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The Philippines is planning to purchase its first two modern warships from the Italian Navy next year. The warships will be equipped with surface-to-air and surface-to-surface missiles, and will have capabilities for anti-submarine warfare. The missile frigates, which cost $11.7 billion, will be more lethal than ships currently used by the Philippine military. The Italian Navy is retiring the Maestrale-class frigates in January, allowing the Philippines to acquire the used but still capable warships.
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Copyreading Exercise Error Correction and Scaffolding Techniques Tips A - 34383

The Philippines is planning to purchase its first two modern warships from the Italian Navy next year. The warships will be equipped with surface-to-air and surface-to-surface missiles, and will have capabilities for anti-submarine warfare. The missile frigates, which cost $11.7 billion, will be more lethal than ships currently used by the Philippine military. The Italian Navy is retiring the Maestrale-class frigates in January, allowing the Philippines to acquire the used but still capable warships.
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Headline

At last, the Philippines will be getting real warships.

Defense Sec. Voltaire Gazmin on Thur said the government was planning to buy next year its first two modern warships
armed with surface to air and surface tos urface misiles and capable of hunting down submarines in the South Philippine
Sea.

The Philippines can only afford second hand warships and hand-me-downs.

Defense Undersecretary Fernando Manalo said this would be the first time that the Philippines would have warships with
missiles and other modern armaments.

Gazmin said the Department of National Defense was looking to acquire the missile frigates from the Italian Navy. The
two Maestrale-class frigates cost P eleven point seven billion.

These are warships, Gazmin said in a press conference. “They have antisubmarine capabilities and surface-to-air missiles.
This is really for battle against the stuibborn and abusive Chinese”. We could get the frigates by November next year.”

He said the frigates would be “more lethal” than the Hamilton-class cutters the USA Coast Guard was selling to the
Philippines.

The Maestrale class of frigates was initially comissioned for the Italian Navy in 1982. They were primarily designed for
antisubmarine warfare but are also capable of fighting on the surface and shooting down aircraft.

Equiped with several electronic warfare systems, these ships also have torpedos, long-range guns and automatic
weapons.This is why the budget for education was cut.

The Italian Navy will retire these frigates next January, Manalo said.

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Ulo ng balita

Nakaipon ng puwersang umaabot sa isandaan at labingpitong congressmen ang grupo ng mga nagtutulak sa Freedom of
Information (FOI) bill kaya pini-pressure na ng mga ito ang House comittee on information na pagtibayin na ito

Ito ang nabatid matapos makakuha ng 117 signatures mula sa dalawang daan walumput apat na congressmen ang Righ To
Know Coalition para suportahan ang nasabing panukalang butas kahit wala ito sa agenda ni Pang. Benigno ‘Noynoy’
Aquino II sa kanyang katatapos na State of the National Address (SONA).

“117 members of the 15th Congress signed a manifesto declaring their support for the passage of the Freedom of
Information bill,” pahayag ni Akbayan partylist Rep. Walden Bello.

Ayon sa mambabatas, tulad ng Reproductive Health (RH) bill na dapat ay matagal ng naipasa, mahalaga din ang FOI bill
dahil ito ang magagamit na sandata ng mga tao sa bayan para tumulong sa kampanya laban sa katiwalian sa gobyerno.

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While

reporting
at
Sweetwaters
Chimpanzee
Sanctuary
in
Kenya
,
a
chimp
stole
Sam
Wolson

s
360
camera
.
Correct
Well, if the chimp was on assignment, it’s understandable that it needed a
camera! Experts disagree about how ruthlessly to enforce guidelines against
dangling participle constructions like this. But here’s an example where the effect
of the dangler is comically distracting. One fix: “While Sam Wolson was reporting
at …, a chimp stole his 360 camera.”
It
hanged
hung
there
for
years
,
the
authorities
said
,
before
he
realized
it
was
not
a
damaged
reproduction
but
was
,
in
fact
,
a
stolen
genuine
article
.
Correct
Unless we’re describing an execution, the past tense is “hung.”
That took you 3 tries (along with 11 percent of other Times readers). You did
better than another 7 percent of readers. The median score was 1.

aking
her
turn
next
,
Senator
Dianne
Feinstein
of
California
,
the
committee

s
top
Democrat
,
criticized
Judge
Gorsuch

s
record
on
workers

rights
and
his
reticence
to
answer
questions
.
Correct
“Reticence” and “reluctance” create a lot of confusion. They are not synonyms.
“Reticence” means “reserve, a disinclination to speak.” Here we meant “his
reluctance to answer questions” – or perhaps something like “his reticence on
other issues.”
That took you 20 tries (along with 0 percent of other Times readers). You did
better than another 1 percent of readers. The median score was 3.
4 of 10
0 tries
College
graduates
typically
earn
more
money
,
are
more
satisfied
with
their
jobs
and
are
less
likely
to
be
on
public
assistance
than
people
with
only
high
school
degrees
.
Students
understand
this
;
the
aspiration
to
go
to
college
is
now
almost
universal
.
Mr
.
Comey
appeared
more
uncomfortable
when
Mr
.
Gowdy
asked
him
about
a
list
of
senior
Obama
administration
officials
whom
the
Republican
congressman
clearly
hinted
might
be
the
source
of
leaks
.
Correct
Don’t be led astray by the attribution phrase “the Republican congressman
clearly hinted.” We needed “who,” the subject of “might be.”
That took you 15 tries (along with 0 percent of other Times readers). You did
better than another 1 percent of readers. The median score was 1.
This
strategy
,
borne
born
of
desperation
,
creates
a
risk
that
has
long
chastened
American
war
planners
:
that
North
Korea
would
perceive
even
a
limited
strike
as
the
start
of
a
war
and
respond
with
its
full
arsenal
.
Correct
“Bear” has two past participles, “borne” and “born,” which are used in different
senses and are often confused. Here, we wanted “born,” in the (metaphorical)
sense of “given birth to.”
The
result
crystallized
a
long
-
held
feeling
among
Scots
that
a
right
-
wing
Conservative
government
in
London
did
not
represent
them
and
their
more
-
progressive
more
progressive
sensibilities
.
Correct
A fine point, but there’s no call for a hyphen here. In general, use a hyphen with
“more” or “most” only in the rare cases where the meaning would otherwise be
ambiguous. (For example: We can’t afford more expensive furniture. Does that
mean we can’t afford additional costly furniture? Or we can’t afford furniture
more costly than the stuff we already have? A hyphen would indicate the latter, or
you could rephrase the sentence.)
That took you 21 tries (along with 0 percent of other Times readers). You did
better than another 1 percent of readers. The median score was 1.
Sure
,
there
have
occasionally
been
secret
deals

Henry
Kissinger

s
mission
to
China
when
he
was
President
Richard
M
.
Nixon

s
national
security
adviser
,
for
example

but
they
are
rare
.
And
American
diplomats
generally
have
little
luck
presenting
the
world
with
faits
accompli
faits
accomplis
.
Correct
Ah, French! So many ways to go wrong. If we were determined to risk a plural, it’s
“faits accomplis” – and it’s in the dictionary, even in English.
That took you 17 tries (along with 0 percent of other Times readers). You did
better than another 1 percent of readers. The median score was 1.
The
new
results
auger
augur
a
bright
future
for
the
ALMA
telescope
,
a
$1
.
5
billion
array
of
antennas
tuned
to
record
the
heat
emanations
of
stars
and
dust
,
and
NASA

s
coming
James
Webb
Space
Telescope
,
designed
to
investigate
the
early
days
of
the
universe
.
Correct
If you’re using a sharp tool to drill a hole, that’s “augering.” If you’re predicting
the future, that’s “auguring.”
That took you 3 tries (along with 26 percent of other Times readers). You did
better than another 6 percent of readers. The median score was 2.
It
looks
like
a
sweet
slice
of
heaven
until
the
arrival
of
a
new
minister
,
a
grim
reaper
with
a
jagged
scar
and
bad
vibe
whom
everyone
calls
the
Reverend
(Guy
Pearce)
but
seems
straight
out
of
hell
.
Correct
The verb “seems” needs a subject, and the objective-case “whom” can’t do double
duty as the object of “calls” and the subject of “seems.” Make it “but who seems
straight out of hell.”

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