Out of The Woods in Writing
Out of The Woods in Writing
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TESOL QUARTERLY, Vol. 25, No. 3, Autumn 1991
Most good fairy tales, at least the ones that delight us and make us
or our children beg for more, begin with looking back to "once
upon a time." Since the TESOL organization has now reached its
25th anniversary, this seems a good way to begin looking at the
story of how the teaching of writing to adult (secondary and higher
education) nonnative speakers of English has developed since 1966;
we can follow it up with an account of the thickets and thorny
problems we face as we journey into the woods. Despite false trails,
we might still, true to the best endings of fairy tales, be able to find
a way out of the woods and live happily ever after. But that last is
only speculation. Let's begin by looking back at the trails we've
followed up to now, keeping in mind that we might not all have met
the same witches, wizards, wolves, or good fairies along the way.
Readers should be aware that the author of this article has been
teaching ESL for more than 25 years, and so her telling of the story
is inevitably influenced by the paths she chose to follow.
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ONCE UPON A TIME:WRITING INSTRUCTION
AND RESEARCH1966-1991
This brief historical survey delineates four approaches to L2
writing instruction that have been evident in the last 25 years. Each
approach, at least as it emerges in the literature, has a distinctive
focus, highlighting in one case the rhetorical and linguistic form of
the text itself; in another, the writer and the cognitive processes used
in the act of writing; in another, the content for writing; and in the
last, the demands made by the reader. The dates given mark the
approximate time when each focus first appeared consistently in
our literature; no final dates are given, since all the approaches are
still, in varying degrees, subscribed to in theory and certainly in
practice.
"Real"Writing
A great deal of the recent controversy about the teaching of
writing has centered not only around the topics students write about
but also around the dichotomy of process and product. Horowitz
initiated lengthy debate (see Braine, 1988; Hamp-Lyons, 1986;
Horowitz, 1986a, 1986b, 1986c; Liebman-Kleine, 1986; Lyons, 1986;
Reid, 1984; Spack, 1988; Zamel, 1983) by questioning the effective-
ness of the process approach with its focus on the writer. In
particular, Horowitz (1986) criticized what he termed the "cavalier
view" (p. 141) of a process proponent (this author) who said at the
1985 TESOL Convention that examination writing was not "'real'"
(p. 141) writing. Horowitz is not alone in his complaint. Cited as a
major flaw in a process approach is the fact that "the Process
Approach fails to give students an accurate picture of university
writing" (Johns, 1990b). The issue of what university writing is and
Contrastive Rhetoric
Although it has been 25 years since contrastive rhetoric research
was introduced (Kaplan, 1966, Leki, 1991) and the concept is fre-
quently mentioned in discussions of theory and research, its applica-
tions to classroom instruction have not developed correspondingly.
Published research informs teachers about the different ways in
which the written products of other languages are structured (e.g.,
Eggington, 1987; Hinds, 1987; Tsao, 1983), but the nature of trans-
fer in L2 writing remains under debate (see Mohan & Lo, 1985) and
transfer has been found not to be significant in certain types of task,
such as paraphrase (Connor & McCagg, 1983). The declared inten-
tion of contrastive rhetoric research is, however, "not to provide
pedagogic method" but rather to provide teachers and students
with knowledge about how the links between culture and writing
are reflected in written products (Grabe & Kaplan, 1989, p. 271).
Rather than abstracting a principle of the "linear"development of
English prose (Kaplan, 1966) as a pedagogic principle, contrastive
rhetoric is more useful as a consciousness-raising device for
students; teachers can discuss what they have observed about texts
in different cultures and have students discover whether research
findings hold true in their experience of their L1 texts.
The thicket that contrastive rhetoric presents for teachers as they
wander into the woods of theory is the question of the value of
Respondingto Writing
With a number of approachesto teachingwriting to choose from,
teachers are faced with a similar variety of ways to respond to
students'writing. Since a responseon a student'spaper is potentially
one of the most influential texts in a writing class (Raimes, 1988),
teachers are always concerned about the best approach. Some of
the options follow, illustratingthe variety at our disposal. We can
correct errors;code errors; locate errors;indicate the number of
errors(see Robb, Ross, & Shortreed,1986,for a discussionof these);
comment on form;make generalizedcomments about content, e.g.,
"good description" or "add details" (Fathman & Whalley, 1990,
p. 182); make text-specific comments, e.g., "I'm wondering here
418 TESOL QUARTERLY
what Carver tells the readers about the children";ask questions;
make suggestions; emote with comments like "Nice!" or "I'm
bored" (Lees, 1979, p. 264); praise;ask studentsto comment on the
source of the error (Raimes, 1990); or ask L1 peers to reformulate
the students' texts (Cohen, 1983). Given the range of choices, it's
hardly surprisingthat responding is a thorny issue. It is, in fact, so
problematic that much of our written response to students'texts is
inconsistent,arbitrary,and often contradictory(Zamel, 1985).
In an effort to understand more about teachers' responses,
researchersare looking at students'responses to feedback (Cohen,
1987;Cohen & Cavalcanti, 1990;Radecki & Swales, 1988), finding
mainly that students simply "make a mental note" of a teacher's
response. The fact that little of the researchexamines activitiesthat
occur after the act of responding seems to get at the heart of the
problem. If teacherssee theirresponseas the end of the interaction,
then students will stop there. If, however, the response includes
specific directionson what to do next, an "assignment"(Lees, 1979,
p. 265), there is a chance for applicationof principles.
FALSETRAILS
The five thornyissuesjust discussedare ones that troubleteachers
and concern theoristsand researchers.There are many others, too,
rendering our journeyinto the woods exciting, even hazardous.As
teachers read the theories and research and try to figure out what
approach to adopt in a writing classroom, they will sometimes
confront a false trail that seems to promise a quick way out of the
woods, an easy solution.We have seen evidence of false trailsin the
rise and demise of various methods (Clarke, 1982, 1984;Richards,
1984). Similarly, prescriptions of one approach for our whole
profession and all our students can be seen as false trails,too, since
they actually lead back to another "explicitly mandated reality"
(Clarke& Silberstein,1988)to replace the mandateof form-focused
instruction.Such a prescriptionin the teaching of writing appearsin
proposals for the widespread adoption of content-based language
teaching as "the dominant approach to teaching ESL at all levels"
(Celce-Murcia,1989, p. 14).
I regard proposalslike this as false trailsbecause they perpetuate
one of the errorsthat has been at the heart of many of our thorny
problems about writing.That problem, alluded to earlier,is that we
tend to discuss ESL/EFL studentsas if they are one or at the most
two groups. Much of the dissension and controversy that has
surfaced at conferences and in our literature would, I submit,
Recognitionof StudentDiversity
While there is still a tendency to discuss our field as if it were the
easily definable entity it was 25 years ago, there are signs thatwe are
beginning to recognize the diversity of our students and our
mission, and to realize thatnot all approachesand proceduresmight
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apply to all ESL/EFL students. Reid (1984) notes this when she
reminds Zamel of the differences between advanced students and
novice writers, particularly with regard to cognitive development;
Horowitz (1990) notes this when he lists the questions that we need
to ask about our students before we decide to use literature or any
other content. For heterogeneous classes, a "balanced" stance is
recommended (Booth, 1963; Raimes, in press), one that presents a
governing philosophy but pays attention within that philosophy to
all four elements involved in writing: form, writer, content, and
reader. The combination of complexity and diversity makes it
imperative for us not to seek universal prescriptions, but instead to
"strive to validate other, local forms of knowledge about language
and teaching" (Pennycook, 1989, p. 613).
Recognition of Learners'Processes
Amidst all the winding and intersecting paths and false trails, one
trail seems to be consistently well marked and well traveled. While
there is controversy about what a process approach to teaching
writing actually comprises and to what extent it can take academic
demands into account, there is widespread acceptance of the notion
that language teachers need to know about and to take into account
the process of how learners learn a language and how writers
produce a written product. Such a notion of process underlies a
great deal of current communicative, task-based, and collaborative
instruction and curriculum development (Nunan, 1989a, 1989b).
Even writing theorists who are identified with content-based and
reader-based approaches frequently acknowledge the important
role that the writer's processes play in the writing class (Johns,
1986b; Shih, 1986; Swales, 1987). The process approach more than
any other seems to be providing unifying theoretical and method-
ological principles.
THE AUTHOR
Ann Raimes is the author of many articles on writing research, theory, and
teaching, and on ESL methodology. Her books include Techniquesin Teaching
Writing(Oxford UniversityPress, 1983),ExploringThroughWriting(St. Martin's
Press, 1987), and How English Works:A GrammarHandbook with Readings (St.
Martin'sPress, 1990).She has taughtESL for more than 25 years.
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