UNIT 5 MANAGING ORGANISATIONAL STRUCTURE

Structure 5.0 5.1 1.2 1.3 5.4 5.5 5.6. 5.7 5.8 5.9 1.10 1.11 Objectives Warm Up: Ability to Influence and Lead Reading: The Role of a Manager Vocabulary: Leadership Speaking and Listening Language Focus: Degree of Probability Grammar: Modals Writing: Reports Pronunciation Summary Suggested Readings Answers to Check Your Progress

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OBJECTIVES

Managing organizational structures primarily involves a relationship between the leader and the team. In this unit you will learn about: managing people at all levels of organization. motivating teams dynamics of leadership managing conflicts taking and implementing decisions

5.1 WARM UP: ABILITY TO INFLUENCE AND LEAD

Read the following statements and rate yourself on a scale of 1 to 5 for each of the following statements. (1 = Not strong in this area, 5 = Very strong in this area). 1. Competence - the ability to do a job successfully 2. doing the job better than expected Discretion ability to distinguish between good and bad, right and wrong 1 1 1 2 2 2 3 3 3 4 4 4 5 5 5

3. Attitude - ability to maintain a positive attitude in negative situations 4. Honesty and Openness - ability to stand for principles appreciate and disapprove without bias/prejudice

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5. Communication

effective communication ability so that everyone understands convey decisions without being rude listen to everyone without hierarchical blockades deal with everyone sensitively

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Honestly rate yourself by counting the points. If you score between 10 and 20 You need to develop certain skills for effective leadership. If you score between 30 and 40-You already have skills to lead effectively except for a few things which need improvement. If you score 50 it means you would be successful in achieving personal as well as organizational goals.

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READING:THE ROLE OF A MANAGER

The passage below tells you about the role of a manager. Read it carefully and then answer the questions given at the end of the passage: The role of a manager is closely related to the powers that are given at different levels of the organization top level, middle level and lower level management. The function of a manager can be divided into formal and informal aspects. Formal functions are to win contracts, delegate duties, express opinion and takes judicious decisions. Informal functions of a manager are related to personal style, ability to influence/charisma, concern for colleagues at all levels i.e. the way a manager interacts with other people. A manager leads the team with example and takes the business towards the goals inspite of expected or unexpected changes. In the process s/he achieves personal as well as the companys objectives. A manager should be able to deal intelligently with tricky situations keeping in mind existing conflicts of interest in the organization. For this the executive should be able to resolve or manage his/her inner conflicts so that his/her decisions are strongly grounded in reality. Greater attention must be given to the organizational structure and creating a strong feeling of security or the organization will greatly suffer. Check Your Progress 1 Can you answer the given questions on the basis of your reading of the passage? Write out your answers in your own words. Check your answers with the key. 1. In how many aspects are the functions of a manager divided? .. 2. How does a manager lead a team? .. 3. How should an executive deal with a tricky situation?
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4. What should be done to avoid loss in an organization? 5. Name two duties that come under formal and informal functions of a manager.

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VOCABULARY: LEADERSHIP

Check Your Progress 2 1. Insert suitable words from the box to complete the following text on Leadership. Check your answers with the Answer key. credibility commitment company shared profit expenditure relationships violated led rank trust

There are many aspects that bind employees and corporations together but it is a leader who builds _______. He or she is not primarily a _________ generating robot or someone who ensures that the _______ should survive and prosper at any cost. Such leaders are themselves ________ by ________ and not principles. They abandon their policies as soon as profit graph changes. Their _________ to the organization takes a new turn as the profit dips. They talk about controlling the ________ but keep drawing astronomical salaries for themselves whereas equality and opportunity rights are _________ for junior staff. Today Leaders in industrial organizations must understand that leadership is not a position or a ________; it is primarily and fundamentally a relationship of ________ between leaders and other employees. The more the leaders honor this trust, the greater will be their ________ with their staff and the more effective will be the ability to build and achieve a __________ vision. 2. Here is draft of a memo. In an advertisement agency, groups of people operate as teams. One of the groups has been a troublemaker who refuse to improve. Even the verbal warnings have had no effect. The GM writes a memo to the Creative Head. Fill in the words from the box to complete the text. MEMORANDUM From : Subject: The General Manager Disciplinary Action To Date : : The Creative Head 18/4

A number of ________ have been made against the Visualizing Department. There have been reports of unnecessary delay in completing the ________ tasks. The Marketing Head has provided _________ where three crucial presentations were cancelled due to the carelessness of this department. The Finance Department has already voiced _______ over the probable loss to the organization due to _______ of two contracts. Inspite of _______ warning on 16.01.2003 and _________ of improvement nothing has changed. Therefore you are requested to give a clarification within three days or face disciplinary ________ as per the company rules. action clarification concern verbal assigned assurance presentation instances complaints cancellation

5.4 SPEAKING AND LISTENING

1. Listen to this conversation carefully. Here workers are discussing the work environment of their organization. Practice the dialogue with your friend. Worker A: We can come and go to our work as we please. You know, we follow flexi-timing. B: A: It cant be possible. There should be registers where the workers check-in and check-out. Would you believe this? We may even be asked to decide how much of the profit to share with our employers and how much to invest in the company. You must be joking.! No, the employers feel that the workers must participate in the profit sharing of the company and be stake-holders. Thats amazing! The workers will soon decide their own salaries soon. In this way, we will try and deserve our salaries. Your company must be the only one with such a democratic structure!

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Check Your Progress 3 1. Here are prompts for 5 pairs of discussion and responses. Write them down and then check your answers with the audio/transcript. A: It shouldnt /happened. There/ways/asking/people/go. B: Jenny couldnt keep/office/policy. She/corrected. More/once. A: I/really/excited/get /job. I/going/part/organization/has/international reputation. B: Yes, they/structured team/salaries/good. Work/routine/different/interesting A: I cant cope/gadgets. I can get training /competent teachers but management/ feels/expensive B: No, negotiations are going on /training colleges/reducing/cost. Now/ department/arrange/training. A: It/me/hour/reach/work. I/tired/boss does not /understand. B: Have/spoken/him/this? Does he/ about/problem? 3. Write out the following jumbled speech in the right order. Listen to the audio cassette and check if you have got the sequence right.
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1. 2. 3. 4. 5. 6. 7. 8. 9.

Of equal importance will be the continued focus on development financing. Friends, after bailing out of the first quarter successfully. First operation turn around and its timing and sequence. Heads of the units are requested to form core teams. Each unit will frame action plans and set targets Today let us pledge to work towards reaching the top together. The targets will have to be achieved within a defined period. There are two issues which take top priority. Thirdly, we are preparing a blue print to revitalise the ailing units.

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LANGUAGE FOCUS:DEGREE OF PROBABILITY

1. Situations often require that the speaker express their meaning with precision. The degree of probability has to be defined. 100% 75% 50%25% 0% Possible Unlikely Impossible Certain I am certain of the profit. Likely It is likely to be installed today. It is possible that targets may not be met this quarter due to floods. It is unlikely that he would be called for an investigation. It is impossible that she will be called again.

Check Your Progress 4 Use the suitable degree of probability to complete the sentences. answers with the key. Check your

1. His crime is such that it is _______ that the management will let him continue as supervisor. 2. The changes in the purchase department will make a definite mark, I am ______ of it. 3. The new manager has sent in his letter of acceptance. He is ___________ to join tomorrow. 4. We understand your situation, it is ____________ that you may get leave. 5. It is ________ that we will get permission to buy new furniture for our department. 2. Here are some ways which you could use to get people to do things. Requesting Id like you to __________ please. Could you ask ________ to _______ for me? Could you _________ please ? Do you think you could _________ ? Would you mind _________ ing ________ ? Granting Permission or refusing Sure, go ahead. By all means Im afraid thats not possible, because _________ I wont be able to ________, because ________ Im sorry but __________ No, Im afraid you cant, because ___________

Criticising/Complaining Im sorry to have to say this but __________ I think you may have forgotten ___________ It may have slipped your mind, but _________ There may have been a misunderstanding about __________ Im afraid norms have been forgotten ___________ Appreciating/encouraging Thanks for your co-operation, without it __________ I would like to extend may personal appreciation ___________ We could do it because of team effort ___________ Each member contributed beyond ___________ We are back in business because of _____________ Check Your Progress 5 Which of the above expressions will you use in these situations? 1. 2. 3. 4. 5. 6. 7. 8. 9. 10. Voicing your concern for staff conflicts Refusing permission of leave. Thanking staff for the support. Requesting staff for the extra work. Negotiating differences. Reminding of pending work. Granting permission to purchase material. Make people work for you. Reminding norms of organization. Paying compliment.

5.6 GRAMMAR: MODALS

The modal verbs are a special group of auxiliary verbs. We use them before other verbs to express certain meanings-for example permission, ability, possibility, certainity. We list below some of the modals and their functions. Can Could Would Will Shall Should May Have got to Must Need = (ability; requests; permission) = (ability, possibility; polite requests) = (polite request) = (offer) (expressing the future) = suggestion, offer = advice = possibility = obligation = obligation = necessity
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Check Your Progress 6 Underline the correct option. The first one is done for you. May/should/mustnt I help you? 1. If you travel to U.K. you can/should/must have a visa. 2. You shouldnt/dont have to /couldnt laugh at old people. 3. Passengers must/must not/should not smoke in the toilets.

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I think you should/must/may eat less and exercise more. You mustnt/may not/neednt tell me if you dont want to. You may/have to should drive on the left in Britain. She makes new clothes every week. She can/could/must have plenty of money She doesnt answer the phone. She mustnt cant/shouldnt be in her office.

5.7 WRITING: REPORTS

Check Your Progress 7 Imagine that your Director has asked you to find out the precautions and preparations needed to arrange for the disaster management provisions in your company. These are the notes youve made. Draft a report to your director by expanding the notes into paragraphs. Identified Dangers 1. Fire-particularly in areas where a lot of paper is stored 2. Earthquake cracks due to previous earthquake. 3. Lightening inadequate safety measures Proposals 1. Fire frightening equipment to be maintained regularly 2. Fire fighting training to the support staff. 3. Display of safety regulations in the area. 4. Hooters to be installed signal warning 5. Exit outlets to be highlighted 6. Important telephone numbers-Hospital, Fire Brigade, Doctors, officials. 7. Action committee to be formed. Begin your report as follows: To : Mr. Sunil Sen, Director From : (Your name) Date :

Before you write your report we would like to offer a few suggestions. Steps In Writing Reports Before you begin writing a report, you must ask yourself a number of questions: what is the purpose of the report? What problem or problems are you expected to solve? Is it to pass on information, or persuade someone to take a particular course of action? Or to answer a question? Who are your readers? When is the report due? etc. After you have a clear idea of the kind of problem that you are expected to investigate, you may begin the actual work of research and collection of facts. It may be a good idea to write down your statement of purpose; it will help you to be precise and remind you of your focus. The procedure leading to the writing of the report would involve six distinct stages: 1. investigating the sources of information 2. taking notes 3. interpreting and analyzing the facts 4. writing the outline of the report 5. writing the actual report 6. editing and revising the report. The Format of the Report Most reports have at least three and sometimes four parts. These include: Introduction, Body, Conclusion, and Recommendations. The introduction should

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state the subject and the purpose of the report. It may also include any background information that is necessary for the reader to follow the report. The introduction is often a good place to refer briefly to any conclusions that may be drawn. In the body of the report, the writer must include a clearly organized account of the subject of the report, e.g. the results of the survey carried out, an account of the fire in the factory and the damage to life and property. The conclusion of the report contains a summary of the findings and their significance. Finally, in the recommendations are included any suggestions that the writer may make-based on the facts of the situation. The recommendations indicate any practical course of action that may be taken. These are often the most important part of the report, and their adoption or rejection depends on how they are presented.

5.8 PRONUNCIATION
These are some of the words which occur in the unit. Listen how these words are pronounced. Now practice saying the words: A. B. 1. 5. 1. 5. Product Research Employee Customer 2. 6. 2. 6. Accounts Dispatch Organise Marketing 3. 3. Problem Department 4. 4. Purchase Develops

5.9

SUMMARY

In our professional life, we often have to work in teams, perhaps take up the leadership of a team. In this unit, we tried to give you linguistic competence in managing various levels of the organization, participating as a team member as well as a and a leader.

5.10 SUGGESTED READINGS

Adelstein, M.E. and Sparrow, W.K. (1983) Business Communications. New York: Harcourt Brace Jovanovich Rai, U, and Rai, S.M. (1989) Business Communication. Publishing House Mumbai: Himalaya
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Sharma R.C. and Mohan, K. (1978) Business Correspondence and Report Writing. New Delhi: Tata McGraw Hill. Thill, J.V. and Bovee, C.L. (1993) Excellence in Business Communication. New York: McGraw Hill.

5.11 ANSWERS TO CHECK YOUR PROGRESS

Reading

Check Your Progress 1 Possible answers to the questions. 1 2 3 4 5 The functions of a manager can be divided into formal and informal aspects. A manager leads the team by example. An executive should resolve his/her inner conflicts so that his/her decision are strongly grounded in reality. Greater attention must be given to the organizational structure and creating a strong feeling of security or the organization would suffer. Formal duties- delegate duties and win contracts Informal duties Charisma and concern for colleagues.

Check Your Progress 2 1. There are many aspects that bind employees and corporations together but it is a leader who builds relationships. He or she is not primarily a profit generating robot or someone who ensures that the company should survive and prosper at any cost. Such leaders are themselves led by policies and not principles. They abandon their policies as soon as the profit graph changes. Their commitment to the organization takes a new turn as the profit dips. They talk about controlling the expenditure but keep drawing astronomical salaries for themselves whereas equality and opportunity rights are violated for junior staff. Today Leaders in industrial organizations must understand that leadership is not a position or a rank; it is primarily and fundamentally a relationship of trust between leaders and other employees. The more the leaders honor this trust, the greater will be their credibility with their staff and the more effective will be the ability to build and achieve a shared vision. 2. complaints; assigned; instances; concern; cancellation; verbal; assurance; action;

Check Your Progress 3 1. A: B: A: B: A: B: A: B: 2. It shouldnt have happened. There are ways of asking people to go. Jenny couldnt keep up with the office policies. She was corrected for indiscipline more than once. I am really very excited about getting this job. I am going to be part of an organization that has an international reputation. Yes, they have structured terms, and their salaries are good. And the work is not routine and boring, but different and interesting.. I cant cope with gadgets. I can get training from competent teachers but the management feels its expensive. No, negotiations are going on with training colleges for reducing the cost. Now the department will arrange for the training. It takes me an hour to reach to work, I get tired but the boss does not understand my problem. Have you spoken to him about this? Does he know about the problem? 2, 8, 3, 1, 9, 6, 7, 8, 9

Check Your Progress 4

1. His crime is such that it is unlikely that the management will let him continue as supervisor. 2. The changes in the purchase department will make a definite mark. I am certain of it. 3. The new manager has sent in his letter of acceptance. He is likely to join tomorrow. 4. We understand your situation, it is possible that you may get leave. 5. It is unlikely that we will get permission to buy new furniture for our department. Check Your Progress 5 (Expressions to be used in various situations) 1. Voicing your concern for staff conflicts/Negotiating differences/Reminding norms of organization/Reminders of pending work. I am sorry to have to say this but. I am afraid norms have been forgotten. It might take alarming shape if .. 2. Refusing permission of leave I am afraid thats not possible, because .. I wont be able to ,because.. No, I am afraid you cant, because. 3. Requesting staff for extra work/make people work for you. Id like you to .please. Could you..please? Do you think you could.? Would you mind..+ing? 4. Thanking staff for support/showing appreciation Thanks for your co-operation, without it.. I would like to extend my personal appreciation.. We could only have achieved our target because of team effort... Check Your Progress 6 1. 2. 3. 4. 5. 6. 7. 8. Must Shouldnt Must not Should Neednt Have to Must Mustnt

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Check Your Progress 7 To : Mrs. Sunil Sen, Director From : Your Name Date : 25th November 2003

After the survey it was found that we need protection from three possible dangers Fire, Earthquake and lightening. The warehouse is the most sensitive area because of the large amount of paper stored and inadequate safety measures. The cracks of the last Earthquake have widened and the trees around the factory have been burnt by the lightening.

As we are placed in the area which is prone to the above mentioned dangers, the following precautions and improvements are necessary to avert major disasters. Fire fighting equipment should be maintained regularly and staff should be trained to handle them. Safety regulations should be displayed at various places. At the time of any disaster, hooters should be sounded to signal warning and exit outlets to be highlighted for safe evacuation of the people. Important telephone numbers such as those of Hospitals, Five-Brigade, Doctors, Company Officials should be displayed at various places. Last, but not the least, an Action Committee should be formed and trained to handle the situation calmly. xyz Manager.

UNIT 6 MEETINGS
Structure 6.0 6.1 6.2 6.3 6.4 6.5 6.6 6.7 6.8 6.9 6.10 6.11 6.12 6.13 Objectives Warm up Reading: A Successful Meeting Speaking: One to One Meetings Language Focus: Opening, Middle and Close Study Skills : Editing Listening: Criteria for Successful Meetings Vocabulary Grammar: Reporting Verbs Writing: Memos Pronunciation: Stress According to Part of Speech Summary Suggested Readings Answers to Check Your Progress

6.0

OBJECTIVES

Conducting or participating in meetings is an important business skill. In this Unit you will learn about formal and informal meetings about the process of business meetings the role of the chairperson and participants how to express your ideas and views how to make suggestions, how to express agreement and disagreement how to write agendas, and follow up memos to practice the language of meetings

6.1

WARM UP

Have a look at these pictures which suggest two kinds of meetings. What do you think are the major differences between the two kinds of meetings? Write down at least three possible differences.

Check Your Progress 1 Match your points on the differences in the two kinds of meetings with the ones given below: Group meetings are generally more formal than one to one meetings. Group meetings are more structured and planned and generally last longer. They involve a large number of people and must be chaired by somebody. They also follow the procedure of agenda and minutes, which may not be the case with one to one meetings. However, one to one meetings are not chance conversations but meetings with a purpose where certain objectives need to be achieved. Hence some kind of planning also needs to be done for such meetings to ensure the desired outcome. The language of group meetings is also more formal than one to one meetings.

6.2

READING: A SUCCESSFUL MEETING

The passage that follows tells you how to have meetings that are both effective and fruitful. Read the following passage and discuss the questions that follow. How can you make Meetings work for you?

Meetings are central to most organizations for people need to take decisions based on shared information and opinions. How well you present yourself and your ideas, and how well you work with other people is crucial to your career. Conducting a Meeting Call a meeting only when it is essential and be very clear about its purpose. Meetings called on a routine basis tend to lose their point. If you are sure you need to call a meeting, circulate a memo several days in advance, specifying the time, place and objectives, issues to be discussed, other participants and preparation expected. Meetings should be short, not more than an hour. Six is the optimum number of participants for a good working meeting. Larger meetings can be productive as brainstorming sessions for ideas, provided participants can speak freely without feeling they will be judged. A successful meeting always leads to action. Decisions should take up the bulk of the minutes of the meeting, including the name of the person delegated to each task, and a deadline for its completion. Make sure you circulate the minutes after the meeting and then again before the next Meetings one. Draw out quieter members of the group. Encouragement helps create a relaxed and productive atmosphere. Attending the Meeting Even if the meeting is informal, it is always advisable to prepare a few key points in note form to put across or discuss. Dont memorize notes or read them out like a sermon. This inhibits your natural gestures: the eye contact and body language is essential for effective communication. If you cannot answer a question dont be afraid to say you dont know. Phrase your criticisms and proposals positively. Try to offer solutions rather than to complain. Check Your Progress 2 1. i. Answer these questions on the basis of what you read in the passage. Write out your answers in your own words as far as possible. Check your answers with the Answer key. Why are meetings necessary? What should you do when you decide that a meeting is necessary? Name five things that should be taken care of by the person who chairs the meeting.

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What should be done once a decision is taken? Name three things that participants should keep in mind. Here are some terms associated with formal meetings. You were introduced to most of these in the above passage. Complete the sentences that follow by inserting them. arrangements items agenda consensus conduct participants memo venue

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Minutes circulate i. ii. iii. iv. v. vi. vii. viii.

The chairperson or his/her secretary sends a _____________ to invite participants to a meeting. The ___________ for the meeting is also mentioned in the memo. The _____________ of the previous meeting are circulated to participants The organizer or his/her staff makes all the ________________ for the meeting. The chairperson ______________ the meeting. __________________ take part in the meeting. The ____________ is discussed ___________ by item. _________________ is arrived at on issues under discussion __________________ of the meeting are jotted down during the meeting and then sent to all participants and concerned persons.

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SPEAKING: ONE TO ONE MEETINGS

Arranging to Meet Listen to this conversation where two persons are making an arrangement for a meeting. Pay special attention to the underlined expressions which highlight the language used in such situations. Say them aloud for practice. A. B. A. B. A. B. A. B. How about meeting at The Moti Mahal? That should be fine. What time? What about after the conference? Would you like to meet for dinner? That would be great. I suggest that I come and pick you up from Pragati Maidan. Lets say 7 pm. Good idea. See you at 7 then. Bye. Bye.

Check Your Progress 3 1. Here are prompts for 5 pairs of suggestions and responses. Write them out and then check your answers with the audio cassette. The tape script is given in the Answer Key.

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How about / meeting / lunch / today? Not convenient / tomorrow? Would you / go / the electronics exhibition / Saturday? Ok / 4 pm. Could we / meet /a restaurant / Friday evening? Yes / Mc Donalds, C P. Would you / watch / the cricket match / on Sunday? Yes / great. Should we / a movie / this weekend? Not possible / next weekend. Write out the following jumbled conversation in the right order. Listen to the audio Meetings cassette and check if you got the sequence right. Practice saying it with a friend. The tape script is given in the Answer key. i. ii. iii. Mr Bakshi : 6th November, 7 oclock then.. Ms Jain : Hello Mr Bakshi, this is Sunidhi Jain from Bhopal. How are you? Ms Jain : Fine, thank you. Im coming over to Delhi in the first week of November for the Trade Fair at Pragati Maidan. Will you be in Delhi at that time? iv. Mr Bakshi: Yes sure. In fact we are participating in the Trade Fair this year. v. Mr Bakshi : Just a minute, let me check my diary. ..OK, That should be fine. vi. Ms Jain : Thats great. I suggest 7 oclock in the restaurant. vii. Mr Bakshi : Gautam Bakshi speaking. viii. Ms Jain : Oh good! How about a meeting on 6th evening at The Village? ix. Ms Jain: Thanks a lot. See you then. x. Mr Bakshi : Yes, looking forward to meeting you. Bye then. xi. Ms Jain : Goodbye. xii. Mr Bakshi : Ms Jain! It is good to hear from you. Im fine thanks, how are you?

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LANGUAGE FOCUS: OPENING, MIDDLE AND CLOSE

Here is a commonly used method of opening meetings along with some standard / formulaic language: Opening a Meeting : The 4 step method Step 1 : Open the meeting. Tell everybody that you are going to begin Thank you for coming. Its ten oclock. Lets start. OK, shall we begin? Right then, can we get started?

Step 2 : Explain the objectives. Tell them why you are having the meeting Were here today to discuss. What we want to do today is reach a decision.. Our aim is to. The purpose of this meeting is to. Step 3 : Present the agenda. Tell them in order what you are going to discuss.

On the agenda youll see there are three items. Have you all seen a copy of the agenda? I suggest we take the next item on the agenda.

Step 4 : Get initial contributions. Ask someone to begin the discussion. Id like to ask Sunidhi to. Can we hear from Mr Bakshi.. Can we have Ms Verma tell us about

Check Your Progress 4 Practice the expressions in the speech balloons by applying them to these situations. Assume the role of the chairperson.

You are meeting to discuss / decide about i. a welcome party for a new colleague a new product that your company is launching an important business visitor a trade fair in which your company is participating

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Now listen to one possible way of how a chairperson could open the meetings in these situations. You may refer to the tape script in the Answer Key. Middle and close of a meeting Here is a language checklist which you can use in a meeting:

Stating an opinion

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It seems to me. In my view.. I tend to think.. Its obvious that I believe.. Clearly

Asking for an opinion

Could we hear from. What do you think about.. Whats your view? Any comments?

Interrupting

Excuse me, may I ask for a clarification on this.. If I may interrupt Sorry to interrupt but..

Handling Interruptions Yes, go ahead. Sorry, please let him finish.. Can I come to that later, please Thats not really relevant at this stage.

Moving the discussion on Can we go on to think about.. Lets move on to the next point.. Now we come to the question of.

Closing the Meeting I think weve covered everything So weve decided I think we can close the meeting now. Thats it then. The next meeting will be Check Your Progress 5 Which of the above expressions would you use in these situations?

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Preventing someone from interrupting . Stating your opinion . Asking to interrupt . Closing the meeting . Asking for a clarification . Inviting someones opinion . Asking for comments . Moving on to the next point on the agenda .

Expressing Agreement/Disagreement During meetings you often express Agreement or Disagreement. Here is language that could help you do so more appropriately. STRONG Im in complete agreement I quite agree I couldnt agree more Yes definitely Exactly Precisely STRONG I disagree completely. Thats out of the question. I wouldnt say that at all. Of course not. Thats ridiculous. Check Your Progress 6 Role Play Agreement NEUTRAL I agree Youre right there I think youre right Yes and. Thats true. Thats right. Disagreement NEUTRAL I dont agree. Thats not how I see it. I wouldnt say that. I think you are wrong. I disagree.

Work with a friend or by yourself to complete these short dialogues. Take it in turns to read the first statement and to reply according to the instructions. i. ii. iii. iv. v. I think the report is too long. Its too late to make any changes. I feel we all need to work together. In my opinion, we need to cut down expenses on entertainment. We must wait till next year to start this project. (disagree strongly). (agree). (agree strongly) (disagree) (disagree, state the opposite opinion)
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Listen to the tape script for model answers.

6.5

STUDY SKILLS: EDITING

Whenever you write a piece of text, it is always important to edit what you read. You may say of course we do that. But what do you think we must be careful about? We must be careful about mistakes of grammar, spelling, punctuation and so on. In the text below we have extrapolated some extra words in the text. Your knowledge of grammaticality should help you spot them. The text below is about Meetings. There are 9 lines out of which six contain mistakes: an extra word in the line. Find the extra words. Cross them out and write them in the column on the right. Put a tick mark for the lines that have no extra words. The first two lines have been done for you as examples. Check Your Progress 7 i. ii. iii. iv. v. vi. vii. viii. ix. 2. Lets look at the diary for today. I see weve got a teleconference meeting meeting this morning. Whats happened to good old fashioned meetings, with ____ everyone in the same room only discussing things. With all the hot-desking ________ that goes on in offices these days, not to be mention companies outsourcing ________ work out, soon well never meet our colleagues at all! I cant imagine though ________ that well be able to do without business lunches, however well e-commerce ________ takes off. I see were lunching along with some clients today. That shouldnt ________ be too bad. The boss may be a tough guy, but he is also a bit of a foodie lover, _______ so well probably go to a nice restaurant. _________ Find the meanings of these words in the dictionary. Some of these words are new and you might find them more easily on the web. If you still have problems, have a look at the answer key but only after you have been unsuccessful with the other resources. i. teleconference ii. hot-desking iii. outsourcing

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LISTENING CRITERIA FOR SUCCESSFUL MEETINGS

You were taught to read and write in school. But did you ever have a listening comprehension class? Most of you would say no. Listening comprehension has indeed been a neglected area in English language teaching. Teachers have imagined that we just pick up listening in the course of our student life. But dont you think that you would have been better off if you had been trained? It is never too late! Let us practice the skill of listening. This would help us in our overall proficiency in the language. Read the questions given below. Listen to the tape carefully and make notes as you read. Listen to it again and complete your notes. Spend some time completing your answers. Do they match with those given at the end of the unit? Check Your Progress 8 Listen to this recording on Meetings and answer the following questions: i. Why does the speaker find meetings bothersome? Why is it necessary to look at meetings as a means rather than an end? How can a meeting achieve its desired result? What do you understand by Pet peeves .. In the drivers seat . To map possible routes You may now check your answers by comparing them with sample answers given in the key.

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6.7

VOCABULARY

Confidence in a language is often a result of having a large vocabulary. And confidence leads to fluency. In each unit, we have given you several exercises in vocabulary development. Do complete them carefully, and use these words in real life.

Check Your Progress 9 1. Needs decision Insert suitable words from the box to complete the following text on Decision Making Meetings. Check your answers with the Answer key. organization facilitate ideas participants discuss Secrets of Better Decision Making Meetings While ______________ meetings are essential to any ______________and to getting work done, most meetings leave us still looking for a _____________ and tired . A good meeting should _____________decision-making, assist people in taking responsibility, energize the ___________________, and contribute to building _______________within the organization. Successful meetings are ones where attention is paid to three areas; content, __________ and process. Selection of content is crucial. All too often meetings are called to ___________ issues which would be better resolved with a couple of phone calls while at the same time core issues remain unmentioned. The key is to focus meetings around _________________. Secondly, the design of the meeting can hinder or _____________ the decision making, problem solving or the informational task at hand. In designing, attention needs to be given to idea generation methods, decision processes, agenda, time frames, problem-solving steps, etc. Third, and most often ignored, is making sure the individual and group _____________of the participants are met. Are people participating, included, feel that there is room for their __________? Are dysfunctional behaviors openly dealt with, is there positive energy in the group, are people committed to the task at hand and enthused about the way the group is working to complete the task? 2. Here is the beginning of a meeting. Can you complete the text by using suitable words from the box? improve decline comments meeting begin remarks agenda discuss clear effective team effort key issues
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support design

Chairperson: Right then, I think we should _____________ now, its ten oclock. Were here today to ____________________ some of the reasons for the __________________ in profits which has affected the company. At the end of the _______________ we should have a ______________ idea of what measures we should take to ____________ the situation. Youve all seen the __________________. Id like to ask if anyone has any _________________ on it before we start. Voices: No / its fine / etc. Chairperson: Can I ask Ms Anand to start with his _____________.

6.8

GRAMMAR : REPORTING VERBS

1. Reporting Verbs Reporting what was said When you write minutes of a meeting, it is useful to report the ideas, rather than every sentence. To do this, you need to use a variety of reporting verbs. Here is a list that you might find useful: C A : I think we should raise the budget. CA suggested raising the budget. M B : I assure you I will find out more. MB promised to find out more. RJ : It might be possible to arrange extra funds. R J mentioned the possibility of extra funds. D M : I am not so sure if there will be extra funding. DM wondered if there would be extra funding. Here are some more examples of the use of reporting verbs while writing or speaking about a meeting. Three issues were discussed. It was decided to delay action until the next meeting. Everyone agreed to the proposal. The issue of salary was brought up. The Sales Manager reported on the results of the trade fair. Five strategies were recommended. SB explained the reason for the delay. Check Your Progress 10 Can you report the following statements? You may invent the names of the speakers. The first one is done for you as an example. i. ii. iii. iv. v. vi. vii. viii. ix. x. xi. xii. The report will definitely be in by tomorrow. Ans: Mr Singhal assured us that the report would be in by the next day. What are the sales figures of last week? You still havent gathered the feedback from your department. Please do so by the end of the week. The delegation is expected to arrive next week. Is it necessary to make the scheme compulsory for all employees? I dont think the new flexi-timings are acceptable to all our employees. Why dont we ask an advertising agency to design our campaign? Can someone give me an update on the progress of construction work at our new site? I am not happy with the people coming late for the meeting. Can I see the absentee record of the Sales department? It is absolutely essential to dispatch the goods this weekend. We have gained two important clients through the Trade Fair.

6.9

WRITING: MEMOS

A very important customer is going to visit your city for a weekend. You need to prepare for his visit. He is visiting your city for the first time. Imagine that a meeting has been held to discuss the issue on the basis of the agenda given below.

AGENDA 1 Hotels Which hotel should you reserve? Why? Who should make the reservation? How can you make sure that his stay is comfortable? 2 Airport Who should meet the visitor at the airport? 3 Lunches and dinners Where should you take your visitor for lunch and dinner? Should you check first to see what kind of food he likes? 4 Entertainment Where should you take him in the evenings? 5 Gift

What kind of gift should you buy him? When should you give it to him?

6 Welcome letter What advice would you give him about your city and visit by way of helping him to prepare for his visit. 7 AOB Any Other Business The Minutes of the Meeting are also given. We will discuss Minutes in detail in the next Unit. Minutes of the Meeting held on 20 June 2003 to plan for Mr. Sampaths visit to the city The Following members were present: Mr. Dinesh Mehra Mr. Vikas Puri Ms. Deepti Sinha Ms. Harvinder Kaur Mr. Joseph Stephen Ms. Salma Sheikh Ms. Shilpa Gupta Mr. Sunil Rawat could not attend the meeting as he was on leave. Mr. Sampaths visit was discussed in detail and the following decisions were taken. Hotel Reservation: Mr. Vikas Puri will book accommodation for Mr. Sampath at the Park Royal hotel in Nehru Place. Airport: Vikas will also receive the guest at the airport and bring him over to the hotel personally. Meals: On 1st July he will have lunch with the MD at 1 pm at Park Royal and on 2nd July the GMs will have lunch with him at the Taj. We will fix up dinner for the two days of his visit according to his preference and convenience. Ms. Deepti Sinha will take care of this Entertainment: Since this is Mr. Sampaths first visit to Delhi, it was presumed that he might be interested in sightseeing and shopping. Deepti and Vikas will
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Check Your Progress 11 Now write a memo to your boss with your suggestions. After you have written the memo, compare it with the one provided as a sample memo in the Answer key. Writing Memo Before you write the Memo, we will show you the format of the Memo, its functions and chief characteristics. As the dictionary definition states, a memo is a message in writing sent by one person or department to another within the same business organization. This is the reason why a memo is sometimes also described as an inter-office memo: a message sent from one office to another (of the same company). Memos are use for a variety of purposes: from making a brief announcement to submitting or circulating an in-house (=within the organization) report. Among the main uses of the memo as a carrier of internal messages are the following: Making announcements, requests, policy statements, notices, reminders, suggestions, acknowledgements, congratulations, informal invitations, thank yous, etc. Confirming decisions arrived at (or points settled) face to face meetings or telephone conversations with colleagues, workers, etc. For submitting or circulating in-house reports, e.g., preliminary survey reports, progress reports, recommendation reports, investigation reports, evaluative reports, and so on. Such memos may run to several pages and use the convention of formal reports like headings, graphics, tables, appendices, etc.

These purpose, for which memos are mainly used, can be seen as falling into the following functional categories: 1. To inform: Announcements, policy statements, notices and reports fall in the category. No immediate response is required, but the receivers are expected to note the information and conform to its requirements in their future behaviour, wherever applicable. To elicit a quick and definite response: Suitably drafted memos can help elicit quick and definite responses where requests or notices are involved.

2.

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To confirm the decisions/conclusions arrived at a face to face meeting, or in a telephone conversation, and to create a permanent record of the decisions/conclusions.

Style of Memos As one of the main instruments of communication at the workplace, workaday memos have gradually evolved a distinctive style. They are written by persons in a hurry for persons who are probably in a greater hurry. Hence, an ideal memo should reveal its message to the reader at one quick glance. What is even more important is that the memo should have an appearance which will tell the receiver that it can be read quickly. If, for example, the memo looks like several paragraphs of closely typed English prose, it is likely to be put aside to be read later or not read at all. So, if your memo is not a report, make it brief and make it look brief. Given below is the format of a memo. MEMORANDUM Date: 19/5 From: MD TO: Managers (Sales, Prod, Fin, Exp., Q.C.) SUBJECT: Export batch No. DO-9951 (To Indonesia) Matra Importers, Jakarta, have informed us that the last batch of scooters exported to them has the following problems: No rear-view mirrors have been supplied though they were included in the order Base plates of 32 scooters were found to be loose 32 scooters have been supplied in sports grey colour though this colour was not included in the order 16 scooters had no tool kits.

Please come to my office at 11 am tomorrow to discuss the matter. I will expect the concerned managers to bring with them explanations as well as remedies. To Sum Up: 1. 2. 3. 4. 5. 6. 7. Get to your main message directly. Cut out every sentence, in fact every word, that does not contribute to your message. Make your sentences short and simple. Always think of the readers time State your subject very precisely Itemize the points Pay attention to the Layout
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Now write the memo on the basis of the agenda given abovethe answer is given in the answer key.

6.10 PRONUNCIATION: STRESS ACCORDING TO PART OF SPEECH

Look at the following words which can be used both as nouns and verbs. The stress falls on the first syllable if is a noun and the second if it is a verb. Now listen to the audio cassette and countercheck your pronunciation. For example Noun Verb Increase increase Can you mark the stresses in the following words and read them out aloud: Noun Verb Present present Export export Record record Import import Desert desert Decrease decrease Progress progress Refund refund Process process

6.11 SUMMARY
In this unit, through various activities and exercises, we have guided you through the following aspects of meetings: the difference between formal and informal meetings the format of meetings the formulaic language which is required for opening, middle and closing of meetings criteria for a successful meeting (a listening activity)

In the Grammar section, we give you practice in reporting verbs which are required when you write minutes of meeting. As a follow up to a meeting, we may have to write a memo to the staff. We have given you the format and style of a memo. We have also given you practice in writing a memo.

6.12 SUGGESTED READINGS

Jones, L and Alexander R, Comfort, J. 1996. Effective Meetings. Oxford: Oxford University Press. New International Business English. Cambridge : Cambridge University Press. Sweeney, S. Communicating in Business. Cambridge: Cambridge University Press.

6.13 ANSWERS TO CHECK YOUR PROGRESS

Check Your Progress 2 Note: Answers to questions iii & v provide more points than the questions ask for. This is for the learners benefit. 1. i. Why are meetings necessary? Meetings provide you with a platform where you can share your views and ideas with other people in the department / company and take decisions based on these shared ideas and opinions. Hence they are a necessary tool for communication and decision making.

ii. What should you do when you decide that a meeting is necessary? Once you decide to call a meeting, you must circulate a memo to all those who are expected to be present for the meeting, well in advance. The memo must state the time, place and venue of the meeting. It must also have information on the issues to be discussed, what will be expected by way of participation from those who are to attend the meeting as well as which members have been called for the meeting. iii. Name five things that should be taken care of by the person who chairs the meeting. call a meeting only when absolutely necessary set clear objectives for the meeting circulate a memo with necessary information well in advance do not call more than six people unless necessary keep the meeting short not more than an hour encourage all members to participate, especially the quieter ones ensure that decisions are taken circulate minutes of the meeting iv. What should be done once a decision is taken? Once the chairperson of the meeting has taken a decision, s/he should assign responsibilities to the members and then set deadlines for the completion of the assigned work. v. Name three things that participants should keep in mind. prepare a few key points before the meeting and take them along to the meeting dont memorize information speak as naturally as possible dont be afraid to admit if you do not know something that you are asked be positive in your criticism offer solutions 2. i. The chairperson or his/her secretary sends a memo to invite participants to a meeting. ii. The venue for the meeting is also mentioned in the memo. iii. The minutes of the previous meeting are circulated to participants

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iv. v. vi. vii. viii. ix. Tape script A B A B A B A B

The organizer or his/her staff make all the arrangements for the meeting. The chairperson conducts the meeting. Participants take part in the meeting. The agenda is discussed item by item. Consensus is arrived at on issues under discussion Minutes of the meeting are jotted down during the meeting and then sent to all participants and concerned persons.

How about meeting at The Moti Mahal? That should be fine. What time? What about after the conference? Would you like to meet for dinner? That would be great. I suggest that I come and pick you up from Pragati Maidan. Lets say 7 pm. Good idea. See you at 7 then. Bye. Bye.

Check Your Progress 3 Tape script A B A B A B A B A B 2. How about meeting for lunch today? Im afraid it is not convenient for me today. Can we fix it for tomorrow, please? Would you like to go to the electronics exhibition on Saturday? Thatll be OK with me. Should we say 4 pm? Could we meet at a restaurant on Friday evening? Yes, that would suit me. Shall we say Mc Donalds at C P? Would you like to watch the cricket match on Sunday? Yes, that would be great. Should we go for a movie this weekend? Im afraid it wont be possible. Can we keep it for next weekend? Tape script (The correct order)

Mr Bakshi : Gautam Bakshi speaking. Ms Jain : Hello Mr Bakshi, this is Sunidhi Jain from Bhopal. How are you? Mr Bakshi : Ms Jain! It is good to hear from you. Im fine thanks, how are you? Ms Jain : Fine, thank you. Im coming over to Delhi in the first week of November for the Trade Fair at Pragati Maidan. Will you be in Delhi at that time? Mr Bakshi: Yes sure. In fact we are participating in the Trade Fair this year. Ms Jain : Oh good! How about a meeting on 6th evening at The Village? Mr Bakshi : Just a minute, let me check my diary. ..OK, That should be fine. Ms Jain : Thats great. I suggest 7 oclock in the restaurant. Mr Bakshi : 6th November 7 oclock then. Ms Jain: Thanks a lot. See you then. Mr Bakshi : Yes, looking forward to meeting you. Bye then. Ms Jain : Goodbye.

Check Your Progress 4 Tape script i. ii. OK, shall we begin? Were here today to discuss about the arrangements for the welcome party for our new colleague Ms Sunanda Varma. Id like to ask Sunil to begin by telling us what planning he has already done so far. Thank you for coming. It is ten oclock. Lets start. What we want to do today is reach a decision on the deadline for launching our new product. Have you all seen a copy of the agenda? Can we hear from Mr Bakshi about what he thinks would be the suitable date for launching the product? Right then, can we get started? The purpose of this meeting is to plan in detail for the visit of our very important customer from Holland, Mr Tillman. Can we have Harvinder tell us what planning he has done so far? Thank you for coming. It is two oclock. Lets begin. Our aim is to ensure that we make proper arrangements for our participation in the Trade fair to be held next month in Delhi. On the agenda you will see there are three items. Id like to ask Sunaina to say something about the first item that deals with the products that we will be displaying at the Fair this year.

iii. iv.

Check Your Progress 5 i. ii. iii. iv. v. vi. vii. viii. Preventing someone from interrupting Sorry, please let him finish. Stating your opinion In my viewI believe Asking to interrupt If I may interrupt Sorry to interrupt, but.. Closing the meeting I think weve covered everything. Thats it then. The next meeting will be held on Friday the 20th of June. Asking for a clarification Excuse me, may I ask for a clarification on this? Inviting someones opinion Could we hear from Puneet? What do you think about .? Asking for comments Any comments? Moving on to the next point on the agenda Lets move on to the next point Now we come to the question of

Check Your Progress 6 1. I think the report is too long. (disagree strongly). I wouldnt say that at all. 2. Its too late to make any changes. (agree). I think youre right. 1. I feel we all need to work together. (agree strongly) I couldnt agree more. 2. In my opinion, we need to cut down expenses on entertainment. (disagree) Thats not how I see it. 3. We must wait till next year to start this project. (disagree, state the opposite opinion) Thats out of the question. On the contrary, we should begin working on it as soon as we can. Check Your Progress 7

i. ii. iii. iv. v. vi. vii. viii. ix. 2.

Lets look at the diary for today. I see weve got a teleconference meeting meeting this morning. Whats happened to good old fashioned meetings, with everyone in the same room only discussing things. With all the hot-desking only that goes on in offices these days, not to be mention companies outsourcing be work out, soon well never meet our colleagues at all! I cant imagine though, out that well be able to do without business lunches, however well e-commerce takes off. I see were lunching along with some clients today. That shouldnt along be too bad. The boss may be a tough guy, but he is also a bit of a great food lover, great so well probably go to a nice restaurant. teleconference - A conference held among people in different locations by means of telecommunications equipment, such as closed-circuit television. hot-desking - is a way of saving office space in which workers do not have their own desk and are only given a desk when they need it. outsourcing subcontracting work to outside companies

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Listening Tape script My two pet peeves are being stuck in mismanaged meetings and in traffic jams. Traffic jams are often unavoidable but ineffective meetings are particularly irksome since it is simple to plan and manage successful meetings. Using the tools for creating dynamic and inspirational meetings doesn't require a Ph.D. or months of training. Why then are these simple ideas and tools so often ignored? Meetings are too often seen as an end unto themselves. I've attended more than my share of meetings where the object was to get to the meeting. Once there, we dutifully filled the time allotted while producing only a minimum of new ideas, plans and action. Using meetings effectively starts with the understanding that meetings are not the destination but a vehicle for reaching strategic objectives or organizational destinations. With this in mind we can move meetings forward. Thinking of meetings as vehicles, as the means to an end, clarifies objectives and itineraries. It enables us to get in the drivers seat and focus our attention on the results we want to achieve and the means of achieving them. This requires selecting the appropriate type and structure of meeting, picking a competent meeting leader and facilitator, determining the key participants, and identifying critical steps in order to make the best use of peoples time and energy. With a clear destination in mind and key waypoints noted, it is possible to map possible routes and determine when a bike, a bus, a plane, chariot or truck is the appropriate vehicle to get you there quickly. With clear objectives, we can determine how each part of the meeting should be structured and managed to achieve the desired results. The success of meetings is limited only by our understanding of their purpose and our ability to plan and manage them. Check Your Progress 8 Possible answers

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Why does the speaker find meetings bothersome? Meetings are often mismanaged & ineffective, although you dont need any special qualifications to be able to conduct successful and effective meetings. Why is it necessary to look at meetings as a means rather than an end? This will enable participants to achieve the objectives of the meeting better. How can a meeting achieve its desired result? - by selecting the appropriate type and structure of meeting - picking a competent meeting leader and facilitator - determining the key participants - identifying critical steps in order to make the best use of peoples' time and energy What do you understand by Pet peeves what bothers, irritates or annoys me most In the drivers seat in a position of authority or command To map possible routes to find out possible ways of doing something

Check Your Progress 9 1. The missing words from the text are in bold. Secrets of Better Decision Making Meetings While effective meetings are essential to any organization and to getting work done, most meetings leave us still looking for a decision and tired. A good meeting should facilitate decision-making, assist people in taking responsibility, energize the participants, and contribute to building team effort within the organization.

Successful meetings are ones where attention is paid to three areas; content, design and process. Selection of content is crucial. All too often meetings are called to discuss issues which would be better resolved with a couple of phone calls while at the same time core issues remain unmentioned. The key is to focus meetings around key issues. Secondly, the design of the meeting can hinder or support the decision- making, problem solving or the informational task at hand. In designing, attention needs to be given to idea generation methods, decision processes, agenda, time frames, problem-solving steps, etc. Third, and most often ignored, is making sure the individual and group needs of the participants are met. Are people participating, included, feel that there is room for their ideas? Are dysfunctional behaviors openly dealt with, is there positive energy in the group, are people committed to the task at hand and enthused about the way the group is working to complete the task? 2. Chairperson: Right then, I think we should __begin__ now, its ten oclock. Were here today to __discuss____ some of the reasons for the __decline__ in profits which has affected the company. At the end of the ____meeting___ we should have a _clear__ idea of what measures we should take to ___improve__ the situation. Youve all seen the ______agenda____. Id like to ask if anyone has any ____comments__ on it before we start. Voices: No / its fine / etc. Chairperson: Can I ask Mr Anand to start with his _remarks__.

Check Your Progress 10 Reporting Verbs Possible answers: i. ii. iii. iv. v. vi. vii. viii. ix. x. xi. xii. He/she assured the members that the report would be in by the next day. He enquired about the sales figures of the previous week. She was reminded to gather the feedback from her department positively by the end of the week. He informed the members that the delegation would arrive the next week. She questioned the necessity of making the scheme compulsory for all the employees. She expressed her doubts about the acceptability of flexi-time. He suggested that they should ask an advertising agency to design their campaign. She asked for an update on the progress of construction work at their new site. He expressed his unhappiness with latecomers. He asked to see the absentee record of the Sales department She stressed/emphasized the need to dispatch the goods by the weekend. She informed the members that they had gained two important clients through the Trade Fair

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Check Your Progress 11 Here is a sample of the Memo you could write to your boss:

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To : Rakesh Menon (GM Marketing) From : Shilpa Gupta (HR Department) Date : 21 June 2003 Subject: Details of Mr Sampaths visit to Delhi At the meeting held on 20th June 2003 we took these decisions regarding the arrangements for Mr Sampaths visit: - Vikas will book a room for him at the Park Royal Hotel and also receive him at the airport - We have made the following lunch arrangements for him and will fix up dinner for the two days of his visit according to his preference and convenience On 1st July he will have lunch with the MD at 1 pm at Park Royal On 2nd July the GMs will have lunch with him at The Taj. - Since this is his first visit to Delhi, the G M Marketing will take him on a sightseeing tour of Delhi on Saturday, 1st July. Vikas will take him out for shopping on Sunday if he wishes to shop. - We have decided to gift him a traditional painting from Cottage Emporium. - Vikas will also be drafting the welcome letter. He will get the letter approved by you before mailing it to him. Please let us know whether you are satisfied with these arrangements. We look forward to your suggestions. S/d

Pronunciation Noun present export record import desert decrease progress refund process Verb present export record import desert decrease progress refund pr

UNIT 7
Structure
7.0 7.1 7.2 7.3 7.4 7.5 7.6 7.7 7.8

TAKING NOTES & PREPARING MINUTES

Objectives Warm Up Introduction Taking Notes 7.3.1 The Note-taking Skill: The Essential Components 7.3.2 The Note-taking Skill: An Example Preparing Minutes 7.4.1 Format of Minutes 7.4.2 Language and Style of Minutes Grammar: Using the Passive Voice Summary Suggested Readings Answers to Check Your Progress

7.0

OBJECTIVES

Our objectives in this unit are that after you have worked through it you should be able to

take notes at meetings where the subject matter is familiar to you, using active listening and correct note-taking techniques convert the notes into minutes, using the format, language and style proper to formal minutes

7.1

WARM UP

Get hold of two minutes of meetings, either from your own office or someone elses office. Read them carefully and a) write your impressions of the minutes in terms of format, coverage, language and style. b) make corrections wherever necessary. It would be a good idea to work with a partner either a friend or a colleague at the Study Centre.

7.2

INTRODUCTION

All formal Meetings require that a written record of the meetings of the discussions held and decisions reached be prepared and kept on record. This is obviously necessary since if no such record is available disputes can later arise about what exactly was said or decided at the meeting. It, therefore, does not come as a surprise that certain meetings, like Annual General Meetings and meetings of Board of Directors of companies, are required by law to keep the minutes of their

proceedings. Even non-formal meetings, like a face-to-face meeting of two officials of a company, may find it necessary to keep at least an informal record of their decisions in the form of a memo. There are several good reasons for this. For example, failure to keep a record of a Taking Notes & verbal warning to a subordinate may stall any future disciplinary action against him/her; failure to Preparing Minutes record which person was decided upon to take which action may make it impossible to fix responsibility in case of a future foul-up. Apart from such considerations, records of meetings also help other people, who need to know but are not required to be present at the meeting, to find out what went on at the meeting. For these aims to be achieved, it is necessary that the report of the meeting be correct and factual not only in recording the decisions taken, resolutions passed, votes cast in favour or against a resolution, etc. but also in reporting the discussion wherever this is required. In fact, the reporter is less likely to get the factual data wrong than the emphases and biases manifested during the discussion, since there is more scope for disagreement in reporting the latter. To ensure that no inaccuracies in reporting go undetected, the minutes are always presented before the committee at its next meeting for its approval. The person who records the minutes, therefore, has a serious responsibility. S/he is usually the secretary of the organization, but at informal meetings the Chairperson can request any member to record the minutes. Whoever records the minutes needs to possess the skill of note taking, for all that s/he can do at the meeting itself is to jot down notes on the proceedings. Later, s/he will convert these notes into proper minutes. This means expanding the notes into the language of minutes and putting the whole thing in the minute format. Both stages are equally important. If the notes are incorrect or inadequate, this will be reflected in the minutes, if the format or the language is faulty, again the minutes will be unacceptable. That is why we have divided this unit into two parts: Note-taking and Preparing Minutes. We will take up note-taking first.

7.3

TAKING NOTES

When you are reading a textbook, or a reference book, especially when you are preparing for an exam, or are planning to write a paper, you make notes. You make notes because you later want to be able to recover the information without having to go back to the book again. The notes are in your own handwriting, and often in a coded form for your own use, and it is difficult for anyone else to recover the information from your notes. You use the code to jot down the important points in an abbreviated and compressed form to save time in copying the entire text. You also use coded symbols, like arrows of different sorts, numbers and letters, trees and rough diagrams, etc. to capture the information. You have to do something similar when you are listening to various speakers at a meeting. The only difference is that here you make notes from something spoken, rather than from something written. This difference is often expressed by contrasting note-taking with note-making. You make notes from written texts (books, journals, etc.), but you take notes from a spoken text (like a speech). In recording the proceedings of a meeting, the skill we need is accordingly that of note-taking.

7.3.1

The Note-taking Skill: The Essential Components

The first essential sub component of the note-taking skill is the listening ability. Just as you cannot make notes unless you have the reading ability, you cannot take notes unless you have the listening ability. By listening ability we do not simply mean the ability to listen, just as by reading ability we do not mean simply the ability to read. A fifth class student can read, and a kindergarten child can listen, but, even with excellent writing skills, they cannot make or take notes. This is because for making or taking notes you need to be able not only to understand but also to interpret what you read/hear. You must not only read and listen attentively to understand everything, you must also read and listen actively to be able to interpret it. By active reading and active listening, we mean the ability to grasp the points, to distinguish the main points from the supporting points, to make the implicit points explicit in your understanding and to place each point at its correct place in the entire structure of argument/discussion. There is a difference between listening attentively and listening actively. Attentive listening is mostly passive. You simply imbibe the information you hear e.g., when you are listening to the news on the radio or TV as an average citizen. You tuck away the information in separate chunks in different corners of your mind, and piece them together in a master design only when you are required to do so, or not at all. In active listening, your brain is making a constant effort to see the overall design, to light up the connections between the disparate points, and to see the deeper implications of the things said. Obviously, an active listener also needs to be attentive, but s/he needs to be more than attentive: s/he needs to be thinking actively on what s/he is hearing. It is for this reason that a note-taker should not be burdened with any other duty at the meeting. At some meetings, the Chairperson decides to record the minutes him/herself. This should be avoided. An important question that each note-taker at a meeting faces is when to start noting down what the speaker is saying. Different speakers have different styles. Some speakers start with an introduction and progress slowly to their main point; others start by demolishing the arguments of the previous speakers before coming to their own; for some others, speaking is a process of thinking aloud, and so on. If you wait till the main argument of a speaker becomes clear before you start taking down notes, you may find that you have waited too long and there isnt enough time to complete your notes as the speaker has concluded and another one has already started speaking. If you start taking down early what a speaker is saying, you might later discover that was just an introduction (and therefore not important), or that the speaker was only describing a position which s/he later went on to change. This is the essential difference between making and taking notes. When making notes from a book, you have the entire text before you: you can go back and forth at a leisurely pace, decide what the writers main argument is, and then start making your notes. But when you are taking notes from a speech, the speech unfolds before you linearly in time, and what has been spoken is no longer available to you (except in your memory), so how do you make sure that you arent too early or too late? There are two ways in which this problem can be tackled, though eventually every note-taker has to find his/her own strategies to deal with it. First, the note-taker must, from the very start, listen for the speakers main point. This is usually a well-formed position, or viewpoint, related to the problem at hand. So long as the speaker does not start making positive observations about the issue in a confident and assured manner, it is too early to start taking down anything: she may only be describing other peoples positions, or thinking aloud. Once s/he starts making positive observations confidently, it means s/he has formulated her/his position, or argument. It would be recognizable as different from any other positions already taken, and as soon as this realization occurs, the note-taker can start jotting down the point. Sometimes the speaker also makes it clear that she is now going to state her/his position. After this point, it would still take the speaker

some time to complete her/his presentation and the note-taker will have enough time to take full notes. But if s/he waits for the speaker to complete her/his presentation, and round off her/his position in its totality, the note-taker will find herself/himself caught between two speakers. The second technique, which must supplement the first one, is the use of codes when jotting down the point. Trying to take down everything in longhand would simply take too long. So, use abbreviations, shortened and syncopated words, pictographs, symbols, arrows and the like to capture the sense as quickly as possible. (We shall illustrate some of these below.) This will help you to keep pace with the speaker. But return to the notes as quickly as possible after the meeting Taking Notes & Preparing Minutes for decoding, or you might forget what the codes stand for. The second essential of the note-taking skill is that the note-taker should enjoy thorough familiarity with the subject matter under discussion. S/he should understand what is being talked about. Both the context and the content of the debates should be known to her/him fully. Only then can s/he take notes of the subject matter comfortably and intelligibly. Finally, a note-taker needs to be able to jot down the points s/he decides are important in precise and compressed forms. This is essentially a question about the ability to select key words and phrases to represent the meaning and to use coded symbols to represent relationships. Let us now try to illustrate the points we have made above with the help of an example so that you can understand how these principles work in practice. We must of course work within the limitation that the example cannot be a live meeting but must be a transcript of a meeting. While this does affect the utility of the example to some extent, you should at least be able to see what is meant and how to extend the principles to a live meeting when you face one. We have provided you with a tape script and it is better if you listen first and then read the extract of the meeting.

7.3.2

The Note-Taking Skill: An Example

Given below is an extract from a meeting. The item under discussion relates to a proposal to increase the efficiency of the company by revamping its budgetary control system. We would like to see how the components of the note-taking skill we have described above will help us in taking notes of this extract. And to make sure that we take notes and not make notes, we will treat the extract as a linear one and will be guided only by the clues as they are produced and not all of them together. (Do listen to the tape which contains the extract) To do this task satisfactorily, we should be able to answer these questions. 1. What would active listening yield in this extract which mere attentive listening would not? 2. At what point should the note-taker start taking notes? 3. What advantage would someone who is familiar with the subject matter have over one who isnt? 4. What should be the language of the notes? What kind of codes or symbols could be used? THE EXTRACT CHAIRPERSON : The next item on the agenda is a proposal from the Finance Manager regarding budgetary control. Would you please introduce the item and tell us what it is all about, Mr. Malhotra? : Yes, Mr. Chairperson. As the Board is aware, the Company had last year commissioned a study of our financial management by

FM

Financial Consultants Ltd. They submitted a report which was put before the Board earlier this year. The Board had then asked me to prepare a proposal based on its suggestions about budgetary control, while the other aspects of the report would be taken up for implementation later. The detailed proposal is already with you, and I shall only highlight its main features. What the proposal essentially suggests is that we should do the Companys accounts more frequently. MEMBER 1 FM : But we are already doing the accounts every quarter, arent we? : Yes, but quarterly accounts dont allow us to keep a close enough control. Should the company suddenly make a heavy loss we ought to be able to act quickly. If we dont, say the consultants, we will not be able to prevent the loss from getting larger still. : But if the accounts show that we are making a loss, we immediately reduce inventory, that is, we cut down purchases, and, if possible, we reduce personnel. : I think it would be a good idea if we first let Mr. Malhotra complete his presentation. Members can then make their points. : Thank you, Mr. Chairperson. What Mr. Shukla says is true, but in order to do the things he suggests, we need the information faster than we are getting it at the moment. If profitability goes down ..that is profits in relation to capital employedit may be necessary to raise prices, cut costs and so on. But the right information must be quickly available. : Lets have the proposal, Mr. Malhotra. : What the proposal suggests is that we break down the activities of the company into Cost Centres. Each Cost Centre would have its own finance manager of the rank of an assistant Finance manager. Each AFM would be required to forecast, well in advance, the income and expenditure of his centre. We would then put the budgets from all the centres together. After they have been approved, they become the annual budget of the company. If the actual income or expenditure of a Cost Centre varies a lot from the budgeted figure, then the AFM of that Centre would be responsible and would have to explain why his actual figures differed from his forecast, and take appropriate action. Each AFM would prepare monthly accounts and keep track of the income and the expenses. These would be monitored by the Central Finance Office (CFO). In case a decline in sales is noticed, the CFO would then be in a position to set the alarm bells ringing, and the counter measures could be initiated straightaway. In outline, this is the proposal. The details are given in the file that is already with you. Thank you, Mr. Chairperson.

Member 1

Chair FM

Chair FM

Chair

: Thank you, Mr. Malhotra. The members can now make their comments. Yes, Mr. Shukla.?

Let us now try to answer the questions that we posed above: 1. Active listening consists mainly in being able to establish links between the different points that the speaker has made and to figure out the structure of main and subordinate points n the argument. It would be clear to the note-taker at the very start that the main point in the item is Taking Notes & the proposal and the minutes must record the main features of the FMs proposal, s/he would Preparing Minutes be able to see the initial comments of the FM as providing the justification for the proposal, thus establishing a link between the two. There is a certain drawback in the existing system of budgetary control (too slow) which the proposed system seeks to remedy. When the note-taker records the main features of the proposal, s/he would also try to record how this drawback is sought to be removed in the proposed system (monthly accounting). This means that s/he will already have understood the relationship between quicker accounting and a faster response to a heavy loss situation: quicker accounting will provide the company with faster feedback and it will be able to respond to the situation with quicker counter-measures. This and similar connections between the points made will reveal to the minute-reader that the minute-taker has listened actively and not just attentively. 2. Since the note-taker will have identified the FMs proposal as the main point of the item, his/her pen would start moving really fast only when the FM starts describing the proposal, that is, when the FM speaks for the last time. But s/he will already have noted down the reasons for change, which we have mentioned above. S/he will also have noted down already the item under discussion (FMs proposal on Budgetary Control) and the fact that the FM was only going to present the main features of the proposal. But s/he will get his/her clue that s/he must now start moving quickly when the Chairperson asks the FM to skip the preliminaries and get down to the proposal. Thats when s/he must start writing furiously so that s/he can also finish writing when the FM stops speaking. Using code language, this should not be too difficult. 3. It should be obvious that a person who is familiar with the background to the matter under discussion would be in a better position to decide what is to be included in the minutes and what can be safely excluded. For example, a note-taker who knows that the members are aware of the present frequency of accounting would not have to be told about it in the minutes, even though it is mentioned at the meeting by a member. To take another kind of example, a person who didnt know what budgetary control was, or had no idea of what inventory reduction was, would remain in doubt whether s/he was right in omitting one or the other from the minutes. 4. As we have said earlier, the language of the notes should be abbreviated, compressed and coded. The reason is simply that, unless one knows shorthand, trying to take notes in full language forms will only mean that you are unable to cover everything you want to cover. The following devices can be used: i. ii. Standard abbreviations (Jan., Feb., Co., etc.) Non-standard abbreviations: (prop. = proposal: CC: Cost Centre); b. = budget; inc. = income, etc.)

iii. iv. v. vi.

Standard symbols, e.g., = : is equal to, < = less than, > = greater than, Q = since, = therefore, etc. Non-standard symbols e.g., = cause of, : = result of, = falls, declines, = rises, grows. Syncopated words: yly yearly, mly = monthly, edunl = educational Sentence fragments: e.g., more frequent accounting, CFO to monitor, etc.

We give below one possible set of notes which show how the symbols and abbreviations etc. could be used: Item: FM: Ess: FMs prop on budg. Control Main features only more frequent accounting qtrly acc. Not quick enough to start prev. meas. ICO heavy loss. Faster f.b.ess. PROP. Divide co. into CCs Each CC under an AFM AFM to forecast inc. & expend. of CC Aggreg. Of CC budgets = Co. budget AFM resp. ICO sharp variation from budg. Est. AFM to prepare mly acc. CFO to monitor This notetaker makes use of some abbreviations which possibly s/he alone can interpret, but this is no problem because normally no one else would be required to decode them, at least not without help from him/her. In fact, anyone who was present at the meeting would not have a serious problem interpreting them. Nevertheless, here are the explanations. ess. qtrly. acc. f.b. CC inc. expend aggreg. ICO resp. mly prev.meas. budg. est. : : : : : : : : : : : : : : essential quarterly accounting, accounts feedback Cost Centre income expenditure ggregate in case of responsible monthly preventive measures budget, budgetary estimate

That the note-taker has listened actively is reflected in the notes. For example, his/her summary of the justification Quarterly accounting not quick enough to start preventive measures in case

of heavy loss shows that s/he has understood the point well enough to express it in his/her own words. The use of the word feedback further confirms the point. Check Your Progress - 1 1. Answer the following questions briefly: i) Why is it necessary to keep minutes of meetings? Give at least three reasons. ii) Who normally records the minutes? iii) What are the two stages in the preparation of minutes? Taking Notes & Preparing Minutes iv) How is note-taking different from note-making? v) What are the components of the note-taking skill? 2. Read the following extract from the transcript of a meeting. Imagine that you are attending the meeting as its Secretary. Take notes of the meeting. Listen carefully to the cassette. Chair : Attention, Ladies and Gentlemen! Its 10 am and everyone is here. Lets begun with the first item the confirmation of the previous minutes. We have received no written comments, but if anyone has anything to say now, they are most welcome.. No. They are fine. OK. In that case lets move on to the next item exports to South East Asian markets. Mr. Mahajan, Manager, Export Sales will introduce the item. Mr. Mahajan? Yes. Thank you, Mr. Chairman. I have already circulated my report to the members. I hope the members have had the time to go through it because I am really looking forward to their suggestions for improvement in what is at present a rather depressing picture. As the report says on the very first page, our exports to South East Asia have declined for the third year

ALL Chair

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Mahajan

running. We have identified the reasons for this decline but are at the moment rather helpless, as the reasons seem to be beyond our control. We think there are three reasons for the decline: first, of course, is the growing competition from the local manufacturers. Thailand, Singapore, Malaysia and Indonesia have all in recent years set up, or are in the process of setting up, their own polyester plants. If we have still been able to sell them our product for so long it is because of the price advantage we have enjoyed so far, and of course because these countries have open economies. However, the price advantage we have so far enjoyed is now being progressively eroded by the inflation at home and the constant rise in wages. That is the second reason. But it is the third reason which has proved to be the most crippling in recent years, and it is the steep rise in the domestic tax rates. Manufacturers of polyester yarn have been representing to the government without much success. Recently the finance minister has given an indication that the tax rate may be reduced in the next years budget. If that happens, we can look forward to some relief, though I cannot promise that that alone would be sufficient to achieve a turnaround in our sales to South East Asia. Bagchi : Can we afford to wait that long? The next budget is still five months away. Moreover, the quantum of relief may not be much. Mr. Chairman, Id like to know how serious the situation is and whether we have thought of any counter measures to prevent the situation from getting worse. Mr. Chairman, I quite agree with Mr. Bagchi. We cannot just sit and wait for February 29 for the Minister to announce a tax cut. Irrespective of what the government does, we have to take measures to arrest the declining trend in exports to these countries and to do that we must somehow or the other maintain our price advantage. The question is how to do it. Our technology is the best in the world, therefore there is not much we can hope to do there. The advantage provided by lower wages is being progressively neutralized, though we do still retain some advantage, as the comparative table on p.5 of the report shows. Then there are the high transportation costs. When the transportation costs are added to our wage costs, the wage-cost advantage is completely neutralized. Please see the chart on p.6. the 80% tax comes on top of this. Compare this with the 15-25% tax in these countries. Is it surprising that we are losing our markets in these countries to the local manufacturers? In fact, if things continue to go the way they have been going, it is only a matter of time before we will have to withdraw from these markets completely. It may well happen three years from now by which time six more manufacturing plants will be going on stream in these countries. That is how serious the situation is, Mr. Chairman, and unless we take some urgent and drastic measures. Yes, but what can we do? As you said, all the factors responsible for this situation seem to be beyond our control. But neither can we just sit and watch our South East Asian markets being snatched away from us. They are our bread and butter. You know we dont export much to the west. Well, gentlemen, you have heard the Export Manager. suggestions? Are there any

Mahajan

Rahman Mahajan

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Chair

Bagchi

Mr. Chairman, I agree with the Export manager that none of the factors responsible for the present situation in the South East Asian markets is amenable to our control. In fact, I foresee a steep rise in inflationary pressures, and a further decline in the value of the rupee, both contributing to a rise in costs. Even if the tax rate is cut by the minister, it will never come down to anywhere near the low tax rates in these countries. In such a situation no half-hearted measures will show any results. We have to think bold, and be prepared to take risks, if we are going to survive. What do you have in mind, Mr Bagchi? We must be prepared to take full advantage of the competitive situation now obtaining in the South East Asian countries, of their open policies and the low tax rates. With our experience in this field, and our technology, I am sure we can do far better than the new units coming up in these countries, if, and its a big if, we move one of our plants to Thailand or Singapore. I know the initial cost will be high, but it will still be less than what the new local plants cost, imported as they all are from the US. Moreover, the higher rated capacity of our plant will mean quicker recovery of the cost. I think we ought to give a lot of urgent thought to this idea, since it seems to be our only road to survival. It certainly is a bold proposal, Mr Bagchi. Lets hear what other members Taking Notes & Preparing Minutes have to say about it..

Chair Bagchi

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Chair

7.4

PREPARING MINUTES

In the second stage, the notes taken at the meeting are converted into proper minutes. The minutes are prepared in a definite format, therefore it would not do simply to write out the notes in full sentences to arrive at proper minutes. The secretary, or whoever is to prepare the minutes, ought to be familiar with the format, and s/he should have a copy of the agenda before her/him. This is because the minutes follow the agenda closely. Secondly, s/he should be familiar with the language used in the minutes, since there are certain conventions of language that formal minutes follow which are not followed in informal reports of meetings (e.g., newspaper reports of meetings). We shall discuss these two aspects of minute-writing: the format of the minutes and the style and language used in writing them.

7.4.1

The Format of Minutes

When the minutes are put in their final form the following information appears first and constitutes the HEADING of the minutes: 1. Name of the body; nature of the meeting; day, date, time and place of the meeting.

This information can occur in either of the following forms:

Minutes of the First Meeting of the Board of Directors of PASHUPATI EXPORTS held on 12 January, 2004 at 5.00 pm in the Board Room OR INTERDEPARTMENTAL COMMITTEE ON FLEXITIME Minutes of meeting held on May 16, 2003 at 3.00 pm in Committee Room No.2 The piece of information that is given next is the names of the people present with a specific mention of who chaired the meeting. This information is given in the following manner: 2. PRESENT : Pashupati Shah (MD, Chairperson) Ram Malhotra (Manager. Exports) Govind Gaitonde (Manager, QC) Shalini Pande (Manager, Finance) Malavika Chauhan (Manager, Marketing) Bharat Mukherji (Manager, Domestic Sales)

In informal meetings, names alone suffice: designations can be dropped. But minutes of formal meetings, particularly those which have to be sent to other organizations and agencies, must include the designations. Information about people present is not complete without a separate mention of those who are not regular members of the committee but are present in a special capacity, e.g., the secretary, or those who have been specially invited to the meeting to assist the committee by virtue of their special expertise, e.g., an architect, an auditor, or a solicitor. This information is presented as follows:

3.

In Attendance : or Special Invitees

Rajguru Gopal (Secretary) Mohan Bagga (Architect) Reshma Bajaj (Computer Consultant)

From this point onwards, the minutes will follow the agenda closely. The agenda has the following structure: Title, date and place of Meeting Apologies for Absence Minutes of Previous Meeting Matters Arising Items for Discussion Any Other Business with permission of the Chair Date, Time and Place of the Next Meeting The minutes pick up the agenda from the second item: Apologies for Absence, the first item having been already incorporated in the heading. Under this item the minute-taker reports any apologies for absence read out/announced at the meeting. The report takes the following form:

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Apologies for Absence: Apologies were received from the following: S. Bhatia P. Ahluwalia

The next item in the minutes is Minutes of Previous Meeting, which are formally presented for confirmation at the meeting. In actuality, they are often circulated in advance so that members can read them and point out any discrepancies they notice at the meeting. If no discrepancies are pointed out at the meeting, the minutes are approved and signed by the Chairperson. In this case, the minutes record the item as follows: 5. Confirmation of Minutes: The minutes of the last meeting held onwere confirmed and signed.

But if any amendments to the minutes are suggested and accepted, they are recorded as follows: 5a. Confirmation of Minutes: It was pointed out that Item 3 should read a tax rate of 80%.. in place of ..a tax rate of 30%.. with this amendment the minutes were confirmed and signed. The next item, Matters Arising, refers to any discussion, announcement, etc. that may have taken place at the meeting on a matter arising from the minutes of the previous meeting. The item is sometimes also utilized for reporting action on decisions taken at the previous meeting. The minutes record the matter in the following style: 6. Matters Arising: (i) (ii) Manager (Domestic Sales) reported that the sales figures for the first quarter had been delayed due to computer breakdown but would be made available within a week. Manager (Marketing) informed the members that M/s Media Advertisers hadTaking Notes & Preparing Minutes agreed to send a revised plan for the launch of the new line of polyproducts.

The matters so far covered by the minutes are format-related, though that does not reduce their importance. But the really important matters begin only when Items for Discussion are taken up. In our specification of the agenda, this represents a cover item, i.e. in an actual agenda, it may cover several different agenda items, each following the other with a different item number. The minutes for each item would appear separately following the order in which they appear in the agenda. For example, for the agenda of the meeting of the Board of Directors of PASHUPATI SCOOTERS which appears in 7.4.2, there will be four different items (Nos. 4,5,6,7) each to be minuted separately, as follows: 7. 8. 9. (Item 4) Invitation from the Ministry of Industry for participation in the rescue bid for SCOOTERS INDIA LTD. (Minutes) (Item 5) Proposal from Marketing for participation in AUTO EXPO 99 to be held in Milan in Jan.99. (Minutes) (Item 6) Report of the subcommittee on exports to South East Asia (Minutes)

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(Item 7) Review of product prices (Minutes)

Discussion of some of the items at the meeting may end with some action being assigned to a particular member, or with a subcommittee being set up to do something. For example, in case of Item No.4, the meeting may decide to set up a subcommittee to draw up a set of conditions on which the company will join the rescue bid, or in case of Item No.5, it may assign to the Marketing manager the duty of inviting bids from some European marketing concerns for setting up a display of the companys products at the EXPO 99. Whenever such an action is decided on with respect to a particular item, the minutes of the item end with a separate para highlighting the action to be taken. Thus the entire minutes for Item No.4 may read as follows: (Item 4) Invitation from the Ministry of Industry for participation in the rescue bid for SCOOTERS INDIA LTD. The MD informed the Board that the Ministry of Industry, GOI, was interested in preparing a rescue bid for saving the public sector concern, SCOOTERS INDIA Ltd., and had invited the company to join the bid and submit its terms. The MD felt that though company policy had been against getting involved in such matters, the invitation might also offer an opportunity to acquire a large facility which could be converted into another production base for two and three wheelers with substantial production capacity, provided favourable terms could be negotiated. After some discussion, the Board decided to accept the Ministrys invitation in principle, but the acceptance would be confirmed only after the terms of participation had been approved by the Board. Action: A subcommittee consisting of MD (Convener), Manager (Finance), Manager (Production), Manager (QC), Mr. Rohit Desai and Ms. Prema Nath will prepare the terms of participation and submit them for the Boards consideration by 30th September. The subcommittee can employ the services of such experts as it deems fit. We should however note the ACTION is added only when a specific action is recommended by the committee. Otherwise, a paragraph summarizing the discussion is sufficient. The summary of the discussion is of course based on the notes taken at the meeting and includes only the important points. If any proposals are presented at the meeting, their highlights are also included. Names of only those speakers are included who make important suggestions or contributions. But in the ACTION part, names of persons responsible for the action, along with the dates by which the action is to be completed, should be stated clearly. 11. AOB (Any Other Business). If any item is discussed under this heading, it is minuted in the usual way. The ACTION para is also added, if required. In the case of those committees which meet at regular intervals, the last item is 12. Date of the next meeting. The minutes record the decision of the meeting in this regard.

7.4.2

Language and Style of Minutes

When converting notes into minutes, it is necessary not only to conform to the format of the minutes, but also to use the specific language in which minutes, specially minutes of formal meetings, are written. This language tends to be rather formalized and may remind you of the language of law, though actually it is not as formalized. But it does use certain types of grammatical constructions more frequently than others and shows preference for certain expressions and vocabulary items, which gives to it its special character. In this section, we will describe these special features of the language of the minutes. Let us first look at some examples of the language of minutes. By looking at these examples closely, we will be able to discover the special features of which we have spoken above. a) Manager (Exports) reported that sales to South East Asia had fallen for the third year running and there was urgent need to initiate measures to arrest this trend. b) The problem of office security was raised by Mr. Dayal. He suggested that all important papers should be kept in a locked filing cabinet. It was agreed that only three people would have the key: Mr Dayal, Ms. Rohatagi and Mr. Jairam. c) It was resolved that a subcommittee be set up to look into the causes of the decline in exports to S.E. Asia. d) The minutes of the last meeting were read, confirmed and signed. e) It is resolved that the Secretary be authorized to draw up the terms of participation in the joint bid. f) The chairman referred to the sad demise of Mr. Sushobhan Sengupta and spoke of his services to the Company during its formative years. g) The updating of promotional literature to include the new models, PL 40 and PLS 30, was suggested by Mr. Jairam. He point out that many small changes had also been made to other models and these needed to be included in the promotional literature. h) Action: Mr. Jairam to update the promotional literature and to submit the drafts at he next meeting. Before we discuss these examples, let us first state what is required of the language of the minutes: A. The minutes represent a reliable record of the important things said, the decisions taken and Taking Notes & the things done at the meeting.; the effort therefore should be to make the language simple, Preparing Minutes transparent, free from ambiguity, and precise so that everyone can understand the contents easily and in the same way. B. At meetings, the individual is less important than the collectivity. The decisions taken at meetings are collective decisions. Therefore the language used should be such that it does not assign decisions to individuals. Important suggestions and proposals can be ascribed to individual members, but the final decisions are always the collective responsibility.

C. The minutes record the proceedings as briefly as possible. The language should therefore be concise. D. Finally, the minutes, being the official record of the meeting, are likely to be consulted and referred to by other agencies and institutions including the law courts in case of disputes. Their language therefore should conform to the standards of formality and impersonality that publicly used language generally requires. Let us now see how the example quoted above, (a-h), show the qualities that are required by the language of minutes. i. You will notice that the language used in all the samples above is simple and transparent in the sense that it can be easily understood. It does not use a literary or philosophical style, high-flown words, or poetic flourishes. The words used are common ones (except demise) and one doesnt have to look up a dictionary to find out the meanings of any words. There are no double-meaning constructions or words, and the meaning comes through quite clearly. If there are some words that you dont know (like promotional), that is an indication that some words common in the world of business are not yet known to you and you must learn them.

ii. You must have noticed the frequency of verbs in the passive voice in the examples: was raised, was agreed, was resolved, was suggested, were read, and so on. As you may know, the passive form of the verb is used when we wish to avoid reference to the agent, either because the agent is not known, is indefinite, or simply because the individual agent is not important. The use of the passive form allows us to eliminate the agent. In writing the minutes, as we said above, reference to individual agents is minimized, since the responsibility is collective. The collective agent (committee) does not need to be mentioned because it is so obvious. You will also notice that where the passive voice is used with an individual agent (as in was suggested by Mr Jairam) it would make no difference, in fact may even help to simplify the language, if the passive voice is replaced by the active. The use of the passive voice without the agent also helps the writer to make the minutes impersonal and objective as required in D above. iii. The examples above show some constructions which are not very common outside the language of minutes. For example: a) It was resolved that a committee be set up to look into. b) Resolved that the Secretary is authorized to draw up the terms.. c) Mr. Jairam to update the promotional literature and to.. The use of constructions such as these, which are not in common use at all but are specific to the language of the minutes, gives to the minutes their formal flavour. This formal flavour is further supported and intensified by the use of more dignified and literary equivalents of words in day-to-day use like demise for death. However, in keeping with the first requirement we placed on the language of the minutes, viz. that of simplicity, the current trend is against the use of such words and is in favour of using the day-to-day idiom as far as possible. But simplicity, it should be noted, does not conflict with the use of formalized constructions like the ones we have discussed above to report the proceedings in a precise and concise manner.

iv. Conciseness in minutes is achieved mainly by including only the major points and leaving out everything else. What is recorded in the minutes is a. b. c. d. e. the main points of the discussion resolutions moved, names of the proposer and seconder recommendations made and decisions reached results of voting tasks assigned to individuals, subcommittees, etc.

This information is then presented using a style and a language in which no unnecessary words or ornamentation are used. Consider, for example, the following version of (g) above: (G) Mr Jairam said that the promotional pamphlets, posters and brochures of the company had become out of date as they did not make any reference to the new models the company had brought out since 19, viz PL 40 and PLS 30. The older models had also undergone modifications and changes which did not find a place in the pamphlets and brochures. Thus while the company was spending lot of energy and expense in updating its products, it was failing to communicate its achievements to the public. As a result, the increased research and development effort was not getting translated into increased sales of our products. The main point of this argument is that the promotional literature of the company needs to be updated to incorporate the new products and changes to the old ones, and this is stated quite concisely in (g). (G) states the same thing in a very elaborate manner, which is quite inappropriate to the style of minutes. Conciseness in minutes is also achieved at times by abbreviating a structure, as we saw above. Thus, in resolutions, It is resolved that. Is abbreviated to Resolved that .. and, in the Action para, Mr. Jairam is (requested) to update the promotional literature is abbreviated to Mr Jairam to update.., so on. Finally, minutes can also be made to look precise and well-organized by using some well known layout devices. Some of these which are applicable to minutes are the following: (a) Each section of the minutes (Heading, Present, In Attendance, Minutes of Previous Meeting, etc.) is presented as a separate paragraph and separated by blank double line space; section headings, including the headings of the agenda items to be given in bold letters. (b) In each section which has more than one item (e.g. Matters Arising may have three separate items), number the items and present each one as a separate paragraph. (c) Wherever there is an ACTION item, put it as a separate paragraph at the end of the relevant item with the heading ACTION. (d) In summarizing a discussion, try to itemise the contents. This helps to make the argument clear to you, while also helping the reader to see precisely what the points of the argument were. It also gives a systemized look to your minutes. Check Your Progress 2 1. Explain what information is to be provided in the following sections of the minutes: a) Matters Arising
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b) In Attendance c) Apologies for Absence d) AOB 2. Convert into minutes your notes of the (extract of the) meeting which appears in Ex. 2 of Check Your Progress 1. Use the following information to give a formal start to your minutes. Your minutes will of course remain incomplete, as the notes cover only one item of the agenda: Name of Company: PASHUPATI EXPORTS CORPORATION Body meeting: Board of Directors Nature of meeting: First meeting for the year 96-97 Day, date, time: Monday, July 15, 11.00 am Place: Board Room at the Registered Headquarters at Nehru place, New Delhi Present: S. Bhogle (Chairperson)/R. Mahajan (manager, Exports)/S. Bagchi, V.Rahman, Shefali Ghosh, G.Ketkar, R. Prahlad (all directors) In attendance: You as Secretary Apologies: R. Mehta (Director) 3. Draft resolutions on the following subjects to be placed before a committee: a) to appoint a subcommittee to suggest measures to reduce the air and water pollution by the Companys manufacturing plant at Renughat b) to appoint Dr. Lekh Raj and Mrs S. Lamba to the Board of Directors of Mahima Plastics Ltd. c) To authorize the Secretary to conduct negotiations with the Secretary of the workers union to withdraw the strike notice issued by it. 4. Given below are verbatim (exactly as spoken) extracts from some meetings. Write summaries of these discussion extracts, as they would appear in the minutes of these meetings: a) Mrs Narain : I think the main reason why our sales have been going down in the north is that our agents in U.P., Rajasthan, Punjab and Bihar are ineffective. We need new agents there and I suggest our Sales Department find some quickly. We need to give top priority to this job. Im afraid I cant agree with Ms. Narain. It would be very, very unwise to change our agents at this point of time. Our competitors are on a sharp lookout for established and experienced agents, and theyd immediately grab our agents. On the other hand, we would be very hard placed to find new agents, because good agents are hard to come by. Even in normal times changing agents is very risky. It disturbs the market. Finding new agents takes time, and even if you succeed in finding new agents, you can never be sure theyll be better than the old ones.

Manager (Sales)

b) Chair Manager

: :

We must do something about our markets in the north. We are in danger of losing them completely. I assure the Board that I am aware of the problem. We are right now in the process of reorganising our sales network in the northern states. Where this process has been completed, the results are already beginning to show. In Punjab and H.P., for example, our sales are showing a rise this yea. I am quite confident that U.P., Bihar and Rajasthan will also follow suit as soon as we have revived our sales network there.

c) Two companies are negotiating a takeover. HL is the representative of the company which is to be taken over, OL of the company which wants to take over HLs company.) HL: OL: HL: OL: HL: OL: Before we can give our final consent to the takeover, wed like to make sure of one more thing. And what is that? The interests of our loyal workers. Though we cannot commit ourselves at this moment, we can assure you we value the services of loyal workers very highly. Thank you for the assurance, Mr. Lal, but wed like a more specific assurance. In short, we want a guarantee that no employee will lose his/her job as result of the takeover. Im afraid its impossible to give such a specific assurance, Mr. Lalvani. We are planning to reorganise and modernize the manufacturing units extensively, and it is quite likely that some staff will become redundant as a result. That, Im afraid, jeopardizes the whole deal we have worked out. challenge the takeover in the court, we will be stuck for years. If the workers

HL: OL:

You neednt worry, Mr. Lal. We will work out a reasonable deal for the employees who are made redundant.

7.5

GRAMMAR: USING THE PASSIVE VOICE

Read the following sentences. 1. In case a decline in sales is noticed .. 2. The details are given in the file that is already with you. 3. Sales targets are set every year.. As you can see from the examples, we use the passive in English if we dont want to draw attention to the person who is responsible for a particular action or process. In fact, the passive is

very useful when you want to emphasize the object to which the action or process is happening rather than the person carrying out the action. So the passive is used to focus on the action. Check Your Progress 3 Rewrite each sentence in the passive. i. ii. iii. iv. v. vi. vii. viii. ix. x. We sent the goods last week, so you should receive them soon. The goods were sent last week, so you should receive them soon. We would reduce costs if the workers come on time. We can master the new software easily in a couple of days The customer should receive the consignment by Monday. According to a recent report the group is making similar investments in the USA. We enclose the payment together with our order. We will produce the body of the car at our Rampur factory. The space now seems adequate; they have enlarged the premises since my last visit. Large companies dominate the economies in many countries. Using better-trained staff can increase productivity.
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7.6

SUMMARY

The main points of this unit are as follows:

Minutes are written records of the proceedings of a meeting. They are useful as records of decisions, major discussion points, assignment of responsibilities, and for general informative purposes. To ensure correctness of minutes, they are taken on record only after approved by the body at its next meeting. Minutes are prepared from notes taken at the meeting. Hence note-taking is an important skill for the minute writer. Note-taking is different from note-making. The first important component of the note-taking skill is active listening. Active listening consists in being able to figure out the structure of main and subordinate points in a speakers presentation and to establish connections between the different points the speaker makes. Note-taking is confined only to major points. A good note-taker knows when to start taking notes so that s/he does not miss anything important and does not end up with a collection of only inessential points. A good note-taker makes use of abbreviations, symbols and coded language to keep pace with the speaker.

Only a person thoroughly familiar with the subject matter of the discussions can make a good note-taker. In converting the notes into minutes the minute-taker has to keep in mind (a) the format of the minutes and (b) the language and style of the minutes. The format of the minutes includes: Heading; Member Present; Chairperson; In Attendance; Apologies for Absence; Confirmation of Previous Minutes; Matters Arising; Items for discussion; Action Para; Any Other Business; Date of Next Meeting. The language of minutes is precise and free from ambiguity; it mostly uses constructions suitable for expression of collective rather than individual responsibility; it makes points in a concise fashion. The style is formal and impersonal. Among the grammatical features, which characterize the language of minutes, are the simple past tense, the passive voice and the subjunctive mood. The vocabulary of minutes tends to be formal, but now there is a general trend towards informality. Layout is also important in minutes. Itemizing and paragraphing increases the readability of minutes.

7.7

SUGGESTED READINGS

1. Hodgson, P. & Hodgson, J. (1993) Effective Meetings, London: Century Business. 2. Mack, A. (1970/1989) The Language of Business, London: BBC. 3. Rai, U. & Rai, S.M. (1989/1992) Business Communication, Bombay: Himalaya Publishing House.

7.8

ANSWERS TO CHECK YOUR PROGRESS

Check Your Progress - 1 1. i. (a) In case of any future dispute about the decisions of the committee we can refer to the minutes. (b) If there arises any doubt about which action was assigned to whom, we can remove the doubt by referring to the minutes. (c) People who were not present at the meeting (including non-members) who need to know what went on at the meeting can refer to the minutes.

ii. The secretary of the organization iii. The two stages are (1) Note-taking at the meeting and (2) Conversion of the notes into minutes afterwards. iv. We take notes of a speech; we make notes from a written text. v. There are three components: the active listening ability; familiarity with the subject matter; the ability to select key words and phrases and use informal codes and abbreviations.

2. The following notes are only suggestive. Since notes are personal to the note-taker, your Taking Notes & Preparing Minutes notes may differ from these, but the minutes should not. Minutes confirmed Item 1: Expts. To SE Asia M: fall 3rd Yr running Reasons beyond control: Loss of price adv. Due to 1. Growing local comp. 2. Rising wages at home 3. Steep tax rate (may be cut in next budg.) Urgent c-measures nessary to retain price adv. (Re. Bagchi) vis--vis local units. - better tech.? No. Already the best. - Lower wage adv.? Neutral. By transpt. costs - Tax rate: 80% vs. 15-25% in SEA - 6 new units starting in SEA in 3 yrs

expts. To SEA may stop then.

B: Relief at home not likely. Think bold Take adv of - SEA open policy - SEA low tax rate SHIFT ONE PLANT TO SEA Check Your Progress 2 1. a. Matters Arising: This section, which occurs after the section on Confirmation of the Minutes of the Last Meeting, provides information about any important comments, initial cost comp. (local plants US imported) higher rated capacity quicker rec. of cost

announcements or decisions made relating to matters contained in the minutes of the last meeting. b. In Attendance: In this section, names of those persons attending the meeting are recorded who are not regular members of the body but who are present by invitation to give the body specialist assistance. c. Apologies for Absence: In this section are recorded names of those members who were unable to attend the meeting and had sent in their apologies to the Secretary. d. AOB (Any other Business): In this section, we record the minutes of any matter(s) discussed under the item of the same title in the agenda. Under this item of the agenda, the Chairperson can permit discussion on any matter not included in the agenda. 2. Only the minutes of the main item are given below: Item 1. Exports to South East Asia Mr. Mahajan reported that sales to S.E. Asia had declined for the third year running. identified three reasons for this decline: 1. Growing competition from local manufacturers 2. Rising wages at home 3. The high tax rate at home Because of the last two factors the price advantage enjoyed by the company so far had been seriously eroded. All the three factors were beyond the companys control. Some relief could be expected in the next budget when the government is expected to cut the tax rate. Mr. Mahajan however agreed with Mr. Bagchi that the company could not wait for the budget and must initiate counter-measures urgently to retain the price advantage vis--vis local manufacturers. No measures were immediately apparent, as 1. there was no scope for improvement in technology since the best technology was already being used 2. the limited advantage of lower wages was neutralized by transportation costs 3. the home tax rate was 80% as against 15-25% local rate Mr. Mahajan pointed out that six new plants were going to be commissioned in S.E. Asia in the next 3 years. When ready, our exports may stop completely. Mr. Bagchi warned the Board not to expect any relief at home and think bold. He was in favour of taking advantage of the open policies and low tax rates of the South East Asian countries and shifting one of our plants there. He pointed out that the initial cost would be less than the US-imported local plants, and, because of the higher rated capacity of our plants, would be recovered more quickly. .. 3. (a) Resolved that a subcommittee be appointed to suggest measures. (b) Resolved that Dr. Lekh Raj and Mrs. S. Lamba be appointed members of the Board of Directors of Mahima Plastics Ltd. He

(c) Resolved that the Secretary be authorized to conduct negotiations with 4. (a) Ms. Narain attributed the fall in sales in the northern states to ineffective agents and wanted them to be changed immediately. Manager (Sales) however disagreed and argued that i. established agents were very hard to find ii. changing agents disturbs the market iii. there can be no guarantee that the new agents would be any better (b) The Chairperson stressed the need for urgent action in the north. The Manager pointed out that he was trying to re-organise the sales network in the north and expected good results when the reorganization work had been completed. In Punjab and H.P. This work had been completed and sales had already improved. (c) Before giving his final consent to the takeover, HL wanted a guarantee that no worker would be dismissed. OL said that such a guarantee could not be given as, following modernization of manufacturing, redundancies were bound to arise. On this, HL expressed the fear that court action by workers could stall the takeover, but OL assured that a reasonable deal would be worked out for workers who are made redundant. Check Your Progress 3 i) ii) iii) iv) v) vi) vii) viii) ix) The costs would be reduced if the workers come on time. The new software can be mastered easily in a couple of days. The consignment is likely to be received by the customer by Monday. Similar investments are being made in the USA according to a recent report. The payment along with our order is enclosed. The body of our car will be produced at our Rampur factory. The space now seems adequate since the premises have been enlarged since my last visit. The economies are dominated by large companies in my countries. Productivity can be increased by using better trained staff.

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UNIT 8 PRESENTATION SKILLS-I

Structure
8.0 8.1 8.2 8.3 8.4 8.5 8.6 8.7 8.8 8.9 Introduction Objectives Reading: Presentation Skills Grammar: Verbs often Required in Presentations Language Focus Listening: Importance of Body Language in Presentations Speaking: Preparing an Outline of a Presentation Pronunciation Summary Answers to Check Your Progress

8.0

INTRODUCTION

Presentations are frequently used in business organizations and educational institutions for communicating ideas and information to a group. In this Unit you will learn how to make effective presentations. You will learn

how to prepare for presentations hints on effective delivery preparing outlines of presentations use of a variety of presentation verbs use of signaling, signposting and listing techniques the importance of body language in presentations

8.1 WARM UP
When you give a presentation, just as important as what you say. knowing your audience are both considerations. Here are some of Can you add some more to the how you deliver the information is Knowing your subject well and very important. But there are other them. What is your opinion on these? list?

Body language voice

notes visual aids humour

language length

confidence speed

8.2

READING: PRESENTATION SKILLS

Presentation skills are absolutely essential in almost all work areas. In the business world presentations are made to clients, prospective buyers, business associates, seniors, colleagues andPresentation Skills-I subordinates. These days presentations have also become part of the recruitment process. In order to be effective and impressive in your presentations you need to prepare the presentation before you actually deliver it. Even experts in communication need to plan and prepare their presentations in advance. Check Your Progress 1 Look at these tips on Presentation skills and decide whether you would put them in Preparation or Delivery. i) If you are not enthusiastic about what you say you cannot expect to generate interest amongst the audience; Adapt to response dont stick to your plan necessarily. If you find that it is not working, alter it to adapt to the audience ii) Check room, seating, acoustics, OHT or Computer (depending on what you decide to use). iii) Vary your tone and pitch. Ensure proper modulation. Everything should not be said with equal amount of stress. Certain things need to be emphasized more than others. iv) Memorize your introduction. This will help you to sound confident and in control. v) Try to involve the audience and respond to their reactions vi) Keep your sentences short and simple. Use deliberate pauses to punctuate your speech vii) Never talk down or up to your audience. Treat them as equals, no matter who they are. viii) Whenever you make a really important point, pause and let the full significance of what you have said sink inbefore you move on. ix) Dont put boring tables of figures and long lines of text on the overhead projector and read them out. x) When showing a visual, keep quiet and give people time to take it in. xi) Welcome questions from your audience. When members of your audience ask you a question, it is usually because they have a genuine interest in what you are saying and want to know more. Treat questions as an opportunity to get your message across better. xii) Know the size and the knowledge level of your audience. You must not tell them what they already know. xiii) Be clear about the purpose of your presentation is it to inform or to persuade. xiv) Key ideas should be emphasized you must ensure that the importance of your key points is not lost because of over emphasis on sub points xv) Dont cram if you have a lot of information to give you could consider giving some of it through handouts rather than cram all of it into your presentation. xvi) You must present an outline in the beginning of your presentation so that your audience knows how your presentation is structured. This should be well prepared in advance. xvii) Rehearse your presentation in order to time it, and to become familiar with names and figures as well as any complex information you need to give to the audience. xviii) Pay attention to your body language: eye contact; gestures; posture; movement. Preparation ii) Check room, seating etc. Delivery i) Be enthusiastic

Now check your chart with the Answer key.

8.3

GRAMMAR: VERBS PRESENTATIONS

OFTEN

REQUIRED

IN

Outlining Your Presentation It is important to present an outline of your presentation at the very beginning. This helps the audience to understand how you have structured your presentation. A presentation will be much clearer to the audience if the structure is clearly signaled. The use of a variety of presentation verbs can help you to present the outline clearly, specifically and effectively. Check Your Progress 2 Here are some verbs often required in presentations. Can you complete the outlines of the presentations below by inserting suitable verbs from the box? You may need to use some of these twice. talking i) discuss highlight outline tell filling report sharing start bring

Good morning everyone. I am Aditya Sen. This morning I am going to be ____________ to you about the Adult Education project taken up by our Institution. So Ill begin by ____________________ you in on the background of the project and then ___________ you up to date on the progress of the project. Ill go on to ______________ what I see as the main achievements of the project. Next I will _____________ our plans for further extension of the project. In the end I will ___________ you how you can become a part of this project. Please feel free to interrupt me anytime with any questions you might want to ask.

ii) Good afternoon ladies and gentlemen. I am here to ____________ on the results of the market study of our new product in the western zone. I will begin with Mumbai which is our main domestic market in the west. I will then go on to Jaipur and Ahemdabad in that order. After ____________ with you information on the data collected from these cities, I will _____________ in depth the implications of this report. My presentation will be followed by an open discussion on our performance in the western zone.

Here are some more ways of signaling the structure of your presentation. Pay particular attention to the verbs in bold. Introduction Greeting Topic Good morning ladies & gentlemen / everyone.. Id like to talk to you about. Id like to say a few words about. Im here to make a presentation on This morning Im going to be talking to you about / telling you about / showing you / reporting / taking a look at.

Outline Ill be dealing with three areas. Presentation Skills-I Ive divided my talk into. So Ill start off by filling you in on the background to / bringing you up-to-date on / giving you an overview of/ making a few observations about / outlining And then Ill go on to discuss in more depth / highlight what I see as the main / make detailed recommendations regarding. I will conclude with / I will end my presentation with. / At the end of my presentation I will invite you to ask me any questions that you may have. Check Your Progress 3 Join the words in A with the phrases in B to make complete sense: A i. ii. iii. iv. v. vi. vii. reporting filling bringing discuss talking taking understanding B a. you in b. you up to date c. in more depth d. the implications of e. a look at f. on the results of g. you through

8.4

LANGUAGE FOCUS

Signposting Signposts help to guide the audience through a presentation. Look at the phrases given below. These will help you to guide your audience through a presentation. to move on to expand on to digress to illustrate to go back to recap to conclude to summarize to turn to to elaborate on

Check Your Progress 4 Choose one of the signpost expressions from above for the following situations: i. ii. iii. iv. v. vi. vii. viii. ix. x. When you want to make your next point When you want to change direction When you want to refer to an earlier point When you want to repeat the main points When you want to give a wider perspective When you want to give an example When you want to do a deeper analysis When you just want to give the basic points When you want to deviate from your plan When you want to finish your talk To To To To To To To To To To...

More Signposting Here are some more helpful signposts which you could use in the middle stage of your presentations.

Showing steps

First of all lets look at Then.. Next Lastly..

Visuals too are included in the middle of a presentation. In the next section we discuss ways to present them: Using Visuals Visuals like bar graphs, line graphs, pie charts, pictograms, maps, photographs, charts, PowerPoint slides are commonly used in presentations to present statistical information or to make comparisons. These will be dealt with in more detail in the next chapter. Introducing a visual Id like to show you Have a look at this This graph shows / represents. Here we can see Lets look at this.. As you can see in this graph / table Comparisons This compares x with y Lets compare the Here you see a comparison between..

Conclusion

And here is some language input for the end of your presentation. Closing Finally, to sum up.. Id like to sum up now.. That concludes my presentation. To conclude

Questions / Discussion At the end of a presentation you are required to invite the audience to ask any questions that they may like to ask. Alternatively you could also permit them to ask questions whenever they want in the course of your presentation. This has to be told to them in the very beginning. Inviting questions Are there any questions? If there are any questions Ill be glad to try to answer them. Ill be glad to answer any questions you may have. Now we could have a discussion on

Check Your Progress 5 Cross out the words in italics which are not suitable in these extracts from presentations: I would like to begin with a preview / an introduction / an outline of the main points of my talk. ii) The first thing Ill be saying / telling / talking about is why we need to change our pay policy. iii) I will then go on to inform / share / confide with you some of the viewpoints of our seniorPresentation Skills-I executives. iv) If we could just draw / focus / attract our attention on the major benefits of the scheme. v) I would like to inform / state / assure at the very beginning that this is just a proposal and not a decision. vi) But we do need to seriously ask / address / answer the question of how we are going to deal with the problem. vii) I will be glad to call / answer / invite any questions that you may have at the end of the presentation. viii) Please feel free to interrupt / ask / enquire me with any questions you may have in the course of the presentation. i)

8.5

LISTENING: IMPORTANCE OF BODY LANGUAGE IN PRESENTATIONS

You will now hear some tips on the importance of Body Language in Presentations. Listen to the audio and match the two columns: Check Your Progress 6 Slouching eye contact Smile shows that you are friendly & approachable helps you to be more clear and effective make for better understanding

Gestures Posture Proximity variation in voice

shows disinterest enhances the comfort level of the audience helps counter boredom signals interest in others

Can you explain what the speaker means by: i) smiling is contagious ii) invading others space. Consult the Answer Key and compare your answer. A. Listen to the beginning of a presentation on the introduction of a new course in Cinematics. Do you think it is a good introduction? B. Now listen to the beginning of another presentation on the same topic. Which one is better and why? Compare your analysis with the one given in the Answer key.

8.6

SPEAKING: PREPARING PRESENTATION

AN

OUTLINE

OF

Now prepare an outline of a presentation on any one of these topics and present it before the mirror or before your friends. If possible you can record the presentation and then listen to it. You can now listen to the tape script and compare your outline with the sample tape script.

1. Your town / city 2. Television as a source of information and entertainment 3. Your favourite book / magazine Now have a look at two sample outlines given in the Answer key.

8.7

PRONUNCIATION

Here are some words that are commonly used for presentations. Mark the stressed syllable in these words and speak them out aloud. The first is done for you as example. Now listen to the tape and check your pronunciation. You may also refer to a good dictionary for the correct stressed syllable. 1. 2. 3. presen'tation recommendation expansion

4. 5. 6. 7. 8. 9. 10. 11. 12. 13. 14. 15. 16. 17. 18. 19. 20. 21. 22. 23. 24. 25.

supervision efficient sufficient strategic systematic analytical economical typical experience inconvenience potential commercial individual essential gradual actual responsibility incredible impossible diversify obvious spontaneous

8.8

SUMMING UP

In this unit we have introduced you to Presentation Skills in terms of -

how to prepare for presentations how to deliver effective presentations some linguistic skills for introducing a presentation, signposting, using visuals and concluding.

We have also dwelt on Body language, which is very important when making a Presentation. All these skills are discussed in greater detail in the next unit.
Presentation Skills-I

8.9

ANSWER TO CHECK YOUR PROGRESS

Check Your Progress 1 Preparation ii), iv), ix), xii), xiii), xv), xvi), xvii). Delivery i), iii), v), vi), vii), viii), x), xi), xiv), xviii)

Check Your Progress 2 The answers are given in bold print. 1. Good morning everyone. I am Aditya Sen. This morning I am going to be talking to you about the Adult Education project taken up by our Institution. So Ill begin by filling you in on the background of the project and then Ill bring you up to date on the progress of the project. Ill go on to highlight what I see as the main achievements of the project. Next I will outline our plans for further extension of the project. In the end I will tell you how you can become a part of this project. Please feel free to interrupt me anytime with any questions you might want to ask. 2. Good afternoon ladies and gentlemen. I am here to report on the results of the market study of our new product in the western zone. I will begin with Mumbai which is our main domestic market in the west. I will then go on to Jaipur and Ahemdabad in that order. After sharing with you information on the data collected from these cities, I will discuss in depth the implications of this report. My presentation will be followed by an open discussion on our performance in the western zone. Check Your Progress 3 i. ii. iii. iv. v. vi. vii. reporting filling bringing discuss talking taking understanding f. on the results of a. you in b. you up to date c. in more depth g. you through e. a look at d. the implications of

Check Your Progress 4 Signpost expressions: i. ii. iii. iv. v. vi. vii. viii. ix. x. When you want to make your next point When you want to change direction When you want to refer to an earlier point When you want to recall the main points When you want to give a wider perspective When you want to give an example When you want to do a deeper analysis When you just want to give the basic points once again When you want to deviate from your plan When you want to finish your talk To move on to. To turn to To go back to To recap To expand on To illustrate To elaborate on To summarize To digress To conclude

Check Your Progress 5 The suitable options are underlined for you.

I would like to begin with a preview / an introduction / an outline of the main points of my talk. ii. The first thing Ill be saying / telling / talking about is why we need to change our pay policy. iii. I will then go on to inform / share / confide with you some of the viewpoints of our senior executives. iv. If we could just draw / focus / attract our attention on the major benefits of the scheme. v. I would like to inform / state / assure at the very beginning that this is just a proposal and not a decision. vi. But we do need to seriously ask / address / answer the question of how we are going to deal with the problem. vii. I will be glad to call / answer / invite any questions that you may have at the end of the presentation. viii. Please feel free to interrupt / ask / enquire me with any questions you may have in the course of the presentation. Listening Tape script

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The Body
Your body communicates different impressions to the audience. People not only listen to you, they also watch you. Slouching tells them you are indifferent or you do not care...even though you might care a great deal! On the other hand, displaying good posture tells your audience that you know what you are doing and you care deeply about it. Also, a good posture helps you to speak more clearly and effectively. Now let us turn to eye contact. This helps to regulate the flow of communication. It signals interest in others and increases the speaker's credibility. Speakers who make eye contact open the flow of communication and convey interest, concern, warmth, and credibility. Facial expressions are equally important. Smiling is a powerful cue that transmits happiness, friendliness, warmth, and liking. So, if you smile frequently you will be perceived as more likable, friendly, warm, and approachable. Smiling is often contagious and others will react favorably. They will be more comfortable around you and will want to listen to you more. If you fail to gesture while speaking, you may be perceived as boring and stiff. A lively speaking style captures attention, makes the material more interesting, and facilitates understanding. Attention to posture and body orientation are essential. You communicate numerous messages by the way you talk and move. Standing erect and leaning forward communicates that you are approachable, receptive, and friendly. Interpersonal closeness results when you and your audience face each other. Speaking with your back turned or looking at the floor or ceiling should be avoided as it communicates disinterest. Now what about the space we keep from the audience? Notions of proximity vary with cultures. Cultural norms dictate a comfortable distance for interaction with others. You should look for signals of discomfort caused by invading other's space. Some of these are: rocking, leg swinging, tapping, and gaze aversion. Typically, in large rooms, space invasion is not a problem. In most instances there is too much distance. To counteract this, move around the room to increase

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interaction with your audience. Increasing the proximity enables you to make better eye contact and increases the opportunities for others to speak. One of the major criticisms of speakers is that they speak in a monotone voice. Listeners perceive this type of speaker as boring and dull. People report that they learn less and lose interest more quickly when listening to those who have not learned to modulate their voices. Adopted from Source: www.nwlink.com Check Your Progress 6 slouching eye contact smile gestures posture the right proximity variation in voice i. smiling is contagious When you smile at somebody, chances are that he / she will smile back at you. A smile spreads happiness around you as it makes others smile in response. ii. invading others space Getting so close to somebody that he /she becomes uncomfortable because of your nearness and feels that his / her privacy is being invaded. Tape scripts A. Good morning ladies and gentlemen. Im glad you are here to listen to me. Id like to talk to you about our new course in Cinematics. Im sure you will find the course relevant and interesting. It is very much in demand these days and Im here to tell you all about it who can join it and what you can do after a course like this. There are lots of places you can work in after learning Cinematics, but of course I wont have time enough to tell you about all of them. You can also ask me questions about the course if you want. B. Good morning ladies and gentlemen. Thanks for being here. This morning Im going to be talking to you about a new course we have launched in Cinematics. Ill begin by explaining what Cinematics is. I will then go on to highligh the relevance and scope of Cinematics. Next I will outline the kind of skills that the course could help you to develop. I will conclude by filling you in on information about eligibility and requirements for the course. You are free to ask me any questions you may have at the end of my presentation. Answer shows disinterest interest in others shows that you are friendly & approachable make for better understanding helps you to be more clear and effective enhances the comfort level of the audience helps counter boredom

The second outline is better because it has a clear structure. The speaker states exactly the order in which he / she will be dealing with the topic, making appropriate use of presentation verbs and connectives. He/she also states his/her policy on questions the speaker would not like to be disturbed with questions during the course of the presentation and this is made clear at the very beginning.

Speaking
Television as a source of information and entertainment Good morning ladies and gentlemen. This morning Im here to talk about the importance of television as a source of information and entertainment. I will begin my talk with giving an overview of the popularity of television as a means of communication. I will then go on to outline the areas in which it provides invaluable information. Next I will emphasize upon the importance of television as a popular and affordable source of entertainment for all age groups. My presentation will last for 10 minutes. I will be glad to answer any questions that you may have at the end of my presentation. My Favourite Magazine Hello friends. Id like to say a few words about My Favourite Magazine. Ive divided my talk into three parts. Firstly, I will begin by telling you which is my favourite magazine. Secondly, I will highlight the main features of the magazine. In the end I will tell you why I prefer this magazine to other magazines. I will invite you to ask me any questions you may have at the end of my talk. Note: The second outline is more informal than the first one. This may be used when you make a presentation before an audience where you do not need to be too formal.

Pronunciation Tape Script

1. 2. 3. 4. 5. 6. 7. 8. 9. presen'tation recommen'dation ex'pansion super'vision e'fficient su'fficient stra'tegic syste'matic ana'lytical

10. eco'nomical 11. 'typical 12. ex'perience 13. incon'venience

14. po'tential 15. co'mmercial 16. indi'vidual 17. 'essential 18. 'gradual 19. 'actual 20. responsi'bility 21. in'credible 22. im'possible 23. di'versify 24. 'obvious 25. spon'taneous