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The Mouse Deer and The Tiger: Commented (A1) : Title

The mouse deer was thirsty and went to the river but was confronted by a tiger who wanted to eat him. When the tiger caught the mouse deer, he tricked the tiger into thinking he had a powerful king by telling the tiger to look in the river. The tiger saw his own reflection and jumped in to fight, allowing the mouse deer to escape while the tiger realized he had been fooled.

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The Mouse Deer and The Tiger: Commented (A1) : Title

The mouse deer was thirsty and went to the river but was confronted by a tiger who wanted to eat him. When the tiger caught the mouse deer, he tricked the tiger into thinking he had a powerful king by telling the tiger to look in the river. The tiger saw his own reflection and jumped in to fight, allowing the mouse deer to escape while the tiger realized he had been fooled.

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The Mouse Deer And The Tiger Commented [A1]: Title

One day, there was a mouse deer. He was thirsty so he wanted to drink on the river.

When the mouse deer came next to the river, a tiger approached him and wanted to eat him.

Of course the mouse deer tried to escape, but the tiger run faster and caught him. In that Commented [A2]: Problem

dangerous situation the mouse deer thought hard how to escape the tiger. Then he got idea

and said to the tiger, Listen! Your mightiness and toughness are all great! But I have my

own king. He has a greater strength than yours! I am sure that nobody can match his

powers! Because the tiger felt taunted, he declared that he would challenge the mouse

deers king. Commented [A3]: Response

Next the mouse lead the tiger to the river, and said, Now Look at the water. You will

see my king Foolishly the tiger looked in the river and surely saw another tiger in the water.

Then he growled, but the tiger in the river imitated to growl too. Because of his too high self

pride, the tiger jumped into the water, and wanted to fight. He was believing there was

another tiger in the water. Commented [A4]: Second response

The mouse deer took that opportunity to escape. After fighting with himself in the

river, the tiger realized that he was fooled by the mouse deer. Commented [A5]: Solution

Text type: Narrative text

Genre: Fable (The Mouse Deer And The Tiger)

Clause Relation: Cause-consequence Clause (there is cause and effect on the story)

Textual pattern: Problem Solution Pattern

Problem Statement: One day, there was a mouse deer. He was thirsty so he wanted to drink
on the river. When the mouse deer came next to the river, a tiger approached him and
wanted to eat him. Of course the mouse deer tried to escape, but the tiger run faster and
caught him.
The mouse deer took that opportunity to escape. After fighting with himself in the

river, the tiger realized that he was fooled by the mouse deer.

Moral Value: janganlah sombong atau angkuh

Interpretation: penulis ingin memberikan pelajaran moral; agar kita tidak menjadi manusia yang
sombong dan angkuh

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