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The document provides guidance for writing essays, including: addressing the essay question and prompts; supporting opinions with reasons and examples; organizing ideas into paragraphs with an introduction, body, and conclusion; using formal register and objective tone; and employing linking words and phrases. It emphasizes the importance of planning, structuring an argument, and revising for grammar, spelling, and punctuation.

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Model Essay

The document provides guidance for writing essays, including: addressing the essay question and prompts; supporting opinions with reasons and examples; organizing ideas into paragraphs with an introduction, body, and conclusion; using formal register and objective tone; and employing linking words and phrases. It emphasizes the importance of planning, structuring an argument, and revising for grammar, spelling, and punctuation.

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Essay AN ESSAY is always written for the teacher.

It should answer the question given by


addressing both content points and providing a new content point of the writers own. The essay
should be well organised, with an introduction and an appropriate conclusion and should be
written in an appropriate register and tone. While it is possible to argue only one point of view (i.e.
either agreeing or disagreeing on a topic) as long as you bear in mind the other point of view and
back up your points, it is probably easier to have a balanced discussion comparing advantages and
disadvantages, or ideas for and against a topic.

Read the rubric, essay question and prompts very carefully in order to understand what you are
expected to do. This is vital!

It is important to keep the focus of the topic question and that all your ideas and opinions are
relevant to the question.

Support your opinions with reasons and examples

. Think of a third idea of your own in addition to the two given prompts. If any of the three essay
prompts is missed out, then the target reader will not be fully informed and the candidate will be
penalised.

Ideas need to be expressed in a clear an logical way, and should be well organised and coherent.
It is advisable to use up to 5 paragraphs:

1. Introduction

2. Prompt 1 development + reason(s)/example(s)

3. Prompt 2 development + reason(s)/example(s)

4. Prompt 3 development + reason(s)/example(s) 5. Conclusion (you may include your opinion


here)

Varying the length of the sentences, using direct and indirect questions and using a variety of
structures and vocabulary may all help to communicate ideas more effectively.

The correct use of linking words and phrases (e.g. but, so, however, on the other hand, etc.) and
the appropriate use of cohesive devices (e.g. using pronouns for referencing) is especially
important in essays. FCE PAPER 2 - WRITING 2 Hints PLANNING

Use the task input to help you plan but try to avoid copying phrases from the input in Part 1. Use
your own words. [INTRODUCTION] and [CONCLUSION]

Effective introductory and concluding paragraphs - In the introduction, state the topic clearly,
give a brief outline of the issue, saying why it is important or why people have different opinions
about it.
DO NOT express your opinion at the beginning of your essay (develop you essay in such a way
that it guides the reader to the conclusion you draw).

DO give your opinion in the final paragraph. [SECOND and THIRD PARAGRAPHS] Structure your
argument. Each new paragraph has one main idea, stated in a topic sentence.

Include relevant details to support the main idea: these might include examples, rhetorical
questions (do no overdo it), controversial or surprising statements... If you include a drawback,
give a possible solution, too. GENERAL

DO use a relatively formal register and an objective tone. Do not be too emotional.

Remember to use linking adverbials to organise your ideas and to make it easy for the reader to
follow your argument.

In the exam, allow yourself time to check your grammar, spelling and punctuation thoroughly.
FCE PAPER 2 - WRITING 3 Linking words and phrases

Present your ideas clearly.

Use connectors to link your ideas.

Make sure you know how to use connectors appropriately (register, punctuation...). If you have
any doubts, you should use a good dictionary to check.

To express personal opinions : In my opinion, I believe (that) / I feel (that) / it seems to me / in my


view /as I see it I think / personally To show purpose to / in order to / so as to / so that

To list ideas :Firstly / secondly / finally / In the first place / Lastly

To contrast ideas However / although / in contrast / whereas / but / nevertheless / in spite of /


despite To describe a cause Because / since / as / due to

To show a sequence First of all / then / after that / eventually / in the end / finally To add
information In addition / moreover / what is more / besides / too / furthermore / and

To describe a consequence Consequently / as a result / therefore / so / thus / for this reason /


that is why

To conclude the topic In conclusion / to sum up / in short / all in all

FCE PAPER 2 - WRITING MODEL QUESTIONS AND ANSWERS 4 ESSAY 1

MODEL QUESTION TASK In your English class, you have been talking about the subject of cultural
heritage. Now your English teacher has asked you to write an essay.

Write an essay using all the notes and give reasons for your point of view.
Its is a good thing that countries spend a lot of money on their heritage?

Notes Write about:

1. preserving the past

2. investing in the future

3. ________ (your own idea) Write your essay in 140-190 words in an appropriate style.

ESSAY 1 - MODEL ANSWER

Most countries spend large sums of money protecting their national heritage. However, there is
strong argument that we should look forwards and not backwards, spending less money on
preserving the past and more on securing our future.

On the one hand, it is important that we remember our heritage. Once it is lost, it is lost forever.
Caring for important monuments helps with this. It also attracts tourists, which has an economic
benefit for everyone.

On the other hand, governments spend a lot of money on museums and keeping historic sites in
good condition when poor people need houses to live in and businesses need better roads for
transporting their goods.

Another argument is that by making heritage sites attractive for tourists -for example, by putting
on entertainment - we give a very untrue picture of the past and sometimes damage the local
environment.

To conclude, while there are strong arguments for not spending too much on preserving the past,
I believe it is important to protect the most famous sites for the future generations but it is not
realistic to try and save everything. We need to invest in the future too.

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