Argumentative Draft
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beautiful, and everything is fair. When education, healthcare, and justice are considered
a right and not a privilege, it is when we know that the country is being served right by
the authorities that we put into their respectful positions. Global economic and political
integration have been a long-term trend that we consider to be one of the greatest
supports for countries to boost their economic stability. Integration processes promise
countries to develop and strengthen their economies, improving the lives of the citizens
of the world. And the Philippines is not a stranger to the benefits that these integration
processes provide. However, considering that we are a long-term active member of the
ASEAN, isn’t it alarming that despite all the progress we have achieved for decades, the
The integration processes definitely are a major help for the Philippines to
improve its economic and political performance. Nonetheless, considering the current
state of the Philippines, the integration processes seem more like a band-aid solution to
a severely broken system. And if not fixed fast enough, we may be looking at a country
wherein the rich will become richer and the poor will be poorer. While a support from
these processes are always welcome, I think that the government should focus more on
what’s happening inside the country and strengthen the country’s economy in a way
that will enable the citizens to prepare for the changes that globalization will provide.
What better way to strengthen the local economy than by focusing on our agriculture? It
is a no-brainer that agriculture plays a vital role in every country, especially the
Philippines. It provides a country their main source of food, income, and employment.
Agriculture is considered as the backbone of our economy, providing 11.3% of the
country’s GDP way back 2014 which led to a 32% of total employment in 2012 [ CITATION
Fra16 \l 1033 ]. Yet, our farmers and fishermen are still one of the underpaid workers in
the Philippines. With our agricultural reform programs always taken for granted, 60% of
our country’s population either directly or indirectly involved will always be compromised
[ CITATION EJL14 \l 1033 ]. And this is very alarming because compromising the needs for
reform in the agriculture sector is a recipe for prolonging poverty and hunger in the
country.
Noted by the ASEAN Trade Union Council, our country is considered to have the
highest rate of economic and social inequality in South East Asia. Due to this, the gap
between the rich and the poor widens. This happens because there is an unequal
programs for the Filipinos[ CITATION ATU11 \l 1033 ]. Which raises my concern regarding
globalization, while the Philippines is integrating itself to the trend of globalization and
reaping the benefits of it, why is it that a greater percentage of Filipinos still suffering
from poverty and unemployment? It was stated that the increasing globalization
delivered the country an increase in trade openness which grants a relative reduction in
our country’s income inequality[ CITATION Diw17 \l 1033 ]. Moreover, we have recognized
an increase in GDP for the past years which is a good sign for the economy. However,
the increase in GDP also threatens an increase in OF remittances in which can actually
give rise to a higher income inequality[ CITATION Diw17 \l 1033 ]. With that being said, it is
safe to say that even if there is an increase in GDP exhibited in the country, if it is
partnered by a high rate of income inequality, it could still aggravate the country’s battle
with poverty. Also, a study conducted by ASEAN stated that while integration will
improve the flow of goods, services and investments, as well as labor in the country, if
the benefits provided by the ASEAN Economic Committee is still poorly managed and
unfairly distributed, it will put the country at a much higher risk of poverty,
liberalization and adoption of an open economy in which promises to bring more FDIs in
the country did not come to fruition, the employment sector in the Philippines has
remained relatively stagnant for the past two decades despite the steps taken [ CITATION
ILO19 \l 1033 ]. Which brings me back to the question, is global economic and political
integration bringing more harm than good to the Philippines and its people or not?
measures must and can be fixed first before aiming a more challenging step towards
progression. We must know that an imbalance in regulations and laws mandated in the
country generates a gap between the competitive and counterproductive sectors of the
Philippines. This can be tracked down to uneven growth and job opportunities in the
country[ CITATION Joh12 \l 1033 ]. Indeed, globalization can be a major help in supplying
our need for job opportunities. However, it is worth noting that, the majority of jobs
accepted to a job that can comfortably sustain their needs. This is when the problem
comes in, the need for better laws in education must be implemented, education should
be a right of the Filipinos because it is what will aid them into accessing a higher-paying
job in the future. Education is a vital tool not just for the personal benefit of each Filipino
but for our country’s economy as well. A research study conducted by the Institute of
Management Development (IMD) stated that among the 66 countries observed with
regard to its talent competitiveness, the Philippines had the most significant drop in the
World Talent Ranking in 2018. The ranking was categorized to three factors: investment
and development, appeal—which denotes the attractiveness of the country for local and
foreign talent, and readiness that represents the quality of education in the given
country. The Philippines’s sharpest drop in the three categories is on the readiness
factor in which went from the 11th to the 37th place. Due to this, the Philippines is
considered as “not as equipped” with the knowledge and skills that are vital for labor
employment [ CITATION Art18 \l 1033 ]. It is a known fact that education serves as the
foundation for sustained economic growth. Imagine the value of human capital where a
person who was able to access a higher paying job due to having enough educational
background will be able to provide its country a 62% share of human capital in total
wealth [ CITATION Har16 \l 1033 ]. Furthermore, countries who spend more on education
has showed a significant result in having a more stable economy than those who do not
prioritize education. This is proven by the Human Capital Theory which postulates that
people[ CITATION Jam06 \l 1033 ]. Education is an investment worth taking, this is where
everything boils down to. This is where innovation starts. Considering that the
Philippines’ greatest asset is the Filipinos, it is important that the government will take
care of our rights and continue to enhance our capabilities because this investment will
For my last point, I would like to ask what makes a country appealing for
investors to come and invest on it? Obviously, the government plays a vital role in this
part of the process. The economy as well as the political aspect of the country must be
going hand-in-hand smoothly to be able to attract more investors. This means that if our
country has very little political risks then investments would flow smoothly on us.
However, with the continuous rising issues on graft and corruption, armed conflicts,
human rights violations, and ingenuine governance; foreign investors tend to think twice
before laying out their investments to the country [ CITATION Joh12 \l 1033 ]. The IPAs
approved that foreign investment pledges have experienced a 69% percent increase,
from $2.04 billion to $3.45 billion from 2017-2018 [ CITATION Dou19 \l 1033 ]. However,
Foreign Direct Investments in the Philippines are still relatively low in all the members of
the ASEAN. The constraints in investments that we experience are all due to the
political risks stated above. This is why I do think that if we really want to be competitive
enough and effectively reap the benefits of the integration processes in the country, in
which no Filipino will be left behind, we must straighten out our political risks first. This
way, an improvement in the political issues in the Philippines will have a domino effect
Agriculture is a big deal for the Philippines considering that we are primarily
known as an agricultural country and that we take pride on our natural resources, our
geographical location as well as our climate. The agriculture sector of the country
contributes to 20% of the GDP and 39.8% labor force of the country. However, this
sector only made it to the 4% of our national budget [ CITATION Mas18 \l 1033 ]. This is
alarming because since 2011 the funds for our agricultural sector has been decreasing
and this sector has been experiencing various challenges when it comes to land
distribution and most especially natural calamities. With that being said, to aid the
problems that the country’s agricultural sector is facing due to the natural calamities, the
that will help the Filipino farmers get back on their feet [ CITATION Mas18 \l 1033 ]. Also,
IFAD offered economic and business strategies for 55,000 small farmers in the
Philippines; educating them about the effective use of various farming methods. The
IFAD aspires that these projects will reduce poverty in the Philippines in the long run.
While the projects and promises of the IFAD are highly appealing and hopeful, we
should take not that encompassing the 39.8% of labor force in the country equates to
more than 12 million people working on the agricultural sector and 70% of them are our
rural farmers and fishermen[ CITATION TNH13 \l 1033 ]. 55,000 farmers helped and assisted
is nice but this number shrinks in comparison to the millions of agricultural workers who
are affected by the budget cut in this sector. The budget cut from the agricultural sector
decreasing palay farm-gate prices to reduce the adverse impacts of the rice tariff law
and so much more [CITATION Fil19 \l 1033 ]. Overall, the budget cut only caused so much
harm on the industry for it did not only affect the livelihood of millions of farmers but it
also took its toll on our production of goods. Granting the wish of the Department of
Agriculture of having a budget which amounts to PHP333.2 billion will give the
Philippines through building more farm to market roads, bringing back and expanding
our declining marine resources, as well as giving our farmers and fishermen a much
better livelihood programs [ CITATION Fil19 \l 1033 ]. All that I want to say is that, obviously,
we have enough funds to fund the various sectors of the government. Financial aid from
other countries are greatly appreciated but they are not the only solution. What we need
In 2015, the ASEAN economic committee promised to provide 3.1 million jobs in
the Philippines to aid the 38% vulnerability of jobs in the country. Due to this, the
Philippines will have to enhance its skills and technical training for this project to be
successful. The AEC will provide opportunities for 600 million eligible workers in various
working fields [ CITATION ADB14 \l 1033 ]. Also, the estimated rate of unemployment on
April 2019 was 5.1% which experienced a 0.4% decrease since April 2018 [ CITATION
Ral19 \l 1033 ]. The Philippines’ adoption of an open economy as well as the trade
liberalization is also a step taken towards acquiring an increase in FDIs in the country,
this has shown some benefits and improvements for the past decades in terms of the
labor force in our country [ CITATION ILO19 \l 1033 ]. However, as stated above, while an
increase in FDIs and GDP are good for the economy it is not an enough factor to fully
conclude that our economy is actually improving [ CITATION Diw17 \l 1033 ]. Furthermore,
from 2014 to 2019, the country has experienced a decrease in unemployment rate as
well as bloom in the economy but this is mainly due to the remittances from our
Overseas Filipino Workers. The OFW plays a pivotal role in our country’s economy but
this does not erase the fact that local employment is what the government should be
prioritizing. Everyone desires to have a complete family and having to sacrifice and
leave your family behind to find a job in another country to be able to sustain your
family’s needs is heroic but not everyone wants that. Some are forced to do so because
they have no choice, their country can’t support them. Although the government says
that the struggle against unemployment is a top concern, its actions and solutions to this
From 2008-2015, the Philippines has been taking measures to decrease the
number of out-of-school youth in the country, their efforts to make education a right
rather than a privilege led them to acquiring a rise in the net enrollment rate in primary
1033 ]. Furthermore, the country also decided to implement the EBEA which is the
addition of another 2 years in high school also called as senior high school. This is done
to further aid the educational capabilities of the Filipinos and to not fall behind our
neighboring countries who are already implementing this program. Also, this K-12
reform intents to have the Filipino students be better equipped and competitive enough
to be able to take foreign jobs as well as educational opportunities all over the world. I
would say that the objectives of the K-12 program are understandable and justifiable.
education is one of the major keys to that. However, the immediate implementation of
this program led the Department of Education with major lack in facilities as well as
teachers. Furthermore, the Philippines is also one of the member countries of ASEAN
that has allotted a lower budget for education in the country which leads to
compromised teaching facilities, personnel, as well as quality education. This is, again,
Truthfully, I do think that global economic and political integrations are inevitable
and irreversible. We will have to face this one way or another because it is a global
trend. However, we should not expect or rely much on the outcomes that it could bring
to the country. Such optimism blinds us from the harsh reality it can provide especially
for the people who are living on or below the minimum wage fare. Remember that
globalization comes with a higher cost of living. Just let that sink in. If there are people
living on a Php150-200 per day to sustain an entire family’s need that day, could they
afford a much higher cost of living due to globalization? All decisions should be
thoroughly thought of. We can’t expect a sudden bloom in the local economy just
because of global economic and political integrations because for one thing, we have
been actively participating in the globalization projects for decades and yet the majority
of the Filipinos are still living and suffering in poverty. Yes, we have seen some
improvements in the economy with the help of these integration processes but to be
honest, who are really benefiting from this economic growth? We have witnessed
benefits in the labor force when it comes to trade treaties but it’s only just a mere dream
to have the entire labor force benefit from the trade treaties provided. This is because
although we have such high number of people available for services, how many of
those people are actually qualified? How many of them have the skills and technological
knowledge for the standards of foreign employment? These types distortions in our
system and economy only leads to a gap between the rich and the poor, and sadly,
these disproportions greatly benefit the elites. Aiming to be more globalized is a good
thing, we must always aim the top and aim for improvement. But remember that a
smaller gap between the rich and poor is what determines a country’s success.
Everyone should be living without fear, everyone should have access to the basic
necessities as well as rights. No one should be left behind in our journey towards the
top. With all these facts laid out, I would like to clarify that I am not against the global
economic and political integrations. I am all for change and for a progressive country.
It’s just that I do not think that we are ready enough to be involving ourselves too much
on this global trend and that we are putting our focus on issues and projects that are not
solving the major concerns of the country and its people. While the integration process
definitely improved sectors in our economy, we must also be aware of the preparedness
of each citizen of the country. That is why I think that without properly addressing the
current issues of the country, the gap between the rich and the poor will continue to
increase and the majority of the Filipinos will suffer from shock due to the increased
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