Final Project 3 2
Final Project 3 2
Sydney Taylor
Hailie Bryant
Expository Writing
October 6, 2020
Social media is a way for any user to quickly create and share content with their friends,
but over the years, it has become a negative impact on mental health. Social networking is a
progressively growing thing, and as it grows mental health declines even more. I chose this topic
because of a recent documentary I watched called “The Social Dilemma,” it went into depth
about teenagers today who are consumed by their phones and social media. The documentary
discusses how the media has reprogrammed civilization to be overdependent on their phones and
social media.
I can relate really well to this topic because I have seen in my life where I focus too much
on the negative aspects of social media, and it has caused me to feel bad about myself. Instagram
is a popular platform in today’s society, and a lot of people depend on how many likes and
comments they receive on their posts. They think that likes are what makes you a “popular”
person and this has become a negative thing for teenagers in today’s society including me. Now I
catch myself waiting for how many likes and comments I get on when I post on Instagram. I
don’t get a lot in general, which is good with me, but I assume that just because I don’t get 200+
likes means that I am not good enough. I start to think why I don’t get that many likes or why
doesn’t anyone like me, and I mentally put myself in this bubble that closes everyone off.
Looking at how many likes a person has on their post is one case where social media has badly
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influenced my mental health and many others. Some of my friends think they aren’t pretty
Another social media platform, Snapchat, can have a negative environment. People can
post selfies, videos, or use a variety of filters to make them look better or add something exciting
to their post. People can do many different things that change the way they look and hide who
they really are on the outside. I tap through what people post on their stories and depending on
how they look, I stop on their post and stare at it for a while. I start to compare myself to them
and think why am I not like that. Sometimes I only post something so that someone will swipe
up and compliment me. I shouldn’t need to post something to know that I am valued or try to
match society’s standards. From personal experiences using Snapchat and Instagram and
watching The Social Dilemma is why I wanted to find more about how social media has affected
After deciding to research this topic, I started asking myself questions about social media
and mental health. The first thing I thought of was ‘why was social media bad for teenagers’ and
‘why has social media increased anxiety and depression’. I used APP search and Proquest to help
me find credible sources that would be good for my research. I found a few good scholarly
articles, but now I need to look in depth and see if they actually help me support my question.
The articles, journals, and books I looked at all had a similar conclusion that social media has
influenced young adults' mental health in a negative way. These have supported my argument
that social media has a negative impact on teenagers' lives. Some resources I found have said the
opposite of what I support, they have found evidence as to how using social networking sites do
not cause a negative effect on mental health disorders and can be used in a good way. I wanted to
include the counter argument, so readers would know that I acknowledged the valid points of
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others who believe social media is not bad. Overall, I believe that social media has a negative
effect on mental health because it has caused an increase in depression and anxiety, resulting in
Annotated Bibliography
Abi-Jaoude, Elia, et al. “Smartphones, Social Media Use and Youth Mental Health.” Canadian
“Smartphones, Social Media Use and Youth Mental Health” by Elia Abi-Jaoude
addresses the issue for the rise of smartphones and social media by many young adults
and children. Abi-Jaoude discusses how social media has been made to affect young
adults' sense of self through describing how people became envious of others while
scrolling on Facebook. She also considered if there is an addiction to social media and if
this affects mental illnesses. Abi-Jaoude mentioned the percentage rises in moderate to
serious mental issues for teenagers and while that was rising, social media was becoming
more popular. This journal appears credible because the author uses evidence from a
social media usage. This source can also be a little biased because some of the studies use
Depending on the circumstance a participant may be “addicted” but in reality they are
not. This journal was to be found useful because it gives information that proves social
media has had an impact on a person’s mental health which supports my argument that
Barthorpe, Amber, et al. “Is Social Media Screen Time Really Associated with Poor Adolescent
Mental Health? A Time Use Diary Study.” Journal of Affective Disorders, vol. 274,
The journal, “Is Social Media Screen Time Really Associated with Poor Adolescent
Mental Health? A Time Use Diary Study,” Amber Barthorpe studied 13-15 year olds and
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their use of social media. She discovered that the more they used social media it was
more associated with self-harm, depression, and lower self-esteem. No matter the time of
the day or day of the week, the association between social media usage and self-harm was
similar. Barthorpe analyzed data from the Millennium Cohort Study to look at social
media screen time and mental health outcomes. According to Barthorpe’s results, she
explained why there was an association and how in the future, people should look more
for other mental health outcomes and how they engage with social media. The
Millennium Cohort Study helped the journal appear credible because it was from the
National Institute for Health Research. The journal is useful to my research paper because
it provides support that social media does have a negative effect on mental health issues.
Social media has caused people to harm themselves and make them feel worse about who
they are.
Berryman, Chloe, et al. “Social Media Use and Mental Health among Young Adults.”
doi:10.1007/s11126-017-9535-6.
In this journal, “Social Media Use and Mental Health among Young Adults,” Berryman
studies the tendency for young adults to engage with social media or vaguebooking
(unclear messages that seem alarming to get attention) to say something about their
mental health. The outcomes of all these posts lead to the conclusion of adolescents
feeling lonely, isolated, having social anxiety, or even being suicidal. Teenagers don’t
come out and say they are feeling depressed because they don’t want to be bashed on.
Berryman’s results of this study conveyed that social media was not predictive of mental
health function, but through vaguebooking it was. Vaguebooking was predictive and
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because of this it is now looked as a warning sign for serious mental health issues. This
journal seems credible because the author graduated with a degree in psychology and the
research she composed backed up her student thesis for her senior year at college. This
supports my research paper because the journal goes into detail about how social media
plays a big role in young adults' lives and how it has influenced a person’s mental illness.
Coyne, Sarah M., et al. “Does Time Spent Using Social Media Impact Mental Health?: An Eight
Year Longitudinal Study.” Computers in Human Behavior, vol. 104, 2020, p. 106160.,
doi:10.1016/j.chb.2019.106160.
The journal, “Does Time Spent Using Social Media Impact Mental Health?: An Eight
Year Longitudinal Study” by Sarah Coyne highlights that time spent using social media
had no relation to anxiety or depression changes over the course of 8 years. Coyne tested
the hypothesis that time engaging with social media might displace better activities for
proactive mental health somewhere else. Her results state that increasing time on social
media had no influence on making mental health issues worse when looked at the
individual themself. This journal is credible because the author spent 8 years studying if
there is a relation between social media and mental health. The journal also used
information from the Family Studies Center at BYU, the School of Family Life, and the
College of Family Home and Social Science at BYU. This journal will be useful because
it tested the association between time spent using social media and anxiety and
depression, following the transition between adolescence and adulting. It also supports
the counterclaim that social media does not have an effect on mental health.
Gao, Junling, et al. “Mental Health Problems and Social Media Exposure during COVID-19
“Mental Health Problems and Social Media Exposure during COVID-19 Outbreak” by
Junling Gao focused on how much the citizens of Wuhan, China were exposed to social
media sites during Covid-19. Gao assessed mental health problems before participants
were exposed to social media and examined their association of what happened
afterwards. Gao’s results of this assessment was that there was a high frequency of
mental health problems, like depression and anxiety, that was associated with social
media exposure during Covid-19. This source seems credible because the author
conducted a cross-sectional study among Chinese Citizens who were 18 years or older.
This is a little biased because he did use a survey to do a rapid assessment which results
in some people lying when taking the survey. This supports my hypothesis that social
media is a bad influence because by the citizens being exposed to social networking
Adolescents.” Health Promotion International, vol. 34, no. 5, 2018, pp. 981–991.,
doi:10.1093/heapro/day056.
Michelle O’Reilly centers the article on the growing popularity of young adult mental
disorders, like depression and social anxiety, that poses a challenge for education and
healthcare systems globally. The goal for O’Reilly was to use social media as a leverage
tool to positively promote mental health among the young adults. These people
frequently depend on using social media to find information about mental health
disorders and how it would help themselves. By promoting social media platforms in a
positive way, they were able to conclude that this could change adolescents' lives. The
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article is credible because O’Reilly was a part of the Green Institute of Child Health and
is an expert in this field of study. This article is useful to my paper because it would
support the counter argument that social media can be a positive influence to mental
health issues.
The Social Dilemma Documentary. Directed by Jeff Orlowski. Exposure Labs Production, 2020.
Netflix, https://www.netflix.com/search?q=social%20dilemma&jbv=81254224
“The Social Dilemma” by Jeff Orlowski exposes the overuse of social media and how it
has influenced today’s society. Orlowski focuses on the reprogramming social media has
done to the community in the United States to make them dependent on it too much.
Orlowski discussed how bad push notifications are and how that keeps a person glued to
their phone. The documentary focuses on one student who tried to put their phone away
for a week but gave in a couple of days later because of one notification that popped up.
He grabbed his phone and then he was sucked in again. He then isolated himself from his
family because he was stuck in a continuous loop of scrolling through his feed. As the
documentary continued, you could see the student’s face and in his action’s how social
media was affecting him. This documentary is credible because Orlowski interviewed
many people that worked behind the scenes in programs like Facebook, Twitter,
Instagram, etc. This documentary is useful to my argument because it supports the fact
that people are consumed by social media and that it affects their health.
Pantic, Igor. “Online Social Networking and Mental Health.” Cyberpsychology, Behavior, and
Social Networking, vol. 17, no. 10, 1 Oct. 2014, pp. 652–657.,
doi:10.1089/cyber.2014.0070.
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“Online Social Networking and Mental Health” written by Igor Pantic communicates the
depression, anxiety, or other mental illnesses. Pantic focuses on the findings regarding
the connection between social media platforms and mental health issues. According to
Pantic, he concluded that even though social networking has gotten progressively bigger
and changed the way people communicate and interact, that does not mean there is a
relation between normal human behavior and mental disorders. This article appears
credible because the author used information from an Institute of Medical Physiology and
went to a school for medicine at the University of Belgrade. This supports my paper
because it addresses the controversy of how social media in a way can negatively
influence mental health. Mental health has gotten worse and social media can be a
leading cause of it, but that does not mean they are associated.