BP Writing Skills Guide
BP Writing Skills Guide
Border Patrol
Promotional Assessment Process
Part I of this guide provides information that will refresh your knowledge of some basic
rules of English grammar, syntax, usage, sentence and paragraph organization, and
punctuation. Only a short summary of each topic is provided. For a more in-depth study,
you may want to refer to English textbooks or writing handbooks. The reference list at the
end of Part I gives you some suggested readings.
Part II of this guide presents a sample of the types of questions you can expect to find on
the Writing Skills Exercise along with the correct answers and the rationale for them.
PART I
Sentence Construction
• A sentence normally contains a stated subject (the noun(s) and/or pronoun(s) the sentence
is about), and it must contain a predicate (the part that says something about or directs
the subject) that consists of at least one word, a verb. Even the single-word command
Go! is a sentence because it has an unstated but implied subject − whoever or whatever is
being directed to go − and a verb.
• A phrase is a group of related words lacking a subject and/or a predicate. A phrase can
be used as a noun, adjective, adverb, or verb. On the basis of their form, phrases are
classified as prepositional, participial, gerund, infinitive, and verb phrases.
• Clauses are grammatical units containing a subject and a verb. They can be either
dependent or independent. An independent clause expresses the main thought of the
sentence and can stand alone as a sentence (Example: She laughed.). A dependent
clause expresses an idea that is less important than the idea expressed in the main clause
and cannot stand alone as a sentence (Example: As she was laughing…).
• Generally speaking, restrictive phrases and clauses are not separated from the rest of the
sentence by commas. Nonrestrictive phrases and clauses are separated from the rest of
the sentence by commas.
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Examples: The blue house that he built on a hill is quite large.
The blue house, which he built on a hill, is quite large.
The first sentence is written about a man who built several blue houses but only
one on a hill. Therefore, the phrase that he built on a hill is essential for knowing
which blue house is being referred to. The phrase is therefore restrictive and is
not separated from the rest of the sentence by commas.
The second example is written about a man who built only one blue house, and it
happens to be on a hill. Therefore, which he built on a hill is not essential for
knowing which house is being referred to. The phrase is therefore nonrestrictive
and is separated from the rest of the sentence by commas.
In the first sentence the clause who won the prize is essential for indicating the
person who should be congratulated. The clause is therefore restrictive and is not
separated from the rest of the sentence by commas.
In the second sentence, the person to be congratulated is identified as Pat, and the
clause who won the prize is not essential for identifying the person. The clause is
therefore nonrestrictive and is separated from the rest of the sentence by commas.
Verb
Verb Voice
• The voice of a verb shows whether the subject performs an action (active voice) or
receives it (passive voice).
Example (active voice): The consultant wrote a proposal.
Example (passive voice): The proposal was written by the consultant.
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Verb Tense
• The tense of a verb shows the time of the action of the verb. There are an active and a
passive form of all tenses in English. The six English verb tenses are:
Present she takes; she is taking she is taken; she is being taken
Past she took; she was taking she was ta ken; she was being taken
Future she will take; she will be taking she will be taken
Present perfect she has taken; she has been taking she has been taken
Past perfect she had taken; she had been taking she had been taken
Future perfect she will have taken; she will have been taken
she will have been taking
• The past tense represents action that took place in past time.
Example: He wrote five letters yesterday.
• The present perfect tense represents action completed before the present time.
Example: He has taken training.
• The past perfect tense represents action that occurs before another past action.
Example: She counted the letters he had written.
• The future perfect tense represents action that will be completed before a specific time in
the future.
Example: By next week, he will have completed the analysis.
Verb Mood
• The mood of a verb shows whether an action is fact (indicative mood), something other
than fact, such as a possibility, wish, or supposition (subjunctive mood), or a command
(imperative mood).
Example of indicative mood: They are going to the ball game.
Example of subjunctive mood: I insist that he go to the ball game.
Example of imperative mood: Go now!
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Other Rules Related to Verbs
• Linking verbs are not action verbs; rather, they express a state of being or existence. The
various forms of the verb to be are primary linking verbs.
• Linking verbs never take objects but, instead, connect the subject to a word or idea in the
predicate. Examples: It was he who bought the tickets. His proposal is unacceptable.
Some dogs are excitable.
• The verb to be can also be used with another verb as a helping (auxiliary) verb to create a
verb phrase. Examples: Flights have been delayed. The contract will have to be
reviewed.
Infinitive
Definition: An infinitive is the form of a verb that expresses action or existence without reference
to person, number, or tense. Example: To run is relaxing.
• A split infinitive has a word or several words between the to and the verb following it.
Splitting an infinitive is generally considered incorrect, especially if more than one word
intervenes between to and the verb. Incorrect example: You should try to, if you can,
attend the briefing. Correct usage: You should try to attend the briefing, if you can.
Gerund
Definition: A gerund is the form of a verb ending in ing that is used as a noun. In fact, another
name for a gerund is a verbal noun.
• A gerund may be used as the subject of a sentence. Example: Drawing was his favorite
personal activity.
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Participle
Definition: A participle is a form of the verb used as an adjective. Simple participle forms end in
ed or ing. Examples: The candidate felt betrayed. The New Year’s Eve party was exciting.
• When a participial phrase seems to modify a word that it cannot sensibly modify, then it
is a dangling phrase. Incorrect example: Sailing on the open sea, many dolphins were
spotted. (Sailing does not modify dolphins.) Correct usage: Sailing on the open sea, we
spotted many dolphins.
Noun
Definition: A noun is a word that names a person, place, thing, quality, idea, or action.
• A common noun identifies one or more of a class of persons, places, things, qualities,
ideas, or actions that are alike. Examples: The girl chained her bicycle to the fence.
• A proper noun identifies a particular person, place, thing, quality, idea, or action. (Note:
Proper nouns must be capitalized.) Examples: Joe Brown drove his Lincoln Towncar to
the Kennedy Center.
• A collective noun identifies a group of people or things that are related or acting as one.
Examples: The jury arrives at the courthouse each day at nine in the morning. The
platoon travels by night in order to avoid detection. Collective nouns are single in
number; thus, they take a singular verb.
• If the individual members of the group are referred to, then the plural verb can be
used. Example: A group of employees are sharing supplies with each other.
• The possessive of a singular noun is formed by adding an apostrophe and s to the noun.
Examples: the boy’s sweater; Alice’s car
Pronoun
Definition: A pronoun is a word that is used in place of a noun, most frequently to eliminate
monotonous repetition of the noun. There are nine types of pronouns:
• Demonstrative pronouns point out a specific person or thing. Examples: this, that, these,
those
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• Verbs used with indefinite pronouns must agree with the pronoun in number.
Examples: none is; much is; everyone is; many are
• None is generally used in a singular sense. If you think of none as no one person
or thing, then it is easy to see that it is singular in meaning and takes a singular
verb. However, when none is used in the sense of not two or no amount, then a
plural verb is used. Example: None of the team members are in agreement.
• Interrogative pronouns are used to ask questions. Examples: who, what, which
• Who and whoever are used as subjects in a sentence or phrase, while whom and
whomever are used as objects in a sentence or phrase. Examples: Who will get
the tickets? Whoever is going will buy the tickets. I need to give tickets to whom?
The tickets will be given to whomever I see first.
• Personal pronouns refer to persons or things and change form in three different persons:
first person (the person speaking), second person (the person spoken to), and third person
(person or thing spoken about).
• Second person pronoun: you (used for singular and plural, for subjects and
objects)
• Third person pronouns: he, she, it they (used as subject of sentences and
clauses)
him, her, it, them (used as objects of verbs and
prepositions)
Examples: Bill and I are going. She told Sally and me.
• Reflexive pronouns refer back to the pronoun used as the subject of the sentence.
Examples: I burned myself. You are deceiving yourself.
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Adjective and Adverb
Definitions: An adjective is a word that modifies a noun. An adverb is a word that modifies a
verb, an adjective, or another adverb.
• Adjectives and adverbs show degrees of quality or quantity by means of the ir positive,
comparative, and superlative forms. The positive form expresses no comparison at all.
The comparative form adds an -er to the positive form of the adjective or adverb or
prefixes the positive form with the word more to express a greater degree or a
comparison between two persons or things. The superlative form adds an -est to the
positive form of the adjective or adverb or prefixes the positive form with the word most
to express the greatest degree of quantity or quality among three or more persons or
things.
Examples:
Positive Comparative Superlative
short shorter shortest
beautiful more beautiful most beautiful
big bigger biggest
hard harder hardest
• Many adverbs have the characteristic ly ending. Example: quickly, slowly, angrily
Article
Definition: An article is a word that refers to a noun and gives definiteness or indefiniteness to
the noun.
• A and an are the indefinite articles. They are used for general nouns or when the
audience does not know which thing you are referring to. A is used before words
that begin with a consonant, and an is used before words that begin with a vowel.
Examples: An attorney will meet you today. A file is missing from my desk.
• The is the definite article. It is used when the audience knows which thing is
being referred to. Example : The attorney that you met with last week has
returned your call.
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Preposition
Definition: A preposition is a word that connects a noun to some other word in the sentence.
Prepositions usually establish a relationship of time or location. The use of a preposition
automatically creates a prepositional phrase. Examples: in a month; after a year; on the table;
behind the door
• There are over 40 prepositions in English, some of which are: about, around, before, at,
below, by, for, from, in, of, on, to, through, up, upon, and with.
Conjunction
Definition: A conjunction (also known as a connective) is a word that joins together sentences,
clauses, phrases, or words.
• Conjunctions that connect two or more parts of a sentence that are of equal rank
(Example: two nouns or verbs or phrases, etc.) are called coordinating conjunctions.
Examples: and, but, or, nor, for, and sometimes yet
• Correlative conjunctions are pairs of words that connect sentence elements that are of
equal rank. Correlative conjunctions must always appear together in the same sentence.
Examples: either-or, neither-nor, whether-or, both-and, and not only-but also
• Unnecessary shifts in person, number, tense, or voice confuse readers and seriously
weaken communication. The examples below indicate these types of errors.
• A shift in person occurs when a writer shifts back and forth among the first, second, and
third persons. Incorrect example: If you want to pass the physical, a person has to
exercise daily.
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• A shift in number occurs when a plural pronoun is used to refer back to a singular
antecedent or vice versa. Incorrect example: Anyone who shops in that department store
must seriously consider their budget.
• Unnecessary shifts in tense more commonly occur within a paragraph rather than within
an individual sentence. Incorrect example: After the historian spent several hours
describing the armies’ strategies, he gave a horrifying account of the attack. He points
out in great detail what is going on in the minds of each of the soldiers.
• A shift in voice occurs when a writer makes unnecessary shifts between the active and
the passive voice. Incorrect example: I wrote the journal article; the book chapter was
also written by me. (In this example, the first clause is active voice and the second shifts
to passive voice.)
• When two sentence elements are joined by a conjunction, they should have parallel
structure.
Correct example: She was outstanding not only in her academic coursework but also in
her fitness training.
Incorrect example: She was outstanding not only in her academic coursework but also
she excelled in fitness training.
• A paragraph should have unity, that is, internal consistency. It should not digress from
the dominant idea expressed in the topic sentence.
• A paragraph should have coherence. Sentences should flow into each other so that the
reader experiences the paragraph as an integrated unit, not as a collection of separate
sentences.
• A paragraph should have order. Like structure in a larger work, order in a paragraph
grows partly out of the material and is partly imposed by the writer. Most paragraphs and
essays follow one of the two patterns that follow.
Ø From the general to the particular: This type of paragraph begins with a topic
sentence that serves as an introductory summary of the topic. The remaining
sentences explain or illustrate this statement, so that the idea becomes
increasingly clear as the paragraph progresses. The topic sentence is usually at or
near the beginning of the paragraph.
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Ø From the particular to the general: This type of paragraph is the reverse of the
previous pattern. It begins with a series of explanatory or illustrative statements
that lead to a general statement or summary. The topic sentence is usually at or
near the end of the paragraph.
A paragraph can be looked upon as a microcosm, an exact parallel in miniature of the entire
work:
Capitalization
Definition: Capitalization is the use of capital letters to place special emphasis on particular
letters to set them off from lower-case letters.
• Proper nouns, that is, nouns that name particular persons, places, or things, must be
capitalized. Examples: Appalachian Mountains, Mississippi River, Brooklyn Bridge
• Titles that precede a proper name are capit alized; those that follow a proper name are not.
Examples: Chairperson John Smith and John Smith, the chairperson
Punctuation
Definition: Punctuation is the use of periods, commas, semicolons, colons, question marks,
exclamation points, dashes, apostrophes, brackets, parentheses, slashes, and quotation marks to
convey the pauses and gestures that we use in speech to clarify and emphasize meaning.
• Use a comma to separate an introductory phrase or clause from the main clause of a
sentence. Example: After completing the work, the contractor left the site.
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• Place a comma after every item in a series. Example: The new office is furnished with a
desk, a computer, two chairs, and a supply cabinet.
• Two or more adjectives that modify the noun that they precede are separated by commas.
Example: The cold, windy morning was not a good beginning for their vacation.
• Commas are used to set off the items in a date. Example: On Monday, August 17, 1998,
he became the head of the office. Commas are not used when only the month and year
are given. Example: August 2002
• A semicolon is used to separate elements in a series when some of the elements already
contain commas. Example: Sally wishes us to attend the first, third, and fifth sessions on
Wednesday; the second, fourth, and sixth sessions on Thursday; and the first only on
Friday.
• A semicolon is used to join two closely related independent clauses that are not joined by
a conjunction. Example: The project began slowly; thereafter, additional staff were
assigned to it.
References
The Elements of Style. Strunk, Jr., W. & White, E.B. Needham Heights, MA: Allyn & Bacon,
2000. ISBN# 020530902X.
Better Sentence Writing in 30 Minutes a Day. Campbell, D. Franklin Lakes, NJ: The Career
Press, Inc., 1995. ISBN# 1564142035.
Business English. Geffner, A. Hauppauge, N.Y.: Barron’s Educational Services, Inc., 1998.
ISBN# 0764102788.
Business Writing at Work. Davidson, E.J. Burr Ridge, IL: Irwin Mirror Press, 1994.
ISBN# 0256142203.
The Business Writer’s Handbook. Brusaw, T., Alred, G. J. & Oliu, W.O. New York, NY: St.
Martin’s Press, 1993. ISBN# 0312198051.
The Classic Guide to Better Writing. Flesch, R. & Lass, A. H. New York, NY: Harper Collins, 1996.
ISBN# 0062730487.
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PART II
The following eight sample questions represent the types of items that you are
likely to find on the actual assessment. The answers can be found on the last
page.
For questions 1-3, choose the one answer that represents a correction that should be
made to the sentence. If no correction is necessary, choose option (E).
1. During the reporting period, this station intercepted three smugglers and
apprehended three principals, none of whom were United States citizens.
2. The managers from our agency met with the managers from the other agency to
familiarize them with the operation; and to identify training needs.
(A) change managers from our agency to manager’s from our agency
(B) change operation; and to identify to operation; and, to identify
(C) change operation; and to operation and
(D) change them with the operation; to them, with the operation,
(E) no correction is necessary
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For questions 4 – 6, choose the one answer that is the best revision to the underlined
word(s) or phrase(s) in the paragraph. If no revision to the underlined word(s) or
phrase(s) is necessary, choose option (E).
If there are two underlined sections in the same paragraph, each possible answer will
consist of two revisions, one for each underlined section. The two revisions will be
separated by a slash ( / ). The first revision will be for the first underlined section in the
paragraph, and the second revision will be for the second underlined section in the
paragraph.
4. The tread on the right rear tire of the Border Patrol Agent’s assigned vehicle tore
lose, slamming against the inside tire well and damage was caused for both the
interior and exterior of the vehicle.
6. I was almost finished with the report when the copy machine malfunctioned. It was
then that my co-worker had stepped in to help me with the copier.
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For questions 7 and 8, select the correct sentence order to form paragraphs that are
well-organized, clear, and coherent. If no correction is necessary, choose option (E).
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Answers to the Writing Skills Exercise Sample Questions
3. Correct Answer: C. The correct term is “associated with” and not “associated
from.” Objects are “associated with” one another, which means they are related
to each other in some way. The correction in D is not required because “for
future reference” is already succinct and correct.
4. Correct Answer: B. The verb "tore" cannot be modified by another verb, "lose."
The correct word is the adverb, "loose." Also, the sentence begins in the active
voice, and the active voice should be maintained throughout. Therefore,
"causing damage to both" is preferable to "damages were caused to both."
6. Correct Answer: A. The first sentence sets the context of the event in the
simple past tense. The content of the second sentence does not warrant a
change in tense, and therefore the simple past tense should be maintained
throughout. "It was then" and "my co-worker stepped in" in answer A are in the
simple past tense, and so answer A is correct. Answers C and D contain other
tenses, and answer B inappropriately replaces the verb with a participial phrase.
7. Correct Answer: D. The most logical order for these sentences is to begin with
the topic of the paragraph, which is the reference of many management
textbooks to five management functions (3). Next is the first reference to the
planning function and the “other management functions” (1). Then, a listing of
the four “other “ functions is provided (5). A reiteration of the importance of the
planning function is presented (4) and is followed by the interesting fact that
managers vary in their perception of the importance of the planning function (2).
8. Correct Answer: E. The topic of the paragraph is the need for organizations to
have competent managers (1). Next, information is provided about how
managerial competencies are acquired, specifically off the job (2) and on the job
(3). The idea of formal developmental programs to gain the needed managerial
competencies is presented next (4). Then, the idea that organizations are giving
more attention to such programs is presented (5).
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