Dangling Modifiers
Dangling Modifiers
Dangling Modifier:
This sentence does not clearly state who needs a doctor’s note in order to be excused.
The dangling modifier begins with the word “to.”
Correction
This sentence now clearly states that students need a doctor’s note in order to be excused from
class.
Dangling Modifier:
This sentence does not clearly state who is using MLA format for their papers.
The dangling modifier includes a verb ending in “—ing” (using).
Correction:
This sentence now clearly states that Matt is writing the papers and becoming familiar with
MLA format.
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The College of Saint Rose Writing Center, 2008
Dangling Modifier: !
This sentence gives the impression that it was the test that studied for ten straight days and not
a student.
The dangling modifier includes a verb ending in “—ing” (having).
Correction: "
The sentence now clearly states that Justin found the test easy to pass after studying.
The person performing the action is found within the independent clause, following the opening
phrase.
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Option B: Identify the subject performing the action within the dangling modifier.
Example:
Dangling Modifier: # !
This sentence does not make it clear who tried out the various cookie recipes.
The dangling modifier includes a verb ending in “—ing” (trying).
Correction: # !
The sentence now clearly states that Theresa tried out many different recipes.
The person performing the action is found within the modifying phrase.
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