FPH Tips On Writing Effective Reflective Notes
FPH Tips On Writing Effective Reflective Notes
September 2012
Naveed Syed
Anne Scoular
Liz Reaney
Contents
Contents ---------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- 1
Table of Tables, Figures & Boxes ------------------------------------------------------------------ 1
1
Introduction--------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- 2
1.1
1.2
1.3
2.2
Style ----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- 7
4.5.2
Content-------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- 8
4.5.3
5.2
5.3
Conclusion ---------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- 11
Bibliography -------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- 11
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Introduction
In school, we think about math, and we think about spelling, and we think about
grammar. But who ever heard of thinking about thinking? If we think about
electricity, we can understand it better, but when we think about thinking, we seem
to understand ourselves better.
Harry Stottlemeier (Lipman, 1982, p. 17).
At all stages of Public Health Professionalism and related education, people are now
being asked to keep a learning portfolio, which usually includes some reflective writing.
This will be more important with Revalidation. This learning tool is very familiar to those
newly graduated from universities or medical school but it somewhat more unfamiliar and
difficult for others who are not trained to think in this fashion.
Reflective writing is said to encourage a writer to learn from an event, as it necessitates
focused and analytical thinking. The lessons learnt can be identified and recorded, as can
learning needs for future attention.
1.1
1.2
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The theory on learning and reflection comes from a number of different sources. It begins
with Kolbs work on the learning cycles in 1984 and Schns ideas about reflection, with
Gibbs outlining the stages in reflection and reflective writing. David Kolb presented
reflective learning as a diagram that is known as the Kolb cycle a modified version is
outlined above in Figure 2.
Reflection is said to help to bridge the gap between theory and practice, and between offjob learning and on-job application. Reflecting on the real work problems can help to
identify how best to apply what we know in practice. Reflection leads to critical awareness
and enables us to look critically at our own behaviour, the behaviour of other people, and
at the organisational and social context within which we operate. Reflection is used to
combine the six levels of learning (See Table 1) with a bias towards the synthesis and
evaluation.
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Comprehension
Application
Analysis
Synthesis
Evaluation
Explanation
Recognition and recall of information and facts - describing
events
Interprets, translates or summarises given information demonstrating understanding of events
Uses information in a situation different from original
learning context Separates wholes into parts until relationships are clear
breaks down experiences
Combines elements to form new entity from the original
one - draws on experience and other evidence to suggest
new insights
Involves acts of decision making, or judging based on
criteria or rationale - makes judgements about
All this means that reflection is not a bland or innocuous process it is central to
becoming a powerful, critical professional who is prepared to challenge the way things are
done (See Box 2).
Remember reflection and reflective writing is like any other skill, it will take time and
practice to master it and you will only benefit from it if you approach it seriously.
4.2
4.3
4.4
Good quality Reflective Notes are usually personal and individualised to each learning
event. A standard template would negate the value of reflection. Box 1 outlines the basic
rules in writing Reflective Notes. As it concerns your thoughts, reflective writing is mostly
subjective. Therefore, in addition to being reflective and logical, you can be personal,
hypothetical, critical and creative. You can comment based on your experience, rather
than limiting yourself to academic or course evidence.
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What were your reactions and feelings? What did you think and
feel?
4.3
What was good and bad about the learning event? Make value
judgements.
4.3, 4.4
What sense can you make of the learning event? Bring in ideas
from outside the learning event to help you (such as work
experience)
Conclusions
(general):
4.3, 4.4
Conclusions
(specific):
4.3, 4.4
Feelings:
Evaluation:
Analysis:
Personal
Action plans:
4.5
4.4
Style
Use full sentences and complete paragraphs
You can usually use personal pronouns like 'I', 'my' or 'we'
Keep colloquial language to a minimum (eg, kid, bloke, stuff)
Keep the length appropriate or concise (quality not quantity)
Presentation and legibility (especially if hand-written submissions)
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4.5.2
Content
Clarity and good observation in presentation of learning event or
issues;
Depth and detail of reflective accounts;
Honesty and self-assessment;
Thoroughness of reflection and self-awareness;
Evidence of a willingness to revise ideas;
Evidence of creative thinking;
Evidence of critical thinking;
Evidence of a deep approach to the subject matter of the journal
article, or online learning
Representation of different cognitive skills (synthesis, analysis,
evaluation etc);
4.5.3
Supportive Practice
Submit the right number of Reflective Notes for each learning event
(see CPD guidance)
Clear statement of the learning need and link to PDP, e.g., why was
the Member there in the first place (Relationship of the entries in
CPD Form to any relevant day to day activities)
Match of the CPD Form, or learning events to the PDP
A clear proposed action(s) in response to the reflection
Questions that arise from the reflective processes and on which to
reflect further
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Useful Vocabulary
The following are just a few suggestions for words and phrases that might be useful in
reflective writing. Using any of these words and phrases will not in itself make you a good
reflective writer, of course!
5.1
5.2
meaningful
significant
important
relevant
useful
Previously,
At the time,
At first
Initially,
Subsequently,
Later,
[Alternatively,]
[Equally,]
This
[Un]Like...
This
aspect(s)
element(s)
experience(s)
issue(s)
idea(s)
was (were)
learning
arose from...
happened when...
resulted from...
might be
is perhaps
could be
is probably
is similar to...
is unlike...
this
because of...
due to...
explained by...
related to...
because...
reveals...
demonstrates...
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5.3
Having
read...
experienced...
applied...
discussed...
analysed...
learned...
I now
[Additionally,]
[Furthermore,]
[Most importantly,]
I have
significantly
slightly
feel...
think...
realise...
wonder...
question...
know...
developed
improved
my skills in...
my understanding
of...
my knowledge of...
my ability to...
This knowledge
This understanding
This skill
Because I
is
could be
will be
essential
important
useful
to me as a learner [because...]
to me as a practitioner [because...]
did not...
have not yet...
am not yet certain about...
am not yet confident about...
do not yet know...
do not yet understand..
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Conclusion
We hope that this brief introduction to learning theory and its accompanying practical
guidance will assist members with planning and reflecting on their CPD activities,
ensuring that they maximise the many learning opportunities that present in daily public
health practice, as well as optimising the value of more formal educational events.
Ultimately, time invested in reflective thinking and writing will greatly enrich the quality of
professional development, which ultimately translates into effective public health
performance.
Comments on this guidance are welcomed. They should be directed to: [email protected]
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