This document provides a matrix of suggestions and corrections that were given for a research paper, and actions taken in response. There were three main suggestions: 1) to develop the introduction and background more fully to identify malnutrition as the problem; 2) to change one of the research problems; and 3) to modify the conceptual framework and omit certain variables. The actions taken were: 1) identifying malnutrition in the background across international, national and local data; 2) changing the second research problem; and 3) omitting socioeconomic status and Pinggang Pinoy as variables. Pages were referenced for where the actions could be found in the revised paper.
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Matrix of Suggestons/Corrections & Action Taken
This document provides a matrix of suggestions and corrections that were given for a research paper, and actions taken in response. There were three main suggestions: 1) to develop the introduction and background more fully to identify malnutrition as the problem; 2) to change one of the research problems; and 3) to modify the conceptual framework and omit certain variables. The actions taken were: 1) identifying malnutrition in the background across international, national and local data; 2) changing the second research problem; and 3) omitting socioeconomic status and Pinggang Pinoy as variables. Pages were referenced for where the actions could be found in the revised paper.
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MATRIX OF SUGGESTONS/CORRECTIONS & ACTION TAKEN
Research Title:
“Eating Habits of Early Childhood Pupils in Agusan del Sur
vis-à-vis to Pinggang Pinoy”
Corrections/Suggestions Action Taken: Page the action taken:
given:
1. Develop the We identify malnutrition as Pages 1-3
introduction or our problem in the background of the background of the study study and then arrange the data starting from international, national and local.
2. Change the research We followed the suggestion Page 14
problem from the panel that the research problem number 2 should be change. We change our research problem into;
1. What is the profile of
early childhood pupils in Agusan del Sur in terms of age and gender?
2. What are the eating
habits of early childhood pupils in Agusan del Sur vis-à-vis to Pinggang Pinoy in terms of age and gender?
3. What are the factors
influencing early childhood pupils eating habits? 3. Modify the We omitted the socio- Pages 9-10 conceptual economic status and framework and Pinggang Pinoy as research paradigm variables.
4. Change the We change our method into Page 11
methodology the combination of Quantitative-Qualitative Design in a descriptive way.