Available in the Career Center

Resume Writing Guide

University of Hawaii,
HILO
 CREATING YOUR RESUME
This discussion is designed as a workbook to help you produce the first draft of a resume. It
focuses on the types of resumes most often used in business, private non-profit, and government
agencies. While it does not specifically address the needs of persons seeking employment in very
creative fields or higher education, most of the principles addressed here are applicable to the
creative resume and to the curriculum vitae.

The main purpose of preparing a resume is to produce a marketing tool to help you get an
interview for a job, an internship or graduate school admission. A resume also can be useful in your
networking efforts and is sometimes required to apply for membership in professional associations.
Additionally, the preliminary self-evaluation that you do will help you prepare for the interview
process.

STEP ONE; DOING FIRST-THINGS FIRST:

The first step in producing an effective resume is to assess thoroughly your professional
abilities, technical skills, personal attributes, experience, and accomplishments. Do not neglect this
step or minimize its importance. Before you begin to write your resume, take stock of what you have
to offer prospective employers.

One way to start is by making lists for each of the above categories:

What are my major transferable skills/abilities? (Read "Life Skills"; e.g.: organizational
ability, analytical ability, time management skills, leadership ability, interpersonal
communication, etc.):

__________________________________________________________________________

__________________________________________________________________________

__________________________________________________________________________

__________________________________________________________________________

What special, technical, or field-specific business skills do I have? (E.g.: bilingual, word-
processing, spreadsheet, data base management, programming languages, clerical, cash
handling, customer service, sales, etc.)

__________________________________________________________________________

__________________________________________________________________________

__________________________________________________________________________

__________________________________________________________________________

© Copyright: Norman S. Stahl, 1993, UCLA

8th Ed, 2002, UH Hilo, Hilo, HI

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What are some of my more important personal attributes and how do they relate to the
world-of-work? (E.g.: Ability to remain calm under pressure helps me work effectively in
high stress situations):

__________________________________________________________________________

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__________________________________________________________________________

__________________________________________________________________________

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Make a list of the places and situations in which you have exercised the preceding
abilities, skills, and attributes. (E.g.: Part-time jobs, internships, volunteer activities, clubs &
organizations, research projects, sports, etc.):

__________________________________________________________________________

__________________________________________________________________________

__________________________________________________________________________

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Finally, make a list of your accomplishments. (Some of these accomplishments will be

used to tell prospective employers how you made a difference in each organization or in your
personal development. Strive for at least three accomplishments for each organization or
situation you listed in the preceding step.) Writing out specific answers (What did I do, Where
did I do it, How did I do it and What were the results?) to the list of questions on the facing
page may help you in this process.

__________________________________________________________________________

__________________________________________________________________________

__________________________________________________________________________

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 GENERATE A LIST OF ACCOMPLISHMENTS

Think about the problems you've faced, the solutions you've devised and ask yourself:

What did I do? / How did I do it?/ Of what events am I most proud?
Did I do something faster, better, cheaper than it had been done before?
Did I increase membership, participation, or sales?
Did I save my organization any money or eliminate waste?
Did I identify and/or help solve any problems?
Did I institute any new methods, systems, or procedures?
Did I suggest a new service, product, or project?
Did I re-organize or improve an existing system?
Did I refine the nature of an existing task?
Did I maintain a consistently high level of performance?
Did I demonstrate leadership skills and/or did I exhibit good team player skills?
Did I reach out for more work or more responsibility?
Did I achieve results with little or no supervision?
Did I establish new goals and objectives?
Did I accomplish something others thought could not be done?
Did I motivate others?
Did I coordinate any event or project?
Did I train another person? What were the results?
Did I tutor anyone? Did their grades improve?
If I didn't improve the organization, did I improve my skills?
NOW QUANTIFY THE RESULTS YOU UNCOVERED THROUGH THE ABOVE EXERCISE:

Compare: "Organized business fraternity philanthropic events."

to
"Organized business fraternity philanthropic events; resulted in contributions of over
$4,000.00."

Compare: "Served food."

to
"Developed tact and diplomacy in dealing with customers in a fast-paced
environment."

Compare: "Responsible for typing and filing"

to
"Commended for efficiency and accuracy in completing office duties."

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STEP TWO; DECIDING WHAT TO EMPHASIZE:

Identifying your primary career objective helps you decide which skills and experiences to
emphasize and which ones to omit when composing your resume. Some of you have already
identified your career/job objective. Those of you who have not done so, may want to contact the
counseling center for assistance with this process.

Ideally, each resume you produce will be tailored to fit the specific job that you are applying
for. In circumstance where precise tailoring is not possible, construct your resume so that it is
targeted towards your primary career/job objective. You can then use your cover letter to call
attention to or add job-specific skills.

My primary career objective is _____________________________________________________

The principal abilities, skills, attributes, and experience that employers in this field look
for are:

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STEP THREE; PULLING IT ALL TOGETHER:

The next step is to put all this information together in an attractive format that looks
professional; can be easily read, and focuses on accomplishments & results.

A professional image is achieved by making sure your resume is attractively arranged on

high quality paper, using standard fonts. Your resume must contain no misspellings or typographic
errors and it must be logically organized so that your most important skills and accomplishments
stand out. Use a positive tone that conveys confidence. Avoid negative statements or explanation of
problems.

"Easily read" means, "Easily scanned." Most managers tell us they spend no more than
20 to 30 seconds scanning a resume during the initial screening process. During those few seconds,
they decide whether to reject the applicant or to place her resume in a (small) stack that will be
evaluated in greater detail. Your first challenge is to make it into that short stack.

You do this by making sure your resume is brief and easily scanned. Unless you are working
in a very technical field and have many years of experience, limit your resume length to one page --
two at the most.

Consider using a "bullet" format; listing one task or accomplishment per line. Begin each bullet with
an action verb and write in phrases -- not complete sentences. Express one thought per line and one
line per thought. The table below contains a few sample action verbs to get you started. You will
probably think of many others once you begin composing your resume.

Sample Action Words

Achieved Controlled Developed Guided Managed Reduced

Adapted Convinced Directed Handled Operate Researched
Advised Coordinated Employed Implemented Organized Served
Analyzed Counseled Equipped Improved Performed Sold
Assisted Created Established Increased Persuaded Supervised
Authored DecidedEvaluated Initiated Planned Taught
Built Delivered Expanded Led Processed Trained
Completed Designed Generated Maintained Produced Wrote

You may also increase "scanability" by using bold type to emphasize key points, but use it
sparingly. A word of caution about using italics and underlining for emphasis: many large firms use
computer-based resume screening programs in the initial review. Some of these programs have
difficulty recognizing unusual fonts, italics, and underlined phrases. If the firm you are submitting
your resume to uses computer screening, use only 10 to 14 pitch standard fonts and avoid the use of
italics and underlining in the resumes that you send to them.

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 Use computer screening programs to your advantage: Computerized screening systems
work by conducting a series of "Key word" searches and identifying the resumes with the most
matches for screening by a human resource person or department manager. You can use this to
your advantage by conducting as thorough research as possible to identify the skills, experience and
terminology the employer is looking for. Many times the ad or position description will list the specific
requirements the employer wants. By modifying your terminology to fit that used by the employer,
you will increase your chances of making it through the computer screening successfully.

Focus on accomplishments by minimizing job descriptions and listings of responsibilities.

Your responsibilities are not nearly as important as what you did with those responsibilities. Let your
job or position title tell them what your duties were; use your bullets to tell them how you made a
difference in each position. Speaking of position titles, you do not have to use your precise payroll
title; use titles that are descriptive of your responsibilities. For example: "Accounting Clerk Intern" is
much more descriptive than "Intern".

OK, ready to write? Not so fast! You have one more decision to make before you start typing
your resume. What format are you going to use? There is no magic or prescribed format, you may
construct your resume in any format that is consistent with the key principles discussed above and
that portrays your skills and experience at a glance. There are three basic formats in general use
today: chronological, functional and combination. Each has its own advantages and disadvantages.
Lets look briefly at each of these three types:

The Chronological Format. This is the most commonly used type and is therefore the type
that most employers are used to seeing. It emphasizes the positions that you have held and the
experiences that you have had. Strictly speaking, we probably should call this a "Reverse
Chronological" resume because your current or most recent position is generally listed first and then
previous positions follow in reverse chronological order.

Figure 1 is a template that describes the various components of a resume using the
chronological resume format. Figure 2 shows an example of a chronological resume. You do not
have to use all the categories that are depicted -- omit the ones that you do not need or cannot use
effectively. In figure 3 (Targeted Section Chronological Resume), note how the writer has "targeted"
a specific section of her resume to emphasize her writing experience..

The Functional Format: The use of the functional format is best limited to circumstances
that require you to avoid emphasizing your employment record. You might choose this format if you
have no work experience, have significant gaps in your employment record, have a pattern of short
term jobs (subsequent to graduation from college), or have held several positions in which you have
exercised the same skills. It is also often used by persons who are making a drastic career change
and who want to emphasize their transferable skills. In the functional resume format, you emphasize
your skills rather than the positions you have held. Figure 4 shows an example of the functional
resume format.

The Combination Format: As the name implies, the combination format is a combination of
the functional and chronological formats. The combination resume is formed by adding a listing of
employers and positions held to the functional resume. This shows the potential employer where you
have gained the skills you are highlighting. If you have a stable employment record, it is important to
include it because it helps remove some of the suspicions that often rise in the mind of employers
reading functional resumes. Figure 5 contains an example of a combination resume.

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STEP FOUR; PUTTING IT ON PAPER:

You know what employers are looking for. You know what your skills and accomplishments
are and how they relate to the world of work, and you have selected the general format you are going
to use. Now, lets get started. Regardless of the format you have chosen, the following information
should be included in your resume in some form:

Heading: At the top of the page you should list your name, address and telephone number,
and e-mail address. List your day-time phone number. If you do not have ready access to a
phone during the day, list your residence number. Make sure some responsible person is
there to take a message for you or invest in a message machine (Warning: Keep your
messages business like!) or answering service.

Objective: Your resume does not have to contain an objective. If you decide to use one,
state it clearly and succinctly. Avoid the use of lengthy, meaningless objective statements
such as, "A challenging and rewarding assignment in a dynamic company that will use my
exceptional managerial skills". If you decide to use an objective statement, I recommend you
produce at least one version without it to use at career fairs, etc.

Qualifications Summary: Most recent graduates probably will not use this section or may
title it "<Field Specific*> Skills" (E.G.: “Business Skills, or “Marketing Skills”). It is generally
used only by people who have several years of experience and/or technical skills that they
want to bring to prospective employers attention at the beginning of the resume. The key
word here is "Summary". You do not need to provide details or tell where you gained the
special skill--that should be apparent in your experience section.

Education: For many recent graduates this may be the first line of your resume. List
education before experience when education is your strength, and experience first when it is
your greatest strength. This principle of leading with your strengths should be used
throughout your resume. You can even use this principle within sections to decide which
order you are going to list things. For example: If your degree is directly related to the type of
work you are pursuing, list your degree first and University of Hawaii at Hilo second. If it is
not, then graduating from UH Hilo is your strength so list University of Hawaii at Hilo first. If
your major is not related to your work, but you have coursework that is, you may want to
include a subsection that begins, "Relevant courses: . . .". Include your Grade Point Average
if it is 3.0 or above.

Activities and/or Honors: Recent graduates and continuing students also should include
academic honors (Dean's List, honor societies, scholarships). You may list honors separately
or as a subheading under education. University activities that display evidence of leadership,
initiative, community involvement or the use of special skills may be listed in an "Activities"
section or may be listed in your experience section. Use the method of organization which
best presents your greatest skills and achievements first.

Experience: (Remember that experience is not limited to paid experience.) You have
several choices as to how you will portray your experience. You may list it in reverse
chronological order including part-time jobs, internships, and organizational positions all in
one section. You may create special sections, e.g.: "Marketing Experience" and "Related

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 Experience", and arrange the positions in reverse chronological order within each section.
Alternatively, you may decide to use a functional resume and detail your experience under the
skills you decide to emphasize.

Other Information: You may want to highlight other achievements or skills that are not easily
incorporated into the other sections. This may include such things as licenses, credentials,
publications, etc. Simply create an appropriate heading and insert it in your resume so that it
gets the attention it merits.

References: You do not generally list your references on your resume. Instead, type them
on a separate sheet of paper and take them to the interview with you. If space permits, you
may include a line at the end of your resume that says, "References available upon request".

Do not include: Usually you do not include personal information such as ethnicity, age,
marital status, religion, sports, hobbies etc. Note that we used the word "usually". If your
research indicates some element of personal information may increase your chances of
getting an interview then by all means use it.

STEP 5; PREPARING A COVER LETTER:

Cover Letters: In most cases, a cover letter should accompany each resume or application
that you submit for professional positions. Cover letters let you draw attention to particular
experiences or skills mentioned in your resume. A cover letter gains you an additional 8 to 10
seconds of attention to capture the employers interest – use them wisely.

Goals & Objectives: The goal of your cover letter is to quickly & clearly

• Point out your skills, knowledge and track record as they relate to the position.
• Explain how your qualifications can make a difference in the employers organization
• Persuade the reader to read your resume with positive expectations.
Guidelines:

• Research organizations to which you are applying to learn what they are looking for.
• Target your message and relate your skills and experience to a specific job in a
specific organization
• Spotlight your accomplishments and measurable results and relate them to the
employers business
• Whenever possible, send your letter to a specific person {by name}. Ideally the letter
should be addressed to the person who is likely to make employment decisions.
• Use the same paper, heading and font that you used for your resume and print your
letter using a laser printer for better quality.
Template & Sample: Figure 6 contains a cover letter template and Figure 7 contains a
sample cover letter. See also: Yate, Martin (2003). Cover Letters that Knock ‘em Dead, 5th
Ed. Avon, MA: Adams Media Corporation – Available in the Career Center.

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STEP 6; GET YOUR RESUME & COVER LETTERS CRITIQUED:

Before you begin distribution: Come to the Career Center and have your resume & cover
letter critiqued by a Career Counselor. You also should have your preliminary version of your
resume critiqued by several managerial level persons from your target industry before
distributing it.

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Figure 1, Resume Template: Reverse Chronological Resume:

FIRST NAME MI. LAST NAME

Mailing Address, City, State, Zip Code (A/C) Phone Number e-mail address

OBJECTIVE:
Briefly and succinctly, state the type of job and the industry you prefer.
EDUCATION:
University of Hawaii at Hilo*
BA/BS, Major Field of Study May 200X
GPA: (list if 3.0 or above)
* If your Major Field of Study is closely related to your objective, place that above
University of Hawaii at Hilo and bold it (in that case do not bold UHH).
Include amplifying remarks that may strengthen your competitiveness. You may
mention courses, independent studies, work commitments, scholarships, etc.
{ * } SKILLS:
* Preface your skills title with an industry-specific title such as “MARKETING SKILLS”.
Summarize any industry-related experience, technical, language, communication, or
transferable skills that you possess.
{ * } EXPERIENCE:
* Preface your experience title with an industry-specific title such as “SALES EXPERIENCE”.
Position Title (Most recent first)
FIRM/AGENCY, City, State dates
ƒ Accomplishment Bullets (How you made a difference at this organization)
ƒ Minimize listing duties and tasks – describe how you made a difference
ƒ Try to generate three or more bullets for each position in this section
LEADERSHIP EXPERIENCE:
If you have any leadership experience whether elected, appointed, or simply assumed,
describe it as if it were a job. Employers come to UH Hilo to recruit the future leaders of their
company. Give yourself an appropriate title and follow the format suggested above.
Position Title (Most recent first)
CLUB/AGENCY, City, State dates
ƒ Accomplishment Bullets (See “Generate an Accomplishments List” exercise)
ƒ Avoid simply listing duties and tasks – describe how you made a difference
ƒ Try to generate three or more bullets for each position in this section
RELATED EXPERIENCE:
As a general rule, if it is honest work, it is “Related” to your objective. If you lack space or
accomplishment bullets, you may simply want to list the position title, firm or agency & dates.
ACTIVITIES AND HONORS:
List any academic or other honors that you have earned, community activities, organizational
activities that are not substantive enough to be listed under “Leadership Experience”.

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Figure 2; Sample Chronological Resume Format:

VICKI VULCAN
4### Kilauea Avenue, Hilo, HI 96720, (808) 935-#### [email protected]

OBJECTIVE:

A management trainee position in retail merchandising.

EDUCATION:

University of Hawaii at Hilo

Bachelor of Arts in English May 2003
GPA: 3.46

Business coursework includes: Financial, Managerial, and Intermediate Accounting; Auditing,

Business Law, The Global Economy, Statistics, and Business Writing

BUSINESS SKILLS:

Retail Sales and Sales Management Experience. Bilingual Japanese/English. Conversational

Spanish. Proficient in use of IBM-PC; Familiar with Macintosh operating system.. Extensive
experience with WordPerfect and Pagemaker.

EXPERIENCE:

Assistant Manager
ISLAND FURNITURE, Hilo, Hawaii 2000 - Present
• Joined firm as sales associate; rapidly promoted to Assistant Manager.
• Scheduled and supervised a staff of seven employees.
• Increased sales volume by 25% in six months time.

Program Coordinator
NATIVE HAWAIIAN EDUCATION PROJECT, UH HILO 1998 - 2000
• Began as volunteer; selected for promotion to Program Coordinator.
• Trained 15 new volunteers to work with at-risk elementary school children.
• Wrote, compiled and edited a twenty page manual for training volunteers.
• Expanded the program to include five additional elementary schools.

Office Assistant
THOMAS TEMPORARIES, INC., Hilo, Hawaii 1998- 2000
• Provided clerical support for several large corporate offices and law firms.
• Enhanced administrative skills and became proficient in the use of computers.
• Received several offers for permanent employment based on excellent performance.

HONORS & ACTIVITIES:

Deans List
Program Director, UH Hilo Business Investment Society
Contributing Writer, "Ke Kalahea”, UH Hilo (Student newspaper)

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Figure 3; Sample “Targeted Section” Chronological Resume:

VICKI VULCAN
4### Kilauea Avenue, Hilo, HI 96720, (808) 935 - #### [email protected]

CAREER OBJECTIVE:
An entry-level position on a newspaper editorial staff.

EDITING/REPORTING SKILLS:
Student newspaper editing and reporting experience. Bilingual Japanese/English.
Conversational Spanish. Proficient in use of IBM-PC, familiar with MacIntosh operating
system. Extensive experience with Microsoft Word and Pagemaker.

EDUCATION:
Bachelor of Arts in English
UNIVERSITY OF HAWAII AT HILO May 2003
GPA: 3.46
Independent Research Project: Wrote a 40 page report on Japanese influences on
Hawaiian culture. Researched current periodicals covering cultural, educational, economic,
and social issues.

WRITING EXPERIENCE
Contributing Writer
KE KALAHEA, UH HILO 2000 - 2002
• Authored articles targeting Asian American issues for university student newspaper
• Researched community issues and interviewed prominent community leaders.

Program Coordinator/Editor
NATIVE HAWAIIAN EDUCATION PROJECT, UH HILO 1998 - 2000
• Compiled and edited a 20 page training manual for volunteers.
• Expanded program to include 3 additional elementary schools in East Hawaii.
• Recruited and trained student volunteers to work with at-risk elementary school
children.

RELATED EXPERIENCE:

Assistant Manager
ISLAND FURNITURE, Hilo, Hawaii 2000 - Present
• Joined firm as sales associate; rapidly promoted to assistant manager.
• Created ad copy and developed other promotional materials.
• Composed a variety of business correspondence.

Office Assistant
THOMAS TEMPORARIES, INC., Hilo, Hawaii 1998 - 2000
• Enhanced administrative skills and became proficient in the use of computers.
• Received several offers for permanent employment based on excellent performance.

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Figure 4; Sample Functional Resume Format

ANDY VULCAN
5## Kinoole Avenue, Hilo, HI 96720
(808) 935-### [email protected]

OBJECTIVE
A cooperative education position or internship in the computer science industry.

EDUCATION
Computer Science Minor, Economics Major Dec 2004
University of Hawaii at Hilo
Mathematics, Associate of Science June 2002
Fresno City College
Coursework includes: Software Development, Visual Basic Programming , Web Technology,
Discrete Mathematics, Artificial Intelligence, Data Structures Programming, Operating Systems,
Computer Networks and Data Communication, Compiler Theory, Artificial Intelligence, Analysis
of Algorithms, and related mathematics courses.

COMPUTER SKILLS
Technical:
Programming Languages: C++, FORTRAN, PASCAL, FoxPro, HTML, JAVA
Operating Systems & UNIX, X-Windows, SunView MS-DOS, MVS/ESA,
Environments: IBM 270/135, IBM 3033, IBM 3690, Burroughs B3600, Sun Micro-station
Application Software: Excel, Access, WordArt, DesignMaker, Microsoft Word 7.0,
WordPerfect 6.0
Programming:
• Designed purchasing system that operates on Novell Network using FoxPro.
• Produced computerized chess game using artificial intelligence techniques.
• Designed own homepage using HTML and JAVA.
Research:
• Participated in research project involving heuristic search algorithms.
• Prepared written reports of research projects.

ACTIVITIES/HONORS
Computer Science Students Association, UH Hilo
Webmasters Student Group, UH Hilo
National Association of Collegiate Scholars (NACS)
Representative at Large, Fresno City College

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Figure 5; Sample Combination Resume Format:

BARRY VULCAN
20## Beverly Glenn Drive, Los Angeles, CA 90024, (310) 825-#### [email protected]

ACCOMPLISHMENTS

• Designated "Sales Person of the Year" three years in a row.

• Directed turn-around of sales force with declining production.
• Achieved a 57% increase in sales volume within first year as manager.
• Recommended new product line that resulted in $3.5 million dollar increase in business.
• Designed system for inventory control that resulted in 30% reduction in merchandise loss.

SKILLS & EXPERIENCE SUMMARY

Sales Promotion:
• Prepared and supervised sales promotion projects for major business organizations.
• Created newspaper, radio and television advertising campaigns for new product lines.
• Represented company at trade association meetings to promote products and services.

Sales Management:
• Recruited, trained and supervised local and regional sales staff.
• Developed and implemented sales training and development programs.
• Assigned territories, established quotas, and supervised achievement of goals.

Market Research:
• Organized and directed market research projects to determine customer needs.
• Prepared sales forecasts; made recommendations on product design, pricing and
distribution.
• Composed detailed reports of survey results for corporate management team.

EMPLOYMENT HISTORY

Sales Manager
GILMORE RESEARCH CORPORATION, Los Angeles, CA 2000 - Present

Assistant Sales Manager

WEBER-UBICK ENGINEERING, Ceres, CA 1998 - 2000

Sales Associate
N. STAHL & COMPANY, Fresno, CA 1995 - 1998

EDUCATION

Certificate in Marketing
FRESNO CITY COLLEGE 1998

Bachelor of Arts in Economics

UNIVERSITY OF HAWAII AT HILO 1995

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Figure 6; Cover Letter Template:

YOUR NAME
Mailing Address, City, State, Zip (a/c) Phone Number your email address

Date

Name of Contact
Title
Name of Organization
Address
City, State, Zip

Dear Mr./Ms. Last name of Contact:

INTRODUCTION: State the position or type of work for which you are applying. Identify how you
learned of the opportunity. In one or two sentences, tell why the position and organization interest
you. Give a very brief summary of your education and background. (E.g.: “I will be graduating
from UH Hilo with a Bachelors of Business Administration in May of this year and have had
several internships related to this field.”)

SELL YOURSELF: (Research the company and the position beforehand!) Succinctly state why
you are qualified for the position using the employers terminology and jargon. Highlight two or
three major accomplishments that demonstrate your initiative, creativity, follow-through,
communication skills, and problem solving abilities. Be sure to draw a connection between the
needs of the current job opening and the skills and experience that you will bring to the job. This
section may be one or two paragraphs long.

ASK FOR AN INTERVIEW: Re-emphasize your interest, politely thank the employer for their time,
and request an interview – or indicate that you will call to arrange an interview.

Sincerely,

Don’t forget to sign your letter!

Your Name Typed

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Figure 7; Cover Letter Sample:

NOLEMANA K. KILA
P.O. Box 5X
Hilo, Hawaii 96721-005x (808) 981 – 2### [email protected]

January 10, 200x

Mr. Ugatta Job

Human Resource Manager
Big Island Medical Group
1176 Hunhau Street
Kailua-Kona, HI 96740

Aloha Mr. Job:

I am applying for the Human Resource Representative position that is listed on the UH Hilo
Career Center’s website. I will graduate from UH Hilo in May with a Bachelors Degree in
Psychology and a Business Administration Minor. My internships in human resources and my
academic training provide me with sound interpersonal and business skills. I am interested in
this position because it involves providing human resource services in a health care
environment. In addition, I noted that a recent edition of the Pacific Business News listed your
Group as the fastest growing company on the Big Island.

You will note from my resume, that I have completed two human resource related internships –
one with a health care organization. At the Bay Clinic in Hilo, I performed the duties, tasks, and
responsibilities associated with employee benefit administration and observed clerks and
supervisors in the payroll and labor relations section. At ALTRES Staffing, I gained a thorough
understanding of the functions associated with the employment process. These experiences,
combined with my computer proficiency (MS Access, Excel, Power Point & Word) allow me to
be extremely innovative and efficient. I have developed strong written and verbal
communication skills through such human resource activities as drafting job postings,
interviewing & evaluating applicants, processing employee evaluations, explaining benefits
packages and procedures. Through my student leadership positions, I have become
comfortable speaking to audiences over 75 people.

I believe that I could be a valuable asset to the Big Island Medical Group and will call you within
the week to arrange a meeting to discuss ways that I might be of benefit to your organization. In
the meantime, I can be reached at (808) 981 – 2#### or you may email me at
[email protected].

Sincerely,

Nolemana Kila
Nolemana K. Kila

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