Spare Parts (5th)
Spare Parts (5th)
CAST
PART ONE
1. NEWSREEL.
In a pastiche of those Pa the news bulletins, heroic, gung-ho and thoroughly Fifties music starts to
play as a background. The commentator is a bit Bob Danvers-Walker... Hurrah!
COMMENTATOR It's taken six years training, but the sky's the limit today as mankind sets out on
its mission to see the stars. Crewman Donald Philpott, seen here waving to well-wishers, was
chosen from over thirty recruits for the honour of being the first man to set foot on the Surface. At
a special reception, Crewman Philpott was presented to dignitaries from the Central Advisory
Committee and got an extra special farewell from Ruby Craddock, this year's Miss Beetroot Factory.
Whoops, steady on, Crewman. Better wipe that lipstick off your visor before the Missus sees. (Music
swells') And now we say God speed to you as you set off on Man's greatest endeavour...
Fade as the music climaxes...
MINISTER Good evening, Mr Crewman. I'm speaking to you, on behalf of the Central Committee,
in what must be the strangest telephone call ever*. In moments you will step out of your capsule,
the first man to set foot on the Surface since our tiny world began. Strengthened by the finest
technology the science factories can muster, you carry our future in your hands - our light into the
endless dark.1 Good luck, Crewman. We are praying for you.
Clunk of a phone being put down, followed by the dialling tone which fades. Philpott takes a deep
breath. The buzz of a door opening. The enclosed sound vista opens out onto the wide, frozen surface
of Mondas. A gentle moaning wind. Somehow we need to convey the absolute vastness of space around
and above him. Philpott's breathing quickens as he tries to take it in. He gives a single wailing scream
and the perspective pulls back as it echoes across the landscape.
*Direct quote from Nixon's message to Apollo 11.
NYSSA (Bemused) Battle From Above The Sky. See visitors from
the stars. All Action Adventure. Thrilling. Astounding. Startling?
DOCTOR Sunday for seven days. Sounds suitably tawdry and unrealistic. If we could find an
usherette in the gloom, Nyssa, I'd buy you a strawberry mivvie.
NYSSA I thought 'the pictures' meant a sort of art gallery.
DOCTOR Not exactly. But it is an entertainment... of sorts.
stuffy. Like a hothouse. (Covering up) Yes. Yes, of course, it's Earth. We're right in the heart of
London2. I just didn't recognise it under the street lights. Trafalgar Square is that way with the
lighted tree. And that's the Palace beyond it. Must be Christmas.
NYSSA (Sternly) Doctor...
DOCTOR Look, tram lines! Probably the nineteen-fifties. You see,
nothing to worry about at all.
NYSSA Doctor, even I know that cities on Earth aren't built inside
huge stone caverns. And Earth certainly isn't an isolated grey
planet, drifting light years from any star.
DOCTOR The atmosphere's frozen, hence the underground city.
And you must admit it looks like Earth... down here at any rate.
NYSSA said. This close to the Cherrybowl Nebula? Much too close, you
4. CITY STREET.
A Cybermat burbles past, diving for cover under a huge wobbly
stack of timber. DAD HARTLEY and YVONNE are present in pursuit.
(Studying the cheeser) Now then, setting number one'U do for a little 'un.
He turns a dial.
YVONNE Hurry up, Dad. The last tram's gone already. It can't be
far off Lights-out.
DAD Not to worry. The patrols won't be out for ages yet.
Creak of unsteady timbers. The Cybermat squeaks.
YVONNE Careful. You'll have the whole lot down.
DAD places the cheeser on the planks.
DAD Steady.
It starts to hum.
DAD There now. (Backs off a bit) He can't resist that. I'll give
him three minutes. Then we can be off home to tea. Got the net?4
YVONNE Yep.
DAD Good, lass. And here's the tongs.
The Cybermat squeaks again.
YVONNE He's not budging.
DAD Give him time.
Another Cybermat squeaks behind them.
YVONNE What's that?
DAD There's another blooming one behind us. Typical.
YVONNE You don't think it's a nest.
The first Cybermat squeaks again. The second answers back.
DAD Crafty little perishers. They're ganging up.
More squeaks. Then the second cybermat comes squealing across past DAD.
YVONNE Look out!
DAD Ow! Little bleeder!
The timber topples forward...
YVONNE Dad!
And comes crashing down. YVONNE scrambles in.
YVONNE Dad. It's all right. Dad? Don't worry, I'll move this stuff.
(Pushing at the timber) Come on. Come on, move! (Gives up) No good5 Look Dad, I'll go and get
help. Dad? (Beat) Dad! (He's not moving) Oh, God. Help! Someone, please help! NYSSA comes
clambering over wood.
NYSSA Hello? What's happening?
YVONNE The timber's across his chest. I can't lift it on my own.
She starts to cough.
NYSSA What about you?
YVONNE battles to unscrew a pill jar.
YVONNE (Spluttering) Just need my pills, that's all. (Swallows) There. Fine now. Please, my dad.
NYSSA Let's look at him.
YVONNE He's not moving.
NYSSA We'll need something to lift the wood.
YVONNE It isn't safe.
NYSSA That metal rod. (Pulling) If I can...
The rod comes free.
NYSSA Got it.
YVONNE Be careful.
NYSSA I'm going to lever up the wood. You try to pull him free.
YVONNE Yep.
NYSSA (Exerting pressure) Right. Here it comes.
The timber starts to creak. Small bits clatter down.
YVONNE It's lifting. Push harder!
NYSSA (Struggling) I'm trying to.
That's it. Come on, Dad. (Pulling him clear) Out you come.
YVONNE That's it. Come on, Dad. (Pulling him clear) Out you
come. NYSSA Please... hurry YVONNE Nearly clear.
NYSSA gasps. The timber clatters sideways.
YVONNE Are you all right? Hello?
Beat.
NYSSA (Coughing) Fine. Really. What about your father?
YVONNE Dad? Come on, please. (Beat) I don't know. He's not moving.
NYSSA (Moving in) Let's see. (Beat) He's not breathing.
YVONNE What are you doing?
NYSSA Just a second. I can't find his pulse. (Beat)
YVONNE I don't understand.
NYSSA (Gently) I'm sorry... Look, I don't even know your
name. But your father... I don't think he's... well, he's not DAD
Her name's Yvonne, lass.
NYSSA Oh!
YVONNE Dad!
DAD Gave us all a fright, that did. I'm a bit dusty, but still all
in one piece.
YVONNE Are you sure?
DAD My armss a bit No, course I'm fine. Now, who's your
friend?
NYSSA I'm sorry. Your pulse... I mean, I thought you were...
YVONNE I really couldn't've got Dad out on my own. Thank you...
erm
NYSSA My name's Nyssa.
DAD (Laughing) Nyssa! Well, that's original. We're obliged to
you, Nyssa. Oh lor', look at the state of your lovely clothes.
We'd best get you cleaned up.
NYSSA No. Really, I'm fine.
DAD Well, you can't have far to go, not so close to Lights-out.
NYSSA I'm not actually from around here, you see.
Sound of distant claxons. Plink as the street lights go out. YVONNE Lights-out. You'll never get home
now.
NYSSA I can look after myself.
DAD (Laughs) With night patrols out? I reckon you'd best come
back with us. It's the least we can do.
NYSSA Sorry, but I have to meet someone.
YVONNE It's not safe after Lights-out. No one goes out.
DAD Only blood-market spivs and civil servants.
YVONNE (Foreboding) And the Police.
NYSSA No, truly I have to meet...
DAD (Sharp) Now then. No arguing, young lady. It's back home quick as
you can. And we'll see what's set for tea.
5. CITY STREET.
The DOCTOR's solitary footsteps approach and stop.
DAD (Calling) We're home, lad. (To others) In you come, you two.
Let's see what our Prank's got for tea.
NYSSA Thank you, but I really shouldn't...
DAD Oh, nonsense. Yvonne, take Nyssa through while I lock up.
He starts throwing bolts and jingling chains.
YVONNE Through here, Nyssa.
She opens the door to the parlour.
YVONNE Frank, we've got a visitor. Oh...
CONSTANT (Rather overbearing) Good evening, Yvonne.
YVONNE (Wary) Sister Constant. Hullo.
FRANK The Sisterman's been waiting for hours. Where've you been?
CONSTANT Don't exaggerate Frank. I've been waiting fifty-six minutes.
FRANK Who's that?
NYSSA My name's Nyssa. Good evening.
DAD (Coming in) Nyssa missed her last tram home. We couldn't leave her out
on the streets. You're out late, Sister. CONSTANT Just on my
rounds. (To NYSSA) Do I know you, dear?
NYSSA I don't think so.
DAD Nyssa's down from the South district. Not under your jurisprudence up
there, is she?
CONSTANT Regrettably not. How are you, Yvonne? Still employed at
the hydroponic culture plant?
YVONNE Yes, thank you, Sister.
CONSTANT Good. And is the medication working?
YVONNE Yes, thanks.
CONSTANT No side effects?
YVONNE Nope. Not much.
FRANK Apart from being Dad's favourite.
DAD Frank!
CONSTANT And you, Mr Hartley? How are you since the
cardio- ectomy?
DAD Well, normal mostly. Sometimes I can feel the Uttle paddles going round in
the chest unit.
CONSTANT That's normal.
DAD Like being wired up to a blooming accordion. I'll give you a
tune if you like.
CONSTANT You seem to be holding your arm awkwardly.
DAD Just pulled it a bit. Ow! (Winces)
YVONNE Dad, you didn't say.
CONSTANT Perhaps we should take a look.
DAD (Defensive) Oh, no. I know what that means. My arm's fine. And
I neither want nor can afford a new one.
CONSTANT As you like. (To NYSSA) And you, young lady? Nyssa
what exactly?
NYSSA Nyssa of Traken.
CONSTANT O'Traken. That's unusual. There's an O'Brien family
in the West district. May I see your papers?
NYSSA (Prim) In the South, where I come from, we accept people on trust. Mr
Hartley has generously extended his hospitality to me. But I
don't answer to strangers, especially public servant busybodies
like you.
DAD lets out a phew of disbelief.
CONSTANT (Very frosty) I see. Well, if you'll excuse me, I must be going.
DAD Oh, dear. I'll see you out.
7. PHONE BOX.
The apparatus is very old fashioned - Sixties style. CONSTANT is dialling a number. Two beats. We
hear faint ringing. The line is answered. Faint du-
du-du-du-du. A clunk as CONSTANT drops in a coin and presses button A.
8. INT. SHOP.
FX: Pouring drink.
9. STREET.
The DOCTOR and DODD emerge and start walking.
DODD You're not an escaped Cryo'speriment, are you? 'Cos you can't
refreeze once you're thawed out.
DOCTOR Sorry, I'm meeting a friend. And I'm late already.
POLICEMAN (Short way off) Stop!
The POLICEMAN'S voice has the hard sing-song lilt not unlike, but not as
extreme as, those of the first Cybermen of Mondas. The DOCTOR and
DODD stop in their tracks. The electronic snort of a Cybersteed.
DOCTOR (Mutter) Committee Police?
DODD Told you.
The horse starts to clip-clop slowly closer. It may have hydraulic
fetlocks too.
DOCTOR Remarkable. Unlike, but not unlike. And with a processed, armoured horse
too.
The horse stops.
DODD (Cautious) Good evening, officer.
POLICEMAN Identify yourself. Civilian movement is forbidden
during hours of curfew.
DOCTOR No blank mask yet. Still recognisably human for all the augmented
bodywork...
POLICEMAN Identify yourself.
DOCTOR ...but not as advanced as I'd anticipated. That's
encouraging.
A whip lashes and cracks. The DOCTOR cries out in pain.
DODD He says he's a doctorman.
DOCTOR (In pain) And this one says he's a paragon of virtue,
but I wouldn't believe either of us.
POLICEMAN Stand up.
The DOCTOR rises with difficulty.
DOCTOR I was standing before you knocked me down... thank you,
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officer.
POLICEMAN These streets are sealed. Present your Identification
Papers.
DOCTOR I don't have an identity. Not as far as you're concerned.
DODD Don't antagonise him.
DOCTOR I doubt he has the knack to get even slightly disgruntled.
(Slapping his pockets) Now, where did I put that Chinese
cracker? (Finds it) Aha.
POLICED/IAN Do not move. Give your name and district.
The horse clip clops closer.
DODD What're you doing?
DOCTOR Matches, matches... Just a small diversion.
POLICEMAN Name and district are required.
He strikes a match.
DOCTOR Best kept away from animals.
POLICEMAN Defiance is unacceptable. Surrender now.
DOCTOR (T himself) Whatever happened to resistance is useless?
(Aloud as he strikes another match) Sorry to keep you.
The firework starts to hiss. The whip cracks again. The DOCTOR yells in pain
again.
POLICEMAN You are to be detained under the aegis of the Central
Comm...
The firecracker starts to explode In a series of bangs. The horse shies.
DOCTOR Run!
The DOCTOR and DODD scarper. As the firework goes
off, the Cyberpoliceman struggles to control its steed. But there
is no emotion in its voice.
POLICEMAN Warning... Warning.
The horse calms.
POLICEMAN Two suspects proceeding along Third Street away from
restricted area. I cannot leave my post. (Fade out) I cannot leave my post.
YVONNE He used to pick up songs just like that. (To thebird) Come
on, Trillerby. (Whistles again)16
NYSSA What sort of bird is he?
FRANK Real!
YVONNE He is real, Frank. Half and half. Just a bit rusty, that's
ll.
NYSSA (Embarrassed) Yes. Of course.
DOCTOR Mr Dodd?
DODD (Jumping) Strewth!
DOCTOR Are you following me?
DODD (Relief) Oh Doctor. You gave the old paddles a turn.
Didn't know we were going the same way home.
DOCTOR What a coincidence. I was heading for the picturehouse
when these trucks appeared.
DODD Watch it!
A particularly large truck lumbers past.
DOCTOR That was some sort of mechanical digger. Something's
going on under cover of darkness.20 Yes?
DODD Oh, yes. Never seen so many police. The whole area's
cordoned off, right down to the North Stalagstacks.
DOCTOR And?
DODD Word is they're levelling the area for new parade grounds.
Another truck thunders past.
DOCTOR So many of them. Let's take a look.
DODD You can't. You'll never get through.
DOCTOR Don't say you don't know a back route, Mr Dodd. If the trucks are going
in empty, what'll they be bringing out? It won't be tea
and cakes, that's for certain.
realisation) Blimey, Doctor. They're digging up the graveyard. Footsteps behind them.
DOCTOR Careful. We have company.
POLICEMAN Do not move. You are recognised escapees and are
required for adjudication.
FRANK She didn't eat much. Just picked at it. All our rations for the
holiday going to waste.
DAD We'll manage. Pass that dish.
FRANK You know what's happening, don't you?
DAD What's that?27
FRANK (Irritated) The manoeuvres, Dad. It's the final push. The
work crews are on the verge of breaking through to the surface.
DAD You know what I think about that. It's a long way off. If ever.
From the front room comes the sound of NYSSA and YVONNE laughing.
FRANK Dad?
DAD Yes, Frankie.
FRANK I want to join up. There's no point in waiting for the call-
up papers. I want to be in there now, when the breakthrough comes.
I want to see the sky and not go mad.
DAD (Gently) That's very heroic, son. But you know the answer.
FRANK (Indignant) I'm not too young. And I'd send home my pay.
DAD And we'd never see you again.
FRANK That's not true.
DAD Name one person we know who's come back from the
work crews. Tom Reynolds? The Chang twins? I don't want to be proud of a black-bordered
telegram with sympathy from the Central Committee.
I want my son here.
NYSSA (Under this) Mr Hartley? Yvonne and I thought...
FRANK Eric Krailford's joining up.
YVONNE Eric? (Coming in) That's not true!
DAD Yvonne.
YVONNE Eric wouldn't!
DAD Course it's not true.
FRANK It is true!
YVONNE He wouldn't go. (Starts to cough) He wouldn't.
NYSSA Yvonne...
DAD Vonnie. Come on, love.
NYSSA What's the matter with her?
YVONNE (Spluttering) Just my pills. I'll be fine.
Pills rattle from a jar.
DAD There you are, sweetheart. Gently now.
FRANK What about me? You never listen to me! You look after strangers and give them
our rations. And nothing's left now from what you got when
you sold Mum!
He slams the door.28
DAD Prank! (Exasperated beat) Nyssa, I'm so sorry.
NYSSA No, please. Yvonne's more important.
YVONNE (Weak) Much better already.
DAD That's right.
NYSSA Mr Hartley, I'm going now. I've caused enough trouble.
YVONNE Oh Nyssa, no.
NYSSA You mustn't stop me. I can look after myself.
DAD I feel... well, it's not good enough.
NYSSA I'm putting you all in danger. I'll speak to my friend, the
Doctor. And we'll bring you some food to make up for what you've
given me. But I must go. You've all been so kind...
A thunderous knocking at the door.
YVONNE (Terrified whisper) Police.
DAD Vonnie, into your room I Take Nyssa.
YVONNE Through the back bedroom. Quickly!
More bangs on the door.
DAD I'll hold them up as long as I can.
NYSSA It's obvious. And horrible too. One day the people of this city will
become the Cybermen. It's already happening.
DOCTOR Yes. Yes, this is Mondas. Earth's long-lost twin planet.
And I can't interfere with its future.
NYSSA But there aren't Cybermen yet.
DOCTOR Not yet, but soon.
NYSSA We can stop it before it goes too far.
DOCTOR No. If anyone changes the future of Mondas, it must be
the people themselves. If we're discovered here, then the whole future of
the galaxy will be unbalanced - and we'll be to blame.
DOCTOR Nyssa, the people of Mondas must decide their future for
themselves.
NYSSA But they're suffering terribly. They're good people, and
some of them are sick. I've promised DOCTOR What? to help.
NYSSA (Quietly determined) I have to, Doctor. And if you won't get
involved, then I must stay behind and do it by myself.
DOCTOR Nyssa? Where are you going?
NYSSA (Heading for her room) To get my things.
DOCTOR No! (Dashes after her) Nyssa. You're being unreasonable.
NYSSA Am I? I want to give those people some hope. I want to stop
the Cybermen from coming into existence.
DOCTOR Yes, very laudable, but you can't do it on your own. You're
not an army. You can't turn the whole of history round NYSSA I've seen you doon a sixpence.
it.
DOCTOR Not in this case. If we stop one history, we only replace it
with another, probably equally as bad. Believe me, I know.
NYSSA And what have you been doing? What about your 'wake- up'
call?
DOCTOR (Deep breath) Look, the Cybermen's future is infamous
across the Galaxy: Earth's twin planet wandering out of its
orbit. Its dwindling population, already millennia ahead of Earth
technologically, gradually replacing bodily organs with manufactured parts. All
in a final desperate bid to avoid extinction.
NYSSA Until they finally replace their own consciousness with the
cold precision of machine logic.
DOCTOR The cold logic that snuffs out the spark in people. I'm not
even sure they are people by the end. They're just so many tinned left- overs.
DOCTOR I'll be back soon, Nyssa. (Spotting the creature) Hello? And
what are you doing out here?38 The cybermat starts to burble again.
DOCTOR Oh no, you don't!
He shuts the TARDIS door smartly.
DOCTOR No more Cybermats in my TARDIS. Go on, shoo!
The cybermat chitters.
DOCTOR Quite unlike the domestic version, aren't you?
He crouches to see better. From the cybermat's of view. Hum of
point electronic data being processed.
DOCTOR (Very tinny sound) Snazzy black-painted shell.
Customised for official snooping business, I expect.
Back to normal perspective.
FRANK Careful of him. Watch out!
The cybermat chitters loudly and makes a dash for cover.
DOCTOR You startled him.
FRANK That's a Mark Twelve Surveillance model. The Committee
uses them. You don't see many about.
DOCTOR Then I suppose I should count myself lucky. How do you
do, I'm the... I'm the Doctor.39
FRANK Doctor?
DOCTOR Hmm. Quiet, isn't it? I half-hoped for a riot.40 FRANK
Do you know a girl called Nyssa?
DOCTOR Is your name Hartley? Father: a mat-catcher?
FRANK (Wary) Yep. I'm Prank Hartley.41
DOCTOR Thank you for looking after her, Frank. I hope she wasn't too
much trouble.
FRANK What? Before or after the police came for her?
DOCTOR Police? She never mentioned police.
FRANK So, Where's Nyssa?
DOCTOR You'll find her in here.
He unlocks the TARDIS door.
DOCTOR Go on, straight through.
FRANK (Confused) In there? But it's...
DOCTOR Nyssa will be delighted to explain the dimensional
anomaly. I have a call to make. Tell her I'll be back... later. Good morning.
DOCTOR (Tinny and fuzzy) Ah, hello? Does your tram go past a
shop or emporium run by one Thomas Dodd?
ALLAN Dodd! That old hack! (Pours a drink)
DOCTOR (Tinny and fuzzy) Money? Well, no. Not exactly.
A knock at the door. The screen clicks off.
ALLAN What!
The door swishes open as ALLAN swigs her glass.
CONSTANT Doctorman Allan. Your light was on.
ALLAN Morning already, Constant?
CONSTANT I've recruits due in for processing.
ALLAN They won't mind waiting. Have a glass of wine.42
CONSTANT No thank you.
ALLAN Please yourself. Happy holiday. (Drinks)
CONSTANT And your meeting with the Committee?
ALLAN Did they ever offer you augmentation?
CONSTANT We sistermen rely on our own disciplines.
ALLAN Oh, how abstemious.
CONSTANT Is that what they offered you? Augmentation?
ALLAN Think of the benefits. Increased efficiency. Clear thinking.
No more endless fatigue.
CONSTANT But full processing is only for the work crews up
on the eurface.
ALLAN They're upping the processing quotas.
CONSTANT What? But why?
ALLAN (Mimicking the Committee) That data is secure.
Processing for everyone. That's where it'll end. CONSTANT (Scared) What do they mean? I'm a
Selector.
ALLAN No one's exempt. Go on, forget your vows and have a drink.41
Purely medicinal.
CONSTANT What happens to my job if they process
everyone? What are they thinking?
ALLAN You'd better tell the other sisters.
CONSTANT I will.
The door swishes.
ALLAN (Laughing) Good morning, Sisterman.
The screen clicks back on. Buzz of data.
DOCTOR (On screen - flagging down a truck) Stop! Pull over!
You're losing your cargo!
ALLAN Time to take a proper look at our 'stranger', I think...
know it was Yvonne's Cybermat that damaged this conduit in the first
place
FRANK What? Old Matty?
attracts them.
Gentle hiss from the conduit.
NYSSA Good. That's sealing nicely.
NYSSA Yvonne.
FRANK Yeah. The whole apartment block turned out to wave her
COMMITTEE CHORUS Agreed. No more dissension will be tolerated. The Police will apprehend
the stranger. If he resists, he will be destroyed.
Bedeep of incoming data.
truck. The contents of the graveyard are now scattered right up the High Street for everyone to see.
Oh, don't worry, I parked as far away from your shop as possible.
DODD Doctor, what do you want?
NYSSA We can't wait for the Doctor. I'll get some food. Then we'll
YVONNE (Weak and confused) Dad? Where are you? Please, I want
to go home... Please. Dad?
The machinery halts. A deep building note of menace.
YVONNE (Fear) Who are you? What are you doing to me?
CYBERMAN You will join us. We are the future.
The machinery engages. The belt moves again.
YVONNE (Petrified whisper - no screams) No. Please, no.
(She fades off to side) Please. Help. Help me.56
The ghastly winding, grating of the scalpels drowns YVONNE out. (I think
we should be spared the actual sawing through of bone at this point!)
DOCTOR (Breathless) Never a tram when you want one. Which way?
(Electronic snort of a horse) Ah.
The horse clops closer as the DOCTOR slams his pockets.
DOCTOR Clean out of sugar lumps. Hello... horse.
Snort again. The DOCTOR gasps as he's knocked sideways.
DOCTOR Out of fireworks too.
Fierce electronic whinny. The DOCTOR knocked down again.
DOCTOR (Winded) Temper. What's the matter? Bridle too tight? All those implants
biting into your head and your limbs? You have a hard life.
More electronic snorts punctuate his words.
DOCTOR The whips are cruel, the feed's old and stale. The stable
floor's hard under hoof. But if we get that bridle off, you can
sleep properly. And dream. Dream like a real horse... wild,
galloping where the ground's soft between the open sky and the
sweet blowing grass. Beat. Furious whinny. A thud sends the
DOCTOR reeling into a clattering dustbin. He's trapped as the
horse rears over him with a series of fierce shrieking neighs.
ALLAN Stop! Captain! Call off your horse!
POLICEMAN Stand down. Stand away. The horse stops its onslaught and withdraws a little.
ALLAN I'm taking charge of the prisoner.
POLICEMAN The Committee instructed us...
ALLAN (Fierce) I have powers to requisition prisoners for medical
research. Escort him to my unit.
DOCTOR How do you do? I'm much obliged to you.
ALLAN Bring Dodd too. And have his filthy stock burnt. (Beat) Smile,
Captain. It's a holiday.
DOCTOR He can barely manage a rictus grin. That's the trouble with too much
plastic surgery.
ALLAN Really? Take him away.
DAD It's getting worse. You'll not even get across the street to
NYSSA Doctor! Let us into the TARDIS! It's freezing out here!
Beat.
FRANK Not there, is he?
NYSSA No.
FRANK So now what?
NYSSA The Committee Palace. If that's the centre of things, that's
where the Doctor would head for.
FRANK That's where Yvonne went.
NYSSA Then we can find her too. How far is it?
FRANK It's dark. We can cut across the square by the holiday
tree.
NYSSA (Sharp) Frank, put the torch out!
FRANK What?
CYBERMAN Sisterman, we can wait no longer. CONSTANT Give Doctorman Allan time.
CYBERMAN Stay where you are.
CONSTANT Unlike you, I'm not resistant to cold. I need food
and the toilets. And warmer clothes.
CYBERMAN That is weakness. You should become like us. CONSTANT You were chosen for a
purpose. I still have a choice.
The Cybercrows starts to mumble, 'Purpose? She knows our purpose?
She must tell us.'
CYBERMAN If you know our purpose and our tasks, you must tell us.
CONSTANT I don't know!
CYBERMAN It is imperative.
CONSTANT cries out in pain.
CYBERMAN We must know.
CONSTANT is gasping in agony. A door crashes open.
COMMANDER ZHENG and his squad have arrived. ZHENG'S voice
is darker. He emanates power.
ZHENG Stand away. I am Cybercommander Zheng. My squad is assuming
control here. Release the Sisterman.
CYBERMAN Data is being withheld. We must access the information.
ZHENG Release the Sisterman.
A laser bolt. The CYBERMAN collapses with a groan. CONSTANT (In
some pain) How dare you bring violence into the wards! Every life
is precious here. CYBERMEN (Variously) Data is being withheld
We protect the Committee We have no other
directives. ZHENG Return to your tasks.
CONSTANT They're recruits. The power cut out before their
programming was complete. They know no better.
ZHENG (To his CYBERMEN) Squad. Escort these recruits back to the
processing section.
Movement as the Cyberguards shepherd the recruits away.
ZHENG Sisterman Constant, you are hurt?
CONSTANT I'm fine. I must see to my other patients.
ZHENG I was summoned from the surface. Lack of power disabled my
transporter. I must report to the Committee. CONSTANT What's
happened? Are we under attack?
ZHENG That is secure information. Why has the power not been restored?
CONSTANT All the other staff have gone. It's chaos here.
ZHENG Cybermen would not desert their posts. Is the Committee secure?
CONSTANT Doctor Allan is trying to reach them.
ZHENG You are damaged.
CONSTANT My shoulder. It's nothing. Ow! Let go!
ZHENG The scapula is fractured.
CONSTANT (In great pain) I said, it's nothing! What about the
Innocent recruit you shot?
ZHENG He will be taken for reassembly. So will you. (To his minions)
Take them both.
CONSTANT Take your hands off me! (Being dragged of) No! I will not
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go. I will not go!
ZHENG Resistance will not be tolerated.
ALLAN My what?
ZHENG Name?
DOCTOR And I'm here to restore the generators. No one else has
the know-how.
ZHENG Is this true?
Beat.
COMMITTEE CHORUS (Feeble whisper) Doctorman Allan...
ALLAN (Relief) Yes... I hear you... Are you sale?
COMMITTEE CHORUS The processing. Have you... found a solution?
ALLAN We're doing all we can.
COMMITTEE CHORUS Utmost... priority. Little time... left. Restore the power.
ALLAN We're working on it. Come on, Doctor.
ZHENG Doctor?
COMMITTEE CHORUS Zheng... Report the status... on the surface...
Zheng...
ALLAN (Muttering) Come on.
DOCTOR Don't you want to hear?
ZHENG Storm radiation intensity has increased two hundred and thirty per
cent. Endurance levels have been met. Final tests on the propulsion system
were curtailed by the power loss.
DOCTOR A propulsion system. For the planet I assume.
ALLAN Doctor, come away.
They go through the doors. Straight into Scene 57.
DOCTOR Pass me that rod. I'll have to try to use brute force.
ALLAN Yes.
DOCTOR takes the full force of the current. His scream of agony is thrown right across the speakers.
The circuit clunks shut. A hum of returning power rises. ALLAN runs to the DOCTOR.
ALLAN Doctor!
ZHENG Circuit completed.
COMMITTEE CHORUS (Full strength) Power restored.
ALLAN Zheng, you've killed him! He's dead!
ZHENG Do we continue?
COMMITTEE CHORUS We continue.
DAD Vonnie!
NYSSA Try to hold her!
FRANK Look out!
Another crash.
The hum of returning power.
NYSSA The power. It's back on.
We hear the canary again. CYBERVONNE has stopped in her tracks. CYBERVONNE (Staccato) Ah...
ah... ah...
DAD The bird... Vonnie's little Trillerby...
CYBERVONNE Ah... ah (etc...)
NYSSA The lights on the tree. She's fascinated by them.
FRANK That's my sister. What have they done to her?
DAD (Very gentle) Come on, love. Let's look at the tree. That's right.
Ooh, your hands are frozen.
FRANK It's horrible. Is that really her?
DAD Now remember what it all means, eh? Our dear old, scraggy old tree
stands for the forests that once covered the surface of the world.
The lights are the stars above the stone sky. And the baubles are
the worlds we pass, winding our long journey through them
like the tinsel.
CYBERVONNE Ss.. ss.. star.
DAD And the star on top. That's the old sun we left behind and one day
we'll get back to.
CYBERVONNE gives a whining moan.
DAD Look, love. Here's our Frank.
ALLAN Zheng, put the Doctor under the corporeal scanner. ZHENG
I will return to the processing area. More recruits must be processed.
ALLAN This is more important!
A gurney slides into place.
DOCTOR (Muttering) Must reach Nyssa. Where is she?
ALLAN beeps a few scientific sounding buttons. A machine starts to hum.
ALLAN Good. Now where's Constant?
ZHENG (Burble as he receives information) The Sisterman has been
sent for processing.
ALLAN (Gasps. It's a body blow) No...
ZHENG As I instructed. She was injured.
ALLAN Constant... (Rage) Won't we ever learn? Cold logic is no substitute
for... Oh, what's the point!87
ZHENG Doctor Allan. Observe these scans.
NYSSA (Gentle) Frank? Come inside. You haven't a coat. And your
father's asking for you. (Beat) What's everyone staring at?
FRANK Look down to the north.
NYSSA Where? It's getting foggy.
FRANK At the City roof.
NYSSA (Squinting) The glare of the street lights... It's like a huge waterfall.
Frozen, streaming with mist.88
FRANK It's broken through. The frozen atmosphere. It's pouring down on
the hydrohouses.
NYSSA Where they grow all the crops?
FRANK (Upset) Where Yvonne works... worked. You know what it
means?
NYSSA I can guess.
FRANK If we don't freeze, we'll starve anyway.
DOCTOR Nyssa? Can you hear me? Nyssa? (Puts phone down)
Something's happened.
ALLAN That's right, Doctor.
DOCTOR Ah.
DODD (Scared) Doctorman Allan.
ALLAN Thomas Dodd.
DODD I just ducked in out of the cold.
ZHENG Take this one for processing.
DODD Get your hands off! Get off me!
DOCTOR Let him go!
DODD (Fading) His heart! He promised me one of his hearts!
DOCTOR I said, let him go! (ZHENG grabs him and he gasps)
ZHENG Be silent.
ALLAN Zheng, be careful. The Doctor's more precious than he
knows.
DOCTOR Am I? That sounds ominous.
Bing bong announces the committee.
COMMITTEE CHORUS How can this alien intruder help us?
DOCTOR Ah, so we're not alone.
ALLAN These are the scans of the Doctor's physiology.
COMMITTEE SUBCHORUS 1 What does this teach us?
COMMITTEE SUBCHORUS 2 He has a secondary cardiovascular system.
What value is that?
DOCTOR None. None at all.
ALLAN But look here. At the base of the cranium. There's a smaller
tertiary lobe to the brain.
COMMITTEE SUBCHORUS 1 Meaning?
ALLAN It deals with all bodily and motor functions.
COMMITTEE SUBCHORUS 2 Allowing other parts of the brain to optimise
all calculation and data assessment.
ALLAN Exactly.
DOCTOR That's no good to you. I'm not human. Unclean and unfit.
COMMITTEE SUBCHORUS 2 This is the final link.
ALLAN I can reproduce this system in all future Cyberprocessing.
Base our entire project on him.
DOCTOR What?
ALLAN No more needless organ rejection and failure.
Bedeep bedeep of data analysis.
FULL COMMITTEE CHORUS Agreed. Begin work immediately.
DOCTOR No! I will not be the template for your monstrous
parodies of humankind!
ALLAN But Doctor, you've saved us all.
DOCTOR No one's saved!
COMMITTEE CHORUS Summon the people. Begin the processing.
DOCTOR Listen to me!
COMMITTEE CHORUS We will survive. The new Cyber race will be
invincible.
CRASH THEME
PART FOUR
70 (Again). PROCESSING WARD.
DOCTOR No! I will not be the template for your monstrous parodies
of humankind!
ALLAN But Doctor, you've saved us all.
DOCTOR No one's saved!
COMMITTEE CHORUS Summon the people. Begin the processing.
DOCTOR Listen to me!
COMMITTEE CHORUS We will survive. The new Cyber race will be
invincible.
ZHENG
Even the unprocessed crowd has a certain logic. If they
ALLAN Oh, it's a 'he' when it's someone you know. (Beat) 'He'
FRANK Dad!
DAD (In pain) My arm.
FRANK Up here. Come on! Further in...
DAD No. Not that way!102
CYBERMAN Move away. Move away.
Whip crack. FRANK yells in pain. There is a thunderous roar overhead. The
battle stops with a few terrified gasps from the people. Rushes of hissing ice
shoot across the cavern roof.
DAD The roof!
FRANK It's the ice. It's coming in!
DAD Everybody! Inside! Run!
Tremendous roar as part of the roof implodes.
CYBERMAN (On line) Commander Zheng. The surface bombardment is Increasing. We cannot
sustain here. The propulsion system must be iictivated.
ZHENG Hold your position.
CYBERMAN We need the power now.
ZHENG Hold your position. I will obtain the order.
The link goes off. We can now hear the constant rumble overhead.
ALLAN (Urgent) Commander!
ZHENG Stand aside, Doctorman Allan.
ALLAN It's the Doctor... He's trying to poison...
ZHENG Which is more important? The Committee? Or the planet? ALLAN
What? Well, that's obvious. Only the Committee have the power to save us.
(Seat) My Committee.
ZHENG You are wrong. Stand aside.
ALLAN No, wait! (Following him) The Committee must be warned.
Just listen...
A door creaks open as DAD and FRANK emerge from hiding.
FRANK (Relief) Thought they'd got us then, Dad.
DAD Horrible place. Horrible plastic suits on racks. Forcing my little
Vonnie into one of them.
FRANK That woman was on the telly.
DAD And the big robo too. They were heading for the
Committee.
FRANK But she said the Doctor.
DAD What? Nyssa's friend?
FRANK She came the other way. Maybe Nyssa's there too.
DOCTOR Absolutely.
DAD I've never seen the like of these generators, Doctor. You could boil
a million kettles all at once.
DOCTOR It could propel a whole planet. Unfortunately the power's
DOCTOR Several. But we'd have to get past that guard first.
SAD Hang oil, Doctor. Let's give the mats a treat. Full setting number nine.
The power pulses higher.
95. COMMITTEE CHAMBER.110
DOCTOR interrogated by the CYBERPLANNER. The power pulse is rising.
DAD (Coming up) Going? You can't go, Doctor. We need you.
DOCTOR Sounds like pure drudgery. I'm sure you can cope.
NYSSA The Doctor prefers to deal with the grand scheme rather
DAD Working. She reckons she can reverse at least some of the
NOTES
N.B. Uncredited roles include: Citizen 1 (played by Marc Platt), Cybermen
Voices, Radio Announcer, Citizen 2 and Nurse (Nicholas Briggs), The Minister
and TV Commentator (Alistair Lock), Crewman Philpott and Nurse (Gary
Russell).
PART ONE
1. Line changed to: 'Strengthened by the finest technology the science factories can muster, you
carry our future in your hands - our light into the endless darkness.' Marc Piatt (writer): 'I
paraphrased Richard Nixon's words to the Apollo
11 astronauts from the recording in the BBC Sound Archives where I used to work. What Armstrong,
Aldrin and Collins didn't know at the time was that Nixon also had another speech ready (not in Sound
Archives) just in case the first moon landing was a disaster.'
2. Line changed to: 'We're right here in the heart of London.' Marc Platt:
'Since the Hartleys are obviously from "Up North", I thought the Doctor
might pretend that the city was Leeds or Manchester, but he's much
more familiar with the London area. Apart from the Daleks venturing as
far as Bedfordshire, and the Zygon clan north of the border, most aliens
rarely invaded north of Watford. Silurians, as Derbyshire's oldest
residents, don't count as invaders.'
3. Line changed to: 'No. No, not for certain.'
4. Line changed to: 'You got the net?'
5. Line changed to: 'It's no good.'
6. Line changed to: 'Well, you won't catch a tram and go "exploring"
from round here at this time at this time of night. There's no more
trams until the morning.'
7. Line changed to: 'We've got a lot of doctors round here already.'
8. Line changed to: 'You got any family?' Marc Platt: 'Dodd's fishing to
see if anyone will try to trace the Doctor if he suddenly disappears. But
the Doctor's response about carelessly losing his family might be
another distant reference to my Doctor Who novel Lungbarrow. Or it
could be to his other family, the companions, none of whom stay for
long.
The line's echoed by Nyssa's family memories later on. It also bolsters up the importance of tine
Hartley family and how all families will soon be a thing of the past on Mondas.'
9. Line changed to: 'You're certainly not the Police.'
10. Line changed to: 'How-e about a glass or three?'
11. Line changed to: 'Of course it is. Where have you been?'
12. line changed to: 'I was standing up before you knocked me down...
thank you, officer.'
13. Line changed to: 'Eric Krailford says that...' Marc Platt: 'Eric Krailford
is apparently some forebear of the Cyberman Krail in The Tenth Planet.'
14. Line changed to: 'She were crying 'cos Eric's gone and...'
Line changed to:
15. '(Superior) Logic and cybernetics.'
16. The whistle comes before, 'Come on, Trillerby.'
17. WOMAN'S line does not begin until after DAD's 'Turn on the
telly.' The line then runs under the other dialogue until the script
specifies that it fades.
18. Dialogue that can be heard from the television: '...Committee. At
this time, our holiday. We send our thanks to the-'
19. Line changed to: 'Must be the Police.'
20. Line changed to: 'Something's going on under the cover of
darkness.'
21. Line changed to: 'Aye, well, maybe it has seen better days.'
22. Added dialogue - PRANK: 'Awww.'
23. 'Yeah,' added at the beginning of the line.
24. Line changed to: 'And the people would sing at the gates. I used
to love that. And then we' d have the battle. People and
consuls pelting each other with fruit. That was the best bit -
it was so undignified.' Marc Platt: 'WARNING - Saccharine alert!
The last part of this speech got added very late on. Traken was such
a lovely place, full of nice people being kind and considerate, I
realised that the occasional bit of disrespect, at the right time and
place naturally, would make the place a lot more real.'
25. Line changed to: 'The mats that get away and go wild.'
26. Line changed to: 'Why? What else could they possibly be...'
27. Deleted dialogue - DAD: What's that?
28. The door slams after DAD has said, 'Frank!'
29. Line changed to: 'It's disgusting, that's what it is.'
30. The conversation fades down during POLICEMAN'S next line.
31. Line changed to: 'Stand aside, sir! Whatever happened to civil
rights! Here, leave that alone, you! In the old days, you had to
have a special warrant from the police station. Nowadays the
blooming Central Committee juot tramples on everything. Mind
that vase!' Scene 18 then begins. Gary Russell
(director): 'I don't think the reference to "bloomin' Central Committee" would have worked. It sounds
more like a line from a Carry On movie. Which is ironic as Marc's original pitch for this was jokingly
(I hope) entitled Carry On Up The Cyber!'
32. Line changed to: 'Matty?'
33. Line changed to: 'There's lots of people.'
PART TWO
PART THREE
63. Line changed to: 'Yeah, yeah, well, I know it had a famous wine
cellar.'
64. Line changed to: 'So, we're safer in here, then.'
65. Line changed to: '(Disbelief) What is that?'
66. Line changed to: '(Stuttering) I... I do... do not know.'
67. 'They're all implants. There's nothing human left!'
68. Line changed to: 'It stank of antiseptic.'
69. Line changed to: 'You couldn't even tell.'
70. Line changed to: 'How deep bolow the frozen surfase are we?'
71. Line changed to: 'They were tunnelling for the frozen surface.'
72. Line changed to: 'Beautiful, i'nt it?'
73. Line changed to: 'It's getting worse. You'll not even get across the
street to the phone booth in this.' Marc Platt: 'I'd got it in my head
that the Hartleys were too poor to have a phone and then tied
myself in knots later on, because the Doctor had to contact Nyssa,
which meant getting someone to summon her out of the flat, across
the snowy road to the local phone box, where, in mid-conversation,
she could have a nasty encounter with a Cyberhorse. Gary, bless
him, simplified it all (and speeded it up) by installing a phone in the
Hartley flat. Why didn't I think of that? It's that sort of vision that
makes him a producer.'
74. Line changed to: '(Beat) I'm going to go and try and get the
generators restarted.'
75. Line changed to: 'I'll see you later, Doctor.'
76. Line changed to: 'The city... is in danger...'
77. Line changed to: 'I said, get away from him. Let him go!'
78. Line changed to: 'And it'll rip this planet apart if you get too
close.' Marc Platt: 'I'm not quite sure where the Cherrybowl Nebula
came from. I think I wanted a deceptively reassuring name like the
real Horse's Head Nebula. It's probably a clue as to how the Nebula
Line changed to:
looks. This generator room is straight out of Quatermass with big
chunky machines and big clunky dials.'
79. Line changed to: 'No! No, I will not go.'
80. Line changed to: 'Twenty of our greatest minds joined as one to
propose clear solutions to our problems.'
81. Line changed to: 'Dozens of them!' Gary Russell: 'I changed this
because hundreds is a bit silly. Hundreds of Cybermats would
actually take up a road the length of Pall Mall! Dozens is more
realistic if less colloquial. Besides, I didn't want Gareth Jenkins to
have a breakdown creating hundreds of the wretched things.'
82. Line changed to: 'Without the cybermen, we cannot survive.' 83.
line changed to: 'It sounds distressed to me.'
84. This line was moved to within the next line:
DOCTOR Right.
ALLAN Thank you.
DOCTOR Once this is closed you can throw the power switch.
85. Line changed to: 'No. No, don't cry, love.' Marc Platt: 'A lot's been written about this
scene - probably the most important moment in the story. Its recording was one of
those pin-drop moments of silence. Something very special. We hardly dared breath
because Paul Copley was giving such an extraordinary performance. Even odder
because Kathryn Guck had finished her scenes and gone home hours before. Nick
Briggs was now playing
Cybervonnie and his little, almost inarticulate sounds just tear at the heart strings.'
Gary Russell: 'It's working on scenes like this, with actors like jim Hartley, Paul and Nick that makes
everything we do worthwhile. I knew that Marc had written a great moment. I didn't realise how gut-
wrenchingly sad it would be until the actors put it together.'
86. Line changed to: 'He's hardly burnt.'
87. Line changed to: 'Constant... (Rage) Won't we over learn? Gold logic is not
substitute for... Oh, what's the point!' Gary Russell: 'I cut this bit because it seemed
a tad too expositional and not the sort of thing Allan would say at that moment. I
think Sally Knyvette was pleased when I made that decision - it's a line that works in
prose, less well when spoken.'
88. Line changed to: 'Frozen and streaming with mist.'
89. Line changed to: 'Well... I couldn't get out for guards.'
90. Line changed to: 'You know they've got production lines that'll churn
out these things by the tram load.'
91. Line changed to: 'Oh, yeah, those scroungers.'
92. Line changed to: 'I'll haul it over.'
93. Line changed to: 'I'm... I'm going to need some new stock now...' Part Four
94. Line changed to: '...Report to the Committee Palace
immodiatoly.
Report to the Committee Palace immediately.'
95. Line changed to: 'I will not be a part of your future.' Marc Platt: 'I wanted to give
Peter a real chance to let rip and by golly, he certainly did that. Anger makes the
Fifth Doctor extremely sarcastic. But his jibes only direct the Committee to re-invent
itself into something even more powerful. Once again all the Committee voices, both
solo and in chorus, are Nick Briggs. The next scene is entirely Nick and appears to
involve at least nine different voices or voice combinations. In fact, the poor bloke
seemed to spend most of the two recording days talking to himself.'
96. The last three lines of this scene were deleted. Gary Russell: 'Again, we cut these in
post-production as on playing it back, the scene had a much stronger end with
Allan's self-aggrandisement and the slam of the door.'
97. Line changed to: 'We might as well join the queue for the processing now.'
98. Line changed to: 'He's gone. The Doctor's dead! Worse than dead. And Adric's
dead too! So many people killed because of your Cybermen. So Where's the
Committee? I have to stop this once and for all.'
99. Deleted dialogue - DOCTOR: 'I just slipped away.'
100. Line changed to: 'Impossible. (Getting angry) I thought I was creating new life.
Saving the people. I never wanted an award. And my Cybermen are so amazing,
powerful, intricate. But I destroyed their souls.' Marc Platt: 'I added the "never
wanted an award" line to emphasise that Allan was working out of desperation and a
selfless, if misguided, belief that she was doing the right thing.'
101. Line changed to: 'And every Cyberman I've ever met, will ever meet, is based on
me.' Marc Platt: 'This revelatory line really doesn't need anything else. It's
chilling as it stands, but if you know your Doctor Who, then it's absolutely terrifying.'
102. Line changed to: 'No. No, not that wayl'
103. Line changed to: 'I should have never let you near all this!'
104. Line changed to: 'I can't be part of this. (Scrambling away) They'll listen to me. I'll
make them stop!'
105. Added dialogue - DAD: 'Aye, that's right.'
106. Added dialogue - DAD: 'Right.' Marc Piatt: 'Dad's remark about waiting for the
football results is there because in the good old days that's what you had to sit
through on a Saturday afternoon, and they seemed interminable, before Grandstand
finished and one particular good programme came on...'
107. Line changed to: 'Look, I reckon I was right out of order with you.'
108. Line changed to: 'Zheng, can't you stop this?'
109. Added dialogue - DAD: 'Right.'
110. Scene 95 was substantially changed:
DOCTOR Stop the processing now. You're destroying yourselves. CYBERPLANNER He has
served his purpose. Dispose of... Dispo... Dispose of him.
DOCTOR Your faculties are slipping. (Increasing pain) Zheng, use the propulsion system now
or the whole planet dies. Humans, Cybermen, everything!
CYBERPLANNER We are human. We survive as Cyberhumans. DOCTOR I like humans a lot.
But I don't like you.
A tremendous boom and explosion outside.
CYBERPLANNER We are still human.
DOCTOR You abandoned that right long ago. You've gone the whole hog, and you'll never
be human again.
ZHENG The Doctor's logic is correct. Processing later. The propulsion system must be used now.
CYBERPLANNER Stand away from the power junctions.
ZHENG The propulsion system must be used now.
It fires off a shot at ZHENG, who cries and fails back.
DOCTOR Zheng!
ZHENG (Weakened) We must... survive. Cybermen are superior.
CYBERPLANNER We will survive.
DOCTOR Fat chance! You were doomed the moment Mondas went out of its orbit.
CYBERPLANNER (Speech starts slurring) Mondas. When Mondas's orbit lost stability, our
sciencemen discovered an opposing twin world hidden until then behind our sun.
DOCTOR That's the wine talking. Meanwhile your world's going
under! Another boom. Debris starts to fall from the ceiling. Marc
Platt: 'The changes here heighten the moral conflict between the Doctor and the Cyberplanner. But
the Doctor's really playing for time to let the wine get through the system. I love the Planner's
insistence that Cybermen are still human, because everyone else sees it exactly the opposite way
round.'
111. Added dialogue - CYBERMAN: 'Move!'
112. Line changed to: 'Leave Nyssa alone! Take me first!'
113. Line changed to: 'Go on. What happened to Mondas then?'
114. Line changed to: '(Very slurred) A moon had erupted... from the twin planet's
surface... unbalancing the equilibrium. Mondas left its orbit. Research shows that
the twin thrives... while we face... we face... annihilation.' Marc Piatt: 'By now the
Cyberplanner is in its cups, staring morosely into its wine glass and swaying about a
bit. I wanted to start its speech about the moon with a very slurred "And another
thing", but Gary wouldn't let me!'
115. Line changed to: 'You're destroying it! Zheng, now's
your chance,
Zheng!'
116. Scene 98 was substantially changed. The first 14 lines of dialogue remained as
scripted, then:
DOCTOR Maybe they'll turn out as instruments for good after all. If they
and the humans can learn to live together.
NYSSA They certainly have a good pedigree.
DOCTOR Is that meant to be flattering?
NYSSA It is
DOCTOR Well, perhaps there is something to be said for breeding. And they are
doing a good job on the City roof. No human could
do that. NYSSA It's already warming up.
CYBERMAN Doctor?
DOCTOR Yes. Is that you, Thomas Dodd? You really should wear a label, you know. (To NYSSA)
Tragic waste. The old unprocessed Thomas, the one I couldn't trust, was infinitely preferable.
CYBERMAN My programming does not encompass deceit, Doctor. You are requested to
supervise the reconstruction work.
DOCTOR No, no, Thomas. That's very kind. But we must be going. DAD (Coming up) Going?
Going? You can't go, Doctor. We need you. There's plans to lay and burst pipes to mend.
DOCTOR Sounds like pure drudgery. I'm sure you can cope.
NYSSA The Doctor prefers to deal with the grand scheme rather than the day to day details.
FRANK Told you, Dad. Take no notice, Doctor. He'll do it
brilliantly himself.
DOCTOR I'm sure.
DAS Now I've no vermin to catch. It's all for Yvonne, you know.
DOCTOR I know. And that's the best possible reason. Where's Doctor
Allan?
DAD Working. She reckons that with your notes she can reverse at least some of
the processing. Make them a bit less... well...
DOCTOR A bit more human?
DAD Less horrible, I'd say.
DOCTOR That's a decision for all of you. At least she's closing down the
processing lines.
Distant church bells start to ring.
CYBERMAN The bells at the Church of Former-Day Souls.
DOCTOR A bit cheerier this time, Thomas? Ringing for the future.
(Darkly) Whatever that brings.
NYSSA Frank. I thought you'd like this.
FRANK What is it?
NYSSA A box of tealeaves. I found it in the TARDIS.
DOCTOR Ah, Nyssa...
FRANK (A bit nonplussed) Oh. Thanks. Look, dad...
DAD What's that? Tea! Oh, I thought the Doctor was going to give us the
bill.
DOCTOR Now, there's a thought.
NYSSA Doctor, be nice.
DOCTOR Nice?
DAD No, no, that's grand, Nyssa. Thank you. Both of you.
FRANK Come on, Dad, time for a brew-up!
DOCTOR (Firm) Time to go, I think.
NYSSA What?
DOCTOR Goodbye, everyone. Come along, Nyssa.
NYSSA But Doctor... Goodbye, everyone.
EVERYONE Goodbye, Doctor.
DOCTOR (Going inside) That tea was a gift from the Emperor Ieyasu of Nippon. I'd been saving
it up.
The TARDIS door closes. And with a wheezing, groaning sound...
Marc Platt: 'In most stories, this would be the finale with everyone being inordinately cheery, but the
Doctor appropriately grumpy - hardly surprising considering the implications of recent events. I didn't
really see any easy quick-fix way out of Mondas's future. It was much more real if the humans and
Cybermen had to co-exist, which also made scenes with the processed versions of Dodd and Constant
very creepy. A friend suggested that Dad should have gone with the Doctor as a companion - an idea
I like enormously and a fascinating switch of traditional age categories.'
117. Line changed to: 'You haven't even looked at the Doctor's notes on stem cells
and processing reversal.' Marc Platt: 'Hopefully the Doctor has added a few notes
of guidance on some of the moral concerns of stem cell research on embryos. II
Doctorman Allan's past medical record is slightly dubious, the only answer seems to
be: who else is there to do the work? Unfortunately, just at that moment, another
solution walks in through the door.'
118. Line changed to: 'Doctorman Allan. We begin again.'