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IELTS Writing Task 2

This document discusses the topic of whether all teenagers should be required to do unpaid work to help their local community. It presents the opposing view that teenagers are already under a lot of pressure from their studies and should have free time to enjoy leisure activities with friends. Forcing teenagers to do unpaid work against their will could create resentment and goes against the values of a free society. In conclusion, volunteering should remain a choice rather than an obligation for teenagers.

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IELTS Writing Task 2

This document discusses the topic of whether all teenagers should be required to do unpaid work to help their local community. It presents the opposing view that teenagers are already under a lot of pressure from their studies and should have free time to enjoy leisure activities with friends. Forcing teenagers to do unpaid work against their will could create resentment and goes against the values of a free society. In conclusion, volunteering should remain a choice rather than an obligation for teenagers.

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IELTS Writing

Task 2
CÂU HỎI MẪU

Some people think that all teenagers should be


required to do unpaid work in their free time to
help the local community. They believe this
would benefit both the individual teenager and
society as a whole. Do you agree or disagree?
MỞ BÀI

• 2 câu giới thiệu chung về chủ đề và nêu


lên khái quát quan điểm
• Viết giới thiệu chủ đề theo ngôn ngữ của
mình.
Mở bài

Câu thứ nhất: Paraphrase lại câu hỏi


Many young people work on a volunteer
basis, and this can be beneficial for both the
individual and society as a whole
MỞ BÀI

Các cách paraphrase


- Sử dụng từ đồng nghĩa: do unpaid work = work on a
volunteer basis
- Sử dụng dạng từ khác: this would benefit = this would
be beneficial
- Sử dụng thể chủ động thay cho bị động hoặc ngược lại:
all teenagers should be required to do unpaid work =
we should force teenagers to do unpaid work
- Nói theo cách gián tiếp: People often have/hold diffrent
views about teenager’s obligations to do volunteer
work.
MỞ BÀI

Câu thứ hai: Đi thẳng vào quan điểm được


đưa ra trọng bài
However, I do not agree that we should
therefore force all teenagers to do unpaid work
- Các cụm thường dùng: In my opinion/view,
From my perspective, Personally, I ...
- Không nên sử dụng câu như: This essay will
discuss both sides and give an opinion at the
end.
THÂN BÀI

• Gồm 2-3 đoạn văn, 4-6 câu cho mỗi


đoạn.
• Nêu lên ý chính và các câu sau tập trung
phát triển các supporting ideas cho câu
đầu.
Thân bài

(1)Most young people are already under enough


pressure with their studies, without being given the
added responsibility of working in their spare time. (2)
School is just as demanding as a full-time job, and
teachers expect their students to do homework and
exam revision on top of attending lessons every day.
(3) When young people do have some free time, we
should encourage them to enjoy it with their friends or
to spend it doing sports and other leisure activities. (4)
They have many years of work ahead of them when
they finish their studies.
Thân bài
(1)At the same time, I do not believe that society has
anything to gain from obliging young people to do
unpaid work. In fact, I would argue that it goes
against the values of a free and fair society to force
a group of people to do something against their will.
Doing this can only lead to resentment amongst
young people, who would feel that they were being
used, and parents, who would not want to be told
how to raise their children. Currently, nobody is
forced to volunteer, and this is surely the best
system.
Kết bài

• Thường gồm một câu để tóm tắt lại câu


trả lời
• Không đưa các thông tin mà đề bài
không yêu cầu.
• Không viết mở bài, thân bài một đằng và
kết bài một nẻo
• Sử dụng các từ để đưa ra tín hiệu kết bài
như In conclusion,.. (xem lại bài viết
đoạn)
Kết bài

In conclusion, teenagers may choose to work


for free and opinion we should not make this
compulsory.

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