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The editorial discusses the newly painted walls at Mavuyuk state college and how their cleanliness depends on student behavior. Some students have already started scraping the walls with their shoes or drawing on them with pencils. According to a student government council, 6 out of 10 buildings have unnecessary writings on them. While some see MSC students as abusing buildings more than other student groups, the editorial challenges students to keep the walls clean going forward.

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Analysis, Sample Analysis, Sample Editorial Sample Editorial With Analysis

The editorial discusses the newly painted walls at Mavuyuk state college and how their cleanliness depends on student behavior. Some students have already started scraping the walls with their shoes or drawing on them with pencils. According to a student government council, 6 out of 10 buildings have unnecessary writings on them. While some see MSC students as abusing buildings more than other student groups, the editorial challenges students to keep the walls clean going forward.

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Analysis, Sample analysis, Sample editorial

Sample Editorial With Analysis

The walls of Mavuyuk state college have a new coat of paintand are presently clean. wehther they
retain the present state of cleanliness depends almost entirely on the student

The first spot appeared as a result of negligent student leaning against the walls and scraping the
soles of their shoes in them. Some students have also taken a peculiar delight in making long pencil
scrawls on the walls as they go closer

the sudent government council revealed that 6 out 10 buildings are written with unnecessary
statements. what visitors will say?

according to an observant percent. MSCians, more than any other group of student abuse their
buildings. this report, wether true or otherwise, should serves as a challenge

will walls remeain clean?

Analysis of the Editorial

First Paragraph: the first sentence talks about the news peg or the introduction of the issue while the
next sentence gives the position of the paper. that is, the cleanliness of the wall's paintings depende
on the behaviour of the students.

The Body Paragraph: the second paragraph talks about the evidence about the negligence of
students in taking care of the newly painted buildings. on the other hand the third paragraph employs
persuasive techniques, such as presenting statistics from authorities and asking of a rhetorical
question.

Another evidence emanates from the fourth paragraph by quoting the remark of the parent. This is
effective, too, because there is a follow-up sentence that insinuates a challenge to the readers.

Conclusion: as discussed above, editorial endings should be short, witty and simplesuch that they can
propel a challenge to the students. in that way, the editorialwirter just employed a question that
makes the readers hanging, giving them the responsibility to act on their answer.

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