Visual Argument Paper
Visual Argument Paper
Roxanna Walker
February 6, 2017
RHET 1312
Professor Foster
the wrong way or intended to hurt one anothers feelings. When we communicate through computer
screens under fake accounts, we tend to not care about how what we say to the person on the other end of
the screen might feel. We belittle them, call them out their names, use slurs, and a larger range of insulting
words to make a person feel their absolute worst. A visual arguments main purpose is to make a claim to
its audience, in an attempt to get viewers to adopt a certain position, perspective, belief, or point of view
on an issue. The photograph that I chose for this assignment makes a claim on being conscious of the
The visual argument I chose for this assignment is a photograph of a young boy crying with a
hand around his throat, but instead of an actual hand it is made from offensive words such as, Fool,
Moron, Punk, and a variety of other insulting words and phrases. In addition to that right next to the
boy is the sentence, Your words have power use them wisely. I think the designer deliberately made the
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choice to make the main subject, the boy, a young child crying, with certain words bolder and more
noticeable than others, along with the coloring of those words. The message they are trying to convey is
clear and distinctive: the effect words have on people when they are used to purposely offend should be
taken into consideration before they are spoken. Therefore, I believe they made the right choices about
wanting to get their message across to its intended audience, anyone and everyone who communicates
with one another and to those with younger siblings that might annoy them causing them to say words
that they might not mean. By using this young boy, depicting him as fragile, young, and crying the
designer is appealing to the audiences sympathetic emotions one might have towards someone they
might know making them more conscious of who and how they might affect the ones they love. The
designer of this argument wants its viewers to be conscious about their words regardless of who they are
talking to. Although the claim is clear, is it possible that the message could be clearer or target more
people? Is it possible that making the subject a young crying boy focuses too much on young children
instead of everyone -young, old, male, female, and those who identify as something else?
Although this is a photo of a boy crying with text edited in, I think its an acceptable medium for
the audience, however, I do believe that the same message could have been captured better in a real life
setting where he was being directly verbally harassed by someone. If the same message was presented
that way, then, a real life example of what it looks like to be verbally harassed would have been
demonstrated and could have resulted in a greater effect on its intended or possibly broader audience.
Since this is a generation of advanced technology, and its more common for a two-year-old to
successfully navigate a cellphone or computer, I would have changed the subjects to an adult offended at
an open computer screen that had the comment section of their personal photo visible with offensive
emojis and comments from random people. This argument is effective because, it raises the issue that
what we say to others have a greater effect than what we think to an audience who can relate to the
subject personally. Therefore we should be more careful about not only what we say to others but as well
as how we say those things. The photograph is pushing against verbal bullying, yet there are some who
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could perhaps counter that the issue isnt that how words are offensive, but instead we are too quick to be
offended by words; that the saying, Sticks and stones may break my bones, but words will never hurt
From this assigment, I have learned that you must think deeper than what is present, as discussed
in class, you have to look for and at the explicit and implicit arguments. This project has helped me pay
closer attention to who Im talking to and how I want to convey that message, not only when Im
speaking but as well as when Im writing. I must take into consideration my audience, my message or
claim, and how Im going to illustrate that claim in a successful way so that the intended audience
understands and connects with the illustration. Although it is important to have a thought-out argument
that I wish to discuss, if I dont have a targeted audience my efforts to shine light on an important issue