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11 Steps to Writing Your First Children's Book

by the Editors of

Children's Book Insider, The Newsletter for Children's Writers

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So, You Wanna Be a Children's Book Writer?

Awesome! Writing a children's book is one of the most rewarding and enriching experiences imaginable. We've been helping ordinary folks just like you become published children's book authors since 1990 and, along the way, we've managed to boil down the entire process into ten steps (plus one bonus step that's maybe the most important...). In this eBook, we'll share those steps with you, and provide links to great information that will make your journey enjoyable, easy and fun. We hope you'll be inspired and encouraged by what you'll find. We also hope that you'll make the big step that has lifted many people from wannabe status to being successful authors: joining the Fightin' Bookworms of Children's Book Insider! We have a special offer for you later on. Until then, let's start your journey!
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Step 1: Get the Right Mindset

If you dream of writing for children because you see it as a route to fame and riches, it's time we had a little talk: That's probably not going to happen. Sure, it might happen -- J.K. Rowling's doing quite nicely, thank you. But the vast majority of children's writers do it for love, not money. They have a passion for sharing ideas and connecting with young readers that means more than wealth or recognition. If you have that passion, than all the lonely hours of writing and the occasional rejection letter are just small prices to pay for the opportunity to create something wonderful and (hopefully) lasting. So let's start our journey by looking inward. I'm going to ask you some questions. Take whatever time you need and answer them honestly. If you've printed this eBook out, write the answers in the space provided. Otherwise, write your answers in a journal or other text document. Here goes: Why do you want to write for children?

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What unique viewpoints, experience or wisdom do you have to offer young readers?

How well do you deal with criticism and rejection? If the answer is not so well, are you willing to develop a thicker skin?

Do you regularly read current children's books, or is your knowledge of the children's book market largely based on your own childhood experience, or from being a parent years ago?

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Are you willing to learn, and invest in yourself to become a better writer?

This isn't a quiz, and there are no right or wrong answers. But there are some things you need to understand before we proceed: This will take time. Anyone who tells you that you can knock out a children's book, send it off to a paying publisher and see your book on the shelves in a couple of months isn't being truthful. You'll have peaks and valleys on your journey that will require patience and perseverance. It's not easy. Contrary to what you may have been told, writing children's books is not easier than writing for adults. Yes, kids' books are shorter, but that just makes things more challenging. The author Mem Fox put it best: Writing a picture book is like writing 'War and Peace' in haiku. Craft is Everything. There are two kinds of writers those who say I've written my story. Where do I send it?' and those who say I've written my first draft. How do I make the plot smoother, the dialogue better and the characters more believable? Can you guess which author invariably succeeds? Writing is an art. Mastering it offers the same challenges and rewards of mastering the violin, or skiing or painting. Take your time, sharpen your skill, learn to love the journey. Publishing will always be out there but, if you really want to
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make it , worry more about being a skilled writer. The rest will take care of itself. Don't Preach. You have a message you want to impart to kids? That's fine. But chill. No one, young or old, wants to read a story that practically bangs them over the head with a moral. Skillful writers know how to subtly incorporate their message into a compelling read. Until you master your craft, stick to making kids laugh, or gasp with fear or swoon with romance before you try to tell them something important. Relax. For all it's challenges, starting a children's writing career is a truly wonderful adventure. You'll meet amazing folks along the way, learn more about yourself than you ever imagined and, ultimately, make your mark on the life of a young reader. That's pretty cool. Just remember to have patience, stay the course, invest in learning to sharpen your skills and keep on writing no matter what. The payoff is certain to be worth it! Now go back and look at the answers you provided to the questions I posed. Do they fit with what we've just covered? Are there some areas that will require a bit of attitude adjustment? Let all of this sink in a bit and revisit those questions later. You might just find that you're very much prepared for the journey ahead. Before we leave Step 1, here are some links that will really help: VIDEO: Think Like a Writer, Not an Author 5 Ways for Writers to Blast Through Self-Doubt

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Step 2: Choose Your Age Group

The world of children's literature is divided along age lines. Become familiar with the standard categories and read from each of them. Before long you'll find yourself gravitating toward one or two of these. That's how you'll know which age group you're best suited for. Here are the categories, along with some classic books to check out: * Picture books In its broadest definition, a picture book is a book in which the illustrations play a significant role in telling the story. Under this umbrella are several types of books: 1. Baby Books For infants and young toddlers, these books are generally lullabies, nursery rhymes, fingerplays, or wordless books. The length and format varies with the content. 2. Toddler books Very simple stories for ages 1-3 (under 300 words) familiar to a child's everyday life, or concept books (teaching colors, numbers, shapes, etc.) Books are short (12 pages is average) and the format can be board books (sturdy paper-over board construction), pop-ups, lift-the flaps or novelty books (books that make sounds, have different textures, etc.) See the "Max" series of board books by Rosemary Wells (Dial). 3. Picture books Traditionally, picture books (also called "picture story books") are 32-page books for ages 4-8 (this age may vary slightly by publisher). Manuscripts are up to 1500 words, with 1000 words being the average length.
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Plots are simple (no sub-plots or complicated twists) with one main character who embodies the child's emotions, concerns and viewpoint. The illustrations (on every page or every other page) play as great a role as the text in telling the story. Occasionally a picture book will exceed 1500 words; this is usually geared toward the upper end of the age spectrum. Picture books cover a wide range of topics and styles. The list of Caldecott Medal winners, available here, is a good place to start your research. Nonfiction in the picture book format can go up to age 10, 48 pages in length, or up to about 2000 words of text. 4. Early picture books A term for picture books geared toward the lower end of the 4-8 age range. These stories are simple and contain under 1000 words. Many early picture books have been reprinted in the board book format, thus widening the audience. The Very Hungry Caterpillar by Eric Carle (Philomel) is an example.

* Easy readers Also called "easy-to-read", these books are for children just starting to read on their own (age 6-8). They have color illustrations on every page like a picture book, but the format is more "grown-up" smaller trim size, sometimes broken into short chapters. The length varies greatly by publisher; the books can be 32-64 pages long, with 200-1500 words of text, occasionally going up to 2000 words. The stories are told mainly through action and dialogue, in grammatically simple sentences (one idea per sentence). Books average 2-5 sentences per page. See the "Amelia Bedelia" books by Peggy Parish or other "I Can Read" books published by Harper Trophy.
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* Transition books Sometimes called "early chapter books" for ages 6-9, they bridge the gap between easy readers and chapter books. Written like easy readers in style, transition books are longer (manuscripts are about 30 pages long, broken into 2-3 page chapters), books have a smaller trim size with black-and-white illustrations every few pages. See "The Kids of the Polk Street School" series by Patricia Reilly Giff (Dell) or the "Stepping Stone Books" published by Random House.

* Chapter books For ages 7-10, these books are 45-60 manuscript pages long, broken into 3-4 page chapters. Stories are meatier than transition books, though still contain a lot of action. The sentences can be a bit more complex, but paragraphs are still short (2-4 sentences is average). Chapters often end in the middle of a scene to keep the reader turning the pages. Look at the "Herbie Jones" books by Suzy Kline (Puffin) and the "Ramona" books by Beverly Cleary (Morrow).

* Middle grade This is the golden age of reading for many children, ages 8-12. Manuscripts suddenly get longer (100150 pages), stories more complex (sub-plots involving secondary characters are woven through the story) and themes more sophisticated. Kids get hooked on characters at this age, which explains the popularity of series with 20 or more books involving the same cast. Fiction genres range from contemporary to historical to science fiction/fantasy; nonfiction includes biographies, science, history and
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multicultural topics. Check out some middle grade novels from the list of Newbery Medal winners to get you started.

* Young adult For ages 12 and up, these manuscripts are 130 to about 200 pages long. Plots can be complex with several major characters, though one character should emerge as the focus of the book. Themes should be relevant to the problems and struggles of today's teenagers, regardless of the genre. The Outsiders by S.E. Hinton defined young adult when it was first published in 1967; the Newbery Medal award list also contains many worthy titles. A newer age category (10-14) is emerging, especially with young adult nonfiction. These books are slightly shorter than the 12 and up category, and topics (both fiction and nonfiction) are appropriate for children who have outgrown middle grade but aren't yet ready for the themes (fiction) or who aren't studying the subjects (nonfiction) of high school readers.

Before you move on, check out this short video: How Do I Determine the Proper Age Group For My Manuscript?

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Step 3: Develop Your Idea

Let's begin with a simple test to determine what, exactly, you feel passionate about. Once we have that, you can start polishing a story idea. You walk into a bookstore with a large magazine selection. Where do you go first? Crafts magazines? Photography? Sports? Cooking? Your answer (unless you head right to Playboy or High Times) has given you a tremendous starting point for your first story. Start with your passion and writing will seem much, much easier! Combine this passion with what we've just learned about age groups and you might start seeing a clear picture of your first manuscript. A middle grade story about a young photographer? A chapter book about a boy who dreams of being a famous chef? A picture book about a little girl who idolizes race car drivers and wants to be one? It's all up to you! So, now that youve explored your interests and discovered that youre drawn to picture book biographies, or middle grade novels, or silly easy readers, youve probably got some ideas itching to be developed. So lets see if theyre really ready to be turned into books. First, sum up your idea. Write the general concept for your story or nonfiction book in one to three sentences. Youre not going to get every nuanced relationship or plot point into those three sentences, but you should be able to convey the essence of what makes your idea unique. You may not know
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much about your idea at this point, so write what you know. Maybe you know your main character and his/her problem, and have some ideas about how that problem might be solved. Perhaps you read an article about new research being done on how dolphins communicate, and think the topic would make a great picture book. Sum up your idea and a few specific key points that give your idea some shape. Dolphins isnt specific enough. How dolphins communicate, and new research that suggests dolphins actually have a meaningful language is a starting point for a book. Jeremy gets a new baby brother, isnt anything special. Jeremy tries to sell his new baby brother at the neighborhood garage sale is the basis for a plot. If youve been reading books for the age group youre interested in writing for, now you can compare your idea to published books and judge if its right for your audience. Does your picture book idea lend itself well to many different action scenes and illustrations? Or does it rely heavily on dialogue and internal character development that is best expressed through thoughts and emotions? If the latter applies to your idea, its better suited to a novel. Since its still just an idea (and not the whole first draft of your manuscript), you shouldnt be too invested in keeping it exactly as it first came to you. In most cases, published books are the result of ideas that have evolved past the initial spark of inspiration. So nows the time to brainstorm and play with the concept. Ask, What if? What if the main character were a boy instead of a girl? What if I used my idea as a springboard for a more complex story for young adults? What if I changed the time period from the present to 1975?
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What if I took my serious topic of global warming and added some humorous sidebars? Or, what if I created a child character to host the book, who lives in the future after many of the climate changes have taken place? What if I wrote the entire book as free verse? What if my picture book looked like different pages from a characters web site? Think big. Get weird. Reach for the most outrageous concept you can, then dial it back until it makes sense. The one thing that will keep your idea from ever getting published is if its ordinary. A predictable, safe, run-of-themill book simply wont justify the publishers substantial financial investment to bring it to print. Your book doesnt have to be shocking, or violent, or disturbing, but it does have to be fresh, interesting and surprising. It has to be something the editors never seen before. And chances are, your first idea wont fit these criteria. Study authors who have charted new ground with their books. Look at Pirates by David L. Harrison, illustrated by Dan Burr (nonfiction picture book for ages 8-12, written as a collection of poems); ttyl by Lauren Myracle (young adult story of three high school girls written as Instant Messages); Lincoln Shot: A Presidents Life Remembered by Barry Denenberg, illustrated by Christopher Bing (written as a commemorative edition of The National News one year after Lincolns death, the entire book looks like a 19th-century newspaper); or Dav Pilkeys Captain Underpants chapter book series (each book a combination of story, comic strip, and Flip-O-Rama). All these books embodied themes and ideas that had been touched on before, but packaged in a new, exciting way. Now, watch this: Laura Backes on Developing Stories for Different Age Groups

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Step 4: Write Your First Draft

Over the past 23 years, we've written enough on the subject of writing craft to fill a library or two. Any attempt to distill that into a few paragraphs would be a major disservice. So here's where we have to make a pitch: Join the Fightin' Bookworms and we'll teach you everything you need to know. Plot, dialogue, pacing, point of view, character development.... It's not brain surgery, but it will take some time and attention. So seriously, spend what you would each month on a light snack and you'll have it all at your fingertips. Check us out at http://cbiclubhouse.com Until then, here are a few pieces of writing instruction to get you started: Writing Picture Books - How to Get Started Write for Success: 7 Tips For Children's Book Writers Writing Tips: 4 Rules Beginning Children's Book Writers Should Never Break

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Step 5: Start Revising

There's a reason your manuscript, in its current state, is called a First Draft. It's because there's a second, third and fourth draft still to come (at least). I don't care how great you think your first draft is, it can get better. And it must get better. So now's the time to take your ego out of the equation and look hard at what you've written. Here's a cheat sheet to help you: 1. Go to the library and ask for the librarian's opinion about the best recent books in your age range. Read them. Then read your manuscript. How do they differ? Where does your story bog down while the other books soar? If you're honest with yourself, you'll soon see that you have work to do. If you're attentive, you'll also know where you have work to do. 2. Read your manuscript multiple times, each time looking at only one specific thing: * Is the plot interesting and realistic? * Are the characters real, or do they sound stagey and stiff? * Does your dialogue sound like two real people who actually having a discussion? * Are you describing too much, rather than letting the details unfold naturally? (This is also known by the old axiom show, don't tell.) * Does your idea still hold up? If not, change it to make it more original/marketable/interesting.) Starting to discover your flaws? manuscript! Great! Now rewrite that

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Step 6: Get Feedback

OK, here comes the scary part: It's time to let someone else look at your manuscript! But not just anyone. What you need here isn't cheerleading from loved ones. The most important feedback you can get is actual constructive criticism from people who know children's literature. There are a few places to look for honest feedback: Your local children's librarian. She's pretty busy but, if you develop a relationship and ask nicely, your friendly local librarian may be willing to take a gander at your story and offer some thoughts. Local writer's groups. Check the bulletin board at your library and poke around Craigslist to see if any active writing groups are accepting new members in your area. Meetup.com is worth a look, too. Online critique partners. At the CBI Clubhouse, Fightin' Bookworms can connect via our Critique Exchange and swap critiques with one another. It's a great way to make new writing friends, get feedback and sharpen your own critiquing skills. Professional Critique Services: Spending a bit of money and having a professional editor review your critique can be a great investment. This is the ultimate in objective, expert opinions. Here's some info about a service we offer: http://cbiclubhouse.com/clubhouse/get-a-personalizedcritique/
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Step 7: Revise Again!

Take the feedback you received in Step 6 and ask yourself the same questions you posed in Step 5. Chances are, you've got more work to do! And that's a good thing every time you revise, you make your manuscript stronger and more publisher. Get cracking!

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Step 8: Choose Your Path to Publication

Weve been working with aspiring childrens book writers for 23 years. And, for the majority of that time, our response to the question How do I get published has been the same: Craft a terrific manuscript, research publishers, assemble a strong submissions package, send it off.and wait. If youre one of the fortunate ones, your wait will be rewarded with a contract offer. If youre like most writers, the cycle will be completed by another rejection letter. Not the most fulfilling process, but it was the only process that worked. Placing your fortunes in the hands of an unknown, unseen editor is such an ingrained part of being a writer that its hard to imagine an alternative reality. And yet, an alternative reality is precisely whats been created. And each of us are citizens of this brave new world. Writers can, if they are so inclined, completely sidestep the traditional publishing structure and take on a more entrepreneurial role. Thanks to eBooks, apps and print on demand, the ability to create, promote and sell ones writing are now within the reach and budget of almost every writer. And, for the first time since Gutenberg, the very definition of book is being rewritten. For many in the writing community, the reaction to all of this has been panic. Thats easy to understand. Unlike the world of computers and technology, publishing has always evolved at a rather glacial pace. But now, the future of the written world is tied inextricably to the ones and zeros of the digital marketplace, and just like that writers, librarians, booksellers and publishers find themselves part of an industry
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that moves at light speed. After centuries crawling at a snails pace, the new velocity is startling. And scary. But heres the good news: the dust is settling, and the road ahead is finally becoming clearer. And, we believe, its a road that can take writers to some very exciting places. In order to fully appreciate this new path, each of us must first take a giant step back, and remember something fundamental: Were storytellers. And, for thousands of years, storytellers have known one vital fact its about the story, not the medium. Whether on cave walls, around a roaring fire, on papyrus, glossy paper or in the glow of an eReader, a story is still a story. Failing to understand every detail of how books got typeset, printed, bound and shipped never prevented anyone from writing a bestseller. Nor should your current level of knowledge regarding digital technology be in any way in impediment to thriving in the decades ahead. Just tell your story. Youll figure out the rest when you need to. Until then, know this: Today, For the First Time, The Author Has The Power to Choose His or Her Path to Publication Choice = power. And you now have choices. You can still go the traditional route, submitting your manuscripts to publishers. Its as valid a way of reaching the market as it ever was. But now you can choose to opt out of
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that model. Self-publish, create eBooks for the Nook and Kindle, build an App for the iPhone or Android. Its all possible, its all eminently doable and its all now a completely legitimate means of publishing your work and reaching millions. No more waiting around for someone elses arbitrary decision. You have control, so use it. And get your ego out of the way. Sure, its a thrill to see your book in a bookstore. And yeah, perhaps seeing it in online in eBook form isnt quite as compelling. But its not about you and your ideal of what being an author is. Its about your reader. And if a young person is moved by something you wrote, it matters little whether its on a printed page, an eReader or even a smart phone. Reach your readers how they want to be reached, and the rest will sort itself out. So, why are we telling you all of this? Because we want to change your definition of what it means to be published. Write apps. Write eBooks. Create videos. And don't worry if you don't yet understand these technologies. We do. And we'll teach you.

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Step 9: Research the Market!

If you've decided to take a shot at creating apps or eBooks, your next step will be to learn the lay of the digital landscape. The hows and whys of building and marketing your electronic creation. If you're at that stage, check out these sections of the CBI Clubhouse to find what you need: http://cbiclubhouse.com/clubhouse/step-2-choose-your-pathto-publication/ebook-publishing/ http://cbiclubhouse.com/clubhouse/step-2-choose-your-pathto-publication/app-publishing/ But perhaps you're saying eBooks and apps are great. But I still want to get a book published traditionally and see it in my local bookstore. We hear you. Traditional publishing isn't going anywhere and yep, there is something to be said for receiving a nice advance check and maybe royalties. And then there's the thrill of seeing your name on a bookstore shelf alongside the greats. So let's go on to the next step researching the publishing market and finding the right potential publishers for your manuscript. We've made that part easy. out exactly how to do it: Here's a quick video that lays

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Step 10: Submit Your Manuscript!

You've polished your manuscript, researched appropriate publishers and studied their submission guidelines. Now you're finally going to send your manuscript out into the world to be read by editors. Publishers will specify on their guidelines exactly what they want to see from authors. The submission packets usually fall into the categories below: Cover letter with the entire manuscript: When sending the entire manuscript, you only need to include a brief cover letter. This letter contains 3-4 short paragraphs: One with the title of the book, the word count, the age of the audience and the genre (humorous picture book for ages 3-6; historical middle grade mystery). The second paragraph gives a 1-4 sentence synopsis of the book, just enough information so the editor knows if the subject will appeal to her, or if she should pass the manuscript on to a colleague. Then list any publishing credits, awards and memberships in writing organizations (if you're a beginner, just leave this paragraph out). Finally, thank the editor for her time, and state that you've enclosed a SASE for her reply (see below). Query letter: A query is a one-page letter that describes the manuscript with enough detail so the editor knows if she wants to read the whole work. Many editors prefer to receive queries for the initial submission. A query letter has a similar format to a cover letter but the synopsis can be more detailed, and should be written in the tone of the manuscript (humorous,

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scary, rhythmic, etc.) Think of the synopsis as a pitch for your book, something that might appear on the jacket flap. Query letter chapters: with outline/synopsis and sample

For works longer than picture books and easy readers, editors may request that the query be accompanied by more detailed information. A separate synopsis can be several paragraphs long, and for novels gives a better picture of the plot and subplots as well as the major characters. An outline is used for nonfiction book proposals. Write either a short paragraph describing the focus of each chapter, or bullet the main points. Sample chapters for fiction and narrative nonfiction (such as a biography) mean the first two or three chapters. The two or three most unusual chapters can be sent for nonfiction without a story arc. SASEs, packaging, binding and more: Always include a SASE (self-addressed, stamped envelope) of the proper size and with enough postage for the editor's response. If you're sending a query letter only, a businesssize SASE with one first-class stamp is fine. If you're submitting manuscript pages, the envelope should be big enough to return everything to you. Some publishers say they will only respond to submissions if interested, and won't return manuscripts (larger packages mean a staff member has to stand in line at the post office and have the envelope hand-cancelled as per postal regulations). In those cases, a SASE isn't necessary. Don't staple, bind or otherwise attach pages together with
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anything except a paper clip. Don't mail by UPS, FedEx, overnight mail, or in any way that requires a signature. Don't put anything in the envelope other than your submission and SASE. Remember that publishers receive hundreds of manuscripts a month, and larger publishers funnel submissions through mail rooms. Keep your submission streamlined and hassle-free, and let your writing speak for itself. Ultimately, it's up to you to research exactly how an editor or publisher wants a submission presented. Some nonfiction publishers request bibliographies and an analysis of the competition, some fiction publishers want authors to present a marketing plan. If you follow the instructions to the best of your ability, and craft the most professional, polished submission you can, then you'll give yourself the best shot at persuading an editor to take a serious look at your work. There's one thing left to do.... Wait. After a few weeks (or maybe a few months), you'll hear back from the publisher. If it's a contract WOO HOO! It's time to celebrate! If it's a rejection, take a moment to be disappointed. Then, get back to work, secure in the knowledge that every great author has experienced the same thing. And probably many times over. Get back on the horse. Keep writing. Keep revising. submitting. Keep the faith. Your time will come. Keep

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Step 11: Give Yourself an Unfair Advantage

Congratulations! If you've made it this far, you're ready to embark on an amazing career writing children's books. And here's some more good news you've just made a friend in the business! Since 1990, Laura, Jon and the rest of the Children's Book Insider crew have helped thousands of folks get started writing children's books. The shelves of your local bookstore are packed with titles from Fightin' Bookworms who were once in the exact same place you are. Awardwinning and bestselling authors such as Anastasia Suen, Ken Derby and Anne McGee to name a few. If you enjoyed the straightforward, easy-to-follow advice we've offered in this eBook, just wait it's only the tip of the iceberg! You're about to discover the ultimate one-stop resource for aspiring children's writers! We have a special, ultra-low price for readers of this eBook. First, though, here's what you get by becoming a Fightin' Bookworm today :
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