ENGL108P Class Notes
ENGL108P Class Notes
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Gilderoy Lockhart 19
Dobby 19
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Thoughts? 32
Harry's Vulnerability 33
Cedric Diggory 33
Portkey plan 34
Sexual awakening 34
SPEW 34
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Voldemort 48
Metatextuality 48
Epic Hero 49
Glossary 55
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Introduction – 01 May 2018
● Religious concerns
● Failing YA market
● Childish (juvenilia)
○ things that we are lacking in our world can be got through simulation
○ Requires high attention span (e.g: LOTR, Chronicles of Narnia after wardrobe)
○ More relatable
○ Multiple goals
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○ Avatar character (can do exposition)
○ Perspective
○ Prose
○ Imagery
○ Relatable
Mythopoesis
● Iceberg theory: mentions of mythology (e.g.: war which led to HP being orphaned, Grindelwald &
● Simulation of mythology
○ Joseph Campbell: We don’t actually have myths anymore, except in hindsight, thus
mythopoesis is useful
Imaginative satisfaction
● Can be thought of as wish fulfillment, specifically towards something you don’t already have
○ Exclusivity/specialness
○ Magic
○ Stability
○ Friendship
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○ Heroism
Balance
● Humility
● Child: vulnerable
● Brutality/responsibility (constantly)
● Average
● Underdog
● Anthropomorphism (“human” + “change”, giving human attributes to something that isn’t human)
● Messiah complex (belief that you are secretly the Savior/God/spiritual something)
● Empowered children
Subgenres of fantasy
1. Intrusion fantasy
○ Eg: how do I get this ghost outside of my life, how do the Dursleys keep their quiet normal life
2. Portal fantasy
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○ Elaborate fantasy descriptions
○ Continual new imagings -> travel literature (look at this cool thing)
○ Like CS Lewis’ Narnia, however Narnia is a separate world, while HP has the magic world
hidden
a. Castle (medievalist)
■ The “school days genre”: British genre of literature set in boarding schools
d. Place of transformation
■ To magic
■ To adulthood
c. Hogwarts represents a safe space, intrude upon it; Voldemort intrudes or gets Harry out
d. Characters fight to preserve it, literally (Battle of Hogwarts), figuratively (against Umbridge)
● A boy raised by the most normal family learns about his extraordinary abilities and luck.
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● “In a magical world, a young boy wizard’s coming-of-age quest with his friends to defeat the dark
● “A young protagonist, not only battles the evils of a magic world, but discovers the good and bad in
himself and the greater world, through escapades with his friends”
Background
○ Invocatio: invocation of the muse (author’s story comes to them ‘fully-formed’ in a dream)
Thoughts?
● Intricate foreshadowing
● Classics background
○ Theory that books are targeted at the age of Harry, however inconsistent jumps (e.g. 4 to 5)
● Exposition
● Integrated magic
Narrative burden
● Establish setting
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○ Avatar character is uninitiated
○ Guides
○ Setting is delightful
○ Pace of reveal
Prose
○ Alliteration
○ Hyperbole
○ Visual imagery
● Builds to a climax
● Historial lore
● Showing vs telling
● Attention on Harry
● Free agency
● Emotionally charged
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● In Harry’s head
Structural components
● Must have a complete story in the first book, and extend the story in a sequel
● Final sentences emphasize the end of the school year, friendships and their social support, his
Narrative Structure
As identified by Plato, most stories that humans tell obey a basic 3-act structure:
1. Setup: introduces the setting, characters, themes, tone, and circumstances that will lead to the
conflict.
2. Conflict: the bigger piece. Explores the obstacles at hand, and how those obstacles are approached
3. Resolution: addresses and resolves the primary conflict, usually followed by a return to a new status
quo.
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The Monomyth
● Joseph Campbell outlined it in an essay called “Hero with a Thousand Faces” in 1949.
A hero ventures forth from the world of common day into a region of supernatural wonder: fabulous forces are there
encountered and a decisive victory is won: the hero comes back from this mysterious adventure with the power to
● Campbell wasn’t creating a template, but identifying one that seems to occur naturally in human
storytelling. However, by charting the monomyth, he created a template that writers have been
○ Note we can apply this map to either individual HP texts or to the overarching series as a
whole.
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Superimposed
● Note that the monomyth and the 3 act structure actually work perfectly well together.
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● A direct superimposition of a simplified monomyth onto the 3 act structure.
Conclusion
● Concurrently, the structure of Harry Potter is based upon what is believed to be a natural, intuitive
● Finally, as long as we’re being fair, we have to note the monomyth can be regarded as somewhat lazy
for a storytelling structure, and this is indeed something that Rowling has been criticized for – her
story structure is not ground-breaking or novel or unique. There’s a trade-off that we have to keep in
mind.
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Genre - Background
○ Comedy:
○ Priming (response)
○ Caters to mood
○ Intertextuality
○ Expectation can create shorthand storytelling (e.g. Rowling using existing creatures from the
● Anne Miller: Genre criticism tends to put critical value on things critical to the genre. Thus, genre
○ Context
○ Conventions of form: packaging (e.g. action movies have fast-paced shaky-cammed action
scenes)
○ Exemplarity
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○ Have symbols
Genre in HP
● 3 big ones
○ School story
■ Popularized the sport of Rugby, invented at the homonymous school => analogous to
Quidditch in HP
● Mucks around with school days genre by adding Voldemort prior to exams
(supposed to be relief)
■ Direct instructor who inspires protagonist to follow their dreams (e.g. Lupin, Moody,
Dumbledore)
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● Exemplifies the “path not taken” => Draco is evil Harry (until book 6 HBP)
■ Competing school
■ Coming-of-age story
■ Protagonist, usually young, faces challenges discovering their true place within the
world
■ Trivia: Kunstlerroman is similar, but about an artist finding place within art world
○ Witch or wizards
○ Sub-urban fantasy
● Forgivably unintelligent
● Naivety
Background
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● Challenge of establishing as a series
Narrative Structure
● Book ages
● Corresponds to Aristotle’s theory for creating fear: erosion of things that bring you comfort so as to
create vulnerability
○ Father-figures (Lockhart)
● Harry killing the Basilisk is classic epic hero, chosen warrior, slaying the dragon with a sword brought
○ Humanize Harry
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○ Harry asserts moral authority
○ Wraps up social element (history and mystery elements are resolved with the basilisk)
Gilderoy Lockhart
● Father-figure
● Harry looking for male role models, Lockhart looking to be Harry’s role model
● Colin Creevey
● Fridging = throwing a female character under the bus to motivate a male character
Dobby
● Harry’s fame inspires Dobby to try and lead a revolution (highlights good aspect of the consequences
of fame)
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The Mystery Structure – May 24
History
● Mystery fiction -> crime fiction -> detective fiction (cozy, hard-boiled, procedural)
● Sherlock Holmes first appears in 1887, Arthur Conan Doyle's A Study in Scarlet
○ About being impressed with Holmes rather than figuring it out along with the detective
(whodunits)
● Crime in cozy fiction (“ripples in a pond”) vs crime in hard-boiled detective fiction (gritty realism,
6. If applicable, the detective’s sidekick must not conceal any thoughts from the reader
7. Twins must not be part of the solution to the mystery unless the reader has been made aware of
them
Conventions
● Clue-puzzle
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○ Chekhov's Gun: if a gun is introduced in the first act of a play, it must be used by act 5
○ “Hagrid help up the limp roster. ‘Second one killed this term’, he explained.”
● Red herrings
● Bumbling authorities
● Silencing of witnesses
○ Petrification
● Summation
○ “'I can show you, if you like,’ came Riddle's reply…’ I can take you inside my memory of the
○ “It was as though somebody had just flicked a light on in his brain.”
○ Chamber of Secrets
○ Hogwarts
● Isolated detective
○ Harry
In HP
● Hard-boiled
○ Isolated
■ Muggle world
■ Absent friends
■ These people are a source of information (homeless people in Holmes, Dobby, Ron, &
Hermione in HP)
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○ Criminal/detective
● Young sleuth
● Gentleman detective
○ Wealth
○ Access to elites
○ Slughorn, Lockhart
○ “Because that’s what Hermione does,’ said Ron, shrugging. ‘When in doubt, go to the library’”
● Self-directed study
○ "‘Hogwarts’ learning culture… favors the annihilation of direct instruction in preference for
● Placement of the body (Mrs. Norris, Colin, Justin, Hermione, and Penelope)
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Conclusion
○ Bildungsroman
○ Horror
○ History
● Detective genre is transgressive; similarly, HP is about finding the line between conformity and
Become your haters: why is it wrong/good for you to take a university course on Harry Potter?
● Juvenile
● Practicality
● Filler
● Popularity
Origins of YA
● Demo
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○ Teenager
● E.g.: The Hobbit (Tolkien), Huck Finn (Twain), Tom Brown's Schooldays
● 1990s: collapse of YA
● HP saves YA
YA market prior to HP
● Hyper-realism
○ Tough-sell?
○ Media effects us
○ Isolation is problematic
○ Children's intelligence
○ Safe space
○ Question of rhetoric
YA & HP
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● HP was
○ Novel
○ Supernatural
○ Parental comfort
○ Down to earth
● Top critic Anthony Holden freaked out when HP was nominated for a British literary award, facing off
○ Parker – YA is too young to be taken seriously, classical literature is often used because it is
○ Open text theory: semiotic constructivist theory that each individual reader is active in
creating a work
○ YAs don’t want to be YAs (want to be treated like adults), at least in 90s
○ YA texts have to empower their readers to make them feel like adults but simultaneously
■ Adult incompetence
■ Specialness
■ Perspective
● Mental illness
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● Depression = laziness
● Medication = failure
● Pressure to medicate
● Character flaw
● Uncomfortable subject
● Hard to discuss
● Attention-seeking thing
● Sadness
● Insufficient understanding
Background
● 68,000 sales in 3 days, the fastest selling book in British history at the time
● Released first in Britain, then elsewhere; later books are released simultaneously
Context
● Voldemort absent, though get his character through followers and exposition
Thoughts?
● Backstory is complicated
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● Time-turner
● Ministry as villain
● Azkaban
● Class structure
● Diverse obstacles
Adult forces
○ Realism
○ Complexity
● Backstory (Voldemort)
○ Cycle/legacy
● Still limited
● Global problem
● In book 2, Harry has perceived flaws but ends up being an epic hero (dragon slayer, freer of slaves)
○ Hermione and Ron staging an intervention about Harry's intent on revenge (killing Sirius)
● Werewolves
The Dementors
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● Allegorical representation of depression
● Vivid imagery
● Chocolate helps
● Comes in waves
Father-figures
○ Harry’s rapid relationship evolution: want to kill, want to live with him forever, can’t
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Institutional failures
● Azkaban fails
○ Employs Dementors
○ Utilizes torture
Other
● Value of mischief
AC: Our obsession with character typology? (e.g. Buzzfeed quizzes, Myers-Briggs)
● Assumed identification
● Categorizing
● Understanding self
● Genres–of people
● Identification of similarity
○ http://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/Main/FourTemperamentEnsemble
Protagonist
● Identification figure
● Central focus
● Agency
● Opposes antagonist
● Harry
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○ Most choices go through Harry
○ But, is often enacting advice or guidance of others, often father-figures; but also, Hermione
○ Identification with him is limited in that his character is often underdeveloped and not always
Viewpoint character
Gestalt protagonist
● “An organized whole which is perceived as more than the sum of its parts”
○ More relatable
● Characters are ideally human, but humans are defined by a hidden existence
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● Sense of depth of complexity vs. how transparent they seem
● Hermione leans more towards complex/inscrutable side, has depth and is more unpredictable
● Flat characters serve the plot, can be expressed by a single sentence, are 2-dimensional
● Round characters cannot be easily defined, are constantly changing, are 3-dimensional
● E.g. Draco starts out flat (“I hate that Harry Potter” then later becomes round)
● Need both; flat ones serve to move the plot and are stable and static; round characters are more
engaging
Character Arc
● Pioneered by Shakespeare
○ Ego by book 4
○ Sense of responsibility, duty, and a deeper appreciation for those around him by book 7
Character beats
● Feeling results in action on part of the plot; the feeling is the character beat
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● E.g. Ron is feeling insecure about his poor performance in class
○ Ron says something mean about Hermione; Hermione hears, gets upset and cries
AC: Young love: ultimate romance or adorable delusion in Romeo & Juliet?
2. The love between these two idiots doesn't make their lusty relationship less romantic
Background
● Soccer = Quidditch
Thoughts?
● Non-gryffindor characters
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● Competition
● Vulnerability
● Pensieve
● Darkness
● Voldemort/Harry codependency
● Dumbledore's plan
Harry's Vulnerability
○ Opposite of empowerment
● Why?
○ Perspective
○ Universal
Cedric Diggory
○ Lost potential
○ Brutality of child-murder
○ Canary in a coal mine / plot armor (feeling that a character can't be harmed b/c they're too
important)
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○ Useful for creation of Dumbledore's Army
Portkey plan
● Ages Harry
Sexual awakening
■ Moderate in gender
○ Viktor Krum and Fleur Delacour are from different schools, countries, and older
■ Hyper-gendered
● Harry vs. Cedric takes place on two fronts (stereotypical athletic and romantic rivalry)
SPEW
○ Hermione is diminished
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AC: Not counting writing the books in any way, what makes J.K. Rowling a good author?
● Philanthropic
● Reader-response theory
● Open text (“The dog is a late warm shade of lipstick glistening in the November sun”) vs. closed text
J.K. Rowling
● http://www.thisisinsider.com/jk-rowling-harry-potter-author-biography-2017-7
● Hermione = Rowling
● Mother died of MS 6 months after starting to write: informed sense of tragedy for Harry
● Moved to Portugal for 3 years, married a journalist, had a child, divorced, returned
● Clinical depression
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● HP first released in 1995, got an agent
Religious upbringing
● Books top list of most banned books, often for being too religious
● Value of humility
Transmediation
● Transmedia studies refers to the how intellectual property operates across multiple media platforms
■ Core element of the story, not narrative wise, but in terms of what it represents
■ What is it about?
● Transmedia storytelling
○ E.g. Pottermore
Potter films
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● Steve Kloves wrote all screenplays except for OP
○ A lot of data
○ Solid casting
○ Pretty much non existent in HP, except perhaps Fudge as Neville Chamberlain, Quidditch as
Rugby until GF
● Text can be wholly symbolic or have a symbolic layer or be purely literal (no metaphors, no symbols)
Identifying symbolism
● Repeated imagery
● Conflict with reality (e.g. Joker breaking own neck in The Dark Knight)
● Convenient parallel
● Spidey sense
Value of symbolism
● Mnemonic
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● Puzzle-solving = gamification
● Relatable
Father-Figures
○ Kills Harry
Lack of mother-figures
● McGonagall
● Molly
● Lily as sacred
● Autobiographical?
Other symbols
● Eyes
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● Harry’s scar
○ Lightning = ominous
○ Power
○ Weaker
○ Becomes Harry
○ Anti-Pettigrew
● Forbidden forest
○ Id
○ Death
○ Stone
○ Hagrid
○ Purgatory
Background
● Half-point inversion
● Delay of anticipation
Major points
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● Moving away from Hogwarts
● Fudge is in denial
○ Very much based on Neville Chamberlain, and his appeasement policies towards Hitler
○ Delusion based on insecurity: he feels threatened by Dumbledore (much more powerful, and
● Institutional corruption
○ Denial
○ Infiltration
○ Disappearances
○ Dementors
○ Thestrals
○ Voldemort
○ Fudge’s denial is really personal but really illogical in face of the evidence
○ Cultural denial
○ Undermining adults
○ New villain
○ Aggrandizes Voldemort
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○ Casts Harry as a prophet, this provides some value to his trauma (his pain is a form of truth =>
noble)
○ Curse of Cassandra
● Slow pacing
PTSD
● Lookup in DSM 5
Thestrals
● Grim perception
● Disconnection
● Self-doubt
○ Could cause his to doubt his correct view about Voldemort’s return
● Unlucky
Luna Lovegood
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○ An old feeling rose in Harry…****
○ Harry is in a new state of being, being able to live with rather than getting rid of
■ Coping mechanism
Dolores Umbridge
● Relatable villain
● Bureaucracy
● Undermining hero
● Happy monster
● Weaponized passive-aggression
● Bitch archetype
○ Wicked stepmother
● Anti-Dumbledore
● Privileged
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● Contrasts McGonagall
● Self-motivated
● Racist
● Sanitary violence
Death of Sirius
● Why?
● Important
● Doubles-down on an imbalance
● Natural
● Perspective
Background
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● Critics divided; found change of tone jarring
● Character-driven text
Draco Malfoy
● Feels remorse
○ Feelings
○ Motivation
○ Dumbledore atones
○ Lack of friendships
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○ Inheritance
○ More Harry-like
○ Victimization
○ Killing Dumbledore
■ Physical reactions
○ Why?
■ Reflects maturation
■ Escalates stakes
Slughorn
○ Slytherin
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■ Sees Voldemort do the same unethical thing in the memory he gets from Slughorn
○ Shades of grey
○ Status theme
● Poser-prof
○ Undermines education
Death of Dumbledore
● Monomyth
■ Dumbledore’s death frees Harry from the paralysis curse => symbolic
○ Apostasis
Half-blood Prince
● Snape is a wonderful teacher (possibly father figure) to Harry through the textbook
● Anxious
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● Life as contrast
https://www.salon.com/2018/02/26/harry-potter-and-the-surprisingly-poignant-literary-theme_partner/
Theme
● Disagreement about whether the author has to have intended the theme
major theme
● Escalates in each text, death is getting closer to Harry as he ages (so does the reader)
○ Quirrell
○ Diggory
○ Sirius
○ Dumbledore
○ Harry
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● Ends the conflict
Details
○ Immortality artifact
● Horcruxes
Voldemort
● Voldemort symbolizes our own fear of death and our desire to overcome it
Metatextuality
● Self-referentiality
● Meta means extending beyond the text itself in order to comment upon processes of creation or
reception
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● Umberto Eco
○ Final consumption: we don’t like characters to age because they remind us of our own
mortality
Epic Hero
● Progress
● Pay-off - consistency
● No dismissive ending
○ Journey vs ending
Background
● July 2007
● 11 million copies
● No advanced reviews
Thoughts?
● Atypical setting
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● Dark & creepy magic
● Deathly Hallows
● Lots of killing
● Romance is resolved
● Elder Wand
The Dead
Snape
● Needs redemption
● Him or draco
● Plot armour
● Closure
Hedwig
● Innocence
● Tone-setter
● Symbol of communication
● No quarter sparred
● Practicality
Dobby
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● OP
● Fridging
● HP vulnerability
Fred
● James/Sirius cycle
Lupin
● Connection to the past lost (symbolic of how the future is what matters most)
Harry
● Jesus metaphor
● Explores options
Salvation
● Harry’s non-violence
● Chooses Dumbledore
● Makes it personal
● Maybe manipulative
● Infantilizes Voldemort
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Plot
● Structure is a fetch-quest
Is Snape redeemed?
● Demonstrates courage
● Is an incel
● Epilogue setting
● Dumbledore is controlling
● Choice
● Repetition
● Left ambiguous
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Participation
● Henry Jenkins
○ Governs convergence
● Consume media
○ Role-playing
● Mimesis
○ Kress: feel the meaning by imitating gestures (e.g. wand gestures in HP video games)
Dangers
● Consistency
● Framing = headcanon
Pottermore
● 2015 Rowling-only
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AC: What is Harry Potter’s legacy in Western Culture?
● generation of readers
● Recontextualized magic
● Sales records
● Female author
● role-models
○ “Non-financial social assets which promote social mobility beyond economic means”
○ Harry Potter has this => can discuss; almost required to be in touch with modern culture
● Jenkins
○ Hermione overshadowed
○ Male exclusivity
○ Biased
○ Aggressive narrating
○ Recontextualizing Harry
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■ Epic Hero
○ Wordplay
○ Subversive sexuality
■ Men in the novel are the only ones after the biggest wand (Elder wand)
● My Immortal
○ Pastiche
○ Online dialect
○ Contemporary
○ Tropey
○ Teenager
○ Metatextual
Glossary
● PS or SS: Harry Potter and the Philosopher's Stone (British version), or Harry Potter and the
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● OOTP, OTP, OP: Harry Potter and the Order of the Phoenix- 5th book
● FB or FBAWTFT: Fantastic Beasts and Where to Find Them- textbook derived from the HP books
● QTA or QTTA: Quidditch Through the Ages- textbook derived from the HP books
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