Universidade Federal Do Rio Grande Do Sul Instituto de Letras Departamento de Línguas Modernas
Universidade Federal Do Rio Grande Do Sul Instituto de Letras Departamento de Línguas Modernas
INSTITUTO DE LETRAS
DEPARTAMENTO DE LÍNGUAS MODERNAS
EDUARDA DE CARLI
PORTO ALEGRE
2014.
EDUARDA DE CARLI
PORTO ALEGRE
2014.
THANKS
To my great-aunt Vera, for being like a second mom through all these years,
and also to my great-grandfather João, for providing me with a second home when I
needed and wanted too. To her also for being the one who gave me my first Sherlock
Holmes stories book when I was still a child.
To my best friends Simone and Maria Júlia, for hearing, reading and helping
me through all the craziness and panics and doubts; to them also for being there
when I needed and for those moments in which we threw everything in the “air” and
just had fun.
To Ana Iris, for taking me under her wing when I was a freshman and teaching
me so many things that I will be forever grateful for; for having shared her knowledge
and for making me see even more that researching and studying literature could be
fun.
To Filipe and Talissa, for making our research group meetings and talks so
much fun, and also for all the interesting discussions we had this year; I surely
learned a lot with you.
To Bruna, Laura, Luana, Luiene, and Rafaela, for making this last semester
epic and even more memorable; for making our duties as the prom committee fun
and for the great times we’ve had.
ABSTRACT
This study aims at analyzing the characterizations of the fictional detective Sherlock
Holmes in Arthur Conan Doyle’s text, A Study in Scarlet (1887), and in a
contemporary television appropriation, Elementary (CBS, 2012-), in order to
investigate its representations, as well as some of the choices made when adapting
the original first person narration into film. This is carried out through a close reading
and analysis of the source text in order to identify how the character is (re)presented
in the novel – mainly through the specific point of view of the narrator, John Watson –
and later in the television adaptations, focusing on the transposition of narrative
elements and language specific of a first person literary narrator into filmic ones, also
considering how they aid in the construction of the image of a contemporary Sherlock
Holmes.
1. INTRODUCTION .................................................................................................. 6
2. THEORETICAL BACKGROUND .......................................................................... 8
3. THE ANALYSIS .................................................................................................. 12
3.1. A Study in Scarlet ......................................................................................... 13
3.2. Elementary’s “Pilot” ...................................................................................... 19
3.3. The Sherlocks .............................................................................................. 25
4. FINAL CONSIDERATIONS ................................................................................ 27
5. REFERENCES ................................................................................................... 29
1. INTRODUCTION
Scottish author Arthur Conan Doyle (1859-1930) created what is, perhaps, one
of the most famous detectives worldwide. The character appeared in a total of 60
original 1stories – 4 novels and 56 short-stories – and was awarded the title of most
portrayed human character in film and television by Guinness World Records in
2012, even though it is not the one that has been most played in film adaptations in
general – Dracula, Tarzan and Frankenstein’s monster are the ones which have
been most portrayed –, (LEITCH, 2007), but especially in the last years, the cultural
industry has demonstrated more interest in Conan Doyle’s works.
Arthur Conan Doyle was born on May 22nd in Edinburgh, Scotland. Son of an
Irish-Catholic family, he was sent to England when he was around nine years old by
richer relatives to study. After graduating school, he decided to pursue a medical
career, differently from his parents, who had a more artistic career, and while in the
University of Edinburgh, he met Dr. Joseph Bell, who ended up inspiring the creation
of the character Sherlock Holmes.
Conan Doyle’s first artistic publication was a short story entitled “The Mystery
of Sasassa Valley” in the Scottish magazine Chamber’s Journal in 1879. The
publication that truly made his name back in the day was the novel A Study in
Scarlet, published in 1887 in Beeton’s Christmas Annual, and it was the debut of the
duo Sherlock Holmes and Dr. John Watson. A Study in Scarlet, as mentioned before,
was published for the first time in 1887. Coming back from the war in Afghanistan,
Watson needs a roommate to share expenses in London, and, through a mutual
connection, ends up meeting and moving in with Sherlock Holmes at the address
221B Baker Street. He accompanies Sherlock’s steps in the investigation of the case
of a man that was found dead in an abandoned house with only the word rache
written in blood on the wall, writing everything that happens in a journal, which is later
published as his reminiscences.
Even though he was a prolific author, having written several other novels,
short stories and poems that are not in any way related to the famous detective,
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Original here and onwards meaning source material.
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Conan Doyle’s most known and read works are, still nowadays, the Sherlock Holmes
Canon2 – the 60 works.
Holmes was so popular in his time that, when Doyle decided to give an ending
to it all, in “The Final Problem” (1893), his fans so incessantly requested more stories
that, after 7 years, the author decided to revive the character – the readers
demanded more stories that succeeded the aforementioned chronologically, and not
only stories set previous to the character’s death. This resurrection of Sherlock
Holmes ends up giving it some privileges.
It makes him a hero with a hundred faces whose resilience is such that he
can be impersonated by dozens of actors who resemble each other in
nothing but their ability to play Sherlock Holmes […]. It ensures that he will
never die, for a hero once risen from the grave has surely established that
he is impervious to any new threat, especially if he can be incarnated anew
by performers of every generation. Finally, it makes this most secular of
mythopoetic figures endlessly adaptable in the specific sense that he is
endlessly available for use. (LEITCH, 2007, p. 218)
In the last decade, more than five works based on the canon were released in
both television and cinema; notably FOX’s House (2004 - 2012), Guy Ritchie’s
Sherlock Holmes (2009), starring Robert Downey Jr. as Holmes and Jude Law as
Watson, BBC’s Sherlock (2010 - ), starring Benedict Cumberbatch and Martin
Freeman as Holmes and Watson respectively, and CBS’ Elementary (2012 - ). House
and the last two mentioned are contemporary adaptations and appropriations of the
canon – all stories happen now-a-days and the characters adapt the methods of
investigation to use the resources available to them, especially the technological
ones.
Considering this renewed interest in the works, one might ask how Conan
Doyle’s narratives have been adapted, so this research aims at analyzing the
representations of the character Sherlock Holmes in the novel A Study in Scarlet and
the first episode of the TV series Elementary, entitled “Pilot”. In this series, Sherlock
Holmes (Jonny Lee Miller) is an ex-heroin addict who has completed time in an
American rehabilitation clinic, and must live with a sober companion for a while to get
used to the world out of the clinic. The companion that is assigned to him is Joan
Watson (Lucy Liu), and she has to accompany him everywhere, including his
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From this point onwards, this will be referred as “the canon”.
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detective work consulting for the New York Police Department - when he lived in
London, he did the same for the Scotland Yard.
Both works were chosen because they are the ones in which the character is
featured for the first time, so the characterization serves for establishing a common
ground and a starting point for the readers and viewers – who, upon liking them, are
going to follow on reading and watching – and also for the sequels of these two
specific universes. Taking into consideration that the adaptation of Conan Doyle’s
narrator poses a great challenge because it is a first person narrator with a specific
point of view, narratology theory will be used to analyze it.
2. THEORETICAL BACKGROUND
Structuralist narratological studies and theorists have not dwelt much in the
aspect of characterization by itself, because it almost always involves the reader’s
interpretation besides the listing of textual facts; they do, however, provide
terminology that is more helpful for the purpose of this analysis in terms of aiding the
identification and classification of Sherlock Holmes’ varied characterizations. Gérard
Genette affirms in Narrative Discourse Revisited (1988) that, regarding the analysis
of characterization, it is more preferable in terms of narratological studies to “[…]
decompose […] into the study of its constituting devices (which are not all specific to
it): denomination, description, focalization, narrative of words or thoughts or both,
situation to the narrating situation, etc.” (p. 136). Mieke Bal, however, in Narratology
(2009), dedicates one section of the book to the discussion of characters and their
construction.
According to Bal (2009), there are four principles to the construction of the
image of a character. The first one is the repetition of relevant characteristics.
Regarding repetition, there can also be the repetition of events; when the event
occurs with the same frequency in the story and in the narrative, the frequency is
singulative; when the event occurs repeatedly in the story but only once in the
narrative, the frequency is iterative, and when the event occurs repeatedly in the text
but only once in the story, the frequency is called repetition (HERMAN; VERVAECK,
2001). The second is the accumulation of characteristics in order to form the image
of a character. The third principle is the character’s relations to itself and to others in
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similarities and contrasts. The fourth and last one is the changes and transformations
that the character undergoes throughout the narrative. Considering that “[…] once a
character’s most important characteristics have been selected, it is easier to trace
transformations and to describe them clearly” (BAL, 2009, p. 127), in order to fulfill the
principles, one has to try to identify the relevant characteristics.
The characteristics are “[…] either mentioned explicitly by the character itself,
or we deduce them from what the character does” (BAL, 2009, p. 131), and when the
information about a certain character is given by other characters, it’s referred to as
“qualification” (BAL, 2009). The character can talk about itself to itself (self-analysis),
it can talk about itself to others or others can talk about it, and also the narrator can
make statements about it. If the character is characterized by its actions, Bal (2009)
defines it as “qualification by function”.
Since in a text there can be a lot of information about a certain character, it is
possible to say that “[…] every character is more or less predictable, from the very
first time it is present onwards. Every mention of the identity of the character contains
information that limits other possibilities.” (BAL, 2009, p. 124) Some of these pieces of
information can seem clearer when analyzed in binary opposition; though it is
somewhat limiting to make some sort of diagram and reduce the characters into polar
opposites (BAL, 2009), it certainly does help us perceive, in this case, how the
characters function in relation to each other and the roles they play in most
situations.
Considering that the narrator is “the most central concept in the analysis of
narrative texts” (BAL, 2009, p. 18) because it is the one responsible for the telling of
the story, it is of extreme importance to at least superficially cover the subject by
analyzing the character Watson. Mieke Bal (2009) classifies the narrator between
two main types: character-bound and external, mostly known as first and third person
respectively. Herman and Vervaeck (2001) present a more thorough division, which
can be helpful in order to classify more precisely the narrator. Considering the level, if
the narrator belongs to the world and is narrated by what they call an “agency” above
it, then it is intradiegetic, and in opposition, an extradiegetic narrator has no other
agency narrating it and the story; regarding involvement, if the narrator has
experienced what it is telling, it is homodiegetic, and, in opposition, is the term
heterodiegetic; if the homodiegetic narrator has experienced what it is telling, it can
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be classified as autodiegetic, and if it tells things it witnessed, it is allodiegetic (2001).
These levels and involvements can be combined into six types of narrator:
Extradiegetic and heterodiegetic – is not narrated by another agent and
talks about what it didn’t experience
Extradiegetic and autodiegetic – it is not narrated by another agent and
talks about what it has experienced
Extradiegetic and allodiegetic – it is not narrated by another agent and
is a witness
Intradiegetic and heterodiegetic – it belongs to the world and talks about
what it didn’t experience
Intradiegetic and autodiegetic – it belongs to the world and talks about
what it has experienced
Intradiegetic and allodiegetic – it belongs to the world and is a witness
Herman and Vervaeck (2001) also affirm that John Watson is an extradiegetic
and allodiegetic narrator, for he “[…] is a mere witness of the things he relates” (p.
85). This combination of levels becomes somewhat problematic because the authors
state that the intradiegetic narrator “belongs to the narrated world” (HERMAN;
VERVAECK, 2001, p. 81), that is, it is a character of the story; John Watson, at the
same time that narrates the story, is also a character in it, so it also could be possible
to classify him as an intradiegetic narrator and, regarding level, sometimes, in A
Study in Scarlet, he narrates what he went through - while in the war, for example -,
so he could be and is indeed autodiegetic. There may be different sequences of
events narrated in a story, and when that happens, the classification of the narrator
may vary according to the variation of events. From now on, though, he will be
referred to as character-bound narrator, the term used by Bal (2009).
The narratee is “[…] the receiver of the narrated text” (BAL, 2009, p. 68), that
is, it is the interlocutor to whom the narrator speaks and tells the story. Following the
same classification presented before regarding the level of the narrator, an
intradiegetic narratee belongs to the narrated world, and the extradiegetic one does
not belong, is external. In the novel A Study in Scarlet, John Watson, besides being
the character-bound narrator, is also the intradiegetic narratee in those moments in
which Sherlock is talking about the crime and its solution, and even when the
assassin is talking about his reasons.
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In film and television, the viewer functions as a narratee; there is no need of an
intradiegetic one to exist either in literature or in audiovisual media; the narratee
resource is intrinsic to the narrative text and it can be explored in both literature and
film. In the case of the selected television adaptation, however, some elements are
introduced in order to make this function necessary: Elementary’s Sherlock, later in
the series, mentions that talking to Joan out loud about the cases helps him analyze
and process the information in a slightly different and faster way, thus enhancing his
deduction capacity; therefore, Watson’s presence allows the narration of the crime
within the television narrative.
One distinction that is important is that of adaptation and appropriation; the
term that is most generally used is, without a doubt, adaptation, but just because a
work has similarities or elements of another, it doesn’t mean that it can be classified
as that. Linda Hutcheon (2006) affirms that
In contrast, Julie Sanders (2006) proposes the term appropriation, and it “[…]
frequently affects a more decisive journey away from the informing source into a
wholly new cultural product and domain” (p. 26), that is, the work is a “[…] more
sustained reworking of the source text, […] a wholesale rethinking of the terms of the
original” (SANDERS, 2006, p. 28). Based on this distinction, it’s possible to affirm that
Elementary is an appropriation and not an adaptation of the work of Arthur Conan
Doyle; the story is set in New York City, Watson is a woman and a sober companion
– no longer a doctor –, Sherlock is an addict just out of rehab. The characters and
some elements of the canon are present, but the show is a whole new concept – the
events and cases are completely new and different – and it does not seem
appropriate to call it an adaptation.
Because “Film works in two registers: it can show what a character sees and
say what he thinks” (BURGOYNE; STAM; LEWIS, 1992, p. 92-93), one has to pay close
attention to the scenes and details shown by the camera-narrator, that is, the
“external, impersonal cinematic narrator, who renders the text in a non-verbal form”
(BURGOYNE; STAM; LEWIS, 1992, p. 98). More specifically, Verstraten (2009) proposed
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the idea of a filmic narrator, and it is the “agent that negotiates the relation between
the auditive and visual tracks” (p. 130), and is higher in hierarchy than the visual and
auditive narrators, which are on the same level; the first is responsible for the
passage and sequences of images, and the latter is responsible for the sound track –
dialogues, voice-over narration, music, etc – (VERSTRATEN, 2009).
When talking about audiovisual media, the term focalization does not suffice to
explain or to refer to certain aspects and shots – Genette defines focalization as
“selection of narrative information (1988, p. 74), and it can be internal, that is, “the
focus coincides with a character” (GENETTE, 1988, p. 74), or external, “the focus is
situated at a point in the diegetic universe chosen by the narrator, outside every
character” (GENETTE, 1988, p. 75); in films and TV shows, the term ocularization can
be used, and it “indicates the relation between what the camera shows and what a
character sees” (BURGOYNE; STAM; LEWIS, 1992, p. 93).
Following a similar conceptualization as to the term focalization, the filmic term
can be divided into internal and external ocularization: internal when the shot is
filmed in a way that makes the camera seem to be a substitute for the eyes of a
character, and external when the shot is filmed in a way that the field of vision is
clearly located outside the eyes or out of the visual scope of a character (BURGOYNE;
STAM; LEWIS, 1992). One of the ways of showing that a certain scene is from a
character’s point of view is through the resource of shot/reverse shot; "[…] film
conventions have taught us that a sequence alternating between shots from over a
person's shoulder and her facial reactions (termed "shot reverse shot") will be
interpreted as conveying her perspective" (MITTELL, 2007, p. 159).
Considering that when appropriating or adapting “[…] “equivalences” are
sought in different sign systems for the various elements of the story: its themes,
events, world, characters, motivations, points of view, consequences, contexts,
symbols, imagery, and so on” (HUTCHEON, 2006, p. 29), when analyzing the chosen
episode of Elementary, besides paying attention to Sherlock’s behavior and lines, we
will also try to identify some of the elements of the canon that are present in the
appropriation and some resources that were used in their transposition.
3. THE ANALYSIS
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3.1. A Study in Scarlet
The first time that the reader comes in contact with Sherlock Holmes, in the
novel, is when Watson is talking to a former colleague and mentions that he is in
need of someone to share an apartment in London, because he spends a lot of
money and is starting to have financial problems. Watson needs a roommate, and
when his colleague mentions he knows someone who is also looking for one, he
accepts it as a solution to his problem, for which Stamford – the colleague –
responds on the following excerpt.
Judging by this depiction of Sherlock Holmes, the reader does not have a good
impression. Stamford, through his affirmations, is already beginning to characterize
Holmes; the character then can act according to what is already perceived of him by
another character, or it can surprise the narrator – and reader. Some information that
appears in the excerpt above will be a little later on seen again, thus enabling
Sherlock’s image to be partially constructed by the repetition of important
characteristics.
After having met Holmes and living with him for a couple of days, Watson then
can give us his own perception of the character – still very biased, now even more
because the information is filtered through the narrator. One of the first contradictions
to the image painted by Stamford is that the man is not a bad or difficult roommate as
previously advertised. Describing Sherlock’s habits and routine, the narrator provides
a slightly more concrete image of the character in a very interesting way. The report
seems to be very objective for the lay reader, but the more specialized one knows
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that, no matter how impartial the narrator appears to be, it always narrates from a
certain point of view and focalized on someone (or something). One of the proofs of
this is the use of the words “appeared” and “I might have suspected”, which serve to
reinforce the notion that this is a very specific perspective of narration, in the
paragraph below.
Holmes was certainly not a difficult man to live with. He was quiet in his
ways, and his habits were regular. It was rare for him to be up after ten at
night, and he had invariably breakfasted and gone out before I rose in the
morning. Sometimes he spent his day at the chemical laboratory, sometimes
in the dissecting-rooms, and occasionally in long walks, which appeared to
take him into the lowest portions of the City. Nothing could exceed his
energy when the working fit was upon him; but now and again a reaction
would seize him, and for days on end he would lie upon the sofa in the
sitting-room, hardly uttering a word or moving a muscle from morning to
night. On these occasions I have noticed such a dreamy, vacant expression
in his eyes, that I might have suspected him of being addicted to the use of
some narcotic, had not the temperance and cleanliness of his whole life
forbidden such a notion. (DOYLE, 2014, p. 12-13)
In height he was rather over six feet, and so excessively lean that he
seemed to be considerably taller. His eyes were sharp and piercing, save
during those intervals of torpor to which I have alluded; and his thin, hawk-
like nose gave his whole expression an air of alertness and decision. His
chin, too, had the prominence and squareness which mark the man of
determination. His hands were invariably blotted with ink and stained with
chemicals, yet he was possessed of extraordinary delicacy of touch, as I
frequently had occasion to observe when I watched him manipulating his
fragile philosophical instruments. (DOYLE, 2014, p. 13)
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The narrator mentions twice the quality of decision/determination while
describing Sherlock’s physical appearance; therefore this excerpt that apparently
would be solely related to the exterior impressions ends up aiding more in the
psychological characterization of Sherlock Holmes.
The narrator then makes a brief interlude to justify his so keen interest in the
character being described. Claiming that he has no real motivation and friends to get
out of the apartment in 221B Baker Street, he decided to unravel the mystery that is
Sherlock.
The reader may set me down as a hopeless busybody, when I confess how
much this man stimulated my curiosity, and how often I endeavoured to
break through the reticence which he showed on all that concerned himself.
Before pronouncing judgment, however, be it remembered, how objectless
was my life, and how little there was to engage my attention. My health
forbade me from venturing out unless the weather was exceptionally genial,
and I had no friends who would call upon me and break the monotony of my
daily existence. Under these circumstances, I eagerly hailed the little
mystery which hung around my companion, and spent much of my time in
endeavouring to unravel it. (DOYLE, 2014, p. 13)
This passage also helps to remind the reader that this is a story told by a
character-bound narrator, that is, it is not one hundred percent reliable. We have to
be conscious throughout the whole story narrated by Watson that we cannot
completely trust him, even though he sometimes disguises his opinions in what
seems to be more objective remarks, such as what was seen in the excerpt before
the above.
One very interesting passage that cannot be ignored is the following. Watson,
while observing and noticing the varied knowledge that the character has, ends up
having a very judgmental attitude, since he is perplexed that Sherlock doesn’t know
about certain things that are not really relevant to his frame of work. Watson makes a
list, and instead of naming it “Sherlock Holmes – his knowledges” or something
similar, he names it “Sherlock Holmes – his limits”, and seems to be proud of it.
He said that he would acquire no knowledge which did not bear upon his
object. Therefore all the knowledge which he possessed was such as would
be useful to him. I enumerated in my own mind all the various points upon
which he had shown me that he was exceptionally well-informed. I even took
a pencil and jotted them down. I could not help smiling at the document
when I had completed it. It ran in this way—
SHERLOCK HOLMES—his limits.
1. Knowledge of Literature.—Nil.
2. Philosophy.—Nil.
3. Astronomy.—Nil.
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4. Politics.—Feeble.
5. Botany.—Variable. Well up in belladonna, opium, and
poisons generally. Knows nothing of practical gardening.
6. Geology.—Practical, but limited.
Tells at a glance different soils from each other. After
walks has shown me splashes upon his trousers, and
told me by their colour and consistence in what part of
London he had received them.
7. Chemistry.—Profound.
8. Anatomy.—Accurate, but unsystematic.
9. Sensational Literature.—Immense. He appears to know
every detail of every horror perpetrated in the century.
10. Plays the violin well.
11. Is an expert singlestick player, boxer, and swordsman.
12. Has a good practical knowledge of British law.
(DOYLE, 2014, p. 15-16)
"The writing on the wall was done with a man's forefinger dipped in blood.
My glass allowed me to observe that the plaster was slightly scratched in
doing it, which would not have been the case if the man's nail had been
trimmed. I gathered up some scattered ash from the floor. It was dark in
colour and flakey—such an ash as is only made by a Trichinopoly. I have
made a special study of cigar ashes—in fact, I have written a monograph
upon the subject. I flatter myself that I can distinguish at a glance the ash of
any known brand, either of cigar or of tobacco. It is just in such details that
the skilled detective differs from the Gregson and Lestrade type." (DOYLE,
2014, p. 38)
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Holmes had taken out his watch, and as minute followed minute without
result, an expression of the utmost chagrin and disappointment appeared
upon his features. He gnawed his lip, drummed his fingers upon the table,
and showed every other symptom of acute impatience. So great was his
emotion, that I felt sincerely sorry for him, while the two detectives smiled
derisively, by no means displeased at this check which he had met. (DOYLE,
2014, p. 69)
It can be understood that Sherlock Holmes seems to truly engage himself with
his investigations, while he doesn’t showcase strong emotions towards more
common events and situations, with those related to his work as a detective –
especially waiting to see if he’s right – he has a very opposite attitude. Considering
that we can have repetition in the story that is only once present in the written text, it
is possible to fit the next habit of Sherlock Holmes into his characterization by
function: “Thus pressed by us all, Holmes showed signs of irresolution. He continued
to walk up and down the room with his head sunk on his chest and his brows drawn
down, as was his habit when lost in thought.” (DOYLE, 2014, p. 71) Again we have the
question of strong emotion related to his work, and also an action that is
characteristic of a certain state of mind of his that Watson has perceived. Still related
to his work, Sherlock affirms that, no matter what, he would have taken the case; it
seems as if no matter how gruesome or apparently unsolvable or even morally
dubious the case may be, he will agree to help in the investigation.
Sherlock is also very sure of himself; he knows that his mind works in a
different way and sometimes doesn’t truly understand how other people do not
function in the same manner. By the end of the novel, however, he already expects
that Watson – and everyone else – will not comprehend his arguments and
deductions about the case, so he explains things in more details, and even talks
about his own logic thinking.
While explaining his methods of thinking and working, the character mentions
again that he is different from other people by saying that, for him, certain subtle
details stand out, and those are the ones that should be more carefully examined.
This was the first point gained. I then walked slowly down the garden path,
which happened to be composed of a clay soil, peculiarly suitable for taking
impressions. No doubt it appeared to you to be a mere trampled line of
slush, but to my trained eyes every mark upon its surface had a meaning.
There is no branch of detective science which is so important and so much
neglected as the art of tracing footsteps. Happily, I have always laid great
stress upon it, and much practice has made it second nature to me. (DOYLE,
2014, p. 140)
Watson more than once praises Sherlock for his work as a detective, and,
while he thinks that the case should be published, Holmes doesn’t agree nor
disagree; fame and recognition don’t seem important to him.
It’s as if the mere excitement of the detective work is enough for Sherlock; he
doesn’t mention being paid to do it by the police and neither wants to be credited
immediately for the solving of the mystery. The character excels at what he does but
does not want it to be publicly spread and known.
The episode opens with a scene of the crime: two glasses break, a woman is
being choked and then she runs through the house, screaming, trying to escape, and
is followed by a person in black. The crime exposition ends, and we are shown a
woman waking up at 7 am and going out for a run; while running, the camera shows
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the scenery, establishing the main and bigger setting of the story – present-day New
York City. When she’s back at her building, she receives a call informing that the
person she was supposed to pick up has escaped. She then proceeds to call that
person’s father, identifying herself as Joan Watson, and we learn that it was
Hemdale, a rehabilitation clinic, that had called.
Upon getting to her client’s house, Joan sees through the window a woman
putting on a shirt and leaving, and she enters the house. When Joan is walking
towards a room from which a television noise reaches her, the camera shows her
face. When she gets to the room the noise comes from, this changes: through
internal ocularization, the spectator sees what Joan does – a man standing with his
back to the door, shirtless and with some visible tattoos, watching six televisions at
the same time, and each in a different channel. This is the first image we have of
Sherlock Holmes in the series.
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Image 1 – Sherlock standing watching tvs
The shot goes back to Joan’s face, showing her reaction and implying that we
are following her point of view in this scene. She introduces herself and explains that
she’s a sober companion and will live with him for the next six weeks to help him
adjust to post-rehab life. Sherlock then starts talking looking into her eyes and getting
closer:
Do you believe in love at first sight? I know what you're thinking: the world is
a cynical place, and I must be a cynical man, thinking a woman like you
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All the images here and onwards presented are screen captures of Elementary’s episode “Pilot”.
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would fall for a line like that. Thing is... it isn't a line, so please hear me when
I say this. I have never loved anyone as I do you right now in this moment.
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Going to the crime scene, Sherlock explains that he was a consultant detective
at Scotland Yard, in London, and wasn’t paid for his services, and now has decided
to continue his work with the New York Police Department. We are introduced to
another important character in the Sherlock Holmes canon, Captain Gregson, who is
in charge of the unit that’s at the scene. When Sherlock enters the place, he starts
observing everything and, just like the Holmes in A Study in Scarlet, he uses his
whole body to interact with the place. Again the scene shows Joan (and Captain
Gregson), cuts to showing Sherlock smelling the rug, and back to Joan’s reaction to
his odd behavior, which implies that the scene is being perceived from her point of
view.
After finding the body of the woman that was missing – her body was in a
hidden safe room – Sherlock says “Sometimes I hate it when I'm right”. This is the
very opposite from the Sherlock of the novel, who was thrilled when the dog died by
eating the poison – even if said dog was already very sick –, this character seems to
empathize more with other people’s feelings, and is certainly not thrilled that he was
right about the woman being killed and not only kidnapped.
Joan questions him when they are at the police station regarding his guesses
about her, and he explains that he does not guess, he observes and deduces from it,
and explains how he got to the conclusions about her. She does not comment on it,
but it is visible she is bothered by it. One interesting thing Sherlock says is that he
found out about her father through Google, because “Well, not everything is
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deducible”; the main reason this calls the spectator’s attention is that this is also
different from the Holmes that is in our imagination, since he cannot deduce
everything, it also could mean that he is bound to failure.
Later, when Joan approaches him on the roof of the house they’re sharing, he
asks her why she hates her job – because she has two alarm clocks, he deduces
that it is difficult for her to get up in the morning to do what she needs –, and notes
that when he was talking to a suspect, she interrupted and questioned the man,
showing interest for the detective work. Sherlock says that she doesn’t need to stay
with him for the six weeks, that he is not going to get involved with drugs anymore,
but she doesn’t agree. Next morning, she wakes up late and realizes Sherlock, to get
away from her, had turned off all her alarms. He does that without asking, and in the
contract, he cannot stay more than two hours without contact with her, – that is, if
they are not together, he has to at least call her to inform how and where he is – so
she finds him at the police station and does a drug test on him – he’s clean, though,
so it seems that what he said about not being interested in drugs anymore is true.
Sherlock needs Joan to control him when they are interviewing another woman
who suffered an attack very similar to the initial crime. In the scene, Sherlock starts
questioning the woman and making deductions about the attack and this is clearly
making the woman uncomfortable, but he does not seem to mind; all he wants is for
her to answer, but he has crossed the limit and Watson tells him to go wait in the car.
Holmes acts almost like a spoiled child, demanding answers without bothering with
other peoples’ feelings, and Joan serves as an adult who can control the situation –
and Holmes. He tells her that it was all on purpose, but later on he confesses that he
truly lost control, so we can assume that, just as the Holmes in the novel, his
emotions related to the investigation are heightened.
Watson confronts him later at night and tells him he was wrong about the
reason why she became a sober companion, and he says that he lied to spare her
feelings, but cannot control himself and tells her all that he’d deduced about her; he
clenches his hands as if attempting not to say anything to hurt her, but in the end he
doesn’t manage to, resulting in her saying that she will search for another sober
companion for him. But before that, she states something that leaves him thinking
and a little upset (judging by his facial reaction), almost a deduction about the man: “I
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noticed you don't have any mirrors around here. […] I think it means you know a lost
cause when you see one”.
Sherlock goes after Joan after reaching more conclusions about the case, and
it doesn’t matter to him that she is in the theater watching an opera. When she
ignores him, he only speaks louder until she is forced to pay attention to him –
behaving childishly again – and he convinces her to give him a ride to the hospital so
that he can confront the major suspect in the crime, the dead woman’s husband.
After doing that and the man practically confessing that he was the guilty one,
Sherlock asks for Joan’s car keys and crashes her car into the man’s, saying “That’s
better”. In jail, he apologizes, confirming that the way he acted – and when he
deduces and talks about people – was him losing control: “I'm sorry. Not just for your
car, but for the way I spoke to you earlier. I knew that the death of your patient would
be a sore subject. I just...”, to which Joan answers: “Couldn't help yourself”, showing
that she already understood that he is someone who needs to be managed and
controlled, and, since she is going to be living with him, she is the one who is going
to help him and counterbalance his more extreme attitudes. She asks him again
about London,
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connect us in a more meaningful way. But in case you hadn't noticed, I don't
have meaningful connections. Why are you smiling?
JOAN: Because now I know it was a woman.
SHERLOCK: What makes you say that?
JOAN: You're trying too hard. Just like you were the other day with that
tattooed lady. All that sex is repellent crap. You can connect to people. It just
frightens you.
Sherlock doesn’t respond to her statements about him, which can lead us to
believe that she was right, especially the part about connecting to people; he is
capable of that and also of minding people’s feelings, like when he didn’t initially tell
Joan that he knew why she had truly given up on medicine, he just gets out of control
sometimes. The fact that the reason why he ended up in the rehab was because of a
woman also shows that this is true, but something bad probably happened to make
him resort to drugs – later on the show we learn that she died.
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“[...]a vida da personagem depende da economia do livro, da sua situação em face dos demais
elementos que o constituem: outras personagens, ambiente, duração temporal, idéias”
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being extradiegetic, chooses to take her point of view sometimes, but it is not limited
to only portray her vision of the events.
Most of Sherlock’s characteristics in the novel are presented or built through
Watson’s narrations of his impressions and conclusions, because even when he
seems to be more attempting at objectivity, his opinions and comparisons are still
present. In Elementary’s episode, the protagonist’s personality and traits are built
through audiovisual language – his behavior, how others react to him (especially
Joan), his physical appearance, etc.
To exemplify some of the characteristics that were identified, a chart was made
in order to show them in comparison to Watson; the binary opposition here
presented, even though very simple, serves to exemplify the way the two characters
function within the narratives and their relationship.
Character qualification
Character
Interpersonal Strong
Addiction Deduction Childishness
skills Emotions
Sherlock Holmes
+ - + Ø +
(novel)
John Watson
- + - Ø -
(novel)
Sherlock Holmes
+ - + + +
(tv show)
Joan Watson (tv 5
- + - - -
show)
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Joan shows some inclination to the detective work in the first episode, and later on the series she
becomes Sherlock’s partner as a consultant detective, no longer a sober companion.
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Through this small and very exemplary diagram – it can be more
comprehensive, including other characters and even more qualifications – it is
possible to see that Holmes and Watson are mostly always in opposition; there is a
balance to their relation and the Watsons have the task of having to manage the
Holmeses so they properly function in society (POLASEK, 2013), and this becomes
clearer in CBS’ Elementary, with Joan being Sherlock’s sober companion. It is
possible to trace this new Sherlock as someone who needs constant management
back to House M.D. (Fox, 2004). Even though the series is also an appropriation, it
definitely is a mark that ends up shaping the contemporary adaptations and
appropriations (both in age and setting) that succeed it (POLASEK, 2013).
Besides that, it is possible to see that both Sherlocks have similarities even if
portrayed by different narrators and under different circumstances; the setting and
the period in their lives that is being shown have changed, but Elementary’s Sherlock
has the essential characteristics of the one in the novel: he has great knowledge of
varied subjects that can be useful to detective work, is dedicated in an almost
animalistic way to solving the cases, shows strong emotions related to his work, etc.
What makes him different is the fact that he has learned from his mistakes, he knows
his abilities and even himself have limits, mainly because he is a Sherlock Holmes
that has hit rock bottom, survived, and is now ready to move on, so he can be seen
somehow as a future version of the worldly famous character.
4. FINAL CONSIDERATIONS
With the renewed interest in Doyle’s works, the Sherlock Holmes canon has
been adapted and appropriated into many films and series, Elementary being one of
the released in the last couple of years. Because it is very recent and ongoing, it is
not possible to affirm for certain if the series will maintain its status as an
appropriation – there is a general adaptation of the characters and the universe
they’re in, but the events that take place are completely different from those written
by the author for the source texts – or if one or more episodes are going to be
adaptations of the original stories.
Through this work, it was possible to see some of the resources used when
adapting a character-bound narrator into an external one in a different media,
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especially regarding the characterization of one of the main characters of the chosen
novel and tv series’ episode. About Conan Doyle’s works, a major challenge when
adapting or appropriating the Sherlock Holmes stories to another media is to find a
structure that is similar to that of the character-bound narrator so characteristic of
them. A very common resource is the voice-over narration, but Elementary uses
subjective camera focalization to convey the idea that an event, a character, or an
action is perceived through a certain character’s point of view.
Sherlock Holmes, in the novel, is mostly characterized by the character-bound
narrator, Watson, but in the TV episode, he is presented to the viewer by an external
narrator that, though seemingly completely objective, is not; this narrator can choose
what to show and hide, therefore it also takes great part in the construction of the
image of the character. In the novel, the character is mostly built by the narrator itself,
and all the four principles of construction of a character (BAL, 2009) are present. In
the series, the camera narrator is the one responsible for the presentation of the
image of the character; Sherlock is indeed characterized by his actions that are
shown and by the things people say to/about him and what he says, but the camera
narrator has the same power that literary narrators do, since they can interfere by
switching focalization and making very specific choices, such as empowering a
character by giving it speech, muting a character, and even showing only certain
events (or parts of them) in order to influence the spectator’s conclusions and
opinions.
As “[…] other media offer narrative twists and techniques that drive viewers to
reflect on storytelling mechanics, the ongoing continuity of television series requires a
level of investment and immersion not available within a 2-hour film” (MITTELL, 2007,
p. 171), it would be interesting to analyze Sherlock’s characterizations in other
episodes of the series Elementary (and even other contemporary adaptations) to see
how he changes – or not – when facing different situations and characters, as well as
studying other stories by Conan Doyle to investigate this. Given the limitations of this
work, however, this will not be attempted here; we believe the analysis made has met
its objectives by demonstrating the applicability of narratology concepts to
comparative studies of literary and film characters, the intricate processes of
narrative adaptation, as well as the rich ongoing cultural phenomenon of keeping
Sherlock Holmes alive and thriving on screens and pages alike.
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its Discontents: from Gone With the Wind to The Passion of the Christ. Baltimore:
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MITTELL, J. Film and television narrative. In: HERMAN, D (ed). The Cambridge
Companion to Narrative. Cambridge: Cambridge University Press, 2007. pp. 156-
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