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Theme: Stories and Storytelling

Putting the Pieces Together

How would you arrange the words and phrases above to tell a story? Magnetic word blocks are fun because they let you group words together in any order. However, the words will only make sense if they are arranged in complete sentences. Sentences allow you to express complete thoughts. You can use different types of sentences to tell stories. Write Away: Story Time What do you think will happen to the porcupine? Write a brief story based on the words and phrases in the photograph. Place your completed story in your Working Portfolio.

Diagnostic Test: What Do You Know?

For each underlined item, choose the letter of the term that correctly identifies it. All societies have storytellers. In the Songhai Empire of West
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Africa, griots traveled from village to village. These storytellers

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informed people about historical and current events. Songhai kings

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greatly valued their work. Some modern griots have continued this
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tradition. Troubadours were European storytellers who performed a similar role during the Middle Ages. From their songs and stories flowed all kinds of information. Sometimes they would tell funny
(7) (8)

tales, other times they would explain herbal medicine. They enlightened and entertained audiences in market places and
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palaces. At one royal wedding, 426 troubadours performed!

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SENTENCE PARTS

1. A. simple subject B. simple predicate C. complete subject D. complete predicate 2. A. simple subject B. simple predicate C. complete subject D. complete predicate 3. A. simple subject B. simple predicate C. complete subject D. complete predicate 4. A. predicate noun B. predicate adjective C. direct object D. indirect object 5. A. compound predicate B. verb phrase C. helping verb D. main verb

6. A. predicate noun B. predicate adjective C. direct object D. indirect object 7. A. fragment B. run-on sentence C. declarative sentence D. exclamatory sentence 8. A. fragment B. run-on sentence C. inverted sentence D. exclamatory sentence 9. A. complete subject B. complete predicate C. compound subject D. compound verb 10. A. exclamatory sentence B. interrogative sentence C. imperative sentence D. declarative sentence

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In order to share ideas and information successfully, you need to use complete sentences.

A sentence is a group of words that expresses a complete thought.

Here is a group of words.

These words cannot get a message across unless they have a structure. Here is a sentence made from the same words. Notice that the sentence communicates a complete idea..

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Every complete sentence has two basic parts: a subject and a predicate.
1. The complete subject includes all the words that tell whom or what the sentence is about.
COMPLETE SUBJECT

The glass slipper fits only one person.

2. The complete predicate includes the verb and all the words that tell about the verb.
COMPLETE PREDICATE

The glass slipper fits only one person.

Heres How Finding Complete Subjects and Predicates

The prince searches for its owner.

1. To find the complete subject, ask who or what does something (or is something). Who searches for its owner? The prince 2. To find the complete predicate, ask what the subject does (or is). What does the prince do? searches for its owner

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You need to write complete sentences to share your ideas with others. When you revise your writing, make sure that each sentence has both a subject and a predicate.

There are over 500 European versions of Cinderella. Storytellers Probably passed them around by word of mouth for appeared centuries. The first written version in 1634.
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3 Practice and Apply

CONCEPT CHECK: Complete Subjects and Predicates Draw two columns on a sheet of paper. Label one Complete Subjects and the other Complete Predicates. Write the complete subject and complete predicate for each sentence. Cinderella in Asia 1. People around the world tell Cinderella stories. 2. The oldest version of all comes from China. 3. The main characters name is Yeh-Shen. 4. This lovely young woman lives with a cruel stepmother and a selfish stepsister. 5. Yeh-Shen receives help from a wise old man and a dead goldfish. 6. The bones of the dead goldfish grant the unlucky maidens wish. 7. She goes to a party in a beautiful cloak and a beautiful pair of slippers. 8. One of the slippers falls off Yeh-Shens foot. 9. A king seeks the slippers owner. 10. You probably know the rest of the story.

For a SELF-CHECK and more practice, see the EXERCISE BANK, p. 262.

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You have learned that one basic part of a sentence is the complete subject. Now you will learn about the key part of the complete subject.

The simple subject is the main word or words in the complete subject. Descriptive words are not part of the
simple subject.
COMPLETE SUBJECT

Oral tales are important in Pueblo culture.

SIMPLE SUBJECT

This tradition has inspired Pueblo potters.

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SIMPLE SUBJECT

When a proper name is used as a subject, all parts of the name make up the simple subject.
SIMPLE SUBJECT

Mary Trujillo makes clay storyteller figures.

2 Why It Matters in Writing

The simple subject gives important information. It tells the reader whom or what the sentence is about. When you revise your work, look out for unclear words used as simple subjects. Notice how a change in wording improves the sentence below.

Example: The clay object holds children on his lap. Revision: The clay storyteller holds children on his lap.

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A. CONCEPT CHECK: Simple Subjects On a separate sheet of paper, write the simple subject of each sentence. Remember, descriptive words are not part of the simple subject. Example: Desert tortoises are sneaky. Simple subject: tortoises 1. A slow tortoise lived in the desert long ago. 2. A nimble rabbit crossed his path one day. A Traditional Pueblo Tale

3. The rabbit challenged the tortoise to a race. 4. Immediately, his tricky neighbor accepted the challenge. 5. The mismatched animals agreed to hold the race four days later. 6. The confident rabbit crossed the finish line. 7. A big surprise awaited the rabbit. 8. A smiling tortoise greeted him. 9. The unsuspecting rabbit was the victim of a trick. 10. His opponents twin brother met him at the finish line!
For a SELF-CHECK and more practice, see the EXERCISE BANK, p. 262.

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B. WRITING: Creating Complete Sentences Answers in column. Create four sentences by combining complete subjects with complete predicates from the table below. Underline the simple subject in each sentence. Clay Storytellers
Complete Subject
The storyteller figures Each Pueblo potter The colors on the storyteller figures Collectors

Complete Predicate
come from natural substances pay thousands of dollars for some storyteller figures are handmade and hand painted works in a different style

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1 Heres the Idea

You have learned about the simple subject of a sentence. You also need to know about the simple predicate.

The simple predicate, or verb, is the main word or words in the complete predicate.
COMPLETE PREDICATE

Hercules battles the nine-headed Hydra.

SIMPLE PREDICATE

His nephew helps him in the struggle.

SIMPLE PREDICATE

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A verb is a word used to express an action, a condition, or a state of being. A linking verb tells what the subject is.
An action verb tells what the subject does, even when the action cannot be seen.

Hercules arrived in a foreign city. (action you can see) The ruler disliked Hercules. (action you cannot see) Greek myths are timeless. (linking)

2 Why It Matters in Writing

The verb is the most important word in a complete predicate because it tells what the subject does or is. When describing an event, choose powerful verbs that will help your readers imagine the action.

The Hydra lunged at Hercules with one of its deadly heads. Hercules swung his club. He crushed the skull. Two new heads quickly sprouted in its place.

Dee Stiffler

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3 Practice and Apply

A. CONCEPT CHECK: Simple Predicates, or Verbs On a separate sheet of paper, write the simple predicate, or verb, for each sentence. 1. Hercules is the hero of many Greek myths. 2. He served King Eurystheus for 12 years. 3. 4. 5. 6. 7. 8. 9. The Labors of Hercules

The cowardly king hated Hercules. He assigned the hero a series of dangerous tasks. The Greeks called these tasks the labors of Hercules. Hercules once captured a gigantic wild boar. He also battled a flock of monstrous birds. The birds showered Hercules with sharp bronze feathers. Hercules held the sky on his shoulders during one of his labors. 10. The king was furious over Hercules successes.
For a SELF-CHECK and more practice, see the EXERCISE BANK, p. 263.
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B. WRITING: Summarizing Information Answers in column.

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The first column of this chart lists five gods and goddesses from Greek mythology. The second column lists a responsibility or role that each is known for. Use the information to write a sentence about each character. When you have finished, underline each simple predicate. Some possible verbs include the following: protects, commands, represents, delivers. Mythic Figures
God or Goddess Athena Demeter Hermes Poseidon Zeus Known As or For . . .
goddess of wisdom and warfare protection of farmers and their crops delivery of important messages command of the seas most powerful of the Greek gods

Athena
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The simple predicate, or verb, may consist of two or more words. These words are called a verb phrase.

A verb phrase is made up of a main verb and one or more helping verbs.
VERB PHRASE

The princess had yawned loudly.

HELPING VERB MAIN VERB

Main Verbs and Helping Verbs

A main verb can stand by itself as the simple predicate of a sentence.
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Her visitor talked for hours. (action)

MAIN VERB

The tale was endless. (linking)

MAIN VERB

Helping verbs help the main verb express action or show time.
VERB PHRASE

The tale might be endless.

HELPING VERB MAIN VERB

Her visitor had been talking for hours. He will have been talking all day.
Notice that sometimes the main verb changes form when used with helping verbs. For more on these changes, see pages 96106. Common Helping Verbs
Forms of be Forms of do Forms of have Others
is, am, was, are, were, be, been do, does, did has, have, had may, might, can, should, could, would, shall, will

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You can use verb phrases to show when an action or event takes place. Notice how the verb phrases in this model move the action from the past to the present and the future.

Different versions of The Endless Tale have originated in various parts of the world.The hero of an English version can talk endlessly about locusts stealing corn. In Japanese folklore, you will find a similar hero who tells a never-ending story about rats.

PAST PRESENT FUTURE

Etta Worthington

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3 Practice and Apply

CONCEPT CHECK: Verb Phrases Write the verb phrase in each sentence below. Be sure to include all the helping verbs. An Endless Tale 1. A beautiful princess was searching for a husband. 2. Her perfect suitor should be a good storyteller. 3. He must tell an endless tale to the royal family. 4. A poor young man did appear at the castle one day. 5. He would share a story about a well-built barn full of corn. 6. Just a single locust may fit through the barns only hole. 7. The first locust could grab only a single grain of corn. 8. Soon a second locust has stolen another grain, and so on. 9. This mans boring story might have continued forever. 10. Fortunately, his marriage to the princess will interrupt it.

For a SELF-CHECK and more practice, see the EXERCISE BANK, p. 263.

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Sentences can have compound subjects and compound verbs.

A compound subject is made up of two or more subjects that share the same verb. The subjects are joined by a
conjunction, or connecting word, such as and, or, or but.
COMPOUND SUBJECT

Caroline and Suzanne are looking for fables.

SUBJECT SUBJECT

The library or bookstore will have a collection.

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A compound verb is made up of two or more verbs that share the same subject. The verbs are joined by a
conjunction such as and, or, or but.
COMPOUND VERB

Fables entertain and teach.

VERB VERB

The animal characters speak and behave like people.

2 Why It Matters in Writing

You can use compound subjects and verbs to get rid of unnecessary words. Notice how the writer of this paragraph combined sentences.

or retold Aesop probably created some of the stories that made him famous. He probably retold some others. However, he and myths did not write any of them down. In his day, fables were part of the oral tradition.They were passed along by word of mouth. Myths were also part of the oral tradition.

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A. CONCEPT CHECK: Compound Sentence Parts On a separate sheet of paper, write the compound subject or compound verb for each sentence. 1. An ant and a grasshopper were in a field on a fine summer day. 2. The grasshopper hopped and sang. The Ant and the Grasshopper

3. The ant gathered and hauled seeds all day long. 4. The grasshopper relaxed or played in the meantime. 5. Cold winds and icy rains arrived in the winter. 6. The ant ate and enjoyed plenty of food. 7. The grasshopper starved and suffered. 8. His foolishness and laziness taught him a lesson. 9. Readers and listeners will probably guess what it is. 10. Discipline and hard work bring rewards in the future.
For a SELF-CHECK and more practice, see the EXERCISE BANK, p. 264.

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B. REVISING: Combining Sentences Answers in column. This version of a fable by Aesop is a little wordy. Make it flow better by using compound subjects and verbs to combine sentences.

The belly enjoyed food. So did the other body parts.Yet all meals went into the belly. Snacks also wound up there. One day the body parts decided to strike.The hands no longer obtained food.They didnt cook it either.The mouth refused to chew.The teeth stopped chewing as well. Soon the entire body grew uncomfortable. Now the body parts understood digestion.They appreciated digestion too.The strike was canceled. From then on, the body parts never blamed the belly.They also stopped complaining about it.
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1 Heres the Idea

A sentence can be used to make a statement, to ask a question, to make a request or give a command, or to show strong feelings.
Four Kinds of Sentences
What It Does Declarative Examples
Funny stories are popular everywhere. People from all cultures enjoy humor. Do you know any jokes? Which one is your favorite? Listen carefully. Stop interrupting me! Makes a statement; always ends with a period. Asks a question; always ends with a question mark. Tells or asks someone to do something; usually ends with a period but may end with an exclamation point. Shows strong feeling; always ends with an exclamation point.

Interrogative

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Imperative

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Exclamatory

Youre really funny! That joke is a lot older than I am!

2 Why It Matters in Writing

The four kinds of sentences enable you to express different feelings and attitudes in your writing. Notice the variety of sentence types used in this dialogue, or conversation, between a teacher and her student, who is a promising writer.

Miss Walker. Whats wrong? I dont understand. Lenore. I dont want to read my story. And I dont want to go to Thunder Bay!

INTERROGATIVE DECLARATIVE EXCLAMATORY

Keith Leckie, Words on a Page

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3 Practice and Apply

A. CONCEPT CHECK: Kinds of Sentences Identify each of the following sentences as declarative (D), interrogative (INT), exclamatory (E), or imperative (IMP). 1. I found an amusing story in a book of folk humor. D 2. Was it about a well-known judge who lived in China? INT Shoe Trouble

3. Thats the one! E 4. Remind me how the story goes. IMP 5. One morning, the judge noticed that he was walking with a limp. D 6. What could the cause be? INT 7. He was wearing two completely different shoes! E 8. He asked his servant to run home and fetch a replacement. D 9. The servant told him that there was no point in changing shoes. D 10. The pair at home was exactly like this one! E
For a SELF-CHECK and more practice, see the EXERCISE BANK, p. 264.

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B. WRITING: Creating Dialogue When writers rewrite stories for the stage, they often use all four types of sentences. For example, imagine what the hedgehog might say when he discovers the creature in the stove. Different types of sentences help writers show the different feelings and attitudes of their characters. In your Working Portfolio, find the story that you wrote for the Write Away on page 4. Write a brief skit based on this story. Use each type of sentence at least once in the dialogue.

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In most declarative sentences, subjects come before verbs. In some kinds of sentences, however, subjects can come between verb parts, follow verbs, or not appear at all.

Questions
In most questions, the subject comes after the verb or between parts of the verb phrase.
Is the story suspenseful?
VERB PHRASE

Did you find it scary?

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SUBJECT

To find the subject, turn the question into a statement. Then ask who or what is or does something.

Did the ending surprise you? The ending did surprise you. (What did surprise you? the ending)

Commands
The subject of a command, or imperative sentence, is usually you. Often, you doesnt appear in the sentence
because it is understood.

(You) Turn down the lights.

SUBJECT

(You) Sit perfectly still.

Inverted Sentences
In inverted sentences, the subject comes after the verb. Their usual order is reversed.

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Inverted Subject and Verb

Normal Inverted Normal Inverted
A scratching sound came from the other side of the door. From the other side of the door came a scratching sound. A large black cat rushed into the room. Into the room rushed a large black cat.

Sentences Beginning with Here or There

In some sentences beginning with here or there, the subject follows the verb. To find the subject, look for the
verb and ask who? or what?
WHAT COMES
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SENTENCE PARTS

Here comes the scariest part.

VERB SUBJECT

WHAT GOES?

There goes our flashlight.

VERB SUBJECT

2 Why It Matters in Writing

Most people would grow tired of eating the same meal every day. Variety is also important in writing. You should look for opportunities to vary the order of subjects and verbs in sentences. Notice how inverting a sentence in the model makes the paragraph more interesting to read.

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REVISED

Miranda cautiously approached the abandoned barn.The hinges creaked and groaned as she opened the door. A pair of squeaking bats flew out. She ducked just in time.

Miranda cautiously approached the abandoned barn.The hinges creaked and groaned as she opened the door. Out flew a pair of squeaking bats. She ducked just in time.
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3 Practice and Apply

A. CONCEPT CHECK: Subjects in Unusual Order In two columns on a separate sheet of paper, write the simple subject and verb (or verb phrase) of each sentence. 1. Are your friends bored? 2. Tell a scary story. (You) What a Nightmare!

3. 4. 5. 6. 7. 8. 9. 10.
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Speak softly at first. (You) Then shock your listeners with a timely scream. (You) There are many scary stories. Will you set yours in a cemetery? In the shadows appear strange figures. There is a mournful cry behind a tomb. Are your friends afraid now? At the end of the story is a terrible surprise.

For a SELF-CHECK and more exercises, see the EXERCISE BANK, p. 265.

B. REVISING: Adding Variety Answers in column. Follow the instructions to revise the model sentence.

Model: A headless man appears in the window.

1. Turn the sentence into a question. 2. Rewrite the sentence to begin with There is. (Hint: Remove
the verb appears.)

3. Invert the sentence without using there so that the subject comes after the verb. Now decide how your revisions affect the mood of the model sentence. 4. Which revisions could you use to give information? 5. Which revision asks for information? 6. Which revision seems the scariest?

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A complement is a word or a group of words that completes the meaning of a verb. Two kinds of complements are subject complements and objects of verbs.

A subject complement is a word or group of words that follows a linking verb and renames or describes the subject. A linking verb links the subject with a noun or
adjective that tells more about it.
LINKING VERB

Cowboy poetry is a Western tradition.

SUBJECT COMPLEMENT

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Common Linking Verbs

Forms of be Other linking verbs
am, is, are, was, were, being, been appear, feel, look, sound, seem, taste

Predicate Nouns and Predicate Adjectives

Both nouns and adjectives can serve as subject complements.

A predicate noun follows a linking verb and defines or renames the subject.
NAMES RE

A popular cowboy poet is Rudy Gonzales.

SUBJECT PREDICATE NOUN

A predicate adjective follows a linking verb and describes a quality of the subject.
SC RIBES DE

Most cowboy poetry is humorous.

SUBJECT PREDICATE ADJECTIVE

Some of the poems are sad. (describes)

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2 Why It Matters in Writing

Subject complements tell the reader much more about the subject.

One of Athenes pupils was a man called Daedalus. Even though he was mortal, he was almost as remarkable an inventor and craftsman as the god Hephaestus. He became famous throughout the world.

PREDICATE NOUN PREDICATE ADJECTIVE

Anne Rockwell, The Boy Who Flew

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3 Practice and Apply

A. CONCEPT CHECK: Subject Complements Write the italicized word in each sentence and identify it as either a predicate noun (PN) or a predicate adjective (PA). Poems on the Range 1. The cattle drives of the 1800s are legendary. PA 2. Life was difficult on the Western frontier. PA 3. It was also colorful. PA 4. Cowboy poets were the storytellers of the Old West. PN 5. Horses, hard work, and the cowboy life were their themes. 6. Their poems still seem so vivid. PA 7. The cowboy life remains an irresistible subject. PN 8. The stories of the Old West are popular once again. PA 9. Cowboy-poetry festivals are big events these days. PN 10. The future looks bright for this uniquely American art form.

PN

PA

For a SELF-CHECK and more practice, see the EXERCISE BANK, p. 265.

B. REVISING: Using Subject Complements

Answers in column.

Choose one of the following words to supply each missing subject complement below: cowboys, veterinarian, authentic. Its no wonder that cowboy poets often sound so (1) (predicate adjective). Many of them are real (2) (predicate noun). The famous poet Baxter Black used to be a (3) (predicate noun) who treated livestock.
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In addition to subject complements, there are objects of verbs. Action verbs often need complements called direct objects and indirect objects to complete their meaning.

Direct Objects
A direct object is a word or group of words that names the receiver of the action. A direct object answers the
question what or whom.
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Jack climbed the beanstalk.

DIRECT OBJECT

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The giants wife protected Jack. (protected whom? Jack)

Indirect Objects
An indirect object is a word or group of words that tells to whom or what (or for whom or what) an action is performed. An indirect object usually comes between a verb
and a direct object.
TO WHOM?

Jesse told his little cousins the story.

INDIRECT OBJECT DIRECT OBJECT

Verbs that are often followed by indirect objects include bring, give, hand, lend, make, offer, send, show, teach, tell, write, and ask.
Heres How Finding Direct and Indirect Objects Jack showed his mother the magic beans. 1. Find the action verb in the sentence. showed 2. To find the direct object, ask, Showed what? beans 3. To find the indirect object, ask, Showed to whom? mother

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When you describe events, you can use direct objects and indirect objects to help readers understand relationships.

A strange-looking man offered Jack five beans for his cow. Jack immediately rejected this offer.Yet he changed his mind when he heard that the beans were magical. Jacks mother gave him a fierce scolding when he came home with the beans.

DIRECT OBJECT INDIRECT OBJECT

Eric Scholl

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CONCEPT CHECK: Objects of Verbs For each sentence below, write each object and identify it as a direct object (DO) or an indirect object (IO). Climbing the Beanstalk 1. Jacks mother tossed the beans away. 2. The boy saw a huge beanstalk outside his window the next morning. 3. He discovered a giants castle at the top. 4. The giants wife served Jack some breakfast. 5. She could have brought her hungry husband the boy. 6. Instead she offered Jack her oven for a hiding place. 7. The giant counted his gold coins. 8. This task gave him a great weariness. 9. Jack stole a bag of gold after the giant fell asleep. 10. He showed his delighted mother the gold at home.

For a SELF-CHECK and more practice, see the EXERCISE BANK, p. 266.

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Sentence fragments and run-on sentences are writing errors that can make your writing difficult to understand.

Sentence Fragments
A sentence fragment is a part of a sentence that is written as if it were a complete sentence. A sentence
fragment is missing a subject, a predicate, or both.
FRAGMENTS

The Bayeux Tapestry in an ancient French town.

(missing a predicate)
SENTENCE PARTS

Tells the story of the Norman victory in England.

(missing a subject)

From the 11th century. (missing subject and predicate)

To make a complete sentence, add a subject, a predicate, or both.
REVISION

The Bayeux Tapestry hangs in an ancient French town. It tells the story of the Norman victory in England. The tapestry dates from the 11th century.

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Run-On Sentences
A run-on sentence is two or more sentences written as though they were a single sentence.
RUN-ON

The English lost the historic battle, Duke William of Normandy became their new king.
REVISION

The English lost the historic battle. Duke William of Normandy became their new king.
REVISION

The English lost the historic battle, and Duke William of Normandy became their new king.
When combining two sentences with a conjunction, use a comma before the conjunction.
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2 Why It Matters in Writing

When you take notes or do prewriting, you often jot down ideas as fragments or run-on sentences. It is important to change your notes into complete sentences when you write your draft.

NOTES

Consists of 72 scenes and a fancy border. Over 1,500 people, animals, and other figures in it. Scholars value the tapestry as a great work of art, it is also an important historical document.
DRAFT

The Bayeux Tapestry consists of 72 scenes and a fancy border. Over 1,500 people, animals, and other figures appear in it. Scholars value the tapestry as a great work of art. It is also an important historical document.

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A. CONCEPT CHECK: Sentence Fragments and Run-Ons On a separate sheet of paper, identify each of the following items as a fragment (F), run-on (RO), or complete sentence (CS). 1. William of Normandy led the Norman invasion of England in 1066. CS 2. In those days, Normandy was a small dukedom, today it A Storytelling Tapestry

is a region of France. RO 3. Bishop Odo of the town of Bayeux. F 4. Was Williams half-brother. F 5. His teams of craftspeople made the enormous piece of needlework. CS 6. The tapestry is 231 feet long, it is only 20 inches wide. RO 7. This magnificent work tells the story of the invasion. CS 8. Is in many ways like a movie. F 9. The thousands of details within the tapestry. F 10. Have taught us a great deal about life in the Middle Ages. F
For a SELF-CHECK and more practice, see the EXERCISE BANK, p. 266.

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Rewrite the exercise as a paragraph. Fix any fragments or runon sentences. Answers in column. B. REVISING: Fixing Fragments and Run-Ons Answers in column. You and a classmate are working together on a presentation about the Bayeux Tapestry. You have taken the following notes. Correct any fragments or run-ons so that your partner will understand your notes. SECTION 21 OF THE BAYEUX TAPESTRY Shows soldiers from Duke Williams army.They have just landed on the English coast, some are just getting out of their ships. One interesting detail the long oars within the ships. The Norman ships always fairly small in the tapestry. Historians tell us that they were actually around a hundred feet long.

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Using Different Types of Sentences

Whenever you ask a question, make a request, or express your excitement, you use different types of sentences. In writing, you need these types of sentences to show emotion and give information. Notice the types of sentences that Olivia E. Coolidge uses in retelling the Greek myth of Arachne.

ARACHNE
retold by Olivia E. Coolidge
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rachne was used to being wondered at, and she was immensely proud of the skill that had brought so many to look on her. Praise was all she lived for, and it displeased her greatly that people should think anyone, even a goddess, could teach her anything. Therefore, when she heard them murmur, she would stop her work and turn round indignantly to say, With my own ten fingers I gained this skill, and by hard practice from early morning till night. . . . As for Athenas weaving, how could there be finer cloth or more beautiful embroidery than mine? If Athena herself were to come down and compete with me, she could do no better than I. One day when Arachne turned round with such words, an old woman answered her. . . . Take my advice and ask pardon of Athena for your words.

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WRITING: Using Different Types of Sentences

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Retell your favorite fable, myth, fairy tale, or folktale, using at least three types of sentences. If you like, you can rewrite one of the following fables:

One day a big lion caught a tiny mouse.The mouse pleaded with the lion to let her go and promised to return his kindness one day.The lion, of course, didnt believe the mouse could ever help him, but he let her go anyway. A few days later, he walked into a trap whose net closed tightly around him. The mouse heard the lion roar in frustration and hurried to him. She quickly began to gnaw through the net until the lion was able to escape. Moral: Even a small friend can be a great friend.

SENTENCE PARTS

The hare was always making fun of the tortoise. He would laugh at the tortoises short legs and call him slowpoke. One day, the tortoise claimed that even though he was slow, he could still beat the hare in a race.The hare thought the tortoise was joking, but he accepted the challenge to race. From the starting line, the hare far outdistanced the tortoise. But the tortoise kept going, slowly and steadily.The hare got so far ahead that he soon grew tired.Thinking he had lots of time, he ate some clover, sipped water from a stream, and sat down under a tree to rest.While the hare was fast asleep, the tortoise kept going, not stopping for food, water, or rest. Just before the tortoise reached the finish line, the hare woke up. He hurried down the road, but he was too late.The tortoise had won. Moral: Slow and steady wins the race.

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Mixed Review
A. Subjects, Predicates, and Compound Sentence Parts Read the passage; then write the answers to the questions below it. A Cunning Spider (1) Picture the following scene. (2) A king has discovered a crime in his household. (3) The guilty one climbs and escapes as a spider. (4) Who is this slippery trickster figure? (5) Folklore fans will recognize him as Anansi. (6) Stories about Anansi originated in West Africa. (7) Storytellers and listeners are quite fond of him. (8) This humorous character always tries to trick people. (9) He succeeds most of the time. (10) Sometimes he himself is the victim of a practical joke or a clever trick.
1. 2. 3. 4. 5. 6. 7. 8. 9. 10.
Answers in column.

What What What What What What What What What What

kind of sentence is sentence 1? is the main verb of sentence 2? is the compound part of sentence 3? kind of sentence is sentence 4? is the helping verb of sentence 5? is the simple subject of sentence 6? is the compound part of sentence 7? is the complete subject of sentence 8? is the simple predicate of sentence 9? is the complete predicate of sentence 10?

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B. Complements Identify each underlined word as a predicate noun, a predicate adjective, a direct object, or an indirect object.

An incident in Anansi and the Crabs is an

(1) example of Anansis trickery. At the end of the 1. PN story, Anansi fears a harsh (2) punishment from 2. DO Alligator. He tells (3) Alligator the lie that they are 3. IO cousins. Alligator is (4) suspicious. He gives 4. PA (5) Anansi this test. Supposedly, all alligators can 5. IO

drink boiling water. Therefore, Anansi must drink some boiling (6) water. Only then will Alligator 6. DO believe him. Anansi seems (7) cooperative. He 7. PA makes one (8) suggestion, however. According to 8. DO Anansi, the water will become even (9) hotter after 9. PA a long rest in the sun. Alligator agrees. Of course, the water becomes cooler instead. Anansi drinks the (10) water with ease! 10. DO

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Mastery Test: What Did You Learn?

For each underlined item, choose the letter of the term that correctly identifies it. Have you considered storytelling as a hobby? Many students are showing interest in this ancient art. Even a shy person could tell stories before an audience. The following suggestions may be helpful for beginners. You should consider the age of your listeners. Myths and legends are good stories for younger audiences. Practice telling the story over and over. Some storytellers record their practice sessions on audiotape or videotape. Speak clearly and directly, use appropriate gestures and facial expressions. Look for a good location for your performance. Schools, parks, libraries, and community centers often attract enthusiastic crowds.
(10) (9) (8) (7) (6) (4) (5) (3) (1) (2)

SENTENCE PARTS

1. A. run-on sentence B. inverted sentence C. interrogative sentence D. declarative sentence 2. A. complete subject B. simple subject C. complete predicate D. simple predicate 3. A. complete subject B. simple subject C. complete predicate D. simple predicate 4. A. predicate adjective B. predicate noun C. direct object D. indirect object 5. A. complete predicate B. compound predicate C. helping verb D. verb phrase

6. A. compound subject B. compound verb C. direct object D. run-on sentence 7. A. declarative sentence B. interrogative sentence C. imperative sentence D. exclamatory sentence 8. A. complete subject B. simple subject C. complete predicate D. simple predicate 9. A. fragment B. run-on sentence C. inverted sentence D. declarative sentence 10. A. predicate noun B. predicate adjective C. indirect object D. direct object

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A sentence has two parts: a complete subject and a complete predicate.

complete subject complete predicate

The girls mother gave her a basket.

simple subject

simple indirect direct predicate, object object or verb complements

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Subjects and Predicates

Sentence Part Example

Story Line
How to Find It Ask who or what is or does something. Find the main word(s) in the complete subject. Ask what the subject is or does. Find the verb(s) or verb phrase(s).

Complete subject The sly wolf slipped into the bed. Simple subject wolf Complete predicate Simple predicate Little Red Riding Hood knocked on the door. knocked

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Complements
Predicate noun Predicate adjective Direct object Action verbs Indirect object

Finishing Touches
What It Does Renames or defines the subject Describes the subject Completes the verbs action Tells to whom/what or for whom/what the action is done

Type of Complement Example Linking verbs The wolf is a killer. His teeth are big. He ate the grandmother. She gave the wolf indigestion.

SENTENCE PARTS

Kinds of Sentences
Declarative sentence Interrogative sentence Imperative sentence Exclamatory sentence

Different Voices
The story has a happy ending. How does it end? (You) Tell me how it ends. What a happy ending!

The Bottom Line

Checklist for Editing Sentences
Have I . . . made sure that each sentence has a subject and a predicate? corrected any fragments or run-on sentences? combined any sentences with similar ideas by using compound subjects or verbs? used different kinds of sentences and subject-verb order for variety? used complements to make the meaning of sentences clear?

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Chapter 2

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Carmens Diary 23, 2001 hu T rsday, July and I got lost On our trip Dad and of Crete. on the Greek isl e ruins looking th We wandered in of the minotaur. for the mosaic kindness of a Because of the ally found it. stranger, we fin

Theme: Lost Cities and Civilizations

Finding Your Way

Poor Carmen! She and her father lost their way while exploring the ruins of a lost civilization on the island of Crete. Look at the different nouns in her diary. Which name people? Which name a place? Which name things? Which names an idea? As you can see, nouns are an important part of language. You need nouns to name the people, places, things, or ideas you write about. Nouns are the signposts in your sentences. They keep you from getting lost. Write Away: Missing Out Think about a time when you lost something important to you. You may have misplaced a treasured item, lost a contest or competition, or missed a big opportunity. Write a paragraph that describes this important event. Save your writing in your Working Portfolio.

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Diagnostic Test: What Do You Know?

For each numbered item, choose the letter of the term that correctly identifies it. Plato was a Greek philosopher. He wrote about an ancient
(1)

civilization called Atlantis. Long ago, he said, Atlantis had

(2)

disappeared beneath the waves. Platos words have caused many

(3) (4) (5)

people to wonder about this lost place. Some people think Atlantis was only a legend. Other people think it was indeed a real place.
(6) (7)

There may be a very simple explanation for Atlantis. About 3,500 years ago, a volcano erupted on Thera, an island near Greece.
(8)

The explosion completely destroyed the center of the island. So

(9)

Thera may be remembered as Atlantis, a civilization lost to a

(10)

natural disaster.
NOUNS

1. A. plural noun B. possessive noun C. common noun D. proper noun 2. A. singular noun B. proper noun C. possessive noun D. plural noun 3. A. noun as subject B. noun as direct object C. noun as object of preposition D. noun as predicate noun 4. A. common noun B. possessive noun C. predicate noun D. plural noun 5. A. plural noun B. possessive noun C. common noun D. proper noun

6. A. noun as subject B. noun as direct object C. noun as object of preposition D. noun as predicate noun 7. A. noun as direct object B. noun as subject C. noun as predicate noun D. noun as object of preposition 8. A. singular noun B. plural noun C. proper noun D. possessive noun 9. A. noun as subject B. noun as direct object C. noun as predicate noun D. noun as object of preposition 10. A. noun as predicate noun B. noun as direct object C. noun as object of preposition D. noun as subject

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1 Heres the Idea

A noun is a word that names a person, place, thing, or idea.
PERSONS archaeologist Theresa PLACES site Colorado THINGS pail shovel IDEAS exploration excitement

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Common and Proper Nouns

A common noun is a general name for a person, place, thing, or idea. Common nouns are not capitalized. A proper noun is the name of a particular person, place, thing, or idea. Proper nouns are always capitalized.
Common Proper people Pueblo Indians home Cliff Palace state Colorado

Proper nouns make writing clear and precise.

COMMON NOUNS

People abandoned their home in the state.

PROPER NOUNS

Ancient Pueblo Indians abandoned the Cliff Palace in Colorado.

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2 Why It Matters in Writing

Sentences without proper nouns are often too general. Notice how proper nouns make the following description more colorful and specific.

DRAFT

REVISION

I saw the man slowly hike up the road with his students to see the houses last month.

I saw Mr. DeLalo slowly hike up Ruins Road with Rick and Theresa to see the Cliff Palace last August.

3 Practice and Apply

CONCEPT CHECK: What Is a Noun? Write each noun, and label it as common or proper.

Quickly Lost, Slowly Found 1. Sometimes a place disappears quickly. Com. 2. This happened to Pompeii, in Italy. both Prp. 3. A volcano called Mount Vesuvius erupted almost 2,000 years ago. Com./Prp./Com. 4. Hot lava and ash shot out of the volcanic mountain. all Com. 5. The material rained down on the buildings of Pompeii. Com./Com./Prp. 6. Families were sitting down to eat bread and fish. all Com. 7. Some people ran to the sea and escaped in small boats. all Com. 8. Ash completely covered the town, and it was forgotten. both Com. 9. Pompeii was finally excavated in recent times. Prp./Com. 10. Giuseppe Fiorelli found blackened rolls in a bakery. Prp./Com./Com.

NOUNS

Label each noun that you wrote above as a person, place, thing, or idea. Answers in column.
For a SELF-CHECK and more practice, see the EXERCISE BANK, p. 267

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1 Heres the Idea

A singular noun names one person, place, thing, or idea. A plural noun names more than one person, place, thing, or idea. A tourist walked down the cobbled street. (singular nouns)
Tourists walked down the cobbled streets. (plural nouns)
To make sure you spell plural nouns correctly, follow the rules in the Quick-Fix Spelling Machine.

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QUICK-FIX SPELLING MACHINE:

SINGULAR RULE
Add -s to most nouns.

PLURALS OF NOUNS PLURAL

ruins buildings trenches dishes volcanos echoes cities stairways shelves knives chiefs deer buffalo

1 2 3

ruin building trench dish volcano echo

Add -es to a noun that ends in s, sh, ch, x, or z. Add -s to most nouns that end in o. Add -es to a few nouns that end in o. For most nouns ending in y, change the y to an i and add -es. When a vowel comes before the y, just add -s. For most nouns ending in f or fe, change the f to v and add -es or -s. Just add -s to a few nouns that end in f or fe. For some nouns, keep the same spelling.

city stairway

shelf knife chief

deer buffalo

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The plurals of some nouns are formed in irregular ways.

Singular Plural child children woman women man men foot feet

2 Why It Matters in Writing

Plural nouns are the cause of many spelling errors in writing. When you proofread, pay special attention to this challenge. Notice how plural nouns are spelled correctly in the model below.

Suddenly it seemed too late for Tito. The red hot ashes blistered his skin; the stinging vapors tore his throat. He could not go on. . . . In a moment Bimbo was beside him. . . . He licked Titos hands, his feet, his face.

NOUNS

Louis Untermeyer, The Dog of Pompeii

3 Practice and Apply

A. CONCEPT CHECK: Singular and Plural Nouns Answers in column. Rewrite the nouns in parentheses in their plural forms. 1. The (priest) of Egypt put the (body) of dead kings in tombs. 2. (Egyptian) believed that a body had to be preserved in 3. 4. 5. 6. 7. 8. 9. 10. Have You Seen My Mummy?

order to have life after death. For this reason, they prepared their dead to be (mummy). At first, only dead (king) and (queen) were wrapped in cloth. After many (century), ordinary people were also mummified. The mummies were buried with precious (object). (Scientist) study mummies to learn about (disease). They have found (rash) and (sore) caused by (parasite). Egyptians with many (rich) often had short (life). Perhaps the (story) about a mummys curse got started because (archaeologist) were infected by ancient germs.
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For a SELF-CHECK and more practice, see the EXERCISE BANK, p. 267.

B. PROOFREADING: Spelling Plural Nouns Answers in column. Ten plural nouns in the following passage are misspelled. Find them and write their correct spellings. Garbage In, Knowledge Out! Can you imagine archaeologists going through your trash? People who excavate, or dig up, lost citys do exactly that! They find artifacts that provide us with echos of the past. An artifact is any object mans, womans, and childs use in their daily lifes. Todays scientists examine pottery, tools, and other objects used by ancient communities. A future scientist may examine your mattresses, your toothbrushs, or your baby toys! A scientist today may look at bones to see which animals people ate, such as deers or buffalo. A future excavator may examine the leftover tomatos in your salad! Heres a hint. Keep your old dishs clean, in case theyre ever seen! C. WRITING: Describing Artifacts Answers in column. On a social studies field trip, you saw the student archaeologist below. Write a description of the tools he used and the artifacts he found. Be sure to spell plural nouns correctly.

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1 Heres the Idea

The possessive form of a noun shows ownership or relationship. The divers waited outside the archaeologists tent.
OWNERSHIP

The archaeologists family had come to visit.

RELATIONSHIP

You may use possessive nouns in place of longer phrases. ships location.

The divers used a robot to find the location of the ship.

QUICK-FIX SPELLING MACHINE: POSSESSIVES

NOUN
Singular Plural ending in -s Plural not ending in -s Mars mound temples travelers people men

NOUNS

RULE
Add an apostrophe and -s. Add an apostrophe. Add an apostrophe and -s.

POSSESSIVE
Marss orbit mounds location temples treasures travelers postcards peoples goods mens shoes

2 Why It Matters in Writing

When you write, be sure you have formed the possessive correctly. A misplaced apostrophe can confuse the reader. Notice how the revision in the model below clears up whether one or more people made the discovery.

When the archaeologists opened the wooden chests,

they found priceless relics. The explorers discovery made headlines in newspapers across the country.
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3 Practice and Apply

A. CONCEPT CHECK: Possessive Nouns Write the possessive form of each noun in parentheses. Then label each possessive noun singular or plural. 1. The Mary Rose was one of (England) finest warships. 2. She sank near the Portsmouth (Harbor) seabed during a Risen from a Watery Grave

Englands; Sing.

eyewitnesses; Pl.

battle with the French fleet in 1545. Harbors; Sing. 3. Many (eyewitnesses) accounts told of her sad end. 4. The Mary Rose quickly became covered with the (seabed) mud and sand. seabeds; Sing. 5. Alexander McKee located the (wreck) position in 1967. wrecks; Sing. 6. In 1982 the ship was raised and stored in the (city) dry dock. citys; Sing. 7. Bows, arrows, and other (archers) equipment were found on the gun deck. archers; Pl. sailors; Pl. 8. Other weapons were found in the (sailors) cabins. 9. Netting kept the (Mary Rose) sailors from escaping when the ship sank. Mary Roses; Sing. 10. The Mary Rose and its artifacts tell us about the (seamen) lives on board the ship. seamens; Pl.
For a SELF-CHECK and more practice, see the EXERCISE BANK, p. 268
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B. REVISING: Using Possessive Nouns Answers in column.

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Use possessive nouns to make these phrases short enough to fit on labels for a social studies project. Example: The Cliff Houses of Mesa Verde Answer: Mesa Verdes Cliff Houses 1. The Capital City of the Aztecs 2. The Ruins of Pompeii 3. The Earth Mounds of Cahokia 4. The Royal Tomb of King Tut

Mesa Verdes Cliff Houses

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1 Heres the Idea

You use nouns every time you talk or write. Nouns name the people you meet, the places you visit, the sights and sounds you experience, and the ideas you have. Because nouns have many jobs, they are found in different places in sentences.

Nouns as Subjects
A subject tells whom or what the sentence is about. Notice the following sentences in which nouns act as subjects.

The Aztec Empire was located in the area now known as Mexico. Tenochtitln was the capital of the Aztec Empire. Invaders entered Tenochtitln in 1519. Spanish soldiers destroyed Tenochtitln during their conquest of Mexico.
NOUNS

Nouns as Complements
A complement is a word that completes the meaning of a verb. When a noun is a complement, it may be a predicate noun, a direct object, or an indirect object. Nouns as Complements
Predicate noun Direct object Indirect object
renames or defines the subject after a linking verb names the receiver of the action of the verb tells to whom or what or for whom or what an action is done The Aztecs were fierce warriors. Spanish soldiers defeated the Aztec Empire in 1521. The Aztecs gave the Spanish gold and other precious goods.

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Nouns as Objects of Prepositions

An object of a preposition is the noun or pronoun that follows the preposition. Nouns often appear in sentences as objects of prepositions.

The Aztec people settled in central Mexico.

PREPOSITION OBJECT OF PREPOSITION

Aztec merchants traded with distant lands. Among their valuable goods were gold and silver.

2 Why It Matters in Writing

Using nouns in their various jobs can help you write a detailed explanation of any subject. Notice how the highlighted nouns in the model below add information to the sentences.
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The Aztecs had many enemies. For this reason, they built their capital on an island. Long causeways led from the mainland to the island. Causeways are raised roads built across water. Aztec warriors guarded the ends of the causeways. In this way causeways provided the Aztec people protection.

SUBJECT DIRECT OBJECT INDIRECT OBJECT PREDICATE NOUN OBJECT OF REFLEXIVE PREPOSITION

REFLEXIVE

3 Practice and Apply

A. CONCEPT CHECK: Nouns and Their Jobs Identify each underlined noun as a subject, a complement, or an object of a preposition.

Roadbuilders in the Sky 1. The Inca lived in the Andes Mountains in South America. S 2. Cuzco was their capital. S/Comp. 3. The Inca were excellent record keepers. Comp. 4. They invented the quipu to keep track of their goods. Comp./OP

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The quipu was a long cord with many strings. S/Comp./OP Clerks tied knots in the strings in different patterns. Comp. The Inca also built excellent roads. Comp. Their system of roads carried runners across deep gorges. S/Comp./OP Officials gave runners messages to carry hundreds of miles. S/Comp./Comp. 10. Some roads are still used today by Andean people. S
For a SELF-CHECK and more practice, see the EXERCISE BANK, p. 268.

5. 6. 7. 8. 9.

Identify each complement in the exercise above as a predicate noun, a direct object, or an indirect object. Answers in column. B. WRITING: Creating a Caption Answers in column. Quetzalcoatl: Feathered-Serpent God The photograph below shows Quetzalcoatl, a god worshiped by the Aztecs. Write a caption for a museum exhibit based on the information provided. Include nouns as subjects, complements, and objects of prepositions.

NOUNS

1. Quetzalcoatl = both snake and bird 2. Quetzal = brightly colored bird found in forests of Central and South America 3. long emerald feathers of quetzal highly valued 4. Quetzalcoatl = god of learning 5. Aztecs worshiped Quetzalcoatl

Working Portfolio: Revising Find your Write Away paragraph from page 34. Revise your paragraph by adding specific complements that add to your explanation.

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Using Nouns in Science

When you label diagrams, or identify specimens for science, chances are you use nouns. For example, nouns label the parts of the coniferous tree in the illustration. Some parts, or structures, are common to most plants. The illustrations show two types of plants; one coniferous plant (a pine tree) and one flowering plant (a rosebush). Notice the nouns used to label the pine tree.

needles
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cone

trunk roots
ilar to a A flowering plant is sim coniferous plant. (1) (2)

(3) (4)

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Practice and Apply

A. USING NOUNS

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Look at the diagrams of the pine tree and the rosebush. Copy the diagram of the rosebush on a separate sheet of paper. Then use the nouns below to write the words that label the rosebush. Use the labels on the pine tree diagram as a guide. stem holds the plant upright, like the trunk of a pine tree roots hold the plant in the soil and absorb water and nutrients from the soil to feed the plant flower holds the seed of the plant, like the cone of the pine tree leaves make plant food from sunlight and chlorophyll, like the needles on a pine tree B. WRITING: Compare and Contrast in Science
NOUNS

A flowering plant carries its seeds in its flowers. A cone-bearing plant carries seeds in its cones. Write a paragraph in which you compare and contrast a pine tree and a rosebush. How are they alike? How are they different? Use the nouns you have learned in this lesson to refer to the parts that are alike and different.

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Mixed Review
A. Kinds of Nouns Look at the cartoon, and answer the questions.

The New Yorker Collection 1999 Gahan Wilson

1. Which of the following is a proper noun? Earth, meteor, things 2. Which of the following is a common noun? Science Times, Earth, meteor

Anyhow, according to the Science Times, things would have turned out quite differently if that meteor had hit Earth.

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3. Which of the following is a plural noun? Science, things, meteor 4. Which of the following is the correct possessive? dinosaurs pet, dinosaurs pet, dinosaurss pet 5. Write a sentence telling what is going on in the cartoon. Underline the nouns, and identify how they are used. B. Nouns and Their Jobs In each group of sentences, the same underlined noun is used in different ways. Label each noun as a subject, direct object, indirect object, predicate noun, or object of a preposition. 1. The dinosaurs had no cities or civilizations. 2. What happened to the dinosaurs? 3. The most popular animals in museums are dinosaurs. 4. We must give dinosaurs credit for surviving 160 million years. 5. Did an asteroid or other disaster kill the dinosaurs? 6. Other animals on Earth were mammals. 7. Ancient mammals were much smaller than the huge dinosaurs. 8. Finding food was easier for these mammals. 9. An earth without dinosaurs gave mammals much more space. 10. However, no blockbuster movie features small mammals!
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Mastery Test: What Did You Learn?

For each numbered item, choose the letter of the term that correctly identifies it. Roanoke Island lies off the coast of North Carolina. In 1587
(1)

English colonists started a colony on the island. John White was

(2)

the leader of the colony. Whites ship Hopewell returned to

(3) (4)

England in 1587 to get more supplies. In 1590 the ship was bringing supplies to the new colony. However, White found no
(5)

colonists, only the colonists possessions. A tree near the fort had
(6) (7)

the name CROATOAN scratched in its bark. A storm prevented the ship from reaching Croatoan Island. The disappearance of the
(8)

colony is a great mystery. Some historians believe the colonists

(9) (10)

went to live with local Native American people in their villages.

NOUNS

1. A. proper noun B. common noun C. possessive noun D. plural noun 2. A. possessive noun B. plural noun C. singular noun D. proper noun 3. A. noun as direct object B. noun as predicate noun C. noun as object of preposition D. noun as indirect object 4. A. common noun B. plural noun C. possessive noun D. predicate noun 5. A. noun as subject B. noun as indirect object C. noun as direct object D. noun as object of preposition

6. A. singular noun B. proper noun C. possessive noun D. predicate noun 7. A. noun as object of preposition B. noun as predicate noun C. possessive noun D. noun as direct object 8. A. proper noun B. plural noun C. common noun D. possessive noun 9. A. noun as direct object B. noun as indirect object C. noun as object of preposition D. noun as predicate noun 10. A. noun as subject B. noun as direct object C. noun as indirect object D. noun as predicate noun

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A noun names a person, place, thing, or idea. Archaeologists in Egypt discovered a cemetery filled with mummies tombs.
Common Noun Proper Noun Singular Noun Possessive Noun Plural Noun

QUICK-FIX SPELLING MACHINE:

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SINGULAR

RULE
Add -s to most nouns.

PLURALS OF NOUNS PLURAL

tools teams boxes wrenches radios tomatoes discoveries roadways leaves halves beliefs sheep salmon

1 2 3

tool team box wrench radio tomato

Add -es to a noun that ends in s, sh, ch, x, or z. Add -s to most nouns that end in o. Add -es to a few nouns that end in o. For most nouns ending in y, change the y to an i and add -es. When a vowel comes before the y, just add -s. For most nouns ending in f or fe, change the f to v and add -es or -s. Just add -s to a few nouns that end in f or fe. For some nouns, keep the same spelling.

discovery roadway

leaf half belief

sheep salmon

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QUICK-FIX SPELLING MACHINE: POSSESSIVES

NOUN
Singular Plural ending in -s Plural not ending in -s Venus skull explorers princes children sheep

RULE
Add an apostrophe and -s. Add an apostrophe. Add an apostrophe and -s.

POSSESSIVE
Venuss skulls owner explorers discovery princes crowns childrens games sheeps pasture

e desert? n th s i W hat

Nouns and Their Jobs

Nouns as . . . Subject Predicate Noun Direct Object Indirect Object Object of a Preposition Examples The cemetery is more than 2,000 years old. Dr. Salwah is an archaeologist. He visited a tomb. He handed his assistant a flashlight. There were rows of mummies.

NOUNS

The Bottom Line

Checklist for Nouns
Have I . . . chosen specific nouns? spelled plural nouns correctly? used possessives to show ownership or relationship? used complements to provide specific details in explanations?

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Chapter 3

Lara, We had a great soccer year! See you in soccer camp. Later -Kenna

Lara, She was pretty, S smart, she was New York he came from City. Tha ts you! Your friend, Adam

Lara, You and Elena and me the Three Sisters forever! Luv, Jill

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Theme: Friendship

A Little Help from My Friends

A good friend has asked you to sign her yearbook. You have a writing space about the size of a large postage stamp. What if you couldnt use pronouns, like I, we, you, and she, but had to use everybodys name instead? Could you make your message fit? Pronouns are little words that make a big difference. Be careful how you use them, though. Otherwise, your friends may misunderstand your messages. Write Away: Thanks for the Memories! Write a brief yearbook message for one or more of your friends. Use pronouns to make the most of your limited space. Place your work in your Working Portfolio.

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Diagnostic Test: What Do You Know?

Choose the letter of the best revision for each underlined word or group of words. Kevin and me did a report on peer pressure. Our teacher Mrs.
(1)

Lourdes asked him and me to do an oral presentation in class.

(2)

Peer means equal in age or rank. Peer pressure is the influence that people in youre own age group have on you. People want to
(3)

be accepted by their peer group. This here is why peer pressure is

(4) (5) (6)

so powerful. Peer pressure can be negative, but its positive too. One boy we interviewed said, My buddy signed up for the basketball team. Him and Daniel pressured me to sign up too.
(7)

Us buddies always do things together. Whom can resist the

(8) (9)

pressure of two friends? Im glad I joined the team. The coach,

PRONOUNS

like the rest of us, is enjoying ourselves!

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1. A. Kevin and I B. Me and Kevin C. Us D. Correct as is 2. A. he and me B. him and I C. he and I D. Correct as is 3. A. yours B. youre C. your D. Correct as is 4. A. there B. theirs C. theyre D. Correct as is 5. A. That there B. This C. These D. Correct as is

6. A. its B. its C. it D. Correct as is 7. A. Daniel and him B. Daniel and them C. He and Daniel D. Correct as is 8. A. Them buddies B. We buddies C. Me and them buddies D. Correct as is 9. A. Who B. Which C. Whose D. Correct as is 10. A. himself B. theirselves C. myself D. Correct as is

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1 Heres the Idea

A pronoun is a word that is used in place of a noun or another pronoun. Like a noun, a pronoun can refer to a
person, place, thing, or idea. The word that a personal pronoun refers to is called its antecedent.
ER S TO REF

Alexis is a great friend. She is so funny! Alexis read her jokes to the class.
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RS EF E TO

Personal Pronouns
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Pronouns such as we, I, he, them, and it are called personal pronouns.
Unlike nouns, personal pronouns change their forms to reflect person, number, and case.

Person and Number Personal pronouns have different forms for first person, second person, and third person. Pronouns can be singular or plural in number.
Singular First person: Second person: Third person: Plural

I went out. You left too. He came by bus.

We left early. You are all leaving. They came by car.

Case Personal pronouns change their forms, or cases, depending on how they are used in a sentence. Each pronoun has three cases: subject, object, and possessive. Subject: Object: Possessive: He just started middle school. Scott met him on the first day. Now Scott is his best friend.

In the chart on the next page, notice how personal pronouns change according to their person, number, and case. Youll learn more about each case in the next three lessons.

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Personal Pronouns
Subject Singular First person Second person Third person Plural First person Second person Third person
I you he, she, it we you they

Object
me you him, her, it us you them

Possessive
my, mine your, yours his, her, hers, its our, ours your, yours their, theirs

2 Why It Matters in Writing

Without personal pronouns, the narrator of the passage below would need to repeat her friends name and her own name several times! Instead, she uses forms of I and you.
PRONOUNS

Dont invite me to your birthday party because Im not coming. And give back the Disneyland sweat shirt I said you could wear. If Im not good enough to play on your team, Im not good enough to be friends with.

Judith Viorst, The Southpaw

3 Practice and Apply

A. CONCEPT CHECK: What Is a Pronoun? List the personal pronoun(s) in each sentence.

Definition of a Friend 1. Did you ever see the statue in front of Boys Town? 2. It shows one boy carrying a smaller boy. 3. Its caption says, He aint heavy, Father, . . . hes m brother. 4. True friends are not burdens when they need help.

I interviewed my classmates about friendship. What is a friend? I asked them. They gave me different answersall of them good. A friend stands by you no matter what, said Rachel. My friends want to be with me, and I want to be with them, Lenny said. 10. Sue said, For me, friends are loyal, or they arent friends.
For a SELF-CHECK and more practice, see the EXERCISE BANK, p. 269.

5. 6. 7. 8. 9.

B. REVISING: Substituting Pronouns for Nouns Answers may vary. Rewrite this students draft of a social studies report. Change the underlined nouns to pronouns. In ancient times, the idea of friendship was foreign to many
1. They people. (1) Many people didnt even have a word for friend. In 2. It Old English, though, the word friend did exist. (2) The word

friend first appeared in English in A.D. 1018. Most ancient people lived in close communities. (3) Most ancient people had little contact with outsiders. These people 4. It did have a word for stranger. (4) The word for stranger meant enemy. Today, we meet strangers all the time. Are these strangers 5. them enemies? Most of (5) these strangers are not. In fact, many strangers will become our friends.
3. They

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C. WRITING: Dialogue Answers in column. Write a dialogue between you and a friend of yours. In the dialogue, ask your friend for advice. When youre finished, underline all the personal pronouns you used. Example: You: Friend: Can you help me? I have a problem. What is it? If I can help you, I will.

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1 Heres the Idea

A subject pronoun is used as the subject of a sentence or as a predicate pronoun after a linking verb.
Subject Pronouns
Singular
I you he, she, it

Plural
we you they

Pronouns as Subjects
Use the subject case of a pronoun when the pronoun is the subject of a sentence. Remember, a pronoun can be part of a compound subject.
PRONOUNS

Friends often play on opposing teams. They compete hard against each other. (They replaces noun subject Friends.) Charlene and I play on different teams. We stay friends no matter what.

Predicate Pronouns
A predicate pronoun follows a linking verb and renames, or refers to, the subject. Use the subject case for predicate pronouns.
SUBJECT
NAMES RE

Mrs. Sands is the coach. The coach is she.

PREDICATE PRONOUN
NAMES RE

The best players are Aaron and I.

NAMES RE

The toughest opponents are Teresa and he.

Remember, the most common linking verbs are forms of the verb be; they include is, am, are, was, were, been, has been, have been, can be, will be, could be, and should be.
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2 Why It Matters in Writing

Sometimes subject pronouns may sound strange even though they are correct. As many writers have discovered, you cant rely on sound to choose the correct case.

Michael Jordan is a close friend of Charles Barkley. he However, on court the fiercest competitors were him and I Charles. Off the court, Hermano and me saw them laughing and playing golf together.
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3 Practice and Apply

CONCEPT CHECK: Subject Pronouns Write the correct form of the pronoun to complete each sentence. Friends across the (Tennis) Net 1. I read about Martina Navratilova and Chris Evert. (Them, They) were the top two women tennis players in the early 1980s. 2. Martina and (her, she) played each other 80 times. 3. Rulers of the tennis courts were (they, them)! 4. My friend Elana and (me, I) are tennis rivals, too. 5. (We, Us) like to win but stay friends, just like Martina and Chris. 6. If Martina won, (she, her) would go over and comfort Chris. 7. Sometimes (they, them) would leave each other notes, like Sorry, or Im sure youll get me next time. 8. My brother is different. (He, Him) hates his rivals. 9. Hes not like me and my friends. Best friends and tennis players are (us, we)! 10. Martina and (we, us) agreebe rivals on the court but stay close off the court.

For a SELF-CHECK and more practice, see the EXERCISE BANK, p. 269.
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1 Heres the Idea

Object pronouns are personal pronouns used as direct objects, as indirect objects, or as the objects of prepositions.
Object Pronouns
Singular me you him, her, it Plural us you them

Direct Object: receives the action of a verb and answers the question whom or what?
PRONOUNS

True animal stories fascinate Jen. (fascinate whom? Jen)

DIRECT OBJECT

Do you like them too? (like what? them) Indirect Object: tells to whom or what or for whom or what an action is performed.
T

WH OM
?

Jen gave me a book about a dolphin who guided ships.

INDIRECT OBJECT

People gave him a heros welcome. Object of a Preposition: follows a preposition (such as to, from, for, against, by, or about). Wed like to hear more about him.
PREPOSITION OBJECT

Can you tell the story to her and me?

PREPOSITION OBJECT OBJECT

Always use an object pronoun after the preposition between.

The books were divided between Mike and me. (Not

between Mike and I)

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2 Why It Matters in Writing

Using the pronouns I and me allows the writer to be up close and personal. In the passage below, Helen Keller uses these pronouns to describe when she first felt loved.

I stretched out my hand. . . . Someone took it, and I was caught up and held close in the arms of her who had come to reveal all things to me, and, more than all things else, to love me.

Helen Keller, The Story of My Life

3 Practice and Apply

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CONCEPT CHECK: Subject and Object Pronouns Write the correct pronoun(s) for each sentence. Label each pronoun subject or object. The Sailors Friend 1. Jen told (we, us) a true story about a dolphin. O 2. People gave (he, him) the name Pelorus Jack. O 3. (He, Him) guided ships through the dangerous Cook Strait near New Zealand. S 4. No one trained (he, him) to do this. O 5. It was (he, him) who decided to guide ships. S 6. Ships would come to the strait, and (he, him) would lead (they, them) out of danger. S/O 7. Sailors watched (he, him) leaping through the waves. O 8. Pelorus Jack swam swiftly in front of (they, them) and brought their ships through the strait. O 9. (He, Him) was protected from harm by New Zealand law. S 10. A movie was even made about (he, him)! O

For a SELF-CHECK and more practice, see EXERCISE BANK, p. 270.

Identify how each object pronoun you chose is used in the sentence: as a direct object, an indirect object, or an object of a preposition. Answers in column.
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Possessive pronouns are personal pronouns used to show ownership or relationship.
Possessive Pronouns
Singular my, mine your, yours her, hers, his, its Plural our, ours your, yours their, theirs

The possessive pronouns my, your, her, his, our, and their come before nouns.
ATIONSHIP REL

Some of my best friends live in other countries.

ER OWN SHIP

PRONOUNS

All our correspondence is by e-mail.

ER OWN SHIP

Even their old computers are on-line now.

The possessive pronouns mine, ours, yours, his, hers, and theirs can stand alone in a sentence.

The blue mouse pad is theirs. Ours is red. Is that video game yours? Mine is broken. Is his any good? Or should we play hers?

Possessive Pronouns and Contractions

Some possessive pronouns sound like contractions (its/its, your/youre, their/theyre). Because these pairs sound alike, writers often confuse possessive pronouns and contractions. Remember, possessive pronouns never use an apostrophe. Contractions always use an apostrophe. Look at the examples in the Quick-Fix Spelling Machine on the following page.

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QUICK-FIX SPELLING MACHINE

POSSESSIVE PRONOUNS
its your their Its modem is fast! Your e-mails are funny. Their smiles are sideways! :-)

CONTRACTIONS
its youre Its fun to get new mail. Youre a good writer.

theyre Theyre full of funny faces.

2 Why It Matters in Writing

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Proofread your work carefully to be sure you havent confused contractions and possessive pronouns. A computer spell checker will not catch these mistakes.

A circle of mountains lies deep under the Pacific Ocean between Japan and North America. It is known as the ring youre of fire. If your wondering why, its because the mountains are part of a circle of active volcanoes. A volcanic eruption at sea can cause T heir tsunami waves. Theyre danger is hard to see at first. A tsunami crossing the ocean is barely a ripple. But when it nears land, a tsunami can travel nearly 500 miles an hour and reach a height of over 100 feet. its It destroys everything in its path.
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3 Practice and Apply

A. CONCEPT CHECK: Possessive Pronouns Write the correct pronoun or contraction for each sentence. Cyber Friends 1. (Its, Its) now possible for schools throughout the world to be linked on the Internet. 2. A school can partner with a Sister School overseas to learn about (its, its) land and culture. 3. If (your, youre) interested, contact the Society for International Sister Schools (SISS). 4. (Your, Youre) school can correspond with schools in Russia, Mexico, Korea, Irelandalmost anywhere! 5. Your international Web pals write from (their, theyre) computers, and you write from yours. 6. Within minutes, (their, theyre) sending you e-mails through cyberspace. 7. Some schools post on-line surveys for (their, theyre) Sister Schools to answer. 8. Hablo Espaol? You can sharpen (your, youre) Spanish or other language writing skills. 9. There are many native speakers in the program, and (their, theyre) happy to help you! 10. Maybe someday SISS will even have (its, its) own virtual classroom!

PRONOUNS

For a SELF-CHECK and more practice, see the EXERCISE BANK, p. 270.

B. PROOFREADING: Using Possessive Pronouns For each sentence, write the correct form of the possessive pronoun or contractions. If a sentence contains no error, write Correct. (1) Hey, Josie, 1. Youre/its Your probably amazed finally to hear from me! I meant to answer your e-mail right away, but its been a crazy time. (2) Our 2. Correct class is doing a climate project for the Science Fair, and I am in 3. Correct charge of gathering data! (3) Our Sister School in Hirosaki, 4. Its Japan, is helping us. (4) Its so great having a Sister School! 5. Theyre (5) Their sending us information about their climate. (6) Its 6. Correct perfect because (7) their latitude is about the same as ours in 7. Correct Baltimore. (8) Your invited to see the exhibit when its done. 8. Youre/its
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1 Heres the Idea

Pronouns that end in -self or -selves are either reflexive or intensive pronouns. Reflexive and Intensive Pronouns
myself yourself herself, himself, itself ourselves yourselves themselves

Reflexive Pronouns
A reflexive pronoun refers to the subject and directs the action of the verb back to the subject. Reflexive
pronouns are necessary to the meaning of a sentence.
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LE CTS REF

The winners considered themselves lucky.

FL ECTS RE

How do you prepare yourself for a game?

Notice that if you drop the reflexive pronoun, you change the meaning of the sentence. (The winners considered lucky.)

Intensive Pronouns
An intensive pronoun emphasizes the noun or pronoun in the same sentence. Intensive pronouns are not
necessary to the meaning of the sentence.
ASIZES E MP H

I myself just keep saying, Well win!

ASIZES E MP H

The players themselves designed their uniforms.

Notice that when you drop the intensive pronoun, the sentence still makes sense. (I just keep saying, Well win!) Hisself and theirselves may look like real words, but they are not in the dictionary. Use himself and themselves instead.

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2 Why It Matters in Writing

Notice how the student sportswriter uses reflexive and intensive pronouns to emphasize key words and ideas.

The U.S. womens soccer team won the 1999 World Cup in a final shootout.At the end, the players themselves were screaming for joy. Injured player Michelle Akers said: I found myself hobbling out to the field to join my team.The 90,185 fans were going crazy. I was struggling to soak it all in and keep myself together.

INTENSIVE REFLEXIVE

PRONOUNS

3 Practice and Apply

CONCEPT CHECK: Reflexive and Intensive Pronouns For each sentence, write the reflexive or intensive pronoun. Then label it reflexive or intensive. All for One and One for All 1. My sister Emmy never pictured herself playing team sports. 2. Now Emmy herself admits that her best friends are her soccer teammates. 3. The players have to get themselves in step with the team. 4. One player cant win a match all by himself or herself! 5. Pro athletes themselves encourage young people to join teams. 6. Olympic soccer player Mia Hamm said: Dont worry about how well you play; just enjoy yourself. 7. As a teen, pro basketball player Cynthia Cooper found herself imitating how the pros played. 8. She herself didnt try out for a team until she was 16. 9. I myself will never forget Sammy Sosa embracing Mark McGwirehis home-run rival! 10. Team players think of others besides themselves.

For a SELF-CHECK and more practice, see the EXERCISE BANK, p. 271.
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Interrogative Pronouns
An interrogative pronoun is used to introduce a question. Interrogative pronouns include who, whom, what,
which, and whose.

Who has an animal for a friend? What do you like best about animals?
Writers often confuse who and whom. The following guidelines can help you decide which form to use in your sentences.

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Using Who and Whom

Who is always used as a subject or a predicate pronoun.
Subject:

Who gave you the parakeet?

Predicate pronoun: It was who?

Dont confuse whos with whose. Whos is a contraction that means who is or who has. (Whos missing?) Whose is an interrogative or possessive pronoun. (Whose is this?)

Whom is always used as an object.

Direct object: Indirect object:

Whom do you ask about pet stores? You gave whom a turtle?

Object of preposition: From whom did you buy it? Heres How Choosing Who or Whom in a Question

(Who, Whom) did you see at the store?

1. If necessary, rewrite the question to put the subject first.

You did see (who, whom) at the store?

2. Decide whether the pronoun is used as a subject or an object. You is already the subject. Whom is used as an object. You did see whom at the store? (direct object of did see) 3. Use the correct pronoun in the question.

Whom did you see at the store?

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Demonstrative Pronouns
A demonstrative pronoun points out a person, place, thing, or idea.
Demonstrative pronounsthis, that, these, and thoseare used alone in a sentence, as shown below.

Singular
This is my parakeet Newton. That is his new cage.

Plural
These are his chewed-up toys. Those are his favorite treats.

PRONOUNS

This and these mean that something is near, or here. That and those mean that something is far away, or there. Never use here or there with a demonstrative pronoun. The pronoun already points out which one; it doesnt need help.

This here is our cat. That there is our crazy dog.

2 Why It Matters in Writing

Knowing when to use who and whom can be tricky because many people use these pronouns incorrectly. Be careful to use the correct pronouns when you create questionnaires or surveys, like the one below.

Questionnaire for Friends

Who is your oldest friend? Who talks moreyou or your best friend? With whom would you share your deepest secret? Whom would you trust for advice?

SUBJECT

OBJECT OF PREPOSITION DIRECT OBJECT

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3 Practice and Apply

A. CONCEPT CHECK: Interrogatives and Demonstratives Write the correct pronoun to complete each sentence. Then identify it as an interrogative or demonstrative pronoun. 1. Aretha: (Who, Whose) is your best friend? Four-Legged Versus Two-Legged Friends

Int.

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2. Cindy: (That, That there) is easy: either Marsha Hanks or my dog Bandit. Dem. 3. Aretha: (Which, What) is it? Int. 4. Besides, (who, whom) would prefer dogs as best friends? Int. 5. Cindy: (Those, That) are the best kind. Dem. 6. (Who, Whom) loves you all the time? Only a dog. Int. 7. (Who, Whom) can you play with anytime? A dog! Int. 8. Aretha: (Those, Those there) are good arguments. I hadnt thought about it that way. Dem. 9. Cindy: By the way, your best friend is (who, whom)? Int. 10. Aretha: (Who, Whom) would I choose? My parakeet Newton. I can talk to him about anything, and he talks back! Int.

For a SELF-CHECK and more practice, see the EXERCISE BANK, p. 271.
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B. WRITING: Science Questions and Answers Answers in column. Write a five-question quiz based on the article below. Use each of these interrogative pronouns at least once: who, whom, what, and which. Underline the interrogative pronouns you use. Example: Who learned sign language firstKoko or Michael? In July 1972, Penny Patterson first met her good friend Koko. Penny was a graduate student at a major university. Koko was a one-yearold female lowland gorilla. Penny taught Koko sign language. Today, Koko knows more than 1,000 signs. She uses them to talk to humans and to her friend Michael, another lowland gorilla. Koko and Penny taught Michael to use sign language as well.

ICUL

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1 Heres the Idea

The antecedent is the noun or pronoun that a pronoun replaces or refers to. The antecedent can be in the same
sentence or in a different sentence from the pronoun.
FERS TO RE

Maria shared her favorite book, The Friends.

ANTECEDENT
FE RS TO RE

PRONOUN

The story is set in Harlem. It tells about young girls growing up.
Pronouns must agree with their antecedents in number, person, and gender.
PRONOUNS

Agreement in Number
Use a singular pronoun to refer to a singular antecedent.
FE RS TO RE

At first Phyllisia doesnt like her new classmate.

Use a plural pronoun to refer to a plural antecedent.

FERS TO RE

Later the girls share their dreams together.

Agreement in Person
The person of a pronoun must be the same as the person of the antecedent.
P ERSON 3RD

The author is Rosa Guy. She was born in Trinidad.

P ERS 2ND
ON

Do you write stories about your life?

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Avoid switching from one person to another in the same sentence or paragraph.

Incorrect: Students like strong plots. We want to know what happens. (Students is third person; we is first person.) Correct: Students like strong plots. They want to know what happens. (Students and they are both third person.)

Agreement in Gender
The gender of a pronoun must be the same as the gender of its antecedent.
Personal pronouns have three gender forms: masculine (he, his, him), feminine (she, her, hers), and neuter (it, its).
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Anne is mad because she lost her book. Jim gave his extra copy to Anne.
Dont use only masculine or only feminine pronouns when you mean to refer to both genders.
DRAFT:

Every student has his own opinion.

(Student could be male or female.)

There are two ways to correct this sentence. 1. Use the phrase his or her.

Every student has his or her own opinion.

2. Rewrite the sentence using a plural antecedent and a plural pronoun. Be careful! Other words in the sentence may also need to be made plural.

Students have their own opinions.

2 Why It Matters in Writing

Its easy to make mistakes with person or number. Proofread your writing carefully. Avoid the common errors that the student writer made in the model on the following page.

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Best friends come in all shapes and sizes. T hey You may be opposites of each other. For instance, you might not like someone at first. he or she s Then later on they become your best friend.

Friends is third person plural. Someone is singular and could be male or female.

3 Practice and Apply

CONCEPT CHECK: Pronoun-Antecedent Agreement For each sentence, write the personal pronoun and its antecedent. Number the Stars 1. This story is by Lois Lowry. It is set in Denmark during World War II. Sing. third 2. Annemarie Johansen and her best friend Ellen Rosen live happilyuntil the Nazis come. Sing. third 3. Then the girls are scared as their lives turn upside down. 4. Ellen is in special danger because her family is Jewish. Sing. third 5. The Nazis have targeted all Jews as their enemies. Pl. third 6. Annemaries parents hide Ellen in their home. Pl. third 7. The Johansens know that they must also try to protect Ellens family. 8. Uncle Henrik uses his boat to carry some Jews to safety. 9. When Annemarie is asked to go on this dangerous ride, she agrees. 10. She must find the strength to save her best friends life.

PRONOUNS

Pl. third

Pl. third

Sing. third Sing. third Sing. third

For a SELF-CHECK and more practice, see the EXERCISE BANK, p. 272.

Write the number and person of each pronoun.

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An indefinite pronoun does not refer to a specific person, place, thing, or idea.
Indefinite pronouns often do not have antecedents.

Everyone should know about the men of the Endurance. Anybody would be amazed by the story of this shipwreck.

Indefinite pronouns can be singular, plural, or either singular or plural.

Indefinite Pronouns
CHAPTER 3 Singular another anybody anyone anything each either everybody everyone everything neither nobody no one nothing one somebody someone something Plural both few many several Singular or Plural all any most none some

Pronouns containing -one, -thing, or -body are always singular.

Singular Indefinite Pronouns

Use a singular personal pronoun to refer to a singular indefinite pronoun.
RS T O REFE

Anyone in trouble depends on his or her friends.

(Anyone could be masculine or feminine.)
S TO REFER

On the Endurance, everybody had to keep up his spirits while waiting for rescue. (There were only men on the ship.)

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Plural Indefinite Pronouns

Use a plural personal pronoun to refer to a plural indefinite pronoun.
FE RS TO RE

Many shared their food and clothing.

FE RS TO RE

None realized they would not return home for 20 months.

Singular or Plural Indefinite Pronouns

Some indefinite pronouns can be singular or plural.
Often the phrase that follows the indefinite pronoun will tell you whether the pronoun is singular or plural.
PRONOUNS

Most of the mast had lost its sail.

SINGULAR INDEFINITE PRONOUN SINGULAR PERSONAL PRONOUN

Most of the masts had lost their sails.

PLURAL INDEFINITE PRONOUN PLURAL PERSONAL PRONOUN

2 Why It Matters in Writing

Agreement can help keep your facts and ideas clear. Make sure that all pronouns agree with their indefinite antecedents in number.

they Many wonder how well he would do in a crisis. The men aboard the ship Endurance had a chance to find out. his Everyone did their best to keep up hope.The leaders and crew battled wind, ice, and darkness. No one wanted to let his their friends down.
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3 Practice and Apply

A. CONCEPT CHECK: Indefinite-Pronoun Agreement Choose the pronoun that agrees with the indefinite pronoun antecedent. 1. In 1915, all of the men became trapped with (his, their) ship in the Antarctic ice. 2. No one could send (his, their) family a message. The Ordeal of the Endurance

3. Few of them were able to avoid sleeping on the ice in (his, their) wet clothes. 4. When spring came, all the men had to board three lifeboats. (He, They) sailed toward a splinter of land. 5. Each was relieved when (he, they) reached the land safely. 6. Shackleton chose a few of the men and asked (him, them) to row 800 icy miles to get help. 7. Each was chosen for (his, their) special courage. 8. One used (his, their) carpentry skills to make new boat parts from packing crates! 9. Some of the waves were 50 feet high. The men had to face (it, them) in only a lifeboat! 10. Incredibly, nobody in Shackletons crew lost (his, their) life during the voyage.
For a SELF-CHECK and more practice, see the EXERCISE BANK, p. 272.

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B. PROOFREADING: Agreement Errors This paragraph contains four pronoun-antecedent errors. Rewrite the sentences to correct the errors. Rescue in the Antarctic! Ernest Shackleton chose five men to sail with him on a fearsome journey to find help. Many left on the island had his troubles too. Everyone had to eat penguins and seals for their daily diet. Several men had frostbite. One needed medical attention for his infected wound. Everyone in the remaining crew anxiously awaited their rescue. Nearly five months after Shackleton left, all of the men had his dream come true. Shackleton and the others came back for them!

their his his their

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We and Us with Nouns

The pronouns we and us are sometimes followed by a noun that identifies the pronoun (we students, us students).

Use we when the noun is a subject or a predicate noun. Use us when the noun is an object. We volunteers like to help out.
SUBJECT

Do you have work for us volunteers?

OBJECT OF PREPOSITION

Heres How Choosing We or Us You can join (we, us) students tomorrow.
1. Drop the identifying noun from the sentence.

PRONOUNS

You can join (we, us) tomorrow.

2. Decide whether the pronoun is used as a subject or an object. In this sentence, the pronoun is the object of the verb join. You can join us tomorrow. 3. Use the correct pronoun with the noun. You can join us students tomorrow.

Unclear Reference
Be sure that each personal pronoun refers clearly to only one person, place, or thing. If there is any chance
your reader will be confused by whom or what you are talking about, use a noun instead of a pronoun.

Confusing: Noah and Rodrigo came to the work site, but he didnt stay. (Who didnt stay? Noah or Rodrigo?) Clear: Noah and Rodrigo came to the work site, but Noah didnt stay.
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2 Why It Matters in Writing

When you write instructions or directions, make sure you use the right case and keep your pronoun references clear. You dont want to confuse your readers, as this writer did.

Heads up! Hands out! We Us youth volunteers need help. Can

you join us? Call Nicki at 555-2222 or Nicki Ann at 555-0000. She has an answering machine, so leave a message!

Use we as the subject. She could mean either Nicki or Ann. Name the person to avoid confusion.

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3 Practice and Apply

A. CONCEPT CHECK: Pronoun Problems Write the correct pronoun or noun. Helping Hands 1. (We, Us) students help out in lots of ways. 2. That garden was planted by (we, us) volunteers. 3. Carlos worked with Joe to clean the river, even though (he, Carlos) had never done that kind of work before. 4. Some of (we, us) athletes offered to coach youngsters. 5. Stacey always beats Terese to work, but (she, Terese) still gets there on time.
For a SELF-CHECK and more practice, see the EXERCISE BANK, p. 273.

B. REVISING: Correcting Pronoun Errors Correct the four pronoun errors in the following paragraph. Cleaning up on the River! Us swimmers are determined to clean up the riverbanks. The garbage there has disgusted we kids for a long time. For months, the mayor and the parks commissioner talked the mayor or about doing something, but he didnt take any action. the commissioner Danielle worked with Margo to pick up junk along the shore. Danielle or Margo She filled three trash bags in one hour!
We us
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1 Heres the Idea

Using Pronouns in Compounds

People often make mistakes when they use pronouns as parts of compound subjects and compound objects.

Use the subject pronouns I, she, he, we, and they in a compound subject or a compound predicate pronoun. Shawn and he are on the same study team.
The leaders of the team are he and I.

Use the object pronouns me, her, him, us, and them in a compound object. Our friends saw Darlene and me at the library.
The librarian gave Shawn and her some books.
To choose the correct case of a pronoun in a compound subject or object, mentally screen out the other noun or pronoun. Then choose the correct case.

PRONOUNS

Shawn gave an article to Darlene and (I, me). (Me is the

object of the preposition totherefore, to Darlene and me is correct.)

Phrases that Interfere

Sometimes words and phrases come between a subject and a pronoun that refers to it. Dont be confused by the words in between.
ERS TO REF

Darlene, like the others, is working on her report.

(Her agrees with Danielle and not with others.)
ERS TO REF

Harriet Tubman, unlike many people, risked her life to free slaves. (Her agrees with Harriet Tubman and not with people.)

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2 Why It Matters in Writing

Some people think I sounds more correct than me in a compound object. I is only correct when used as a subject or predicate pronoun. Watch out for this common mistake when you write.

You and I make great study partners. Its easy to divide me the work between you and I. I ask the questions.You find the answers!

3 Practice and Apply

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A. CONCEPT CHECK: More Pronoun Problems Choose the correct pronoun to complete each sentence. A Friend to Her People 1. Our social studies teacher asked Danielle and (I, me) to do a report on Harriet Tubman. 2. The librarian helped (her, she) and me with the research. 3. Both (she, her) and I knew that Tubman led slaves to freedom on the Underground Railroad. 4. Many facts about Tubman were new to (she, her) and me. 5. More than 300 slaves, including Harriets own sister, owed (their, her) freedom to Tubman. 6. (She, Her) and the runaways had to move secretly from one house to another along the Underground Railroad. 7. Tubman, like other conductors, wouldnt let any of (her, their) runaways turn back. 8. Slave owners placed a $40,000 reward on her head. That fact surprised Danielle and (me, I). 9. John Brown, another of the freedom fighters, praised Tubman in (his, their) letters and speeches. 10. The librarian gave copies of some letters to Danielle and (I, me).

For a SELF-CHECK and more practice, see the EXERCISE BANK, p. 274.

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B. PROOFREADING: Correct Use of Pronouns On a separate sheet of paper, correct the underlined pronoun errors. Darren and me read about the Underground Railroad. Darren and I Him and I soon realized that it was not underground and it He and I was not a railroad. Instead, it was a secret network of escape routes for slaves. This network of escape routes had their beginning in the South. The paths of the Underground its Railroad crisscrossed its way through the North. Eventually, their many routes ended in Canada. Canada, unlike the United States, had outlawed slavery within their borders. its The Underground Railroad was a hard journey for runaway slaves. Abolitionists and them were tracked by slave hunters. they Anyone caught could be tried and sentenced to death!
AC

RO S S T

Answers in column.

HE

C. WRITING: SOCIAL STUDIES: Drafting from a Time Line Read the following biographical time line. Then write a paragraph about Harriet Tubman, based on the information. Underline any pronouns you use. Example: Harriet Tubman was born around 1820 in Dorchester County, Maryland. She ran away for the first time when she was about six or seven years old.
PRONOUNS

ICUL

1820?
Born in Dorchester County, Maryland.

CU

RR

1849
Harriet flees to Pennsylvania and freedom. Many people help Harriet along the Underground Railroad.

1820

1830

1840

1850

1860

1827?
Runs away for the first time, but goes back. Is punished by the farm owners Harriet worked for.

1844
Marries John Tubman. Wants John to run away with her. John refuses and stays in Maryland.

18501860s
Serves as a conductor on the Underground Railroad. Brings more than 300 people out of slavery. People admire Harriet. People call Harriet Moses.

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Using Pronouns in Dialogue

You can use dialogue, or conversation, in stories and plays to show what your characters think and feel. Pronouns can make your dialogue sound more natural and make your characters seem more realistic. As you read this excerpt from Damon and Pythias: A Drama, notice how the use of pronouns makes the conversation between the two friends seem real.

Damon
and
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Pythias
RETOLD BY

FAN KISSEN

Damon. Oh, Pythias! How terrible to find you here! I wish I could do something to save you! Pythias. Nothing can save me, Damon, my dear friend. I am prepared to die. But there is one thought that troubles me greatly. Damon. What is it? I will do anything to help you. Pythias. Im worried about what will happen to my mother and my sister when Im gone. Damon. Ill take care of them, Pythias, as if they were my own mother and sister. Pythias. Thank you, Damon. I have money to leave them. But there are other things I must arrange. If only I could go to see them before I die! But they live two days journey from here, you know. Damon. Ill go to the king and beg him to give you your freedom for a few days.Youll give your word to return at the end of that time. Everyone in Sicily knows you for a man who has never broken his word.

Top left: Detail of statue of Diadoumenos (440 B.C.), unknown artist. Roman copy of Greek original, pentelic marble, The Metropolitan Museum of Art, Fletcher Fund, 1925 (25.78.56). Copyright The Metropolitan Museum of Art. Top right: Detail of Chiron the centaur teaching Achilles to play the lyre (first to third century A.D.), Roman fresco from Pompeii, Museo Archeologico Nazionale, Naples, Italy. Photo copyright Erich Lessing/Art Resource, New York. 80 Grammar, Usage, and Mechanics

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Practice and Apply

WRITING: Using Pronouns in Dialogue

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When actor Clifton Davis was a boy in the 1950s, he was the only African American in his middle school class. For graduation, the class was going to Glenn Echo Amusement Park in Maryland.Then Clifton learned that he would not be allowed into the park because he was black. He went back to his room, crying. When he told his friend Frank what was wrong, Frank said he wouldnt go to the park either. Clifton knew how badly Frank wanted to go, but his friend was firm. Frank also told the other boys, and they all refused to go to the park. Clifton felt proud that he had such loyal friends.
PRONOUNS

Write a dialogue between Clifton and Frank that dramatizes this story. When you are finished, underline the pronouns you used. How did they help make the dialogue sound more realistic?

seem down ? Frank: Hey Clifton, why do you I cant go with Clifton: I just found out that ment park . the rest of you to the amuse

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Mixed Review
A. Pronouns Choose the correct pronoun for each sentence. 1. Everyone in our class had to write (his or her, their) report on a myth. 2. Shirell and I worked together. (We, Us) chose a myth about Damon and Pythias. 3. Between you and (I, me), this myth turned out to be really good. 4. Damon and Pythias, each from a noble family, had vowed (his, their) undying loyalty to each other. 5. Pythias, sentenced to death by Dionysius, asked permission to leave the city to put (his, their) affairs in order. 6. Damon promised to die in place of Pythias if (he, Pythias) did not return on time. 7. Pythias, unexpectedly delayed, almost failed to keep (his, their) word. 8. Damon was nearly killed in (his, their) place. 9. Pythias saved (him, he) by arriving just in time. 10. Dionysius marveled at their friendship. He pardoned Pythias and asked the two to become (his, their) friends. B. Revising: Using Pronouns Correctly This passage contains six errors in pronoun usage. Rewrite the paragraph to correct the errors.

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Between you and I, the idea of reading ancient stories me sounded boring to me.Then us students read a few Greek we myths in class. It was the first time a teacher explained the stories to Kirsten and I.The action kept us interested. Her me/She and I really liked the heroic characters Hercules and Jason.The them two of they were always doing something exciting, like fighting monsters. Some of my friends like to act out his or her favorite their characters.These myths would make great TV movies!

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Mastery Test: What Did You Learn?

Choose the correct replacement for each underlined word in the passage, or indicate if it is correct as is. Whom knows the story of Sacajawea? Ellen, Terri, and me saw
(1) (3) (2)

a movie about she. Sacajawea befriended Lewis and Clark in 1804 and helped guide they to the Pacific Ocean. In the early 1800s,
(4)

most of the land west of the Mississippi River was unexplored. The idea to map the territory was whos? President Jefferson was the
(5)

one who ordered the expedition. Us students couldnt believe how lucky Lewis and Clark were.
(6)

Them and their men crossed icy rivers and traveled through
(7)

hostile lands. Only one of the travelers lost his life. Sacajawea and
(8)

her husband even took theyre baby on the trail! Ellen, along with
(9)

PRONOUNS

the rest of us, couldnt believe our ears when Sacajawea asked
(10)

Clark to raise her son as his own in St. Louis.

1. A. What B. Who C. Whose D. Correct as is 2. A. us B. I C. Me, Ellen, and Terri D. Correct as is 3. A. her B. we C. hers D. Correct as is 4. A. him B. he C. them D. Correct as is 5. A. whose B. who C. whom D. Correct as is

6. A. Us B. Them students C. We students D. Correct as is 7. A. Him B. They C. He D. Correct as is 8. A. their B. her C. his or her D. Correct as is 9. A. they B. their C. them D. Correct as is 10. A. her B. my C. their D. Correct as is
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Subject Case
I you he she it we you they

Object Case
me you him her it us you them

Possessive Case
my, mine your, yours his her, hers its our, ours your, yours their, theirs

Use this case when the pronoun is a subject the pronoun is a predicate pronoun
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Use this case when the pronoun is a direct object the pronoun is an indirect object the pronoun is the object of a preposition

Use this case for pronouns that show ownership or relationship

Me
and

Pronoun-Antecedent Agreement

my

Shadow

A pronoun should agree with its antecedent in number, person, and gender.

A singular antecedent takes a singular pronoun.

Tanya says her best friend is a yo-yo champ. (singular)

A plural antecedent takes a plural pronoun.

The friends stick together through their ups and downs. (plural)

At times the reference will include both genders.

Each has his or her special talent. They have their special talents.

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Types of Pronouns
Intensive & Reflexive
myself herself himself itself yourself ourselves yourselves themselves

Im Nobody. Are You Nobody too?

Demonstrative
this that these those

Interrogative
who whom what which whose

Indefinite
someone anyone each several many all most none

For a list of indefinite pronouns, see p. 72.

Pronoun Problems
We: Subject/predicate pronoun Us: Object Who: Subject/predicate pronoun Whom: Object

Friends by the Case

We guys stick together. Nothing comes between us guys. Who is your oldest friend? For whom would you do anything?

PRONOUNS

The Bottom Line

Checklist for Pronouns
Have I . . . used the subject case for pronouns that are subjects and predicate pronouns? used the object case for pronouns that are objects? used the possessive case to show ownership or relationship? made sure that pronouns agree with their antecedents in number, person, and gender? used who and whom correctly? used the correct cases in compound subjects and objects?

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Theme: On the Move

Moving Words
Verbs make sentences move. Just as a truck cant go anywhere without an engine, a sentence cant go anywhere without a verb. In this chapter, you will learn how to use verbs to move your sentences. Write Away: Getting There In a paragraph, describe your favorite way to get around. You can describe any form of transportationyour own two feet, a bike, rollerblades, a train, a car, or even a spaceship. Put the paragraph in your Working Portfolio.

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Diagnostic Test: What Do You Know?

Choose the best way to rewrite each underlined word or group of words. For more than a hundred years, science fiction writers will predict new ways of transportation. In 1865 Jules Verne wrote a
(1) (3) (2)

novel called From the Earth to the Moon. Verne is getting many scientific details right. Science fiction writers today had described journeys to other galaxies. Someday we are traveling to those distant places, just as we really did travel to the moon more than 30 years ago. Science fiction will contribute to transportation on Earth
(7) (6) (5) (4)

as well. In 1903 H. G. Wells maked up military tanks in his short story The Land Ironclads. A decade later, during World War I, Winston Churchill remembered that story and began the research
(9) (8)

that led to tanks. Surely other fictional means of transportation

VERBS

are becoming realities in the future.

(10)

1. A. have predicted B. predict C. are predicting D. Correct as is 2. A. writed B. have written C. will write D. Correct as is 3. A. will get B. got C. getted D. Correct as is 4. A. were describing B. will describe C. have described D. Correct as is 5. A. will travel B. have traveled C. travel D. Correct as is

6. A. should travel B. will travel C. do travel D. Correct as is 7. A. should contribute B. is contributing C. has contributed D. Correct as is 8. A. made B. will make C. is making D. Correct as is 9. A. will begin B. has begun C. beginned D. Correct as is 10. A. became B. will become C. have become D. Correct as is

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1 Heres the Idea

A verb is a word used to express an action, a condition, or a state of being. The two main types of verbs are action
verbs and linking verbs. Both kinds can be accompanied by helping verbs.

Action Verbs
An action verb tells what its subject does. The action it expresses can be either physical or mental.

Early humans moved constantly. (physical action) They carried their few possessions with them.
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(physical action)

These people worried about survival. (mental action) They feared large animals. (mental action)

Linking Verbs
A linking verb links its subject to a word in the predicate. The most common linking verbs are forms of the verb be. Linking Verbs
Forms of be Verbs that express condition
be, am, is, are, was, were, been, being appear, become, feel, grow, look, remain, seem, smell, sound, taste
LINKS

Early humans were food gatherers.

LINKING VERB

They often felt hungry.

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Some verbs can serve as either action or linking verbs.

Animals appeared at their campsites.

ACTION VERB
LINKS

Some animals appeared friendly.

LINKING VERB

Helping Verbs and Verb Phrases

Helping verbs help main verbs express action or precise shades of meaning. The combination of one or more helping verbs with a main verb is called a verb phrase.
VERB PHRASE

Animals could carry the humans heavy loads farther.

VERBS
HELPING MAIN

Then people would travel farther.

Some verbs can serve both as main verbs and as helping verbs. For example, had stands alone in the first sentence below but is a helping verb in the second sentence.

People had tools now.

MAIN VERB

They had mastered many skills.

HELPING VERB

Common Helping Verbs

Forms of be Forms of do Forms of have Other
be, am, is, are, was, were, been, being do, does, did have, has, had could, should, would, may, might, must, can, shall, will

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2 Why It Matters in Writing

When writing, use verbs that are strong and lively. Notice this authors use of soared, rushed, and swirled, which are more specific than some other verbs, like dived, went, and flowed.

We soared. The water rushed past my face and swirled around my body, and I felt the streaking lines of speed.

Don C. Reed, My First Dive with the Dolphins

3 Practice and Apply

A. CONCEPT CHECK: What Is a Verb?
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Write the verb or verb phrase in each of the following sentences. They Got Around 1. Transportation developed along with civilization. A 2. Half a million years ago, humans traveled frequently. A 3. They searched for food like nuts and berries. A 4. They hunted animals on foot. A 5. Later they used beasts of burden. A 6. They must have invented sledges about 5000 B.C. A 7. These sledlike vehicles could move tons of weight. A 8. Around 3500 B.C., someone created the wheel. A A 9. With wheels on vehicles, people could travel long distances. L 10. The wheel was one of the most important inventions ever.

Label each verb above as Action or Linking.

For a SELF-CHECK and more practice, see the EXERCISE BANK, p. 274.

B. REVISING: Using More Specific Verbs Answers may vary. Write a more specific verb to replace each underlined verb in the paragraph below. Animal Travel
plunge Most animals travel. Dolphins swim through the water. soar/gallop Eagles fly in the sky. Horses can move for great distances. slither/flit Snakes go through the grass. Butterflies fly from flower to

flower.
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1 Heres the Idea

Action verbs are often accompanied by words that complete their meaning. These complements are called direct objects or indirect objects.

Direct Objects
A direct object is a noun or pronoun that names the receiver of a verbs action. The direct object answers the
question what or whom.
L OVE WHAT ?

Americans love the automobile.

ACTION VERB DIRECT OBJECT

Cars changed our society.

VERBS

Indirect Objects
An indirect object tells to what or whom or for what or whom an action is done. Verbs that often take indirect
objects include bring, give, hand, lend, make, send, show, teach, tell, and write.

Sue gave a ride. (gave to whom?)

T O WHOM?

Sue gave her sisters a ride.

INDIRECT OBJECT
TO

DIRECT OBJECT

WHOM

Sue gave them a ride.

If the preposition to or for appears in a sentence, the word that follows it is not an indirect object. It is the object of the preposition.

Martins mother taught the rules of the road to him.

OBJECT OF PREPOSITION

Martins mother taught him the rules of the road.

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Transitive and Intransitive Verbs

An action verb that has a direct object is called a transitive verb. A verb that does not have a direct object is called an intransitive verb.

Good drivers avoid accidents.

TRANSITIVE VERB DIRECT OBJECT

They stay alert.

INTRANSITIVE VERB (No object)

Sometimes an intransitive verb is followed by a word that looks like a direct object but is really an adverb. An adverb tells where, when, how, or to what extent; a direct object answers the question whom or what.
WHA T IVE DR

Some people drive trucks.

TRANSITIVE VERB DIRECT OBJECT
IVE HOW DR

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Some people drive carelessly.

INTRANSITIVE VERB ADVERB

?
VERB DIRECT OBJECT

2 Why It Matters in Writing

The correct use of direct objects will help you make it clear to your readers exactly who did what. Notice how the model below uses a direct object to show what the automobile provides.

Today the automobile provides convenient, relatively inexpensive, and enjoyable transportation for people from all walks of life.

Understanding Science & Nature: Transportation

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3 Practice and Apply

A. CONCEPT CHECK: Action Verbs and Objects Identify the action verbs in these sentences. Then write 15 complements and label them as direct or indirect objects. Identify each as a direct object or an indirect object. 1. Experience tells us the risks of different vehicles. 2. In 1769 Nicolas-Joseph Cugnot showed the world the The First Accidents

first automobile. 3. His vehicle had three wheels. 4. Steam power gave the vehicle a speed of about three miles an hour. 5. The auto had difficulties, however. 6. This fact gave Cugnot another place in history. 7. His car hit a wall in the worlds first car accident. 8. In 1865 Pierre Lallemont made a test of his bicycle in Connecticut. 9. He had nt given it brakes. 10. He hit a surprised team of horses in the first bike accident ever.
For a SELF-CHECK and more practice, see the EXERCISE BANK, p. 275.

VERBS

B. REVISING: Finding Direct Objects Read the paragraph below. From the list of words at the top, select a direct object to fill each blank. passengers, rumble seats, luggage, seat, name
CORBIS/Schenectady Museum; Hall of Electrical History Foundation

1. seat

4. luggage

5. name

Rumble Seats (1) In the 1930s many cars had no back _______. A (2) rider unfolded the _______ at the rear of the car. 2. rumble seats A rumble seat held only one (3) or two _______. Sometimes 3. passengers (4) people carried _______ in a rumble seat. The bumpy ride in these little seats (5) explains the _______.

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1 Heres the Idea

The complement that a linking verb connects its subject to is called a subject complement. The subject complement identifies or describes the subject. Some common linking verbs are is, feel, seem, and look.
S NT IFIE IDE

Barnstormers were stunt pilots in the 1910s and 1920s.

SUBJECT
SC RIBES DE

VERB

SUBJECT COMPLEMENT

Their job looked dangerous.

SUBJECT VERB SUBJECT COMPLEMENT

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Predicate Nouns and Predicate Adjectives

A subject complement can be a predicate noun or a predicate adjective.

A predicate noun is a noun that follows a linking verb and identifies, renames, or defines the subject.
I ES NT IF IDE

Harriet Quimby was a drama critic.

SUBJECT VERB PREDICATE NOUN

She became a stunt pilot in 1911.

A predicate adjective is an adjective that follows a linking verb and modifies the subject.
D IFIES MO

Quimby was natural at the controls.

SUBJECT VERB PREDICATE ADJECTIVE

She felt happy in the air.

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2 Why It Matters in Writing

You can use a predicate noun to tell more about your subject. Notice how the predicate nouns add information about the subjects.

Bessie Coleman was an AfricanAmerican pilot who broke barriers of racial prejudice. She once said, The air is the only place free from prejudices.

VERBS

3 Practice and Apply

CONCEPT CHECK: Linking Verbs and Predicate Words Identify each linking verb, predicate noun, and predicate adjective in the sentences below. A Flying First 1. The first African-American woman pilot was a Texan. 2. Her name was Bessie Coleman. 3. She became a pilot in 1921. 4. Coleman seemed an unlikely candidate. 5. She was a poor girl from Texas. 6. World War I pilots became her heroes. 7. American flying schools were too biased to let her in. 8. She seemed more welcome in France. 9. Coleman became an expert at stunt flying and parachuting. 10. Her goal became equality in the air.

For a SELF-CHECK and more practice, see the EXERCISE BANK, p. 275.

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1 Heres the Idea

Every verb has four basic forms called its principal parts: the present, the present participle, the past, and the past participle. These principal parts are used to make all
of the forms and tenses of the verb. Here are some examples.

We live in a mobile society.

PRESENT

People are traveling more all the time.

PRESENT PARTICIPLE

Automobiles lent travelers more freedom.

PAST

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Drivers have enjoyed this freedom for years.

PAST PARTICIPLE

The Four Principal Parts of a Verb

Present Present Participle Past Past Participle

move travel

(is) moving (is) traveling

moved traveled

(has) moved (has) traveled

Notice that helping verbs are used with the present participle and the past participle.

Regular Verbs
There are two kinds of verbs: regular and irregular.

A regular verb is a verb whose past and past participle are formed by adding -ed or -d to the present. The
present participle is formed by adding -ing to the present. Present
walk

Present Participle
(is) walk + ing

Past
walk + ed

Past Participle
(has) walk + ed

You will learn about irregular verbs in the next lesson.

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2 Why It Matters in Writing

The principal parts allow you to form verbs that show changes in time. In the news report below, notice how the writer uses the past and the present to show a shift in time.

Yesterdays Auto Expo showcased all the new cars plus some futuristic models.The sports models remain the most popular exhibit at the car show.

PAST PRESENT

3 Practice and Apply

CONCEPT CHECK: Principal Parts of Verbs For each underlined verb in the paragraph below, name the principal part. Gas, Food, Lodging Henry Ford Museum in Dearborn, Michigan, (1) has 1. PA showcased transportation since its early stages. For years, its exhibit Automobile in American Life (2) has appealed 2. PA to visitors. The exhibit (3) started with more than 100 3. Past historic cars. The 15-millionth Model T (4) stands there. The exhibit (5) features a 1946 diner. Jukeboxes in the diner 5. Pres. (6) are playing old songs. The exhibit also (7) shows a 7. Pres. 1960s motel room. The details of a campers cabin (8) make it special. Plastic ants (9) are crawling across the 9. PR bureau. An open suitcase (10) is sitting on a rumpled bed. 10. PR

VERBS

4. Pres. 6. PR 8. Pres.

For a SELF-CHECK and more practice, see the EXERCISE BANK, p. 276.

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1 Heres the Idea

Irregular verbs are verbs whose past and past participle forms are not made by adding -ed or -d to the present.
The following chart shows you how to form the past and past participle forms of many irregular verbs. Common Irregular Verbs
Present Past burst cut hit hurt let put set split spread brought bought caught dug felt fled had kept laid led left lost made said sold sat slept taught thought won wound Past Participle (has) burst (has) cut (has) hit (has) hurt (has) let (has) put (has) set (has) split (has) spread (has) brought (has) bought (has) caught (has) dug (has) felt (has) fled (has) had (has) kept (has) laid (has) led (has) left (has) lost (has) made (has) said (has) sold (has) sat (has) slept (has) taught (has) thought (has) won (has) wound

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Group 1 The forms of the present, past, and past participle are all the same.

burst cut hit hurt let put set split spread bring buy catch dig feel flee have keep lay lead leave lose make say sell sit sleep teach think win wind

Group 2 The forms of the past and the past participle are the same.

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Common Irregular Verbs (continued)

Present Past bit broke chose lay spoke stole tore wore blew did drove ate fell gave went knew rode rose saw took threw wrote began drank rang shrank sang sank swam Past Participle (has) bitten or bit (has) broken (has) chosen (has) lain (has) spoken (has) stolen (has) torn (has) worn (has) blown (has) done (has) driven (has) eaten (has) fallen (has) given (has) gone (has) known (has) ridden (has) risen (has) seen (has) taken (has) thrown (has) written (has) begun (has) drunk (has) rung (has) shrunk (has) sung (has) sunk (has) swum

Group 3 The past participle is formed by adding -n or -en to the past.

bite break choose lie speak steal tear wear blow do drive eat fall give go know ride rise see take throw write begin drink ring shrink sing sink swim

Group 4 The past participle is formed from the present, often by adding -n or -en.

VERBS

Group 5 The last vowel changes from i in the present to a in the past and to u in the past participle.

The Irregular Verb Be

Present The past and past participle do not follow any pattern. am, are, is Past was, were Past Participle (has) been

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2 Why It Matters in Writing

Writers must use the correct irregular verb forms to make their writing sound right. The best way to avoid mistakes is to memorize the principal parts of the most common irregular verbs. Notice the irregular forms used in this pilots account of her first transatlantic flight.

I brought Harmony down to 7,000 feet, and then 5,000 feet, but the air was thick with clouds. I came down to 3,000 feet, then 2,000 feet, then 1,000 feet. Still there were cloudsand a real danger of crashing.

Vicki Van Meter with Dan Gutman, adapted from Taking Flight, My Story

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3 Practice and Apply

CONCEPT CHECK: Irregular Verbs In the sentences below, choose the correct forms of the verbs in parentheses. 1. Transportation (beginned, began) before civilization. 2. For centuries, people walked and (runned, ran) everywhere. Moving Through History

3. They first (rode, rided) in dugout canoes and reed boats nearly 10,000 years ago. 4. They (letted, let) animals carry their loads by 3000 B.C. 5. They (drived, drove) chariots with solid wheels by 2500 B.C. 6. They (dug, digged) canals for ship traffic soon thereafter. 7. Spoked wheels (maked, made) their appearance around 2000 B.C. 8. The Greeks (built, builded) light, fast ships around 400 B.C. 9. The Roman Empire (saw, seen) advances in road building. 10. In A.D. 80, Roman gladiators in the Colosseum (rose, raised) to the arena on elevator-like lifting platforms.
For a SELF-CHECK and more practice, see the EXERCISE BANK, p. 276.

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1 Heres the Idea

A tense is a verb form that shows the time of an action or condition. Verbs have three simple tenses: the present, the
past, and the future.

Understanding Simple Tenses

Simple Tenses

One biker pedals faster than anyone else. She sped past the pack 50 feet ago. Soon she will cross the finish line alone.

The present tense shows an action or condition that occurs now. The past tense shows an action or condition that was completed in the past.
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The future tense shows an action or condition that will occur in the future.

A progressive form of a tense expresses an action or condition in progress.

Progressive Forms

The crowd is cheering. The winners parents were holding their breath. They will be celebrating later.

Present Progressive

Past Progressive Future Progressive

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Forming Simple Tenses

The present tense of a verb is the present principal part. The past tense is the past principal part. To form the future tense, add will to the present principal part. Forming Simple Tenses
Singular Present (present principal part) Past (present part + ed/d )
I skate you skate he, she, it skates I skated you skated he, she, it skated

Plural
we skate you skate they skate we skated you skated they skated we will skate you will skate they will skate

Future I will skate (will + present part) you will skate he, she, it will skate
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To make the progressive form of one of these tenses, add the present, past, or future form of be to the present participle.
Present Progressive: Past Progressive: Future Progressive:

I am skating. I was skating. I will be skating.

2 Why It Matters in Writing

When you are stating a sequence of events, change tenses to show clearly when things happen in relation to each other. Notice how this student has revised the model to change from past to present to future tense.

rode Yesterday I ride my bike to my friend Lynns house. I often walk to her house on weekends. She lives two miles will away. Next Saturday, we bike together along the lakefront.

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3 Practice and Apply

A. CONCEPT CHECK: Simple Tenses Identify the tense of each underlined verb below by labeling it Present, Past, or Future. 1. Long ago, people walked everywhere. 2. 3. 4. 5. 6. 7. 8. 9. Move Over, Superman

Past

They covered three or four miles an hour on foot. Past Later, people rode horses. Past They traveled up to 30 miles in an hour. Past Now most adults drive everywhere. Pres. Many other adults as well as most kids bike around town. Pres. In the future, will people travel on high-speed monorails? Fut. An early monorail carried people in Lyons, France, in 1872. Past Maybe we will fly through the airways in vehicles like cars in the future. Fut. 10. In any case, we will find other ways for faster, more efficient travel. Fut.

VERBS

For a SELF-CHECK and more practice, see the EXERCISE BANK, p. 276.

B. REVISING: Correcting Simple Tenses Revise the following paragraph by correcting the verb tenses. Rocket Belts In A.D. 1280, the Syrian writer al-Hasan al-Rammah (1) will give instructions for making rockets. In the 1960s the U.S. Army (2) tests rocket belts. They (3) will carry a soldier 360 feet forward in each hop. Some experts say that someday we (4) saw rocket belts in wide use. In the future, some people (5) travel only in virtual reality through their computers.

1. gave 2. tested 3. carried

4. will see 5. will travel

Working Portfolio: Find your Write Away from page 86 or a sample of your most recent work. Identify any errors in using simple tenses and correct them.

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1 Heres the Idea

Understanding Perfect Tenses

The present perfect tense places an action or condition in a stretch of time leading up to the present.

Hot-air balloons have existed for 300 years.

Balloons existed in the past; they still exist.

The past perfect tense places a past action or condition before another past action or condition.
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After scientists had used weather balloons for years, people discovered them for sport.

Had used is farther back in the past than discovered.

The future perfect tense places a future action or condition before another future action or condition.

However, many more people will have tried the sport before it becomes ordinary.

Will have tried will occur before it becomes ordinary.

This balloon has finished first.

This balloon will have finished before dark.

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Forming Perfect Tenses

To form the present perfect, past perfect, and future perfect tenses, add has, had, have, or will have to a past participle of the verb. Forming Perfect Tenses
Singular Present perfect (has or have + past participle) Past perfect (had + past participle) Future perfect (will + have + past participle)
I have floated you have floated he, she, it has floated I had floated you had floated he, she, it had floated I will have floated you will have floated he, she, it will have floated

Plural
we have floated you have floated they have floated we had floated you had floated they had floated
VERBS

we will have floated you will have floated they will have floated

In a perfect form, the tense of the helping verb have shows the verbs tense.

We often have seen balloons in the Arizona skies.

2 Why It Matters in Writing

When writing about an event, you can use perfect tenses to help your readers understand when the event occurred in relation to other events. In the model, notice the effective use of the past perfect tense in relation to the past tense.

By a miracle the two companions had escaped the dangerous side streets and were in a more open space. It was the forum.They rested here awhilehow long he did not know.

PAST PERFECT PAST

Louis Untermeyer, The Dog of Pompeii

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3 Practice and Apply

A. CONCEPT CHECK: Perfect Tenses Write the tense of each underlined verb: present perfect, past perfect, or future perfect. 1. People had wanted flight for hundreds of years, even Up, Up, and Away

though they were flightless. Past Perf. 2. The Montgolfier brothers had launched small balloons in 1782 before they sent up a balloon carrying a sheep, a duck, and a rooster in 1783. Past Perf. Pres. Perf. 3. Now pilots have circled the world nonstop in a balloon. 4. In March 2009 it will have been ten years since Brian Jones and Bertrand Piccards historic flight. Fut. Perf. 5. Piccards grandfather had piloted a balloon to a height of nearly 52,000 feet in 1931, almost 70 years before his grandsons feat. Past Perf. 6. Weather scientists have learned much about the earths atmosphere from balloon flights. Pres. Perf. 7. They have taken air samples around the globe. Pres. Perf. 8. Plant scientists have used balloon rafts for exploration of the trees in the rain forest. Pres. Perf. 9. Their discoveries have inspired new medicines. Pres. Perf. 10. About 75,000 weather balloons will have gone up by the end of this year. Fut. Perf.

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For a SELF-CHECK and more practice, see the EXERCISE BANK, p. 277.

B. WRITING: Using Perfect Tenses Rewrite each underlined verb in the tense named in parentheses. Airships By the time of the first airplane, airships fly (past perfect) for years. The first engine-powered balloon take (past perfect) to the air on September 24, 1852, over 50 years before the first successful engine-powered airplane flight. have built Engineers build (present perfect) different types of airships. have seen Rigid airships see (present perfect) better days. Nonrigid will have soared airships, or blimps, soar (future perfect) over many sports events before their era ends.
had flown had taken

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1 Heres the Idea

A good writer uses different verb tenses to show that events occur at different times. If you do not need to show a change of time, do not switch from one tense to another.

Writing About the Present

The present tenses show actions and conditions that occur in the present. You can write about the present using
the present tense, the present perfect tense, and the present progressive form.

Bullet trains are common in Japan. They reach speeds of more than 130 miles per hour.

The present tense places the action in the present.

VERBS

Subways have carried commuters to work for decades. They have given workers a fast trip to work.

The present perfect tense places the actions in a period of time leading up to the present.

Traffic engineers are improving mass transportation. They are making subways more pleasant.

The present progressive forms show the actions or conditions in progress now.

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Writing About the Past

The past tenses show actions and conditions that came to an end in the past. When you write about the
past, you can use past verb forms to indicate the order in which events occurred.

In the 1850s batteries propelled some tram railways. The first cable cars appeared in San Francisco in 1873.

The past tense shows action that began and was completed in the past.

Until subways made commutes easy, workers had lived near their jobs.
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The past perfect tense places the actions before other past actions.

People had crowded Bostons streets before its subway opened.

Officials were encouraging mass transit for years before highways got too crowded. They were preparing cities for worse traffic as the population grew.

The past progressive forms show that the actions in the past were in progress.

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Writing About the Future

The future tenses show actions and conditions that are yet to come. By using the future verb forms, you can show
how future events are related in time.

People always will need to get from home to work. But many of them will commute fewer than five days a week.

The future tense shows that the actions are yet to come.

Home offices will have become popular before subways are overloaded. By the time subways are full, workers will have learned to commute by computer.

The future perfect tense places the actions or conditions before other future actions or conditions.
VERBS

More people will be working at home several days a week. Telecommuters will be sending their work to the office by computer.

The future progressive forms show that the action or condition in the future will be continuing.

2 Why It Matters in Writing

When you are writing for social studies, use tenses correctly to show that you know the sequence of important events.

1880
Steam provided power for trains.

1900
Electricity provided power for subways.

Today
Electromagnetic energy provides power for highspeed trains.

2025
What kind of energy will move vehicles in the future?

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3 Practice and Apply

A. CONCEPT CHECK: Using Verb Tenses In each sentence, choose the correct verb form in parentheses. 1. Commuters (have used, will use) mass transit since the 1800s. Pres. Perf. 2. The first electric subway (opens, opened) in London, Its Off to Work They Go

England, in 1890. Past 3. In 1897 Boston (will become, became) the first U.S. city with a subway. Past 4. After subways (had run, ran) for a few decades, they improved. Past Perf. 5. They (ran, will run) faster and were better ventilated. Past 6. Now many cities (had enjoyed, enjoy) computer-controlled trains. Pres. 7. These automatic commuter trains (carry, had carried) millions of people every day. Pres. 8. Bullet trains like those in Japan now (have traveled, travel) around 160 miles per hour over long distances. Pres. 9. The next generation of subway trains (had moved, will move) without engines or rails. Fut. 10. These maglev trains (will float, were floating) on a magnetic cushion at 300 miles per hour. Fut. Name the tense of each verb you chose in part A.
For a SELF-CHECK and more practice, see the EXERCISE BANK, p. 278.

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B. EDITING: Arranging Verb Tenses The following sentences tell about a commuter train ride. List the sentence numbers in a logical order so that the tenses of the verbs make sense. (Hint: Read all the sentences before you begin.) Sentence order: 4, 1, 5, 3, 2 1. 2. 3. 4. The train started before Mrs. Bakiloff had sat down. Are you hurt? said Mrs. Bakiloff. Ouch! Thats hot! he exclaimed. After the train had stopped, 12 passengers rushed up the train steps to get the best seats. 5. She fell toward Mr. Indigo, spilling her coffee.
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1 Heres the Idea

Some pairs of verbs seem similar, but are actually different words with different meanings. Troublesome verb pairs include lie and lay, rise and raise, sit and set, and learn and teach.

Lie and Lay

Lie means to recline. It does not take an object. Lay means to put or place. It does take an object.

Pat lies on the floor with her model cars. She lays a van on top of a carrier truck.
Lie and Lay
Present
lie Pat lies down. lay Pat lays the car down.

Past
lay Pat lay down. laid Pat laid the car down.

Past Participle
lain Pat has lain down. laid Pat has laid the car down.
VERBS

Lie and lay are confusing because the present principal part of lay is the same as the past principal part of lie.

Rise and Raise

Rise means to move upward or to go up. It does not take an object. Raise means to lift up. It usually takes an object.

Helicopters rise above the trees. The pilot raises the flaps on the airplanes wings.
Rise and Raise
Present
rise The plane rises. raise Jo raises the cars hood.

Past
rose The plane rose. raised Jo raised the hood.

Past Participle
risen The plane has risen. raised Jo has raised the hood.

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Sit and Set

Sit means to be seated. It does not take an object. Set means to put or place. It does take an object.

Jeff sits next to the flat tire. He sets the lug wrench on the ground.

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Sit and Set

Present
sit Lets sit up front. set Bob sets down the keys.

Past
sat We sat up front. set Bob set down the keys.

Past Participle
sat We have sat up front. set Bob has set down the keys.

Learn and Teach

Learn means to gain knowledge or skill. Teach means to instruct or to help someone learn.

Sam learned to skateboard. Leisha taught Sam to skateboard.

Learn and Teach
Present
learn Maria learns to ski. teach Mr. Lu teaches math.

Past
learned Maria learned to ski. taught Mr. Lu taught math.

Past Participle
learned Maria has learned to ski. taught Mr. Lu has taught math.

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2 Practice and Apply

A. CONCEPT CHECK: Troublesome Verb Pairs Choose the correct word in parentheses in each of the following sentences. 1. The origin of modern elevators (lies, lays) in the invention Going Up?

6. 7. 8. 9. 10.

2. 3. 4. 5.

of skyscrapers. Only elevators could (raise, rise) to the upper floors. Engineers (learned, taught) how to build hydraulic elevators. These elevators (raised, rose) only freight, not people. Workers (sat, set) the goods on the elevator floor and sent them up or down. People were afraid to (sit, set) in boxes held up only by ropes. Then Elisha Graves Otis (lay, laid) their fears to rest. Otis (learned, taught) builders how to make elevators safe. In 1857 he installed the worlds first passenger elevator, which (rose, raised) five stories at 40 feet per minute. For many years, elevators had cushioned places where riders (sat, set).
For a SELF-CHECK and more practice, see the EXERCISE BANK, p. 278.

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B. PROOFREADING: What Do They Mean? List the five verbs that are used incorrectly in the following paragraph. Then change them to the correct verb forms. Escalator Up In St. Petersburg, Russia, the subway lays far underground. lies Passengers set in subway trains. When they get out, an sit escalator rises the passengers 195 feet up. As they raise, raises/rise they may be distracted sometimes. But they teach quickly to learn pay attention when they step off the escalator at the top.

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Using Action Verbs to Describe Motion

Whether you watch the playoffs on TV, read the sports page, or learn how to play a sport in gym class, you need verbs to express what is happening. Verbs explain physical movement, tell what something is, or link ideas. What verbs might you use to describe the following cheerleading jumps?

J-U-M-P!
Split
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Herky

Full C

Pike

Bambi Banana

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Practice and Apply

A. USING VERBS IN INSTRUCTIONS

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Hooray! You got through tryouts and made the cheerleading squad. Theres only one hitchthe coachs handout of basic jumps does not have any written directions. Study the illustration on page 114. Then write five steps explaining how to do one of these jumps. Use verbs from the list below that precisely describe the motion of your arms, legs, body, and head. Action Verbs
raise lower bend straighten extend turn clasp pivot grab shake land hop cross lunge twirl wrap move place straddle clench twist lift push roll step jump stretch thrust kick split drop point spin scoop switch stand leap squat crouch
VERBS

bounce vault swing touch lock pull

B. USING VERBS IN A PLAY-BY-PLAY With a partner, role-play two radio sports announcers. Do a playby-play broadcast, or a running account of the action of a sports event as it unfolds, for the class. Narrate the action of one of the following sports highlights or another of your choice.

a winning goal in a soccer match a home run in a tie softball game a record-breaking finish in a race

Use precise, vivid verbs that describe the action that takes place. Remember that you want your classmates to be able to picture in their minds what is happening.

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N
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Mixed Review
A. Revising Incorrect Verb Parts Find and correct the 10 incorrect verbs

and verb forms in the following sentences. Watch out for irregular verbs and troublesome verb pairs.
Space: The Final Frontier 1. Fifty years ago, scientists will wonder whether humans could 2. 3. 4. 5. 6. 7. 8. 9. 10.
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survive in outer space. had wondered or wondered So they sended a dog named Laika up in a rocket in 1957. sent Yuri Gagarin becomes the first person in space in 1961. became Just eight years later, astronauts are landing on the moon. landed Today they had traveled in the space shuttle. travel Unlike the older spacecraft, the shuttle was being reused again and again, like an airplane. is Some experts predict that we had a base on the moon in the 21st century. will have Rockets will sit down tourists and businesspeople every day. set Some say we flew beyond our solar system someday. will fly Who knows where the human race has gone after that? will go

B. Using Tenses Using the ideas in the phrases listed below, write five

sentences about the picture. Tell what happened before the scene shown in the picture, what is happening in it, and what might happen next. Answers in column.
puts on spacesuit steps out into space locks feet into foot holder on robot arm rides robot arm to repair location returns to the shuttle after fixing the problem

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Mastery Test: What Did You Learn?

Choose the best way to rewrite each underlined word or group of words. We now are living in the age of the automobile, but some people had worried about that fact for a while. Cars give us freedom and mobility, but they also gave us pollution, accidents, and road rage.
(3) (2) (1)

Before the automobile age, there will be almost no pavement in the United States. Now we have 2.4 million miles of paved roads, which costed $200 million per day to keep up and add to. Some futurists believe that as roads get more crowded, more people have
(6) (5) (4)

turned to mass transit. Even now, subways, trains, and buses pollute less per person than automobiles do. Other people predict
(7)

that communities had become more self-sufficient. After people finally work near their homes, they abandoned their cars. The air will be cleaner, and people will have been healthier.
(10) (9) (8)

VERBS

1. A. will live B. have lived C. will be living D. Correct as is 2. A. worry B. will worry C. have worried D. Correct as is 3. A. had given B. will give C. give D. Correct as is 4. A. had been B. are C. have been D. Correct as is 5. A. will cost B. cost C. will have costed D. Correct as is

6. A. turn B. had turned C. will turn D. Correct as is 7. A. had polluted B. will pollute C. polluted D. Correct as is 8. A. have become B. will become C. are becoming D. Correct as is 9. A. will abandon B. have abandoned C. are abandoning D. Correct as is 10. A. were B. have been C. will be D. Correct as is
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A verb expresses action, condition, or state of being. The two main kinds of verbs are action verbs and linking verbs. Many people drive cars.
ACTION VERB

Cars are very handy.

LINKING VERB

Principal Parts of Regular Verbs

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Present present

Present Participle helping verb + present + -ing (is) biking (is) blasting (is) diving (is) floating (is) galloping (is) lifting (is) moving (is) rolling (is) traveling (is) walking

Past present + -ed or -d biked blasted dived floated galloped lifted moved rolled traveled walked

Past Participle helping verb + present + -ed or -d (has) biked (has) blasted (has) dived (has) floated (has) galloped (has) lifted (has) moved (has) rolled (has) traveled (has) walked

bike blast dive float gallop lift move roll travel walk

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Keeping Tenses Straight

Tense Present Past Future Present perfect Definition

Travel Time
Example We travel everywhere. We traveled to Maine. We will travel to California next year. We have traveled often.

Action or condition occurring in the present Action or condition occurring in the past Action or condition occurring in the future Action or condition occurring in the period leading up to the present Past action or condition coming before another past action or condition Future action or condition coming before another future action or condition

Past perfect

We had traveled to Washington, D.C., before I turned 12. We will have traveled to every state before Im 21.

VERBS

Future perfect

The Bottom Line

Checklist for Verb Usage
Have I . . . used action verbs to express an action? used linking verbs with predicate nouns and predicate adjectives? used direct objects and indirect objects to answer the questions whom, what, to whom, and to what? used the correct principal parts of irregular verbs? used tenses correctly to express the time of actions and conditions? used sit and set, lie and lay, rise and raise, and learn and teach correctly?

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Dear Alice, We hiked and camped. We saw flowers and climbed trails.. --Gomez

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Theme: The Great Outdoors

Tell Me More
What would you think if you received the postcard message above? Its kind of boring, isnt it? To give a better sense of what it was like to be there, the writer could add words describing what he saw and did.

We hiked endlessly and camped late. We saw mountain flowers and carefully climbed steep trails. The words writers use to describe people, places, and things are adjectives. The words they use to describe actions are adverbs. What adjectives and adverbs would you use to describe the picture on the postcard above? Write Away: Wish You Were Here! Create a postcard of one of your favorite outdoor places. On one side, describe the place and what you did there. Illustrate the other side with a picture of what you have described. Save your postcard in your Working Portfolio.

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Diagnostic Test: What Do You Know?

For each underlined item, choose the letter of the term that correctly identifies it. Yellowstone National Park is the oldest national park in the
(1)

United States. Opened on March 1, 1872, this park attracts

(2)

millions of people each year. Visitors are wild about the hot
(3)

springs, mud pots, and geysers. Old Faithful is popular because it erupts more regularly than other geysers in the park. One of the
(4)

neatest sights is the colorful rainbow in Grand Prismatic Spring

(5)

that is made by algae. Tourists also enjoy the animals, including

(6)

bison, elk, large bears, and bighorn sheep. Although fires badly
(7) (9) (8)

burned many acres of the park in 1988, this American treasure is now healthier than ever. Yellowstone will continue to delight
(10)

ADJ. & ADV.

generations of visitors.

1. A. adverb modifying oldest B. adverb modifying is C. adjective modifying Idaho D. adjective modifying park 2. A. pronoun used as adjective B. adverb C. proper adjective D. article 3. A. proper adjective B. demonstrative pronoun C. predicate adjective D. comparative adjective 4. A. comparative adverb B. superlative adverb C. comparative adjective D. superlative adjective 5. A. adjective modifying one B. adjective modifying rainbow C. adjective modifying sights D. adverb modifying is

6. A. proper adjective B. article C. demonstrative pronoun D. adverb 7. A. adjective modifying bears B. adverb modifying including C. adverb modifying enjoy D. adjective modifying animals 8. A. adverb telling how B. adverb telling when C. adverb telling where D. adjective telling how much 9. A. possessive adjective B. superlative adjective C. proper adjective D. noun used as adjective 10. A. comparative adjective B. comparative adverb C. superlative adverb D. superlative adjective

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1 Heres the Idea

An adjective is a word that modifies, or describes, a noun or a pronoun.
DIFIES MO

A heavy rainstorm soaked the campsite.

ADJECTIVE NOUN

Adjectives help you see, feel, taste, hear, and smell all the experiences you read about. Notice how adjectives make the second sentence in this pair more descriptive.

Coyotes startled the campers. Noisy coyotes startled the sleepy campers.
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Adjectives answer the questions what kind, which one, how many, and how much. Adjectives
What kind? Which one or ones? How many or how much?
green backpack last hamburger two flashlights sturdy tent third hike many insects spicy stew every lantern little moonlight

What kind? waterproof floor round roof

Which one or ones? only door each window

How many? several stakes two people

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Articles
The most commonly used adjectives are the articles a, an, and the. A and an are used with singular nouns. Use a before a word beginning with a consonant sound. a tent a candle a lamp

Use an before a word beginning with a vowel sound. an axe an elephant an unusual night

The is an article that points to a particular person, place, thing, or idea. You can use the with singular or plural nouns.

The hiker tripped on the trail and dropped the cameras.

Use the when you want to refer to a specific person, place, thing, or idea. Use a and an when you want to be less specific.

ADJ. & ADV.

Did the team leader bring a first-aid kit?

ONE SPECIFIC LEADER ANY FIRST-AID KIT

Proper Adjectives
Many adjectives are formed from common nouns. Nouns and Adjectives
Noun Adjective

rain scene beauty

rainy scenic beautiful

A proper adjective is formed from a proper noun. Proper adjectives are always capitalized. Proper Nouns and Proper Adjectives
Proper Noun Proper Adjective

China Ireland Mars

Chinese Irish Martian

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2 Why It Matters in Writing

Adjectives provide important details about the nouns they describe. Imagine this description without adjectives.

Max came last. He was lugging a new knapsack that contained a cast-iron frying pan, a packet of hot dogs, and a box of saltine crackersplus two bottles. One bottle was mustard, the other, celery soda. He also had a bag of Tootsie Rolls and a shiny hatchet.To build a lean-to, he explained.

Avi, Scouts Honor

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3 Practice and Apply

CONCEPT CHECK: What Is an Adjective? Write each adjective and the noun or pronoun it modifies. Do not include articles when you write the adjectives. Urban Wilderness 1. Central Park is now an American landmark. 2. It was once a dirty swamp that was filled with ugly shacks and much garbage. 3. In 1858 there was a national competition for a plan to turn the spot into an attractive park. 4. People tried to imagine a place where New Yorkers could enjoy the great outdoors. 5. The park took the builders sixteen years to complete. 6. The landscape includes green meadows, lakes, ponds, woods, and beautiful gardens. 7. There is also an Egyptian statue. 8. Other attractions include a colorful carousel and a zoo. 9. The zoo features an African exhibit with birds and monkeys. 10. Many monuments are scattered throughout the park.

For a SELF-CHECK and more practice, see the EXERCISE BANK, p. 279.

Write the proper adjectives that appear in sentences 1, 7, and 9.

1. American/7. Egyptian/9. African

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1 Heres the Idea

A predicate adjective is an adjective that follows a linking verb and describes the verbs subject. The linking
verb connects the predicate adjective with the subject.
D
R ES C IBES

A volcanic eruption is violent.

SUBJECT
D
CRIBES ES

LINKING VERB

It is explosive.
Predicate adjectives can follow linking verbs other than forms of be. Forms of taste, smell, feel, look, become, and seem are often used as linking verbs.
SC RIBES DE

ADJ. & ADV.

The lava looks thick.

LINKING VERB
SC RIBES DE

PREDICATE ADJECTIVE

Lava becomes hard when it cools.

For more about linking verbs, see page 94.

2 Why It Matters in Writing

Writers often use predicate adjectives to tell more about a persons character, as in this authors description of her parents.

Both my parents had grown up poor, and they also knew what it was to be lonely. They cared deeply about other people and were always ready to lend a helping hand to anyone. Mama couldnt bear to think of her children ever being less than kind and caring. Dont ever be indifferent, she would say to Keiko and me.That is the worst fault of all.

Yoshiko Uchida, Oh Broom, Get to Work

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3 Practice and Apply

A. CONCEPT CHECK: Predicate Adjectives Write each predicate adjective in these sentences, along with the noun or pronoun it modifies. 1. For more than 120 years, Mount St. Helens, a volcano in Washington, was inactive. 2. Then the volcano became dangerous. Look Out!

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3. In 1980 eruptions were responsible for widespread damage. 4. The blasts were thunderous. 5. After hot ash started fires, the air smelled smoky. 6. The sky became very dark as ash fell like snow. 7. Long after the eruption, pumice, a kind of volcanic rock, still felt hot. 8. Following the blast, tall forests looked very flat. 9. Thick, fast mudslides seemed deadly. 10. The volcanic eruptions of Mount St. Helens were very destructive.

For a SELF-CHECK and more practice, see the EXERCISE BANK, p. 280.

B. WRITING: Creating Riddles Answers in column. On a piece of paper, write three sentences about yourself, using linking verbs and predicate adjectives. Underline each predicate adjective. Then fold the paper and put your sentences into a hat along with those of your classmates. Take turns drawing a piece of paper out of the hat. Try to guess the name of the author. Example: I am female and very tall, and my hair is red. It is also extremely long and curly. To many people, I seem quiet, but often I feel adventurous. In your Working Portfolio, find the postcard you wrote for the Write Away on page 120. Add or change predicate adjectives to make your description clearer.

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1 Heres the Idea

Many pronouns and nouns can be used as adjectives. They can modify nouns to make their meanings more specific.

Pronouns as Adjectives
Demonstrative Pronouns This, that, these, and those are demonstrative pronouns. They can be used as adjectives.
DIFIES MO

This canoe is made of wood and leather.

DIFIES MO

These canoes are made of aluminum.

ADJ. & ADV.

Possessive Pronouns My, our, your, her, his, its, and their are possessive pronouns. They are used as adjectives.
DIFIES MO DIFIES MO

My skateboard is newer than your bicycle. Indefinite Pronouns Indefinite pronouns such as all, each, both, few, most, and some can be used as adjectives.
DIFIES MO

Most people in my family enjoy exploring caves.

DIFIES MO

All members of my family enjoy picnicking.

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Nouns as Adjectives
Like pronouns, nouns can be used as adjectives. In the expression mountain climber, for example, the word mountain (normally a noun) modifies climber. Notice the nouns used as adjectives in the sentences below.
DIFIES MO

Rock climbers practice indoors on winter nights.

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They use a rock wall made from construction materials.

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2 Why It Matters in Writing

By using nouns as adjectives, a writer can pack a lot of important information into just a word or two. Notice what information the nouns that are used as adjectives add to the passage below.

In the same week, my brother made the baseball team of his junior high school, Father started taking driving lessons, and Mother discovered rummage sales.We soon got all the furniture we needed, plus a dart board and a 1,000-piece jigsaw puzzle (fourteen hours later, we discovered that it was a 999-piece jigsaw puzzle).

Lensey Namioka, The All-American Slurp

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3 Practice and Apply

A. CONCEPT CHECK: Other Words Used as Adjectives Write each noun or pronoun that is used as an adjective in these sentences. Then write the word it modifies. 1. Most climbers climb mountain formations. 2. Urban climbers scale city buildings. Climb Every Mountain

3. 4. 5. 6. 7. 8. 9. 10.

Many climbers participate in skill training. Gyms allow these people to train on rock walls. My friends prefer to test their skills on mountains. Some climbs occur on glacier ice. Those climbers want to enjoy a mountaintop view. Their equipment includes this harness and that helmet. Our goal is to learn correct body positions. Each skill involves muscle strength and concentration.
ADJ. & ADV.

For a SELF-CHECK and more practice, see the EXERCISE BANK, p. 280.

B. REVISING: Adding Nouns as Adjectives Make this message more detailed by adding nouns from the list below to modify each of the nouns in boldface type.
1mud 2 steel 3 neighborhood 4 park 5 safety

Dear Tammi, You wont believe what happened today! I was roller-blading on a sidewalk, and a kid on a skateboard lost his balance 4/3/2 and fell. The skateboard flew into my helmet, and I fell into 5 a puddle. 1
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Liner absorbs shock of fall Outer shell protects skull from impact

Chin strap holds helmet firmly in place

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1 Heres the Idea

An adverb is a word that modifies a verb, an adjective, or another adverb.
DIFIES MO

Explorers eagerly chase adventure.

ADVERB VERB
DIFIES MO

Some explorers visit amazingly beautiful places.

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Others quite bravely explore the unknownspace.

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Adverbs answer the questions how, when, where, or to what extent. Adverbs
How? When? Where? To what extent?
suddenly, carefully, sadly now, later, soon there, up, ahead completely, totally, fully

Adverbs can appear in different positions in sentences.

The tourists boarded the bus eagerly. (after verb) The tourists eagerly boarded the bus. (before verb) Eagerly, the tourists boarded the bus. (at beginning)
Adverbs that modify adjectives or other adverbs usually come directly before the words they modify. They usually answer the question to what extent.
DIFIES MO

Marco Polo told really wonderful tales of China.

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DIFIES MO

People were very eager to hear his stories.

DIFIES MO

They nearly always hung on every word.

Forming Adverbs
Many adverbs are formed by adding the suffix -ly to adjectives. Sometimes a base words spelling changes when -ly is added.

QUICK-FIX SPELLING MACHINE: ADVERBS

ADJ. & ADV.
ADJECTIVE RULE ADVERB

near gentle easy

Add -ly. Drop the e and add -ly. Change y to i and add -ly.

nearly gently easily

2 Why It Matters in Writing

Use adverbs to record what you observe in science. Notice how one scientist used adverbs to record details about the behavior of spiders.

The spider can remain perfectly still for hours, waiting for its prey.When an insect does accidentally stumble into the web, the spider can move swiftly, injecting poison rapidly into its prey and wrapping it tightly in spider silk.

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3 Practice and Apply

A. CONCEPT CHECK: What Is an Adverb? Write each adverb and the word it modifies. Identify the modified word as a verb, an adjective, or an adverb. There may be more than one adverb in a sentence. 1. Thomas Jefferson became very curious about the West after he took office as president. Adv. 2. He studied maps and explorers journals quite often. V/Adv. The Wild West

3. He soon asked Meriwether Lewis to explore the new territory of the 1803 Louisiana Purchase. V 4. In preparation for the trip, Lewis quickly learned many skills. V 5. On May 14, 1804, Lewis, William Clark, and a team of explorers headed west. V 6. Team members gathered truly valuable information. Adj. 7. Their remarkably complete journals told what they saw. Adj. 8. Sometimes, the explorers sent specimens, such as live prairie dogs, to President Jefferson. V 9. Finally, in 1806, the difficult 8,000-mile expedition ended. V 10. Because the journey was so completely successful, Lewis and Clark became famous. Adv./Adj.
For a SELF-CHECK and more practice, see the EXERCISE BANK, p. 281.

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Write the adjectives from which the adverbs in sentences 4, 6, 7, 9, and 10 are formed. 4. quick/6. true/7. remarkable/9. final/10. complete B. WRITING: Adding Adverbs Choose one adverb from the list to fill in each of the blanks. carefully soon rather often upward

1. upward 2. Often 3. carefully 4. rather 5. soon

Starstruck As a young child, Maria Mitchell gazed (1) (answers where) at the sky. (2) (answers when), she visited her fathers observatory in Nantucket, Massachusetts. At the age of 12, she (3) (answers how) recorded information about an eclipse. On October 1, 1847, the grown-up Mitchell, an astronomer, made a (4) (answers to what extent) rare discoverya new comet. She was (5) (answers when) elected to the American Academy of Arts and Sciences, the first woman to be so honored.

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1 Heres the Idea

Adjectives and adverbs can be used to compare people or things. Special forms of these words are used to make comparisons.

Use the comparative form of an adjective or adverb when you compare a person or thing with one other person or thing.
Mt. Rainier is higher than Mt. Hood. Mountain climbing is more dangerous than skydiving.

Use the superlative form of an adjective or adverb when you compare someone or something with more than one other person or thing. Mt. Everest is the highest of the three mountains.
I think Mt. Fuji is the most beautiful mountain of all.

ADJ. & ADV.

Regular Forms of Comparison

For most one-syllable modifiers, add -er to form the comparative. Add -est to form the superlative. One-Syllable Modifiers
Base Form Adjectives Adverbs
thin brave slow soon

Comparative
thinner braver slower sooner

Superlative
thinnest bravest slowest soonest

You can also add -er and -est to some two-syllable adjectives. With others, and with two-syllable adverbs, use more and most. Two-Syllable Modifiers
Base Form Adjectives Adverbs
shallow awful calmly briskly

Comparative
shallower more awful more calmly more briskly

Superlative
shallowest most awful most calmly most briskly
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With adjectives and adverbs having three or more syllables, use more and most. Modifiers with More than Two Syllables
Base Form Adjectives Adverbs
beautiful dangerous gracefully dangerously

Comparative
more beautiful more dangerous more gracefully more dangerously

Superlative
most beautiful most dangerous most gracefully most dangerously

Use only one sign of comparison at a time. Dont use more and -er together or most and -est together.
INCORRECT: CORRECT:

That beach has the most whitest sand. That beach has the whitest sand.

Irregular Forms of Comparison

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The comparative and superlative forms of some adjectives and adverbs are completely different words. You dont need to add -er or -est to an irregular comparison. Irregular Modifiers
Base Form Adjectives Adverbs
good bad well much little

Comparative
better worse better more less

Superlative
best worst best most least

2 Why It Matters in Writing

Comparative and superlative forms are used to compare and contrast things with each other.

Last year I thought math was the most difficult subject. This year I think English is more difficult than math.

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3 Practice and Apply

A. CONCEPT CHECK: Making Comparisons Choose the correct comparative or superlative form to complete each sentence. 1. Australias Great Barrier Reef is the (larger, largest) coral reef in the world. 2. The reef is also the (richer, richest) of all marine resources. Worlds Eighth Natural Wonder

3. Biologists can (better, more better) study sea life near a reef than in open water. 4. The (biggest, most biggest) of all polyps, the animals that form a coral reef, are a foot in diameter. 5. Coral grows (better, best) of all in warm, shallow water. 6. During cold weather, vacationers visit the reefs northern islands (less, least) frequently than the southern ones. 7. A scuba dive is (more daring, most daring) than a glassbottom-boat tour of the reef. 8. The Great Barrier Reef is (more fragile, most fragile) than a large rock formation would be. 9. The crown-of-thorns starfish is the reefs (deadlier, deadliest) enemy. 10. These starfish can devour polyps (more, most) quickly than the average starfish.
For a SELF-CHECK and more practice, see the EXERCISE BANK, p. 281.
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1 Heres the Idea

Some pairs of adjectives and adverbs are often confused.

Good and Well Good is always an adjective; it modifies a noun or pronoun. Well is usually an adverb, modifying a verb, an adverb, or an adjective.
DIFIES MO

That was a good documentary about Mt. Everest.

ADJECTIVE NOUN
DIFIES MO

The filmmaker presented the information well.

VERB
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ADVERB

Well is an adjective when it refers to health.

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After the film, I didnt feel well.

PRONOUN ADJECTIVE

Real and Really Real is always an adjective; it modifies a noun or pronoun. Really is always an adverb; it modifies a verb, an adverb, or an adjective.
DIFIES MO

She prefers real mountains to paintings of mountains.

ADJECTIVE NOUN
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The Grand Canyon is really beautiful in the morning.

ADVERB ADJECTIVE

Bad and Badly Bad is always an adjective; it modifies a noun or pronoun. Badly is always an adverb; it modifies a verb, an adverb, or an adjective. That wasnt a bad hike, even though we planned it badly.
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I often feel bad about staying indoors so much.

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2 Why It Matters in Writing

People make many mistakes using good, real, and bad. In your writing, check the word being modified to see if you need an adjective or an adverb.

well Hiking at night is not a good idea if you cant see good in really the dark. I had a real scary experience once doing that. It was badly well a real nightmare. I saw so bad in the dark that I stumbled off a hill and fell into a cactus patch.
ADJ. & ADV.

3 Practice and Apply

CONCEPT CHECK: Adjective or Adverb? Choose the correct word in parentheses. Then identify it as an adjective or an adverb. Londons Call of the Wild 1. American author Jack London described nature (good, well). Adv. 2. Much of his fiction is based on (real, really) experiences. Adj. 3. In his teens, he had (real, really) adventures as a sailor. Adj. 4. In 1897 he was (real, really) curious about a gold rush. Adv. 5. In Canadas Yukon Territory, he lived in a tiny cabin and struggled to survive in (bad, badly) weather. Adj. 6. Unfortunately, London felt (bad, badly) because he had scurvy, a disease caused by a lack of vitamin C. Adj. 7. Although he never found gold, London discovered a (good, well) subject for his stories and novels. Adj. 8. His first Yukon tales were received (good, well). Adv. 9. Londons novel, The Call of the Wild, is based on a (real, really) dog he had known in the Yukon. Adj. 10. In To Build a Fire, London tells the story of a young man facing a (bad, badly) problem. Adj.

For a SELF-CHECK and more practice, see the EXERCISE BANK, p. 282.
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1 Heres the Idea

A negative word is a word that says no. Contractions that end in nt are negative words. Remember, nt means not. A word like cant means cannot. Some common negative words are listed below. Common Negative Words
barely hardly neither never nobody none nothing nowhere

If two negative words are used together, the result is a double negative. Avoid double negatives in speaking and writing.
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I dont want no slackers on this hike.

CORRECT

I dont want any slackers on this hike. I want no slackers on this hike.

2 Why It Matters in Writing

Some writers accidentally create a double negative when they try to make a strong negative statement. However, a double negative makes a writer sound careless.

The largest cactus in North America is the saguaro. It anywhere doesnt grow nowhere but in the deserts of southern Arizona, southeastern California, and northwestern Mexico. need hardly any Saguaros dont hardly need no water to survive. It almost s doesnt never rain where saguaros live, but these plants can store water in their stems for a long time.

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3 Practice and Apply

A. CONCEPT CHECK: Avoiding Double Negatives Write the word in parentheses that correctly completes each sentence. 1. Desert dwellers live where theres barely (no, any) relief from high temperatures. 2. Many (dont have, have) no air conditioning. Beat the Heat

3. They cant build with (nothing, anything) that gets too hot. 4. Some North Africans live underground in rock houses that dont (ever, never) get hot. 5. Adobe keeps houses cool but (can, cant) never be used in a damp climate. 6. In Syria, mud houses shaped like beehives may not be uncomfortable (either, neither). 7. Nobody (would, wouldnt) mind using solar-powered air conditioning to keep cool. 8. In Fiji, people who live in houses with thatched roofs (could, couldnt) hardly find a better design. 9. Houses that have shutters and tile floors stay cooler than those that dont have (none, any). 10. If you scarcely (ever, never) suffer from the heat, a desert home might be comfortable after all.
For a SELF-CHECK and more practice, see the EXERCISE BANK, p. 283.

ADJ. & ADV.

B. PROOFREADING: Eliminating Double Negatives Answers in column. Find and correct five double negatives in the paragraph below. (There is more than one way to correct each double negative.) Sand, Sand Everywhere Without sand, no one couldnt build sandcastles or walk on a beach. Sand is made of fine pieces of rock and minerals that arent barely larger than clay or silt. In a desert, sand doesnt lie nowhere near water but covers the land. On a beach, sand isnt never always soft and white. For example, tourists visiting Hawaii cant hardly believe they are seeing black sand, which comes from volcanic lava.
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Using Adjectives and Adverbs

When you write about the great outdoorsor about any other topicuse adjectives and adverbs to make your descriptions vivid and enjoyable for readers. You can also use nouns and pronouns as adjectives. Notice the words Armstrong Sperry uses to describe a boy paddling a canoe in a tropical lagoon.

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ADJECTIVES ADVERBS

by Armstrong Sperry A school of fish swept by like silver arrows. He saw scarlet rock cod with ruby eyes and the head of a conger eel peering out from a cavern in the coral.The boy thought suddenly of Tupa, ghost of the lagoon. On such a bright day it was hard to believe in ghosts of any sort. The fierce sunlight drove away all thought of them. Perhaps ghosts were only old mens stories, anyway! . . . As the canoe drew away from shore, the boy saw the coral reef that, above all others, had always interested him. It was of white corala long slim shape that rose slightly above the surface of the water. It looked very much like a shark.There was a ridge on the back that the boy could pretend was a dorsal fin, while up near one end were two dark holes that looked like eyes!
Cheryl Cooper, 1995.

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WRITING: Using Adjectives and Adverbs to Describe

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y, a (adjective) da Because it was ay, was (adverb) gr And ever ything ve), (adverb) (adjecti e were getting W zy. ere (adverb) la even though w (adverb) e lights went Just then all th t. began to shou And ever yone b). me; Im (adver is that? Its Who . ted out in fear I loudly shou ide we crept outs So, cautiously (adverb). b), eyes open (Adverb), (adver djective), d not seem (a hat we saw, di And w you. was, we say to But it (adverb) ve) duck, ns, an (adjecti djective) pengui (A ck; s, a hockey pu (Adjective) sock cats and (adjective) (Adjective) fish bats. and (adjective) (Adjective) balls . just died away Then the wind tive) ray. dverb), a (adjec e sun came (a Th pale, nd, a (adverb) We looked arou is tale. erb) to write th And went (adv

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Mixed Review
A. Using Adjectives and Adverbs Read this passage. Then write the answers to the questions below it.

(1) Have you dressed yet? their grandmother called. (2) Once a month in the sun and they must almost be forced, she muttered. (3) Well, poor things, theyve forgotten the warmth of the sun on their little bodies, what it is to play in the sea, yes. . . . (4) Mrs. Pavloff reached for her protective sun goggles that covered most of her face. (5) It screened all ultraviolet light from the once life-giving sun; now, it, the sun, scorched the Earth, killing whatever it touched.

Alma Luz Villanueva, The Sand Castle

1. In sentence 1, what possessive pronoun is used as an adjective? their 2. In sentence 2, what adverb tells to what extent? almost 3. In sentence 3, what two adjectives help you better picture the children in the story? poor, little 4. In sentence 4, what noun is used as an adjective? sun 5. In the last sentence, name one adjective. all, ultraviolet, life-giving B. Choosing the Right Modifier Choose the correct words from those given in parentheses.
Clever Coyotes

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1. Coyotes dont have (no, any) problem with survival. 2. The coyote is (most adaptable, more adaptable) than many other animals in North America. 3. In the past, coyotes didnt live (nowhere, anywhere) but in the western part of North America and in Mexico. 4. Today, coyotes live (good, well) in many different places. 5. According to some wildlife experts, coyote populations are (more, most) widespread now than during the pioneer days. 6. First of all, coyotes hunt (real, really) efficiently. 7. If they cant find (no, any) mice, then theyll eat nearly anything, including bugs, fish, berries, watermelon, and garbage. 8. Also, their (deadlier, deadliest) enemy of all, the wolf, has vanished in many areas. 9. The coyote behaves (more cleverly, most cleverly) than people imagine. 10. Although coyotes in stories often act (bad, badly), real ones just fight to survive.
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Mastery Test: What Did You Learn?

For each underlined item, choose the letter of the term that correctly identifies it. Rachel Carson, a marine biologist, certainly influenced people to
(1)

protect the environment. In 1962 she published Silent Spring, a book about the harmful effects of pesticides. She agreed that these
(2) (4) (3)

chemicals killed insects and rodents. But they also badly poisoned our food and wildlife. Carsons book woke up ordinary people.
(5) (6) (7)

Even President John F. Kennedy became very anxious. He called for a government study of pesticide use. The pesticide DDT was
(8)

finally banned in 1972. Silent Spring helped make the world safer. An American Supreme Court judge said that the book was the
(9)

most important chronicle of this century for the human race.

(10)

ADJ. & ADV.

1. A. adverb modifying influenced B. adverb modifying biologist C. adverb modifying Carson D. adverb modifying people 2. A. adjective telling what kind B. adjective telling which one C. adjective telling how many D. adjective telling how much 3. A. adverb B. possessive pronoun C. pronoun used as adjective D. noun used as adjective 4. A. adverb modifying poisoned B. adverb modifying food C. adverb modifying also D. adverb modifying killed 5. A. demonstrative pronoun B. possessive pronoun C. possessive noun D. noun used as adjective

6. A. adjective modifying book B. adjective modifying people C. adverb modifying woke D. predicate adjective 7. A. proper adjective B. adverb C. predicate adjective D. article 8. A. proper adjective B. adverb C. noun used as adjective D. article 9. A. proper adjective B. comparative adverb C. predicate adjective D. article 10. A. comparative adverb B. superlative adverb C. comparative adjective D. superlative adjective

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Adjectives modify nouns and pronouns.

The wildlife walk was terrific. It was long, too.

Adverbs modify verbs, adjectives, and other adverbs.

The usually quiet tour guide chattered very excitedly.

Modifiers in Comparisons
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Lens

steep leafy valuable rugged bravely good bad

steeper leafier more valuable more rugged more bravely better worse

Double Forms
Double Negative Examples we cant hardly we dont never Double Comparison more better most likeliest Fix

Double Take
we can hardly we cant we never we dont ever Fix better most likely, likeliest

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Field Guide

Modifier Problems
Good and Well Thats a good book.
ADJECTIVE

Did you perform well?

ADVERB

I feel good about that.

PREDICATE ADJECTIVE

Does she look well?

PREDICATE ADJECTIVE

Real and Really Thats a real problem.

ADJECTIVE

Hes really tired.

ADJ. & ADV.
ADVERB

Bad and Badly What bad luck!

ADJECTIVE

I sing badly.
ADVERB

Do you feel bad?

PREDICATE ADJECTIVE

The Bottom Line

Checklist for Adjectives and Adverbs
Have I remembered to . . . use adjectives to add detail to my nouns? capitalize proper adjectives? use adverbs to describe actions clearly? use the correct comparative and superlative forms? avoid using adjectives as adverbs? avoid double negatives?

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Theme: Dragons

The Tale of a Dragon

Oh-Oh is right. The man in the photo might follow this interjection with a warning to his neighbors. Hell need plenty of prepositions to describe where the dragon is and some conjunctions to join his thoughts. In this chapter, you will learn how to use prepositions, conjunctions, and interjections. Lets hope you dont have to use them to warn your neighbors about any dragons. Write Away: If Dragons Could Talk If dragons could talk, this one might be saying, I want you in my belly! What might the man reply? Write a few sentences answering the dragons threat. Tell the dragon what you will do or where you will hide. Express your fear or your bravery! Save the response in your Working Portfolio.

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Choose the letter of the term that correctly identifies each underlined item. A dragon is a monster of legends. Most dragons have the claws of a lion and the tail of a serpent. Their character can be kind
(1) (3) (4) (6) (2) (5)

and generous or evil and greedy. In Western myths, a fierce firebreathing dragon is common, but Asian myths usually portray a kindly dragon. Chinese dragons have five toes on each claw.
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Dragons appear with different numbers of legs and with or without wings. According to legend, you cannot always tell when
(8)

you will meet a dragon. Yikes! Look behind you!

(9) (10)

1. A. conjunction B. preposition C. prepositional phrase D. interjection 2. A. preposition B. object of a preposition C. prepositional phrase D. conjunction 3. A. conjunction B. preposition C. prepositional phrase D. interjection 4. A. conjunction B. preposition C. object of a preposition D. interjection 5. A. conjunction B. preposition C. prepositional phrase D. interjection

6. A. conjunction B. preposition C. object of a preposition D. interjection 7. A. conjunction B. object of a preposition C. prepositional phrase D. interjection 8. A. conjunction B. preposition C. prepositional phrase D. object of a preposition 9. A. conjunction B. preposition C. prepositional phrase D. interjection 10. A. conjunction B. preposition C. prepositional phrase D. interjection

PREPOSITIONS

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1 Heres the Idea

A preposition is a word that shows a relationship between a noun or pronoun and some other word in the sentence. The knight on the dragon called for help.
PREPOSITION

Here, the preposition on shows the relationship between knight and dragon. In the sentences below, notice how each preposition expresses a different relationship between the knight and the dragon.

The knight is under the dragon.

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The knight is above the dragon. The knight is beside the dragon. The knight is in the dragon.

Common Prepositions
about above across after against along among around as at before behind below beneath beside between beyond by despite down during except for from in inside into like near of off on out over past through to toward under until up with within without

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Prepositional Phrases
A prepositional phrase consists of a preposition, its object, and any modifiers of the object.
The object of the preposition is the noun or pronoun following the preposition.
PREPOSITIONAL PHRASE

A Chinese New Year dragon is a symbol of strength.

PREPOSITION OBJECT

People drape silk over a bamboo dragon.

PREPOSITION MODIFIER OBJECT

PREPOSITIONS

Fifty people walk under the enormous dragon.

Use between when the object of the preposition refers to two people or things. Use among when speaking of three or more.

The dragon weaved between two boys. The dragon weaved among the crowd.

Preposition or Adverb?
Sometimes the same word can be used as a preposition or as an adverb. If the word has no object, then it is an adverb.
PREPOSITIONAL PHRASE

The bamboo dragon toppled over a curb.

PREPOSITION OBJECT

The bamboo dragon toppled over.

ADVERB

For more on adverbs, see p. 130.

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2 Why It Matters in Writing

Writers often use prepositions to describe where characters and objects are located in relation to one another. Notice how the prepositions in this dialogue tell the location of the character, the doorstep, and the entrance.

Bilbo (holding script off and reading it). . . . I am now sitting on the very doorstep of the secret entrance to the dragons cave.

J. R. R. Tolkien, The Hobbit, dramatized by Patricia Gray

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A. CONCEPT CHECK: What Is a Preposition? Write the preposition and its object for each sentence. 1. Dragons from different cultures have their own characteristics. 2. The Eastern female dragon holds a fan with her tail. Dragon Tales

3. The Chinese show most dragons without wings. 4. Swallows are among the Chinese dragons favorite foods. 5. In Chinese mythology, nine dragons keep the Kowloon waters safe from harm. 6. Japanese dragons have three toes on each claw. 7. Western dragons are usually associated with evil. 8. Many tales pit brave knights against fierce dragons. 9. Two batlike wings lift the dragon above its victim. 10. Some breeds of Western dragons can change their shapes.
For a SELF-CHECK and more practice, see the EXERCISE BANK, p. 284.

B. WRITING: Using Prepositions Think back to the response you wrote to the dragon in your Write Away on page 146. Write the dragons answer to your response using five prepositions from the following list: at, behind, below, by, for, in, into, off, on, out, to, up, with, without
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1 Heres the Idea

A prepositional phrase is always related to another word in a sentence. It modifies the word in the same way an adjective or adverb would.

Adjective Phrases
An adjective phrase is a prepositional phrase that modifies a noun or a pronoun. Like an adjective, a
prepositional phrase can tell which one, how many, or what kind.
WHICH ONE?

The dragon in the water is really a lizard.

NOUN ADJECTIVE PHRASE
WHAT KIND?

PREPOSITIONS

The Komodo dragon is a type of monitor lizard.

Adverb Phrases
An adverb phrase is a prepositional phrase that modifies a verb, an adjective, or an adverb. Like an
adverb, a prepositional phrase can tell where, when, how, why, or to what extent.
WHERE?

Desert lizards lie under the sand.

VERB ADVERB PHRASE
HOW?

Their body temperatures are lower without sunlight.

ADJECTIVE
HOW?

This cooling method works well for a simple system.

ADVERB

Several prepositional phrases can work together. Each phrase after the first often modifies the object of the phrase before it.

A flying dragon glides with flaps of skin like wings.

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Placement of Prepositional Phrases

When you write, try to place each prepositional phrase as close as possible to the word it modifies. Otherwise, you may confuseor unintentionally amuseyour readers.

CONFUSING With fiery breath, we surprised a dragon.

(Who has fiery breath?)

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CLEAR We surprised a dragon with fiery breath.

(Now the reader knows who has fiery breath.)

2 Why It Matters in Writing

When you write about science, you can use prepositional phrases to describe which one and what kind. Notice how the prepositional phrases in the model describe what kind of lizard.

The Komodo dragon is a lizard of the species Varanus komodoensis. It is a prehistoric relic from an earlier era.

What kind of lizard What kind of relic

Rudy J. Goldstein

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3 Practice and Apply

A. CONCEPT CHECK: Using Prepositional Phrases Write the prepositional phrase and the word it modifies for each of the following sentences. 1. The Komodo dragon is the largest lizard in the world. 2. Komodos live on a few Indonesian islands. The Largest Lizard

3. The Komodos yellow forked tongue, over a foot long, can taste the air. 4. Its saliva has bacteria with no known antidotes. 5. The Komodos teeth are dangerous to everyone. 6. The Komodos teeth can shred a large animal in 20 minutes. 7. The Komodo can run 1212 miles an hour, fast for its 300pound weight. 8. The residents of Komodo Island call this creature the ora. 9. Villagers tell tall tales about the ora. 10. The ora does not interest poachers around the island.
For a SELF-CHECK and more practice, see the EXERCISE BANK, p. 284.

PREPOSITIONS

B. PROOFREADING: What Kind? or Which One? Choose the prepositional phrase that most likely belongs in the numbered blank in the paragraph below. a. from an earlier era b. with picture maps c. about huge lizards Touring Komodo Island d (1) We took a tour of Komodo Island _______. On the island, (2) b we found a tour guide _______. The guide told us a story c (3) _______ that live on Komodo Island. The Komodo dragons a (4) look like lizards ______. They are dangerous predators e (5) _______. d. in Indonesia e. with iron jaws

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1 Heres the Idea

A conjunction is a word used to join words or groups of words.

Joining Words and Groups of Words

Conjunctions often join words used in the same way. The words joined by a conjunction can be subjects, predicates, or any other kind of sentence parts.
SUBJECTS

Alligators and crocodiles live mainly in the water.

CONJUNCTION OBJECTS

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Crocodiles live in salt water or fresh water.

CONJUNCTION

Common Conjunctions and but or nor

Use and to connect similar ideas. Use but to contrast ideas.

Crocodiles have a long jaw and sharp teeth.

(And connects two parts of a crocodiles mouth.)

A young crocodile is small but powerful.

(But contrasts this crocodiles small size with its great power.)

Use or and nor to show choices.

Some crocodiles can live in salt water or fresh water.

(Or connects the choices salt water and fresh water.)

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Joining Whole Thoughts

Conjunctions also can join whole thoughts, such as two sentences that are closely related.

Crocodiles are aggressive. Alligators are passive. Crocodiles are aggressive, and alligators are passive.
CONJUNCTION

(And joins two sentences about personality.)

The crocodiles snout is narrow. It has biting power. The crocodiles snout is narrow, but it has biting power.
CONJUNCTION

Use a comma before the conjunction when joining two complete sentences. Do not use a comma when joining two subjects or two verbs.

CONJUNCTIONS

Alligators can live in 65-degrees-Fahrenheit water, but crocodiles drown at that temperature. In 65-degrees-Fahrenheit water, crocodiles sink and drown.

2 Why It Matters in Writing

When you are writing science material, the right conjunctions can help the reader know how features and habits relate to each other. Notice how the conjunctions in the model show the relationship between the newborn crocodile and its mother.

Newborn crocodiles float in water with their eyes and snouts above the surface. They swim alone, but their mother is always nearby.The young crocodiles must stay warm, or they will die.

And connects two similar features. But joins two whole thoughts that contrast. Or joins two whole thoughts that contrast.

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3 Practice and Apply

A. CONCEPT CHECK: Conjunctions Write the conjunction in each sentence, along with the words or groups of words that it joins. 1. There are many ways to tell whether an animal is a crocodile or an alligator. 2. A crocodiles snout is pointy, and Crocodiles and Alligators

an alligators snout is broad. 3. Both the upper and lower teeth show on the crocodile. 4. Crocodiles often lose their teeth, but they grow new ones. 5. Large crocodiles eat antelope and deer. 6. Cold weather may cause deformity or death to baby crocodiles. 7. The snout usually shows differences, but the Indian Mugger crocodile looks much like an alligator. 8. Alligators do not have an enlarged fourth tooth, nor do they need it. 9. Most crocodiles hunt at night, but hungry ones hunt any time. 10. Never go near an alligator, or you may be badly injured.
For a SELF-CHECK and more practice, see the EXERCISE BANK, p. 285.

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B. REVISING: Changing Conjunctions Rewrite the conjunctions so that the following paragraph makes sense. Answers may vary. Crocodile Meals (1) Newly hatched crocodiles feed on bugs like 1. and grasshoppers but beetles. (2) Some adult crocs eat 2. and 3. but mammals like deer but cattle. (3) Crocodile teeth are good 4. and for holding prey, or they are not so good at cutting it. (4) A good hunter, the crocodile blends into the background but stays completely still. (5) Suddenly, it pounces but 5. and surprises its prey.

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1 Heres the Idea

An interjection is a word or a phrase used to express emotion.
Wow, theres a monitor lizard. Its so big! Awesome!
It can stand alone or be set off by a comma.

2 Why It Matters in Writing

Writers often use interjections to express strong emotions, such as anger, joy, concern, surprise, terror, and disgust. Read the cartoon. What emotion is the poor, misguided worm expressing?

INTERJECTIONS

3 Practice and Apply

Working Portfolio: Find your Write Away from page 146 or a sample of your most recent work. Add to your writing three interjections that express emotions. Use the interjections in the Student Help Desk on page 163 for ideas.
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Using Prepositions to Show Location

When you write about specific places for social studies, you can use prepositions along with maps to indicate direction and location. Study the map below. Then read the accompanying description of some of the famous places in San Franciscos Chinatown. Notice how prepositions and prepositional phrases help you picture what the area looks like and where different sites are located.

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The entrance to Chinatown is guarded by a fabulous dragon in the Chinatown Gateway. As you enter from Bush Street, youll walk under the dragons coiled body and beautiful, decorated head. From the gateway, you stroll down Grant Street past the shops, restaurants, and gift stores on both sides of the street.

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Practice and Apply

A. USING PREPOSITIONS Answers in column.

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Study this map of todays Chinatown. Then write answers to the questions that follow, using prepositions and prepositional phrases in each of your sentences.
TO STREET SACRAMEN

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STREET

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PORTSMOUTH GRANT ST. SQUARE

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ST. MARY'S SQUARE

ST RE ET

CHINESE CULTURAL CENTER

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PREPOSITIONS

ST. STOCKTON

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1. What route would you walk to go from the Chinatown Gateway to St. Marys Square? 2. How would you get from St. Marys Square to the Tien Hou Temple? 3. What is the best way to get from the Chinese Cultural Center to the Chinatown Gateway? B. DRAWING A MAP Answers in column. Draw a map of a park, a playground, or a gymnasium in your community or school. Then write a brief description, similar to the one on page 158, to accompany your map. Circle the prepositions that you use to explain the location of different landmarks. Finally, share your work with classmates.

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Mixed Review
A. Prepositions, Conjunctions, Interjections Choose the correct word in parentheses to complete each sentence. Then identify the word as a preposition, a conjunction, or an interjection.
Famous Dragons 1. Dragons are famous (under, around) the world. Prep. 2. The Eastern Spiritual DragonShen-Lungcontrols the wind

(but, and) the rain. Conj.

3. The Chinese Yellow Dragon gave the knowledge of writing (to,

from) Emperor Fu Hsi. Prep.

4. People fear (but, or) respect European dragons. Conj. 5. The Vikings put dragon figureheads (to, on) their ships. Prep. 6. They believed the dragons would give them keen sight (and, or) 7. 8.
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9. 10.

skill. Conj. Beowulf confronted a dragon in the epic poem Beowulf. (Wow! Out!) Intj. The dragon has become an official part (by, of) the prince of Waless armor. Prep. Sea serpents are dragons (except, from) the seas. Prep. Nessie, the Loch Ness Monster, is a sea serpent, (or, but) she lives in a lake in Scotland. Conj.

B. Prepositional Phrases Read the passage and answer the questions below it. Answers in column.
A Komodo Ritual (1) Dominant male Komodo dragons often compete for a female. (2) This ritual between two male Komodo dragons is typical. (3) The dragons wrestle in upright postures. (4) They use their tails for support. (5) They grab each other with their forelegs. (6) The loser of the battle may lie on the ground or run

away.
1. 2. 3. 4. 5. 6. 7. 8. 9. 10.

What is the prepositional phrase in sentence 1? What is the prepositional phrase in sentence 2? Why is between used instead of among in sentence 2? What is the prepositional phrase in sentence 3? What is the object of the preposition in sentence 3? What is the prepositional phrase in sentence 4? What is the object of the preposition in sentence 4? What is the prepositional phrase in sentence 5? What is the object of the preposition in sentence 5? Which prepositional phrase shows location in sentence 6?

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Mastery Test: What Did You Learn?

Choose the letter of the term that correctly identifies each underlined item. Eastern dragons have one obvious detail that makes them different from one another. Some Chinese people believe that
(1)

stories about dragons began in China. They say the dragon has
(2) (3) (4)

always had five toes. A wanderer by nature, the dragon traveled the earth. Legend has it that the farther it wandered from China,
(5)

the more toes it lost. By the time it got to Korea, it had only four
(6)

toes, and after it reached Japan it had three. Oh-oh, will it

(7) (8)

eventually lose all its toes? According to the Japanese, the dragon began in Japan. Their story is the same but reversed. Their dragon
(9) (10)

grew toes as it traveled.

PREP. CONJ.

1. A. conjunction B. preposition C. prepositional phrase D. interjection 2. A. object of a preposition B. prepositional phrase C. preposition D. interjection 3. A. conjunction B. preposition C. prepositional phrase D. object of a preposition 4. A. conjunction B. preposition C. prepositional phrase D. interjection 5. A. conjunction B. preposition C. prepositional phrase D. object of a preposition

6. A. conjunction B. preposition C. prepositional phrase D. object of a preposition 7. A. conjunction B. preposition C. prepositional phrase D. interjection 8. A. conjunction B. object of a preposition C. prepositional phrase D. interjection 9. A. conjunction B. preposition C. prepositional phrase D. interjection 10. A. conjunction B. preposition C. object of a preposition D. interjection
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Wow! That lizard on the wall has sharp teeth and a long tongue. Interjections show emotion. Prepositions show relationships. Conjunctions connect.

Prepositions, Conjunctions, Interjections

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Summary

Preposition Examples Shows a relationship. Has an object.

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lizard on the wall

PREPOSITION OBJECT

Conjunction Joins words or groups of words. teeth and a tongue with sharp teeth and with a long tongue Joins whole thoughts. Lizards have sharp teeth, but not all lizards are dangerous. Interjection Expresses emotion. Eek! That lizard is huge!

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Prepositional Phrases
Adjective Phrases Modify a noun or a pronoun. Tell which one Tell what kind Adverb Phrases

What Do They Do?

That little lizard on the wall is a member of the reptile family.

Modify a verb, an adjective, or another adverb. Tell when Tell where Tell why Tell how or to what extent In April my little brother bought an iguana at a store. I was happy for my brother. This pet works perfectly for his age.

PREP. CONJ.

Interjections!
To express concern To express disgust To express joy To express surprise To draw attention to

Just a Few Ideas . . .

oh-oh, oh no, oops yuck, ick, gross awesome, hooray, yea wow, what, whoops hey

The Bottom Line

Checklist for Prepositions, Conjunctions, and Interjections
Have I . . . used prepositions to show relationships between two things? placed prepositional phrases close to the words they modify? used conjunctions to connect words or groups of words? used conjunctions to connect whole thoughts? used interjections to express strong emotion?

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Theme: Working Together

Whats the Plan?

Timing means everything in a flying trapeze act. The flier and catcher must work carefully together. A mistake may lead to an embarrassing fall or even serious injury. Agreement errors will not harm people, but they certainly can embarrass the writer. How would you correct the sentence on this photo? This chapter will help you learn to make subjects and verbs work together, or agree. Write Away: Winning Teams Think of some people you admire who need to work together to be successful. They can be a musical band, sports team, student organization, or some other group. Describe this group and explain what they are trying to do. Have they accomplished their goal? Save the writing in your Working Portfolio.

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Diagnostic Test: What Do You Know?

Choose the letter of the best revision for each underlined group of words. What is a team? Most of us immediately thinks of sports. Five
(1)

basketball players makes up one kind of team. Orchestras and

(2)

rock bands uses teamwork. At an accident scene are paramedics working as a team to save lives. A team are not just human
(5) (3) (4)

beings. Either animals or humans makes up a team. Animal teams find missing people or assist disabled ones. Many people works as
(7) (6)

a team to make a single movie. Doesnt teams all unite for a

(8)

common goal?

1. A. Most of us immediately think B. Most of us immediately is thinking C. Most of us will immediately thinks D. Correct as is 2. A. Five basketball players is making up one kind of team. B. Five basketball players make up one kind of team. C. Five basketball players has made up one kind of team. D. Correct as is 3. A. Orchestras and rock bands has to use B. Orchestras and rock bands use C. Orchestras and rock bands used D. Correct as is 4. A. At an accident scene is paramedics B. At an accident scene has been paramedics

C. At an accident scene was paramedics D. Correct as is 5. A. A team were not B. A team is not C. A team cannot D. Correct as is 6. A. Either animals or humans is making B. Either animals or humans does make C. Either animals or humans make D. Correct as is 7. A. Many people was working B. Many people has worked C. Many people work D. Correct as is 8. A. Doesnt teams all unites B. Dont teams all unite C. Dont teams all unites D. Correct as is

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1 Heres the Idea

A verb must agree with its subject in number.
Number refers to whether a word is singular or plural. When a word refers to one person, place, thing, idea, action, or condition, it is singular. When a word refers to more than one, it is plural.

Singular and Plural Subjects

Singular subjects take singular verbs.
AGREE

SINGULAR VERB

Teamwork is important in a jazz band.

SINGULAR SUBJECT

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Each musician listens to the others.

Plural subjects take plural verbs.

AGREE

The musicians play without sheet music.

PLURAL SUBJECT PLURAL VERB

They hear changes in each others sounds.

Most nouns that end in s or es are plural. For example, musicians and sounds are plural nouns. However, most verbs that end in s are singular. Listens and hears are both singular verb forms.

Verb Phrases
In a verb phrase, it is the first helping verb that agrees with the subject. A verb phrase is made up of a main verb
and one or more helping verbs.
AGREE

Miles Davis has led groups in performance.

SINGULAR VERB
AGREE

His music is becoming legendary.

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AGREE

All good groups have become teams.

PLURAL VERB
AGREE

Even the soloists are playing with a musical team.

Doesnt and Dont

Two contractions we often use are doesnt and dont. Use doesnt with all singular subjects except I and you. Use dont with all plural subjects and with the pronouns I and you.

S-V AGREEMENT

My mom doesnt like our band.

SINGULAR VERB:

does+not=doesnt

My friends dont understand why. PLURAL VERB: do+not=dont

I dont play alone often.

2 Why It Matters in Writing

Errors in subject-verb agreement can occur when you revise your work. If you change a subject from singular to plural, or vice versa, make sure that the verb agrees with your revision.

DRAFT

REVISION

Our band is always arguing. The guitar player wants to break up.

Our band is always arguing. The guitar players want to break up.

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3 Practice and Apply

A. CONCEPT CHECK: Agreement in Number For each sentence, write the verb form that agrees with the subject. 1. Rock critics (considers, consider) the Beatles one of the most important groups in rock and roll history. 2. Their musical development (shows, show) constant Meet the Beatles

growth and exploration. 3. In the late 1950s they (was, were) playing other peoples songs in clubs. 4. However, their own compositions (was, were) changing popular music. 5. Beatles songs (attracts, attract) listeners who like great melodies and clever lyrics. 6. By the mid-1960s they (was, were) performing to huge crowds in baseball stadiums. 7. Adults (remembers, remember) mobs of young fans screaming at Beatles concerts. 8. The Beatles (was, were) considered wild in their day. 9. Such popular groups (affects, affect) clothing and hair styles. 10. Today their music still (plays, play) around the world.
For a SELF-CHECK and more practice, see the EXERCISE BANK, p. 285.

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B. PROOFREADING: Finding Agreement Errors Proofread the following paragraph so that the verbs agree with the subjects. There are five errors.

dont belong plans form match have formed

Do you dislike order and discipline? Then you probably doesnt belong in a marching band.The band members must follow precise directions.A music director plan out every movement. Often the musicians forms words and patterns as they walk. Even their uniforms matches perfectly. Many schools has formed marching bands.The bands play at sporting events and other special occasions.

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1 Heres the Idea

A compound subject is made up of two or more subjects joined by a conjunction such as and, or, or nor.

Subjects Joined by And

A compound subject whose parts are joined by and usually takes a plural verb. A firefighter and a paramedic help save lives.

Subjects Joined by Or or Nor

When the parts of a compound subject are joined by or or nor, the verb should agree with the part closest to it.
REES AG

S-V AGREEMENT

A professional or volunteers serve on emergency teams.

REES AG

Volunteers or a professional serves on emergency teams.

2 Why It Matters in Writing

When you revise your writing, you may decide to change the order of compound subjects to make a sentence sound more natural. If the subjects are joined by or or nor, make sure that the verb agrees with the new order.

Traffic problems or bad weather interferes with rescue operations. Bad weather or traffic problems interfere with rescue operations.

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3 Practice and Apply

A. CONCEPT CHECK: Compound Subjects Identify the sentences containing mistakes in subject-verb agreement and rewrite the verb correctly. If a sentence contains no error, write Correct. 1. Volunteer men and women composes the Larimer County 2. 3. 4. 5. 6. Searching the Waters

Correct 7. CHAPTER 7

8. 9. 10.

Dive Rescue Team in Colorado. compose Rescue and critical care are their goal. Correct Desperate calls and dispatches arrives at any hour. arrive Terrible storms and fog often confronts the team. confront Terrified victims or darkness frustrate their efforts. frustrates Ferocious whitewater or dangerous rapids slows them down. slow These brave men and women often risk their own lives. Donations and fund-raising events supports this important service. support Sometimes fatally injured victims or dead bodies is recovered from the rising waters. are recovered But these brave men and women has also saved many lives. have saved

For a SELF-CHECK and more practice, see the EXERCISE BANK, p. 286.

B. REVISING: Making Compound Subjects and Verbs Agree A member of the Dive Rescue Team wrote these notes quickly, based on a frantic distress call. Rewrite the sentences for your report, making sure the verbs agree with their compound subjects. You may want to reverse the order of some compound subjects to make a sentence sound more natural.

P.M. 15, 3:00 call, Oct. into the Distress has fallen or d a woman two kayaks an an ve fallen A m er. Either ha on Riv Brady and Big Thomps g. Susan cue. are missin g the res ayak sing one k oordinatin is mis inez is c pected. g Juan Mart og are ex are coordinatin orms or f y rainst pected Heav

is ex

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1 Heres the Idea

Many errors in subject-verb agreement occur when a prepositional phrase falls between the subject and verb.

The subject of a verb is never found in a prepositional phrase. Dont be fooled by words that come between the
subject and the verb. Mentally block out those words. Then decide whether the subject is singular or plural and match the verb to it.
AGREE

SINGULAR SUBJECT

SINGULAR VERB

A team from several countries was working on the Russian space station Mir.
PLURAL SUBJECT

S-V AGREEMENT

Members of the Russian and American space programs pose together aboard Mir.
PLURAL VERB

Heres How Choosing the Correct Verb

Astronauts from Russia (has, have) abandoned Mir.

1. Mentally block out a prepositional phrase. Astronauts from Russia (has, have) abandoned Mir. 2. Decide if the subject is singular or plural. Astronauts = plural subject 3. Choose the verb that agrees with it. (have = plural verb) Astronauts from Russia have abandoned Mir.

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2 Why It Matters in Writing

Writers use prepositional phrases to tell more about the subject. When you do the same, make sure your verb goes with the subject, not the object of the preposition.

The international missions aboard Mir were a grand experiment. One result of these missions was the mutual respect that grew between Russian and U.S. astronauts.

PLURAL SUBJECT, PLURAL VERB SINGULAR SUBJECT, SINGULAR VERB

Angel Morales

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3 Practice and Apply

CONCEPT CHECK: Phrases Between Subjects and Verbs Choose the correct verb for each sentence below. 1. The benefits from a space program (is, are) unpredictable. 2. Tension between the Soviet Union and the United States Teamwork in Space

(was, were) a major reason for Mirs construction. 3. However, the result of this experiment (is, are) greater cooperation among nations. 4. The abandonment of Mir (has, have) become necessary due to mechanical problems. 5. Scientists and engineers from many nations (is, are) building Mirs replacement. 6. Space buffs throughout the world eagerly (awaits, await) its completion. 7. Labs within space stations (provides, provide) great places for science experiments. 8. The astronauts aboard a space station (depends, depend) heavily on their support team back home. 9. A ground crew at the mission control center (oversees, oversee) every mission. 10. Together, government agencies and private companies (makes, make) space flight possible.

For a SELF-CHECK and more practice, see the EXERCISE BANK, p. 286.
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1 Heres the Idea

Some pronouns do not refer to a definite, or specific, person, place, thing, or idea. These pronouns are called indefinite pronouns.

When used as subjects, some indefinite pronouns are always singular. Some are always plural. Others can be singular or plural depending on how theyre used.
Indefinite Pronouns
Singular
another anything everybody neither nothing someone both all few any anybody each everyone nobody one something many most anyone either everything no one somebody

S-V AGREEMENT

Plural Singular or Plural

several none some

Singular indefinite pronouns take singular verbs.

Everyone knows about camels in desert caravans. Everything about them seems strange and exotic.
Plural indefinite pronouns take plural verbs.

Few of us realize their importance to desert people. Many rely on the camel for everyday living. Both of the camels in this photo are Bactrian camels.

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Singular or Plural?
The indefinite pronouns all, any, most, none, and some can be either singular or plural. When you use one of these words as a subject, think about the noun it refers to. If the noun is singular, use a singular verb. If it is plural, use a plural verb.
REFERS TO

All of the camels carry supplies for humans on their humps.

REFERS
TO

Some of the Mongolian desert still has wild Bactrian camels.

Sometimes an indefinite pronoun refers to a noun in a previous sentence.
PLURAL NOUN INDEFINITE PRONOUN

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The camels went eight days without water. All were healthy. PLURAL VERB

2 Why It Matters in Writing

When writing about people or animals, youll often need indefinite pronouns as subjects. Correct subject-verb agreement helps readers know whether youre talking about one individual or several.

Sled dogs pull sleds across snow and ice in northern regions. Many of the dogs are purebred, but some are mixed breeds, especially in Alaska. Each of the dogs has a heavy coat and can sleep outside in temperatures as low as 70 degrees Fahrenheit.

Lucy Armstrong

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3 Practice and Apply

A. CONCEPT CHECK: Indefinite Pronoun Subjects Rewrite correctly each sentence in which the verb does not agree with the subject. If a sentence is correct, write Correct. 1. Everyone have heard of seeing-eye dogs. 2. Few knows the term hearing dogs. know Guiding Lights

has heard

3. All of these dogs alerts their owners to sounds of danger. alert 4. Several of the dog breeds is especially suited for work with visually challenged people. are suited 5. Some of the best dogs includes German shepherds, Labrador retrievers, and golden retrievers. include 6. Most of the states guarantees access rights to guide-dog users. guarantee 7. No one in these states is allowed to keep people with dog guides from public places. Correct 8. Everyone recognizes a seeing-eye dog by its special harness and U-shaped handle. Correct 9. Many knows that hearing dogs have a bright yellow or orange collar and leash. know 10. Both of the canine helpers gives visually challenged and hearing-impaired people more independence. give
For a SELF-CHECK and more practice, see the EXERCISE BANK, p. 287.

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B. WRITING: Using Indefinite Pronouns Correctly For each sentence, choose the verb that agrees with the subject. 1. No one (seems, seem) neutral on the subject of dogs as pets. 2. Something about this topic (make, makes) people argue. 3. Many (praises, praise) dogs for their loyalty and obedience. 4. Few of the cat lovers (agrees, agree). 5. Some of them (thinks, think) dogs are just loud and stupid. 6. Somebody (accuses, accuse) a dog of having bad manners. 7. Others (blames, blame) the owner for bad training. 8. Some of the worst fights between neighbors (involves, involve) dogs. 9. Often neither of the sides (want, wants) to compromise. 10. Yet everybody (know, knows) pets are like family members.
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1 Heres the Idea

In some sentences, the subject comes after the verb or between parts of the verb phrase. For these sentences, you have to find the subject first to make the verb agree.

Sentences that Begin with a Prepositional Phrase

Writers sometimes start a sentence with a prepositional phrase. In some of these sentences, the verb comes after the subject.

From his left hand comes Als 90-mile-an-hour pitch.

SINGULAR VERB SINGULAR SUBJECT

Sentences that Begin with Here or There

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When a sentence begins with here or there, the subject often comes after the verb.

Here is a starting pitcher with a serious fastball.

SINGULAR VERB SINGULAR SUBJECT

There are several games on this field tonight.

PLURAL VERB PLURAL SUBJECT

Questions
In many questions, the subject follows the verb or comes between parts of the verb.

Does this goofball team ever win?

SINGULAR HELPING VERB PLURAL HELPING VERB SINGULAR SUBJECT

Do both boys play on the team?

PLURAL SUBJECT

Heres How Choosing the Correct Verb (Is, Are) the starting pitchers stronger than the relievers? 1. Turn the sentence around, putting the subject before the verb. The starting pitchers (is, are) stronger than the relievers. 2. Determine whether the subject is singular or plural. pitchers (plural) 3. Make sure the subject and verb agree. The starting pitchers are stronger than the relievers.
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2 Why It Matters in Writing

You can vary sentences by beginning with here or there or by beginning with a prepositional phrase. When you do so, make sure that the subjects and verbs agree.

Never in all my life have I seen such faith and friendship, such loyalty between men.There are many among you who call me harsh and cruel. But I cannot kill any man who proves such strong and true friendship for another.

Fan Kissen, Damon and Pythias

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3 Practice and Apply

CONCEPT CHECK: Subjects in Unusual Positions For each sentence below, first identify the subject and verb. If they agree, write Correct. If they dont agree, rewrite them.

Worlds Favorite Game 1. Does your friends like soccer? Do your friends like 2. There is no sport more popular in the world. Correct 3. In the past, wasnt Americans big soccer fans? werent Americans 4. Across this country is now thousands of youth soccer leagues. are thousands 5. Didnt 20 American soccer players win the Womens World Cup in 1999? Correct 6. There was 12 nations competing in the 32 World Cup matches. were nations 7. In front of their TV sets were one billion fans worldwide. Correct 8. The final American match with China were the U.S.s best-attended womens sports event. match was 9. Hasnt the women of Team USA become media favorites? havent women become 10. In addition to gymnasts and skaters, here is new heroines for teenaged girls. are heroines

For a SELF-CHECK and more practice, see the EXERCISE BANK, p. 288.
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Subject-Verb Agreement
When you write, its important to use correct subject-verb agreement. Like the members of the group of campers in the passage, subjects and verbs need to work together. When sentences are inverted, or when subjects and verbs are written as contractions, its sometimes harder to choose correct subject-verb agreement. Notice the examples of subject-verb agreement in the inverted sentences in the passage below.

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When we got off the bridge, we were in a small plaza.To the left was the roadway, full of roaring cars. In front of us, aside from the highway, there was nothing but buildings. Only to the right were there trees. North is that way, Max said, pointing toward the trees.We set off. How come youre limping? Horse asked me. My foot was killing me.All I said, though, was,How come you keep rubbing your arm? Im keeping the blood moving. We approached the grove of trees.Wow, Horse exclaimed.Country. . . . Hey, Max cried, sounding relieved,this is just like Brooklyn.
In this sentence, the subject is the plural noun trees. So the verb, were, is also plural. Contraction youre is short for you are. Contraction Im is short for I am. Both verbs agree with their subjects.

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A.REVISING: Using Correct Subject-Verb Agreement

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The following letter was written by a student during a camping trip with her scout troop. Because she dashed off the letter in a hurry, her subjects and verbs dont always agree. Rewrite her letter, correcting all errors in subject-verb agreement

Dear Folks, of the girls and I he What an experience! T rest s. You wouldnt even am having the time of our live , along with the others, recognize your daughter. She hen 0 A.M. T a team of get up with the sunabout 5:0 t activities to do that day. us meet and decides wha ack riding, and bird her T e is swimming, hiking, horseb watching to choose from. orrow. I love using Ceramics are scheduled for tom the potters wheel. r, so I may be home My three weeks is almost ove there. even before this message get Love, Deanna eral of my new friends P.S. Oops, I almost forgot. Sev spend the rest of the is planning to come home and summer with me.

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B. WRITING: Journal Write a journal entry describing an outdoor experience. Your experience can be real or imaginary. Write your journal entry as if the experience were in the present. Use correct subject-verb agreement. Save your writing in your Working Portfolio.

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Mixed Review
A. Agreement in Number Write the verb form that agrees with the subject of each sentence.
1. Emergency Medical Technician-Paramedics (treats, treat)

victims when a doctor isnt available.

2. All of the EMTs (is, are) trained medical workers. 3. Many (is, are) first at the scene of an accident or heart attack. 4. Drugs and medical equipment (is, are) carried in their special

ambulance.
5. As a first step, paramedics on the scene immediately

(contacts, contact) a doctor at a nearby hospital.

6. Any injuries or other important information (is, are) reported to

the doctor.
7. A defibrillator (helps, help) correct an irregular heartbeat. 8. Another of the EMTs instruments (reports, report) heart activity. 9. In serious cases, heart attack victims or injured people (is,

are) treated on the way to the hospital.

10. These brave men and women (has, have) saved many lives.
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B. Additional Agreement Problems Read this report of a movie studio tour. Correct seven errors in subject-verb agreement and write the corrected sentences.

Are teamwork involved in making a movie? Yes! Here is are some strange names for very important jobs.The lights and power distribution are set by the gaffer. Under the director of photography work the key grip. works He is the chief builder of the lighting equipment.There is are Lighting two assistants to the gaffer and Technician the key grip.Best boy electric and best boy grip is their are Camera titles.These titles doesnt always dont describe Operator describe the person. One of the best boys were about 50, and was the other was a woman!

Is . . . involved/

Director

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Mastery Test: What Did You Learn?

Choose the letter of the best revision for each underlined section. Search and rescue dogs is trained to find missing persons. There
(1)

are two different types of dogs. Some detects scent particles

(2) (3)

carried by wind from the missing persons location. Other dogs on a search team follow the trail of scent particles along the missing
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persons path. The dogs smell the victims clothing. A garment of

(5)

natural fibers are very helpful. Each of the dogs ignore all scents
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except for the missing persons. Air scent dogs and trailing dogs
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searches for victims in avalanches and in water. Doesnt dog and

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handler teams train for two years for this job?

1. A. Search and rescue dogs are trained B. Search and rescue dogs is being trained C. Search and rescue dogs was being trained D. Correct as is 2. A. There is two different types B. There was two different types C. There has been two different types D. Correct as is 3. A. Some detect scent particles B. Some has detected scent particles C. Some is detecting scent particles D. Correct as is 4. A. dogs on a search team follows B. dogs on a search team is following C. dogs on a search team is to follow D. Correct as is

5. A. A garment of natural fibers were B. A garment of natural fibers have been C. A garment of natural fibers is D. Correct as is 6. A. Each of the dogs ignores B. Each of the dogs was ignoring C. Each of the dogs are ignoring D. Correct as is 7. A. Air scent dogs and trailing dogs searching B. Air scent dogs and trailing dogs was searching C. Air scent dogs and trailing dogs search D. Correct as is 8. A. Doesnt dog and handler teams trains B. Dont dog and handler teams trained C. Dont dog and handler teams train D. Correct as is
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A singular subject takes a singular verb. Our team wins the contest.

A plural subject takes a plural verb. Many people share in the victory.

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Indefinite Pronouns
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Make the verb: Singular Everyone is nervous.

everyone, anyone, everything, one, somebody Always plural both, few, many, several Sometimes singular all, any, most, none, some Sometimes plural all, any, most, none, some

Plural Many come to play. Singular All of our preparation is over. Plural All of the players are ready.

Compound Subjects
If the compound subject is: Joined by and Make the verb: Plural

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The winners and losers shake hands. Joined by or or nor Match the closest subject Neither the winners nor the loser looks tired. Neither the loser nor the winners look tired.

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Tricky Sentences
Kind of Sentence Question Is the umpire ready? Sentence Beginning with Here or There Here comes the pitch! Sentence Beginning with Prepositional Phrase

Make Them get Along

Subject Verb

umpire

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pitch

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Out of the park flies the ball! Prepositional Phrase Between Subject and Verb The batter, in the fans eyes, looks mighty. Helping Verb Our players are winning. The runner is scoring!

ball

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batter

looks

players runner

are winning is scoring

The Bottom Line

Checklist for Subject-Verb Agreement
Have I . . . used a singular verb with a singular subject? used a plural verb with a plural subject? made the helping verb in a verb phrase agree with the subject? used a plural verb with compound subjects joined by and? made the verb agree with the closest part of a compound subject joined by or or nor? checked whether indefinite pronoun subjects are singular or plural? made verbs agree with subjects in unusual positions?

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Watch out for big bear! Find the cave at the base of the mountain and fish creek . Get the key from the cave entrance and follow fish creek downstream to shady road.

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Theme: Whats in a Name?

Follow That Bear!

These explorers carefully followed the directions, but they never found the meeting place. What happened? The person who wrote the directions didnt follow the rules of capitalization. The boys were on the lookout for a big bear instead of Big Bear Mountain. They thought they were supposed to go fishing in the creek instead of finding Fish Creek. They looked for a shady road instead of the road named Shady Road. Write Away: Can You Get There from Here? Write directions from where you are now to a particular place, such as your home. Include the names of landmarks, streets, and other places. Put your directions in your Working Portfolio.

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Diagnostic Test: What Do You Know?

For each numbered item, choose the letter of the correct revision. can you think of any weird place names? Imagine living in a
(1)

place called peculiar, missouri, or in other places like Diamond,

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Zif, or Zig. In the book Paris, Tightwad, and Peculiar: Missouri Place Names, margot ford mcMillen gives a history of place names
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in Missouri. The writer states that Tightwad, Missouri, was

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named after a merchant who cheated a mailman out of his watermelon. The book covers humorous origins and places that were named after the way they look, like flat river.
(5)

Another region with unusual place names is Newfoundland. How would you like to travel to bleak island, dead mans bay, or
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breakheart point? You can find these names in the book dictionary of Newfoundland english. If you are interested in place names, you
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can take a class to learn more about Creative Names worldwide.

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1. A. can You think B. Can You think C. Can you think D. Correct as is 2. A. peculiar, Missouri, B. Peculiar, Missouri, C. Peculiar, missouri, D. Correct as is 3. A. Margot ford McMillen B. Margot ford mcMillen C. Margot Ford McMillen D. Correct as is 4. A. tightwad, missouri, B. tightwad, Missouri, C. Tightwad, missouri, D. Correct as is 5. A. Flat river B. Flat River C. flat River D. Correct as is

6. A. Bleak island, Dead mans bay, or Breakheart point B. Bleak Island, Dead Mans bay, or Breakheart point C. Bleak Island, Dead Mans Bay, or Breakheart Point D. Correct as is 7. A. Dictionary Of Newfoundland English B. Dictionary of Newfoundland English C. Dictionary of Newfoundland english D. Correct as is 8. A. Creative Names Worldwide B. creative Names worldwide C. creative names worldwide D. Correct as is

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1 Heres the Idea

Names and Initials

Capitalize peoples names and initials.
Sandra Cisneros Oprah Winfrey John F. Kennedy Natsume Soseki

Personal Titles and Abbreviations

Capitalize titles and abbreviations of titles that are used before names or in direct address.
Senator John Bullworth
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Professor Henry Higgins Rev. James L. Nash

Capt. Kathryn Janeway

Is my kitten going to be okay, Doctor? Capitalize the abbreviations of some titles when they follow a name. Jamie Crawford, M.D. Angela Martinez, D.D.S. Fred Jones, Sr. George Collins, Ph.D.

Capitalize titles of heads of state, royalty, or nobility only when they are used before persons names or in place of persons names.
Surgeon General David Satcher Justice Sandra Day OConnor Queen Elizabeth Czar Ivan IV was also known as Ivan the Terrible. Do not capitalize titles when they are used without a proper name. The duchess officially opened the ceremonies.

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Family Relationships
Capitalize words indicating family relationships only when they are used as names or before names.
Aunt Laura Cousin David Uncle Al Mom helped Aunt Sally choose the name for the new baby. In general, do not capitalize a family relationship word when it follows the persons name or is used without a proper name. I dreamed my uncle was King Arthur.

The Pronoun I
Always capitalize the pronoun I.
Mother said that I was named after Uncle Henry.
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Religious Terms
Capitalize the names of religions, sacred days, sacred writings, and deities.
Religious Terms
Religions Sacred days Sacred writings Deities
Judaism, Christianity, Islam Rosh Hashanah, Good Friday Torah, Bible, Koran God, Yahweh, Allah

Do not capitalize the words god and goddess when they refer to gods of ancient mythology. The word volcano comes from the name of the Roman god of fire, Vulcan.

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Nationalities, Languages, and Races

Capitalize the names of nationalities, languages, races, and most ethnic groups, and the adjectives formed from these names.
German European Spanish Asian American Korean Jewish

2 Practice and Apply

CONCEPT CHECK: People and Cultures Write the words and abbreviations that should be capitalized but are not in the paragraph below. Capitalize each correctly. If a sentence has no errors, write the word correct. Middle Names (1) Not long ago, i found a book of baby names in the attic that tells about how middle names originated. (2) It was written by jonathan p. algernon, jr. (3) Mom said it was Correct the book she and Dad used to pick my name. (4) The book says that the spanish began using middle names about 1000 A.D. (5) Even though the early americans did not give their children middle names, by the mid-1800s german immigrants to the United States had made the practice popular. (6) president john quincy adams was the first president to use a middle name. (7) The most unusual Correct middle name was chosen by a 13-year-old girl in 1965 who admired the folk song Dont Ya Weep, Dont Ya Mourn. (8) Her namemary dontyaweepdontyamourn schulz.
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For a SELF-CHECK and more practice, see the EXERCISE BANK, p. 288.

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1 Heres the Idea

Sentences and Poetry

Capitalize the first word of every sentence.
My pen pal from Japan is named Suzu, which means little bell.

In traditional poetry capitalize the first word of every line.

All that is gold does not glitter, Not all those who wander are lost; The old that is strong does not wither, Deep roots are not reached by the frost.
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J. R. R. Tolkien, All That Is Gold

Modern poets may choose not to begin each line of a poem with a capital letter. If you make this choice in your own writing, make sure the meaning of your work is still clear.

Quotations
Capitalize the first word of a direct quotation if it is a complete sentence.
Shakespeare was the first to write, Whats in a name?

In a divided quotation, do not capitalize the first word of the second part unless it starts a new sentence.

William Shakespeare

I have a name for my new kitten, said Sarah. Its going to be Kitty! Maybe you should think of another name, Mom said, since that was the name of your last two cats.

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Outlines
Capitalize the first word of each entry in an outline and the letters that introduce major subsections.
I. Types of felines A. Domesticated cats 1. Persian 2. Tabby

Parts of a Letter
Capitalize the first word in the greeting and in the closing of a letter.
Dear Mr. Macavity: Dear Sir: Sincerely yours,
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Titles
Capitalize the first word, last word, and all important words in a title. Dont capitalize articles, conjunctions, or prepositions of fewer than five letters.
Type of Media
Books Plays and musicals Short stories Poems Magazines and newspapers Musical compositions Movies Television shows Works of art Games

Examples
Dogsong, Island of the Blue Dolphins Annie, The Sound of Music Eleven, Aarons Gift Ode to My Library, Where the Sidewalk Ends Highlights, TV Guide, The Washington Post The Star Spangled Banner Tarzan, Prince of Egypt Seventh Heaven, Touched by an Angel Mona Lisa, Sunflowers Space Genius, Name Game, Myths and Legends

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2 Practice and Apply

CONCEPT CHECK: First Words and Titles Write the words that should be capitalized but are not in these sentences. Capitalize each correctly. Popular Names 1. for centuries, one of the most common boys names throughout the world has been John. 2. The name John can be found in many nursery rhymes, such as the following: deedle deedle dumpling, my son John went to bed with his stockings on. John F. Kennedy 3. One form of the name Johnny is in the title of a famous early rock n roll song by Chuck Berry, Johnny b. goode. 4. The name John Henry might ring a bell, if youve read the legend, where he says, before I let that steam drill beat me down, Ill die with my hammer in my hand. 5. The singer and composer John Lennon is often remembered for his song imagine. Jane Goodall 6. John F. Kennedys famous words, and so, my fellow Americans: ask not what your country can do for you; ask what you can do for your country, will endure for generations to come. 7. jane is the feminine form of John, and a famous woman with that name is Dr. Jane Goodall. 8. Another example of a famous Jane is the novelist Jane Austen, who wrote Emma, Sense and sensibility, and persuasion. 9. Jane Fonda, who starred in Coming home, has won two Oscars. 10. John and Jane can be found in a wide variety of forms in different countries and languages, as the following partial outline suggests: I. in France A. feminine 1. Jeanne or Jeanette

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For a SELF-CHECK and more practice, see the EXERCISE BANK, p. 289.

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Mixed Review
A. Capitalization in Outlining Rewrite the following portion of an outline, correcting the capitalization errors. I. History of Names A. peoples names 1. first names 2. middle names 3. last names B. geographical names 1. Land Names 2. River and Mountain Names 3. unusual names B. Proofreading: Parts of a Letter Identify and correct the ten capitalization errors in the following letter.

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Mr. John Little 510 N. Addison St. Chicago, IL 60602 Dear mr. little, I am writing about the puppy-naming contest that you advertised in the Chicago tribune. Your ad asked for the most creative names we could think of. I personally like Amadeus, after Wolfgang Amadeus Mozart, who composed the marriage of Figaro. Now, if you have a female pup, you might want to consider Greek mythology names like Calliope or Calypso, who entertained the Greek hero Odysseus in the long poem The odyssey. I recently read in an essay entitled All about Pet names that a person should consider the size, breed, and gender of the dog when choosing a name.You wouldnt want to name your male pit bull Muffy unless you have a very strong reason. Other names you might want to consider are Falstaff, Hercules, Lady,Venus, or Pluto. Sincerely yours, jemma roberts

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1 Heres the Idea

Geographical Names
In geographical names, capitalize each word except articles and prepositions.
Geographical Names
Divisions of the world Continents Bodies of water Islands Mountains Other landforms Regions Nations States Cities and towns Roads and streets
Southern Hemisphere, International Date Line Antarctica, Europe, South America Indian Ocean, Mississippi River, Lake Michigan Guam, Prince Edward Island, Easter Island Appalachian Mountains, Himalayas, Adirondacks Strait of Magellan, Sahara, Cape of Good Hope Central America, Eurasia, Great Plains Spain, Mexico, England New York, Illinois, Florida Dallas, Springfield, Sacramento Route 66, Wall Street, Fifth Avenue
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Bodies of the Universe

Capitalize the names of planets and other specific objects in the universe.
Mercury Andromeda Tycho Brahes Comet Big Dipper Ganymede

Saturn, Jupiter, and Mars were each named after mythical characters. The planet closest to the sun is Mercury.

Regions and Sections

Capitalize the words north, south, east, and west when they name particular regions of the United States or the world or when they are parts of proper names.
Some states in the Southeast, such as Virginia, Maryland, and North and South Carolina, were named after British royalty. Do not capitalize these words when they indicate general directions or locations. The state of Illinois is west of Indiana and south of Wisconsin.

Buildings, Bridges, and Other Landmarks

Capitalize the names of specific buildings, bridges, monuments, and other landmarks.
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Empire State Building Brooklyn Bridge

Washington Monument Mount Rushmore

The national monument in New Mexico known as the Gila Cliff Dwellings is the site of Pueblo Indian dwellings.

Planes, Trains, and Other Vehicles

Capitalize the names of specific airplanes, trains, ships, cars, and spacecraft.
Names
Airplanes Trains Ships Cars Spacecraft

Examples
Enola Gay, Spruce Goose City of New Orleans, Cannonball Express USS Missouri, Titanic, HMS Bounty Volkswagen, Camaro, Jaguar Discovery, Endeavor, Soyuz

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2 Practice and Apply

A. CONCEPT CHECK: Places and Transportation For each sentence, write the words that should be capitalized. Do not write words that are already capitalized. Naming the Land 1. In the early 1700s, French explorers began to colonize parts of what is now the south. 2. Near the gulf of mexico, the French founded a fort in an area settled by a Native American group called the Maubilian. 3. The French translated that name to mobile. 4. Around a nearby river, the French encountered the Alibamons (for whom the state of alabama is named). 5. Two centuries later, paddle wheel boats with names like the delta queen would travel the mississippi river, but in the 1700s French explorers made their way upriver in canoes. 6. Near the great plains, the French encountered a river called ni (river) bthaska (something flat and spread out). 7. The French called it the rivire platte. 8. Ni bthaska became the name of the state nebraska. 9. The French marveled at the beauty of the milky way. 10. Today, visitors can appreciate the breathtaking beauty of the land as they drive along interstate 80.

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For a SELF-CHECK and more practice, see the EXERCISE BANK, p. 290.
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Glacier national park Fort Benton
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Organizations and Institutions

Capitalize all important words in the names of organizations, institutions, stores, and companies.
Summerville Middle School Boston Public Library Sarahs Beauty Shop League of Nations Oxford University National Honor Society

Do not capitalize words such as school, company, church, college, and hospital when they are not used as parts of names. We moved near the hospital.
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Historical Events, Periods, and Documents

Capitalize the names of historical events, periods, and documents.
Historical Events, Periods, and Documents
Events Periods Documents
Harlem Renaissance, Revolutionary War Space Age, Age of Exploration Magna Carta, Constitution of the United States

The Declaration of Independence was adopted more than a year after the Revolutionary War began.

Time Abbreviations and Calendar Items

Capitalize the abbreviations B.C., A.D., A.M., and P.M.
The ancient Egyptians developed historys first national government about 3000 B.C.

Capitalize the names of months, days, and holidays but not the seasons.
October Labor Day fall spring St. Valentines Day Monday
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The Thanksgiving holiday takes place every fall on the fourth Thursday of November.

Special Events, Awards, and Brand Names

Capitalize the names of special events and awards.
the World Series the Stanley Cup the Country Music Awards the Caldecott Medal

What runner will win the Boston Marathon this year?

Capitalize the brand name of a product but not a common noun that follows a brand name.
Sun Safe sunscreen Munchies potato chips

2 Practice and Apply

CONCEPT CHECK: Organizations and Other Subjects Identify and correct the words that should be capitalized in the following flyer.

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Annual roller hockey Tournament

Where: Springdale middle school When: saturday, October 17, through saturday, october 31. Games begin promptly at 7:00 p.m. each thursday, friday, and saturday of the tournament. The final game will be held on halloween. Come in costume and cheer for your favorite team! Prizes: Third-place winners receive a case of zap cola and a $10 gift certificate to Jimmys athletic warehouse. Secondplace winners will get a gift certificate for a pair of air lite tennis shoes. Grand Prize: First-place winners receive $500 and a team trophy, the Springdale silver puck.

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Capitalization in Tables and Bar Graphs

When you write about statistics for math, you want to make sure your numbers are correct. But what about capitalization? You must pay attention to capitalization too; otherwise, people wont trust your numbers. Notice how proper names and important words are capitalized in the table and graph below. Most Popular Dog Names
Name
Max Sam Lady Rocky
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28 15 13 9 6 4

Capitalize all important words in titles

Capitalize proper names

Lucky Missy

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A. CONCEPT CHECK: Capitalization in Graphs and Tables

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A student did some research into popular girls names in the 1890s and quickly jotted down information. Correct the capitalization in the table. Use the following information to create your own bar graph like the one shown on the opposite page. Dont forget to include a title. Use equal-sized scale numbers that increase in steps of 10 (for example, 10, 20, 30, . . . and so on).

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the 1890s Most popular Names in

Girls Names
Mary anna Elizabeth emma Margaret rose

Number
59 55 46 38 32 20
60 50 40 30 20 10 0 Mary

B. WRITING: Summarizing Information Once you have created a bar graph, summarize the information in a short paragraph. Remember, when you summarize information, you explain the most important points. Be sure to check your capitalization. Save your paragraph in your Working Portfolio.

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Mixed Review
A. Proofreading: Capitalization Identify and correct the capitalization errors in the following paragraph.
Imagine having to carry the name Minny vann the rest of your life because uncle Ed or grandma Vann thought it was cute! I admit that Ive heard worse, though: Constance Noring, Jim Shortz, and Frank n. Stine, for example. Why do people inflict silly and embarrassing names on their children? My cousins mother and father, whose last name is Tyme, named my cousin Justin because he was born at 11:59 p.m. on new years eve. Not all silly names are intentional. When a man named E. Speeking entered the united states army and eventually reached the rank of general, he became general e. Speeking. When Claude Payne reached the rank of major, he became major Payne.

B. Editing and Proofreading Rewrite the business letter below using capitalization rules from this chapter.
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U.S. Dept. of interior National Park interior U.S. Dept. of service 1849 c street service National Park Washington, D.C. 20240 1849 c street Washington, D.C. 20240 Dear sir: Dear sir: I am a student at marietta junior high school in monroe, nebraska, and a member of mr. eric johnsons class Socialmonroe, I. A class I am a student at marietta junior high school in Studies assignment is to member of to visit some national monuments and nebraska, and a plan a trip mr. eric johnsons class Social parks. We will be assignment is to plan a will travel some Studies I. A class traveling by tour bus and trip to visitwest on interstate 80. We would parks. We will on parks in Colorado national monuments andlike information be traveling by tour and Wyoming, especially yellowstone national park and parks in the bus and will travel west on interstate 80. We would like Teton mountains. We in Colorado and Wyoming, especially or information on parks will probably make the trip in late may early june ofnational park and parks in the Teton mountains. yellowstone next year. We will probably make the trip in late may or early june of Please send us brochures about places that we might visit. Also, next year. please send us any other suggestions you may have about our tour of the west. us brochures about places that we might visit. Please send Also, please send us any other suggestions you may have sincerely, about our tour of the west. amanda brady sincerely, amanda brady

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Mastery Test: What Did You Learn?

For each numbered item, choose the letter of the correct revision. Sometime around 4000 b.c. and 3500 B.C., poets, astronomers,
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and farmers began to create mythological names for constellations. The names of constellations varied, however, from babylonia, to Egypt, to Greece. Most people are familiar with the greek and
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roman names of stars after myths, heroes, or Gods. Take

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orion, the hunter, for example. The story reminds people of a

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great hunter holding his shield. In some cases, constellations were named after a figure in the sky. For example, a bear has been associated with the constellation Ursa Major since the ice age. In
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1930, the International astronomical Union set official boundaries

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that defined the 88 constellations that exist today.

1. A. 4000 b.c. and 3500 b.c. B. 4000 B.c. and 3500 B.c. C. 4000 B.C. and 3500 B.C. D. Correct as is 2. A. babylonia, to egypt, to Greece B. Babylonia, to Egypt, to Greece C. babylonia, to egypt, to greece D. Correct as is 3. A. Greek and roman B. greek and Roman C. Greek and Roman D. Correct as is 4. A. myths, heroes, or gods B. Myths, Heroes, or Gods C. Myths, Heroes, or gods D. Correct as is

5. A. Orion, The Hunter B. orion, the Hunter C. Orion, the Hunter D. Correct as is 6. A. ursa major B. Ursa major C. ursa Major D. Correct as is 7. A. since the Ice age B. since the Ice Age C. Since the Ice Age D. Correct as is 8. A. international astronomical Union B. International Astronomical union C. International Astronomical Union D. Correct as is

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common noun first word of a sentence

proper name

Our teacher , Mr. Owens , volunteers at Childrens Memorial Hospital on Saturdays .

proper noun day of the week

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Do Capitalize

Upper Case Ursula

Technique Examples Proper nouns that name people, places, and things: Traditionally in Mexico a firstborn daughter is named Maria. Family words used as a name or part of a name: Billy is Uncle Williams nickname. The first word of a sentence: Do you know the origin of your name? The first word in every line of traditional poetry: The winter owl banked just in time to pass And save herself from breaking window glass. Robert Frost, Questioning Faces The first word, last word, and all important words in titles: Across Five Aprils Proper nouns that name a particular date, holiday, event, or award: On March 17, St. Patricks Day, people by the name of Pat, Patrick, or Patricia can celebrate their saints name.

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Dont Capitalize

Lower Case Larry

Words after the first word of a closing of a letter: Sincerely yours, Yours truly, Family words used as ordinary nouns: I was named after my mom. Calendar items if they name a season: My name is Summer, but my favorite season is fall. The common nouns that stand for people, places, or things: My cousin enjoys riding her bike to school because she can stop at the store for some snacks. Compass direction when indicating a general location: I like to watch flocks of geese flying in formation, migrating south for the winter.

CAPITALIZATION

The Bottom Line

Checklist for Capitalization
Have I capitalized . . . peoples names and initials? personal titles preceding names? names of races, languages, and nationalities? names of religions and religious terms? names of bodies of the universe and other geographical terms? names of monuments, bridges, and other landmarks? names of particular planes, trains, and other vehicles? names of organizations, institutions, and businesses? names of historical events, eras, and documents? names of special events, awards, and brand names?

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Theme: Great Mistakes and Disasters

Headline Headache
What event is the headline describing? It's hard to know without proper end marks in place. Is it Emergency Power Lost in City! in which the city has lost emergency backup power? Or is it Emergency! Power Lost in City! in which the city has lost all power? Punctuation helps make even simple messages easier to understand. Write Away: Oops! News That's Unfit to Print Write a headline describing a time you slipped up. It might describe when you forgot to study for a test, tripped over a neighbors dog, or missed a bus. Be sure to punctuate your headline correctly. Save your work in your Working Portfolio.

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Diagnostic Test: What Do You Know?

For each numbered item, choose the letter of the best revision. Some mistakes are tragic Other mistakes have milder
(1)

consequences; in fact, theyre just plain goofy. Take, for example, the story Cinderella. Did you ever wonder why someone lucky enough to have a fairy godmother ended up with glass shoes! An older version of the story says that Cinderellas slippers were made of vair, a type of fur. Charles Perrault the writer, mistakenly
(7) (6) (5) (4) (2) (3)

assumed that the word vair should have been verre. (Verre means
(8)

glass.) Oh well? Can you imagine a fancy prince exclaiming that he would marry the owner of a fur slipper?
(10) (9)

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1. A. tragic. B. tragic, C. tragic D. Correct as is 2. A. consequences. B. consequences, C. consequences? D. Correct as is 3. A. their B. theyre C. theyre D. Correct as is 4. A. Cinderella. B. Cinderella. C. CINDERELLA. D. Correct as is 5. A. glass shoes; B. glass shoes? C. glass shoes, D. Correct as is

6. A. Cinderellas B. Cinderellas C. Cinderella D. Correct as is 7. A. Perrault, the writer, B. Perrault the writer C. Perrault, the writer D. Correct as is 8. A. verre B. verre, C. verre: D. Correct as is 9. A. Oh well; B. Oh well, C. Oh well! D. Correct as is 10. A. he would marry the owner of a fur slipper? B. he would marry the owner of a fur slipper. C. he would marry the owner of a fur slipper. D. Correct as is

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Periods, question marks, and exclamation points are known as end marks because they indicate the end of a sentence. Periods have other uses as well.

Periods
Use a period at the end of a declarative sentence. A
declarative sentence makes a statement. Not all blunders have bad results . Some important discoveries have happened by accident .

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Use a period at the end of almost every imperative sentence. An imperative sentence gives a command. When
these sentences express excitement or emotion, they end with exclamation points. Tell us more about these great mistakes . Dont stop ! These stories are really interesting .

Use a period at the end of an indirect question. An indirect question reports what a person asked without using the persons exact words.
DIRECT

Tracy asked, Is this article about x-rays true ? Tracy asked whether the article about x-rays is true .

INDIRECT

Question Marks
Use a question mark at the end of an interrogative sentence. An
interrogative sentence asks a question. How were x-rays discovered ? Who first recognized them ?

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Exclamation Points
Use an exclamation point to end an exclamatory sentence. An exclamatory sentence expresses strong feeling.
I cant believe it ! Thats an amazing bit of luck!

Use an exclamation point after an interjection or any other exclamatory expression.

Hey ! I bet the scientist who first saw them was surprised. Wow ! Strange things do happen in laboratories.

Other Uses for Periods

Use a period at the end of most abbreviations or after an initial.
Common Abbreviations and Initials
Abbreviations sec. second Dr. Doctor Sr. Senior min. minute Nov. November E. East hr. hour Tues. Tuesday St. Street Initials R.R. railroad P.O. post office M.D. doctor of medicine tsp. teaspoon in. inch Prof. Professor
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M.T.P. Maria Theresa Parsons P.M. post meridiem (after noon) D.C. District of Columbia

Abbreviations Without Periods CD compact disc MVP Most Valuable Player UN United Nations mph miles per hour NY New York cm centimeters

Use a period after each number or letter in an outline or a list.

Outline Uses for X-rays I Medical . A Pictures of bones and teeth . B Cancer treatments . II Industrial . . A Security devices B Pest control . List Parts of an X-Ray Machine 1 Glass tube . 2 Negative electrode . 3 Positive electrode . 4 Electric current . 5 Tube housing . 6 Film compartment .
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2 Practice and Apply

A. CONCEPT CHECK: Periods and Other End Marks Write the words from the following paragraph that should be followed by periods, question marks, or exclamation points. Include these end marks in your answers. X-rays Exposed Did you know that x-rays were discovered by accident No kidding In 1895, Prof Wilhelm Roentgen, a German scientist, conducted a new experiment. He worked in a darkened room with a special vacuum tube. The tube used a bright electric current When Roentgen placed a sheet of black paper around the tube, he was surprised by the results Instead of seeing complete darkness, Roentgen noticed an eerie glow coming from a nearby screen How strange Roentgen soon realized that this glow was caused by mysterious invisible rays coming from the tube Can you guess why he called his discovery x-rays In science, the letter x means something unknown
For a SELF-CHECK and more practice, see the EXERCISE BANK, p. 291.

accident? kidding!/Prof.

current. results. screen. strange! tube. x-rays? unknown.

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B. WRITING: Punctuating Abbreviations Rewrite the announcement below, adding periods where they are needed.

Sat./Nov. A.M./P.M. A./Jr. N./Ln. Mt. Ms.

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1 Heres the Idea

Commas can be used to separate parts of a sentence.

Commas with Items in a Series

Use a comma after every item in a series except the last one. A series consists of three or more items.
The story of Daedalus and his son Icarus teaches us about clevernessstubbornnessand foolishness. , , Each man used waxfeathers and a harness to make a , , pair of wings. Icarus and Daedalus put on their wingsran along the , beachand flew toward the open sea. ,
PUNCTUATION

Use commas between two or more adjectives of equal rank that modify the same noun.
Both father and son made a quickdaring escape. ,
Heres How Adding Commas Between Adjectives

To decide whether to use a comma between two adjectives modifying the same noun, try the following test.
Daedalus used large stiff feathers. 1. Place the word and between the adjectives. Daedalus used large and stiff feathers. 2. If the sentence still makes sense, replace and with a comma. , Daedalus used largestiff feathers.

Do not use a comma between adjectives that together express a single idea.

Each pair of wings had many light feathers.

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Commas with Introductory Words and Phrases

Use a comma after an introductory word or phrase to separate it from the rest of the sentence.
Recklessly, Icarus flew too close to the sun. According to Greek myth, Icarus fell when his wings melted.

Commas with Interrupters

Use commas to set off words or phrases that interrupt, or break, the flow of thought in a sentence.
Daedalus , however, did fly to freedom. This myth has been told , I am certain, by many authors.

Commas with Nouns of Direct Address

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Use commas to set off nouns of direct address. A noun

of direct address names the person or group being spoken to. Devon, explain why Daedalus warned Icarus about the sun. Dont forget , class, that Icarus didnt listen to his father.

Commas with Appositives

An appositive is a word or phrase that identifies or renames a noun or pronoun that comes right before it. Use commas when the appositive adds extra information; do not use commas when the appositive is needed to make the meaning clear. Olivia E. Coolidge , an English author, wrote about Greek myths. (The phrase an English author adds extra information.) The English author Olivia E. Coolidge wrote about Greek myths. (The phrase Olivia E. Coolidge is needed information.)

Commas to Avoid Confusion

Use a comma whenever the reader might otherwise be confused.
UNCLEAR CLEAR

Soon after Icarus left Daedalus followed. Soon after Icarus left Daedalus followed. ,

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2 Practice and Apply

A. CONCEPT CHECK: Commas in Sentences Write the words from the following passage that should be followed by commas. Oil Takes Its Toll In 1989, an oil tanker, the Exxon Valdez, went aground off the coast of Alaska. Eleven million gallons of smelly sticky oil spilled out of the tanker. Spread by the ocean current the oil slick soon coated 1,300 miles of Alaskas shoreline. The magnificent, sparkling beaches of Alaska turned oily and black. The spill killed approximately 2,800 otters 300 seals 250 bald eagles and 250,000 other birds. Ten years later there were signs of recovery. A council was established after the spill to help restore wildlife. Molly McCammon its director indicated that things were looking better. The numbers of bald eagles and pink salmon were strong. She added however that more work needed to be done to improve the numbers of seals, herring, and ducks.
For a SELF-CHECK and more practice, see the EXERCISE BANK, p. 291.

smelly, current,

otters,/seals, eagles, later, McCammon, director, added, however,

PUNCTUATION

B. MIXED REVIEW: Using Punctuation Correctly Write the words from the following passage that should be followed by end marks or commas. Include these punctuation marks in your answers. The Great Caterpillar Catastrophe In 1869, Leopold Trouvelot a French scientist imported scientist, caterpillars to Massachusetts. Why did he import them He hoped to crossbreed the adult form of these caterpillars, known as gypsy moths with the moths of silkworms He silkworms. thought perhaps foolishly, that he could create a new American caterpillar, one that made valuable silk Unfortunately Trouvelots experiment had a terrible outcome outcome. One day a gust of wind knocked over a caterpillar cage in his house What a mess Crawling out an open window, the caterpillars escaped. Soon they grew into adult moths and migrated Over many years the moths spread to Virginia Virginia, Maryland and New York Now they are pests that destroy New York. healthy trees Who would believe that so much trouble could come from one mishap with caterpillars Its amazing amazing!
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Trouvelot, them? moths, thought, silk. Unfortunately, day, house./mess! migrated./years, Maryland, trees. caterpillars?

1 Heres the Idea

See these rules in action in the letter below. Commas in Dates, Addresses, and Letters
Commas in dates Commas in addresses Commas in letters
In dates, use a comma between the day and the year. (Use a comma after the year if the sentence continues.) Use a comma between the city or town and the state or country. (Use a comma after the state or country if the sentence continues.) Use a comma after the greeting of a casual letter and after the closing of a casual or business letter.

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422 Fairfax Road MiltonMA 02186 , April 132000 ,

2
3

Line 2: comma between city and state Line 3: comma between day and year Line 4: comma after greeting Line 9: commas after city and country Line 18: commas after day and year Line 21: comma after closing

4 Dear Jeri , Do you remember how we laughed 5 6 when we saw a picture of the Leaning 7 Tower of Pisa? Well, my grandma told me 8 that the tower tilts because of a terrible 9 mistake. Long ago, in PisaItalyarchitects , , 10 planned to make a bell tower for the 11 towns cathedral. Everything went well in 12 the beginning. But during construction, 13 the tower started to lean.The builders 14 realized that the ground underneath the 15 tower was too soft. Unfortunately, the 16 tower leans a little bit more every year. 17 Im planning to see the tower on 18 March 212001when I visit my grandma , , 19 in Italy. It will be her 90th birthday. I 20 hope the tower is still standing by then. 21 22

Your friend , Christa

Do not use a comma between the state and the ZIP code.
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2 Practice and Apply

A. CONCEPT CHECK: Commas: Dates, Addresses, and Letters The letter below is a field trip proposal that a student has been asked to write for class. Write the words and numbers from the letter that should be followed by commas.
reet 175 Green St O 80110 Englewood C May 6 2000 on sit the Dear Mr. Clayt class should vi r social studies d trip I think that ou 2000 our fiel on October 12 um on the things history muse eing exhibits d have fun se out ancient day. We eve learned ab ially died. So far, w China. I espec weve stu ia, Egypt, and Giza opotam at Pyramid in people of Mes about the Gre se, stories China. Of cour liked reading mb near Sian Chin to place, the Egypt and the by my favorite ll have to stop iss it! if we go, we a mistake to m ! It would be mummy room osal. cept my prop at you will ac I hope th Sincerely Malcolm

PUNCTUATION

For a SELF-CHECK and more practice, see the EXERCISE BANK, p. 292.

B. WRITING: Dear Friend Answers in column. Put a letter together using these parts. Dont forget to add commas where they belong. 1300 Dearborn St.
Dear Matt

As ever

June 25, 2000

0 Chicago IL 6061

Sarah

I enjoyed your letter, especially the sandcastl e story. My family is going to a party in Milwaukee Wisconsin next Saturda y. Would you like to join us?
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1 Heres the Idea

To punctuate quotations, you need to know where to put quotation marks, commas, and end marks.

Direct Quotations
A direct quotation is the exact words of a writer or a speaker.

Use quotation marks at the beginning and the end of a direct quotation.
All passengers assemble on deck, said the captain.

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Use commas to set off explanatory words used with direct quotations (whether they occur at the beginning, in the middle, or at the ends of sentences).
The captain said, All passengers assemble on deck. All passengers , said the captain, assemble on deck. All passengers assemble on deck , said the captain.

If a quotation is a question or an exclamation, place the question mark or exclamation point inside the closing quotation marks.
Have we hit an iceberg ? a crewman asked.

If quoted words are part of a quotation or exclamation of your own, place the question mark or exclamation point outside the closing quotation marks.
Did I hear him say, I believe were sinking ? Commas and periods always go inside closing quotation marks. Theyre too little to stay outside.

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Indirect Quotations
Do not use quotation marks to set off an indirect quotation.
An indirect quotation tells, in different words, what someone said. An indirect quotation is often introduced by the word that. It does not require a comma.
DIRECT

Captain Smith shouted to the radio operators, You can do no more. Abandon your cabin. Finally, Captain Smith told the radio operators that they should abandon their cabin.

INDIRECT

Divided Quotations
A divided quotation is a direct quotation that is separated into two parts. Explanatory words such as he said or she said come between the parts.
PUNCTUATION

Use quotation marks to enclose both parts of a divided quotation.

The ship, the owner said, is unsinkable.

Do not capitalize the first word of the second part of a divided quotation unless it begins a new sentence.
The ship is unsinkable, he said , because of its doublebottomed hull. The ship is unsinkable, he said . It has extra protection because of its double-bottomed hull.

Use commas to set off the explanatory words used with a divided quotation.
This ship , he explained, has extra safety features.

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Quotation Marks in Dialogue

In dialogue, a new paragraph and a new set of quotation marks signal a change in speakers. A dialogue is a conversation between two or more speakers.

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Ready? Ready. Now? Soon. Do the scientists really know? Will it happen today, will it? Look, look; see for yourself! The children pressed to each other like so many roses, so many weeds, intermixed, peering out for a look at the hidden sun.

Ray Bradbury, All Summer in a Day

Using Quotation Marks

Use this model to review the punctuation in this lesson.

Did you know that the Titanic was not the only large ship to be lost at sea? Amanda asked. What other ship was lost? replied Linda. In 1840, the largest ship was the President, explained Amanda.On its third trip across the Atlantic, it left New York and was never heard from again. If thats true, Linda questioned,then why hasnt anyone made a movie about the President? Who knows about it? Well, we do! exclaimed Amanda. Right! shouted Linda.Hey, lets use this idea for our social studies project.
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Questions Divided quotation

Divided quotation Exclamations

2 Practice and Apply

A. CONCEPT CHECK: Punctuating Quotations Rewrite each sentence, adding quotation marks and other punctuation where needed. If a sentence is correct, write Correct. A Bug in the Works! Why is the word bug used to describe a computer problem asked Steve. ? Well, began Jessie. In 1945, a computer scientist named Grace Murray Hopper was working in a computer lab. Correct So far, this isnt a very exciting story, commented Steve. Let me continue shouted Jessie. While trying to finish a ! project, Hopper noticed that the computer continued to have problems. Correct What happened next questioned Steve. ? Jessie explained, When Hopper looked closer at the inside of the computer, she found a moth messing up everything. Correct Youre making this up exclaimed Steve !/ No, its true, stated Jessie. She glued the dead moth to the log book with a note explaining the accident. Jessie added, Ever since then, computer problems have been called bugs.
For a SELF-CHECK and more practice, see the EXERCISE BANK, p. 293.

PUNCTUATION

B. WRITING: He Said; She Said Answers in column. Choose one frame from this cartoon and write it as a short dialogue. Add explanatory words such as Calvin bragged or Susie explained to make your work clearer. Be sure to punctuate your dialogue correctly.
Calvin and Hobbes by Bill Watterson

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1 Heres the Idea

A semicolon separates parts in a sentence. It is stronger than a comma but not as strong as a period. A colon shows that a list follows. Colons are also used after greetings in business letters and in expressions of time.

Semicolons in Compound Sentences

Use a semicolon to join parts of a compound sentence without a coordinating conjunction.
The mistake was simple; the result was disastrous.

Semicolons with Items in a Series

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When there are commas within parts of a series, use semicolons to separate the parts.
Bodies within the solar system include the nine planets; about 50 satellites, such as Earths moon; more than 1,000 comets, such as Halleys comet; and thousands of asteroids.

Colons
Use a colon to introduce a list of items.
Planets revolve around the sun in this order: Mercury, Venus, Earth, Mars, Jupiter, Saturn, Uranus, Neptune, and Pluto. Mars has these earthlike features: ice-covered poles, an atmosphere, and changing seasons. Do not use a colon directly after a verb or a preposition.
INCORRECT

Through the telescope he saw: Mars, the Red Planet.

Use a colon after the formal greeting in a business letter or letter of complaint.
BUSINESS

Dear Principal Jones : Dear Ms. Mark :

For a model, see the business letter in the Model Bank.

Use a colon between hours and minutes in expressions of time.

The lecture starts at 7:30 P A reception follows at 9:00 P .M. .M.
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2 Practice and Apply

A. CONCEPT CHECK: Semicolons and Colons Write the words from the following passage that should be followed by semicolons or colons. Include these punctuation marks in your answers. A Simple Mistake In December of 1998, NASA successfully launched the Mars Climate Orbiter. It was designed to get detailed information about Mars and its weather conditions. According to plan, it would record the following data data: atmospheric temperatures, dust levels, water vapor levels, and cloud cover. On September 23, 1999, the Climate Orbiter was ready to go into orbit around Mars. At about 500 A.M. Eastern 5:00 time, rocket firings began, and radio contact was lost. Contact was expected to be restored about 530 A.M. But 5:30 instead the worst of sounds came from scientists computers silence, silence, and more silence. computers: Hours later, NASA scientists were grim the mission had grim; failed. One team of scientists had used metric measurements measurements; another team had used English measurements. This mix-up put the spacecraft off course by about 60 miles! Of course, NASA lost the orbiter and all of its contents an infrared contents: temperature meter, a device for measuring moisture, communications instruments, and other specialized equipment. A $125-million craft had been lost due to a simple metric conversion mistake.
PUNCTUATION For a SELF-CHECK and more practice, see the EXERCISE BANK, p. 293.

B. WRITING: Lost in Deep Space Answers in column. Its easy to lose things, especially in the deep darkness of a closet or locker! Write about a time you misplaced something important, such as your lunch, your uniform, a CD, or a homework assignment. Include information about all the places you looked and the things you picked up while searching. Make sure to include semicolons and colons in your description.

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Hyphens, dashes, and parentheses help make your writing clear by separating or setting off words or parts of words.

Hyphens
Use a hyphen if part of a word must be carried over from one line to the next.
1. Separate the word between syllables.
RIGHT: let-ter WRONG: lette-r

2. The word must have at least two syllables to be broken.

RIGHT: num-ber WRONG: ea-rth

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3. You must leave at least two letters on each line.

RIGHT: twen-ty WRONG: a-round

Use hyphens in certain compound words.

self-confident brother-in-law

Use hyphens in compound numbers from twenty-one through ninety-nine.

twenty-three seventy-two

Use hyphens in spelled-out fractions.

one-half three-fourths

Dashes
Use dashes to show an abrupt break in thought.
Sojourner Truthwhose birth name was Isabella Baumfree spent many years of her life speaking out against slavery.

Parentheses
Use parentheses to set off material that is loosely related to the rest of the sentence.
Sojourner Truth met Harriet Tubman (a conductor of the Underground Railroad) during the Civil War.
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2 Practice and Apply

A. CONCEPT CHECK: Hyphens, Dashes, and Parentheses Answers in column. Rewrite each sentence, adding hyphens, dashes, and parentheses where needed. If a sentence is correct, write Correct. 1. Isabella Baumfree was born into slavery in the late Breaking a Promise to the Wrong Woman

1790s the exact date is unknown. 2. John Dumont, Baumfrees owner, promised to give her freedom if she worked extra hard. 3. However, Dumont scoundrel that he was refused to honor his word. 4. In a bold move, Baumfree walked off Dumonts farm in search of freedom. 5. She found safety in the home of neighbors they were peaceful Quakers who bought out the remainder of her time as a slave. 6. At the age of about forty six, Baumfree renamed herself Sojourner Truth and Sojourner Truth began to speak publicly about her suffering. 7. Truth was an eloquent preacher, although she couldnt read or write she never had a formal education. 8. She traveled all over the country even to the White House speaking about abolishing slavery. 9. Truth was an extremely tall woman over six feet tall which helped her get an audiences attention quite easily. 10. Her quick wit and self confidence helped Sojourner Truth become one of the nations most popular public figures.

PUNCTUATION

For a SELF-CHECK and more practice, see the EXERCISE BANK, p. 294.

B. REVISING: Using Hyphens Rewrite the following phrases, adding hyphens where needed. If a phrase is correct, write Correct.
seventy-five Correct sister-in-law

1. seventy five days 2. thirty minutes 3. your sister in law

4. one fifth of a year one-fifth 5. two thirds of an hour two-thirds 6. your sisters law firm Correct
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Apostrophes are used in possessive nouns, contractions, and some plurals.

Apostrophes in Possessives
Use an apostrophe to form the possessive of any noun, whether singular or plural.
For a singular noun, add s even if the word ends in s. Sams baseball Franciss cap the players uniforms family s plan For plural nouns that end in s, add only an apostrophe. the spectator s cheers
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For plural nouns that do not end in s, add s. women s team

Apostrophes in Contractions
Use apostrophes in contractions.
In a contraction, words are joined and letters are left out. An apostrophe replaces the letter or letters that are missing. Commonly Used Contractions
I am Im you are youre theyre you will youll it is its was not wasnt she is shes cannot cant they have theyve they are

Dont confuse contractions with possessive pronouns, which do not contain apostrophes. Contractions Versus Possessive Pronouns
Contraction

Possessive Pronoun
its (belonging to it its wing) whose (belonging to whom whose glove) your (belonging to you your arm) their (belonging to them their yard)

its (it is or it has) whos (who is) youre (you are) theyre (they are)
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Apostrophes in Plurals
Use an apostrophe and s to form the plural of a letter, a numeral, or a word referred to as a word.
Your i s look like e s . How many 6 s are in her uniform number?

The sportscasters report was filled with too bads and next times.

2 Practice and Apply

A. CONCEPT CHECK: Apostrophes Find and correct the errors in the use of apostrophes. Mistakes Turn to Triumph A series of mistakes came just before the 1996 Olympic Games most memorable moment. It was July 23, the last night of team competition in womens gymnastics. Dominique Moceanu fell on both of her vaults. The U.S. teams chances for a gold medal looked bad. Kerri Strugs turn came next. Kerri fell toobadly. She thought maybe shed broken her ankle. She didnt know if she should take her second vault. Kerris coach, Bela Karolyi, left the decision up to her. Kerri didnt think her team would win if she didnt try againso she did. Everyones gaze was fixed on her as she sprinted down the runway, vaultedand landed perfectly. Seconds later, after gently lifting her aching foot, shed crumpled to the mat. Her courage lifted a nations heart. And the womens team won gold!
For a SELF-CHECK and more practice, see the EXERCISE BANK, p. 294. PUNCTUATION

Games womens teams shed didnt/Kerris Everyones

shed nations / womans

B. WRITING: Using Possessives and Contractions Write the correct form from the choices in the parentheses.
(Whose/Whos) side are you on for tonights game? Im going to cheer for the Wolverines. (Their/Theyre) offense is incredible! I cant wait to see (Tess/Tesss) amazing moves. Believe me, (your/youre) going to regret it if you dont support them. (Its/Its)

going to be one terrific victory!

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Use quotation marks and italics correctly in titles to show what kind of work or selection you are writing about.

Quotation Marks
Use quotation marks to set off the titles of short works.
Quotation Marks for Titles
Book chapter Short story
Essay
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The Dream from Dogsong Flowers and Freckle Cream Bringing Home the Prairie Home on an Icy Planet The Star-Spangled Banner Analysis of Baseball

Article Song Poem

Italics and Underlining

Use italics for titles of longer works and for the names of ships, trains, spacecraft, and airplanes (but not the type of plane). In handwriting, you show that something
should be in italic type by underlining it. Italics or Underlines for Titles
Book Play Magazine Movie TV series The Lost Garden The Hobbit World The Lion King Cosby Epic poem Painting Ship Train Spacecraft Airplane The Odyssey Mona Lisa Titanic City of New Orleans Viking I Air Force One

Long musical The Barber work of Seville

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2 Practice and Apply

A. CONCEPT CHECK: Punctuating Titles Correctly punctuate the titles in each sentence, using either quotation marks or underlining as appropriate. 1. You can read about real mistakesbig and smallin Mistakes in the Media

news magazines such as Newsweek. 2. In the classic film The Wizard of Oz, Dorothy makes the mistake of taking her home for granted until she loses it. 3. Mistakes That Worked is the title of a book that describes mistakes that have helped people. 4. Everyone can relate to the common human mistakes that family members make in the TV series Cosby. 5. In Homers epic poem the Odyssey, the blinded Cyclops cant see Odysseus and his men escape under the bodies of sheep. 6. Many popular songs, such as Youre Gonna Miss Me When Im Gone, are about mistakes in love. 7. The short storyScouts Honor describes many funny mistakes made by a group of boy scouts on a camping trip. 8. In the poemCasey at the Bat, poor Casey strikes out. 9. The best-selling childrens book of all time, The Tale of Peter Rabbit, has a main character who always gets into trouble. 10. Did you read the newspaper article with the blooper headlineRed Tape Holds Up New Bridge?

PUNCTUATION

For a SELF-CHECK and more practice, see the EXERCISE BANK on p. 295.

B. WRITING: Be the Judge Answers in column. Write down the title of your favorite book, poem, movie, TV show, and song. Exchange your titles with a partner. Review your partners list and check each title for underlining or quotation marks.

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Using Punctuation in Poetry

When you write poetry, punctuation is very important. The first word of each line of poetry is often capitalized even if it doesnt begin a sentence. Furthermore, sentences may not end when a line does. Notice how the punctuation in the following poem helps you understand its meaning.

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by Eleanor Farjeon
Two Birds, One Worm (1989), William Wegman. Watercolor on paper, 11" x 14".

I quarreled with my brother, I dont know what about, One thing led to another And somehow we fell out. The start of it was slight, The end of it was strong, He said he was right, I knew he was wrong! We hated one another. The afternoon turned black. Then suddenly my brother Thumped me on the back, And said, Oh, come along! We cant go on all night I was in the wrong. So he was in the right.
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An apostrophe marks a contraction. This tells readers the language of the poem is informal. Commas indicate that the sentence continues onto the next line. An exclamation mark ends a strong emotional statement.

Quotation marks enclose the brothers exact words.

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Practice and Apply

A. REVISING: Adding Punctuation to Poetry

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A student wrote the following poem about an embarrassing moment he experienced. He got so caught up in describing what happened that he completely forgot to use punctuation. Rewrite the poem, adding necessary punctuation marks.

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PUNCTUATION

B. WRITING: Learning by Mistakes Many people believe that making mistakes is the best way to learn. Write a poem about a mistake you made and the lesson you learned from it. Be sure to punctuate your poem correctly. Save your writing in your Working Portfolio.

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Mixed Review
A. Commas, Semicolons, and Colons Write the words and numbers from the following passage that should be followed by commas, semicolons, or colons. Include these punctuation marks in your answers. KudzuLove It or Hate It! Whats kudzu? Its a thick sturdy vine found in the southeastern thick, 1876, United States. The plant was first brought to this country in 1876 Philadelphia, for the Centennial Exposition in Philadelphia Pennsylvania. Many large, Southerners liked its large fragrant blooms. They began to use it in years, their gardens. For many years kudzu was grown to create shade in hot, hot dry areas. 1950s,/however, By the 1950s however people began to see that they made a big mistake when they planted kudzu. Its vines became uncontrollable.
trees,/poles, They overtook trees poles and abandoned buildings. Kudzu vines forests; destroyed many gardens and forests they blocked out the sunlight.

Today, kudzu continues to be a nuisance to many Southerners. Yet some have tried to make the best of this bad situation by creating the following items from kudzu jellies, syrups, candy and baskets. In fact there are several kudzu recipe books they give instructions for those interested in cooking up the curious creeper. Though they may either love or hate kudzu, most Southerners agree kudzu:/candy, that its here to stay!
fact,/books;

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B. End Marks and Other Punctuation Put the letter together using these parts. Add the missing punctuation marks where they belong.
Answers in column.

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Mastery Test: What Did You Learn?

For each numbered item, choose the letter of the best revision. Would you believe me if I told you the sky was falling More than
(1)

likely, youll say no. Howeverif a highly respected scientist were to

(2) (3)

tell you that the most glorious comet was going to fly across the sky, youd probably believe him or her. Perhaps this story will change your mind. In January 1974 Harvard astronomer Fred Whipple
(4)

predicted that the comet Kohoutek would give the most spectacular show of the century. Other astronomers declared that Kohoutek had
(5)

a tail 50 million miles long. They said it would stretch one sixth of
(6)

the way across the sky. Hundreds of people began buying telescopes
(7)

binoculars, and even Kohoutek T-shirts as they waited for the comet. Finally, on the day of the show, the comet fizzled in its
(8)

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display. Time magazine described Kohoutek as a disappointing dud.

(9) (10)

1. A. falling. B. falling! C. falling? D. Correct as is 2. A. youll B. youll C. you-ll D. Correct as is 3. A. However, B. However C. However; D. Correct as is 4. A. In January, 1974, B. In January, 1974 C. In January 1974, D. Correct as is 5. A. astronomers B. astronomers C. astronomersD. Correct as is

6. A. one sixthB. one-sixth C. onesixth D. Correct as is 7. A. telescopes, binoculars, B. telescopes binoculars, C. telescopesbinoculars, D. Correct as is 8. A. its B. its C. it(s) D. Correct as is 9. A. Time B. Time C. Time, D. Correct as is 10. A. a disappointing dud, B. a disappointing dud. C. a disappointing dud. D. Correct as is

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Exclamation Point Dash Parentheses Colon Apostrophe Comma Question Mark Period Quotation Marks Semicolon Hyphen

Punctuating Titles
Italics (longer works)

Long or Short

Technique Examples Books, Movies, Magazines, Spacecraft, Airplanes,

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Plays, Ships, Trains, TV series, Paintings, Long musical works, Epic poems

Quotation Marks (shorter works)

Technique Stories, Essays, Songs,ExamplesBook chapters, Poems, Episodes in a TV series, Magazine articles

Punctuation with Commas

Use commas . . . Items in a series Adjectives Introductory words Interrupters Nouns of direct address to separate a series of words to separate adjectives to separate introductory words to set off interrupters to set off nouns of direct address

Separating Ideas
Examples I want to find gold, silver, or jewels. Lets look for old, deserted ships. For centuries, grand ships crossed oceans. Many, believe me, held riches. Where should we hunt, Evan?

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Punctuation with Quotation Marks

Always Inside no matter what

In or Out

Periods Rob said, Hey, lets go to the movies . Commas Thats a good idea , replied Ann.
Sometimes Inside if they punctuate the part within the quotation marks

Question marks Should we see a disaster movie ? asked Rob. Exclamation points I love disaster movies ! exclaimed Ann.
Sometimes Outside if they punctuate the overall sentence, not just the quote

Question marks Did you enjoy reading the story Shipwrecked ? Exclamation points No, but I liked Castaway ! I think its been made into a movie. Lets see if its playing!
PUNCTUATION

The Bottom Line

Checklist for Punctuation
Have I . . . ended every sentence with the appropriate end mark? used commas to separate items in a series? used commas correctly in dates, addresses, and letters? used quotation marks before and after a speakers words? used apostrophes to form contractions and possessives? used italics and quotation marks correctly for titles?

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Mad r e Mapp

Heres the Idea

Diagramming is a way of showing the structure of a sentence. Drawing a diagram can help you see how the parts of a sentence work together to form a complete thought.

Simple Subjects and Verbs

Watch me for diagramming tips!

Write the simple subject and verb on one line. Separate them with a vertical line that crosses the main line.

Tigers growl. Tigers

DIAGRAMMING

growl

Compound Subjects and Verbs

For a compound subject or verb, split the main line. Put the conjunction on a dotted line connecting the compound parts.
Compound Subject

Tigers and lions growl. Tigers growl lions

Compound Verb
Because there are two subjects, the left side of the main line is split into two parts.
and

Tigers growl and roar. growl

and

Tigers

roar

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Compound Subject and Compound Verb

Tigers and lions growl and roar. Tigers

and and

growl
Because there are two subjects and two verbs, both sides of the main line are split into two parts.

lions

roar

A. CONCEPT CHECK: Subjects and Verbs Diagram these sentences, using what you have learned. 1. Trainers shout. 2. Leopards pace and snarl. 3. Horses and riders circle and bow.
DIAGRAMMING

Adjectives and Adverbs

Write adjectives and adverbs on slanted lines below the words they modify.

Marvelous acrobats step quite nimbly overhead. acrobats

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B. MIXED REVIEW: Diagramming Diagram the following sentences. 1. 2. 3. 4. 5. 6. 7. 8. 9. 10. Tiny Lucinda climbs carefully. The strong young acrobat leaps skillfully. She swings gracefully overhead. Her powerful partner jumps and misses. He plunges sharply downward. The wide net waits below. Lucinda and the other acrobats gasp. The anxious audience fidgets and waits. The lucky acrobat lands and smiles. The audience claps wildly.

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Subject Complements

Write a predicate noun or a predicate adjective on the main line after the verb. Separate the subject complement from the verb with a slanted line that does not cross the main line.

Predicate Noun

Clowns are skillful performers. Clowns are performers

sk ill fu l

DIAGRAMMING

Predicate Adjective

Clowns quite often seem sad. Clowns seem

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C. CONCEPT CHECK: Subject Complements Diagram these sentences using what you have learned. 1. The smallest clown appears very serious. 2. His face is a sad mask.

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Direct Objects
A direct object follows the verb on the main line.

One clown drives a tiny car. clown

On e
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drives

car
a tin y

The vertical line between a verb and its direct object does not cross the main line.

Write compound direct objects on parallel lines that branch from the main line.

The driver wears a floppy hat and giant shoes. hat

and

driver
Th e

wears

shoes
gi an t

flo pp y

Indirect Objects
Write an indirect object below the verb, on a horizontal line connected to the verb by a slanted line.

The driver gives seven other clowns a ride. driver

Th
D. MIXED REVIEW: Diagramming Diagram the following sentences. 1. 2. 3. 4. 5. 6. 7. 8. 9. 10. The Zolanda Circus is very popular. Muscular workers pitch the gigantic tent. Flexible acrobats practice courageous leaps. The lion tamer gives his giant beasts a large meal. An elegant elephant eyes some delicious hay. People gradually fill the empty bleachers. They give the ringmaster their complete attention. The ringmaster creates a hush. The arena becomes a silent stage. Six white horses carry six beautiful dancers.

DIAGRAMMING

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Prepositional Phrases

Write the preposition on a slanted line below the word the prepositional phrase modifies. Write the object of the preposition on a horizontal line after the preposition. Write any modifier of the object on a slanted line below the object.

Actors in plays need strength and coordination. strength

and

Actors
in

need

plays

coordination

DIAGRAMMING

They sometimes leap over scenery on the stage. They leap

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scenery
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Notice that one prepositional phrase can modify the object of another.

E. CONCEPT CHECK: Prepositional Phrases Diagram these sentences, using what you have learned. 1. 2. 3. 4. 5. The actor climbed to the top of the ladder. The hat on her head swayed in the breeze. She held tightly to the rungs of the ladder. A gust of wind blew the hat off her head. It fell through the air to the ground.

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Compound Sentences

Diagram the independent clauses on parallel horizontal lines. Connect the verbs in the two clauses by a dotted line with a solid step in it. Write the coordinating conjunction on the step.

The playwright writes the script, and the director chooses the actors. playwright
Th e

writes
and

script
th e

director
th e

chooses

actors
th e

The conjunction goes on the step.

DIAGRAMMING

F. CONCEPT CHECK: Compound Sentences Diagram these sentences using what you have learned. 1. The actors have come to the first rehearsal, but the writer is still making changes. 2. The actors study their parts, or they walk around nervously. 3. The director is ready, and the rehearsals can now begin. G. MIXED REVIEW: Diagramming Diagram the following sentences. 1. 2. 3. 4. 5. 6. 7. 8. 9. 10. Rehearsals of the new play will start today. The director is eager and the cast is ready. Designers are making models of the stage sets. Carpenters will construct the sets in the scene shop. They will paint the scenery, but the stage crew will move it into place. The role of the thief will be played by a well-known actor. An unknown actor from a nearby town will play the detective. The detective does not solve the case of the lost piano, but the audience does. Everyone recognizes the thief by the end of the play. The play will be a big hit with the audience.
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