Mahmoud Syllabus Spring 2018
Mahmoud Syllabus Spring 2018
“Fiction is one of the few experiences where loneliness can be both confronted and relieved. Drugs,
movies where stuff blows up, loud parties — all these chase away loneliness by making me forget my
name’s Dave and I live in a one-by-one box of bone no other party can penetrate or know. Fiction,
poetry, music, really deep serious sex, and, in various ways, religion — these are the places where
loneliness is countenanced, stared down, transfigured, treated.”- David Foster Wallace
This course is meant to spark your literary interests, talents, and inclinations, so that you can
walk away with a clearer image of who you are – or rather, who you might be – as a writer. This
applies to everyone, from those who might have never written before, to those who are fairly
decided on their preffered forms of writing, and everyone in between. You will read a fair
amount of short stories and poems, and then write your own. You will critique the works of your
classmates, and help one another on this path of self-discovery and skill improvement. And if
you enjoy the crafts of fiction and poetry, rest assured: you will have a great time.
Class Structure:
We will workshop on Tuesdays. For fiction workshops, we will discuss three works of
fiction. For poetry workshops, we will discuss five poems.
On Thursdays we will work on craft. This will involve discussing readings, talking stories,
poems, and all sorts of other narrative forms. We will watch videos of interviews and readings. It
will be a cool and relaxed discussion that you will enjoy, so long as you’re interested.
Course Structure and Grading:
Workshops – 40%
- Submissions (20%) :
You are required to submit one short story, onepoems throughout the semester, to
be workshopped in class. You will email this work to the class a week before you are to be
workshopped. (For example: if you are to be workshopped on Tuesday, the 28th. You
must email the class on Thursday, the 23rd, by 11:59 PM.)
Short stories should be 4-6 pages long.
- Critique (20%) :
You are required to print the work of your classmate, read it, annonate it (as will be
shown to you during the first class), and write them a brief response letter, of two to three
paragraphs. A sample of this will also be shown to you. A copy of this letter must be
emailed to me before every workshop.
Craft – 30%
- Reading Responses (10%) :
On Thursdays you are required to submit a one page (times new roman, 12pt,
double-spaced, one inch margined) response to the reading assigned for that class. Do
not use the first third of the page with date, professor name, title, and so on. Just write,
and then use a pen to put your name and date after printing. This shouldn’t take more
than half an hour of your time. It is not an essay, it a response. Every Thursday I will
expect at least one student to read out their response in class.
- Final Essay (20%) :
This assignment is going to force you to think and write about a novel as a writer.
Below you will find a list of more than ten novels. You get to choose any one of them
you’re interested in, and write a 5-8 page essay following a prompt I’ll assign you once
you’ve selected the novel.
Participation and Attendance – 30%.
- In terms of discussion in class, some of you will be able to engage more than others. It’s
just how we’re built as human beings. If you’re relatively shy, I will not give you a hard
time, so long as I can see that you care and that you’re trying your best to speak up and
step out of your comfort zone. If, on the other hand, you simply don’t care, this will affect
your participation grade heavily. I will be able to tell the difference.
- You are allowed two absences throughout the semester, reserved in cases of illness,
emergencies, and religious holidays. Every additional absence will result in your grade
being lowered one degree (from B+ to B), unless you provide proof of a serious
emergency and an email from your academic advisor.
Please note: For all of the above, you will be graded on effort, not quality. If you do the work,
attend class, participate, and care, you can expect an A, regardless of how talented you are as a
writer and reader. Please know that I will notice when a response has been written half an hour
before class, about a work that was not read, with the help of Sparknotes and redundance. In
terms of quality I only expect improvement throughout the semester.
Policies:
- Timeliness: Please respect your classmates and be on time. If you are more than fifteen
minutes late to class, you will be considered absent. And if you are in a habit of arriving
late quite frequently, it will add up to an absence.
- Format: All submitted work, except for poems, must be size 12 font, with one inch
margins.
- Technology: Because our class will revolve around conversation, it is detrimental to have
laptops open in front of us while we talk to one another. No laptops allowed.
- Late Submissions: I will not accept any late reading responses. For this reason, I will
allow three missed responses throughout the semester. As for the final essay, every day
that it is late, will result in a lowering of your grade by one degree (B+ to B).
- Sensitivity: Workshops are an environment in which allow ourselves to be vulnerable.
We all have the right to artistic freedom and honest opinion. We must, however, be
sensitive to the vulnerability, comfort, and safety of our classmates. There is a fine line
between constructive criticism and attack – one that will be enforced when needed.
- Plagiarism: Please don’t do it. This will get you in deep trouble with the university.
- Food: You can eat and drink anything that will not cause a distracting smell or sound.
- Office hours: I will ask that you come meet me twice. Once in the middle of the
semester, to discuss your novel selection for the final essay, and once towards the end, to
discuss your portfolio. You can come meet me any additional times you’d like, as well.
- Missing your own workshop: It is disrespectful to have your classmates read and critique
your work, and not show up for your workshop. Don’t do it.
Final Portfolio: Along with your final essay, you are to submit one rewrite of a poem, and a
rewrite of your story, with the help of the critique you received in class. Rewriting/editing is
arguably the most important skill a writer must have. If you don’t know what this means, don’t
worry, it will be explained in class.
Tentative Schedule:
Tuesday, February 27th: Students 10, 11, 12, and 13 Poetry Workshop
Thursday, March 1st: Morgan Parker and Danez Smith
Spring Break
Tuesday, May 8th: Submission of Final Essay and Portfolio, by 5 PM at Lillion Vernon
Creative Writing House.