Sample Write Ups
Sample Write Ups
Consider using the random name generator more often to ensure that all students have the opportunity to participate in
class discussion. Consider deflecting student questions and responses to other students to encourage higher level discourse
among students.
Consider posting a timed agenda for the lesson either on the whiteboard or on ELMO, so that students can help keep you
on pace with all of the lesson segments. Consider timing lesson segments using an online or kitchen timer to help with
pacing. Online Timer http://www.timeanddate.com/timer/ Kagan Structures require every student to participate
frequently and approximately equally. http://www.kaganonline.com/catalog/cooperative_learning.php Consider providing
hint papers with questions to probe struggling students and guide them through the lesson. This will provide students
support when they are stuck without having to wait for the teacher to come assist.
Plan in the use of ongoing assessment to monitor the progress of learning and use the results to guide instructional
decisions. For example, a suggestion is to circulate at the beginning of independent work to get a general pulse check
of the students understanding; if students get it continue, and if they do not make adjustments to re-teach. Formative
Strategies Link: http://daretodifferentiate.wikispaces.com/file/view/03+-+Formative+Assessment+Strategies.pdf This
PDF lists some more ideas for formative assessment: https://drive.google.com/file/d/0ByPw23nZZZpQ1V4bTFTMTI1cVk/edit?usp=sharing Refer to the attached document for self and peer assessment strategies.
The students were asked to work with one another checking each others work but there was not a structure to
ensure this was done. Some groups did this naturally while others did not collaborate effectively.
There were many students who were done or found the activity easy however the lesson continued as planned.
Next Steps
Consider a random calling strategy to ensure that all students have the opportunity to participate in class discussion.
Consider deflecting student questions and responses to other students to encourage higher level discourse among students.
Consider identifying a few key questions when planning the lesson to ensure that students have the opportunity to discuss
higher order questions. Use a structure that uses turn and time to ensure all students have sufficient time to think about the
question and are held accountable for responding to that question.
Refer to the following text available FREE through Library Media Services. On the district website, search Go Library.
Select Resources & then Educator Virtual Library. Look in the Gale ASCD collection- open database and search for this
ebook title, password=hcpsfl --- Managing Your Classroom with Heart: A Guide for Nurturing Adolescent Learners. By
Katy Ridnouer. Alexandria, VA: Association for Supervision and Curriculum Development, 2006. Gale Virtual Reference
Library. Web. 3 May 2013.
Consider two trainings offered through the district: Teaching with Poverty in Mind and Teaching with Love and Logic.
Differentiate instruction by strategically choosing assignments that are appropriate to the learning levels of the students.
Refer to the following link : target students' zone of proximal development.
http://www.toolsofthemind.org/philosophy/scaffolding/
Consider posting a timed agenda for the lesson either on the whiteboard or on ELMO, so that students can help keep you
on pace with all of the lesson segments. Utilize strategies to modify the pacing of the lesson to maintain engagement when
appropriate. Refer to Change the Pace technique # 50 from Teach Like a Champion by Lemov.
Consider providing students more practice problems and using a structure such as compare-repair to encourage
collaboration. Both students work on the same problem and compare their answer once done. If there are discrepancies,
have students defend their answer or find the mistake and repair their answer. Once they agree they can move to the next
problem. Consider having students work on the analysis in pairs to increase accountability during collaborative activities.
Refer to the attached document for self and peer assessment strategies.
[1E: Designing Coherent Instruction/3C: Engaging Students in Learning]: Learning could be enhanced by providing
enough time, rigor, and practice for all students to be intellectually engaged.
Some of the students were intellectually engaged in the lesson. There were some students who were asking
questions and discussing their ideas with their group or teacher. Other students did not participate in learning and
either had their head down, eyes closed, or seemed to have their minds on other things. The unpacking portion of
the lesson was done by students for homework then again as a whole class. This was not intellectually engaging
for the students. When unpacking embedded assessment 3 few students contributed. During the Spring Board
activity introduction there was an opportunity for students to be passive allowing other students to answer
questions and interact with the lecture. There was not many tasks or problems for students to do.
Instructional groups were only partially effective. There were two groups that seemed to interact and support
each other effectively. One group did not discuss much at all and the other group was talking off task most of the
time. There was not a strategy in place to hold students accountable and keep them engaged.
The pacing of the lesson was slow in parts. The unpacking activity was 22 minutes. The introduction of the
Spring Board activity required students answer 2 questions. The teacher did most of the talking with some
questioning of students. This took 20 minutes.
Next Steps
Refer to the following text available FREE through Library Media Services. On the district website, search Go Library.
Select Resources & then Educator Virtual Library. Look in the Gale ASCD collection- open database and search for this
ebook title, password=hcpsfl --- Managing Your Classroom with Heart: A Guide for Nurturing Adolescent Learners. By
Katy Ridnouer. Alexandria, VA: Association for Supervision and Curriculum Development, 2006. Gale Virtual Reference
Library. Web. 3 May 2013.
Consider two trainings offered through the district: Teaching with Poverty in Mind and Teaching with Love and Logic.
Consider developing a classroom management plan with the students help to create buy in. Have them list expectations
and discuss the importance of the rules linking to student learning. Have them list appropriate rewards and consequences.
Refer to the following for a template: https://drive.google.com/file/d/0ByPw23nZ-ZZpYnVPQXpPRWwwZjA/edit?
usp=sharing Modify seating arrangments to better focus students on the learning task. Check for a free online
management tracking system that can help establish procedures, record redirections, and reward on-task behaviors.
www.classdojo.com
Encouraging students to ask, "Why?" could enhance learning. Provide students with sentence stems to help them support
their thinking. This will allow students to use a resource to make their conversations more meaningful and will give the
teacher a method for providing clear feedback (3d). For example, if a student is giving a thin answer to his/her
neighbor, the partner or the teacher can say, I like your prediction so far. Add to that; tell your partner why you think that.
Can you use a sentence stem to help remind you of evidence from the text? Accountable Talk features and language
stems: https://drive.google.com/file/d/0ByPw23nZ-ZZpai1TMlFCODJQZFE/edit?usp=sharing
Differentiate instruction by strategically choosing assignments that are appropriate to the learning levels of the students.
Refer to the following link : target students' zone of proximal development.
http://www.toolsofthemind.org/philosophy/scaffolding/
Consider making smaller groups so all triangles are used. Refer to the attached document for more strategies on increasing
rigor and accountability through talk.
Classroom interactions between the teacher and students or among the students were
generally respectful but had occasional behaviors that compromised the promotion of
learning. Students were not very nice to one another saying things like sit down, shut
up, and you wrong. The students cut one another down. Students used curse words
when speaking with one another. The teacher was friendly and supportive. One student
was disrespectful to the teacher yelling at her when she was asked to share her solution.
The teacher asked to speak with the student outside then removed her from the class.
Refer to the following ink for Tips for Building Rapport:
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1YG5vJUMa01adh51zHc86VKq3XWQONwPNuItrZJA
DbXQ/edit?usp=sharing" Refer to the following text available FREE through Library
Media Services. On the district website, search Go Library. Select Resources & then
Educator Virtual Library. Look in the Gale ASCD collection- open database and search for
this ebook title, password=hcpsfl --- Managing Your Classroom with Heart: A Guide for
Nurturing Adolescent Learners. By Katy Ridnouer. Alexandria, VA: Association for
Supervision and Curriculum Development, 2006. Gale Virtual Reference Library. Web. 3
May 2013.
The teacher attempted to create a culture for learning and was partially successful. The
commitment of the students was moderate and the expectations for student
achievement that have been set are modest. There were some students who worked
hard to complete their assigned problems while others seemed to just go through the
motions. There was one student with her head down during the lesson. Consider the
following text available FREE through Library Media Services: Activating the Desire to
Learn by Bob Sullo.
2b: Culture
for Learning
2c:
Classroom
Procedures
A Little instructional time was lost due to classroom routines or procedures for transitions,
2d: Student
Behavior
P It appeared that the teacher has made an effort to establish standards of conduct for
2e: Physical
Space
A The classroom was safe, and learning was accessible to all students; the teacher
3a:
Communica
ting with
Students
A The teacher communicated the purpose and relevancy of the lessons instructional
3b:
Questioning
and
Discussion
Skills
3c. Student
Engagemen
t
3d: Using
Assessment
3e:
Flexibility
and
ensured that the physical arrangement supported the learning activities. The teacher
made effective use of physical resources. The students sat in rows facing the front of the
room. Students went to the board to model problems. All students could see the board.
outcomes clearly to the students. Directions and procedures were explained clearly and
the content was well scaffolded. The objective was written on the board: Students will
be introduced to a new method of solving systems: substitution. The teacher reminded
the students of the key word for the day: substitution. Students were able to go to the
board to explain their work to their classmates. A few students worked in pairs sharing
their solutions and explaining the process.
The teacher used a mix of levels of questioning designed to promote student thinking
and understanding; however, the students had limited discussion and fed the
information to each other instead of having a more in depth conversation. Questions
included: What do we need to find? How would you want to put that? What are you
going to substitute? To find? When you report something what are you doing? What are
the two different ways you can give answers with a system? What did it look like? The
teacher relied primarily on call outs. There were many students who did not participate
in class discussion. The teacher addressed student questions at their desks. The teacher
asked several probing questions to pairs of students. The students sat in pairs but
primarily shared answers instead of participating in higher order discourse. Consider
developing a list of questions to help guide the students to higher order discourse
during the lesson activity. Ask students to think about and discuss the questions using a
specific discussion strategy.
The learning tasks were aligned to the instructional outcomes and were designed to
challenge student thinking; however, the students were compliant and did not fully
intellectually engage in the lesson. The lesson structure did not allow the students the
time needed to be intellectually engaged. Some students were intellectually engaged.
They finished quickly but had nothing to keep them engaged while the teacher
supported struggling learners. The teacher walked around supporting students who had
questions. Not all students completed the assigned problems before the teacher and
students reviewed them on the board. The teacher asked the students to get to finish
the assigned problems with their shoulder partners. Some worked in groups and others
did not. There was not a strategy to ensure that students collaborated effectively. There
were some students who compared answers while others just copied their partner. There
was a student with her head down during the lesson and the teacher asked her to work
on her assignment but she continued to put her head down. Differentiate instruction by
strategically choosing assignments that are appropriate to the learning levels of the
students. Refer to the following link : target students' zone of proximal development.
http://www.toolsofthemind.org/philosophy/scaffolding/
Assessment was occasionally used in instruction, through some monitoring of progress
of learning by the teacher and/ or the students. Feedback to students was uneven, and
students were aware of only some of the criteria used to evaluate their work. The
teacher walked around monitoring progress and providing specific feedback to students
who asked. Some students worked in pairs comparing answers but others did not. Some
students sat alone. There was not a strategy in place to ensure students peer assessed.
The students were often on different numbers and assessment happened primarily as a
whole class globally. Consider allowing students time to practice through chunking the
lesson explanation and using a specific collaboration strategy. This will provide time for
peer assessment and monitoring of progress by the teacher.
The teacher responded to student questions/interest with moderate success.
Responsive
ness
2c: Classroom
Procedures
2d: Student
Behavior
The classroom was safe, and learning was accessible to all students;
the teacher ensured that the physical arrangement supported the
learning activities. The teacher made effective use of physical
resources. The students sat in groups angled toward the board. The
teacher projected work on the board using the ELMO.
3a: Communicating
with Students
3c. Student
Engagement
3d: Using
Assessment