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The student received feedback on their work for LO2. Their current grade is a pass but sections are incomplete or missing. The feedback asks the student to improve their work, seek help if needed, and ensure all work is uploaded to their blog. While the highest possible grade is a merit, minor corrections or additions are needed. The student is asked to label any re-submissions clearly and not overwrite previous blog posts. Specific feedback is given on improving LO2 parts A, B, and C by adding more details, explanations, and terminology. The resubmission deadline is January 27th.

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Lo2 - Aiden

The student received feedback on their work for LO2. Their current grade is a pass but sections are incomplete or missing. The feedback asks the student to improve their work, seek help if needed, and ensure all work is uploaded to their blog. While the highest possible grade is a merit, minor corrections or additions are needed. The student is asked to label any re-submissions clearly and not overwrite previous blog posts. Specific feedback is given on improving LO2 parts A, B, and C by adding more details, explanations, and terminology. The resubmission deadline is January 27th.

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Aiden Timmins LO2 Feedback. 4/01/17

Current Grade for LO2: Pass

The current grade is calculated on the work that is present on your blog. You
LO2 Part may have missing items, or vastly incomplete sections of work. Please
A. Initial improve this. If you require help with any of this work, or need to show me
Ideas work before re-submitting to check the quality, please do so.
Note: This
work is Remember, the highest grade you can achieve on this learning
technically outcome is a Merit Grade, even if you have achieved this, if there are
for LO3 (as any minor corrections or additions, can you please ensure these are
it is in the made.
LO3 Please ensure all of the work is uploaded on the blog.
criteria) Remember Dont overwrite the blog posts, make new blog posts that are
However, clearly labelled with the words Re-Submission.
you cannot do the subsequent work without this document. Hence why it has
been moved.
This needs more detail, please write and explain each idea using paragraphs, this
is too brief. Use the handout on moodle to assist with this. Also, consider looking
at your groups ideas to help you structure this work. Consider adding more
terminology to the ideas; mise en scene, lighting type, particular shots you would
require. Be a bit clearer on the linked campaign (Print, radio or viral) How will
that look?

LO2 Part B. Treatment Proposal


Ensure you explain the audience and use terminology (demographics,
psychographics and socio-economic groups). Obviously your product covers a
broad audience, however, try to narrow it down based on the touchpoint and
channel you have decided to use.
You are also required to explain the accompanying advertisement (Print, radio or
viral). Make sure for the regulation section of this, you look at the CAP codes on
the ASA website, (Not BCAP), these relate to magazine adverts. This is a
requirement for a merit grade.

LO2 Part C. Campaign Schedule


Good work here. Well done. It clearly shows how the campaign will develop and
evolve over a period of time.

The resubmission deadline is: 27/01/17

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