Figurative Language Packet
Figurative Language Packet
Over the lilies there that wave And weep above a nameless grave! They wave: -- from out their fragrant tops Eternal dews come down in drops. They weep: -- from off their delicate stems Perennial tears descend in gems. Edgar Allan Poe, The Valley of Unrest
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Poem #1 Using Personification and Sensory Observations
The Process: 1. Study the object in detail, using the sense of sight. Look at it closely. Study every inch of it. 2. After observing your object for several minutes, brainstorm any words, thoughts, or phrases that come to mind. Dont stop to edit your words now. Just list everything you can to describe the object in detail using your sense of sight. 3. When you are done brainstorming, go through your list of words and decide which ones BEST describe your object. Circle or underline them. 4. Use these chosen words to write a first draft of your poem. Do not worry about the length of the poem or trying to rhyme. What you need to do is describe it in detail. The reader should be able to see it when he or she reads it. 5. Be sure to include personification at least once. Writing Space:
The field a scarlet gown -Lest I should be old fashioned I'll put a trinket on. #12 by Emily Dickinson
The light shade of purple Slowly fades into yellow. The end of many petals Looks like 100 hands reaching for you. The glowing petals feel As soft as a silk blanket. The petals look as graceful as a ballerina Spinning in a tutu.
The smell is as sweet and thick as a jar of honey. This is my beautiful flower. My Flower By Sarah Doelger, Grade 7
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Examples of poems that use metaphors:
Highlight the metaphors in the poems. The sky is an ocean, an endless boundless sea, A stormy sea of white-capped waves. The front is an endless line sweeping across the sky. A low-flying plane is a seagull struggling against the wind. The waves froth back and forth, rocking the boat that is me. The thunder is the song of whales calling in the distance. The lightning is a lighthouse calling me back. The classroom is a harbor where I am safe from the waves. The storm comes. The Sky is an Ocean
By Alex S. Grade 8
Hold fast to dreams For if dreams die Life is a broken-winged bird That cannot fly. Hold fast to dreams For when dreams go Life is a barren field Frozen with snow. Dreams By Langston Hughes
and release a smile, a small smile from the imprisoned cry I see. along Sing! Can we sing But connected as if we were light, hand in hand approaching sheltered in shade, under a strong sun? never be forgotten School Distant Light By Walid Khazindar Writing Space:
Brought us all together We might not get we will always be The end is But the years will At Illing Middle
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