration of presentation-went overtime due to technical difficulties
Comprehensibility- Persons without some knowledge of biology may be lost
Visualization- satisfactory and the graphics of the translocation was clear. You tube video was good but the presenter spoke fast on the video, not giving enough
time to synthesize the information
Density of information- quite dense including spontaneous mutation and especially the mechanisms causing cancers,
Further observations- ADDIE model could have been explained in more detail
Is the presentation comprehensible? Yes but requires technical background
Is the presentation stimulating? I found it stimulating
Is the visualization helpful? Yes

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