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Education.....................................................................................................................2

Cities............................................................................................................................18

Environment.............................................................................................................24

Health..........................................................................................................................32

Family.........................................................................................................................38

Advertising................................................................................................................44

Crime...........................................................................................................................48

Gender........................................................................................................................50

International language.........................................................................................52

Sport and leisure.....................................................................................................54

Tourism......................................................................................................................56

Transport...................................................................................................................59

Television, Internet and mobile phones........................................................65

Work............................................................................................................................75

Global issues.............................................................................................................79

Government and Society......................................................................................85

Personal development..........................................................................................91

Tradition and modern lifestyle.........................................................................95

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 Education

Topic: Some universities offer online courses as an alternative to classes

delivered on campus.

Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

✓
Band 8 sample answer
In many universities, distance learning through an online platform is provided for
students as an
option to replace traditional classrooms. In my view, although such a
development could be
detrimental in a number of ways, overall, I believe it to be an essential step
forward.
On the one hand, this method of remote learning, without the need for regular
face-to-face contact
with teachers in a classroom, is negative for two reasons. Firstly, students who
study online do not
develop comprehensively in the way that other students who attend classes at
school do. During
online courses, it is difficult for students to make friends or attempt to compete
with their peers. This
is often linked to the fact that those learners seem to undervalue the
significance of interaction and
rivalry with classmates in an educational environment, which are actually
regarded as great stimuli
for scholastic success. Secondly, participants of online learning programs have a
tendency to
procrastinate more and poorly allocate an appropriate amount of time to
complete assignments. This
form of studying requires tremendous self-discipline as well as excellent
organization and time
management skills as students usually struggle with balancing their coursework
with other priorities,
and quickly become unmotivated without direct guidance from instructors.
On the other hand, online learning is proving to be a great alternative, although
traditional universities
are still widely considered as the best way to acquire knowledge and a
qualification. Access to all
resources within a traditional course is offered, which empowers learners to
freely choose from a
wide range of different subjects, from science to economics. Furthermore, lower
costs and the
widespread presence of the Internet allow unlimited numbers of participants,
regardless of not only
their financial background but also current living location. For example, Coursera
is a website that
offers a variety of courses at reasonable prices and presents valid certification
for participants upon
completion of each course.
In conclusion, though there are some drawbacks to studying via online courses, I
do believe that this
method is a revolutionary step in contemporary tertiary education systems.
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Vocabulary highlights:

1. Regular face-to-face contact with teachers in a classroom: tương tác

trực tiếp với giáo viên trên lớp

2. The significance of interaction and rivalry with classmates in an

educational environment: ý nghĩa quan trọng của sự tương tác và cạnh
tranh với bạn cùng lớp trong môi trường giáo dục

3. Tremendous self-discipline as well as excellent organization and time

management skills: tính kỷ luật cao cùng với kĩ năng kiểm soát thời gian
và sắp xếp công việc hiệu quả

4. Access to all resources within a traditional course: Có thể truy cập tất cả
các nguồn kiến thức trong một khóa học truyền thống

5. Lower costs and the widespread presence of the Internet: giá rẻ và

sự xuất hiện khắp nơi của Internet
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Topic: It is neither possible nor useful for a country to provide university
places for a high proportion of young people.

To what extent do you agree or disagree?

✓ Band 8 sample answer

There has been a difference of opinions regarding the accessibility of tertiary

education to the majority of young people. In my view, dispensing university
educational services on such a large scale brings about no practical values to
society, and in addition, is rather unfeasible to carry out.

Firstly, widespread entry into university does not seem really useful to a
country since it is necessary for the government to take the needs of both the
youth and the economy into consideration. In many countries, especially
Germany, vocational training has gained more popularity among young people
because it enhances employment opportunities as well as job security upon
completion. Furthermore, if everyone could gain admittance to college, it
would lead to imbalances in the workforce that would greatly damage the
economic structure of a country. This is because there is little chance that
university graduates would choose blue-collar jobs such as working in factories,
over the jobs that they are qualified for.

Secondly, I think that it is impossible to provide almost all young people with
access to tertiary education. In Vietnam, the demand for entering college
never ceases to grow. This puts the government in a dilemma of whether they
should risk allocating their resources and therefore face the possibility of
bankruptcy due to exorbitant education costs in many financially
independent universities, such as the Foreign Trade University or the National
Economics University. Furthermore, it is simply unrealistic for universities to
accommodate such a sudden increase in the number of students on campus,
not to mention the fact that most departments are currently short-staffed.

In conclusion, I strongly oppose the idea of supplying entry to a high

proportion of young people owing to the arguments presented above.
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Vocabulary highlights:

1. Dispensing university educational services on such a large scale: phân phát

dịch vụ giáo dục

ở quy mô lớn như vậy

2. Enhance employment opportunities as well as job security: gia tăng cơ

hội việc làm cũng như bảo hiểm nghề nghiệp

3. Imbalances in the workforce: những bất cân bằng trong lực lượng lao động

4. Exorbitant education costs: chi phí giáo dục quả đắt đỏ

5. Financially independent university: đại học độc lập tài chính

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Topic: Everyone should stay at school until 18.

To what extent do you agree or disagree?

✓ Band 8 sample answer

Some people think that all children should stay at school until the age of
eighteen. Although staying at school until adulthood can produce a number
benefits, I personally disagree with this idea for a number of reasons, which
will be outlined in this essay.

On the one hand, the idea that children should continue to study at school
until the age of eighteen does have a number of benefits. Firstly, most young
people under the age of eighteen have very little real-world experience and
have very little idea of what career they will pursue, and therefore staying at
school until the age of eighteen will allow them further opportunity to develop
their education and time to decide upon a suitable career path. Furthermore,
forcing children to stay at school until the age of eighteen will create a more
educated future generation of people which may help to reduce some social
and unemployment problems.

On the other hand, there are also a number of drawbacks that this idea may
bring with it. For instance, many children these days do not fit-in with the
current education system and forcing them to participate in school can cause
many problems. For example, these kinds of students are usually very
disruptive in a classroom and this affects other students who are trying to
learn. In addition to this, many children choose to follow careers that do not
require them to continue studying in school past the age of sixteen. For
example, for those who wish to pursue a career that requires more practical
based learning, such as a qualified builder, electrician or machinery operator,
it is quite unnecessary to remain at school until the age of eighteen.

In conclusion, although there would be a number of positive effects from

children remaining at school until a later age, I personally feel that the
drawbacks outweigh the benefits mentioned above.
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Vocabulary highlights:

1. Have very little real-world experience: Có rất ít kinh nghiệm thực tế

2. Create a more educated future generation of people: tạo một thế hệ

được giáo dục tốt hơn trong tương lai

3. Fit-in: Hoà nhập

4. Disruptive: hay gây rắc rối

5. A career that requires more practical based learning: 1 nghề nghiệp đòi
nhiều hơn về việc học từ thực tế
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Topic: Writing, reading and maths are the three recognized traditional
subjects. Computer skill should also be the fourth largest branch.

Do you agree or disagree?

✓ Band 8 sample answer

With the use of computers in almost every aspect of life, many people argue
that computer skills are becoming an important subject at school besides the
holy trinity of writing, reading and math. Personally, I agree with this opinion
for a number of reasons.

To begin with, including computer skills as a compulsory subject at school can

help students be better prepared for their future career. In this era of
technology, it goes without saying that computer literacy is an indispensable
requirement that almost every recruiter seeks in a resume. Therefore, in

order to gain and secure a decent job in the future, students definitely should
have a good grasp of computers skills such as Microsoft Office or internet and
social media skills.

In addition, teaching computer skills at school means providing students with a

versatile tool to be able to have access to an almost unlimited source of
knowledge and information. Students with computer skills can get access to a
large amount of online materials and also take advantage of distance learning,
which facilitates self-study. For example, my 12-year-old sister can now study
English pronunciation on Youtube channels at home by herself thanks to
information searching skills she was taught at primary school.

Finally, regarding entertainment and social life, being armed with just some
basic computer skills, students can also join social networking sites such as
Facebook or Twitter to keep in contact with their relatives who live far away or
widen their circle of online friends. They can also approach a wide range of
music websites or online games to help relax after studying.

In conclusion, for the above mentioned reasons, I completely believe that

computer skills should be recognized as one of the more significant subjects
besides the conventional ones like math, reading and writing.
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Vocabulary highlights:

1. Holy trinity: bộ ba thần thánh

2. Computer literacy is an indispensable requirement that almost every

recruiter seeks in a resume : thông thạo máy tính là một điều kiện
không thể thiếu mà mỗi nhà tuyển dụng tìm trong hồ sơ xin việc.

3. Have a good grasp of computer skills: sự thành thạo về kĩ năng máy tính

4. Have an access to an almost unlimited source of knowledge and

information: có sự tiếp cận tới một nguồn kiến thức và thông tin gần
như vô hạn

5. Widen their circle of online friends: mở rộng các mối quan hệ bạn bè trên
mạng
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Topic: Students leave high school without learning the way how to manage their
money.

What are the reasons and solutions of this issue?

✓ Band 8 sample answer

There is a common problem among high school graduates these days where
students are leaving school without any knowledge or skill in personal money
management. This essay will outline a number of reasons for this trend and a
number of possible solutions to help tackle the issue.

Firstly, one of the main causes of this problem is that the majority of high
school students live with their parents and are completely financially
dependent upon them.
Most students do not need to work to earn money
while at high school, as their parents pay for all their needs,
and therefore do not gain any understanding about the realities of earning and
saving money. Usually, the only money that students receive is from their
parents
and this is typically in the form of pocket-money,
which is given with the intent of it being spent.
Therefore, young people only really learn how to spend money,
and not how to earn, save or manage it wisely.

However, there are a number of viable solutions to help students deal with
this problem.
Firstly, basic money management skills could be included as a compulsory
subject for students in their high school years,
which would help equip them with the knowledge and skills to manage their
own personal finances when they leave school, move out of home and enter
employment.
The second possible step that could be taken to help curb this problem
is through education at home. Parents need to take responsibility
to make sure that their children are adequately educated in such matters
to ensure their children maintain a successful and independent financial
situation
after graduating and leaving home.

In conclusion, although money management is a problem for a lot of school

leavers,
there are a number of viable solutions to counteract this problem.

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Vocabulary highlights:

1. Personal money management skills: kĩ năng quản lí tiền bạc cá nhân

2. Financially dependent upon parents: phụ thuộc tài chính vào bố mẹ

3. Pocket-money: tiền tiêu vặt

4. Equip them with the knowledge and skills to manage their own
personal finances: trang bị cho họ kiến thức và kĩ năng để quản lí tài
chính cá nhân

5. Enter employment: bắt đầu xin việc

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Topic: Student learn far more with their teachers than other sources (the Internet
or television).

To what extent do you agree or disagree?

✓ Band 8 sample answer

Some people say that students learn much more from their teachers than they
do from other sources of education, such as the internet or television.
Personally, I believe that although people now have access to huge amounts of
information via the internet and television, teachers do play a crucial role in a
student’s learning.

On the one hand, it is undeniable that people now have access to a seemingly
unlimited amount of information via the internet. This now makes it possible
for some people to completely educate themselves in almost any area of
knowledge without leaving the comfort of their own home. With the use of
such websites like Youtube, Kahn Academy, Alison, and other educational sites,
people can learn and study from a huge range of subjects and topics. In
addition to this, the increase in television channels in the past couple of
decades has also provided people with further potential sources of education.

However, although there is a wealth of information at people’s fingertips

these days, finding and sifting through the large amounts of material, to find
accurate, reliable sources can also present a problem, and this is where
teachers can be of great benefit. Part of a teacher’s job is to have good
knowledge of the subject they are teaching, and this can ensure that students
learn from accurate and reliable knowledge. Another benefit that teachers
bring is guidance. Teachers are trained to guide students through their
learning, by knowing different student’s needs and abilities and the most
effective methods of teaching them, thereby enhancing the productivity of
their learning.

In conclusion, although there are vast amounts of information that can easily
be accessed by all people, I believe that teachers do play a vital role in the
learning process of students.
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Vocabulary highlights:

1. Educate themselves in almost any area of learning: tự giáo dục bản thân trong
mọi lĩnh vực

2. Wealth of information at people’s fingertips: một biển trời kiến thức trong
tầm tay loài người

3. Ensure that students learn from accurate and reliable knowledge: chắc
chắn rằng học sinh học nhữg kiến thức chính xác và đáng tin cậy

4. Enhance the productivity: tăng cường hiệu suất

5. Learning process of students: quá trình học tập của học sinh
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Topic: Schools are no longer necessary because children can get so much
information available through the Internet, and they can study just as well at
home.

To what extent do you agree or disagree?

✓ Band 8 sample answer

Since there is a wealth of information available on the Internet, students can

study by themselves at home just as effectively as they do at school; and
therefore some people believe that schools are not needed anymore. In my
view, much as I agree that students can study well at home with the help of the
Internet, I feel that schools play a vital role in our society and cannot be
replaced no matter what.

There are ways for children to learn from the Internet,

most of which are either free or affordable for almost everyone.
One great way is from online newspapers and video websites such as National
Geographic and Youtube, which offers a variety of topic areas suitable for
people of different ages. Children can learn a great deal of knowledge about
culture, science, and many other areas which they are taught at schools. Also,
they can participate in online courses favored by a growing number of youths
nowadays. This type learning is even more advantageous in the sense that
children can flexibly choose to study whatever subjects they are interested in.

That being said, my conviction is that formal education is irreplaceable in any

society. It is true that students can acquire knowledge at home very easily with
the help of the Internet; however, lack of teachers’ guidance and peer support
is a clear disadvantage to this form of learning. These factors are extremely
important to a child’s intellectual development, which emphasizes the
necessity of school environments. Furthermore, knowledge and skills are not
the only things to expect from formal education but social relationships and
mental development. Children who go to school and establish friendships can
both have fun and improve their learning outcomes.

In conclusion, the Internet is a good way for young children to study at home,
but I think that claiming schools are irrelevant to children’s learning because
of this is merely absurd.
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Vocabulary highlights:

1. A wealth of information: Rất nhiều thông tin

2. Online newspapers and video websites: Báo mạng và các trang web video

3. A great deal of knowledge: Lượng lớn kiến thức

4. Flexibly choose to study whatever subjects they are interested in: Linh
động chọn học bất cứ môn gì họ thích

5. Acquire knowledge: Lấy kiến thức

6. Lack of teachers’ guidance and peer support: Thiếu sự hướng dẫn và hỗ

trợ của giáo viên và bạn bè

7. A child’s intellectual development: Sự phát triển trí tuệ của một đứa trẻ

8. Formal education: Giáo dục trường học

9. Social relationships and mental development: Các mối quan hệ xã hội

và sự phát triển tinh thần

10.Establish friendships: Thêm bạn mới

11.Improve their learning outcomes: Cải thiện kết quả học tập

12.Irrelevant to children’s learning: Không liên quan đến việc học của trẻ em
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Topic: Some people think that children should start school at a very early
age, but others believe that chilren should go to school until they are older.

Discuss both views and give your opinion.

✓ Band 8 sample answer

People have different views about whether children should start their formal
education as early as possible or delay it until they are older. Personally, I
believe an early commencement of study would be far more beneficial than a
later start.

Firstly, starting school at a young age would generate a number of positive

outcomes. Undeniably, the younger an individual is, the easier it is for them to
acquire new knowledge and information. As a result, these children would
have a head start over their peers pursuing higher education. Besides this,
they would have more opportunity to figure out their natural talents. Most
Vietnamese children, for example, are sent to kindergarten at the age of 3 or 4
where they are taught basic skills such as addition and subtraction. After a
couple of months, those showing potential will be further cared for by teachers
with an aim to train them to become specialized students who can represent
their school in national and international competitions in the not-too-distant
future.

On the other hand however, several individuals advocate a later start to formal
schooling due to a number of reasons. It is believed that commencing school at
a later age will offer kids more time to learn many things via their parents at
home. As a result, these children will become more mature and integrate more
easily into the educational environment in the upcoming years. In addition, it
might also be more beneficial for children to have a childhood in which they
can cultivate their own skills and interests through normal activities at home.

Personally, I believe that such ideas are flawed because delaying schooling
reduces the opportunity for social interaction. Despite being safe with their
parents at home, children would have fewer chances to engage in
extracurricular activities which would equip them with vital soft skills including
teamwork and communication skills. Not to mention, while not at school,
many children tend to lead an unhealthy lifestyle as their free time is devoted
to online games, which gradually isolate them from society.
To conclude, I do believe that it would be well-advised that parents send their
children to school at an early age.

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Vocabulary highlights:

1. An early commencement of study: việc học sớm

2. Head start: khởi đầu trước

3. Formal schooling: việc học chính thức

4. Vital soft skills including teamwork and communication skills: kĩ năng

mềm quan trọng bao gồm kĩ năng làm việc nhóm và giao tiếp

5. Well-advised : khôn ngoan

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 Cities

Topic: Nowadays young people spend too much of their free time in
shopping malls. Some people fear that this may have negative effects on
young people and the society they live in.

To what extent do you agree or disagree?

✓ Band 8 sample answer

As countries and cities become more and more developed, the occurrence of
large shopping malls is on the rise and due to factors such as advertising and
boredom, young people are being lured into shopping malls where they are
aimlessly wasting their time and money. Personally, I believe that this can
have a number of detrimental impacts on young people and the society they
live in.

Firstly, by spending time in shopping malls, young people are exposing

themselves to large amounts of advertising and products which only drives
their desire to purchase and consume more. Young people will end up feeling
that they need to have things that, in reality, they don’t, and this can create an
unhealthy state of mind, and a consumeristic attitude to life. As a result, the
society they live in will suffer from the many drawbacks of consumerism such
as wasted energy and resources, and landfills full of goods that have been
overproduced.

Secondly, not only is spending too much time in shopping malls having a
negative impact on the minds of today’s youth, but it is also having many
negative impacts on their physical health. Young people who spend too much
time wandering around shopping malls are missing out on important time that
could be spent outdoors playing sport or participating in other recreational
activities. It is well known that those who spend time outdoors involved in such
activities mentioned above will enjoy a much healthier lifestyle and be less at
risk of suffering from a range of common diseases caused by a sedentary
lifestyle, such as obesity and diabetes.

In conclusion, I believe that parents need to spend more time teaching their
children about the importance of spending their free time wisely, and avoiding
the pitfalls of a consumeristic lifestyle.
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Vocabulary highlights:

1. To be lured into: bị dụ dỗ làm gì

2. Aimlessly wasting their time and money: vung phí tiền bạc và thời gian

3. Exposing themselves to: làm cho chính họ

4. Drive their desire to purchase and consume more: làm cho họ

muốn mua và tiêu dùng nhiều hơn

5. A consumeristic attitude: thái độ tiêu dùng quá đà

6. Suffer from the many drawbacks of consumerism: chịu những tác

hại của chủ nghĩa tiêu dùng

7. A negative impact on the minds of today’s youth: ảnh hưởng tiêu

cực vào tâm lý giới trẻ ngày nay

8. A sedentary lifestyle : lối sống ít vận động

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Topic: More and more people in the city live in homes with small spaces or no
outdoor areas.

Do you think it is a negative or positive development?

✓ Band 8 sample answer

With the growing population of cities, more city dwellers are having to live in
cramped houses with no outdoor spaces. In my opinion, this trend brings about
both positive and negative aspects, however, I believe its advantages outweigh
the disadvantages.

On the one hand, there is no denying the fact that when living in a tiny home
without big windows and sufficient green space nearby, residents will be prone
to some negative feelings. This is due to the fact that residents do not have
any space for recreational activities, such as watering flowers or playing with
their pets, after dealing with a heavy workload or stressful day. They therefore
may feel exasperated within their apartments, and this can lead to a number
of mental health problems such as depression.

However, although living in tiny houses possesses some downsides, the

potential benefits are also numerous. The initial advantage is that living in a
small house prevents frivolous spending on items that are only used to fill a
space rather than to fulfil a function, helping people to be more disciplined
with money. Along with buying less stuff because they have no room for it,
they will also avoid wasting time on maintaining all that stuff. Small houses,
moreover, encourage family bonding, creating an environment where family
members can get organized and make the home a happy place. In comparison
to larger accommodation, where there are separate rooms for each member,
small homes offer a common living space for the whole family, which will
provide more opportunities for the family to talk and share stories and
feelings.

In conclusion, although small houses can be possibly detrimental to the

occupant’s feelings, I still believe that living in limited space seems to be more
beneficial to city dwellers when it comes to good financial management and
family bonding.
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Vocabulary highlights:

1. Be prone to negative feelings: dễ có những cảm xúc tiêu cực

2. Recreational activities: hoạt động giải trí

3. Family bonding: sự gắn bố gia đình

4. Offer a common living space for the whole family: tạo ra không gian
sinh hoạt chung cho cả gia đình
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Topic: It is difficult for people in the cities to get enough physical exercise.

What are the causes and solutions?

✓ Band 8 sample answer

In recent years, maintaining physical fitness and overall well-being has

become one of the top priorities for people. One of the most effective method
is exercising, yet many city dwellers find it challenging to exercise frequently.
This essay will analyze some of the reasons as well as propose some feasible
solutions to this concern.

On the one hand, a lack of physical exercise is caused by several factors. First, a
large proportion of the city population devote all their time to working and
such a commitment reduces the amount of spare time and energy for
exercising. In addition, the sedentary lifestyle that many young people
nowadays prefer is another contributor to this issue. Since most teenagers and
young adults are used to spending most of their time sitting in front of the TV
screens or surfing social networking sites, physically exhausting activities
seem unnecessary and unappealing.

On the other hand, there are numerous measures that the government could
do to improve the situation. To begin with, a new law that shortens the
average working hours should be introduced. If workers are allowed to leave
work early, they will be able to spend time pursuing healthy activities and
habits. Secondly, more financial resources should be allocated to educating
city residents, especially the young generations, about the paramount
importance of physical exercise. An online propagation campaign about the
potential health risks of sedentary behaviors on popular websites such as
Facebook and Twitter, for example, will serve as a warning for people who do
not exercise enough and in turns, encourage a healthier lifestyle.

To sum up, citizens of many big cities, although fully aware of the vital role of
physical exercise, still confront many difficulties in making it a habit, and two
main solutions including reducing working hours and raising people’s
awareness can help tackle this problem.
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Vocabulary highlights:

1. Maintain physical fitness: Giữ sức khỏe thể chất

2. City dwellers: Người sống ở thành phố

3. The sedentary lifestyle: Lối sống ít vấn động

4. Physically exhausting activities: Những hoạt động tốn thể lực

5. Pursuing healthy activities and habits: Theo đuổi những hoạt động và
thói quen tốt cho sức khỏe

6. An online propagation campaign: Chiến dịch truyền thông online

7. The potential health risks of sedentary behaviors: Những rủi ro sức

khỏe của những hành vi lười biếng
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 Environment

Topic: Some people think international car-free days are an effective way of
reducing air pollution; however, others think there are other ways.

Discuss both views and give your opinion

✓ Band 8 sample answer

While international car-free days are thought to effectively reduce levels of air
pollution, some people believe that there are other alternatives that are more
effective. This essay will discuss both of these views.

It is true that exhaust fumes from cars are a major cause of air pollution as
they contain a relatively high proportion of pollutants such as CO2. By having
some days without cars on the road, no harmful smoke will be released into
the atmosphere, and this will therefore improve the air quality. This policy is
extremely effective in big cities around the world, such as Beijing, which is well
known for its dirty air smog filled atmosphere. Since this car-free day policy has
been introduced, the air quality of the city has greatly improved.

On the other hand, local governments should try to further encourage the use
of public transport, such as subways and buses, as they effectively produce a
smaller quantity of pollutants, which in turn is less likely to impact the air
quality. In addition to this, the disposal of waste, especially plastic waste which
emits toxic fumes if burned, should be closely regulated and monitored. The
final and most effective way of reducing air pollution is to use sustainable and
environmentally-friendly energy sources, such as solar or wind power, to
replace fossil fuels in the long term.

In my view, these measures are all effective in addressing the problem of air
pollution, but only to a certain extent. Such a problem needs to be dealt with
by a number of different approaches and I believe that only implementing one
approach will be ineffective.
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Vocabulary highlights:

1. Exhaust fumes: Khí thải

2. Relatively high proportion of pollutants: Hàm lượng chất gây ô nhiễm cao

3. Encourage the use of public transport: Khuyến khích sử dụng phương

tiện giao thông công cộng

4. Plastic waste: Chất thải plastic

5. Emit toxic fumes: Thải ra khí độc

6. Use sustainable and environmentally friendly energy sources: Sử dụng

những nguồn năng lượng bền vững và thân thiện với môi trường
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Topic: The best way to solve world's environmental problem is
increase the cost of fuel. Do you agree or disagree and give your
own opinion?

✓ Band 8 sample answer

It is believed that traffic and pollution issues would be best tackled by inflating the
price of petroleum.

In my opinion, this idea is completely flawed and there are several reasonable
alternatives.

Clearly the price of fuel has little to do with pressing problems of traffic and
pollution. The inevitable demand for time efficience and safe commuting in
the modern world makes the change of fuel prices become rather insignificant,
which proves the ineffectiveness of the suggested policy. In other words, even
if the price were increased, people would still travel by their preferred form of
transport on a daily basis and the problems of traffic and pollution would
remain. Additionally, this solution could easily trigger social disagreement and
resentment. This, coupled with the reluctance of using expensive fuel to travel
every day, could be counter-productive and this proposed idea would become
irrelevant.

On the other hand, alternatives to increasing the price of petrol show greater
effectiveness. Firstly, governments could implement certain regulations
restricting the use of private vehicles such as cars and turn people to using
public transportation. This would relieve many roads from heavy traffic
congestion by reducing the number of vehicles on the road, which in turn
alleviates the problem of pollution caused by exhaust emissions. Secondly, in
many cities around the world, cycling has proved to be an effective,
environmentally friendly form of alternative transport and should be
encouraged more in other major cities. Certain infrastructure, such as separate
zones for cyclists, should be created to help avoid the overload of traffic during
rush hour when the number of vehicles can exceed the road’s capacity.

In conclusion, I believe that heightening the price of fuel used for travelling to
address traffic and pollution problems is somewhat absurd; and that there is a
number of other more suitable and effective solutions.
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Vocabulary highlights:

1. Pressing problems of traffic and pollution: Những vấn đề đáng quan

ngại về giao thông và ô nhiễm

2. Time efficience and safe commuting: Tiết kiệm thời gian và di chuyển an toàn

3. Travel by their preferred form of transport: Đi lại bằng loại hình phương tiện
họ muốn

4. Trigger social disagreement and resentment: Rấy lên sự bất đồng từ xã hội

5. Regulations restricting the use of private vehicles: Quy chế giảm thiểu
sự sử dụng phương tiện cá nhân

6. Relieve many roads from heavy traffic congestion: Giảm tải đường phố
khỏi ách tắc giao thông

7. Separate zones for cyclists: Khu vực riêng cho lái xe đạp

8. Exceed the road’s capacity: Vượt quá trọng tải của đường
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Topic: Some people say that it is possible for a county to be both
economically successful and have a clean environment. Others disagree.

Discuss both view and give your opinion.

✓ Band 8 sample answer

The strength of any nation does not come without costs, one of which is upon
the local environment whose resources fuel each and every sector of the
economy. And yet many people believe that a strong economy and a clean
environment can co-exist. I do not entirely deny this belief; however, I find
myself more convinced of the fact that we cannot have them both.

For years, scientists have developed ways to replace traditional sources of

exploitation in many fields, like electricity and fuel. The use of alternative
renewable energy from sunlight, wind and geothermal heat, have been
applied in many areas, which helps to keep the environment away from harm.
In addition, many environmental activists say that it is certainly within our
reach to minimize the damage caused by industrial activities and protect
Mother Earth. Many have even succeeded in convincing governments to take
action in such regard.

Nevertheless, we should not forget that there are things that make it
impossible to relieve our dependency on natural resources. For example, the
automobile, mining and steel industry, are without doubt taking a heavy toll
on the environment on account of carbon emissions and chemical waste. But
those prove to be indispensable and irreplaceable to the progress of many
economies. Furthermore, tremendous damage has already been done, and
many people fear that the environment’s state of cleanliness cannot be
restored. Take Beijing as an example. Air quality there is the worst in the world,
with thick layers of smog covering the atmosphere.

In conclusion, my firm conviction is that no matter how hard we try to preserve

the environment, while we continue to exploit its natural resources for the sake
of the economy, we will never have both of them at the same time.
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Vocabulary highlights:

1. A strong economy and a clean environment can co-exist: Một nền kinh
tế hùng mạnh và một môi trường sạch có thể cùng tồn tại

2. Traditional sources of exploitation: Các nguồn khai thác truyền thống

3. The use of alternative renewable energy: Sự sử dụng năng lượng bền vững
thay thế

4. Minimize the damage caused by industrial activities: Giảm thiểu tổn hại gây
nên bởi hoạt

động công nghiệp

5. Relieve our dependency on natural resources: Giảm nhẹ sự phụ thuộc

của con người vào tài nguyên thiên nhiên

6. Take a heavy toll on the environment: Gây nên những tổn thất nặng nề lên
môi trường

7. Carbon emissions and chemical waste: Khí thải Carbon và chất thải hóa học
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Topic: The responsibility for the protection of the environment is by a
transnational organization or every country?

✓ Band 8 sample answer

Some people argue that protecting the environment should be the duty of
each individual nation, while others believe that it should be the responsibility
of a multinational organisation. Personally, I believe that although each
country needs to be responsible for the protection of its own natural
landscapes, there should also be an international governing body that
monitors each country’s actions.

First and foremost, the protection of the environment should ultimately be the
responsibility of each individual nation and its inhabitants. A healthy and
flourishing natural environment is essential for healthy human societies. The
people who live in a country are the ones who will mainly be affected by
environmental destruction and damage within that country, and it is therefore
these people who should be most concerned. When a country pollutes its
atmosphere and water-ways with toxic emissions from heavy industry, the
burning of fossil fuels and incorrect waste disposal, the people of that nation
must breathe that contaminated air and utilise that polluted water, and this
can have detrimental effects on people’s physical health and well-being.

However, unfortunately, many countries governments are riddled with

corruption and the best interests of the people are not always maintained.
Therefore, it is necessary for an international organisation to monitor and
educate people about the activities occurring within each country with regards
to environmental issues. Many people around the world simply do not realise
the short and long-term impacts that their actions have on the environment,
and I believe that education is one effective answer to help solve this problem.
Another cause of concern is that the actions of one country’s environmental
destruction can have negative impacts on nearby neighbouring countries, and
this is where an international organisation can help to monitor such
circumstances.

In conclusion, although environmental protection needs to be the

responsibility of each individual nation, there should also be one transnational
organisation that educates and monitors environmental concerns. There are
many countries, yet only one planet, and therefore there needs to be
cooperation in order for a healthy and sustainable future.
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Vocabulary highlights:

1. Multinational/ international governing body/ transnational

organisation: tổ chức đa quốc gia/ quốc tế

2. Pollutes its atmosphere and water ways with toxic emissions: ô nhiễm bầu
không khí và

đường dẫn nước với chất thải độc hại

3. Riddle with corruption: đắm chìm trong ô nhiễm

4. Short and long-term impacts: ảnh hưởng ngắn và dài hạn

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 Health

Topic: Some people think that good health is very important to every
person, so medical service should not be run by profit-making companies.

Do the advantages of private health care outweigh the disadvantages?

✓ Band 8 sample answer

These days many people feel that good health and well-being is essential to all
people and therefore healthcare services should not be run by privately owned
companies, whose main objective is to make profit. Personally, while I do
agree with this statement, I also believe that private healthcare services do
have many advantages.

Firstly, public hospitals in most countries are usually overcrowded

and underfunded which can put a lot of pressure on doctors, nursing staff
and patients to recover quickly so that more people can be treated.
When people choose private healthcare services
it can help to reduce the burden on the public system,
and as a result can also help to reduce the amount of money required
by the government for funding.
In addition to this, those who choose to pay for private healthcare services
will experience many benefits, such as the quality and speed of treatments,
short waiting times for appointments and operations,
and more private and comfortable facilities.

However, while there are a number of benefits to private healthcare,

there are also a number of drawbacks.
To begin with, private healthcare insurance is very costly
and many people simply cannot afford it.
In addition, private healthcare insurance is usually paid on a monthly basis,
whether you use the system or not,
and therefore many people pay thousands of dollars
each year for private healthcare but never need to use the facilities or
services. Many people consider this to be a waste of money.
Furthermore, some people also argue that private healthcare services
create inequality between citizens of a nation
as only the wealthy can afford the best and quickest treatment available.
In conclusion, I believe that as long as governments do their best to provide a
good standard of healthcare facilities and services for the general public, then
private healthcare services can also exist and provide many advantages that
will outweigh the disadvantages.

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Vocabulary highlights:

1. Overcrowded and underfunded: Quá đông và không được đầu tư đầy đủ

2. Private healthcare services: Dịch vụ chăm sóc sức khỏe tư nhân

3. Reduce the burden on the public system: Giảm thiểu gánh nặng vào hệ thống
công

4. Private healthcare insurance: Bảo hiểm sức khỏe tư nhân

5. A waste of money: Phí tiền

6. Afford the best and quickest treatment available: Chi trả việc chữa bệnh tốt
và nhanh nhất
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Topic: People should look after their health for personal benefits, rather than a
duty for a society.

What extent do you agree or disagree?

✓ Band 8 sample answer

It has been argued that people today should care for their own personal health
purely to enjoy the personal benefits that are gained from having good health,
rather than as a duty to others in their society. Personally I believe that people
should take good care of their health not only to reap the associated benefits,
but also as a way of helping to uplift the lives of the citizens within their own
cities and countries.

Many people claim that the secret to a happy life is through achieving and
maintaining good health, and I also stand by this notion. When someone
experiences good physical and mental health they are able to enjoy their life
to the fullest. Good health allows people to pursue their hopes and dreams
and enjoy human relationships with family and friends. Without good mental
and physical health, these ideals are difficult to attain.

In addition to this, today, people are suffering from mental and physical
sickness and diseases more so than ever before. This, in turn, causes a heavy
load on a country’s healthcare industry and causes large financial burdens to
the country’s national budget, which comes at the cost of the tax paying
citizens. If people were to look after their health better, it would reduce such
financial burdens and the money could then be spent on other services that
would benefit the quality of life for the society as a whole.

In conclusion, I firmly believe that all people should strive to achieve and
maintain the highest levels of health possible not only so that they can be
happy and enjoy their own life, but also so that they can contribute towards a
more happy and healthy society around them.
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Vocabulary highlights:

1. Reap the associated benefits: Có được những lợi ích liên quan

2. Uplift the lives of the citizens within their own cities and countries:
Nâng cao chất lượng cuộc sống của người dân

3. Achieve and maintain good health: Đạt được và duy trì sức khỏe tốt

4. Experience good physical and mental health: Có sức khỏe thể chất và tinh
thần tốt

5. Cause a heavy load on a country’s healthcare industry: Tạo ra gánh

nặng lên ngành y tế của một quốc gia

6. Benefit the quality of life for the society as a whole: Có lợi cho chất
lượng cuộc sống của xã hội
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Topic: In many countries, children are becoming overweight and unhealthy.

Some people think that the government should have the responsibility.

To what extent do you agree or disagree?

✓ Band 8 sample answer

Childhood obesity has become a typical sign of deteriorating public health the
world over, especially in Western countries, where massive amounts of
unhealthy food is consumed on a daily basis. In this regard, some people
believe governments should do whatever is needed to improve this situation.
However, we should not single out governments as the only ones responsible
for combating the childhood obesity crisis.

The role of a competent and responsible government is to ensure the well-

being of its people. That is to say, if there is any serious threat to the people,
as childhood obesity is, the government should be the one to acknowledge the
threat, and implement effective solutions. However, apart from encouraging
regular exercise and healthy eating habits, I do not feel that the government
has any further role to play.

The duty to combat childhood obesity should not fall on governments alone, as
parents are, for good reason, a greater source of influence on their children’s
life. It can be seen that obese children are often malnourished because they do
not receive appropriate nutrition from their food, a truth that reveals parents’
poor choice of diet for their kids. This fact also suggests that parents can have a
direct impact on improving their children’s health by choosing healthy eating
patterns that contain less sugar and fat. On the other hand, obesity is also
caused by lack of physical activity. This can be exemplified by the sedentary
lifestyle favored by a large number of youth nowadays. Parents are the only
ones who can either encourage, or force, their children to do more physical
tasks or exercise.

In conclusion, the government should of course do what they can to curb the
obesity epidemic, no matter how small their impacts might be. However, I feel
that the parents of obese children are to blame, and thus need to take
responsibility for their kids’ unhealthy condition.
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Vocabulary highlights:

1. Childhood obesity: béo phì ở tuổi nhỏ

2. Ensure the well-being of people: đảm bảo sức khoẻ của người dân

3. A great source of influence on their children’s life: một nguồn ảnh

hưởng lớn đến cuộc sống của trẻ

4. Healthy eating patterns that contain less fat and sugar: chế độ ăn uống khoẻ
mạnh chứa ít

đường và chất béo

5. Sedentary lifestyle: lối sống thụ động không thể dục thể thao

6. Curb the obesity epidemic: kiềm chế vấn nạn béo phí
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 Family

Topic: Parents often give children everything they ask for and do what they like.

Is it good for children?

What are the consequences when they grow up?

✓ Band 8 sample answer

Parental approaches to raising children surely play a key role in a child’s

development. Many parents often over-indulge their children, and I feel that
this method would significantly hinder their individual growth and later adult
life.

It is human nature to love their offspring, however over-indulgence is a poor

choice of rearing. Children need to learn through reward and punishment,
which means that they should be punished for what they do wrong and
rewarded when they achieve something. Punishments like withdrawal of
privileges or even those of physical nature could sometimes be needed to
educate children. However, if they are allowed to do whatever they want, they
will not understand the difference between right and wrong and become
ignorant, thoughtless individuals.

Providing youngsters with whatever they desire would teach them nothing but
to have no regard for what they already have. For example, they will pester
their parents to buy them a new toy if they are bored with the one they have.
This is extremely dangerous because it could be the basis of their character
when they grow up.

When there is no limit to the indulgence parents show towards their kids,
these children will become needy and dependent, and therefore are unable to
live on their own. In some cultures like Vietnam, parents pick up their kids from
school even during high school, buy their clothes and cook for them at home.
Children do not have to do anything, which is mainly why many of them cannot
stay away from their parents and live independently even when they are in
their twenties.

In conclusion, I firmly believe that indulgence should be limited. Otherwise, it

may poorly shape children’s personalities and restrict their ability to lead an
independent life later on.
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Vocabulary highlights:

1. Play a key role in a child’s development: Đóng vai trò thiết yếu cho sự phát
triển của trẻ

2. Over-indulgence is a poor choice of rearing: Quá nuông chiều là một cách nuôi
nấng tồi tệ

3. Withdrawal of privileges: Rút lại quyền lợi

4. Pester their parents to buy them a new toy: Nài nỉ bố mẹ mua một món đồ
chơi mới

5. The basis of their character: Nền tảng của tính cách

6. There is no limit to the indulgence parents show towards their kids:

Không có giới hạn cho sự nuông chiều bố mẹ hành cho con cái
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Topic: In some parts of the world it is increasingly popular to research the
history of one's own family.

Why do people want to do this?

Is it a positive or negative development?

✓ Band 8 sample answer

People nowadays are becoming increasingly keen to learn about their family
history. There are some compelling reasons for this; and I strongly feel that this
is a positive development.

Most people do research on their family history to find out whether their
ancestors had similar personality traits and to have deeper understanding
about their family roots and heritage. Others study their family history
background for less significant reasons, one of which is curiosity. For example,
my uncle used to spend a great deal of time and effort tracing my family tree
back to the 18th century just out of curiosity. Also, I think that news media
have a major part to play in this trend. There are a lot of news articles and
advertisements these days that encourage genealogy and convince people that
it is necessary to know about their ancestry.

In my view, this is a good way to teach children about history and how their
ancestors lived, which is linked in part to family traditions. And it is even more
important for children to carry on such valuable and unique traditions, given
that this fast changing world is somehow making young generations ignore the
spiritual legacy that their ancestors left. On top of that, family history can be a
fascinating topic of discussion whenever there is a family meeting. How my
grandparents struggled to raise their offspring during the Vietnam War, for
example, has become my father’s favorite subject when all my relatives gather
for a traditional holiday feast.

In conclusion, people like to study their family history for a variety of reasons
as I have discussed, and personally, I consider this a positive modern trend.
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Vocabulary highlights:

1. Have a deeper understanding about their family roots and heritage:

hiểu sâu hơn về nguồn gốc và truyền thống gia đình

2. Tracing my family tree: tra cứu cây gia phả

3. Geneolagy: bảng phả hệ

4. Ignore the spiritual legacy that their ancestors left: bỏ quên di sản tâm linh
mà tổ tiên để lại
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Topic: People in many countries are spending less time with their family.

What are the reasons, and effects of this?

✓ Band 8 sample answer

In many parts of the world nowadays, family members are spending less time
together.
My essay will outline a number of reasons for this trend and a number of its
associated effects.

One of the main reasons is that adults are too occupied with their work and
social relationships.
In countries like Japan where people spend the major proportion of their life
working,
many adults tend to stay at work until late evening
and hardly have enough time to have dinner or to watch TV with other family
members.
Meanwhile, young children in this day and age are under great pressure from
study;
and children typically in Asian countries usually spend 10 hours a day and 6
days a week at school,
not to mention extra classes in the evening.
The amount of everyday homework those children have to do is also excessive,
and therefore they cannot think of anything else, let alone spending time with
their parents.

There are several impacts from this trend, and they all tend to be detrimental.
Firstly, young children who do not have time with their siblings or parents
are often more vulnerable to social pressures, such as bullying,
because they do not receive enough affection and encouragement from their
family.
In reality, those children may grow up with low self-esteem and sometimes
depression.
Secondly, family relationships will greatly suffer
because it will become more difficult to bridge the generation gap between
parents and children without family bonding time.
This usually leads to conflicts and unhappiness.
In conclusion, people are having less and less time with family largely due to
work and study pressures, and the impacts of this on both individuals and
families are severe.

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Vocabulary highlights:

1. Be under great pressure from studying: chịu nhiều áp lực từ việc học hành

2. Are often vulnerable to social pressure: dễ bị tổn thương trước áp lực xã hội

3. Grow up with low self-esteem and somtimes depression: lớn lên với sự
tự ti và thing thoảng là trầm cảm

4. Bridge the generation gap: nối liền khoảng cách giữa các thế hệ
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 Advertising

The society would benefit from a ban on all forms of advertising

because it serves no useful purpose, and can even be damaging.

Do you agree or disagree?

✓ Band 8 sample answer

It has been argued that a complete restriction on all forms of advertising

would be of great value
for society as a whole,
due to its apparent lack of usefulness and sometimes harmfulness.
In my opinion, this assumption is highly subjective, and therefore I completely
disagree with it.

To begin with, to claim that commercials have no use and are detrimental to
consumers
is completely ill-founded.
We are living in a world where new products with distinct and revolutionary
features
to better our lives and solve everyday problems are being released almost
every day.
We cannot deny the fact that such products would remain relatively unknown
unless advertising was used to reach customers on a large scale.
As a result of advertising, many businesses will thrive,
and in turn, pay taxes to the government which will help
contribute towards a variety of governmental systems, such as education,
healthcare and social security. Such systems help to ensure the well-being of
all citizens.

From another perspective, dependency on the advertising industry is inevitable

for any nation to prosper.
Once commercials, by law, undergo a prohibitive order,
unemployment rates would increase and the burden would fall on the state.
For example, Coca Cola dispenses thousands of employment opportunities
in advertising throughout its branches across different regions around the
world.
If adverts are forbidden, an unthinkable number of workers,
such as marketers, would either be driven to other jobs or become
unemployed.
The government, as a result, have to provide temporary financial support for
those people.
In other words, banning all forms of advertising would have many undesirable
implications on society.

In conclusion, it is unreasonable to presume that advertisements are irrelevant

and need to be prohibited for the sake of societies best interests.

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Vocabulary highlights:

1. A complete restriction on all forms of advertising: Cấm tất cả các hình thức
quảng cáo

2. Its apparent lack of usefulness and sometimes harmfulness: Thiếu sự

hữu dụng và đôi khi sự gây hại

3. Distinct and revolutionary features: Những đặc điểm khác biệt và mang tính
cách mạng

4. Businesses will thrive: Doanh nghiệp sẽ phát triển nhanh

5. Contribute towards a variety of governmental systems: Cống hiến vào

nhiều hệ thống chính phủ

6. Undergo a prohibitive order: Trải qua lệnh cấm

7. Dispense thousands of employment opportunities: Đem đến hàng ngàn cơ

hội việc làm

8. Provide temporary financial support: Cung cấp sự hỗ trợ tài chính tạm thời
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Topic: Consumers are faced with increasing numbers of advertisements from
competing companies. To what extent do you think consumers are
influenced by advertisements?

What measures can be taken to protect them?

✓ Band 8 sample answer

These days, due to a highly competitive commercial market,

people are exposed to an ever increasing amount of advertising.
I believe that people are highly susceptible to modern day advertising and
marketing techniques, and that certain actions need to be taken to ensure the
wellbeing of consumers.

Advertising has become a multibillion dollar industry,

and much research has gone into its development and effectiveness
in order to help businesses sell more products and services.
And although advertising can provide many benefits to the consumer,
it can also have quite a negative impact on individuals and society as a whole.
One of the negative effects advertising can have is that it can lead people to
buy things
that they don’t actually need or even necessarily want.
Advertising techniques can make us feel as though we really need to have
something
and this can cause people to make impulsive purchases,
which they may not have made if they had made a more thorough decision.

Furthermore, in societies where advertising laws are more relaxed,

people are faced with large amounts of advertising containing many subliminal
messages
and explicit content.
For instance, it is well known in the advertising industry that sex sells.
Creating sexual themes within advertisements can influence people’s thoughts
about not only the product but ideas associated around it.
This can have many negative influences on the minds of people,
and in particular children, potentially forming certain negative beliefs and
ideas about such topics.

In conclusion, for these, and many other reasons,

I believe that Governments and other organisations need to monitor
how companies are promoting their products and services in order to protect
innocent consumers. This can be achieved through the regulation of the
content of advertisements

and the regulation of the space where advertisements occur, such as

billboards and posters. Individual companies also must take responsibility
regarding their advertisements to ensure that they do not contain subliminal
or explicit material that might negatively affect consumers.

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Vocabulary highlights:

1. A highly competitive commercial market: Thị trường thương mại rất cạnh
tranh

2. A multibillion dolar industry: Ngành công nghiệp tỉ đô

3. Have a negative impact on individuals and society as a whole: Có ảnh

hưởng tiêu cực đến các cá nhân và xã hội nói chung

4. Advertising techniques: Kỹ thuật quảng cáo

5. Make impulsive purchases: Mua hàng mà chưa suy xét kỹ càng

6. Form certain negative beliefs and ideas: Tạo ra những niềm tin tiêu cực nhất
định

7. Regulation of the content of advertisements and the regulation of

the space where advertisements occur: Sự kiểm soát nội dung quản
cáo và sự kiểm soát những nơi mà có quảng cáo
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 Crime

The best way to reduce youth crimes is to educate their parents with parental
skills.

To what extent you agree or disagree?

✓ Band 8 sample answer

It is true that more and more young people are getting involved in crime, and
the best way to address this critical issue is an ongoing debate. There are many
ways to prevent youth crime, one of which is better parenting skills; however,
those ways need to be carried out simultaneously if they are to be effective.

On the one hand, parents are the closest people to their children and are the
most likely to be able to have an impact on their children’s behavior. In fact,
the large majority of youth crime nowadays is the result of inappropriate
parenting, and a lack of childcare and crime education. Therefore, it is totally
reasonable to say that improving parenting skills will cause a decrease in
juvenile offences.

However, education at home alone is not enough since there are a lot of kids
who are not willing to listen to their parents. In this day and age, children
spend the largest amount of time at school, and therefore are more likely to be
influenced by their teachers or friends. For example, in my home country of
Vietnam, many high school students are susceptible to negative peer
pressure. This usually leads to the increasing use of alcohol or drugs, all of
which are primary contributors to crime at this age. These facts suggest that
we should introduce education in the school curriculum about the
consequences one may face when committing an offence, as well as help
children manage negative peer pressure.

In conclusion, enhancing skills to educate children at home is a good way to

curb juvenile delinquencies; however, I think there is no single best way to
achieve this as different measures need to be taken at the same time.
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Vocabulary highlights:

1. Result of inappropriate parenting and a lack of childcare and crime

education: kết quả của việc làm cha mẹ không đúng cách và thiếu sự
chăm sóc cũng như giáo dục về tội phạm

2. Juvenile offences: phạm tội ở tuổi thành niên

3. Susceptible to negative peer pressure: dễ bị ảnh hưởng bởi áp lực tiêu cực từ
bạn bè

4. Curb juvenile delinquencies: kiềm hãm sự phạm tội ở tuổi vị thành niên
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 Gender

Topic: In schools and universities, girls tend to choose arts while

boys like science. What are the reasons for this trend and do you
think this tendency should be changed?

✓ Band 8 sample answer

There has been a marked difference in subject preferences between girls, who
often enroll in art based courses, and boys, who have a tendency to study
some form of science. There are a number of elements that may cause this
issue, and I personally feel that it is best not to apply any changes to this
tendency.

The aforementioned situation can be attributed to gender-specific

personalities and competence. Firstly, female students are usually attracted to
subjects that require tremendous self-discipline and patience such as language
classes while male students share a common interest in several fields that need
considerable analytical abilities to excel at, for example math or physics.
Secondly, it has been proven that each of the two sexes shows distinct
competence and excellence in their favored subjects. In general, most
students prefer to choose classes that they are best at, which is why boys and
girls choose different courses to study.

In my view, it is rather unnecessary to make changes to this trend. Initially,

students choose the environment where they can best cultivate their skills and
abilities. Therefore, if they were forced to take part in unwanted classes, it
would produce undesirable outcomes, especially resentment or negative
attitudes toward study at school. Furthermore, students, regardless of gender,
should have their freedom to choose. In other words, they should be at liberty
to decide what courses they can attend so that they will feel that they are
respected and listened to.

In conclusion, distinct characteristics and differing levels of competence

between males and females are the main causes for the tendency toward
choosing particular courses to study at schools and universities, and I believe
that students should be entitled to participate in any class they desire.
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Vocabulary highlights:

1. Gender-specific personalities and competence: năng lực và tính cách đặc

trưng theo giới tính

2. Considerable analytical abilities: khả năng phân tích cao

3. Show distinct competence and excellence: có những năng lực và sự xuất sắc
khác nhau

4. Cultivate their skills and abilities: nâng cao kỹ năng và khả năng

5. Resentment or negative attitude toward study at school: sự hằn học và

thái độ tiêu cực với việc học ở trường

6. To be entitled to participate in any class they desire: có quyền tham gia

bất kì môn học nào mà họ muốn
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 International language

Topic: Scientists say that in the future humanity will speak the same language.

Do you think this is a positive or negative social development?

✓ Band 8 sample answer

At present, there are thousands of languages being spoken in the many regions
of the globe. However, perhaps in the foreseeable future, only one common
language will exist as a means of communication. In my opinion, although this
development would help to increase international communications, it would
be highly detrimental to the diversity of our species.

If we all spoke the same language, it would be the bridge to harmony and
understanding between different cultures and countries. It would eliminate
the key hurdle that keeps groups of people separate because we all have a
sense of familiarity through language. We could therefore better comprehend
different cultures that used to be somewhat misinterpreted due to a linguistic
barrier.

Nevertheless, if there were one common language, a part of a country’s core

identity would be sacrificed. Language not only is the way people living in the
same society communicate but also symbolizes their origins and defining
characteristics. Vietnamese people, for example, have been known for their
heroism and patriotism through the words of their anthems, while most
people think of France as a land of romance because French is considered to be
the language of love.

Cultural diversity and historical values would also be put at stake as a

consequence of this trend. Dialects in any part of a country carry unique stories
and lessons of the past which are closely linked to religions, beliefs, and
lifestyles. And a world that uses only one language would be the ground for
the likely unfortunate disappearance of those precious aspects of life.

In conclusion, although a single global language would help to ease language

barriers between nations, I believe it would be a major threat to human
identity, culture and history.
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Vocabulary highlights:

1. A means of communication: Phương tiện giao tiếp

2. International communications: Giao tiếp toàn cầu

3. The bridge to harmony and understanding between different cultures

and countries: Cầu nối đến sự hài hòa thấu hiểu giữa những nền văn hóa
và quốc gia khác nhau

4. A linguistic barrier: Rào cản ngôn ngữ

5. A country’s core identity: Bản sắc của một quốc gia

6. Symbolize their origin and defining characteristics: Tượng trưng cho nguồn
gốc và đức tính

7. Heroism and patriotism: Chủ nghĩa anh hùng và lòng yêu nước

8. Cultural diversity and historical values: Đa dạng văn hóa và giá trị lịch sử

9. Regions, beliefs, and lifestyles: Tín ngưỡng, niềm tin và lối sống
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 Sport and leisure

Some people think that governments should ban dangerous sports, while
others think people should have freedom to do any sports or activity.

Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

✓ Band 8 sample answer

Opinions diverge widely on whether dangerous sports should be prohibited

due to the potential hazards to participants. While I understand this argument,
my view is that people should have the right to participate in any sport they
choose.

The principal reason in favour of a ban on extreme sports is that such activities
are usually accompanied by a high chance of serious injury or death. A
mountain climber, for example, is always in danger of a fatal fall even with the
protection of climbing equipment. Furthermore, some of these sports not only
render the players injured, but also the cheering spectators. Take car racing for
example. In Japan in 2004, a Formula 1 race car crashed and debris from the
crash flew into the crowd and caused serious injuries to both the racer and
spectators.

However, I believe that people should be free to take part in any sport that
they choose, and it would be wrong to stop climbing enthusiasts from
challenging themselves and enjoying the invigorating experience of standing
on top of a mountain peak. If these sports were previously banned, the world
would not have witnessed the amazing feat of the first official ascent of Mount
Everest in 1953. In addition, those who participate in these activities have to
undertake rigorous training and experience for long periods of time to ensure
they are in peak physical and mental condition in order to take up these
hazardous sports. Therefore, the concern of the risk element becomes
somewhat reduced.

In conclusion, it would be wrong to ban extreme sports, and I think that people
should have the right to take part in any sport they want for the
aforementioned arguments.
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Vocabulary highlights:

1. A high chance of serious injury or death: Khả năng bị chấn thương hoặc tử
vong cao

2. The protection of climbing equipment: Sự bảo vệ của các thiết bị leo núi

3. Climbing enthusiasts: Những người yêu thích leo núi

4. Invigorating experience: Những trải nghiệm tràn đầy năng lượng

5. The amazing feat: Những thành tựu lớn

6. Undertake rigorous training: Trải qua đào tạo kỹ càng

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 Tourism

Topic: Space travel has been possible for some time and some people believe
that space tourism could be developed in the future.

Do you think it is a positive or negative development?

✓ Band 8 sample answer

Years ago, humans sent spacecraft to explore the universe and satellites into
orbit around our planet,
and life on Earth has become better and better since then.
Such technology facilitates global communication,
predicts weather conditions and, most importantly,
brings a whole new view of the potential of our technology and engineering.
With this solid foundation, sending tourists into space is within our grasp, and
many believe a new tourism industry could be developed in the years to come.
Our climate will be affected, but I think it is an acceptable price to bring wealth
and inspiration for future generations.

Space tourism could have major consequences for the earth’s climate. The
emissions from rockets are enough to increase the temperature in areas
around the launch site, and some scientists have discovered that this also
causes temperatures at the north and south poles to increase, leading to
global warming and rising sea levels.

Space tourism however, could easily become a multibillion-dollar industry that

will bring great wealth to any economy that is involved. In the past, only
selected astronauts were able to fly into space, but recently other people,
particularly wealthy business figures, have become curious and aspire to have
such an experience. Once orbital flights are arranged on a regular basis and
made available for people, a great deal of money will be paid to travel into
space.

Furthermore, space tourism will inspire new generations of engineers, which

comes with a promise of new technological innovations. Travelling into space
was once an unreal concept until Neil Armstrong set foot on the surface of the
moon. It motivated millions of young engineers and scientists to reach a new
height in space technology, such as satellites and orbital space stations around
the earth. If space tourism were developed in the future, more and more
technological breakthroughs would be expected to come into being.

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In conclusion, I think the benefits from space tourism are much more
significant than the harmful impact it may have on our climate.
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Vocabulary highlights:

1. Facilitate global communication: Tạo điều kiện cho giao tiếp toàn cầu

2. Predict weather conditions: Dự báo thời tiết

3. Bring wealth and inspiration for future generations: Đem đến sự giàu
có và cảm hứng cho các thế hệ tương lai

4. Have major consequences for the earth’s climate: Có hậu quả lớn đến khí hậu
trái đất

5. Wealthy business figures: Những nhân vật giàu có trong giới kinh doanh

6. Technological innovations: Những đổi mới công nghệ

7. Technological breakthroughs: Những đột phá công nghệ

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 Transport

Topic: As the number of cars increases, more money has to be spent on road
systems. Some people think the government should pay for this. Others,
however, think that the user should cover the costs.

Discuss both views and give your opinion

✓ Band 8 sample answer

Opinions diverge widely on who should be responsible for road maintenance

costs due to the proliferation of private cars recently. While some people
argue that those who use cars should shoulder the responsibility for the
improvement of road systems, I believe that such costs should be the liability
of the government.

The principal reason why car commuters should take the responsibility for
these costs stems from their overuse of roads. Compared to other means of
transport like a motorcycle, a car obviously not only occupies much more road
space, but also wears the roads more due to its larger size and weight. It was
estimated in Thailand in 2015 that the number of private cars made up nearly
85% of total vehicles commuting on the roads to and from work. As a result,
the need for the expansion and enhancement of roads is mainly to facilitate a
more comfortable journey for car users. Therefore, it is reasonable to assign
the costs to car owners to pay for the maintenance and enhancement of the
infrastructure.

However, I believe that the expenditure for road infrastructure projects should
be incurred by the government for the following reasons. Firstly, the main role
of governments is to improve the citizens’ standard of living, and an efficient
transportation system is just one of the residents’ basic needs. In fact, the
efficiency in road transport is the backbone of a country’s economy, and
therefore it would be wrong if governments did not give this top priority.
Secondly, as in many countries, car buyers are charged an exorbitant amount
of tax in order to own and drive a car on roads, and therefore it is unfair to
solely lay the responsibility for road upgrade works on them. For example,
people in Vietnam have to pay almost twice as much to own a car than in other
countries since taxes and fees account for 40-50% of car prices. Therefore, it is
better to use these taxes for road infrastructure investment, rather than
forcing citizens to pay for it.
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In conclusion, although the argument in favor of road infrastructure costs
belonging to car owners might be convincing to some extent, I think that the
government should be the one to take the full responsibility for this.

Vocabulary highlights:

1. Road maintenance costs: Chi phí bảo trì đường

2. Shoulder the responsibility for the improvement of road systems: Gánh

trách nhiệm cải thiện hệ thống đường xá

3. Facilitate a more comfortable journey for car users: Tạo điều kiện cho
người sử dụng xe có những chuyến đi thoải mái

4. The maintenance and enhancement of the infrastructure: Sự bảo trì và

cải tiến của cơ sở hạ tầng này

5. An efficient transport system: Hệ thống giao thông hiệu quả

6. Give this priority: Ưu tiên điều này hơn

7. Lay the responsibility for road upgrade works on them: Đặt trách nhiệm
cải thiện đường xá lên người sử dụng xe hơi

8. Road infrastructure investment: Đầu tư vào cơ sở đường xá

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Topic: Scientists predict in the near future cars will be driven by computers, not
people.

Do you think it is a positive or negative development?

✓ Band 8 sample answer

Travelling has been greatly facilitated by a number of technological advances in

recent years, and ultimately, cars will be operated completely by computers in
years to come. In my view, this can have both positive and negative
consequences on society.

One of the main disadvantages of autonomous cars is that it will have an

undesirable influence on employment rates of commercial drivers. There is
little doubt that these people will be forced out of work when autonomous
cars become the favored preference. This also leads to a more pressing
concern about the associated consequences when unemployment rates
proliferate, one of which is the increasing social burden placed upon the
government. Considering the unprecedentedly fast development of car
technology in recent years, such a scenario is likely to occur in the foreseeable
future.

However, we should consider these disadvantages as inevitable factors that

accompany a handful of more significant benefits. For one, autonomous
vehicles can accurately navigate their way with less chance of making errors
in judgment like human drivers do, hence, increasing the safety of passengers.
It is true that the majority of traffic accidents come from situations where
speed or alcohol is involved, which would not be the case if cars are operated
by computers. Furthermore, such technology will inspire a new generation of
mechanics and engineers, in turn, leading to more inventions that will make
human life easier and more comfortable.

In conclusion, the predicted appearance of driverless cars will severely impact

employment in the transportation industry and result in large social burdens
upon the government. Nevertheless, I do think that those negative
consequences are the prices we can accept in order to enhance road safety
and nurture a new era or engineering.
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Vocabulary highlights:

1. Autonomous cars: Xe tự lái

2. Have an undesirable influence on employment rates of commercial

drivers: Có ảnh hưởng không mong muốn lên tỷ lệ việc làm của lái xe
thương mại

3. The increasing social burden placed upon the government: Gánh nặng
xã càng càng ngày càng tăng đặt lên chính phủ

4. Navigate their way with less chance of making errors in judgment: Điều
hướng đường đi với ít lỗi trong việc phán đoán đường đi
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Topic: Some people think it is more important to spend money on roads and
motorways than on public transport systems.

To what extend do you agree?

✓ Band 8 sample answer

It is argued that money should be spent on developing roads and motorways

rather than on public transport systems. Personally I think both road and
public transport systems have vital roles to play in modern society, and
therefore should be equally invested in.

On the one hand, better road quality increases the level of safety and reduces
traffic congestion. In many cities and provinces in Vietnam for example, the
number of road accidents is ever-increasing due to the condition of the road’s
surface. This is clear evidence that the government should spend money
improving the quality of road systems in order to ensure the safety of people.
Additionally, building wider roads and more motorways in big cities like Ho Chi
Minh, where traffic congestion is still a major problem, will help to increase the
space for a larger number of vehicles, hence reducing pressure on the city’s
main roads as well as congestion.

On the other hand, better public transport systems are beneficial for the
environment and people who do not have a private vehicle. In fact, some
modes of public transport like subways produce less pollutants than cars and
other private vehicles. Therefore, spending money providing people with
access to public transport will improve air quality and reduce pollution.
Furthermore, for those who do not have a private vehicle, such as a motorbike
or car, buses and subways are a great choice if they have to commute daily.

In conclusion, for the reasons above, I believe money would be well-spent on

not only roads but also public transport systems.
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Vocabulary highlights:

1. Ensure the safety of people: Đảm bảo sự an toàn của người dân

2. Pressure on the city’s main roads: Áp lực lên các cung đường chính của thành
phố

3. Providing people with access to public transport: cung cấp cho người
dân quyền tiếp cận phương tiện công cộng

4. Commute daily: di chuyển đi làm hàng ngày

5. Well-spent: được chi tiêu hợp lí

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 Television, Internet and mobile phones

Topic: Some people say that what children watch on TV influences their
behaviour while others say the amount of time children they spend watching
Tv influences their behavior.

Discuss both views and give your opinion

✓ Band 8 sample answer

Some people suggest that it is not how much time children spend watching
television that has an impact on their behaviour, but rather the content of
what they watch, while others disagree. Personally, I think both of these
factors can have an impact on a child’s behaviour, especially when the two
factors are combined.

Firstly, over the last decade or two, there has been a steady increase in the
amount of inappropriate content that has been allowed to be televised.
Television programmes and commercials these days are full of graphic
violence, sex scenes and sexual connotations, amongst other topics that are
considered unsuitable for children’s viewing. Even cartoon programmes these
days are full of violence. Young children are the most affected by this issue due
to the fact that they are still learning and developing ideas about the world.
Being exposed to such content can negatively shape their views and personal
relationships, and therefore affect their behaviour.

However, not only does the content of what children watch affect their
behaviour but also how much time they spend watching television. In most
modern societies it is very common for young children to spend hours of their
day with their eyes glued to the television screen. Many children watch
television as soon as they wake up in the morning and as soon as they come
home from school. Many parents even consider the television to be like a
baby-sitter, something to keep their children occupied. Unfortunately, this has
many detrimental effects on children’s behaviour, the primary reason being
that most children suffer from a severe lack of outdoor activity and exercise,
which are
vital for a child’s well-being and development.

In conclusion, I believe that both what children watch and how much time they
spend watching television can impact their behaviour. Governing authorities
should consider more stringent regulations when it comes to television
programme content and parents need to be more careful about how much
time their children spend watching television every day to avoid the negative
implications that it can have on their children’s behaviour.

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Vocabulary highlights:

1. Inappropriate content: Nội dung không phù hợp

2. Televised: Phát trên TV

3. Graphic violence, sex scenes and sexual connotations: Hình ảnh bạo lực và
tình dục

4. Unsuitable for children’s viewing: Không phù hợp cho trẻ em

5. Negatively shape their views: Định hình cái nhìn một cách tiêu cực

6. Their eyes glued to the television screen: Dính mắt vào màn hình TV

7. Detrimental effects: Ảnh hưởng xấu

8. The primary reason: Lý do hàng đầu

9. A severe lack of outdoor activitiy and exercise: Thiếu hoạt động ngoài trời

10.Vital for a child’s well-being and development: Cần thiết cho sự phát triển của
trẻ

11.More stringent regulations: Quy định nghiêm ngặt hơn

12.Avoid the negative implications: Tránh những hệ quả xấu

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Topic: Anybody can use a mobile phone to answer the work and personal
calls at any time or 7 days a week.

Does this development have more positive or negative effects on both individuals
and society?

✓ Band 8 sample answer

Technology has come such a long way nowadays that people can make use of
their mobile phone to answer work or personal calls at any time. Although
there are some negative consequences of this development on individuals and
society, I believe that they are outweighed by the positive effects.

On the individual aspect, the fact that no work calls are missed could greatly
enhance one’s work efficiency. As we are living in the era of globalisation, the
international cooperation between companies is common and necessary. Being
able to make calls and discuss with business partners regardless of time zones
is a great advantage. On a larger scale, this can also contribute to the
development of the economy, thus an increase in the living standard.
Furthermore, people can benefit from the fact that their beloved ones are
available for a call at any time. One could seek help from their friends and
family whenever they need, which is especially beneficial in case of
emergency. And as the flow of information between people is constant, society
will be connected and move forward.

However, the drawbacks of this development should not be overlooked. Being

able to answer calls all the time means people have less privacy, even in their
own home. It also means that workers have to handle a larger amount of
workload and have less quality time for their family. However, the work-life
balance could still be maintained by just a simple act of switching off one’s
mobile phone whenever they leave the office or do not want to be bothered.

In conclusion, despite a few drawbacks, the use of mobile phones for work and
personal calls brings about more benefits to individuals and society.
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Vocabulary highlights:

1. Enhance work efficiency: gia tăng năng suất lao động

2. Era of globalization: thời đại hội nhập hoá

3. Case of emergency: trường hợp khẩn cấp

4. Work-life balance: sự cân bằng giữa công việc – cuộc sống

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Topic: There have been many inventions in the human history, such as the
wheel. Some people think the most important thing is the internet.

To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

✓ Band 8 sample answer

It is true that throughout history, humans have come up with various

invaluable inventions. Nowadays, there is an opinion that among all the things
that have been devised, the internet is the most significant. Although the
benefits of the internet in modern life are undeniable, I believe that its
importance is still outweighed by two other inventions, namely, electricity and
computers.

To begin with, it is obvious that the appearance of the internet has brought
about numerous advantages to people’s lives. Firstly, thanks to this advanced
technology, many people now have access to many useful sources of
information that are necessary for their work or study. To be more specific,
nowadays, information about various fields and aspects of life is shared freely
online and available to everyone with an internet connection. People can
therefore easily search for anything that they want within a very short amount
of time. Secondly, the emergence of online-based communication tools has
revolutionised the way people communicate. By using social networking
websites and applications, people can keep in touch with their friends or
relatives despite large geographical distances, eliminating the need for old-
fashioned and time-consuming tools, such as letters.

However, from my perspective, despite the mentioned merits of the internet,

the role of the two following inventions is still more significant. First of all,
since first being put into use in the early 19 th century, electricity has totally
changed the lives of people around the world. This form of energy has set the
platform for many other electrical-based inventions, including a number of
technological devices and the internet, as well as become an indispensable
part of the modern world. In addition, for the internet to be as commonly used
as it is now, the prevalence of computers should also be taken into
consideration. Since the first model was created, computers have played a vital
role in modern society as a tool for sending, storing, and receiving data for
various purposes and even laid the foundation for the appearance of the
internet. Without this device, the internet might not have even been invented
in the first place.
In conclusion, although the benefits of the internet are obvious, I do consider
that electricity and computers are still more valuable in the world nowadays.

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Vocabulary highlights:

1. The emergence of online-based communication tools: sự xuất hiện của

các phương tiện giao tiếp online

2. Eliminating the need for old-fashioned and time-consuming tools , such

as letters: loại bỏ sự cần thiết của những công cụ lỗ thời và tốn thời gian
như là thư

3. Set the platform for many other electrical-based inventions/ lay the
foundation for the appearance of the Internet: đặt nền móng cho…
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Topic: The news media have become too much influence in people lives
today and this is a negative development.

To what extent do you agree or disagree?

✓ Band 8 sample answer

The news media have long been a great part of our lives. In my opinion,
contrary to its original objective of ‘spreading factual news to people’, the
media nowadays do more harm than good.

Television and the press, whether conventional or online-based, have

influenced virtually every aspect of our lives. Pop fans rely on tabloids to keep
themselves informed of their idols’ lives. Those who are more concerned with
global affairs say that the tensions between Israel and Palestine could not
reach them without the assistance of the news media. Indeed, the media have
become our extended eyes and ears, and it is not an overstatement to say that
a day without reading a paper or surfing the internet and we would be
completely ignorant of what’s happening in the surrounding world.

Sadly, such great influences have gradually driven our society in a negative
way. Firstly, the media submerge our society in a horrendous, ever-changing
whirlwind of terror and anxiety. Too much news coverage of terrorism, war,
killings and racism can be found on every news site on the internet, and its
impact is so strong that it causes great distress to citizens and can incite
violence among many individuals. Furthermore, our perceptions and
perspectives are likely to be manipulated by the news media, for they are our
only source of information. Indeed, we form our opinions about a particular
event based on what we gather from media reports, regardless of the degree
of authenticity. Distorted news leads to distorted minds, social unrest, unjust
judgment and global conflicts; which all take their roots from distorted news.

In conclusion, I believe that the news media has a direct influence on our
minds and lives, and it appears to be detrimental to our way of thinking.
Therefore, people need to make good judgments over what they read in their
daily newspaper.
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Vocabulary highlights:

1. Without the assistance of the news media: mà không có sự trợ giúp của
phương tiện truyền thông

2. Submerge our society in a horrendous, ever-changing whirlwind of

terror and anxiety: nhấn chìm xã hội chúng ta trong một vòng xoáy
khủng khiếp và không bao giờ thay đổi của sự lo lắng và nỗi sở hãi

3. Causes greate distress to citizens and incite violence: gây ra nỗi đau
buồn và khuyến khích bạo lực

4. Degree of authenticity: mức độ tin cậy

5. Take their roots from distorded news: bắt nguồn từ tin tức không đáng tin cậy
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Topic: The users of social media, such as Facebook, Twitter, are replacing
face-to-face contact in this century.

Do you think the advantages of this way outweigh the disadvantages?

✓ Band 8 sample answer

It is claimed that modern technological tools for communication, including

social media, are gradually replacing direct contact among people. From my
perspective, the drawbacks of this trend totally overshadow its merits.

To begin with, it is true that the emergence of social networking websites and
applications such as Facebook have revolutionized the way people contact one
another. To be more specific, nowadays, regardless of geographical distance,
people from most places on the planet can send messages or make use of
video calls to keep in touch with their loved ones, eliminating the need for
people to gather in one place for face-to-face conversations. In terms of
business, thanks to the invention of online-based communication tools,
including Facebook and Viber, people working in enterprises can conduct their
meetings via the internet, also eliminating the need for people to be in the one
place to conduct a meeting. As a result, face-to-face conversations are
gradually being replaced by virtual communication exchanges.

However, the aforementioned merits are totally eclipsed by the potential

negative drawbacks of this trend. Firstly, in this technological era, with the
development of online communication tools, it can be seen that many people
are substituting their real-life relations with digital communication. In fact, a
large number of young people nowadays tend to prefer making friends via
means of social media, such as Facebook and Twitter, to gathering at a real
place. In the long term, this would gradually alienate people from
communities, which could even lead to social isolation and a lack of many
interpersonal skills. Secondly, literacy skills of many people could also be
negatively affected due to the lack of social interaction and ways to transmit
formal messages. It is true that most individuals, especially teenagers, often
use informal language with several emoticons when communicating on social
networking. Consequently, their ability to read and write in situations that
require formality is greatly reduced.
In conclusion, although social media has brought some benefits for society, the
drawbacks of overusing such advanced technology to replace real-life
communication is much more significant.

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Vocabulary highlights:

1. Direct contact = face to face contact: liên lạc trực tiếp

2. Virtual communication exchange: trao đổi thông tin qua mạng

3. Substituting their real-life relations with digital communication: thay thế mối
liên hệ ngoài

đời bằng giao tiếp trên mạng

4. Alienate people from communitties: xa lánh con người khỏi xã hội

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 Work

Topic: Some people think that people who choose a job early and keep doing
it are more likely to get a satisfying career life than those who frequently
change jobs.

To what extent do you agree or disagree?

✓ Band 8 sample answer

It is said that those who pursue and continue with a particular career choice
early in life are more likely to experience greater fulfilment in regards to their
work than those who tend to switch jobs more regularly. In my opinion, career
satisfaction is not determined by when someone chooses a career path or for
how long someone pursues it. This essay will outline some important factors
believed to be involved.

Choosing a career early in life and pursuing it for an extended period of time
can have many great benefits. For example, starting a career early can provide
someone with a better financial situation later in life, and hence greater
satisfaction. In addition to this, remaining on a particular career path for a
long period of time may allow someone to advance to the top of their chosen
field through promotion, which may also possibly lead to greater career
fulfilment.

On the other hand, those who change jobs or career paths more regularly may
also experience many benefits. For example, some people’s personalities are
not suitable for staying in a particular job for long periods of time, and they
may need to change career paths more regularly to stay satisfied. In addition to
this, choosing a career path can be an overwhelming decision for young
people without much real world experience, and therefore exploring a range
of different career paths early on may lead them to eventually finding a career
that will be more suitable for them in the long term.

In conclusion, how one person gains satisfaction from their career may be
different from another. Some may gain job satisfaction from how big their
salary is, how far they have advanced within a particular company or field, or
how much fame or praise they have earned. Others may be just as content or
satisfied in knowing that their chosen career is beneficial towards serving the
needs of others. Either way, I believe that choosing a career early in life and
staying on this career path does not guarantee job satisfaction later in life.

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Vocabulary highlights:

1. Experience greater fulfilment: Trải qua cảm giác trọn vẹn lớn hơn

2. Remain on a particular career path for a long period of time: Làm một
công việc trong một thời gian dài

3. Greater career fulfilment: Cảm giác trọn vẹn với công việc lớn hơn

4. An overwhelming decision: Một quyết định nặng nề

5. Explore a range of different career paths: Khám phá nhiều ngành nghề khác
nhau

6. Guarantee job satisfaction: Đảm bảo sự thỏa mãn trong công việc
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Topic: Some people think a job not only provides income but also social life.
Others think it is better to develop social life with people you do not work
with.

Discuss both views and give your opinion.

✓ Band 8 sample answer

Nowadays, an increasing number of people are concerned about the impact of

their occupation on their personal life, and whether to establish friendships at
work or outside of work is still a controversial issue. My view is that work can
be an ideal breeding ground for social relationships.

Firstly, it is obvious that social connections at work can be fostered when there
are shared interests between colleagues. To be more specific, most workers
are motivated by money, and therefore, they share the same goal. This shows
that through work, staff can bond together over a shared interest. Based on
that, they can build up a mutual understanding of one another and gradually
enhance their relationship.

Moreover, long hours in the workplace can result in improved bonding

between workers. For example, many Japanese office workers spend up to 8 to
10 hours per day at their company together. During that time, they are
successfully able to cultivate friendship which helps to improve not only their
mood and outlook at work but also their performance.

This is not to say that socialising outside of work is not beneficial. Of course,
when making friends from different walks of life outside of the workplace,
people can gain a greater perspective and thus become a more well-rounded
individual. However, building relationships after working hours seems
somewhat impossible since the time available is limited. In my opinion,
friendship at work is easier to maintain compared with outside acquaintances.

To conclude, the workplace can definitely bring many great social

opportunities. The public therefore should start to consider companies and
corporations more than just places to make a living.
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Vocabulary highlights:

1. Establish friendship: Gây dựng tình bạn

2. An ideal breeding ground for social relationships: Môi trường lý tưởng

cho những mối quan hệ xã hội

3. Bond together over a shared interest: Gắn kết với nhau qua một mối quan
tâm chung

4. A mutual understanding: Sự thấu hiểu lẫn nhau

5. Improve not only their mood and outlook at work but also their
performance: Cải thiện không chỉ tâm trạng và cái nhìn mà còn sự thể
hiện trong công việc

6. Gain a greater perspective and thus become a more well-rounded person: Có

được quan

điểm lớn hơn và vì vậy trở thành người hoàn thiện hơn
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 Global issues

Topic: Some people think that developing countries need financial help from
international organizations. Others think that it is practical aid and advice
that is needed.

Discuss these views and give your own opinion.

✓ Band 8 sample answer

There is a difference in opinions as to what form of international aid is more

effective for third world countries. In my view, support in the form of money
shows less practicality than other types of useful aid and consultancy.

On the one hand, I understand why some people argue that it is best to
provide financial assistance to developing countries. Firstly, financial aid from
developed countries enables governments of poorer nations to implement
important infrastructural development, such as healthcare systems, fresh
water and power supplies. This can help to avoid stagnation of development
and help a country to foster economic progress. Secondly, when state income
from taxes is inadequate, foreign cash injections are vital to maintain effective
administration systems by paying salaries for government staff members in all
sectors of a nation’s government.

On the other hand, I do agree with those who believe that other forms of
assistance should be given. Sustainable growth does not merely depend upon
money, but on how a country is governed and directed, particularly diplomacy
and the resolution of serious issues like poverty, crime, and unemployment. In
this spectrum, less developed countries certainly do not have enough
experience, which emphasizes the need for direction and consultancy from
other more experienced governments and organizations. Furthermore, even if
financially supported, third world countries still need experts in the fields of
science, law and medicine in order to help maintain their development in such
areas. However, scientists, lawyers and doctors can only be trained, and
professional and systematic education and training programs are therefore
more practical and suitable in the context of developing nations.

In conclusion, owing to the aforementioned arguments, it seems to me that

instead of monetarily assisting poor countries, global help should come in
other forms such as advice and education.
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Vocabulary highlights:

1. Third world countries: Những nước đang hoặc chưa phát triển

2. Consultancy: Sự tư vấn

3. Provide financial assistance: Cung cấp hỗ trợ tài chính

4. Financial aid: Hỗ trợ tài chính

5. Infrastructure development: Sự phát triển cơ sở hạ tầng

6. Avoid stagnation of development: Tránh trì trệ

7. Foster economic growth: Gia tăng phát triển kinh tế

8. Foreign cash injections: Nguồn tiền nước ngoài

9. Maintain effective administration systems: Duy trì hệ thống quản lý hiệu quả

10.Sustainable growth: Phát triển bền vững

11.Diplomacy and the resolution of serious issues: Ngoại giao và việc giải
quyết những vấn đề nghiên trọng

12.Professional and systematic education and training programs: Chương

trình giáo dục và đào tạo chuyên nghiệp và có hệ thống
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Topic: The animal species are becoming extinct due to human activities on land and
in sea.

What are the reasons and solutions?

✓ Band 8 sample answer

Human society develops with a heavy cost on the animal world. A vast number
of different species are being pushed to the verge of extinction. Rapid
industrialization along with rampant illegal hunting are the driving forces
behind such a tragedy; and ordinary people should join with governments in
an effort to protect wild, endangered animals.

By releasing massive quantities of pollutants, many heavy industries such as

steel and mining are inflicting tremendous damage on animals’ natural
habitats. Forests which are home to wild animals are being cut down to make
way for factories and fuel their operation. Furthermore, exploiting oil from
oceans possibly leads to the unfortunate disappearance of many kinds of
aquatic creatures. Many incidents where large schools of fish are killed have
happened in consequence of being exposed to chemicals and chemical waste
from oil and gas mining rigs located out at sea.

In addition, a lot of animals are being poached due to an increased demand for
products made from their body parts. In the wild, rhinos are illegally
slaughtered for their horns which are sold at high prices. Although laws and
regulations are implemented in an attempt to protect particular endangered
species, it does not seem to be effective enough.

There are, in fact, several ways to help protect wild animals. First of all, the
expansion of heavy industries should be stopped by law to keep the natural
environment for these animals untouched. Individuals should be well-
informed that their unnecessary needs are a large cause of animal suffering,
and hence, should refrain from using products made from animal skin or horn.
Last but not least, poachers should be strictly punished and more conservation
areas should be constructed in order to shelter endangered animals.

In conclusion, humans are threatening the survival of many animal species

when they expand their factories and hunt out of greed. It is imperative to put
appropriate protection measures, as I have discussed, into place.
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Vocabulary highlights:

1. Driving forces behind such a tragedy: nguyên nhân tác động đằng sau thảm
kịch này

2. Inflicting tremendous damage on animal’s natural habitats: gây thiệt

hại to lớn lên môi trường tự nhiên của động vật

3. Unfortunate disappearance of many aquatic creatures: sự biến mất

không may của rất nhiều loài sinh vật biển

4. Poach: săn trộm

5. Keep the natural environment for these animals untouched: giữ gìn môi
trường cho các loài

động vật

6. Refrain from: kiềm lại

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Some people say that the increasing business and cultural contact between
countries is positive development, while others think that many countries
will lose their national identities as a result.

Discuss both views and give your opinion

✓ Band 8 sample answer

Nowadays, due to globalization, international business and cultural

communication have become more prevalent on a global scale. Although some
people believe that it has a negative impact on a countries identity, in my
opinion, business and cultural exchanges between countries surely has more
positive effects than drawbacks.

On the one hand, those who are worried about international trade and cultural
exchange argue that this trend is detrimental to the culture and tradition of
many countries in a number of ways. To be more specific, international trade
has not been entirely beneficial for many developing and third world countries.
The reason being that, the inflow of foreign capital only for export purposes
causes the neglect of production in the domestic sector. Thus, despite large
foreign investments, peoples’ lives in these countries have been minimally
enhanced. With regard to cultural exchanges, this can lead to the possibility of
losing traditions and customs in local communities. This is simply because a
large number of individuals in these communities adapt quickly to foreign
cultures in the attempts to conform to ideals not of their own, which can have
devastating effects. A typical example of this in the 20th century is when parts
of Cherokee Indian culture and heritage in the USA were lost due to the
eagerness of adapting to the culture of the European settlers.

On the other hand, I do believe that the positive outcomes of cross-cultural

activities and international trade are immense. Firstly, thanks to the rapid
advancement of modern technology, internet users have access to intellectual
property, such as films and music, of other countries. The international trade
and business opportunities have helped global citizens to purchase and sell
products at a competitive price, which allows them to have far more options
nowadays than in the past. In addition, borrowing from other cultures can be a
positive exchange, as it is conducive to gain a mutual respect and
understanding for new cultures. Providing that international students have
opportunities to learn about other cultures, they are more likely to not only
build personal relationships, but also learn about these cultures from a local
perspective, from which they can greatly benefit.

In conclusion, I believe that protecting culture and tradition depends on each

country, and these would not be harmed from business and cultural exchanges
with other nations.

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Vocabulary highlights:

1. Inflow of foreign capital only for export purposes: dòng tiền ngoại tệ chỉ
cho mục đích xuất khẩu

2. Neglect of production in the domestic sector: sự bỏ bê sản xuất trong nước

3. Eagerness of adapting to the culture: sự háo hức thích nghi với nền văn hoá

4. Cross-culture activities: các hoạt động đa văn hoá

5. Intellectual property: sở hữu trí tuệ

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 Government and Society

Topic: Government should invest more money in science education rather

than other subjects to develop the country.

Do you agree or disagree?

✓ Band 8 sample answer

It is said that government funding for education should give preference to

science-based subjects over others, in an attempt to help boost a country’s
future development and progress. Although an increase in scientific
developments can have many benefits to national progress, this essay
disagrees that science is the primary contributor.

There is no question that the advent of modern science has brought with it a
number of improvements to the way that countries and societies function. For
example, increases in electrical and computer based technologies have led to
much more streamlined and efficient workplaces. Computers and
computerized machinery can now do the work of what would have previously
been carried out by humans, allowing greater efficiency and higher
productivity output. Another benefit that modern science has granted is the
development of renewable energy. Sources of renewable energy, such as solar
and wind generated power, are beginning to help ease the planet’s reliance on
fossil fuels.

That being said, an increase in scientific education and development must not
be the main measure of a country’s progress. It can be seen that the study of
many other disciplines of education can also attribute to a countries progress.
Take, for example, the Arts and Humanities. Subjects such as History and
Philosophy have allowed us to gain a better understanding of humanity and
can help to gain more insight into how we can move forward as a race. Other
subjects such as the Arts, allow societies and individuals to express themselves
creatively through mediums such as music, film and other art forms. It can be
argued that this can also help to improve the quality of people’s lives and
therefore help towards a countries overall development.

In conclusion, although developments in science have led to many beneficial

advantages for most countries, science alone is not the key contributor to a
country’s progress. In my opinion, most countries would benefit greater from a
more well-rounded education, with emphasis on all disciplines, not only that
of science.

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Vocabulary highlights:

1. Boost a country’s future development and progress: Đẩy mạnh sự

phát triển trong tương lại của một quốc gia

2. The advent of modern science: Sự xuất hiện của khoa học hiện đại

3. Electrical and computer-based technology: Công nghệ điện tử máy tính

4. More streamlined and efficient workplaces: Nơi làm việc hiệu quả và tiết kiệm
hơn

5. Greater efficiency and higher productivity output: Hiệu suất công việc tốt hơn
và năng suất

đầu ra cao hơn

6. Ease the planet’s reliance on fossil fuels: Giảm dần sự phụ thuộc vào năng
lượng hóa thạch

7. The main measure of a country’s progress: Thước đo chính cho sự

phát triển của một quốc gia

8. Gain more insight into: Hiểu hơn về điều gì

9. Well-rounded education: Một nền giáo dụng toàn diện

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Topic: As life expectancy is increasing, people work after retirement with
pay. Alternatively, some people start to work at a young age.

Are these positive or negative impacts?

✓ Band 8 sample answer

Over the past few decades, people have become used to the idea that they will
have to devote a larger proportion of their life to working, and some of them
even continue to work after the legal age of retirement. The fact is that as
human life expectancy increases, only a small number of jobs will ensure that
people are able to enjoy a comfortable retirement, and therefore, many
people are choosing to enter the workforce much earlier than before. In my
opinion, this is a negative development.

I agree that starting to work at a young age is advantageous for young people,
but they should only consider this as a way of gaining experience. Having a job
while studying with the aim of saving money to enjoy retirement is both
unrealistic and counter-productive. For one, most part-time jobs students can
do, like bartending or tutoring, only offer quite low salaries, certainly not
enough to contribute to their retirement. Also, many high paying jobs, such as
lawyers or doctors, require a qualification that can take up to 6 years to
acquire, and therefore are not possible for young people to do at a young age.

On the other hand, people nowadays are still fit to continue working well into
their sixties or even seventies. I believe working keeps people not only
mentally but also physically healthy, which is extremely important for the
elderly. For example, my grandfather admits that he felt so bored and
unhealthy after retirement that he had to set up a workshop near his house
and has been working there ever since. This example also suggests that people
should not consider working at a younger age as a way to save money for
retirement.

In conclusion, I understand there are reasons for young people to start their
working lives earlier than the generations of their parents or grandparents.
However, working after the retirement age is a way to enjoy a longer life
expectancy, and therefore there is no obligation to have a job and save money
from an earlier age.
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Vocabulary highlights:

1. Devote a large proportion of their life to working: cống hiến phần lớn cuộc
đời để làm việc

2. Enjoy a comfortable retirement: tận hưởng việc nghỉ hưu thật thoải mái

3. Counter-productive: phản tác dụng

4. Mentally but also physically healthy: khoẻ mạnh cả về tinh thần và thể chất
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Topic: The aging population is good for business, the economy and society. Others
disagree.

Discuss both views and give your opinion.

✓ Band 8 sample answer

People in the modern world are experiencing a longer life expectancy, which
raises questions as to whether this is advantageous or disadvantageous to
society. This essay will discuss both sides of the argument.

On the one hand, an ageing population increases the government’s pension

costs and competition for jobs. An increase in the proportion of the elderly in
the population puts greater pressure on the pension system as it will be
harder to finance their retirement. This results in the growing burden on the
Government and, therefore, taxpayers. Even more problematic is when the
legal retirement age is extended, young people will find it more challenging to
seek employment. Due to this lack of young labor, less innovation and change
will take place, making organizations less dynamic and hardly able to stay
competitive.

On the other hand, the main advantage of people living longer is that there will
be more volunteers in social work. The elderly in many countries contribute
free labor to community and government projects after retirement because
they are usually financially comfortable and find pleasure in giving back to their
communities and countries. Furthermore, the elderly can uphold morals and
values in a community. They can help pass on traditions and ways of life to
younger generations, which is particularly advantageous in countries like
Vietnam, where cultural values are becoming less and less significant to young
people.

In my view, it is true that there are several problems associated with an ageing
population; however, those problems only do a little damage to the
development of society. I personally think when people live longer, society as a
whole will be able to reap greater benefits.
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Vocabulary highlights:

1. Put greater pressure on the pension system: tạo áp lực lớn hơn lên hệ thống
lương hưu

2. Seek employment : tìm kiếm việc làm

3. Contribute free labor to community and government projects: đóng

góp lực lượng lao động miễn phí cho cộng đồng và các dự án của chính
phủ

4. Uphold morals and values in a community: gìn giữ các giá trị và đạo đức trong
cộng đồng

5. Reap greater benefits: gặt hái những lợi ích lớn hơn
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 Personal development

Topic: It is better for college students to live far away from home than live at
home with their parents.

Do you agree or disagree?

✓ Band 8 sample answer

There has been a topic of debate as to whether it is better for students to live
independently away from their parents whilst studying at university. Although
some people agree with this, my firm conviction is that it depends on the
culture of the region where the students are from.

This practice is popular in Western-based societies, like the US or the UK.

Independence from parents at a young age is largely accepted and
encouraged, especially when students reach the age of eighteen and are able
to earn a living on their own. A large majority of students seek temporary
employment near their school to earn money or gain valuable work
experience, while others will spend time participating in university clubs and
activities on campus. This element, I believe, is closely linked to their further
development and future success.

However, in many Asian countries such as Vietnam, where traditional values of

strong family bonds play a significant role in the lives of the youth and the
national ethos, I suspect that it could bring more harm than good. It is,
however, common for family members to live separately when they are
pursuing tertiary education because most universities in Vietnam are located
in major or municipal cities. Students from other provinces have to stay in
dormitory accommodation or rent a room off campus in order to complete
their study. I consider this to have a detrimental impact on family relationships
because it can possibly lead to the unfortunate disappearance of the
country’s long-standing culture.

In conclusion, I do consider that living close to schools and universities, away

from family, is beneficial for a student’s studies, though it can have a significant
negative impact on family relationships depending on the student’s cultural
background.
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Vocabulary highlights:

1. Earn a living on their own: Tự mình kiếm sống

2. Earn money or gain valuable work experience: Kiếm tiền hoặc kiếm kinh
nghiệm làm việc quý báu

3. Pursue tertiary education: Theo học đại học

4. The unfortunate disappearance of the country’s long-standing culture:

Sự biến mất đáng tiếc của văn hóa lâu đời của một quốc gia

5. Cultural background: Lý lịch văn hóa

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Topic: Some people are born to be leaders, while others believe leadership can be
learnt.

Discuss both views and give opinion

✓ Band 8 sample answer

Some people think that great leaders are born and not made. Others, however,
feel that leadership skills are developed over time through training, experience
and mentoring. In my opinion, good leadership is a combination of both
natural abilities and persistent practice.

Those who feel that leadership is a characteristic that some people are born
with might argue that good leaders possess optimism and energy that will
encourage others to work together effectively. In fact, some studies have
shown that these characteristics are genetic, as are certain individual talents
that one may be blessed with at birth. Furthermore, people such as Barack
Obama, have a certain charisma that allows them to inspire passion and
energy in others, and this particular trait is also believed to be innate.

Nevertheless, many people consider that leadership is a skill that can be learnt.
There are other elements that make someone a great leader, such as discipline
and resourcefulness, which can definitely be developed through one’s
childhood up-bringing. Furthermore, the credibility of a true

leader is built on his self-confidence and mastery of his area of expertise

which only emerge after a great deal of time and experience. Without these
qualities, a leader’s capability may be questioned, and as a result, people are
unlikely to heed the leader’s direction.

Personally, I think the skills and attributes of a good leader are both genetic
and enhanced through training, experience and a lot of persistent hard work.
There are many people born without natural leadership skills that can still
become good leaders in the future.
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Vocabulary highlights:

1. Genetic: di truyền

2. Have a certain charisma that allows them to inspire passion and energy
into others: có một sức hút nhất định mà cho phép họ truyền cảm hứng
và năng lượng cho mọi người

3. Innate: sbẩm sinh

4. The credibility of a true leader is built on his self-confidence and

mastery of his areas of expertise: sự đáng tin cậy của một nhà lãnh đạo
thực sự được xây dựng từ sự tự tin và sự tinh thông về lĩnh vực chuyên
môn

5. Heed the leader’s diredtion : đi theo đường lối của người lãnh đạo
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 Tradition and modern lifestyle

Topic: People think that children nowadays have more freedom.

To what extent do you agree or disagree?

✓ Band 8 sample answer

It is generally believed that children nowadays are granted more freedom than
those in the past. While I think, to a certain extent, they do have the freedom
to do some things that their parents and grandparents were probably not
allowed to do in the past, I do believe they are in fact being put in a different
cage that only exists in modern society.

Indeed, children nowadays have fewer boundaries in several aspects of their

lives which were once considered inappropriate. Compared to 30 years ago
when kids who dyed their hair were considered rebellious, school children
nowadays are able to attend school with whatever hair color they choose,
since most modern schools have relaxed their rules regarding students’
appearance. Furthermore, some parents who are less strict with the way they
raise their children even go so far as to let their kids decide almost everything
affecting their lives, from what to eat for breakfast to which secondary school
they will study at. Therefore, it is not an overstatement to say that children in
this day and age are technically treated like adults, given the amount of leeway
they are granted.

However, the 21st century has established other confinements that restrict
children’s freedoms. Firstly, the fear of insecure surroundings has made
parents hesitant to let their children out of their sight or control. Playing
football with the neighborhood kids is no longer a beautiful image in parents’
eyes since they have become too concerned with the possibility of their
children being kidnapped or murdered, and therefore, many parents arrive at
the conclusion that it is better to have their children by their protective side.
Secondly, children these days tend to confine themselves to the virtual worlds
of computer games and social networking sites. They voluntarily narrow their
worlds to a handful of platforms, like Instagram, Facebook and online games,
with their lives centered around updating their status, posting selfies and
being involved in online virtual warfare, and as a result, they are becoming
enslaved to such platforms.
In conclusion, children these days are indeed free of some restrictions,
however have to deal with other issues related to modern times. Good
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freedom and, at the same time, protect them from other potential hazards
that lurk in our modern day societies.
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Vocabulary highlights:

1. Put in a different cage: bị giới hạn theo một phương thức khác

2. Have relaxed their rules regarding student’s appearance: nương nhẹ luật ăn
mặc

3. Confinements: sự giam hãm

4. Center around: xoay xung quanh

5. Become enslaved to such platforms: bị phụ thuộc vào …

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