Creative Writing (Short Story)
Creative Writing (Short Story)
Together as one
The Necklace
I want to end the story in a win-win situation. After Madam Forestier discovered
on what happened to her necklace, she will return the replaced one to M. and Madam
Loisel and asked only the exact value of her lost necklace. Madam Forestier can also
give them the exist money they paid in buying the new necklace as replacement for the
lost one. They deserve to have it and used it for their own good since they’ve work for
ten years just to pay all their debt and it wasn’t that easy. Their hard works were
immeasurable. Instead of enjoying life, they’ve suffered and focus their selves in doing
works to pay their debt about more than $30,000 wherein the lost necklace only worth
$500. They deserve to have it back.
The Last Judgment
Lesson
Even we are still living in the world; we are already being judged not by judges
literally who work in the Supreme Court but the people themselves. We are being
judged by the people that surround us. Their judgment based on what they knew, see
and hear from oneself. But the judges who will judge us for our last judgment are
different, when it comes to judging either bad or good have no exception as long as you
commit sin. So we have to disregard what other people say, we have to live in what we
think is good and right. Have faith and love to Him, so we will be guided into the correct
pathway we will be heading. And to avoid of doing negative which may result in
misleading your life direction and righteousness.
The Necklace
Reflection
Person with the characteristic of having without satisfaction in life may result in
an odd situation at the end. The story entitled The Necklace was a great story because
it shows and gives many lesson, as well as it relates to real life. People now a day were
more on material (materialistic) rather than valuing the life and nature they have. As I
read the story, at first I was too frustrated on how Mathilde behave. Though she has the
beauty but no wealth, she must e thankful and grateful in the chance to witness the
beauty of life. All she think is herself, as long as she’s happy, she doesn’t care who
suffers. She was so lucky to have an understanding, forgiving and supporting husband.
Anything that makes her happy, were given willingly by her husband. As a woman
natural to us wants to look beautiful in others eyes, but we should consider as will our
status, if we really do can afford it and cannot affect or bother anyone. Be considerate
enough, how can you spend the money for luxurious things wherein your husband was
working so hard to earn that money for your daily needs. Spending so much money for
just one night occasion is a waste of money, it wasn’t necessary. If you can’t buy then
you can borrow to your friends but of course you have to take care of it don’t be so
reckless since it wasn’t yours. As Mathilde was the one who lost it and she was
responsible for the thing she borrowed, still she and her husband suffered the
consequences. They’ve work for 10 years just to pay all they have debt just for the
replacement of the lost necklace which only cost 500 francs. But it turns out that their
hard work was wasted, they replace the lost necklace 500 francs with more than 30,000
francs. How ridiculous wasn’t it!? That is why be contented of who you are and what you
are. Be happy on what God has given to you, everything was planned by Him. Be
patient and grateful for everything.
The Last Judgment
Retell
One afternoon, there was a dog abandoned nearby the riverside. It tried to jump
into the water, but there was a little girl named Shine who save him.
The dog just look at her and wiggling its tail towards the girl’s side. Showing his
likes to the girl and wants to be adopted by her.
“You are so cute, how can I abandoned and leave you here alone.”
Hearing this, the dog’s eyes shone like the stars in the sky. Shine carried the dog and
took it to their house, and she named it with KOKONG since it was the name of her lost
dog before. At first, her mother never wanted to have pet because aside from its waste,
dog mostly ruin things. But shine didn’t stop convincing her mother.
Shine was very happy, she went everywhere along with kokong. They mostly
spent their time together playing at the plaza. When unexpected thing happened. While
they are walking at Sta. Cruz Street, Shine didn’t notice that kokong went to different
direction as it went after the cat he saw earlier. She continued walking until she
reaches the plaza when she noticed that kokong wasn’t around.
“Kokong!”
Shine kept on looking for kokong, hoping to see him anywhere. It was almost
evening still she haven’t found her dog. Many different things came in to her mind, the
possibilities that might happened if she won’t find kokong as soon as possible. She kept
on thinking and cannot stop her tear in falling down.
Kokong was lost. How can he find her? He barks and barks, looking for Shine as
well. But they didn’t find each other. The next weekend, Shine went to the plaza again
hoping see him there. She patiently waits and it was almost 6pm when she heard some
barking, as she turned around she saw kokong chained and being held by somebody.
Without hesitation, she went to the guy and said “Mr. Excuse me.”
The man looked at her. “Yes little girl how may I help you?”
“Can I ask you sir if this little one is your dog?” pointing at kokong.
The man was shocked when Shine suddenly cried and tightly hugged the dog.
Now he realized that this young girl was the real owner of this dog.
“Ohh my little Kokong, how are you? I missed you so much I thought I won’t see you
again!”, she kept on crying. The man bent down and comforted Shine. He unlocked the
chain and let Shine carried the dog. She was very happy and grateful, so she invited the
man to their house for dinner to show their gratitude. From that moment, the stranger
and Shine became friends. Not long after, the stranger and her mother became close as
well and they started their relationship into the next level. Now they became one happy
family.