The document discusses the key traits of well-written texts, including ideas, organization, language use and word choice, sentence fluency, voice, and mechanics. It provides examples of issues to avoid in sentence construction such as sentence fragments, run-on sentences, misplaced modifiers, dangling modifiers, faulty parallelism, and sentence sprawl. The document also lists 10 rules to observe in academic writing such as using clear language and structure, avoiding contractions and excessive punctuation, and maintaining a consistent tone and point of view.
The document discusses the key traits of well-written texts, including ideas, organization, language use and word choice, sentence fluency, voice, and mechanics. It provides examples of issues to avoid in sentence construction such as sentence fragments, run-on sentences, misplaced modifiers, dangling modifiers, faulty parallelism, and sentence sprawl. The document also lists 10 rules to observe in academic writing such as using clear language and structure, avoiding contractions and excessive punctuation, and maintaining a consistent tone and point of view.
• • Based on what you have known in your previous writing or grammar lessons, does the following paragraph qualify for a well-written text?
Why? Justify your answer.
I will not allow my child Brian, to play violent video games. Why? It’s because violent video games could make my child more aggressive. And if he will be continuously exposed to this kind of games, he might also imitate what he sees. And I don’t want that to happen. There’s a tendency that my child would hate other people for no reason at all. Oh my gosh! I just realized that he might not have friends and he might be bullied in school because of this! What if Brian never marries in the future because he is so anti-social? I might not have grandkids if that happens! What a truly frightening thought! Therefore, we must say “No” to our kids playing violent video games! THE FUTURE IS NOW IN OUR HANDS. What are the considerations in writing a text?
What are the properties
of a well-written text? THE 6 TRAITS OF WRITING Please watch the video https://www.youtube.com/wat ch?v=oAp5w-ZKeXk&t=11s 1. Ideas developed when there is a clear statement of purpose, position, facts, examples, specific details, definitions, explanation, justifications, or opposing viewpoints. 2. Organization achieved when ideas are logically and accurately arranged When ideas are organized well, a text can achieve the following: Unity – achieved when a composition contains one focused idea Coherence – occurs when ideas are connected at the conceptual level Cohesion – connection of ideas at sentence level Language Use & Word Choice appropriateness of word / vocabulary usage Language Use & Word Choice *Use clear and concise sentences. Use precise vocabulary *Avoid redundancies, wordiness, clichés, and highfalutin language. *Avoid excessive use of there and it structures. *Be consistent with pronouns *Avoid sexist language. Sentence Fluency achieved through appropriate sentence structure, correct subject-verb agreement and varying sentence starters Common Issues in Sentence Fluency Sentence Fragment - fails to be a sentence in the sense that it cannot stand by itself. It does not contain even one independent clause. Sentence Fragment
In Japan, during the last
war and just before the armistice. Common Issues in Sentence Fluency Run-on Sentence has at least two parts, either one of which can stand by itself (in other words, two independent clauses), but the two parts have been smooshed together instead of being properly connected. Run-on Sentence
This computer doesn't
make sense to me, it came without a manual. Common Issues in Sentence Fluency Misplaced Modifiers - a word, phrase, or clause that is improperly separated from the word it describes Misplaced Modifiers
The dealer sold the car to
the buyer with leather seats. Common Issues in Sentence Fluency Dangling Modifiers - a phrase or clause that is not clearly and logically related to the word or words it modifies (i.e. is placed next to). Dangling Modifiers Many tourists visit Arlington National Cemetery, where veterans and military personnel are buried every day from 9:00 a.m. until 5:00 p.m. Dangling Modifiers When writing a proposal, an original task is set for research. Common Issues in Sentence Fluency Faulty Parallelism - a construction in which two or more parts of a sentence are roughly equivalent in meaning but not parallel (or grammatically similar) in form. Faulty Parallelism The candidate's goals include winning the election, a national health program, and the educational system. Sentence Sprawl The hearing, which had been planned for Monday, December 2, was rescheduled for the following Friday so that all witnesses would be able to attend. Voice
distinct personality, style, or point of
view of a piece of writing or any other creative work Mechanics set of conventions on how to spell, abbreviate, punctuate, and capitalize Mechanics Avoid contractions and exclamation points (unless part of a direct quotation) Mention the full name before the abbreviation. Numbers from 0-10 must be spelled out. Rules to Observe in Academic Writing 1. Always use standard English. Use the appropriate level of formality. 2. Use clear and concise sentences and precise vocabulary. 3. Avoid exclamation marks unless they are part of a direct quotation. 4. Mention the full name of an organization or institution in first mention. 5. Numbers zero to ten should be spelled out. 6. Avoid contractions. 7. Avoid redundancies, wordiness, cliches, and high falutin language. 8. Avoid excessive use of “there” and “it” structures. 9. Be consistent with your pronoun’s point of view. 10. Avoid sexist language.