INTRODUCTION TO LITERATURE

Novels:
1. SPARED,
2. PASSED LIKE A SHADOW,
3. A WREATH FOR FATHER MAYOR.
4. UNANSWERED CRIES
5. WEEP NOT CHILD,
6. THE INTERVIEW,

Plays:
1. THREE SUITORS: ONE HUSBAND,
2. THE LION AND THE JEWEL,
3. THE BLACK HERMIT,
4. THIS TIME TOMORROW.

Poetry:

1. SUMMONS,
2. SONG OF LAWINO and OCOL,
3. GROWING UP WITH POETRY.

INTRODUCTION TO LITERATURE
Literature is the work of art that uses the language creatively to portray the message to
the intended audience.
Literature is a work of art that uses the language creatively to express human realities to
the society.
1. Types of literature
i. Oral literature. This is a type of literature that presents the message through
words of mouth.
ii. Written literature. This is a type of literature that presents the message through/
in written form.

2. FICTION AND NON-FICTION

2.1. Non-Fiction. This is a kind of literature that deals with factual materials or events. The
people written about in non-fictions are real. Literary non fictions are written to be read
just the same way as fictions. These include;
2.1.1. Autobiography. This is an account of someones life and experiences written by
himself/herself. The person may choose to tell about an important event from his/her life
or tell the whole life story up to the time when it is written. Autobiographies are almost
always written in the first person I.
 Example; Gifted Hands by Ben Carson and The Narrative of Frederick Douglas: An
American Slave. Written by himself.
2.1.2. Biography. This is a story of someones life and experiences written by another person.
In biographies the author may choose to interview the biographical subject and also
gather information from other sources. The subjects of Biographies are often famous
people. Eg. Lincoln: A Photo biography.
2.1.3. Essays. This is a short piece of writing in which the writer shares his/her point of view
about a certain subject. Essays usually deal with a single subject.
2.1.4. Informational articles. These are articles that present factual materials about a specific
subject. They appear in newspapers, magazines, and in reference books like
Encyclopaedias, almanacs, and atlases.
2.2. Forms of non-fiction.
Nonfiction is broken down into four kinds of writing.
2.2.1. Exposition. This is a writing that explains something or gives information about a topic.
2.2.2. Persuasion or argumentation. This is a writing that attempts to convince you of
something by showing you that the statement is true or false.
2.2.3. Description. Is a writing that helps you to form a clear mental picture of something.
Writers use specific details such as shapes, tastes, sounds and textures to help you form
the picture.
2.2.4. Narration. A writing that tells a story of an event or series of events.

ORGANISATION OF NON-FICTION
There are three parts to most nonfiction writing.
i. Introduction. It tells you the main ideas of what the piece is about. It may also give
background material or state a problem.
ii. The body. It develops the main idea through the details that support the main idea.
iii. Conclusion. It shows that the work is ended. The conclusion may restate or summarize the
authors main ideas, it may answer the question raised in the work or it may urge the
reader to future actions.
2.3. FICTION
It is a kind of literature that deals with non factual materials or events. Characters, setting
and events are the product of imaginations from the author. It can be inspired by the
actual events or completely made up.

3. GENRE OF FICTION LITERATURE.

3.1.PROSE FICTION.
A prose is any kind of writing that is not poetry or that is not presented in verse form or
stanza. It is a specifically imaginative work that includes short stories, novella and novels.
3.1.1. SHORT STORY
This is a story usually about imaginative characters and events that is short enough to be
read from the beginning to the end without stopping. It is also a brief work of fiction
that can generally be read in one sitting. It usually focuses on one or two main characters
that face a single problem or conflict. Eg. The voter by C. Achebe, Ajaiyi and the
Witchdoctor by A. Tutuola, Mabala the Farmer by R. Mabala.Etc.
 ELEMENTS OF A SHORT STORY.
There are four basic elements of a short story. These are; Setting, plot, characters and
theme. Short stories differ from the novel in its treatment of these four elements. The
main difference is partly dictated by length. In short stories characters are usually not fully
developed and usually centre on one idea. Other minor elements include conflict, point
of view, symbolism, flashbacks, fictitious quality etc.

3.1.2. NOVELLA. This is a fiction work that is longer than a short story but shorter than a
novel. It is longer than a short story but the characters are not fully developed as in
novels. EXAMPLE. Samuel Becketts novella First Love. In this episode the unnamed
narrator, who spends most of the time lying prostrate on a park bench, begins to feel his
privacy threatened by the visitations of a woman to the same bench.
3.1.3. NOVEL is a work of fiction that is longer and more complex than a short story. In
novels, setting, plot characters and theme are fully developed in great details. Like a short
story the novel has for main elements, setting, plot characters and theme. A person who
writes novels is called a novelist E.g. Passed like a shadow by B. Mapalala. The Interview,
by P. Ngugi, etc.
3.2. DRAMA/PLAY
Is a literary genre that tells a story through actions and dialogue and is written to be
performed on stage by actors. Drama has the same elements as those in novels and short
stories. i.e. setting, plot characters, theme, climax, conflict, symbolism, etc. An element
that is unique to drama isDRAMATIC TECHNIQUE. This includes:
Dialogue. These are the words that the characters speak in a play. It is a conversation
between characters. It is the dialogue that reveals the characters qualities, personality
traits, and reactions to other characters.
Soliloquy/monologue. This is a speech made by a character when he/she is alone on stage.
Or it is a speech in which a character alone on stage, expresses her thoughts and feelings
aloud for the benefit of the audience, often in a revealing way (Druce & Tyson;
2007:280).
Aside. This is a direct address of the audience by a character. The other characters do not
hear what is being said.
Stage direction. These are the instructions/notes included in a play/drama which describe
how the work is to be performed or staged. They indicate areas of the stage in which
actors sit, stand, move, speak, exit, enter, and so on, lighting, music, sound effect,
costumes, emotional state, etc.
These are usually type in italics and enclosed in the parentheses or brackets.

TYPES OF DRAMA
3.2.1. Tragedy
It is a serious drama/play with a sad ending especially one that in which the main
character dies. The events in a tragic plot are set in motion by a decision that is often an
error in judgment. Succeeding events are linked in a cause-and-effect relationship and
lead inevitably to a disastrous conclusion, usually death. E.g. Oedipus the King, by
Sophocles. Julius Caesar by W. Shakespeare, Mfalme Juha by F Topan etc.
 A person who writes tragedies for the theatre or an actor in a tragedy is called
a tragedian. E.g. Sophocles, Shakespeare, etc
3.2.2. Comedy
It is a dramatic work that is intended to be funny, humorous and usually ends happily
with a peaceful resolution of the main conflict. To achieve a comic effect sometimes the
playwrights use Mistaken identity. Sometimes certain characters are mistaken about their
surroundings. They say or do things that would be appropriate in a different social
situation but are inappropriate in their surroundings. The resulting confusion results to a
silly series of events. The confusion of characters causes a ridiculous conflict. The climax
arrives when the characters learn the truth. E.g. Juliette and Oko or Atangana and
Abessolo in Three Suitors One Husband. Other examples of comedies are The trials of
Brother Jero and The Loin and the Jewel both by W. Soyinka
An entertainer who makes people laugh by by telling jokes and funny stories is called
a comedian/comedienne.
3.2.3. Tragic comedy
It is a dramatic work that combines the elements of tragedy and comedy but here the
hero/heroine does not end in danger or death. A comic relief is a technique used to
achieve this effect. This is a humorous scene that is inserted into a serious work of drama
to provide relief from the seriousness felt by the audience. Examples
3.2.4. Melodrama
A play that is full of exciting events and in which the characters and emotions seem too
exaggerated to be true/real. Example.
3.2.5. Historical drama
This is a type of drama that expresses the history o a particular society but usually
contains some elements of tragedy and comedy. E.gDedan Kimathi by Ngugi, Kinjeketile
by E.Hussein

Other important terms in drama.

Act. This is a major unit/part of action in a drama or play.
Scene. This is a smaller section of a subdivision of one act. So a scene is a section
presenting events that occur in one place at one time.
Costume. The clothes worn by actors in a play or film/movie or worn by somebody to
make them look like somebody or something else. E.g. a student, a housemaid, a judge,
etc.
Prop. A small object used by actors, during the performance of a play or in a film/movie
Audience. Is a group of people sitting in a room, auditorium or in the theatre listening to
and watching a performance.
Theatre. This is a special building or an outdoor area where plays/movies/films and other
entertainments are performed.

4. ELEMENTS OF LITERATURE.
4.1.CONTENT
4.1.1. THEME
This is a writers central idea, concern, or purpose in a literary work. (Glawoka
2001:886) a theme can usually be expressed as a generalization or a general statement
 about human beings or about life. Although a theme may be directly stated in the text, it
is more often presented indirectly. When the theme is presented indirectly the reader
must figure out what the theme is by looking carefully at what the work reveals about
people or about life. Common themes in literature include classes, poverty,
unemployment, oppression, exploitation, corruption, marginalization, hypocrisy, love,
identity, betrayal, racial segregation/discrimination, effects of colonialism/neo-
colonialism, humiliation position of women in the society. etc
4.1.2. MESSAGE/MORAL
This refers to the lesson taught by a literary work. (ibid:883). A poem, novel, short story
or play often suggests a lesson/moral that is not directly stated. The lesson must be
drawn by the reader based in the other elements of the work. e.g.
United we stand, divided we fall.
What goes around comes around.
4.1.3. CONFLICT
A conflict is a struggle between opposing forces. a conflict is one of the most important
elements of stories, novels and plays because it causes the actions. There are two kinds of
conflict:
4.1.3.1. Internal conflict. This takes place within the mind of a character. The character
struggles to make decision, take action, or overcome a feeling. For example THONI in
The back hermit has this kind of conflict.
4.1.3.2. External conflict. This is the one in which the character struggles against some outside
forces, such as another person. In this category we can get further subdivisions of conflicts
such as, economic conflict, political conflict, family conflict, social conflict, cultural
conflicts etc
4.1.4. RELEVANCE
This is the applicability of a literary work in contemporary societies. We assess whether or
not the author has been successful in addressing the issues that are relevant to our lives
currently. That is why we believe that literary works do not develop in a vacuum but
they usually address issues in societies they evolve.
It is interesting however to note that a literary work may not necessarily be relevant
across time and across space. In one case, a literary work might be relevant in one society
but may be irrelevant in another. In another case, a literary work that was once relevant
in one society might be irrelevant in the same society as time passes by. E.g. most literary
works that were about struggle for independence in Africa have now fallen out of
favour.
4.2. FORM
4.2.1. CHARACTERS/CHARACTERIZATION
Characterization is the act of creating and developing a character. It is the way the writer
reveals the personality of a character. A Character - Is a person or an animal that takes
part in the action of a literary work.
Authors use two major methods of characterization; Direct and Indirect.
DIRECT CHARACTERIZATION. When using the direct characterization a writer tells the
characters traits or characteristics. E.g. brave, corrupt, weak etc.
 INDIRECT CHARACTERIZATION. When using indirect characterization a writer depends on the
reader to draw conclusions /judgments about the characters traits by using the evidence
the writer gives:
Through the words of the character.
Through the description of the characters look and clothing.
Through the description of the characters feelings and thoughts.
Through comments made about a character by another character in the story.
Through the characters behaviour.

CLASSIFICATION OF CHARACTERS.
There are different ways of classifying the characters.
4.2.1.1. Major/main character and minor character
The main or major character is the one that is the most important in the story poem or
play. Usually the main character appears from the beginning to the end of the story.
While a minor character is the one that takes part in the action of a story but is not the
focus of attention. These help the main character to accomplish his mission.
4.2.1.2. Flat character and round character.
Flat character is usually one-sided and often stereotypical while round character on the
other hand is fully developed and exhibits may traits- often both faults and virtues.
4.2.1.3. Dynamic character and static character.
Dynamic character is the one who changes or grows in the course of the story like Remi
in The Black Hermit. While a static character is the one who does not change. Like
Mbarga in Three Suitors One Husband.
4.2.1.4. Protagonist and antagonist.
A protagonist is the main character in a literary work. Often a protagonist is a person but
sometimes it can be an animal. An antagonist is a character or a force that is in conflict
with the main character or protagonist.
4.2.2. SETTING
The setting of a literary work is the place and time of the action. Stories can be set in the
present, past or future. What happens in the story and how characters look and act often
depends on the time when the event took place. It may include the year, time of the
day, even weather. The place may be a specific country, state, region, community,
neighbourhood, building, institution, or at home. Details such as dialects, clothing,
customs, and modes of transportation are often used to establish the setting. The setting
can be real as in passes like a shadow or imaginary as in Kusadikika.

4.2.3. STYLE
This is the way the writer uses the language. It is also understood as the individual way in
which a writer has used the language to express his or her ideas (Druce & Tyson;
2007:280). Style results from diction (word choice), sentence structure and tone. One
writer may choose to use many figures of speech another may prefer to use
straightforward language with few figures of speech.
 4.2.4. PLOT
This is a sequence/arrangement of events in a literary work. In most novels, dramas,
short stories and narrative poems the plot involves both the characters and a central
conflict. Plot may be chronological or flashback.
A chronological plot is one that the incidents are arranged in the order they occur. The
plot usually begins with EXPOSITION that introduces the setting, the characters and the
basic situation. This is followed by the introduction of the central conflict. The conflict
increases during the RISING ACTION until it reaches the highest point of interest or
suspense, THE CLIMAX. The climax is followed by the FALLING ACTION or the end of
the conflict. Any events that during the falling action make up the resolution or
Denouement. (Glawka 2001:884)

CLIMAX

RESOLUTION
EXPOSITION conflict
Introduced

The plot can also employ a flashback. This is an interruption of the current action of a
plot to show events that happened at an earlier time. It breaks the normal forward
movement of a narrative. Although flashbacks often appear in the middle of the story it
can also be placed at the beginning. They give background information the audience
needs to understand in order to understand the present action.
Foreshadowing can also be used. This is the use of clues/hints to suggest events
that will occur later in the plot. Foreshadowing is used to build suspense or anxiety in the
reader or viewer. (Beers, K et al, 2003:709) E.g. the character prepares his gun and hides
it somewhere; this may foretell violence later in the story.

4.2.5. LANGUAGE USE/DICTION

This refers to the writers or speakers choice of words. People use different types of
words depending on the audience they are addressing, the subject they are discussing and
the effect they are trying to produce. Diction is an essential element of a writers style
and has a major effect on the tone of the piece of writing (Beers, K et al, 2003:709).

4.2.5.1. FIGURATIVE LANGUAGE

This is writing or speech that is not meant to be taken literally. One has to dig dipper and
uncover the underlying meaning. The many types of figurative language are known as
figures of speech.

4.2.5.2. FIGURES OF SPEECH

Definition:
Figure of Speech is a word or group of words that describes one thing in terms of
another and is not meant to be understood as literally true.
 A figure of speech is a word or phrase that departs from everyday literal language for
the sake of comparison, emphasis, clarity, or freshness.
Also known as, rhetorical figure, metaphorical language/ literary devices
Used well, figures of speech greatly enhance your fiction, and can be a very economical way of getting an
image or a point across, but used incorrectly, they will confuse the reader. The special emphasis is typically
accomplished by the user's conscious deviation from the strict literal sense of a word, or from the more
commonly used form of word order or sentence construction. From ancient times to the present, such
figurative locutions have been extensively employed by orators and writers to strengthen and embellish
their styles of speech and composition. A number of the more widely used figures of speech, some of
which are also called tropes, follow.
1) Metaphor is a figure of speech that makes a direct comparison between two unlike things
without using the words like or as. A metaphor suggests that one thing is another
thing, or is equal to another thing. It uses a word or phrase denoting one kind of idea or
object in place of another word or phrase for the purpose of suggesting a likeness
between the two. Metaphors create vivid descriptions with few words, as the subject of
the comparison takes on the qualities of the thing with which it is compared.
'He was a lion in the fight'.
In the biblical Book of Psalms, the writer speaks of God's law as
A light to his feet and a lamp to his path.
The LORD is my shepherd

2) A simile is a figure of speech that makes a comparison between two unlike things and
uses the words "like," "as," "than" or "resembles". Or Simile is specific comparison by
means of the words like or as between two kinds of ideas or objects. Similes make
descriptions vivid by comparing their subjects with known events or things. Effective
similes help readers visualize what is being described. Examples,
As cool as a cucumber',
'As white as snow',
'Life is just like an ice-cream, enjoy it before it melts',
Christianity shone like a beacon in the black night of paganism

Irony: It is the expression of ideas which are exactly opposite to the implied meaning.
3) Or Irony is a disagreement or incongruity between what is said and what is understood,
or what is expected and what actually occurs. Irony can be used intentionally or can
happen unintentionally. Authors can use irony to make their audience stop and think
about what has just been said, or to emphasize a central idea. The audience's role in
realizing the difference between what is said and what is normal or expected is essential
to the successful use of irony.
'A student of psychology going insane', a quote such as,
'A bank lends you money provided you show that it's not needed'
Or the warning found on every cigarette pack, 'Smoking is injurious to health' is an irony!

There are three scenarios in which irony occurs.

a. Verbal irony is when the intended meaning of the statement or work is different (often
the opposite of) what the statement or work literary says. For Example, Ibsens An
 Enemy of the People is ironically used since Dr Stockman who is declared an enemy, is in
really sense, and is a friend of the people.
b. Situational Irony occurs when what happens is contrary to what is expected; or the actual
outcome of a situation is the opposite of what is expected. For example
The son of the English teacher fails the English Exam.
The daughter of a rich merchant is expelled from school for lack of school fees of
20,000/=.
c. Dramatic Irony occurs when events or facts not known to the character on stage in a
fictional work, are known to another character and the audience or reader. E.g. Oedipus
the King.

4) Personification: It is a representation of abstract ideas or inanimate objects as having

human attributes or qualities. Or Personification is the representation of inanimate
objects or abstract ideas as living beings. Personification connects readers with the object
that is personified. Personification can make descriptions of non-human entities more
vivid, or can help readers understand, sympathize with, or react emotionally to non-
human characters.
'Death laid its icy hands on kings',
Necessity is the mother of invention

5) Apostrophe: It is a direct address to the dead or an inanimate object creating an

emotional surge. In Apostrophe, an actor turns from the audience, or a writer from
readers, to address a person who usually is either absent or deceased, an inanimate
object, or an abstract idea. As in John Donnes Death Be Not Proud
'Caesar, only if you were alive'
'O stone, O might, O heart of man-made God, Thou art the emblem of our hope',

6) Rhetorical question is the act of asking questions not to gain information but just for
emphasis. No answer, in fact, is expected by the speaker. The device is illustrated in the
following series of sentences:
Did you help me when I needed help? Did you once offer to intercede in my behalf?
Did you do anything to lessen my load?

7) Hyperbole/overstatement is a figure of speech in which the truth is exaggerated for

emphasis or for humorous effect. In exaggeration a person or thing is depicted as being
better or worse, or larger or smaller, than is actually the case. It is, used often to ridicule,
create humor or any drastic emotional appeal.
'The waves rose as high as the mountains,'
'I am so hungry that I can eat a whole cow'
'She wept and wept until there was a sea of tears'.

8) Litotes/ understatement: It is an understated expression when the actual idea to be

expressed is quite significant. It is like downplaying an idea when it seems to be the best
possible course of action or description. Statements such as,
'I was not feeling unhappy. Meaning I was feeling happy
 The English poet Thomas Gray showed no inconsiderable powers as a prose writer,
meaning that Gray was in fact a very good prose writer
I am not unmindful- meaning I mind
9) Euphemism, this is the substitution of an offensive/unpleasant term or phrase by the one
that has pleasant associations, as in the use of lavatory or rest room for toilet, and
pass away for die.

10) Metonymy is a figure of speech associates the name of one thing with that of something
else. This is a word that substitutes for an object, the name of an attribute or concept
associated to that object. The use of crown for king or for the government ruled by a
king is an example of a metonym.
a. We waited hopelessly for two sunsets
b. Sunsets here implies two days,
c. He has a good name in our society. Or,
d. They spoilt his name. Name refers to reputation
e. A press conference by the Statehouse. Here, statehouse refers to the officials of the
Statehouse who will be holding the press conference.
A metonym is not necessarily one word. As in a hotel -Room 44 needs a bottle of
champagne Room 44 here refers to the customer who is in that room.
f. The hostess kept a good table, when good food is implied.

11) Synecdoche: is a figure of speech in which the whole is represented by a part or a part by
the whole is called as synecdoche. Example
'He has several mouths to feed'. Here mouths represent people.
50 head of cattle,head is used to mean whole animals,
The president's administration contained the best brains in the country,brains is used
for intellectually brilliant persons.

12) Onomatopoeia, imitation of natural sounds by words. Examples in English are the
italicized words in the phrases

The humming bee,

the cackling hen,
the whizzing arrow,
The buzzing saw.
Hiss,
splash,
bang.

13) Oxymoron: This is a figure of speech which includes words or ideas opposite in meaning
placed one after the other. Oxymoron combines two seemingly contradictory or
incongruous words.

o 'True lies',
o 'Open secret',
o 'Pretty ugly face',
o 'Feeling alone in a crowd,
o Living deaths,
o Dear wounds,
o Fair storms,
o Silent noise
o Freezing fires
o Pain for pleasure
o Clearly confused
o Cruel kindness
o Deafening silence
o Only choice
o Random order
o Alone together
o Awfully good
o Dark light
o Light darkness
o Appear invisible
o Goodbye reception.
o Growing smaller
o True myth
o Unpopular celebrity
o Worthless gold
o Sad joy
o Sweet agony
o Daydream in the night

14) Paradox, this is a figure of speech which includes a statement or sentiment that appears
contradictory to common sense yet is true in fact. Simply put it is a statement that seems
to contradict itself but is, nevertheless, true. These statements or assertions, according to
logic, cannot be true, yet the figure links them in a way that creates a new meaning, one
that defies logic but works on situation. Examples of paradox is found in Martin Luthers
speech I Have a Dream
..The Negro is still languished in the corners of American society and finds himself an
exile in his own land
In the above sentence, logically speaking, one cannot be in exile while he is still in his
own land, as the true meaning of the word exile is. But the situation described, is the one
that makes us see as if the Negros are in exile, since they have nothing to enjoy in their
own land.

15) Climax, It is the arrangement of ideas in an increasing order of their importance. It

emphasizes the meaning in a clear and effective way. Or itis the arrangement of words,
clauses, or sentences in the order of their importance, the least forcible coming first and
the others rising in power until the last, as in the following sentences:
 It is an outrage to bind a Roman citizen; it is a crime to scourge him; it is almost
parricide to kill him; but to crucify himwhat shall I say of this?
'He came, he saw, he conquered, 'her village, her state, her nation were her pride',
'Eat, drink and sleep' and so on.

16) Anticlimax is a sequence of ideas that abruptly diminish in dignity or importance at the
end of a sentence or passage, generally for satirical effect. The following sentence
contains an illustration of anticlimax:
Among the great achievements of Benito Mussolini's regime were the revival of a strong
national consciousness, the expansion of the Italian Empire, and the running of the trains
on time.

17) Antithesis, is a juxtaposition of two words, phrases, clauses, or sentences contrasted or

opposed in meaning in such a way as to give emphasis to contrasting ideas. An example
of antithesis is the following line by the English poet Alexander Pope: To err is human,
to forgive divine.

18) Conceit, it is an elaborate, extended and sometimes surprising comparison between

things that, at first sight, do not have much in common. It is also defined as an elaborate,
often extravagant metaphor or simile (see below) making an analogy between totally
dissimilar things. The term originally meant concept or idea. The use of conceits is
especially characteristic of 17th-century English metaphysical poetry. An example occurs
in the poem A Valediction: Forbidding Mourning, by the English poet John Donne, in
which two lovers' souls are compared to the legs of drawing compasses.

19) Allusion is a literary device in which the writer or speaker refers either directly or
indirectly to a famous person, event, place or thing in history or to a work of art or
literature. Allusion connects the content of a text with the larger world. Allusion calls to
mind the ideas and emotions associated with a well-known event or published work.
Those ideas and emotions then contribute to what the author conveys.
"Four score and seven years ago our fathers brought forth on this continent, a new
nation, conceived in Liberty, and dedicated to the proposition that all men are created
equal."
20)Parallel structure /parallelism / Parallel construction is a repetition of the same pattern of
words or phrases within a sentence or passage to show that two or more ideas have the
same level of importance. Parallel structure helps to organize ideas, making a text or
speech easier to understand. Parallel structure can also create a satisfying rhythm in the
language an author uses. In this literary device, the idea to be stated is repeated in some
other form to emphasize the articulation.
'She cried, she wept but he was unmoved',
'Show me your strength, your stamina, your energy only where it is needed'
Health centres
More schools
Clean water
21) Anaphora Also called epanaphora, the repetition of a word or expression at the
beginning of successive phrases for rhetorical or poetic effect, as in Lincoln's
"We cannot dedicate-
We cannot consecrate-
We cannot hallow this ground"

I am a true Acoli
I am not a half-caste
I am not a slave girl

22) Imagery: this is a figure of speech which creates mental pictures that appeal to readers,
five senses. Readers use sensory details to make readers imagine how things look, feel,
smell, sound and taste. There are different types of images depending on the five senses.
o Visual image- this is an image of sight e.g.
o Greater than the Rift-Valley;
o Camera film to light, coils of the greatest python
o Stronger than the blows of the sea
o When the hurricane is at its height.
o Organic image -this is image of feeling
o Dying in agony
o More painful than the yell
o Audio image this is an image of sound
o The yell of a woman
o I plead the cry of the nation
o The screams of a man
o Kinetic image -this is an image of motion.
o Is faster than camera film
o But as slow as tropism
o I declare running Better than walking
o Tactile image - this is an image of touch
o As it falls on the seemingly soft soil
o Standing hard and ready..
o Olfactory image this is an image of smell.
o a stinking room
o Gustatory image. This is an Image of taste
o In search of sweetness
o Thermal image this is an image of heat.

23)Symbolism is a literary device that uses one object to stand for something else or to mean
something else. Actions can also be symbolic, such as washing hands to indicate non-
involvement. Some symbols are universal, with generally accepted meanings, such as a
crown to mean superiority or the color red to mean danger. Symbols, especially specific
ones, often mean more than one thing.
 Sunrise symbolizes the beginning of the struggle and sunset symbolizes the end of the
struggle in the poem Sunrise

24)Pun - It is a humorous play on two or more meanings of the same word or on two
different words with the same sound. It is also understood as a play on the multiple
meanings of the word or on two words that sound alike but have different meanings. It
uses words that have similar or identical sounds but very different meanings. Quite often
it is used to pass a witty remark or bring about a sarcastic effect.
Examples are,
"It is better to have loved a short person and lost, than never to have loved A
TALL."
'I KNEAD the dough so that I can eat',
Another good pun is found in the last but one line of Shakespeares When My
Love Swears That She Is Made of Truth. He says;
Therefore, I LIE with her and she with me Shakespeare Sonnet 138

25) Allegory is a form of extended metaphor, in which objects, persons, and actions in a
narrative, are equated with the meanings that lie outside the narrative itself. The
underlying meaning has moral, social, religious, or political significance, and characters
are often personifications of abstract ideas as charity, greed, or envy.
Thus an allegory is a story with two meanings, a literal meaning and asymbolic meaning.
A more modern example of allegory is George Orwells Animal Farm, which on the
surface level is about a group of animals who take over their farm but on the deeper
level is an allegory of the Russian Revolution and the shortcomings of the Communism.

26) Anastrophe: Also known as inversion, it is a sentence or a poetic expression which

reverses or changes the order of words for greater emphasis. The following are examples
of anastrophic expressions
'Ten thousand saw I at a glance' instead of I saw ten thousand at a glance
Forward they go which is not a normal English structure of SVA. They go
forward
And away they go instead of and they go away
While your hive they plunder instead of while they plunder your hive.

27)Satire: It is mimicry; a mockery, a witty remark or ridicule related to a person, place,

animal or a thing, generally for leisure and is completely wrong or absurd. Satire is any
piece of writing that uses devices such as irony. It is a text or performance that uses irony,
derision or wit to expose or attack human vice, foolishness or stupidity.
Satire is a literary technique which principally ridicules its subject which includes
individuals, organization or states often as an intended means of provoking or
preventing changes.
 APPRECIATION OF POETRY.
Poetry is a literary genre in which ideas and feelings are expressed in imaginative and
musical language. Poems are meant to be recited or sung and words are arranged in such
a way that they touch readers senses, emotions and mind. Poetry is different from other
literary genres and thus it should be appreciated on its own merit.
Some common poetic terms are.
Poem is a metrical composition in which ideas emotions and feelings are
presented using imaginative and creative language.
Poet is a person who composes poems.
Persona this is a person who is speaking in a poem. The persona can be
the poet himself of may use another person to pass his ideas.
Stanza is a group of line in a poem.
Verse. This is just one line of a stanza in a poem.
In appreciation of poems there are different things to be considered in order to grasp the
meaning and the intention of the poet.
a. THE TITLE OF THE POEM.
The title of the poem may give a clue of what the poem is about. Think of the
titles like Development, A freedom song, Lost Beauty etc. they give
preliminary information of what you might find in the poem. The history of the
poet may also provide a clue to the content of the poem. E.g. David Diop in
Africa
Nevertheless, it is advised not to rely much on the titles or take them for granted.
Some titles are ironical as they represent the opposite of what actually happens.
Think of Building the Nation for instance. Were the two people building the
nation?
b. THE TONE AND MOOD OF THE POEM.
i. Tone-refers to the voice quality which expresses the poets emotions. The tone can be
harsh, polite, scary, rude, happy lovely, romantic, etc.
ii. Mood/atmosphere- this is the feeling/attitude that the poem conveys to the
readers/listeners.
o Descriptive words and phrases contribute to the mood of the poem.
o Understanding the poets mood is very important in poems analysis. The
mood can be serious, fearful, satirical, lovely, optimistic, pessimistic, sorrowful,
gloomy, amused, angry, happy, sad, sympathetic, humorous, joyful, ironical
friendly etc.

c. THE STRUCTURE OF THE POEM.

Here we look at the way the poem is structured by looking at;
Number and length of verses.
Number and length of stanzas
A stanza is a formal division of lines in a poem, considered as a unit. Many poems
are made up of stanzas that are separated by spaces.
 Stanzas often function just like paragraphs in prose. Each stanza states and
develops a single idea.
Stanzas are commonly named according to the number of verses/lines found in
them as follows.
1. Couplet : two-line stanza
2. Tercet: Three-line stanza.
3. Quatrain: Four-line stanza
4. Cinquain: Five-line stanza
5. Sestet: Six-line stanza
6. Heptastich: Seven-line stanza.
7. Octave: Eight-line stanza
Rhyming scheme/pattern.
Rhyme is the repetition of similar sounds at the end of words in a stanza. The pattern
of rhymes in a stanza is called Rhyming scheme.
Rhyme scheme can be represented by different letters to show each rhyming sound.
E.g. in Shakespearean Let me not to the Marriage of Free Minds and Claudie
McKay If we must Die the scheme goes (ABAB CDCD EFEF GG).
If the poem has a rhyming scheme that follows a particular consistent
order we refer to it as a REGULAR RHYMING SCHEME.
If the poem has no particular consistent order we say it hasIRREGULAR
RHYMING SCHEME.
Rhyming can occur in different ways.
Perfect/exact rhyme. When the sounds match exactly mostly at the end.
E.g. came and fame
Partial/imperfect rhyme when the sounds do not match exactly. E.g.
hunger and plumber
Eye rhyme when words seem to rhyme but they are not e.g. Enough
and through
Internal rhyme this is the rhyming that occurs within a line. E.g. They
were singing, bringing the ring.

d. THE TYPES OF THE POEM

Broadly the poems are categorized into two types.
1. Traditional/closed poems these are the poems that follow strict ancient poetic
principles. These include the balance in the number of words in each stanza, rhyming
scheme, rhythm etc.
2. Modern/free verse/ open poems these are poems that follow only some poetic
principles and ignore others.
NOTE: it should be remembered that what makes the poem traditional
or modern is never the time but the observance to the strict rules.

Further classification of poems.

 i. Narrative poem. This is a poem that tells a story. This is like prose fiction because
it contains similar elements, a setting, characters, and a plot. The plot contains
rising actions or the event that develop a conflict; a climax or a turning point and
falling action when the conflict is resolved. E.g. Marjories A freedom song or
PBiteks Song of Lawino.
ii. Lyric poem. This is usually short and expresses the personal thoughts, emotions,
and feelings of a single speaker. E.g. Mwaikusas When I Say I Love You or Joe
Corries Eat More
iii. Didactic poem. This is a poem that instructs the reader. It gives lessons to the
reader. They are mainly on political and social matters. E.g. Guebuzas Your
Pain it advises the reader to take part in the struggle.
iv. Epic poem. This refers to a long poem that presents heroic actions of great men
and women in history of a nation. E.g. the Epic of Sundiata It has more than
3080 lines
v. Ode poem. This is a poem that addresses a person or a thing or cerebrates an
event like wedding, birthday, independence etc. e.g. I took my son by the hand
by Micere Mugo
vi. Elegy. Is a poem that expresses sorrow about someone who has died. E.g. Ewes
Lament for the dead mother and Christine by Barbara Buford.
vii. Ballad. Is a dialogue like poem in which there are two or more people speaking in
turn. E.g. Langston Hughess Ballad of the Landlord
viii. Sonnet. Is a lyric poem that contains 14 lines (verses) in one stanza. A sonnet
has two parts; the first 8 lines are called octet and the last 6 lines are called
sestet. E.g. If we must die by Claudie McKay, Let me not to the marriage of
true minds by Shakespeare and Death be not proud by John Donne.

e. THE POETIC DICTION/CHOICE OF WORDS

1. Choice of words. This refers to the selection and arrangement of words in a poem.
This is also done for economy. Very few words may be selected to convey a very
strong and powerful message. E.g. Development there are words like; corrupt,
egoism, exploited, cheated, disregarded, privileged few, etc. these help to get the
themes and the message across.
2. Literary devices/figures of speech. We also look at the literary devices (figures of
speech) such as simile, metaphor, imagery, personification, euphemism, paradox,
symbolism, irony, hyperbole, anadiplosis etc.
3. Poetic devices. We also consider the poetic devices which include;
3.1. Poetic license. This is the freedom/privilege by which the poet is allowed to
violate/break certain grammatical rules to achieve a poetic effect. E.g. Forward
the go instead of they go forward in Sunrise by J. Mwaikusa, and I too am
America instead of I am an American too in I too sing America by L. Hughes.
3.2. Sound /musical devices. All the sound devices are looked at under the general
term repetition. These are;
3.2.1. Refrain this is the repetition of words, phrases or lines at the end of every
stanza in a poem. It acts as a chorus in the poem. E.g. Atieno yo. In Oluthes A
freedom song
 3.2.2. Alliteration this is the repetition of consonants sounds mostly at the
beginning of words which are nearby. Etymologically the word Alliteration is
derived from the Latin word Latira which means letters of alphabet so it is a
literary device in which a number of words having the same first consonant
occur close together in a series. E.g. Darling Derrick died dearly
or Feel free friend Fredy. Your beautiful black blood in Africa
Bare breast bouncing vigor and energy in Lost beauty
Delicate diplomatic duties you know in Building the Nation
3.2.3. Assonance is the repetition of similar vowel sounds within words close to one
another with different consonant sounds. E.g. They sell the wedding bells
3.2.4. Consonance this is the repetition of consonant sounds at the end of words in
stressed syllables. Or is a sound device identified by the repetition of identical or
similar consonant sounds in neighbouring words whose vowels sounds are
different. E.g. take it back,
I deed my kid to bed,
You hurt my heart.
3.2.5. Reiteration this is the repetition of the same word for emphasis. E.g.
Africa my Africa, in Africa
My eyes oh my eyes in Lost Beauty
3.2.6. Rhyme - is the repetition of similar sounds at the end of words in a stanza.

Samwiterson the artist,

The son of Christ
The real Adventist
The pure revolutionist
Ive been chosen,
To represent Mara region,
When my sermon you listen,
Your heart is shaken

In the first stanza the rhyme is st while in the second it is n

f. THEMES IN THE POEM
These are the general main ideas of the poem. The common themes in most poems
include; classes, poverty, unemployment, oppression, exploitation, corruption,
marginalization, hypocrisy, love, identity, betrayal, racial segregation/discrimination,
effects of colonialism/neo-colonialism, humiliation.

g. MESSAGES FROM THE POEM.

These are lessons we learn from different poems. They show what the reader has to do
after reading the poem. They show the way forward or give solutions to problems
discussed in the poem. Mostly we get messages from themes. E.g.
Corrupt leaders are obstacles to development they should be
uprooted.
We should be aware and proud of our African identity.
 True love is not based on money or material things.

h. RELEVANCE OF THE POEM.

This is the applicability of the poems message in contemporary societies. We assess
whether or not the poet has been successful in addressing the issues that are relevant to
our lives currently. That is why we believe that poems do not develop in a vacuum but
they usually address issues in societies they evolve.
It is interesting however to note that the poem may not necessarily be relevant across
time and across space.
o In one case, a poem might be relevant in one society but may be irrelevant in another.
E.G. issues related to FGM, wife battering, bride price etc
o In another case, a poem that was once relevant in one society might be irrelevant in the
same society as time passes by. E.g. most poems that were about struggle for
independence in Africa have now fallen out of favour.

HOW TO RESPOND TO LITERATURE QUESTIONS

It is very important to understand the skills for answering literature questions because,
more often than not, most students fail to respond to literature questions not because
they dont have the right answers for those questions but chiefly because they fail to
interpret the questions appropriately and respond accordingly. Therefore to successfully
respond to literature questions, the following things should be taken into consideration
at least as the first step to start with:
a) Read the question carefully.
It is advised to read the question more than once as it helps you to understand it. Re-
reading the question twice or thrice may help you to gain some additional insights on the
requirements of the question
b) Paraphrase the question.
At this point try to re-state the question in your own words. This helps you among other
things to see if you have understood what you are asked to do. E.g.
With reference to two plays that you have read in class compare two female characters
one from each play and show how they differ.
PARAPHRASE: The question requires me to pick two female charactersand show
their similarities and differences
c) Pay attention to key words in the question.
Questions have key words that tell you what you are required to do. When you are
reading the question note whether it requires you to;- discuss, list, mention, compare and
contrast, verify, describe, comment, criticize, interpret, justify..etc.
d) Write an outline of your answer.
At this juncture try to frame how your essay will look like and what you are going to put
in the introduction, the main body and conclusion. i.e. in the introduction you may
show (i). The key words to be defined, (ii) the books you are going to use. In the main
body you may jot down the points you are going to use from each reading. In the
conclusion you may show how you are going to conclude.
 THE STRUCTURE OF YOUR ESSAY
INTRODUCTION.
Remember that introduction is the key to your essay. It gives an impression on whether
or not the reader should continue reading your essay or not. Here you are supposed to
do the following.
i. Define key terms. For example in our question above; you may need to
define: Character(s) this helps your reader to understand your working definition.
E.g. Characters are animate or inanimate beings that play different roles in a literary
work.
ii. Sometimes there are no key words to be defined. In such a case give some background
information on the subject in question. E.g.
Women occupy different roles in literary works. By using two readings you have
studied in class show the roles of women in your society . Here you may need to agree
with the statement and show that women do really occupy different roles in different
societies.
iii. List the readings you are going to use. Of course you will have outlined them somewhere,
but this is the right place to include them in your essay. A good choice of readings is also
very important as it shows whether you are going to respond to the question correctly or
wrongly. E.g. To prove the above statement my discussion will be centred on Juliette
of Three Suitors One Husband by O. Mbia and Wanjiro of This Time Tomorrow by
Ngugi wa Thiongo.
In this essay references will be made to Juliette of Three Suitors One Husband by O Mbia
and Wanjiro of This Time Tomorrow by Ngugi wa Thiongo..
iv. Show the readings you are going to start with. In case of the questions that need each
reading to be treated separately.

MAIN BODY
Here you need to be careful because it is this part that answers your question.
a. Organization.
You should organize your essay in paragraphs whereby each paragraph carries one point.
That is to say the number of points is determined by the number of paragraphs and vice
versa.
Each paragraph must contain a topic sentence. A topic sentence is the one containing the
argument you are making. E.g. in our question you could begin each sentence by saying
Both Juliette and Wanjiro are..
Provide supporting details. These are evidences from a literary work plus supporting
examples. Example if you say
Both Juliette and Wanjiro are denied to marry men of their choices. Juliette is denied by
her family to marry Oko since he is still a schoolboy and has no money compared to the
other suitors like Mbia. Similarly, Wanjiro is denied by her mother to marry Asinjo on
the ground that he is a man from another tribe, he is poor and has no job.
b. Citation
Your citation will largely depend on the nature of the question you are attempting.
Different questions call for different responses. Questions on themes for instance have
issues cutting across two or more readings. If that is the case it is possible to refer to two
 readings in one paragraph. However this approach is used when the point is the same.
For example, Literature is the product of the society. It is used by artists to reflect social
realities within their societies. Use two novels you have read to verify the above
statement. In such a case you may discuss a theme like HIV/AIDS which appears in both
Passed Like a Shadow and The Interview. Your citation will be;
One of the social realities portrayed is the plight of HIV/AIDS pandemic. In Passed like a
Shadow people like Adyeri, Amoti, Vicky, David and others die of AIDS due to
ignorance of the ways it spreads and beliefs in superstition. Similarly, in The Interview
people like Georgina and the pastor die of AIDS or kill themselves due to Ignorance
without even taking blood test to confirm whether they are infected.
If the readings contain different points it is advisable that you deal with one reading at a
time and then move to another.
If the question requires you to compare and contrast two aspects in two readings you
make references to both readings at the same time using words like; whereas, while, on
the other hand, by contrast, or comparing by using words like also, similarly, likewise.
NOTE: Answering a question is not the same as narrating a story. You should avoid
narrating what is taking place in the story but rather analyze and make arguments.

CONCLUSION.
This is the final part of your essay. You are expected to write your position. Dont
conclude by saying;
What I have said/written above are/is
The above points are.
It is advised that you conclude your essay with expressions like;
In conclusion..,
To conclude.,
In summary..,
By the way of conclusion.,
To sum up ,
Generally it can be said that.,
To capitulate.. etc
Eg. Generally it can be concluded that, different characters from different readings may
be alike or different depending on the experiences they face in the societies they live. If
the experiences are the same the characters are likely to behave the same way and vice
versa.

EXAMPLE OF A WELL-WRITTEN LITERATURE ESSAY.

Qn. With reference to two plays that you have studied in this
coursecompare and contrast two female characters one from each reading.

Characters are animate or inanimate beings that perform different roles in literary work.
Female characters occupy different roles in different literary works which make two
different characters from two different readings to have similarities or differences
respectively. To verify the above statement references will be made to Juliette of
Three Suitors One Husband by O. Mbia and Wanjiro of This Time Tomorrow by
N. Thiongo. To start with their similarities;
Both Juliette and Wanjiro are denied to marry men of their choices. Juliette on
one side is denied to marry Oko the person she loves because he is still a schoolboy and
has no money compared to other suitors like Mbia. Similarly, Wanjiro is denied by her
mother to marry Asinjo because he is a man from another tribe and has no job.
Both Juliette and Wanjiro show true love to their fiancs. Juliette on one side
shows true love to Oko and does all it takes to ensure that they get married. She steals
the money paid by other suitors and gives it to Oko who in turn pays it as a bride price
and they get married. Likewise, Wanjiro decides to stand on the side of Asinjo despite
her mothers warnings that she cannot marry a man from another tribe and has no job,
but she insists that she loves him.
Both Juliette and Wanjiro finally get married to men of their choices. Juliette on
one hand succeeds to marry Oko after playing a trick and stealing the money paid by
other suitors. She presents Oko as the rich and greatest man than the civil servant. The
family accepts Oko and the two get married. Also Wanjiro on her side, decides to escape
with Asinjo and the two go together to the city leaving behind the poor Njango in a
demolished homestead.
Both Juliette and Wanjiro leave their parents frustrated. Juliette on one side leaves
her parents frustrated because of the stolen money. Though they are able to pay back the
previous suitors, they remain as poor as before. Likewise, Wanjiro leaves her mother in
full frustration as she wonders where she will be this time tomorrow because her slum
is demolished by the city council and Wanjiro has eloped.
Both Juliette and Wanjiro come from poor families. Juliette on one side comes
from a poor extended family that expects to get rich through her marriage to a rich man.
They all prefer Mbia to other suitors since he is capable of making them rich. Juliette
wonders whether she is a shop or some other source of income. The same applies to
Wanjiro who comes from a poor family that earns a living by selling soup to slum
dwellers.
Both Juliette and Wanjiro represent young generation that opposes outdated
customs. Juliette refuses to conform to the wishes of her parents to marry a man they
choose for her and claims her freedom of choice, expression and decision making and
finally marries a man of her choice. Similarly, Wanjiro refuses the wishes of her mother to
abstain from Asinjo whom she loves, just because of tribalism, finally she elopes with
him.
Turning to their differences, the two characters differ in the followingways.
Juliette is educated while Wanjiro is not. Juliette studies at Libamba secondary
school and because of the education she gets she is able to defend her rights unlike other
women like Matalina, Makrita and Bella who have never gone to school that conform to
everything men say. Wanjiro on the other side, is not educated but remains at home
helping her mother with domestic chores. Only her bother attends school.
Juliette marries legally but Wanjiro elopes/escapes. Juliette plays a trick and steals
the money paid by other suitors and handles it to Oko who in turn pays the dowry. The
procedures are followed and the marriage is settled legally. They get all the blessings
from her parents. Wanjiro on the other hand leaves her home while there is no
 agreement/consensus between her and her mother thus she decides to escape with
Asinjo.
Juliette comes from an extended family while Wanjiro comes from a single parent
family. Juliette on one side belongs to an extended family in which even the marriage
decision is not a personal matter. It involves grandparents, parents, uncles, bothers,
cousins and many others. Unlike Wanjiro who lives with only her mother after her
fathers death and even her marriage is the issue between her and Njango her mother.
Juliette loves Oko for who he is, but Wanjiro loves Asinjo for what he
has. Juliette marries Oko knowing that he is poor, and cannot even afford to pay the
bride price and she helps him to get the money to pay the dowry. Wanjiro on the other
hand, marries Asinjo because now he has a job as a taxi driver and a house in Old
Jerusalem. Additionally, he promises her a better life in the city. So she hopes to get
decent clothes, high-heels shoes and a handbag that she may look modern.
Lastly, Juliette does not run away from problems but Wanjiro runs away to avoid
problems at home. Juliette comes back from school and finds problems at home
especially those facing her directly. She is forced to marry the suitors she doesnt love.
She becomes stable and solves the problems and succeeds to get what she wants. Wanjiro
on the other side, runs away as a solution to her poor situation at home, hoping to get a
better life with Asinjo in the city.
Generally, it can be concluded that different characters from different readings
may be alike or different depending on the experience they face in their societies. Most
characters in African literature behave almost the same way; however education seems to
be the main influence in the way different characters behave.

HOW TO ANSWER POETRY QUESTIONS

Poetry questions may appear in two different ways thus calling for different approaches.
1. Essay type questions
2.Short answers type questions.

ESSAY-TYPE QUESTIONS.
In this type of questions you may be asked to refer to two of four poems that you have
read in class. These questions are answered just the same way as novels and plays. The
only difference is the way we quote the poems. Remember poetry is different from other
genres among other things because of its pattering. Words in poetry may be effective
because they are arranged in a certain way. So if you quote more than one line of a
poem it is advised to write them just the same way they appear in the poem.
E.g. Do you plead incapable
To bring about development?
Also points that cut across different poems should be discussed in one paragraph citing
those poems in the same paragraph. Additionally when the points are different, reference
has to be made in each poem individually. What is important is to be sure that by the
time you are done each of the four poems has been used at least once.
 SHORT-ANSWER TYPE QUESTIONS.
These do not require an essay. More often than not, you may have the poem printed and
questions that guide you to appreciate that poem. Here do the following:
o Read the poem and understand it.
o Give the answers to the questions briefly and to the point.
o Give examples/evidences from the poem and if possible quote some verses from the
poem.
NOTE: In answering both poetry and prose questions we use simple present tense.

Like other forms of art, poems reflect social realities. They try to make us see in a new
light and by seeing we are inspired to change. Use four poems you have studied to verify
the above statement.

EXAMPLES OF ESSAY TYPE QUESTIONS IN POETRY.

A poem is a metrical composition in form of stanzas that uses imaginative language to
portray social realities. It is true that like other forms of art like plays and novels poems
also reflect social realities which make us inspired to change from bad lifestyle to a good
one. To verify the above statement references will be made to the following poems;
Lost Beauty by J. Mwaikusa, Development by K. Faraja, Building the Nation by H.
Barlow and A freedom Song by O. Macgoye. To start with Lost Beauty the poet
portrays the following social realities which might inspire us to change.
The poet shows the effects of neo-colonialism. The poet shows that most Africans
have been affected by European culture. They try as much as possible to look like white
people but in the process they lose their identity altogether. He shows that his eyes
dont see anything black but he sees white skins and masks. In a way the poet tries to
remind Africans to know who they are and be proud of their identity as he says black is
beautiful. This shows that he wants us to change the whites mentality and embrace our
African identity.
Also, the poet portrays African natural beauty. Africans were created naturally
beautiful. However, most Africans especially women have been struggling to change their
skin colour using cosmetics, curl their hair or wear wigs to look like white women to the
extent that it is hard nowadays to get a naturally beautiful African lady as he says I want
a black beauty queen. This shows that we have lost our beauty. So the poet urges us to
change this mentality and value our African natural beauty.
In the poem Development the poetess portrays the issue of selfishness. The
poetess criticizes the hypocritical behaviour of the leaders who think of themselves while
the majorities are disregarded. She shows that they are more sensitive to selfishness
(egoism) than to matters pertaining to national development. To be precise she asks
whether they are incapable to bring about development. So the poetess urges the
leaders to change their behaviour or else the majority should take actions.
Additionally, there is an issue of corruption. Corruption is an obstacle to
development. It is however sad to note that the people who are corrupt are the same
leaders that we have given the power to rule us. She shows that it is difficult for a nation
to develop when the leaders to whom we have entrusted power are corrupt. So here
 again the poet calls for actions so that we may change the system and put in power
people who are not be corrupt if we need to get development.
Coming to Building the Nation, the poet discusses about hypocrisy.Many
people in our society are hypocrites. They speak one thing and do quite the contrary. In
the poem we see the PS going to take a heavy lunch and leaves his driver. On coming
back he claims to have eaten nothing and says he had attended to matters of state. This is
Hypocrisy and it is very bad in as much as national building is concerned. Thats why he
says they were building the nation different ways. So the poet calls for the masses to
take actions against hypocritical leaders.
Moreover, the poet shows the issue of classes. Classes are inevitable in any society
however there should be no class that exploits the other. The poet shows that there are
two classes in this society. High class represented by the PS who misuses the public funds
by feasting and lower class who work on empty stomachs. So the poet is calling for the
change in which the national resources will benefit not only the ruling class but also the
masses or else the lower class may one day stage a revolution.
And in the poem A freedom Song the poetess shows the issue of exploitation.
The poem shows that the young girl Atieno works for her uncle as a house help but she is
not paid. The uncle gives a lame excuse that since she is my sisters child that why she
needs no pay. This is a high level of exploitation. Today there are a lot of people
who live with their relatives children but they make them work all day long yet without
pay. The poetess calls for change as this is a very bad habit.
Lastly, the poet discusses the issue of early pregnancy among children. This is a
common problem today. The young girl Atieno gets early pregnancy and dies during
delivery because of lacking proper guidance and care from parents who are busy with
work and studies. Many young girls now get engaged in premarital sex which leads them
to get early pregnancies and as a result some drop out of school or die during delivery or
contact HIV. The poetess is calling for parents to change this behavior and take good
care of their children.
In summary, it can be seen that poems do not develop in a vacuum. They address
issues found in our societies and provide the way forward. If we need to achieve
sustainable development and live harmoniously we must discourage and fight against the
evils discussed in poems that are still prevalent in our societies.

By using specific relevant examples, from your experience describe the unique
features/characteristics that distinguish poetry from other genre.
There is pleasure and enjoyment in reading poetry which makes it different from prose
genre of literature. How do you differentiate poetry from prose?

Poetry is a work of art that uses creative and imaginative language which arouses
emotions to portray social realities to the intended audience. Poetry as a literally genre
differs from other genres in many ways. This essay disuses some of the features that
differentiate poetry from other literary genres like; plays, novels or short stories.
 Poetry is arranged in form of verses and stanzas. Unlike prose which is arranged in
long sentences, paragraphs, and chapters, in form of a book, poetry is represented in the
form of verses which are grouped together to form stanzas. Example the following is a
stanza with three verses.
Your pain
Yet more my pain
Shall suffocate oppression.
Poetry employs language economy. Unlike prose which uses long sentences that
form paragraphs, chapters and a whole book, poetry on the other hand employs
language economy. This is to say words are carefully chosen so that very few words
present much information. For example in a short poem like Building the nation we
can establish themes like; classes, hypocrisy, marginalization, misuse of public resources,
poverty etc
Poetry is rich in figures of speech and sound devices. Unlike prose poetry makes
frequent use of figures of speech such as hyperbole, personification, simile, metaphors
and other but additionally poetry has sound devices like, alliteration, assonance,
consonance, rhymes, refrain, anadiplosis etc. for example Alliteration
Highly delicate diplomatic duties in Building the Nation or a Refrain Atieno yo in
A Freedom Song.
Poetry employs poetic license. Unlike, prose which mostly follows standard rules
like punctuation, sentence structure etc. Poetry has the freedom/permission to
break/violate certain grammatical rules to achieve a poetic effect. Look at the following
verses, Forward they go instead of They go forward in Sunrise, I too am
America instead of I am an American too in I too sing America, away they go
instead of they go away in When I Say I Love You
Poetry is rhythmical. Unlike prose which does not involve rhythm, poetry is
arranged in form of regular beats that make it possible to be sung. There are regular
beats that fall on stressed and unstressed syllables that make the poem ease to be sung.
In poetry the character is the persona and rarely bears a name. Unlike prose which
has many characters with names performing different roles, poetry hardly has characters
with names. With exception of few narrative poems like A freedom song most
personas in many poems are named after their jobs or the class they belong. Example, in
Building the nation the persona is the driver. He is named after his job.
Poetry is meant to be sung or recited. Unlike novels which are meant to be read,
and plays which are meant to be performed, poetry is meant to be sung or recited.
Poems are patterned in a way that they can be sung or recited thats why they have
sound devices like rhymes, alliteration, consonance, assonance, reiteration, and refrain
which bring about music and add effect to the poem.
Poetry uses imaginative language. Poetry employs imagery and symbolism that
makes the reader to dig deeper to uncover the underlying meaning. Poetry is not to be
taken at face value because some poems contain two layers of meaning. Some words
carry an extra meaning in poetry apart from their literal meaning. Consider for instance
words like little bird, and honey bee, in Mwaikusas When I say I Love you they
might be representing girls/women also he used imagery like sweetness (image of
 taste), soft soil, standing hard (image of touch), hasty ploughs/climbing your tree, images
of motion, and as I sing an image of sound. All these make the poem enjoyable.
Poetry arouses emotions and feelings. Unlike prose, poetry appeals to the five
senses of touch, smell, taste, sight, and sound. The poem can move someones emotions
and they cry or laugh. It can make you annoyed, angry, sad, embarrassed, sympathetic
or amused, excited, and happy. For example the poem If we Must Die C. McKay and
Your Pain by A Guebuza arouses the feeling of hatred against the white people.
Poetry has the first letter of each line capitalized (In Most poems). unlike prose in
which capitalization occurs only at the beginning of a new sentence or proper nouns, in
most poems the first letter of each line is capitalized. This happens even when the
sentence is still in progress. Look at the following stanza from Okots The graceful
giraffe cannot become a monkey
Listen,
Ostrich plumes differ
From chicken feathers,
A monkeys tail
Is different from that of a giraffe
As a way of conclusion however it should be noted that the different features
discussed above are not necessarily to be found in every poem. Some poems contain
some features and lack others. But there are some features which are found in almost
every poem.

AN EXAMPLE OF SHORT TYPE QUESTION.

Behold!
The sun has arisen,
And with it the sons of the land have arisen too
Forward they go,
Well armed,
Singing praises to the beauty of the sunrise,
With the determination of long-term warriors,
Challenging the enemy
With the courage of a free mind
And the vigour of a clear purpose.
Sit and wait brethren,
Wait and see what glory they bring at sunset;
How they pay homage to the land -
And their people!

Questions (NECTA 2011)

(a) What is the poem about?
The poem is about the sons of the land who have risen up singing the beauty of the
sunrise. They challenge the enemy waiting for victory at sunset. Which is to say, they
 have started up a struggle for redemption of their land and hope to bring victory at the
end of the struggle.
(b) For whom does the poem tell us that the sun has risen?
The sun has risen for the sons of the land which symbolically means the oppressed ones;
the peasants, workers, or the proletariat class.
(c) What does the word sunrise symbolize?
The word sunrise symbolises the beginning of the struggle just as it signifies the
beginning of the day.
(d) What type of poem is this?
This is a sonnet because it is made up of fourteen verses.
(e) Comment on the structure of this poem.
It is a free-verse poem with no rhyming pattern
There is variation in the length of verses; some are very short and some very long.
Also the poet has employed poetic licence when he says Forward they go which is not
a normal English structure of SVA. They go forward
(f) The poem contains two major images. Mention them
1. Sunrise this symbolises the beginning of the struggle (or the war of liberation).
2. Sunset this symbolises the end of the struggle.
(g) The poet talks about challenging the enemy who do you think the enemy might be?
The enemy might be the colonialists who oppress, humiliate, and exploit the Africans.
(h) What do we learn from this poem?
Struggle for freedom is not a simple thing it needs determination.
Unity is very important in any struggle. (the sons have risen with unity)
(i) Suggest 3 themes from the poem
a. Armed struggle for freedom.
Wait and see what glory they bring at sunset.
How they pay homage to the land
And their people
b. Unity.
In the poem the sons of the land rose in unity, marched forward with determination.
c. Sacrifice and determination.
Any armed struggle needs both courage and sacrifice.
With the determination of long-term warriors
Challenging the enemy
With the courage of free mind
d. Awareness.
The sons of the land are very aware of their enemy, they are aware of the means to fight
against the enemy (armed struggle) and they have a clear purpose. They have the reasons
to fight against the enemy.
With the courage of free mind
And the vigour of a clear purpose
(j) Suggest the title of the poem
The title of the poem could be SUNRISE