Rhetorical Analysis
Rhetorical Analysis
Rhetorical analysis
Professor Ferrara
3/19/20
“If you try to find success in fame or in things you, will fail. If you find happiness is the
subjectively through their own beliefs. Upbringing and schooling certainly have involvement in
success, but what many don’t realize is that success comes from happiness. Shawn Achor’s Ted
Talk, the happy secret to better work, expands upon this belief with the use of analogy and
percentages through experimentation. In order to attract the audience Achor uses Pathos,
Ethos, and Logos to elaborate on his thoughts. After analyzing his speech I have learned a lot
about Achor’s methods and message that he has put out for people that are struggling across
the country.
The Ted Talk opens up with Achor using the first persuasion method, ethos. Shawn
develops a story about his sister and himself bringing laughter to the audience. By doing so,
Shawn is using his own belief that increasing happiness improves work ability and success. In
this situation the audience’s purpose is to react and pay attention and by using his own method
Achor brilliantly grasps the audience’s attention. The memory he is elaborating upon explains
how his sister got hurt in the middle of the night and he did not want to wake his parents and
get in trouble so he turned the negative into a positive. This caused his sister to have a positive
outlook and he never up getting into trouble. Clearly this event is not the main purpose of his
study, it is merely an analogy of the fact that opening individuals minds towards a positive
outlook in which they enjoy certainly will increase their own success. Achor’s method of using
himself in his own analogy which describes his entire presentation is something so fascinating
that I have never seen before. His brilliance gives me, the reader, a certain trust in him, which
opens my mind up to everything he has to say. Transitioning from his analogy to his real life
Achor distills, “…On the news, the majority of the information is not positive. In fact it is
negative. Most of it is about murder, corruption, diseases, and natural disasters…” Dealing this
information to the audience keeps them from the edge of their seats and actually pushes them
back into their seat changing the mood. Shawn was very jovial pleading his story about his
sister and comes back to reality, moving towards a negative outlook if no one does anything
about the situation. Before everyone can get their hopes down, Shawn comes back with some
comedy to even out the mood. His ability to keep the audience entertained while changing the
mood of his speech is incredible. Shawn then goes on to tell his successful career and how he
valued education highly above other things. After varying the audience’s mood, Shawn
Shawn fascinatingly expands upon ethos and pathos to introduce logos. Laying out
everything before the audience sees the facts gives the author a trust, which is the most
valuable ideal in persuasion. Shawn exclaims, “90% of your long-term happiness is predicted
not by the external world, but by the way your brain processes the world.” Continuing on his
path of logos, in one of Achor’s slides he says, only 25% of job success is predicted by IQ, the
remaining 75% comes from optimism, social relationships, and how you should see obstacles as
an opportunity and not a challenge. This data leads him to invoke his theme that we will never
achieve happiness if success is our main focus and happiness is on the other side of the
spectrum. He explains that in order to reverse the issue we need our brains to be working when
they are positive and happy because data shows they perform significantly better. Finally,
Shawn gets to his solution which are the following: journaling, exercise, meditation, and
random acts of kindness. Through facts and evidence, Achor conveys his logical reasons to
and public speaker. He touched upon the three persuasion mechanisms: ethos, pathos, and
logos in order through a smooth conductive manner. His style is clearly formal, but he puts a
enjoyable twist to his speech through comedy. There was not one moment in his presentation
where I felt bored and analyzing the audience it seemed everyone there felt the same. I also
felt as if any audience regardless of your inherent nature would sit and enjoy this presentation.
Everyone on earth tries to achieve a balance of happiness and success, so who would not enjoy
this speech? However, I could see it negatively affecting someone who has already lived their
entire life neglecting happiness and that person may realize they could have had a better life.
Otherwise, majority of people would greatly appreciate what Shawn Achor has to say.
Analyzing and understanding how Shawn Achor persuaded his audience in his the happy
secret to better work Ted Talk certainly taught me a great deal on rhetoric and communication.
The most valuable ideal that I learned is that in order to convince your audience and gain their
trust is through the persuasion triangle: pathos, ethos, and logos. However anyone can do that,
so in order to stand out amongst others is to stand out by using your own personal traits and
experiences in your speech. Shawn Achor used valuable tools such as anology and comedy.
Happiness while presenting would also lead to success because that’s what it comes first.
Works cited:
1. https://www.goodreads.com/quotes/tag/success-and-happiness
2. https://www.ted.com/talks/shawn_achor_the_happy_secret_to_better_work/up-next?
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