The ULTIMATE Marketing Swipe File
The ULTIMATE Marketing Swipe File
The ULTIMATE
Marketing
Swipe File: 122
Winning Ads &
Titles from
Direct Response
Geniuses
By: Mark Mersman
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You are in the MARKETING business... First and Foremost. Period. End of Story. If you don’t embrace this fact,
you don’t stand a chance of achieving the levels of success you desire.
Why do virtually all broker-dealers, RIAs, and insurance firms not get this? They leave you out on an island to
create your own marketing… and then once you finally do take the time to create something, they neuter any
chance it has of being effective with their outrageous compliance restrictions! Sound familiar?
I’m not saying you shouldn’t be compliant. In fact, I’m saying the EXACT opposite. You MUST have compliant
marketing in our industry just as much as you MUST have effective marketing. The sad reality is that most
advisors are missing the boat on this. Most insurance marketing organizations or mail houses don’t know the
first thing about what it takes to be compliant. And most broker-dealers or investment firms don’t know the first
thing about effective marketing. But guess what…
Why should you believe me? After all, I told you I’m a cheater…
Reason # 1 –
We own and operate an independent broker/dealer and two SEC Registered Investment Advisors.
We have three attorneys and a team of individuals under our roof making sure we are compliant.
Every piece of marketing we create for advisors MUST be compliant.
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Reason # 2-
We’ve been doing direct response marketing for over 15 years. Since the year 2000, we’ve spent
over $12 million on printing and postage for direct response marketing specifically for financial
advisors.
We’ve spent over $12 Million on direct response marketing in the financial services
marketplace since the year 2000.
We’ve sent over 40,000,000 pieces of mail over that time frame.
EVERY single one of those pieces of mail was specifically designed to get a direct response from the consumer –
the very consumer to whom you are trying to market your financial solutions.
Imagine how much you would learn if you sent more than 200,000 pieces of mail EVERY month focused on one
thing – to get someone motivated to take action about a financial solution. Imagine how much of an advantage
that would give you over just “guessing” what to mail.
How do you feel when I ask you to imagine this kind of success in your own business? You may feel energized
and ready to start planning a new campaign or website tweak. If nothing else, you want to keep reading to see if
this report is as good as I suggest.
Now imagine stirring that same level of excitement in your prospective clients… simply by putting their own
imaginations to work.
Why is it so persuasive? Because it taps into your customers’ deepest desires, no matter what they are.
How does it work? When you ask people to imagine something, it helps them engage their imaginations. Go
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figure, right? Until then, they were simply reading your words. By prompting them to imagine, you make it
personal. Now they see themselves enjoying the benefits of whatever it is you are introducing.
And that is what it takes to get your prospects to move and take action. People are emotional creatures, and by
tapping into the hopes and dreams they already hold dear, you trigger a deep desire for any product or solution
that can give it to them.
Here is one sample ad that forces the reader to exercise their brain… and it’s all because of one little word.
(There are a lot of things wrong with this ad, but the message is undeniably compelling).
Did you notice the title at the top of this Swipe File Report? “Are you following these rules for success?”
By itself, the word “these” is harmless. But if you couple it with something compelling that your audience is
curious about… they can’t help but read further to find out if they are making “those” mistakes or following
“those” rules for success. Naturally, it begs the question… “what mistakes?” Or “what rules?”
There’s a lot to learn from the successful copywriters of yesterday. When this particular ad stopped pulling well,
he simply made subtle changes…
Obviously, he’s not the only one using the words “How to” in his headline… Here are some other effective
examples:
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“I don’t know how you feel about having a reliable and predictable income stream in retirement, but to me,
that’s what defines confidence in retirement.”
It’s honest. It’s direct, and it is empathetic. You’re not telling somebody how they should feel, but you tell them
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how the benefits of what you are about to talk about make YOU feel. This sets you apart from the competition
immediately.
Are there exceptions to this rule? Absolutely. But when it comes to direct response copywriting, there aren’t
many. If I had a nickel for every advisor who criticized the aesthetic beauty of our marketing, I’d be a rich man.
Most advisors think they need a “pretty” postcard or wedding style invite. But if you look at the majority of the
most successful direct response ads of all time, you’ll notice one glaring thing --- they are UGLY. They could have
been designed and laid out to be more aesthetically pleasing, and they surely could have had nice pretty
pictures… after all, a picture is worth a thousand words, right? The trouble is that you don’t control what words
that picture paints! And in copywriting, you don’t want to give up the control of the most powerful tool you
have… WORDS. Carefully chosen words! Here are some examples of more successful ads… pay attention… if
there are pictures, the pictures are used deliberately for only one reason – to support the copy on the page.
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In the financial services industry, this is a rule you will want to pay close attention to. The use of numbers and
checklists in your headlines can be extremely powerful. Take a look at the ad below:
What makes this ad so compelling? The answer is simple. You are inclined
to want to see if you are making any of the SEVEN mistakes mentioned.
Think about the difference between these two “financial” ad titles:
Title One:
Financial Mistakes to Avoid
Title Two:
7 Hidden Mistakes to Avoid With Your Finances That Cost Many Baby
Boomers Thousands
Notice a difference?
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Most financial professionals are NOT good at writing copy. Writing compelling copy is not easy. The absolute
BEST way to write copy that sells is to borrow from the best. That’s the reason I’ve provided you with this SWIPE
file. Keep it handy and with you as a reference so you are always able to leverage it the next time it is time for
you to write your next newsletter, seminar, marketing piece, or newspaper article.
My goal with this was to help you so you could avoid the “deer in the headlights” feeling the next time you had
to create unique content.
On the pages that follow, I’ll share with you some of the most successful ads and headlines of all-time. Guard
this list closely. Print it out. Store it in a safe place.
If you qualify, we’ll gladly invite you up to spend a day with us to find out how we’ve blazed a path in the
financial services industry unlike any other firm in existence… one that seeks to empower advisors with turn-key,
compelling, and COMPLIANT marketing.
Mark R. Mersman
Chief Marketing Officer
USA Financial
P.S. To have a qualifying discussion and arrange/reserve for your visit to a Discovery Day, simply call to speak
with one of our Business Development VPs at 888.444.0125 ext. 1.
8. THE LAST 2 HOURS ARE THE LONGEST — AND THOSE ARE THE 2 HOURS YOU
SAVE
13. YOU CAN LAUGH AT MONEY WORRIES — IF YOU FOLLOW THIS SIMPLE PLAN
14. WHY SOME PEOPLE ALMOST ALWAYS MAKE MONEY IN THE STOCK MARKET
16. IT SEEMS INCREDIBLE THAT YOU CAN OFFER THESE SIGNED ORIGINAL
ETCHINGS — FOR ONLY $5 EACH
18. WHICH OF THESE $2.50 TO $5 BEST SELLERS DO YOU WANT — FOR ONLY $1
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EACH?
22. DOCTORS PROVE 2 OUT OF 3 WOMEN CAN HAVE MORE BEAUTIFUL SKIN IN 14
DAYS
24. HOW OFTEN DO YOU HEAR YOURSELF SAYING: “NO, I HAVEN’T READ IT: I’VE
BEEN MEANING TO!”
25. THOUSANDS HAVE THIS PRICELESS GIFT — BUT NEVER DISCOVER IT!
32. 161 NEW WAYS TO A MAN’S HEART — IN THIS FASCINATING BOOK FOR COOKS
35. EVERYWHERE WOMEN ARE RAVING ABOUT THIS AMAZING NEW SHAMPOO!
38. HOW TO TAKE OUT STAINS…USE (PRODUCT NAME) AND FOLLOW THESE EASY
DIRECTIONS
39. TODAY…ADD $10,000 TO YOUR ESTATE — FOR THE PRICE OF A NEW HAT
42. HOW TO GIVE YOUR CHILDREN EXTRA IRON — THESE 3 DELICIOUS WAYS
44. THIS ALMOST-MAGICAL LAMP LIGHTS HIGHWAY TURNS BEFORE YOU MAKE
THEM
47. THEY LAUGHED WHEN I SAT DOWN AT THE PIANO — BUT WHEN I STARTED TO
PLAY!
50. WHO ELSE WANTS LIGHTER CAKE — IN HALF THE MIXING TIME?
53. NO MORE BACKBREAKING GARDEN CHORES FOR ME — YET OURS IS NOW THE
SHOW-PLACE OF THE NEIGHBORHOOD!
58. BUY NO DESK — UNTIL YOU’VE SEEN THIS SENSATION OF THE BUSINESS SHOW
61. WHY (BRAND NAME) BULBS GIVE MORE LIGHT THIS YEAR
62. RIGHT AND WRONG FARMING METHODS — AND LITTLE POINTERS THAT WILL
INCREASE YOUR PROFITS
67. NOW ANY AUTO REPAIR JOB CAN BE “DUCK SOUP” FOR YOU
69. IT’S A SHAME FOR YOU NOT TO MAKE GOOD MONEY — WHEN THESE MEN DO IT
SO EASILY
70. YOU NEVER SAW SUCH LETTERS AS HARRY AND I GOT ABOUT OUR PEARS
72. GREAT NEW DISCOVERY KILLS KITCHEN ODORS QUICK! — MAKES INDOOR AIR
“COUNTRY-FRESH”
73. MAKE THIS 1-MINUTE TEST — OF AN AMAZING NEW KIND OF SHAVING CREAM
79. “YOU KILL THAT STORY — OR I’LL RUN YOU OUT OF THE STATE!”
81. THERE’S ANOTHER WOMAN WAITING FOR EVERY MAN — AND SHE’S TOO
SMART TO HAVE “MORNING MOUTH”
83. IF YOU WERE GIVEN $200,000 TO SPEND — ISN’T THIS THE KIND OF (TYPE OF
PRODUCT, BUT NOT BRAND NAME) YOU WOULD BUILD?
85. 76 REASONS WHY IT WOULD HAVE PAID YOU TO ANSWER OUR AD A FEW
MONTHS AGO
90. A WONDERFUL TWO YEARS’ TRIP AT FULL PAY — BUT ONLY MEN WITH
IMAGINATION CAN TAKE IT
96. $80,000 IN PRIZES! HELP US FIND THE NAME FOR THESE NEW KITCHENS
97. NOW! OWN FLORIDA LAND THIS EASY WAY…$10 DOWN AND $10 A MONTH
98. TAKE ANY 3 OF THESE KITCHEN APPLIANCES — FOR ONLY $8.95 (VALUES UP TO
$15.45)
100. ONE PLACE SETTING FREE FOR EVERY THREE YOU BUY!
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