ESL 202 Final - S
ESL 202 Final - S
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Living aboard a space station in orbit around the Earth for month at a time pose
problem for astronauts’ body as well as for their mind. One major problem involve
maintaining astronauts’ physical health. Medical treatment may be day or even week
away, as there may not be a doctor on board. Illness such as appendicitis or ulcers could
be fatal in space because of the delay in getting to a doctor. Another problem is the
potential for bone deterioration. In a weightless environment, the body produce less
calcium. Astronauts must exercise at least three hour a day to prevent bone loss. A
second major problem is maintaining astronauts’ mental health. Being confined for long
period of time in dark and hostile space often produce stress. Loneliness and boredom
are other psychological concern.
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Paragraph 3
Writing, particularly academic writing, is not easy. It take study and practice to
develop this skill. For both native speaker and new learner of English, it is important to
note that writing is a process, not a “product”. This mean that a piece of writing, whether
it is a composition for an English class or a lab report for a chemistry class, is never
complete; that is, it is always possible to review and revise.