Pink Wachirapaet - g8 Unit 1 L L Formative Essay Topic 1 Cutlure
Pink Wachirapaet - g8 Unit 1 L L Formative Essay Topic 1 Cutlure
Student Pink
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Connecting to different text forms helps to make purposeful exchanges and interactions with others.
Criterion B: organising
Level 1-2 Level 3-4 Level 5-6 Level 7-8
i. Makes minimal use of i. Makes adequate use of i. Makes competent use of i. Makes sophisticated use of
organizational structures, though organizational structures that organizational structures that organizational structures that
these may not always serve the serve the context and intention. serve the context and intention. serve the context and intention
context and intention. ii. Organizes opinions and ideas ii. Organizes opinions and ideas in a effectively.
ii. Organizes opinions and ideas with some degree of coherence coherent and logical manner, ii. Effectively organizes opinions
with a minimal degree of and logic. with ideas building on each other. and ideas in a sustained,
coherence and logic. iii. Makes adequate use of iii. Makes competent use of coherent and logical manner
iii. Makes minimal use of referencing and formatting tools referencing and formatting tools with ideas building on each other
referencing and formatting tools to create a presentation style to create a presentation style in a sophisticated way.
to create a presentation style that suitable to the context and suitable to the context and iii. Makes excellent use of
may not always be suitable to intention. intention. referencing and formatting tools
the context and intention. to create an effective
presentation style.
i. Produces texts that demonstrate i. Produces texts that demonstrate i. Produces texts that demonstrate i. Produces texts that demonstrate
limited personal engagement adequate personal engagement considerable personal a high degree of personal
with the creative process; with the creative process; engagement with the creative engagement with the creative
demonstrates a limited degree of demonstrates some degree of process; demonstrates process; demonstrates a high
thought, imagination or sensitivity thought, imagination and considerable thought, degree of thought, imagination
and minimal exploration and sensitivity and some exploration imagination and sensitivity and and sensitivity and perceptive
consideration of new perspectives and consideration of new substantial exploration and exploration and consideration of
and ideas. perspectives and ideas. consideration of new perspectives new perspectives and ideas.
ii. Makes minimal stylistic choices ii. Makes some stylistic choices in and ideas. ii. Makes perceptive stylistic
in terms of linguistic, literary and terms of linguistic, literary and ii. Makes thoughtful stylistic choices in terms of linguistic,
visual devices, demonstrating visual devices, demonstrating choices in terms of linguistic, literary and visual devices,
limited awareness of impact on adequate awareness of impact literary and visual devices, demonstrating clear awareness
an audience. on an audience. of impact on an audience.
iii. Selects few relevant details and iii. Selects some relevant details and demonstrating good awareness iii. Selects extensive relevant details
examples to support ideas. examples to develop ideas. of impact on an audience. and examples to develop ideas
iii. Selects sufficient relevant details with precision.
and examples to develop ideas.
i. Uses a limited range of i. Uses an adequate range of i. Uses a varied range of i. Effectively uses a range of
appropriate vocabulary and forms appropriate vocabulary, sentence appropriate vocabulary, sentence appropriate vocabulary, sentence
of expression. structures and forms of structures and forms of structures and forms of
ii. Writes in an inappropriate expression. expression competently. expression.
register and style that do not ii. Sometimes writes in a register ii. Writes competently in a register ii. Writes in a consistently
serve the context and intention. and style that serve the context and style that serve the context appropriate register and style
iii. Uses grammar, syntax and and intention. and intention. that serve the context and
punctuation with limited iii. Uses grammar, syntax and iii. Uses grammar, syntax and intention.
accuracy; errors often hinder punctuation with some degree of punctuation with a considerable iii. Uses grammar, syntax and
communication. accuracy; errors sometimes degree of accuracy; errors do punctuation with a high degree of
iv. Spells/writes with limited hinder communication. not hinder effective accuracy; errors are minor and
accuracy; errors often hinder iv. Spell/writes with some degree of communication. communication is effective.
communication. accuracy; errors sometimes iv. Spells/writes with considerable iv. Spells/writes with a high degree
v. Makes limited and/or hinder communication. degree of accuracy; errors do of accuracy; errors are minor and
inappropriate use of non-verbal v. Makes some use of appropriate not hinder effective communication is effective.
communication techniques. non-verbal communication communication. v. Makes effective use of
techniques. v. Makes sufficient use of appropriate non-verbal
appropriate non-verbal communication techniques.
communication techniques.