Sat Essay Template: #1: An Introduction
Sat Essay Template: #1: An Introduction
To build a great SAT essay template, you need to know what it needs to include.
Here are the five most important elements of any SAT essay:
#1: An Introduction
The first impression the grader will have of your writing is your essay introduction.
Don't just jump right into discussing argumentative techniques — introduce your
analysis with a statement of what the author is arguing in the prompt. You
should then briefly mention the specific persuasive techniques the author used that
you'll be discussing in your essay.
I've separated this out as its own point because it’s so important. You must express
a precise claim about what the author's point is and what techniques she uses
to argue her point; otherwise, you're not answering the essay question correctly.
This cannot be emphasized enough: SAT essay graders do not care what your
stance is on the issue. They care that you understand and explain how the author
argues her point.
The SAT essay task is designed for you to demonstrate that you can analyze the
structure of an argument and its affect on the reader with clear and coherent
reasoning. Take this example prompt, for instance:
Write an essay in which you explain how Eric Klinenberg builds an argument to
persuade his audience that Americans need to greatly reduce their reliance on
air-conditioning. In your essay, analyze how Klinenberg uses one or more of the
features listed in the box above (or features of your own choice) to strengthen the
logic and persuasiveness of his argument. Be sure that your analysis focuses on
the most relevant features of the passage.
A bad thesis leaves you unclear on what features of the author's arguments you'll be
analyzing in the essay:
The author tries to enforce to his audience by telling that air conditioning has
negative effects.
This thesis doesn’t specify what features of the argument you'll be discussing, or
even what Klinenberg's specific views are. It's just a (grammatically flawed) sentence
that hints at Klinenberg's argument. Compare to a good thesis for the same prompt:
Through consideration of quantitative data, exploring possible counterarguments
to his position, and judicious use of striking phrasings and words, Klinenberg
strengthens both the logic and persuasiveness of his argument that Americans
need to greatly reduce their reliance on air conditioning.
The above thesis clearly specifies both what the author's argument is and what
aspects of the argument will be analyzed in the essay. If you want more practice
writing strong thesis statements, use our complete list of SAT essay prompts as
inspiration.
To support your thesis, you'll need to draw on specific examples from the passage
of the techniques you claim the author uses. Make sure to provide enough
information for each example to make it clear how it is relevant to your thesis - and
stop there. No need to paraphrase the entire passage, or explain why you agree or
disagree with the author's argument - write enough that the reader can understand
what your example is and be done.
It isn't enough to just summarize or paraphrase specific excerpts taken from the
passage and call it a day. In each example paragraph, you must not only include
details about a example, but also include an explanation of how each example
demonstrates an argument technique and why it is persuasive. For instance,
let's say you were planning on discussing how the author uses vivid language to
persuade the reader to agree with him. Yes, you'd need to start by quoting parts of
the passage where the author uses vivid language, but you then also need to explain
why that example demonstrates vivid language and why it would be persuasive to
the reader.
#5: A Conclusion
TEMPLATE 1
Paragraph 1: Introduction
Paraphrase the author’s claim in a “roadmap” sentence that lists three features the author uses
to convince the reader of his or her argument. You will then discuss each feature in a separate
body paragraph.
Student Example 1: “Adam Summers conveys this through citing statistics, appealing to the
audience’s emotions and sense of self-interests, and utilizing sarcastic diction.”
Student Example 2: “Summers, like any good writer, employs tactical reasoning and persuasive
devices to plead with the audience to take his side. In this article, he demonstrates many such
devices.”
The Twist
Interesting conclusions have a twist. The twist is a surprise ending, something new that you
haven’t shown the reader before. It could be a judgment or interpretation about what was the
most important point the writer made, the most convincing source he used, or the weakest point
he made. Or it could tie the author’s main point to a broader context, as shown here:
For example:
Introduction: “Overall, this essay focuses on the importance of the principles of Authority and
Responsibility, Unity of Direction, Division of Work and Esprit de Corps.”
Conclusion: “Other modern businesses may have thrived by strenuously applying different
principles than the four mentioned, but it appears, as Pumpkin Patch shows, behind any great
business, past or present, you will find the application of one or more of Fayol’s 14 General
Principles of Management.”