Examples of Using Direct Quotes, Paraphrasing, and Summarizing
Examples of Using Direct Quotes, Paraphrasing, and Summarizing
Paraphrasing,andSummarizing
Wordforwordquotation(directquote):
Definition:Usinganauthorslanguagewordforword(verbatim)
Waystoavoidplagiarism:
Usequotationmarksaroundtheauthorswords.
Useasignaloridentifyingphrasethattellswhoandwhatyouarequoting.
Addanintext(parenthetical)referenceattheendofthepassage.
Includeacitationattheendofyourpaper(WorksCited).
MLAExample:
RodriguezandBellancaobserve,Insomeurbanclassrooms,childrenarrive
withoutanynotionofsharingbehavior.Iftheyhavegrownupasstreetsurvivors,
withoutstrongearlymediationforsharing,theymaycometoschoolreadytodo
battletothedeath(135).
Or
Insomeurbanclassrooms,childrenarrivewithoutanynotionofsharing
behavior.Iftheyhavegrownupasstreetsurvivors,withoutstrongearly
mediationforsharing,theymaycometoschoolreadytodobattletothedeath
(RodriguezandBellanca135).
IncludeonyourWorksCitedpage:
Rodriguez,EleanorRenee,andJamesBellanca.WhatIsItAboutMeYouCant
Teach?:AnInstructionalGuidefortheUrbanEducator.2nd ed.ThousandOaks,CA:
Corwin,2007.
Paraphrasing:
Definition:Puttinganauthorsideasinyourownwords
Waystoavoidplagiarism:
Useasignaloridentifyingphrasethattellswhoandwhatyouareparaphrasing
Usethesameideasasintheoriginaltext
Useyourownwordswhenphrasing.Inmostcases,avoidusinganyofthesame
wordingthattheauthorusedunlessyouputakeyterminquotationmarks.
Addanintext(parenthetical)referenceattheendoftheparaphrase.
Includeacitationattheendofyourpaper(WorksCited).
MLAExample:
Originalpassage:
AnnieOakley'slifespannedyearsoftremendouschangeforAmericanwomen.Bythe
timeofherdeathin1926,Americanswerecelebratingtheliberated,urbanfocused,
moderntimesoftheJazzAge.Womenhadwontherighttovote,worelessrestrictive
clothes,andfollowedachangingidealthatwaslooseningsomeoftherestrictionson
women'srolesandbehaviorthathadreignedthroughthenineteenthcentury.
Incorrectparaphrasing:
AnnieOakleyslifespannedyearsofsignificantchangesforAmericanwomen.Bythe
timeshediedin1926,womenhadthevote,worelooserclothing,andembracedthe
freedomfromrestrictive19th centuryrolesandbehaviors.
(Soundstoomuchliketheoriginalpassage.Alsothesentencestructureistoosimilarto
theoriginaltext.)
Correctparaphrasing:
AsdiscussedinthebiographyonPBSsAmericanExperiencewebpage,sharpshooter
AnnieOakleylivedthroughaperiodofmanyliberatingchangesforwomen,fromthe
Victorianerathroughthefirstquarterofthe20thcentury.Examplesincludevotingrights
forwomenaswellasthefreedomtowearcomfortableandpracticalclothing(Annie
Oakley).
IncludeonyourWorksCitedpage:
AnnieOakley:InaMansWorld.AmericanExperience.2006.PBSOnline.19May
2008.<http://www.pbs.org/wgbh/amex/oakley/sfeature/sf_excerpts.html>.
Summarizing:
Definition:Condensinganauthorsideastoamoresuccinctstatement
Waystoavoidplagiarism:
Useasignaloridentifyingphrasethattellswhoandwhatyouaresummarizing.
Useaquickdescriptionofthemainpointsofthepassage.
Useyourownwordsandphrasing.Inmostcases,avoidusinganyofthesame
wording.
Addanintext(parenthetical)referenceattheendofthesummary.
Includeacitationattheendofyourpaper(WorksCited).
MLAExample:
Originalpassage:
By1964,therewereanestimated33,500restaurantsintheUnitedStatescalling
themselvesdriveins,butonly24,500offeredhotfood,theremainderbeingicecream
andsoftdrinkstandsprimarily.Layoutvariedfromdriveintodrivein,butthreeprincipal
spacescouldalwaysbefound:acanopycovereddrivewayadjacenttothebuilding,a
kitchen,andacarhopstationlinkingkitchenandparkinglot.Thesmallestdriveins
offeredcarhopserviceonly,butmanyalsofeaturedindoorlunchcountersandbooths,
sometimesonthescaleofthecoffeeshop.
Summary:
InthechapterQuickServiceRestaurantsintheAgeofAutomobileConvenience,The
authorsnotethatbythemid1960s,nearly35,000selfproclaimeddriveinrestaurants
intheUnitedStatesexisted.Mostservedhotmealswhileothersservedjusticecream
andsoftdrinks.Nospecificblueprintdefinedthetypicaldriveinhowever,three
characteristicsdescribethisnewtypeofcasualeatingestablishment:acovered
driveway,akitchen,andacarhopstation(JackleandSculle55).
IncludeonyourWorksCitedpage:
Jackle,JohnA.,andKeithA.Sculle.FastFood:RoadsideRestaurantsinthe
AutomobileAge.Baltimore:JohnsHopkinsUP,1999.
Commonknowledge:
Definition:Afactthatissowellknownthatitcanbefoundinnumeroussourcesand
thereforedoesnotneedtobecited.
Examplesofcommonknowledge:
ThestatebirdofCaliforniaistheCaliforniaQuail.
TheDodohasbeenextinctsincethemidtolate17thcentury.
TheredtailedhawklivesintheLivermorearea.
Examplesofdetailedinformationthatneedstobecited:
Adultquailbegintomolttheirplumageinmidsummer,whilethechicksarebeing
reared(Leopold105).
TheprimarycausesoftheDodosextinctionwerethedestructionoftheforest
(whichcutofftheDodo'sfoodsupply),andtheanimalsthatthesailorsbroughtwith
them,includingcats,rats,andpigs,whichdestroyedDodonests(Dodo).
MostoftheRedtailedHawkmigrationinthewesternUnitedStatesoccursfrom
earlyOctobertoearlyNovember(Liguori42).
IncludeonyourWorksCitedpage:
Dodo.AmericanMuseumofNaturalHistory.19May2008.
<http://www.amnh.org/exhibitions/expeditions/treasure_fossil/Treasures/Dodo/
dodo.html?dinos>.
Leopold,A.Starker.TheCaliforniaQuail.Berkeley,CA:UCPress,1977,105.
Liguori,Jerry.HawksfromEveryAngle.Princeton,NJ:PrincetonUP,2005,42.
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