Handout2.Discursive Essay
Handout2.Discursive Essay
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I. TASK APPROACH
Some people believe that working from home is a positive trend; others claim it may
have bad effects on employees and the company. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
For this question, the upsides and downsides of working from home should be considered.
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separate.
b. “Reporter Technique”
This approach uses six powerful questions to help you collect ideas for your essay. Ask
yourself and answer these questions: What? Why? Who? How? When? Where?, then write down
the words/phrases that may help you to develop the arguments.
Some people believe in the traditional idea that the woman’s place is in the home, while
others say that idea is outdated and that women should play an increasingly important role in
the workplace of the future. Discuss both views.
2. Some people think that secondary school should add international news as a subject; others
think that it is a waste of valuable time. Discuss both views.
3. Essay structuring
The structure of a discursive essay should look like this:
Introduction
Paragraph 1 state the topic and present the 2 sides
Main Body
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Some people believe that it is wrong to keep animals in zoos, while others think that zoos are
both entertaining and ecologically important.
Discuss both views.
Arrange the points below in order to develop 2 body paragraphs. Write the 2 topic sentences.
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a. (Economic perspective) Zoos employ large numbers of people. They provide job
opportunities and income for the local area. The money raised can be used for conservation
projects. Zoos can be a destination to attract tourists and residents. Disadvantage: takes a lot of
money to take care of animals and conservation.
b. (Environmental perspective) Zoos are artificial environments. Animals lose their instinct to
hunt for food. It would be better to save endangered species by protecting their natural habitats.
c. (Environmental perspective) Zoos play an important role in wildlife conservation. They help
to protect endangered species. They allow scientists to study animal behavior. However, this is
really contradictory in essence, zoos should only be temporary solution to hedge the dangers of
poaching of endangered species in wildlife. The real question is how to preserve and conserve the
wild habitats of those held captive in zoos.
d. (Personal perspective) Zoos are interesting, educational and fun. They make a great day out
for families. Children learn to appreciate wildlife and nature. However, to exchange the
e. (Moral perspective) Keeping animals in cages is unethical. We have no right to use
animals for entertainment. Zoos exhibit animals with the aim of making a profit. From
an animal rights standpoint, humans do not have a right to breed,
capture, and confine other animals—even if those species
are endangered. Being a member of an endangered species doesn't mean
the individual animals should be afforded fewer rights.
Animals in captivity suffer from boredom, stress, and confinement.4 No
pen—no matter how humane—or drive-through safari can compare to
the freedom of the wild.
Body paragraph 1:
Topic sentence: ........................................................................................................................................
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Main points:
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Body paragraph 2:
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Read the model below and complete the paragraph plan at the end, identifying the topic and main
points of each paragraph.
When they finish school, teenagers face the dilemma of whether to get a job or continue their
education. While there are some benefits to getting a job straight after school, I would argue that
it is better to go to college or university.
The option to start work straight after school is attractive for several reasons. Many young
people want to start earning money as soon as possible. In this way, they can become
independent, and they will be able to afford their own house or start a family. In terms of their
career, young people who decide to find work, rather than continue their studies, may progress
more quickly. They will have the chance to gain real experience and learn practical skills related
to their chosen profession. This may lead to promotions and a successful career.
On the other hand, I believe that it is more beneficial for students to continue their studies.
Firstly, academic qualifications are required in many professions. For example, it is impossible
to become a doctor, teacher or lawyer without having the relevant degree. As a result, university
graduates have access to more and better job opportunities, and they tend to earn higher salaries
than those with fewer qualifications. Secondly, the job market is becoming increasingly
competitive, and sometimes there are hundreds of applicants for one position in a company.
Young people who do not have qualifications from a university or college will not be able to
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compete.
For the reasons mentioned above, it seems to me that students are more likely to be successful
in their careers if they continue their studies beyond school level.
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A. Introduction
B. Main body
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C. Conclusion
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b. “Discuss both views” vs. “Discuss both views AND give your opinion”
Exercise 4: Compare the following essays. How are they different? Why are they
different?
Essay 1:
Some people believe that studying at university or college is the best route to a successful
career, while others believe that it is better to get a job straight after school. Discuss both views
and give your opinion.
When they finish school, teenagers face the dilemma of whether to get a job or continue
their education. While there are benefits to getting a job straight after school, I would argue that
it is better to go to college or university.
The option to start work straight after school is attractive for several reasons. Many young
people want to start earning money as soon as possible. In this way, they can become
independent, and they will be able to afford their own house or start a family. In terms of their
career, young people who decide to find work, rather than continue their studies, may progress
more quickly. They will have the chance to gain real experience and learn practical skills related
to their chosen profession. This may lead to promotions and a successful career.
On the other hand, I believe that it is more beneficial for students to continue their
studies. Firstly, academic qualifications are required in many professions. For example, it is
impossible to become a doctor, teacher or lawyer without having the relevant degree. As a result,
university graduates have access to more and better job opportunities, and they tend to earn
higher salaries than those with fewer qualifications. Secondly, the job market is becoming
increasingly competitive, and sometimes there are hundreds of applicants for one position in a
company. Young people who do not have qualifications from a university or college will not be
able to compete.
For the reasons mentioned above, it seems to me that students are more likely to be
successful in their careers if they continue their studies beyond school level.
Essay 2
Some people believe that studying at university or college is the best route to a successful
career, while others believe that it is better to get a job straight after school.
Discuss both views.
When they finish school, teenagers face the dilemma of whether to get a job or continue
their education. While there are benefits to getting a job straight after school, there are also good
reasons why it might be beneficial to go to college or university.
The option to start work straight after school is attractive for several reasons. Many young
people want to start earning money as soon as possible. In this way, they can become
independent, and they will be able to afford their own house or start a family. In terms of their
career, young people who decide to find work, rather than continue their studies, may progress
more quickly. They will have the chance to gain real experience and learn practical skills related
to their chosen profession. This may lead to promotions and a successful career.
On the other hand, it is also understandable that many students choose to continue their
studies. Firstly, academic qualifications are required in many professions. For example, it is
impossible to become a doctor, teacher or lawyer without having the relevant degree. As a result,
university graduates have access to more and better job opportunities, and they tend to earn
higher salaries than those with fewer qualifications. Secondly, the job market is becoming
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increasingly competitive, and sometimes there are hundreds of applicants for one position in a
company. Young people who do not have qualifications from a university or college may not be
able to compete.
In conclusion, there are convincing arguments for starting work straight after school,
but higher education can also lead to a successful career.
II. PRACTICE
Develop an outline and write the first draft for one essay question (decided by the teacher)
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