Phobia Script
Phobia Script
Story by
Pavan Kirpalani
Screenplay by
(10:00 pm)
MEHAK
...Paanch... saat... dus minute!
Ghoore ja raha tha mujhko. Main
ignore kar rahi thi, but then maine
socha kya hai yeh? To main uthi aur
uske table tak gayi. Darna to
chodo, ab wo smile kar raha tha!
MEHAK (CONT’D)
Old guy, hanh, like, at least 60
years old he was. Bola Hello, *
Princess! Maine kaha dekhiye *
Uncleji, please stop staring! Aap
ko sharm aani chahiye! But he said
meri shakl hoobahoo kisise se milti
hai...
MEHAK (CONT’D)
To of course mujhe poochna pada ki
kiss-se milti hai? But Uncleji
mujhe dekhe ja rahe the...
2.
SHAAN
Tharki buda!
MEHAK
Aisa kuch nahin tha! He was really
emotional, haath waath kaanp rahe
the bechaare ke.
SHAAN
Since when did you get so
sentimental?
MEHAK
Anyway, so maine phir se poocha
kiski shakl mujhse hoobahoo blah
blah, right? Kaun thi wo?
MAN 1
Uski Beti?
SHAAN
Uski Class 8 ki Biology teacher?
MEHAK
Apni fantasy mat ghusao beech mein!
Anyone else?
MEHAK (CONT’D)
Meri shakl hoobahoo uski kutiya se
milti hai - Princess.
People laugh.
MEHAK (CONT’D)
Has kyun rahe ho? It’s true. I was
speechless.
(MORE)
3.
MEHAK (CONT’D)
Uncle ne bataya ki Princess ki maut
ek accident ke dauran hui... 1985
mein. Funny, I was born in 1985.
MEHAK (CONT’D)
Uncle ne kaha ki ek din wo raaste
par chali gayi, aur ek fast gaadi
pata nahin kahan se aayi, aur usse
uda diya. Jab tak Uncle bhaag ke
Princess ke paas pahunche.... wo
mar chuki thi. Gala kat gaya tha
uska. Satrah June, 1985 ke din,
subah ke aanth baje.
SHAAN
Satrah June ko to..?
MEHAK
Exactly.
(To the audience)
Satrah June, 1985. Subah aanth
baje, main paida hui thi.
SHAAN
No way!
MEHAK
It gets even stranger... Koi yakeen
nahin karega...
MEHAK (CONT’D)
Mujhe yahan, (indicates the back
half of her neck languidly)
birthmark hai.
MLS - Shaan lets out a scream and spills his drink on his
pants. The group explodes into nervous laughter, Mehak howls
as she downs her drink. The group laughs at Shaan, he
sheepishly looks away. Shaan scurries away.
Blue Rev. (mm/dd/yy) 4.
Car rig shot - From Mehak’s back seat window. Mehak (f/g) and
Shaan (b/g) sit in the back of a taxi. Mehak is lost in
thought. In the background, an item number plays on the car
radio. Shaan is pouring dark rum from a quarter bottle into a
half filled soda bottle. Mehek, lost in thought, simply
reaches out and stops him from pouring. Even as he asks what,
the car goes over a bump. He finishes and offers her the
ready mix.
SHAAN
Ghatak jao, you’ll feel better...
MEHEK
Bas. Venue pe bhi piya...
SHAAN
Achanak hua kya? Thodi der theherna
chahiye tha, aadhe art critics to
pahunche bhi nahin the...?
Car rig shot - Outside the drivers seat. Mehak seen through
the gap from behind the driver’s seat. She knows Shaan is
right, but...
MEHAK
I just needed to get out.
SHAAN
Itna kya tension le rahi ho?
Tumhare paintings sabko pasand
aaye, nothing to worry.
Shaan pats her on her shoulder, the hand stays there a little
longer than necessary.
MEHEK
I can’t describe mujhe kya hone
laga, just a very bad feeling...
Jaise bahut bura kuch hone wala
hai...
SHAAN
Ab theek ho na? To batao, kahan se
mili wo Princess wali kahani?
MEHAK
You don’t believe me?
MEHAK (CONT’D)
Don’t even think about it.
SHAAN
Then don’t make me!
SHAAN (CONT’D)
Arre bhai volume kam kar.
The cab drives through the city. We see the city by night.
Car Rig - 2SHOT of Shaan and Mehak. Shaan looks at Mehak with
his heart in his eyes.
MEHAK
Kya dekh rahe ho? Tumhara ghar
aagaya.
SHAAN
Chalo na oopar.
MEHAK
Kyun?
SHAAN
Just! We’ll have a drink. Or three.
MEHAK
(laughs) Nice try, pal! Main achi *
tarah jaanti hoon tum kya soch rahe *
ho! Ek baar ho gaya, toh har baar *
hoga kya? Daru peeke “aati kya *
khandala?” *
SHAAN
You know what? Pichale janam ka to
pata nahin, iss janam mein tum
certified ho. Princess.
MEHAK
Acha baba! Ab jao,
(indicates wet pant)
Sardi lag gayi toh?
(to Cabbie)
Chalo bhaiya!
Mehak blows him a kiss, waves goodbye as the cab pulls away.
Shaan shakes his head with a frustrated smile.
TITLE: PHOBIA *
MEHAK (O.S.) *
Oh God! *
(10:00 am) *
Mehak has a Visual Sim headgear over her head and she is *
holding a tiny gaming remote. She sits on sofa. *
MEHAK *
Bahar nikalo mujhe. Bahut bada hai. *
This place is so big. Bahot. *
MEHEK *
Haan. Online! *
DR. KHANNA *
Very good. Kaisa lag raha hai? *
MEHAK *
Nahin.... Shayad. *
MEHAK *
(focusing on the doctor’s voice) *
Shayad nahin. *
DR. KHANNA *
Aage badho Mehak, pick up *
something. Kya lena hai? *
MEHAK *
Kuch nahi. Band karo isey. *
JOEY *
Chocolates le lo Maasi! *
JOEY *
Biscuit wali chocolate. *
Blue Rev. (mm/dd/yy) 10.
ANUSHA *
Ssshhh Joey! *
ANUSHA (CONT’D) *
Main yahin hoon, Mehek... Tumhe *
kuch nahin hoga... Chalo, chocolate *
lo... *
MEHAK *
Promise? *
ANUSHA *
Mother promise. *
MEHAK (O.S.) *
Anusha! Anusha! Yahan par log *
hain!!! Please please nikalo *
mujhe... *
ELDERLY LADY *
I’m sorry. *
Mehak panics, backs away into the empty aisle, away from the *
smiling old lady and the crowd. The heart icon on the top *
left of the screen starts beating fast. *
MEHAK *
Sorry, sorry, sorry, sorry... *
Blue Rev. (mm/dd/yy) 11.
MEHAK *
Sorry,sorry,sorry,sorry... *
MEHAK *
NOOOOOOOOOO! Meri... mera... attack *
karenge... Maar daalega mujhe! Get *
me out! Get me out! *
The Doctor runs to her and pulls out the head gear and tries *
to help her up, she screams. *
MEHAK (CONT’D) *
Don’t bloody touch me! *
Mehak goes in to her room, and bangs the door shut. Shaan *
looks at Anusha, concerned. Track in on Anusha’s face. *
ANUSHA *
Doctor yeh kya hai? Video games se *
aap theek karenge Mehak ko? *
DR. KHANNA *
Yeh video game nahi hai. Virtual *
Therapy hai. Naya naya introduce *
hua hai... PTSD patients ke liye. *
ANUSHA *
Lekin usse achi tarah maloom hai ki *
wo taxi driver jail mein hai... Wo *
ab usse kuch nahin kar sakta. To *
itna kya darr rahi hai wo? It’s not *
even as if she was... raped! *
(She pauses) *
Sorry. Oh God, I’m sorry... *
SHAAN *
Ek second please doctor, Mehek ko *
kisi institution mein daalne ki *
zaroorat nahin. Please, she is not *
crazy! *
ANUSHA *
Shaan! You have no idea kitna *
difficult hai! Uske saath do din *
reh ke dekho, tumhaari galat fehmi *
once and for all door ho jaayegi! *
Oh God I’m sorry! *
ANUSHA *
Main 6 saal ki theen aur tum do- *
dhai saal ki. Hamare Jammu waale *
bungalow mein wo first floor *
terrace tha, yaad hai? Main tumhe *
utha ke chakkar ghuma rahi theen... *
aur tum phisal gayi mere haathon *
se. Aur giri bhi to kahan? Seedhe *
ground floor pe. *
ANUSHA (CONT’D) *
Correct! Teen stitch. Mummy ne ghar *
pe hi kiye... Tum to ro hi rahi *
theen, par tumse zyada main ro rahi *
thi. Phir jab papa aaye, to hume *
hasane ke liye kya kiya yaad hai? *
ANUSHA (CONT’D) *
(Beat that suggests Kathi) *
ANUSHA (CONT’D) *
Kathi pe...? *
Blue Rev. (mm/dd/yy) 14.
ANUSHA (CONT’D) *
Ghode ki dum pe...? *
ANUSHA (CONT’D) *
Jo...? *
ANUSHA (CONT’D) *
(In tune) Well done! Well done! *
Well done, ghoda dum utha ke, *
dauda! (Laughs) *
(11:00 am) *
ANUSHA *
Mehek... tumhe pata hai na... ki I *
love you? *
MEHAK *
I love you too. *
SHAAN *
I love you three! *
Mehak smiles. She takes a sip of the coffee. Shaan and Anusha *
share a look. Shaan leans forward. Mehek takes another sip. *
ANUSHA *
Last time ghar se bahar kab nikli *
thi pata hai? *
MEHAK *
(tries to act certain) *
Do hafte ho gaye. *
ANUSHA *
Do hafte nahin huey Mehak. Chaar... *
MEHAK *
Chaar hafte. *
Blue Rev. (mm/dd/yy) 15.
ANUSHA *
Chaar mahiney ho gaye. *
MEHAK *
What? Kya bak rahi ho Anusha! *
ANUSHA *
Tumhaare alawa bhi meri kuch *
responsibility hai... (a beat) Joey *
tumhe iss tarah dekhta hai to *
disturb ho jata hai, pata hai na? *
MEHEK *
To uss useless therapist ko kyun *
bulaya? It’s her fault! Maine kuch *
nahin kiya! *
ANUSHA *
Hum log Joey ki baat kar rahe hein *
Mehek! Wo sirf aanth saal ka hai! *
Hume usse normalcy deni chahiye. *
Aur tum *
MEHEK *
You’re blaming me, Anu? Joey ko *
normalcy chahiye to usse apne papa *
se milne do! If that kid gets *
screwed up, it won’t be because of *
me! *
ANUSHA *
Mehek stop it. Tumhe kya lagta hai *
maine koshish nahin kee? Tum jaanti *
ho what I go through jab mera
bachcha chaar chaar ghante ghar ke
bahar khada rehta hai kyunki tum,
is kamrey se darwaaze tak nahin jaa
sakti! Meri mat socho, bachche ki
to socho! Kahan se normalcy le kar
aaoon? Uss virtual supermarket se?? *
MEHAK
I am sorry.
Blue Rev. (mm/dd/yy) 16.
ANUSHA
No Mehak, yahan reh kar tum theek
nahi ho sakti.
Mehak starts to throw a fit. She stands up, drops the coffee
cup on a rug. Shaan quickly picks it up and places it on a
side table.
MEHAK
Matlab? Tum kya chahti ho? Mujhe *
pata hai, tum mujhe pagal khaane *
bhej dena chahti ho! Don’t you dare *
deny it, maine sab suna! *
MEHAK (CONT’D)
(Sleepily) Tum kaun hoti ho mujhe
bhejnewali? Yeh ghar mera bhi hai!
ANUSHA
Aur hamesha rahega... magar tumhe
pehle theek hona hoga.
SHAAN
She’s right Mehak.... Relax...
MEHAK
I’m relaxed. Relaxing... Mujhe sona
hai.
SHAAN
Don’t worry Mehak... Maine sab
arrange kar diya hai...
FADE TO BLACK
DAY 1.
MALHOTRA (O.S.)
Jiah?
MALHOTRA (CONT’D)
Oh!
MALHOTRA (CONT’D)
Miss! Aap theek hain..?
MEHAK
(Mumbling) SHAAN! ANU! Help! Shaan!
Anu! Help! help!help!help!
SHAAN
Oi!
MALHOTRA
Maine kuch nahin kiya! Main to...
Shaan rushes into the room, pushes Malhotra aside and goes up
to Mehak.
SHAAN
Get away from her...
(Talks to Mehek calmly
without touching her)
(MORE)
18.
SHAAN (CONT'D)
ok Mehek, main yahin hoon. Relax,
Mehek, please... breathe.
MEHAK
Help. Help. Help.
Shaan doesn’t pick her up, instead stretches out his hand and
patiently waits for her to take it. Mehak makes an effort to
control her sobs.... She is lying on the ground, moaning...
looking only at Shaan.
MEHEK
You look so young!
MALHOTRA
Aap to dar gayin!
SHAAN
Aap hain kaun aur andar kaise aa
gaye?
MALHOTRA
Darwaza khulla tha. I’m Manu
Malhotra. I’m your next door
neighbor actually. 304.(They shake
hands)
(to Mehak)
Aap sachmuch dar gayi, I’m so
sorry.
Mehak can feel Malhotra’s eyes boring holes through her. She
doesn’t look up at him.
MALHOTRA (CONT’D)
Mujhe laga Jiah wapas aa gayi!
SHAAN
Manu, if you don’t mind...
(indicates door)
Hum log abhi abhi aaye hain, thoda
settle ho jaayen?
MALHOTRA
Sure. So sorry. Kuch madad chahiye
to please don’t hesitate. I am just
a doorbell away.
MALHOTRA (CONT’D)
(To Mehek) Aap ke liye chai bana
doon?
SHAAN
No thanx.
MEHEK
Paani... paani do.
MALHOTRA
(to Mehak)
Main deta hoon paani...
SHAAN
I got this, man. Just please go.
MALHOTRA
Chai nahi to Coffee? Anything?
SHAAN
Thanks Manu. Thanks a lot.
MEHEK
Has raha hai mera ghar kahan gaya?
Shaan picks out two small Bisleri bottles from the carton and
comes to Mehak, who still looks rattled. She takes one of the
proffered bottles.
SHAAN
Chala gaya. Mehek... wo chala gaya,
relax... Look at me...
MEHEK
Has raha tha. Pani diya. Ghar kahan
gaya?
20.
SHAAN
Thode dinon ke liye yehi tumhaara
ghar hai.
MEHAK (ANGRY)
Ek saal ho gaya. Theek nahi hui ek
saal ho gaya na?
SHAAN
Nahin. Ek saal nahin hua....
Mehek... Yeh mere dost ka ghar hai.
Khaali pada tha... jitne din
chahiye hum yahan reh sakte hain.
MEHAK
Hum?
SHAAN
Tum baba, tum!
SHAAN (0.S)
Masterchef, please aaiye? Nice and
spacious kitchen, huh?
MEHAK
(shrugs indifference)
Anda bhi boil nahin kar sakti.
SHAAN
Don’t worry. Main bahut accha
khaana banata hoon.
SHAAN (CONT’D)
Let’s see what’s in here...
21.
SHAAN (CONT’D)
Ugh, Isko band hi rakhte hain...
They walk towards the last room at the end of the corridor.
Shaan opens the door and walks in, Mehak doesn’t follow. She
halts at the cabinet.
MEHAK
Band Karo!
SHAAN (O.S.)
Nahin. Vitamin D ki sakht zaroorat
hai tumhe. Din raat andhere mein
baithogi to vampire jaisi soorat ho
jaayegi tumhaari.
MEHAK
Jaise bhi hogi tumse behtar hogi.
SHAAN
Maine kab mana kiya?
She runs her fingers along the cabinet, and a thick layer of
dust is peeled off revealing the dark brown wood below.
She opens the cabinet, her hands tremble a bit from the
sedatives.
MEHAK
Yeh sab kis ka hai?
SHAAN
Mujhe lagta hai us ladki ka hi
hoga, kya naam bataya us ‘Manu’ ne,
Jiah na? Jo nahi chahiye, phenk do.
MEHAK
Aur woh wapis aa gayi lene toh?
SHAAN (O.S.)
Doubt it. It seems raato raat nikal
gayi yahan se. Gaayab!
MEHAK
Gaayab?
SHAAN
Rent diye bagair hi bhaag gayi,
deposit lene bhi nahin aayi
wapas...
Mehak stands up and places the bird back in the cabinet. She
turns and almost collides into Shaan. He was standing a bit
too close to her.
SHAAN (CONT’D)
Sorry.
Backs away.
SHAAN (CONT’D)
Chalo, thodi saaf safai kar
lenge...
MEHAK
Kar lenge nahin, kar loongi. Main.
Tumhe kaam pe nahin jaana?
SHAAN
Nahin aaj chutti le leta hoon...
I’ll just help you settle in.
MEHAK
(Interrupts) No need. Main apne
busy schedule se thoda time nikaal
loongi!
CUT TO:
23.
Shaan wears his shoes, Mehek stands a little away from the
door.
MEHAK
Rent kitna hai?
SHAAN (O.S.)
Don’t worry about it.
MEHAK (O.S.)
Shaan.
SHAAN
Tum jaldi se theek ho jao, phir
apni paintings bech ke dher saara
paisa kamana, phir mujhe wapas kar
dena, theek hai?
MEHAK
Main jaanti hoon tumne aur Anusha
ne mujhe drug kiya.
SHAAN
Arre yaar politely poochta to tum
aati kya?
MEHAK
(bites her tongue)
Agar mere motor skills theek tarah
se wapas nahin aaye to main tumhe
kabhi maaf nahin karoongi. Haso
mat! Jao ab!
SHAAN
Dawai mat bhoolna...
Shaan shuts the door. Mehek double locks it and looks out
through peephole. We hear the sound of the lift door opening
and closing.
Mehak locks all the locks on the front door. And puts the
chain. She looks back at the house. As she stares at this
place, we track back leaving her at the entrance door. She
looks alone and vulnerable.
(SONG - MONTAGE, One slow track shot) (REF- LITTLE MAN WHO
WASN’T THERE- mildred bailey)
The Kitchen dinner table has blood red ketchup stains - she
wipes it clean.
She opens the fridge (older model) that is against the wall
adjacent to the door. A tomato ketchup bottle has spilt over,
she is cleaning it.
The Master bedroom has a queen size bed w/ side tables, built
in cupboard, large dressing table w/ mirror.
Her mobile rings, its her sister. Mehak cuts the call.
(03:00 pm)
She uses the hand spray to clean the grime of the tiles and
wash basin. She lifts the drain gates for all the dirt to
wash away.
She sprays the mirror cabinet up and down, a ring drops from
top of the cabinet and falls next the open drain. (Song
abruptly stops)
She quickly bends, when She stands, she washes the gloves and
the ring. As the grime clears we see the true color of the
ring - It’s a beautiful ruby red ring.
Mehak removes her gloves and tries the ring on. Its fits
perfectly!
MEHAK
Fuck.
She opens the mirror cabinet, looks around, finds an old nail
filer. She uses the filer to slide the ring out. Applying
soap first. She keeps at it till she groans in pain.
(04:00 pm)
Her pov - we look at the building common area for the first
time, it lies empty. No one in sight.
26.
She quietly unlocks her main door. She opens the door slowly,
trying hard not make any sound.
The common area expands further. Vertigo shot. At the far end
of the common area are garbage bins - blue and green. A
makeshift notice, written with marker - ‘PLEASE TRASH HERE
ONLY’.
She finally lands one foot out, but then the Sound of the
Lift opening on her floor. NIKI - A young, bespectacled girl
in her early teens, steps out, humming a song (ek ladki ko
dekha...). She smiles at Mehak. Mehak steps back in and slams
the door shut.
(04:30 pm)
Mehak opens the bedroom cupboard to place her clothes in; she
notices a couple of dresses of the earlier tenant still
hanging inside the cupboard. She removes them to make room
for her clothes (Saree is amongst them) Places them on the
bed, including a pretty bathrobe and a vanity kit. One of the
dresses is an air hostess's uniform.
27.
She puts back the costume along with the rest of Jiah’s
clothes. She opens Jiah’s vanity kit, and that is when she
sees the diary - Jiah’s diary. She picks it up and starts to
skim through when...
(04:30 pm)
Mehak peeps out. Through the Corridor showcase she sees: THE
MAIN DOOR IS AJAR. She picks up the first thing that she can
use as a weapon and walks down the corridor but when she
turns the corner the door is shut. Mehek stands absolutely
still. Then she thinks what if some one is inside? She
cautiously walks forward and looks at the empty living
room... empty kitchen. She goes to the door. It is indeed
locked. She looks out through the peephole. Empty foyer. As
she is looking, she hears laughter. She turns. It seems to be
coming from the guest bedroom. She clutches her weapon even
tighter and moves towards the room.
Mehak enters the room, tries the light switch but it doesn’t
work. She fiddles with the bulb on a lamp and it comes on.
The room is primarily a storage space, with not much space to
move around in. And dusty as hell.
She moves towards the wall and places her ear to the wall,
she has found the source. Someone in the neighboring
apartment is giggling. It sounds like a man.
28.
Suddenly there is faint tap on the wall from the other end.
Mehak quickly steps out of the room and shuts the door behind
her. Lights go off.
(MAGIC HOUR)
Mehak stands near the french windows and looks out. She takes
a step forward and pulls aside the sliding window.
Startled, Mehak shuts the window and draws the curtain (jump
axis).
(08:00 pm)
Top angle MCU - Mehak has her face under water, eyes closed,
gradually bubbles stop coming from her nostrils, all is
still.
She hears a strange sound, her eyes spring open and she gets
up. The sound came from the loft above. Sounds like someone
or something moved. She waits. The sound comes again.
Blue Rev. (mm/dd/yy) 29.
She hesitantly looks up, she can’t see anything, she decides
to get a closer look. Stands on top of the wash basin and
looks in. The loft lies empty. Enough space for someone to
crawl into. An old rusted geyser lies in a corner of the loft
and some unused paint cans and brushes. Suddenly the geyser
makes a rumbling sound, startling Mehak. She almost loses her
balance, but holds on to the edge of the loft with dear life.
MEHAK *
Shaan?! *
SHAAN *
Hey Mehak! Relax It’s me. *
MEHAK *
Ok, wait, wait, wait... *
She runs back towards her room. Shaan pushes open the door. *
He steps in to see a fleeting glimpse of Mehak as she *
disappears down the corridor. *
Mehak steps in to the living room, her hair still wet. She’s *
in comfortable clothes. She sees Shaan snooping through her *
laptop. *
SHAAN *
I know you want to... *
MEHAK *
No thanks. Main yahan baithkar *
khaana khaati hoon. Tum mujhe *
entertain karo. *
(beat) *
Naach chamiya, naach! *
Mehak moves towards the kitchen table, but Shaan cuts her *
path and encourages her to dance. *
She hesitantly grabs his hand; he pulls her out into the *
common area. *
Blue Rev. (mm/dd/yy) 31.
The music fading away, The sound of the lift opening throws
Mehak into complete panic mode.
She disengages and runs back into the house. Shaan looks on
with disappointed.
(11:00 pm)
SHAAN
Tumhara reward...
Mehak sighs.
SHAAN (CONT’D)
Kha lo, dopahar se kuch nahin khaya
na?
She manages a weak smile, and takes the food. And takes a
bite out of it. The frown on her face disappears.
MEHAK
Oh my god. This is delicious.
SHAAN
Paas hi mein hai. Home delivery
karte hain.
SHAAN (CONT’D)
Medical, Kirana, Bakery, Doodhwala,
Sabziwali. Bai ka figure out karta
hoon...
MEHAK
Nahin, nahin...No bai.
32.
MEHAK (CONT’D)
Main kabhi theek nahi hogi Shaan.
SHAAN
Aisa nahi hota hai yaar. What comes
down must go up. Law of physics.
MEHAK
(Smiles sadly)
Ulta bol rahe ho.
SHAAN
Sach bol raha hoon...
SHAAN (CONT’D)
Duniya ke kai bade artists,
philosophers, entertainers ko
agoraphobia tha...
MEHAK
Kaun?
SHAAN
Barbara Streisand, singer. Kim
Basinger, actress. Aur Freud bhi!
MEHAK
Ek bhi Indian naam nahin hai na...
SHAAN
(Laughs)
Tumhe gore logon ka phobia hua
hai...
MEHAK
So funny.
SHAAN
Research karta hoon, hundred
percent koi na koi to milega jise
agoraphobia hua tha!
(beat)
Ok seriously, you know that TV chef
Paula Deen? Woh ghar se bahar nikal
nahin paati thi, to ghar ke andar
baith kar cooking shuru kar diya.
Aaj famous hai cooking ke liye!
Blue Rev. (mm/dd/yy) 33.
MEHAK
Par main toh...
SHAAN
Anda bhi boil nahin kar sakti. I
know, but paint toh kar sakti ho
na! you got 60 grand for your last *
painting. *
MEHAK
Woh paisa toh Anusha ne kharch kar
diya hoga. Mere treatment par. And
you think I haven’t tried Shaan?
Nahi hota mujhse painting yaar.
SHAAN
Be positive Mehak. Mental block
hai, nikal jaayega. You just have
to keep trying.
(beat)
Kitne saare offers hain!
MEHAK
What the hell? Tumhe kaise pata ki
offers hain? Tumne... mere mails
padhe..?
SHAAN
No! Page khulla tha to maine sirf
upar se dekha...
MEHAK
Shaan really! How dare you!
SHAAN
Relax Mehak, it’s no big...
SHAAN (CONT’D)
(Snaps feral)
Do not tell me to relax! I hate
that word!
MEHAK
Main tumhaari personal cheezen
dekhun to kaisa lagega tumhein?
Huh?
34.
She fiddles with his bag, starts to pull things out (design
plans, blue prints, a swiss arm) when she sees a change of
clothes.
MEHAK (CONT’D)
Kahin ja rahe ho?
SHAAN
(Awkward)
Maine socha ki...aaj raat ruk jaata
hoon. Nai jagah hai...
Mehek’s look stops him in his tracks. She starts putting the
stuff back when a pack of condoms falls out. Mehek is
enraged.
MEHAK
Yeh kya hai? Kya socha tumne? Mehek
ka toh dimag harab ho gaya hai. Toh
kisi bakre ki tarah khilao pilao
hasao, dance karo, do char baatein
karo, phir yeh?
MEHAK (CONT’D)
Kahan jayegi bhaagke. Ghar se toh
nikal nahi sakti. Get out of my
house Shaan!
SHAAN
Mehek... please re...
MEHEK
Relax bologe to zabaan kheench
loongi!
SHAAN
Mehek... is ghar mein teen kamre
hain. Tum bedroom mein so jao, main
kahin aur so loonga. I only feel
bad ki mujhe yeh bolna pad raha
hai.
MEHEK
Kiske liye hai?
35.
SHAAN
(turns back to her)
Sorry?
MEHEK
Condoms! Kiske liye hai?
SHAAN
Tum nahin jaanti usse.
MEHAK
Toh Theek hai. Wapis mat aana
kabhi.
SHAAN
Kal atta hoon.
(11:30 pm)
Shaan presses the lift button, and waits for the elevator.
Mehak quietly opens the front door. Shaan turns on hearing
the sound. Mehak peeps out at him, the door open only a
couple of inches.
MEHAK
Shaan... Thank you.
SHAAN
(smiles)
Jaa raha hoon isliye?
MEHAK
I’m sorry Shaan.
SHAAN
It’s cool, Mehak. And you know agar
tumhe bura lagta hai toh, I can
stop seeing her. It’s nothing
serious.
MEHAK
Oh, Jaate jaate yeh garbage wahan
phenk doge please?
SHAAN (ANGER)
No Mehak! Bahut ho gaya Mehak. Tum
khud karlo.
MEHAK
Meri help nahi karoge?
SHAAN
Help hi kar raha hoon. Kam se kam
itna to kar sakti ho na khud ke
liye?
MEHAK
(Displeased)
Fine.
The lift eats him up. Mehak shuts her front door.
MEHAK
Samajhta kya hai apne aap ko? Uske
bagair main kachra nahin phenk
sakti?
MEHAK
You are the sweetest... *
It’s not Shaan, it’s the crazy lady she saw earlier in the *
compound. She stares at Mehak. She is dressed in a long *
nightgown. *
GUL *
Hormuz idhar hai kya! *
Mehak is taken aback for a moment. Mehak bangs the door shut. *
Blue Rev. (mm/dd/yy) 37.
GUL (CONT’D) *
Usey bahar bheko. Kitni baar bola *
ki Hormuz ko chupne keliye jagah *
mat do. Hormuz bahar aav hamnaj. *
MEHAK *
Yahaan koi nahin hai. *
GUL (O.S.) *
Jiah! Wapas aa gayi? Is time tereko *
jaroor maar daalega! Hormuz bhi *
nahi bacha payega tere ko! *
She walks away. Mehak looks through the peep hole at her *
standing outside Malhotra’s door. She rings the bell, he *
opens it half asleep. *
GUL (CONT’D) *
Hormuz idhar hai? *
MALHOTRA *
Gul, Ghar mein pankha hai na? *
GUL *
Haan hai! *
MALHOTRA *
Haan to pankhe pe dekha? Wahin *
baitha ghoom raha hoga! *
GUL *
Doctor ne mana kiya hai toh bhi *
idhar udhar bhatakta rehta hai. *
MALHOTRA *
Kaun blame karega bechare ko. *
GUL *
Hain, You think this is a joke? *
MALHOTRA *
No, I think, it’s really late babe. *
CUT TO: *
DAY 2
COLLECTOR (O.S.)
Hello! Mujhe pata hai aap ghar pe
hain. Please Darvaaza kholiye! Ms.
Jiah Khuranna.
MEHAK
Woh abhi yahaan nahi rehti hai.
COLLECTOR (O.S.)
303, Overlook Apartments yehi hai
na?
MEHAK
Lekin main...
40.
COLLECTOR (O.S.)
Madam, aapka 52 thousand one
hundred and twenty seven rupees ka
outstanding hai...paanch mahine se
credit card payment nahin kiya...
MEHAK
Main Jiah nahin hoon..... Wo pehle
rehti thi yahan.
COLLECTOR
Aise hi aap ki baat kaise maan lu?
ID dikhaiye Madam!
Mehak’s pov - He tries to put his leg in... She slams the
door shut with all her might. Luckily pulls his leg out at
the last moment, but the door slams his foot. He screams in
pain. And bangs the door.
MEHAK
Go away! Go away. Go away....
COLLECTOR (O.S)
Khol! Payment nahin kiya to andar
ghus ke samaan le jaayenge hum log!
(01:00 pm)
41.
CU - She ties the other end to a coat rack next to the door.
She tugs at it a couple of times, to ensure the knot will
hold.
NIKI
Hello Madam! Garbage yahan chodna
mana hai!
ELS with dustbin in f/g. Niki picks the bags up and dumps
them in the bin for her.
Blue Rev. (mm/dd/yy) 42.
NIKI (CONT’D)
(yells)
You are welcome!
MEHAK (O.S.)
Thank you!
Niki smiles.
(01:30 pm) *
Mehak sits on the bed, has had a bath, changed her clothes, *
hair still tied up with a towel. *
MEHEK *
Anu, it’s me. Maine teen baar *
tumhara phone nahin uthaya to tum *
bhi wahi karogi? Main to beemar *
hoon, what’s your excuse? Anyway I *
love you. Aur abhi abhi main khud *
garbage bahar tak rakh ke aayi! *
Call me back. *
Beat. *
MEHAK *
Captain Rajani is just horrible! *
It’s taken me months to realize *
that every time I ask him what the *
temperature oustide is before *
landing he looks at my boobs and *
says 36. *
(MORE)
Blue Rev. (mm/dd/yy) 43.
MEHAK (CONT'D)
And I have announced it in *
Chandigarh, in Pune, I have *
announced it in Nagpur. The *
temperature outside is 36degrees *
centigrade. If Manu finds out about *
this he will flip out. And kill me! *
At the end of it, She suddenly freezes. The diary falls out *
of her hand. She keeps looking at something at the foot of *
the bed. We can’t quite see what she is seeing. She backs off *
the bed slowly, on the brink of fear. She pulls out her phone *
from her pocket and calls Shaan, all the time keeping an eye *
on the spot. Shaan answers the call after a few rings. It is *
on speaker phone. *
SHAAN *
Hi Em...... all ok? *
MEHEK *
I don’t think so. Mere bistar mein *
billi hai. *
SHAAN *
Aur tum kahan ho? *
MEHEK *
Bedroom mein. Matlab... Shaan, *
Mujhe pata nahin ki yahan sachmuch *
billi hai ya sirf mujhe dikh rahi *
hai..? *
SHAAN *
Mehek, suno, kuch awaaz karo, agar *
billi behri nahin hui to bhaag *
jaayegi..... *
MEHEK *
Aur nahin bhaagi to? *
SHAAN *
To main bhaag ke wahan aa *
jaaoonga.... *
Beat. *
MEHEK *
Kal ke liye I’m sorry. *
SHAAN *
I know. Me too. *
MEHEK *
Ruko ek minute. *
Blue Rev. (mm/dd/yy) 44.
Mehek barks at the cat. Her eyes dart... We cut to her OTS *
for the first time, there is no cat there. *
MEHEK (CONT’D) *
Gayi gayi! Sachmuch ki billi thi! *
SHAAN *
(laughs) *
Good. Chalo, shaam ko milta hoon. *
She cuts the call and quickly shuts the window. Latches it *
tight. She looks outside. *
OTS Mehak, her hand is reaching for the pages, when out of *
focus in b/g, a pair of feet run behind her. As she turns to *
look, OTS becomes a pov - of the feet running by. They went *
in to the bathroom. *
Mehak quickly crawls out the other side of the bed and runs *
out of the bedroom. *
The camera watches her from bathroom door, Mehak turns back *
to glance, the camera chases after her - she bangs the *
bedroom door shut on camera. *
OTS - Mehak shuts door and locks it, someone bangs the door *
from inside the bedroom, making Mehak jump. *
She reaches the door (Cam OTS again) She unlocks the door *
quickly, constantly looking over her shoulder. *
NIKI *
Hey there? Are you okay? *
MEHAK *
Andar baithna hai to..? *
NIKI *
No thanks ya. Actually, ghar ki *
chaabi bhool gayi mein, aur mere *
parents kaam pe hain... *
NIKI (CONT’D) *
Are you ok? *
MEHAK *
Andar aa ke wait karo... *
NIKI *
Hi I’m Niki. *
Blue Rev. (mm/dd/yy) 46.
NIKI (CONT’D) *
Ram ram. Main Niki hoon. *
MEHEK *
Mehek. *
NIKI *
Cool... Tum theek to ho na? *
MEHEK *
Shayad... but maybe... Mere bedroom *
mein koi hai. *
NIKI *
Matlab... koi jise tum jaanti ho, *
right? *
MEHAK *
Nahin. I think... Billi hai. *
NIKI *
Whaaaaat? Billi se darti ho? *
MEHAK *
Bahut. *
NIKI *
Black cat with white spots? *
NIKI (CONT’D) *
Building mein ghoomti rehti hai, *
khidkiyon se andar ghus jaati hai. *
Thali aur spoon do. *
MEHAK *
Kya? *
NIKI *
Jungle mein shikari kya karte hain? *
Tigers ko awaaz karke bhagate *
hain... *
(MORE)
Blue Rev. (mm/dd/yy) 47.
NIKI (CONT'D)
khule area mein jahan se wo shoot *
ka saken... I hate hunters. I love *
tigers. *
2 shot, OTS Mehak - Niki turns back and the two walk down
corridor, Mehak behind Niki. They turn the corner.
Niki walks towards the door unafraid. She shoots open the
bedroom door and enters making a lot of noise. Silence. Fear
builds up on Mehak’s face.
MEHAK
Niki? Niki?
MEHAK (CONT’D)
Tum cheekhin kyun?
NIKI
Bed ke neeche spider hai...
MEHAK
Aur?
NIKI
Aur kuch bhi nahin hai.
MEHAK
Koi nahin hai?
The bedroom and bathroom lie empty. Niki enters behind Mehak.
48.
NIKI
Bathroom, clear. Cupboard, clear.
Bed ke neeche, (shudders) spider.
Tum to aise dar rahi ho jaise tumne
bhoot dekha!
(02:30 pm)
NIKI
Tumse milke bahut khushi hui. Mere
koi friends nahin hain, sab mujhe
freak bolte hain, par tum to mere
se bhi zyada.
(Low whistle and Imitates
Obelix gesture - the
romans are crazy)
MEHAK
Mujhe agoraphobia hai.
(Beat)
Could you get the ice please?
NIKI
Agoraphobia? Sounds exotic. So
basically tum kabhi Taj Mahal nahin
ja sakti, right?!
MEHAK
Taj Mahal chodo, main Gateway of
India tak bhi nahin ja sakti...
NIKI
Tum theek jagah aayi ho, iss
building mein crazy logon ki
monopoly hai. Mannu, hanste rehta
hai, creepiest smile ever. Gool
auntie apne husband Hormuz ko
dhoondte rehti hai. Maine to kabhi
usko nahin dekha.
NIKI (CONT’D)
Pata nahin wo sach mein hai, ya
Gool auntie ki marbles gul hain.
Aur ab tum.
(03:00 pm)
2Shot MLS - The girls are seated on the divan drinking their *
choco shake. Niki gets up and starts walking around. Knife *
lies to one side in f/g, on side table next to side sofa. *
NIKI *
So, tumhe taj mahal phobia bachpan *
se hai? *
MEHAK *
(Shakes her head no) Main artist *
hoon. Paintings banati theen. *
MEHAK (CONT’D) *
Is ghar main jo rehti thi... Jiah *
right? Tum usey bhi jaanti thi? *
NIKI *
Yeah, of course. She was wierd. *
Mannu aur Jiah apne aap ko Ram *
Leela samajhte the...but unke ghar *
se jo awaazen aati thi was more *
like Ravan and Hanuman fighting. *
Cheekhna, chillana, platen todna *
aur uske baad... (zips her lips) *
Parental control. *
MEHAK
Parental control?
NIKI
(Explains) Very loud lovemaking!
Scarred forever.
MEHAK
Kya hua usey? Maine suna woh gayab
ho gayi...
NIKI
That Manu...
50.
NIKI (CONT’D)
Oh great, chalo, mere parents aa
gaye...
MEHAK
Come again.
(05:00 pm)
OTS Mehak - She yells in horror, backing away from the wall.
Light shoots through.
MALHOTRA (O.S.)
Oh God! I’m terribly sorry, aap
theek to hain?
MEHAK
No. No! I’m fine.
MALHOTRA (O.S.)
Oh thank god! Main aapke side ka
wall repair karne aa jaoon?
MEHAK
Nai, nai. Koi zaroorat nahin.
MALHOTRA (O.S.)
Are you sure?
MEHAK
Yes. I’m okay.
MALHOTRA (O.S.)
Yeh naye building bahar se to theek
lagte hain par andar se sab sade
hue hote hain...
(06:00 pm)
LS profile shot - she shuts the diary, Mehak can’t bear the
intimacy part.
52.
Low angle frontal - She pulls out a photo that sticks out
from the diary. On the back is written in pink lipstick - ‘We
are hitched.’
Top Angle OTS of Mehak, with ring in one hand and photo in
the other - Jiah and Malhotra together, holding up ring in a
selfie.
(Magic Hour)
(7:00pm)
Blue Rev. (mm/dd/yy) 53.
SHAAN
Open up, it’s me.
He removes his phone, dials her number - she doesn’t pick up.
He removes the spare keys from his laptop bag and opens the
door. The chain lock isn’t on.
SHAAN (CONT’D)
Mehak. Dinner!
SHAAN
Mehak!
SHAAN
Jaanti ho kis Indian celebrity ko
agoraphobia hai? Main andar aa raha
hoon...?
SHAAN
Mehak! Are you in there?
SHAAN (CONT’D)
Jawab do Mehek! Mehek?
Steadicam - The door swings open, Cam follows Shaan in. The
bathroom is empty. Tilt down as Shaan looks - Mehak’s phone
lies on the bathroom floor which is covered in her vomit.
SHAAN
Oh god no! Mehak?
Suddenly her hand falls into frame from the top. Right in
front of Shaan’s face, dripping red paint. He jumps out of
his skin in fright, backing away, he looks up to see...
INTERMISSION.
(9:30pm) *
SHAAN (O.S.) *
Cam 1 - check. *
Blue Rev. (mm/dd/yy) 55.
SHAAN (O.S.) *
Cam 2 - check. *
SHAAN (O.S.) *
CAM 3 - Check. *
Birds eye view of the kitchen, Also empty. We can see a part *
of the corridor outside the kitchen entrance. *
SHAAN (O.S.) *
Cam 4 - check. *
Birds eye view of the common area. All the front doors are *
decorated with diyas and rangoli. *
SHAAN (O.S.) *
CAM 5 - Check. *
SHAAN (O.S.) *
Cam 6 - Damn it. *
We can hear Shaan tinkering around with the camera and then *
the visual clears up. *
SHAAN (CONT’D) *
Ok... saare camere on hain.. Ab se *
jo kuch tumhe dikhega, wo iss mein *
record ho jayega... *
MEHAK *
Bhoot bhi record hoga? *
MEHAK (CONT’D) *
Shaan, I’m very sure... Iss ghar *
mein gadbad hai.... Shayad Jiah ki *
aatma... *
SHAAN *
Mehek?? Tumhaare paas kya proof hai *
ki Jiah mar chuki hai? For all you *
know, wo iss waqt kisi nightclub *
mein dance kar rahi hogi, apni *
zindagi jee rahi hogi. Wo yahan *
rehti thi, ab nahin rehti. That’s *
all. You just had a panic attack! *
Shaan enters frame (pov becomes 2 shot) and sits down next to *
Mehak, trying to comfort her. Camera continues to track in. *
MEHAK *
No. Wo mar chuki hai... *
SHAAN *
Kya dekha tumne...? *
MEHAK *
Maine Jiah ko dekha Shaan! Bathroom *
mein padi hui thi, bahut khoon tha *
wahan..... I think she was *
attacked....... *
NIKI
Hello Mehek! (To Shaan) Hi, Niki.
Niki’s got a box of Indian sweets that she hands to Shaan and
walks in. Shot becomes OTS of Shaan.
MEHAK
Thank you Niki.
NIKI
Mera code kaisa laga Mehek? Teen
baar knock matlab, it’s me.
Doorbell bajne se tumhe tension ho
jaata hai na?
Mehak’s OTS is now 2 shot of her and Niki, with Shaan in b/g -
NIKI (CONT’D)
Whoa! Yeh kya? Don’t tell me! Yeh
sab billi ki wajah se?
MEHAK
Err, yeh... Billi nahin, wo doosra,
tumhe bataya tha na...
NIKI
Doosra...? You mean bhoot?
SHAAN
Hello? Koi bhoot woot nahin hai.
Yeh cc cameras security ke liye
hain. Mehek aur main kuch important
baat kar rahe the, please baad mein
aana.
NIKI
Wookay. (To Mehek) I thought tumhe
company chahiye hogi...
MEHAK
Err Niki, thodi der mein aana, for
some cold coffee?
58.
SHAAN
(To Mehek) Is she old enough to
drink coffee?
NIKI
Excuse me, main college mein padhti
hoon! Political Science!
SHAAN
Good for you! Ja ke padhai karo.
NIKI
Okay Uncle. (To Mehek) Give me a
call.
SHAAN
Please Mehak, random logon ko aise
ghar mein ghusne mat do...
MEHAK
Random nahin, bahut sweet ladki
hai. Itna rudely kyon behave kar
rahe ho?
SHAAN
I was not rude Mehek. Hum log baat
kar rahe the and she just barged
in! Ab jaake poori building ko pata
nahin kya kya bolegi. Main tumhaare
ache ke liye keh raha hoon.
MEHAK
Mujhe tumhaare behaviour mein acha
kam control zyaada dikh raha hai.
Chalo!
SHAAN
To ab mujhe care aur control ke
beech ka fark tumse seekhna padega?
MEHAK
Mujhse aise baat karne ki koi
zaroorat nahin./ Don’t patronise
me.
(11:00pm)
MEHEK
Bas, muhe yahan nahin rehna, mujhe
apne ghar jaana hai Shaan
SHAAN
Do din bhi nahin hue hain Mehek...
Tum dheere dheere comfortable ho
jaaogi. Nai jahgah hai..
MEHAK
Nai puraane ki baat nahin hai
Shaan. Wahan ghar se bahar nikalte
darr lagta tha. Yahan to ghar ke
andar bhi darr lag raha hai. Main
kahan jaaoon Shaan?
(01:00am)
MEHAK
Shaan! Where are you?
SHAAN
Kya kar rahi ho Mehek?
MEHAK
Wo yahan hai, abhi thi! Maine dekha
usse... Mere peeche thi... usne
mujhpar haath daala!
SHAAN
Tumhaare peeche main tha Mehek!
That was MY HAND! Tumhari awaaz sun
kar main bhaaga
MEHAK
NO, NO, NO that is bull shit!!
CHECK THE CAMERAS!!!
CUT TO:
(02:00am)
All we can see is Shaan run out of the bathroom towards the
living room when she calls out his name. He was behind her,
It was his hand stretching out to grab her shoulder, not
Jiah’s.
DAY 3
(09:00am)
DR. KHANNA
Mehek, GHOSTS ARE NOT REAL. Iss
ghar mein koi bhoot nahin hai -
tumne jo kuch bhi dekha, sirf
tumhaara bhram hai...... Tumhaare
andar reality aur imagination ke
beech jee tod ladai chal rahi hai.
Please remember - agar tumne apne
dar ko confront nahin kiya, to wo
aise hi badhta jaayega....
62.
OTS Mehak - Dr. Nisha Khanna sits before her, with Shaan by
the side. Nisha picks up the headgear as she speaks.
DR.MAKHIJA
Tum iss phobia se chutkara chahti
ho na?
MEHAK
Haan.
DR. KHANNA
To phir mujhe trust karo Mehek.
OTS 2 Shot of Shaan and Dr. Khanna, with the same visual on
her laptop but with other options and parameters that she can
control. Mehak seen in b/g. Mehak’s heart rate is fast.
Dr. Nisha Khanna and Shaan stare at the same visual on the
computer screen, but they can’t see any car. Just a few
people walking. (10-15 people)
ANUSHA (O.S.)
Sorry I’m late! Chal!
ANUSHA (CONT’D)
Get in, ghar nahin jaana kya?
OTS Mehak from back seat - Mehak tries to get out, but the
car door won’t open. She moves towards the drivers seat door,
locked. Cold air starts to fill the car, she starts to
shiver, the windows are fogging up.
MEHAK
Get me out of here. Help.
64.
Mehak turns to the car door to get out, when suddenly she
hears heavy breathing and a moan from behind her. She senses
someone is in the backseat. She slowly starts to turn around.
MEHAK (CONT’D)
Help me! Get me out. Please!
MEHAK
Bas! Bas! Bas! Mujhe bahar nikalo!
Koi sun raha hai? MUJHE NIKALO!
OTS Nisha and Shaan with Mehak in b/g. In the computer screen
there is nothing going wrong, no one attacking her. The video
is playing as it was recorded. Mehak’s heart rate is off the
charts.
Dr. Khanna hits the pause button. The video pauses. But,
Mehak is screaming. Shaan tries to calm her down.
SHAAN
Easy Mehak, ek minute, main utaar
raha hoon! Don’t move...
JIAH/SHAAN
Tumhara vahi hashar hoga jo mera
hua hai...
Mehak lifts up her hand, she holds a kitchen knife. And she
slashes away at Jiah. Pan to window where blood falls.
OTS Mehak, she has pulled her headgear off, Tilt Down to
Shaan’s hand is bleeding.
CUT TO:
(10:30 am)
(10:30 am)
Frontal 2 shot, towards lift - The lift door opens. The two
of them step in.
CUT TO:
(11:00 am)
OTS Mehak - She opens the medical cabinet, her face seen in
mirror, she picks up her liquid medicine bottle, this time,
she doesn’t use the eye dropper, just takes a clean swig.
Blue Rev. (mm/dd/yy) 66.
She feels better. Puts back the bottle and shuts cabinet. In
the mirror she sees Anusha.
JIAH (O.S.)
You have reached the voice mail of
The Khurannas. Please leave a
message after the beep.
MEHAK
Err, hi. Hello, my name is Mehak.
Main actually, er... Jiah ke baare
mein main aapse kuch baat karna
chahti hoon... Please mujhe phone
kariyega. Mujhe pata hai, mujhe
pata hai ki Jiah ke saath kya hua
aur... uski maut ka zimmedar kaun
hai...
MEHAK
Mera number hai 9867821212. Urgent
hai. Please call...
(01:00 pm) *
Blue Rev. (mm/dd/yy) 67.
OTS Mehak, she peeps through hole, the painting she used to *
cover hole, lies beside her. Malhotra can be heard screaming *
and breaks down again. *
MALHOTRA (O.S.) *
Aargh! Hahahahahahah! Aaaargh! *
Hahahahahaha! Aaargh! *
MALHOTRA (CONT’D) *
Jiah, meri Jiah, sirf meri Jiah... *
Main tumhaare bina jee nahin sakta! *
Maine kabhi tumhe hurt nahin karna *
chahta tha magar tum... Tumne mujhe *
majboor kiya Jiah! *
MALHOTRA (CONT’D) *
Mujhe maaf kar do Jiah! Mujhe maaf *
kar do... Oh God maine kya kiya! I *
am so sorry. I am so sorry. *
(01:30 pm)
She takes out her phone and dials Shaan. When something grabs
at her phone and sends it flying from her hand.
Mehak’s pov (block vertical frame) - And from her upside down
view, she sees the bathroom door slowly opening - a blade
cutter with a red and yellow case lies on the bathroom tiles
covered in blood.
(02:00 pm)
(02:00 pm) *
MEHAK *
Iss-se Jiah ka khoon hua hai. *
NIKI *
Iss drawing se? *
MEHAK *
No Niki! Iss blade cutter se! Wo *
mujhe shayad yehi batane ki koshish *
kar rahi hai... Jaanti ho yeh blade *
cutter kiska hai? *
NIKI *
Weird Mannu? *
MEHAK *
Sirf weird nahin hai. He’s crossed *
the line. *
NIKI *
OMG!!! Jiah ne tumhe yeh sab *
bataya? *
MEHAK *
Bataya nahin, dikhaya! Un dono ke *
beech kuch hua jiski wajah se Manu *
ne Jiah ko maar dala. *
NIKI *
Nah! Wo thoda Majnu mahiwal type ka *
hai par khoon nahin kar sakta yaar! *
MEHAK *
I’ll prove it to you. Uske paas yeh *
blade cutter ab bhi hai. Maine *
dekha hai. Hum Police ko de *
denge... Forensic check hoga aur us *
par Jiah ke khoon ke traces *
milenge, I’m very sure. *
MEHIAK *
Niki, you have to help me/mera *
yakeen karo! Mujhe apne aap ko yeh *
prove karna hai... ki I’m not... *
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NIKI *
Genuinely Cuckoo? *
MEHAK *
(Nods) Aaj subah maine Shaan ko... *
(suddenly realises) Tum jao.......! *
You must leave. *
NIKI *
It’s Ok Mehek. I will help you. *
Bolo kya karna hai?/ *
After all, maine tumhaari cold *
coffee pee hai! *
Mehek smiles. *
(06:00 pm) *
NIKI *
Mannu roz shaam ko paas ke nana *
nani park jaata hai. Sunset *
Laughter club ka president hai. *
MEHAK *
How do you know? *
NIKI *
(Sheepish) Mere papa jaate hain... *
Spare chaabi ghar ke bahar planter *
mein padi rehti hai. Thodi der mein *
wo park jaayega, humlog jaldi se *
andar ghus ke blade cutter utha *
lenge. *
MEHAK *
Jiah ki body kahan chupayi hogi *
usne? *
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NIKI (O.S.) *
Ghar ke walls mein? Architect hai, *
usse yeh sab zaroor pata hoga, kisi *
khopche mein body ko kaise chupaya *
jaata hai... No wonder renovation *
khud hi karta hai... *
NIKI (CONT’D) *
Tumhara boyfriend nahin aaya aaj? *
MEHAK *
Shaan mera boyfriend nahin hai. *
NIKI *
Acha. Usse pata hai? *
MEHAK *
Well... of course. *
NIKI *
Cool. Tum kehti ho to... Thoda *
possessive hai na? *
MEHAK *
Shaan mera bahut acha dost hai *
Niki. Maine aaj ussey..... He *
really cares for me, ok? *
NIKI *
Gaya! *
Mehak and Niki step out to the doorway, but Mehak is unable *
to go any further. Niki who hasn’t realized quickly goes to *
the doormat, lifts it and holds up the key. That’s when she *
sees Mehak’s panicked face. *
MEHAK *
I am sorry, main bahar nahin.... *
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NIKI *
CCTV pe dekho, agar koi problem hua *
to phone karna... *
MEHAK *
Mere paas tumhara number nahin hai! *
NIKI *
Catch! *
NIKI (CONT’D) *
Apna phone phenko! Main apne aap ko *
phone karti hoon! *
NIKI *
Hey! Check out this guy’s *
apartment. Can you see? *
MEHAK *
Yes. *
(07:00 pm) *
NIKI *
Kaun se room mein? *
MEHEK *
Bedroom try karo. *
(07:00 pm) *
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She moves into the bedroom. Freezes. She can hear a sound. *
NIKI *
What was that? *
MEHAK *
Niki, Wo aa gaya! *
NIKI *
Whaat? Roko usse! *
MEHAK *
How?? *
NIKI *
I don’t know? Kuch bhi karo, mujhe *
maar daalega wo! *
Mehek reaction. *
NIKI (CONT’D) *
Eeeewwwww! Kangi se peeth khuja *
raha hai! AAAH! *
MEHAK *
Manu! Manu! *
MALHOTRA *
Happy Diwali! *
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MEHAK *
Thanks. Repair? *
MALHOTRA *
Hahahaha! Huh? Repair? Wall? Great, *
main tools le kar aata hoon. *
MEHAK *
Noo! *
MALHOTRA *
Huh? *
MEHAK *
Mere paas sabkuch hai. Tools, *
sabkuch. Please come in. *
MALHOTRA *
Ek minute. Main apne leke aata *
hoon... *
(07:40 pm) *
Malhotra is pulling out the paint and plaster from around the *
crack. But his eyes are focused on something else. *
MALHOTRA *
Diwali yahin hai? No plans? *
MEHAK *
No. *
MALHOTRA *
You look really stressed! Mujhe bhi *
pehle bahut stress ho jaata tha. *
But Laughter therapy ne meri life *
badal dee actually. I can help *
you... *
(MORE)
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MALHOTRA (CONT'D)
Milkshake technique se saara stress *
jo hai... (Shows Milkshake *
technique) *
MALHOTRA (CONT’D) *
Yeh saadi Jiah ke liye maine *
khareedi thi... Hamari first *
anniversary pe she wore it and she *
looked... *
MALHOTRA (O.S.) *
Hey! Miss? Miss Mehek? Open the *
door! *
MALHOTRA (CONT’D) *
Kholiye please! Let me out! Hello *
miss, open the door. *
Mehak pulls out the phone from her pocket and dials Niki *
again. *
MEHAK *
Mujhe sab pata hai! Tumne Jiah ka *
khoon kiya hai! Main police ko bula *
rahi hoon! You will be arrested! *
Niki ke saath kya kiya tumne? *
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MALHOTRA *
What the hell? She locked me *
inside! Mujhe kamre mein band kar *
diya! Hahahaha! *
MEHAK *
I KNOW WHAT YOU DID! Niki phone *
kyun nahin utha rahi hai? Pehle *
Jiah aur ab Niki! YOU ARE NOT GOING *
TO GET AWAY WITH IT! *
MALHOTRA *
Huh??? What... What do you mean? *
Maine kya kiya? Jiah ko jaanti ho *
tum? *
SHAAN *
Manu, tum please ghar jao yaar, *
main baad mein... *
MALHOTRA *
What is wrong with her? Jiah ka *
naam kyun le rahi ho baar baar? Kya *
hua ussey? *
SHAAN *
No no... she means nothing. Mehek *
ki tabiyat kharab hai, please, wo *
tumhe koi aur samajh rahi hai... *
MEHAK *
(Screams) Jiah ka khoon kyun kiya?? *
MALHOTRA *
What?? Jiah ka kya? *
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MEHAK *
Murder!! *
SHAAN *
Mehak! For god sake stop! *
SHAAN (CONT’D) *
I’m really sorry about this Manu, *
please tum jao... *
MEHEK *
Shaan, usse jaane mat do! He has *
Niki! *
SHAAN *
What the hell Mehek? *
MEHEK *
We have to help Niki! Wo Manu ke *
ghar mein gayi thi! *
MEHEK (CONT’D) *
(angry with Niki) What the hell *
happened? Kahan thi tum? *
NIKI *
Relax, Mom! Manu ke bed ke neeche *
Spiders ka full fledged ghonsala *
tha! I panicked and tumhe apne *
phone ki battery charge karni *
chahiye! Anyway, maine tumhaara *
kaam kar diya hai... *
SHAAN *
What the f... *
(09:00 pm)
78.
SHAAN
Mere paas bhi yeh hai... To main
bhi murderer hoon?
NIKI
Ho bhi sakte ho....
SHAAN
Mehek? Maine tumhe samjhaya tha na?
Please ask her to leave.
NIKI
Hello, tum akele Mehek ke dost
nahin ho, ok? Stop getting so J.
SHAAN
(Ignoring Niki, talking to
Mehak)
Please Mehek, is ladki ko aur
musibat mein daalna chahti ho?
Tumhe panic attack hua to yeh kya
karegi?
NIKI
Listen, tumhe meri chinta karne ki
zaroorat nahin, I can take care of
myself, I'm a black belt..... Mehek
mujhe kabhi harm nahin kar sakti.
SHAAN
Mehek, for all you know, Manu iss
waqt police ko phone kar raha hai.
Harassment ke liye andar kar sakta
hai hum sab ko! Yeh ladki uske ghar
mein ghus gayi thi for God’s sake!
MEHAK
Wo kabhi police ko phone nahin
karega! He’s guilty!
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SHAAN
Oh come on Mehak! This is madness!
MEHAK
Shaan, Shaan! Meri madad karo!
Niki removes a big fat book from her backpack and places it
on the coffee table.
NIKI
Jiah khud hamari madad kar sakti
hai!
(09:30 pm)
SHAAN
Bathroom mein?
NIKI
Wo yahin mari thi. Right Mehek?
MEHEK
I think so.
SHAAN
Great.
SHAAN (CONT’D)
What? Doctors orders.
MEHAK
Tumhe ghar jaana hai to tum jao,
Shaan.
SHAAN
Aur tum dono ko yahan akela chod
doon? Iss halat mein? And you’re
welcome.
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NIKI
Waise bhi hume third wheel chahiye.
Teen log minimum chahiye séance ke
liye...
NIKI (CONT’D)
Super! Ab, last mein...
NIKI (CONT’D)
To make a stronger connection with
the deceased; the conductor must
wear something of the deceased.
Tumhaare paas...
MEHAK
Jiah ke kapde hain.
Mehak puts on the Air hostess costume, ties her hair in a bun
just the way Jiah did. She puts on the ruby ring.
NIKI
Mehak?
SHAAN
Yes, Niki, yeh Mehek hi hai! This
is ridiculous.
Mehak smiles.
81.
(10:00 pm)
The three of them are seated in the center around the circle.
The bathroom is illuminated by candles. They hold each others
hands. Shaan sighs and joins in, forming a circle. There is a
mongolian chant playing on Niki’s phone.
SHAAN
(snide)
Shayad Jiah baat karne ke mood mein
nahin hai.
NIKI
Wo isliye kyun ki tumhaari energy
ekdum negative hai.
SHAAN
Right. Saara kasoor mera hai.
MEHAK
Hush!
MEHAK (CONT’D)
Once again(To Shaan)thoda
feeling ke saath
MEHAK (CONT’D)
Jiah. Please mujhse baat karo.
Batao tumhaare saath is ghar mein
kya hua... Hum log tumhe help karne
aaye hain... Jiah....
MEHAK (CONT’D)
Tumhe bhi sunai de raha hai?
Jiah looks ghostly with all the light of the bedroom shooting
in from behind her. She steps into the bathroom and we
realize she is not come in spectral form but in flesh and
blood.
MEHAK (CONT’D)
Jiah!?!
JIAH
What the hell?!
NIKI
Jiah! Tumhara khoon kisne kiya,
batao hume?
MEHAK
Tum to zinda ho!
JIAH
Of course main zinda hoon! Aur tum
sab pagal ho! Kya ho raha hai yeh?
NIKI
Tumhara to khoon hua tha na?
JIAH
What!
MEHAK
Maine dekha... ki Malhotra... Manu
ne... tumhara... yahin pe dekha?!
(mid sentence, she starts
muttering to herself)
To kya dekha maine...?
(MORE)
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MEHAK (CONT'D)
Tum zinda kaise ho sakti ho? What’s
happening to me...
JIAH
Hey! Tum wahi ho na, jisne mere
ghar phone kiya tha? Are you mad?
Jaanti ho tumhara message sun kar
mere parents kitne pareshaan hue?
Huh? Koi aise phone karta hai kya?
“Main jaanti hoon aapki beti ko
kisne maara?” Manu ne phne karwaya
tumse? Huh? I’m going to kill Manu!
NIKI
No, no! But Manu killed you!
JIAH
What, you crazy little rat!
Shaan steps up and clears the air. Mehak walks away in to the
bed room, in a state of shock and confusion.
SHAAN
One sec, please, mera naam Shaan
hai, I can explain...
JIAH
You better, Shaan!
SHAAN
Actually, I can’t! Drink?
NIKI
Sach, hum soch rahe the ki Manu ne
tumhe maar daala! Maine tum dono ke
jhagde sune hain!
Shaan gives Niki a glare. Jiah looks the three up and down.
She snatches the ring off Mehak’s hand. *
JIAH
Mera uniform kyun pehen rakha hain
tumne, you crazy woman!
MEHAK
I’m sorry. I...
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NIKI
Use laga ki Manu ne tumhe
JIAH
Yeah, yeah, Manu ne mujhe maar
daala! Freaks! Meri ring wapas
karo!
She pulls the ring out of Mehek’s hand and storms out of the
room.
(10:30 pm)
Jiah followed by our gang. Jiah rings Manu’s bell. Manu comes
out.
MANU
Jiah! Jiah! You came back!
JIAH
Get off me, you sicko! Kitni baar
bolun ki it’s over! Yeh lo tumhaari
dadima ki angoothi, and please,
shove it up!
MANU
Jiah, yeh angoothi ab tumhari hai!
JIAH
Nahin chahiye mujhe tumhaari sadi
hui anguthi! Tumne inn logon ko kya
bataya hamare baare mein?
MANU
Jiah, breathe. See, breathe. Calm
down... Yeh log sab pagal hain, tum
inki kuch mat suno. I am so happy
to see you!
JIAH
Manu, stay the hell away from me!
MANU
Jiah, main bilkul bagdal gaya hoon!
Bilkul gussa nahin karta!
(MORE)
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MANU (CONT'D)
Maine Laughter therapy mein
advanced course kar liya hai, I’m
cool now... Dekho, hahahahahahha!
JIAH
Manu, you crazy son of a (slaps)
MANU
Hahahahahha! See? No gussa! Tum jo
kahogi wo manzoor hai... Tumhe
flying continue karna hai no
problem... tumhe bachche nahin
chahiye, no problem, tum doosre
mardon ke saath kaam karti ho, no
problem. Yeh angoothi nahin
chahiye? Nahin chahiye, puts it in
his pocket. Bas tum mujhe wapas le
lo, main ekdum
MANU (CONT’D)
Hahahaha! I love you Jiah! Mujhe
wapas le lo!
Jiah hits him again but this time he grabs her hands. Holds
her tight. She keeps hitting his chest. Then gives in. Limps
out in his arms.
JIAH
I really hate you, Manu!
MANU
I know baby, it’s ok!
JIAH
Hase to thappad maroongi!
MANU
No hasi! See? No more laughter
therapy!
(11:00 pm)
NIKI
Main yeh raat kabhi nahin
bhoolungi....
SHAAN
Ghar jao Niki! Bahut ho gaya
tamasha.
MEHAK
Shaan theek keh raha hai. Ghar
jao... Thanks for everything Niki.
NIKI
Call me agar kuch bhi kaam ho toh.
Okay?
Niki walks out, looking back at Mehak one last time. Shaan
shuts the door on her face.
MEHAK
Main poori pagal ho gayi hoon na,
Shaan?
He turns to her.
SHAAN
Well, poori nahin...
Mehak looks up at him, he’s got a drunk grin on his face. She
is almost in tears. His smile vanishes. He approaches her.
SHAAN (CONT’D)
Baby, that was a joke. I’m sorry.
MEHAK
Wo Doctor aur Anusha mujhe pagal
khaane mein daal denge.
MEHEK
Tum aisa nahin hone doge na Shaan?
SHAAN
Nahin hone doonga.
She rests her head on his shoulder. Shaan puts his hand
around her shoulder.
87.
SHAAN (CONT’D)
Maine life mein tumse zyada strong
ladki nahin dekhi Mehek... You’ll
be ok, I promise...
MEHEK
I hate your hands. Choote ho to
ghinn aati hai. Gande hain tumhaare
haath. Gande aur kharab. Dimaag
tumhaara kharaab hai mera nahin.
Ilaaj ki tumhe zaroorat hai. Tum
mujhpar aankhen daalte ho, haath
daalte ho, meri marzee ke bina?
Kisne haq diya tumhe? Sirf isliye
ki tum mard ho aur main aurat hoon?
Tumse ghinn aati hai. Saans mein
badbu hai haramkhor main tumhe kaat
daloongi rengte hue keede ho tum
tumhe pair ke neeche kuchal doongi
tumhaari wajah se meri behen itni
musibat mein hai. Tumhaari wajah se
mera Joey char ghante ghar ke bahar
wait karta raha... rota raha...
main roti hoon roz din raat roti
hoon galat main nahin tum ho beemar
tum ho kharab tum ho gande tum ho
bure tum ho...
As she says all this, of course Shaan has moved away and now
she gets up too, and confronts him, causing him to step back
as she gains the higher ground but she’s saying this:
MEHEK (CONT’D)
tumse dar lagta hai, tumse dar
lagta hai, tumse dar lagta hai,
kyun kiya, kyun kiya, kyun kiya,
kyun kiya????
SHAAN
Mehek, stop! Please!
MEHEK
Phir se mujhe haath lagaya to...
Main abhi Police ko phone karti
hoon! Tumhe jail bhej denge!
Disgusting man!
He tries to hold her back. Mehak pushes him away. His balance
is poor as he’s drunk.
SHAAN
I’m sorry, Mehek! Please suno.
Please don’t do anything silly. I’m
sorry.
MEHAK
Tumhe maine dost mana! Tum mein aur
usmein koi farq nahin koi farq
nahin!
SHAAN
How dare you say that Mehek? Maine
tumhaare liye kya nahin kiya? Kitne
saalon se tumhaara wait kar raha
hoon main jaanti ho? Listen to me
you crazy bitch...
He grabs her (Premonition) and she pushes with all her might,
falling backwards towards the cabinet. She throws the fallen
music box at him.
A quick flash and she remembers: When she was thrown against
the cabinet by an invisible force and the bird fell in the
exact same manner.
SHAAN
Oh god! Mehak I’m sorry.
89.
He tries to pick her up, she gets up and runs into the room.
He tries to catch her.
SHAAN (CONT’D)
Please stop.
Mehak goes in to the bedroom, but before she can shut the
door, Shaan has barged in after her - pushes the door in.
She flies back and falls on the floor, hurting her head.
Again in the same manner as the afternoon scare played out.
SHAAN
Mehek please get up, tum theek to
ho?
From her vision, its all hazy and skewed. She is having a
full blown panic attack.
MEHAK
STAY AWAY FROM ME!
Just as she tries to attack him again, Shaan lunges and grabs
her hand, they slip and fall on the bathroom floor. Mehak’s
face hits the bathtub.
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The blade cutter goes through her finger, we hear the sound
of it getting cut. The chopped finger falls next to the open
drain.
Mehak is losing a lot of blood, blood all over the tiles; the
cutter lies in the pool of blood. Shaan panics looking at the
bloody sight, Mehak is losing consciousness.
SHAAN
Oh god! Oh god! Mehak... Mehek!
Please! Oh God!
Shaan pulls out the toilet roll and nervously bandages her *
cut finger with toilet paper.
SHAAN (CONT’D)
(to an unconscious Mehak)
Don’t worry, Mehek... maine tumhari
tumhara... icebox mein hai... Abhi
ambulance ko bulata hoon... Sab
theek ho jaayega...
NIKI
Hi. Mujhe Mehek se...
SHAAN
Niki, it’s the middle of the night.
NIKI
Sorry! But mujhe Mehek ka missed
call aaya.
SHAAN
Wo so rahi hai.
NIKI
I thought Mehek ko phir se daura
pada hai you know...?
SHAAN
She’s fine. Main hoon yahan, but
thanks. Good night.
NIKI
Yeh tumhaare shirt pe khoon hai
kya?
SHAAN
Nahin, wine stain hai.
MEHAK
Niki!
But her voice is too frail. She starts crawling towards the
living room.
We see this play out through the CCTV feeds on the LCD
screen, its exactly how the scare played out for Mehak a few
night ago. When she saw Jiah crawling through the house,
towards her, dressed in the uniform. But in actuality it was
Mehak dressed in Jiah's uniform.
Mehak reaches the drawing room, she sees Shaan blocking the
door way, he has almost succeeded in driving Niki away.
SHAAN
Mehek bilkul stable nahin hai Niki,
usse aaram ki sakht zaroorat hai,
usse disturb mat karo please...
We cut back to the moment where the ghost was about to grab
Mehak's shoulder from behind. Back in the present we see she
actually trying to get the attention of Niki who is standing
at the entrance, and Shaan is blocking most of her view.
NIKI
Mehak!
Mehak is still groggy and unsteady. The blood loss has made
her woozy. Niki is hugging her and trying to pat her cheeks
to keep her conscious. She leaps up as Shaan comes close.
NIKI (CONT’D)
Yeh kya hai! Kya kiya tumne?!
SHAAN
Niki... maine kuch nahin, Mehek ne
khud
NIKI
Main papa ko bulati hoon woh tumhe
theek karenge...
NIKI (CONT’D)
Papa... pick up, pick up!
SHAAN
Oh fuck, fuck, fuck!
He checks Niki’s pulse, it’s faint. She can’t stand back up.
Mehak picks up the wine bottle with one hand and throws it at
Shaan’s head, It cracks on Shaan’s shoulder. Mehak stands up
and tries to get to Niki but Shaan is gathering his senses.
SHAAN (CONT’D)
Mehak...
She pulls herself up, slowly moves towards the bedroom, using
the support of the corridor walls. Knocking a glass
decorative along the way. She opens the bedroom door and
enters.
SHAAN (O.S.)
Mehak ruko, please kahan ja rahi
ho...?
Mehak is actually hiding under the bed. She sees his feet run
by, same as the scare she experienced in the afternoon of day
2.
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Shaan enters the bathroom and looks up into the loft for her.
Thinking she must be hiding here. It’s empty.
Mehak slides out from underneath the bed and runs out of the
room before Shaan can get to her.
SHAAN (O.S.)
Mehak, MEHEK! Open the door!
GODDAMNIT! DARWAZA KHOLO!
She moves away from the door. He bangs the door again.
The front door opens. She steps across the threshold. Shuts *
the door behind her. The door closest to hers is Malhotra’s. *
She doesn’t want to ring his door bell. She tries to explore *
options. Mehak tries the elevator instead. She presses the *
button, but the elevator is out of service. *
MALHOTRA *
You?! *
MEHAK (MUFFLED) *
Please help me! Call for an *
ambulance quickly. *
MALHOTRA *
What? *
MEHAK *
He is trying to kill... *
MALHOTRA *
He? *
MEHAK *
Shaan... Please, help me. I need to *
call... *
MALHOTRA *
Shaan your friend? *
MALHOTRA (CONT’D) *
Please don’t disturb me again. *
Mehak has no choice, but to run down the steps. She uses the *
support of the walls to guide her towards the fire exit door. *
Getting breathless with every step. She pushes the fire exit *
door open with her shoulder and step out. *
This is the furthest she has been from her house in the last
few months. Mehak starts to suffocate with fear. As she looks
at the daunting task ahead, the steps are constantly moving
due to her peaking paranoia.
She stops midway, she’s made it down one floor but she can’t
go any further.
Mehak can't go any further. She gives up. Her mind and body
are shutting down. Back against the wall. She can’t breathe,
she is choking.
Mehak keeps going and going till she reaches the ground floor
reception area. She is in bad shape, terrified and exhausted. *
She closes her eyes. *
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GUL *
Hormuz, I’m so happy ki hum log yeh *
firecrackers saath mein dekh rahe *
hain... *
HORMUZ *
Su karech gheli! *
GUL *
Hun kauch ke *
GUL (CONT’D) *
Hormuz! Look! (Points) *
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Blue Rev. (mm/dd/yy) 97.
Mehek is fallen. Her eyes are shut tight. She opens them. In *
her POV we see the sky, some fireworks... all hazy and *
surreal. *
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End credits. *