CItation Guide
CItation Guide
Bad Example #1: There are many examples of self-analysis in Plato's philosophy. "The unexamined
worth living" (Plato 45). [In this example, the author uses a colon to show that a quote follows the
first sentence]
Better Example: Plato thinks people should analyze their own lives. As he writes in one dialogue,
"The unexamined life is not worth living" (Plato 45). His attitude is a common one among Greek
philosophers.
Note that in the good examples, the writer doesn't suddenly start off a quotation at the beginning of the
sentence, and the writer doesn't leave it hanging, unattached from the surrounding sentences. Instead, the
writer attaches it to the previous introductory material with appropriate punctuation, or she adds a short
introductory phrase to set the reader up for the quote. She also follows the quote with an explanation of
why that quote is important.
This rule also applies to the title of short works (songs, short poems, and short stories). The punctuation
goes inside the quotation mark, as you will note in the example below.
Ulysses is similar to Hemingway's hero in "The Snows of Kilimanjaro," and the character
called Francis Macomber in "The Short, Happy Life of Francis Macomber."
You should never, never end up with two periods at the end of a sentence.
No! Wrong!: In Book Thirteen of The Odyssey, Homer writes, ". . . You must come from the other
end of nowhere, / else you are a great booby, having to ask / what place this is." (301-303).
Common Problems 2
BUT! The Punctuation Goes After the Citation with Short Parenthetical Citations:
However, with parenthetical citation, punctuation comes after the parenthetical citation, rather than being
enclosed by the quotation marks. Notice where the period goes in the following examples:
or
In Book Thirteen of The Odyssey, Homer writes, ". . . You must come from the other end of
nowhere, / else you are a great booby, having to ask / what place this is" (301-303).
Note that in the example above, the numbers refer to lines, not page numbers. We quote articles and essays
by page number, but poetry and plays, we quote by act, scene, and line numbers.
Richard's changes in personality become manifest in his imagery of weather. In the beginning of
the play, we see this tendency in his first words: "Now is the winter of our discontent / made glorious
summer by this son of York" (R3 1.1.1-2). The transformation of cold winter into warm summer mirrors his
change from boredom to excitement.
In Book Four, Odysseus' son talks with an old veteran of the Trojan War.
In Act Two, Scene One, Hamlet finds himself in an untenable position.
However, if you refer to a book using a numeric adjective, or referring to books and acts in general, you do not
capitalize it.
In the opening scene of the second act of Hamlet, Hamlet finds himself in an untenable position.
In the fourth book of The Odyssey, Odysseus' son talks with a veteran of the Trojan War.
There are twelve books in The Odyssey and five acts in Hamlet.
Common Problems 3
For more information, see Writing at Carson-Newman pages 66-85, The Bedford Handbook, pages 448451, or The MLA Handbook 6th edition, pages 98-102.
Pronouns: Agreement in Gender/Number
Writers often stumble when they come to pronouns and the antecedent of a pronoun. Sometimes when
students try to avoid sexist language, they mistakenly resort to using plural pronouns such as they or their
in reference to a singular subject. At other times, by sheer force of non-grammatical, everyday speech,
writers slip into the use of plural pronouns with singular antecedents. Always be aware of how many
people are in a sentence, and whether the antecedent to which a word refers is single or plural.
If you want to avoid sexist language, do not resort to awkward phrases like his/her or him/her.
Likewise, do not resort to using they or their to refer to a singular subject. Instead, make the subject of your
sentence plural and then use their or them. That way, a writer simultaneously avoids sexist language,
improper grammar, and awkward phrasing.
Incorrect: In the play, each character must keep their thoughts to themselves.
Okay but awkward: In the play, each character must keep his/her thoughts to himself/herself.
Yes! In the play, all characters must keep their thoughts to themselves.
Remember also that the words ending in -body and -one (somebody, everyone, everybody, etc.) are
considered to be singular rather than plural. ("Everybody is coming to town," not "Everybody are coming
to town.") Since these words are singular, normally they require a singular pronoun. "Everybody brought
his book with him" is a traditional construction. On the other hand, "Everybody brought their book with
them" is not considered correct in traditional grammar. To avoid sexist speech, the best suggestion is to
pick a plural subject with which to begin the sentence. ("All of the students brought their books with
them.")