Business Letters
Business Letters
I. BUSINESS LETTERS
A business letter is different from a personal letter in form, tone and content. In
personal letters, we may follow an informal, or personal tone, content or style. But
business letters demand a formal and matter of fact treatment. These letters are
generally written to or by commercial and business firms and enterprises, so they
must be simple and systematic, brief and specific in content and formal in treatment
of the subject.
Commercial correspondence occupies an important role in the modern world of
commerce, trade and industry. So students are advised to master the art and craft of
writing good business letters.
FORMAT
a) BUSINESS LETTERS
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Inside Address…………………………………………………………………
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Sir/Madam
Subject
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Introductory para
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Main body of the letter
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Concluding para
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Yours faithfully
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Signature
Full Name …………………………………………………………………….
Designation ………………………………………………………………….
SOLVED QUESTIONS
Question 1:
You are Sahil Tuteja, the Sports Secretary of your school. Write a letter to Globe
Enterprises, New Delhi, a leading firm dealing in sports goods, requesting them to
supply their trade catalogue. You may mention the items you intend to buy and ask
for a discount on the catalogue prices.
Answer:
ABN School
Mathura
10 March, 20XX
New Delhi
Dear Sirs
We are interested in cricket bats and balls, hockey sticks, balls, goalkeeper’s full kit,
footballs, volleyballs, basket balls, table tennis balls and bats etc. We also need
items for uniform namely, sports T-shirts, shorts and vests of different sizes.
Your firm has been mentioned to us as one of the best dealers in sports goods.
I shall be glad if you send me your catalogue together with quotations for large
quantities. Please do mention the time required to effect delivery and the terms of
payment.
I hope you will facilitate business by quoting the lowest possible rates. I am
confident that you will patronise us by giving some discount also. Please mention
the rate of discount on the catalogue prices.
Yours faithfully
Sahil Tuteja
Sports Secretary
Question 2:
You are Anand Kumar Bhonsle, Purchase Manager of Apple Telesystems, 9th Street,
Mahim, Mumbai. Write to Ganapati Stationery Mart, Churchgate, Mumbai asking for
rates and terms of supply of stationery items such as pencils, papers, ribbons,
carbon papers etc.
Answer:
Purchase Manager
Apple Telesystems
Mumbai
Ref.No: ATS/2020-21/678
12 March, 20XX
Churchgate
Mumbai
Sir
We are a software company and we need the following items in bulk for office use. I
request you to kindly quote your rates and terms of supply for the following items :
As we are ordering in bulk, we would expect a discount on the bulk purchase. We
expect a reply at the earliest possible along with the acceptable terms and
conditions please.
Yours faithfully,
A.K. Bhonsle
(Purchase Manager)
Question 3:
CATALOGUE OF BOOKS
You are Ashwini Meena of C-23, Chitra Park, Jaipur. Write a letter to M/s Full Marks
Pvt. Ltd., Daryaganj, New Delhi asking for a catalogue of books, terms and conditions
of supply and mode of payment, etc.
Answer:
Jaipur
25 May, 20XX
Daryaganj
New Delhi
Sir
Please specify if any audio/video cassettes are also available along with the books. I
am enclosing a self-addressed envelope for prompt despatch.
I am also interested in knowing your terms and conditions regarding the payment,
time and mode of delivery, etc.
Yours faithfully
Ashwini Meena
Question 4:
You are Vivek/Varsha Malhotra, Head Boy /Girl of Zenith Public School, Ashok Vihar,
New Delhi. You have to organise short tours to Agra, Jaipur and Chandigarh. Write a
letter to Globe Tours and Travels, 235, Nehru Place, New Delhi, enquiring about their
terms for conducted tours by deluxe buses. Also ask about the fare, boarding and
lodging charges and arrangements, total time of the trip and mode of payment.
Answer:
Ashok Vihar
New Delhi
Ref.No: ZPS/2020-21/4567
16 July, 20XX
New Delhi
Sir
I want to introduce myself as Head Boy of Zenith Public School. We organise short
educational tours to places of social and historical interest during the autumn/winter
break. The likely places of visit this year are Agra, Jaipur and Chandigarh.
Please let me know your terms for conducted tours by deluxe buses to places
mentioned above. The rates should include lodging/boarding charges, fare per km
per bus.
I would like to know the kind of boarding and lodging facilities provided by you, the
duration of the journey and halting charges if any.
Please let me know if a group discount and student discount are admissible if we
charter a bus.
Yours faithfully
Vivek Malhotra
Head Boy
Question 5:
You are Varsha/Varun, the Secretary of the Students’ Forum of Navodaya School,
Bikaner. You have planned an excursion to Bhubaneshwar and nearby places during
summer vacation. Write a letter to the General Manager, Northern Railways asking
for reservation of a bogie for 60 children from Bikaner to Bhubaneshwar and back,
supplying all the necessary information.
Answer:
Students’ Forum
Ref.No:NSB/2020-21/234
12 March 20XX
Northern Railway
Bikaner Division
Bikaner
Sir,
You are also requested to supply the details of estimated expenditure with students’
concession so that the money may be deposited well in time. List of tour party on
prescribed proforma is enclosed.
Yours faithfully
Varsha
Secretary
Students’ Forum
Question 6:
Write a letter to the Manager, Oberoi International, Lucknow, to find out the rates for
conducting the wedding reception of your sister on their lawns, enquiring specifically
about the catering cost per head, service and decoration charges and advance to be
paid. You are Nandu/Nandini of Agra.
Answer:
23 Fort Road
Agra
15 November, 20XX
The Manager
Oberoi International
Lucknow
Dear Sir
Kindly let me know whether your lawns would be available on the evening of 7th
December to hold the wedding reception of my sister. In case of space is available,
please enlighten me regarding the following:
Yours sincerely
Nandani
Question 7:
A new advertising firm needs an office in the central market. Write a letter offering
part of your office on rent. You are the Office Manager, Planwel Company, Tarapore
Towers, M.G. Road, Bangalore.
Answer:
PLAN WELL COMPANY
The Manager
Chennai
Sir
Refer to your advertisement in The Hindu dated 18 April regarding the availability of a
suitable accommodation in the central market for your office. In this connection, we
desire to inform you that we have a suitable office located in the vicinity of the
central market. The accommodation (with roads on two sides) comprises a big hall
25′ x 40′ with two adjoining rooms 12′ x 15′ each and an inter-connected pantry and
toilet. This is an ideal location for all kinds of business establishments. There are
three nationalised banks on the opposite road. The terms and conditions for rent are
as under:
In case the above-mentioned terms are acceptable, please contact the undersigned
within a week.
Yours faithfully
Vishnu Wasan
Office Manager
Question 9:
As the Regional Manager of a leading XYZ Textile Company, Mumbai, write a letter to
the American Textile Company, Madurai offering two of your products for bulk sale.
Answer:
Ref. XYZ/2020-21/78
12 August, 20XX
Madurai
Gentlemen,
We are one of the leading manufacturers of textile products in Western India and our
products are equally popular at home and abroad. We have received an enquiry from
your branch office at Kanpur regarding terms for bulk purchase.
We wish to inform you that we grant a 30% trade discount to commercial/bulk
purchases on an order for not less than ₹ one lakh at a time. We allow a further
discount of 5% to buyers whose orders exceed ₹ Five lakh per year.
Our latest price list and illustrated catalogue along with a specimen of textiles are
enclosed for your kind perusal and approval.
Yours sincerely
A. G. George
Sales Manager
Question 10:
As the Sales Manager of M/s Universal Book Suppliers, 26 Ansari Road, Daryaganj,
New Delhi, write a letter to the librarian of Scindia School, Gwalior offering
information regarding the sale of dictionaries and illustrated children’s
encyclopaedias.
Answer:
Daryaganj
New Delhi
Scindia School
Gwalior
Sir
We thank you for your letter dated 5 May, 20XX and are happy to furnish you the
following information:
We shall offer you a 15% discount given to educational institutions on this category
of books. We need two weeks’ time to make delivery of the order. We accept
payment by demand draft only. It should be payable at New Delhi.
I hope our terms will meet your approval and we’ll receive your order soon.
Yours faithfully
S. Ravindran
Sales Manager
This summer vacation you are planning to visit Shimla. Write a letter to a travel
agency in Shimla requesting them to book you a room in a five-star hotel. Give
other details of your journey and facilities you require there. Sign your name as
Leela/Mohan, C/5, Assam.
Answer:
Mohan
C/5, Assam
15 April, 20XX
The Manager
Dear Sir
I am planning to visit Shimla during the summer vacation. I intend to reach there on
16 May by the IC 308 flight and will stay there for a week. You are requested to
book a deluxe double bedroom in a five-star hotel, as I will be accompanied by my
friend. I shall also need a chauffeur-driven car to take us in and around Shimla.
Please make these facilities available for a week, Le., from 16 May to 22 May,
20XX. A bank draft for ₹ 5000 is enclosed as advance. Please confirm the bookings
so that the remaining amount may be sent to you.
Yours faithfully
Mohan
Question 13:
RESERVING DOUBLE-ROOM
Write a letter to the Manager of Grand Hotel, Shimla asking him to reserve for you a
double room from 5th April to 15th April, 20XX. You are Aditya / Anandhi of Mysore.
Answer:
Mysore
25 March, 20XX
The Manager
Grand Hotel
Shimla
Dear Sir
I along with my partner shall be visiting Shimla for eleven days—5th April to 15th
April to be exact. You are requested to reserve a Deluxe double room for us, for
eleven days from 5th April to 15th April, 20XX. I am enclosing herewith a bank draft
for ₹ 5000 as an advance for reservation charges and partial room rent.
Yours sincerely
Aditya
(d) COMPLAINTS
DEFECTIVE FURNITURE
You are a member of a youth club. Recently your club has purchased some furniture
from Nawab Furniture Depot, Kanpur. But after a week you have noticed some
defects in the furniture. Write a letter to the Manager of Nawab Furniture asking
him to replace it. You are Akbar!Amina.
Answer:
Kanpur
Ref.No:EYC/2020-21/4567
1 August, 20XX
The Manager
84-Railway Road
Kanpur
Sir
Sub: Replacement of defective furniture
This is with reference to order no, 93812 of a sofa set, wooden chairs and table
worth
₹ 45,000. This is to bring to your notice that on inspection of the furniture after
receipt at Club office certain defects have been noticed.
We request you to replace the furniture within a week as the club’s general meeting
is scheduled for the next week.
Yours faithfully
Amina
Secretary
Question 16:
You are Nikhil / Nisha staying at 53, Banjara Hills, Hyderabad. Last summer, you
bought a colour television from the ‘Clear Vision’ of Hyderabad, with a warranty of 2
years. Now you discover that the picture gets blurred every now and then. Even the
sound has become defective. Write a letter to the dealer complaining about the
problem and requesting him to get the defect rectified. Also request him to replace
it, if needed against the warranty that goes with it.
Answer:
Hyderabad
7 March, 20XX
The Proprietor
Clear Vision
Hyderabad
Dear Sir
It was only last summer, 15 June 20XX to be precise that I bought a colour TV from
you. The model is Phillips CTV – MS-21 and the Invoice No. is 1487 dated
15.06.20XX. Last week it started giving trouble. I thought that the sound problem
was due to a weak signal and that it would pass, but it recurred with more
frequency. When I tried to adjust the knobs the picture got blurred. Sometimes the
colours fade away.
Since the TV set is within the guarantee period of two years, you are requested to
get the defects rectified by your service engineer. In case the set is beyond repair,
kindly get it replaced.
Yours sincerely
Nisha/Nikhil
Question 17:
DEFECTIVE REFRIGERATOR
Kumar Shanu of Bareilly has purchased a Frost-free B.L.P. refrigerator of 265 litres
from ‘Life Style’, Civil Lines, Bareilly. After a month of purchase, the freezing
section of the refrigerator has failed to function. Write a letter to the Sales Manager
of the firm complaining about it and requesting for the piece to be replaced since
there is a two-year warranty.
Answer:
26 Agra Road
Bareilly
15 June, 20XX
‘Life Style’
Civil Lines
Bareilly
Sir
We purchased a frost-free B.L.P. refrigerator of 265 litres from you about six
months back, vide your receipt No. C-1265 dated 10 January, 20XX. You provided
us a warranty letter for two years against any technical fault.
Having used it for about a month, we now find that the freezing section of the
refrigerator is not working properly. We are unable to get even a single eatable
fresh when kept in it. The summer season is in full swing and we are feeling great
inconvenience due to our defective refrigerator.
Thanking you.
Yours faithfully
Kumar Shanu
Question 18:
You are Keerti /Karishma of 26, Mehdipatnam, Hyderabad. Last week you bought an
automatic ‘VIP’ Washing Machine from Mis Tirupati Stores, Nampalli, Hyderabad.
Now you find that the machine is not cleaning clothes properly and making
unbearable noise. Write a letter to the dealer complaining about the same and
requesting him to change the washing machine at the earliest.
Answer:
26, Mehdipatnam
Hyderabad
10 March, 20XX
Tirupati Stores
Nampalli, Hyderabad
Sir
It was only last month, 7th February to be precise that I bought an automatic ‘VIP’
washing machine from you. The Model No. is VIP XL-410W and the Invoice No. is
2365 dated 7 Feb., 20XX.
Last week it started giving us trouble. It is not cleaning the clothes at all. In fact, the
clothes remain as dirty after the mechanical operation as they were before the
wash. Secondly, it has been making unbearable noise. Kindly send your mechanic
to examine and repair it. In case the damage is beyond repair or a serious
mechanical one, kindly replace it at the earliest as the washing machine is still
within the guarantee period.
Yours sincerely
Keerti/Karishma
Question 19:
DEFECTIVE INVERTER
You are Amit Chakraborty staying at 81, Chitranjan Park, New Delhi. Last month you
got an inverter installed at your house through ‘Electronical World’ of Lajpat Nagar,
New Delhi. Now you find that the inverter is not working and the local electrician
who examined it at your request has told you that it is having some technical
defect. Write a letter to the dealer asking him to replace it immediately under terms
and conditions of the deal.
Answer:
New Delhi
10 April, 20XX
Electronical World
New Delhi
Sir
It was only last month, 20th March, 20XX to be exact that I bought an inverter
through you and got it installed at my house. The model is SM-576-C IV and the
Invoice No. is 1679 dated 20 March, 20XX.
Last week it started giving trouble. Initially, the fans and lights would run
comfortably for 3-4 hours when there was no electric supply, but these days they
fail to make up the deficiency in the electric current and work for only one or two
hours. The local electrician was called in to examine it and he has revealed a
technical flaw in it.
Since the inverter is within the guarantee period, you are kindly requested to
replace the set at your earliest as per terms and conditions of the sale.
Please arrange a new set and send your engineer to set it accordingly.
Yours faithfully
Amit Chakraborty
Question 20:
DEFECTIVE PRINTER
Naveen Chaudhri of 105, Baily Road, Patna bought an HP Desk Jet 200 Printer from
The Computer Centre, the sole dealer of Hewlett Packard at Ranchi, for use with his
newly acquired personal computer, a month ago. Now he finds that the print quality
is poor and the ink nozzles of the print cartridge get frequently clogged. The Printer
has been given one year warranty against any technical fault. Write a letter as
Naveen Chaudhri to the dealer complaining about the same and requesting him to
attend to it.
Answer:
20 March, 20XX
Ranchi
Sir
It was only last month, 10 February 20XX to be precise that I purchased a Hewlett
Packard Desk Jet 200 Printer from your firm vide cash memo no. 785 dated 10
Feb., 20XX. For about a fortnight it gave a very satisfactory service in my newly
acquired personal computer. Now I find that the print quality is very poor.
The impression is not clear and deep. Moreover, the ink nozzles of the print
cartridge get frequently clogged. This poor and irritating performance of the Jet
Desk Printer has also affected the quality of my work besides dampening my spirits
and mood so often.
I regret to inform you that in spite of two verbal reminders you have not sent your
service engineer to attend to the faults. I need not remind you that it is against
business ethics as the fault has occurred within the warranty period. In case you do
not attend to the fault within a week I shall be constrained to lodge a complaint
against you in the consumers’ court.
Yours faithfully
Naveen Chaudhri
TEST YOUR SKILLS
1. Write a letter to the Managing Director, New Woodlands Hotel, Chennai
to find out the rates for conducting the XII Standard Farewell Party on
their lawns, enquiring about catering costs per head, service charges
and advance to be paid.
2. As Manager, Spring Blossoms School, Dharwar, place an order for (at
least 4 items) school furniture. Write a letter to Curzon & Co., Furniture
Manufacturers, Dharwar.
3. You are the librarian of L.W.A. Senior Secondary School, Poona. You
want to purchase a dictionary, a book on computers, a book for
preparing for competitive examinations and a book for I.I.T. entrance
examination for use of students and staff of your school. Place an
order with M/s Higginbothams, Mumbai, giving the details regarding
the mode of despatch and mode of payment.
4. Rajat Chaurasia of 62, Jai Prakash Narayan Nagar, Patna bought a ‘VIP’
colour T.V. set from M/s Better Deals, Ganga Road, Patna. After a
month he finds that the sound is not clear and the colours fade away
every now and then. Write a letter as Rajat/Raveena Chaurasia to the
dealer complaining about the same and requesting him to change the
set at the earliest.
5. S.P. Chaudhri of 160, Netaji Subhash Chandra Enclave, Calcutta bought
a frost-free B.L.P. Refrigerator of 265 litres from “Wonder Home’,
Central Market, Kolkata. Having used it for about a month he finds that
the freezing section of the refrigerator is not working at all. Write a
letter to the Sales Manager of the firm complaining about it and
requesting for replacement of the defective piece. The refrigerator
enjoys a two years warranty against any technical fault.
6. You are Anand/Akshata of Kolkata. You bought a Whirlpool White
Magic Washing Machine from M/s Electronics India, Lake Area,
Kolkata. After installation, it washed well for two months. But suddenly
the spin-dry system of the machine has stopped functioning properly
and the clothes are dripping wet even after the spin dry function is
completed according to the machine. Write a letter to Electronics India,
giving them the Guarantee Card No. and other details regarding your
complaint, asking them to attend to it/replace it. (Word limit: 150
words)
7. You are Ramneek, a student of XI class of Patel Sr. Secondary School,
Gandhi Nagar. You read an advertisement of Elite Orientations, a
leading postal education institution of Gujarat, published in The Indian
Express. Write a letter to the Director of the institute seeking
information regarding facilities, duration, fee, etc. for the CBSE medical
entrance tests.
8. You are Jatin Dass of 7, Court Road Cuttack. You bought a Singer
ceiling fan from M/s Pawan Hans Electricals, Temple Road, Cuttack, an
authorised dealer. It had a seven-year guarantee, but you discovered
after a week that the fan was not working properly. Write a letter to the
dealer asking him to replace the defective fan.
9. As Sales Manager, Rising Sim Company, Chawri Bazar, Delhi, write to
Perfect Paper Mills, Periyar (Tamilnadu) reminding them of the delay in
the execution of your order.
10.You are General Manager, Continental Industries, Mysore. Write a letter
to Newchem Plastics, a manufacturer of plastic wares, 143, Church
Road Bangalore, cancelling your order as the date of delivery has
expired.
11.You are Ashi/Ashish. The other day you bought a pair of shoes from the
Liberty Shoe House, Hazrat Ganj, Lucknow. On unpacking them you
found to your surprise that both the shoes are meant for your left foot.
Now write a letter of complaint to the Manager of the Shoe House
asking for replacement at their cost.
12.Imagine you are the Sales Manager Bright Shoe Company Agra. Write a
letter to the Purchase Officer Baluja Shoe Company, Delhi offering
some of your products for bulk sale.
13.As Sales Manager of the Washwell Washing Machines, Dadar, Mumbai,
write a letter to the Proprietor, Washing Wonder, Tilak Road, Pune,
asking him for permission to offer off-season discount to your
customers.
14.Sham Nath & Co. 586, Aram Bagh Road, Bhopal have placed an order
for two wagons of cement with Diamond Cement Works, Chanderpur
(Maharashtra). As Sales Manager, DÇW, write a letter to Sham Nath &
Co., to supply you two references as this will be your first transaction
with them.
15.You are the General Manager of Surya Steel Tubes and Pipes,
Bahadurgarh (Haryana). You had received a bulk order from Planwell &
Co., builders and contractors for supply of iron pipes of various sizes.
Unfortunately, there is a problem of short supply of electricity/labour
unrest. Write a polite letter to the customers explaining why the orders
can’t be executed by the due date.
16.Ravi Sundaram of 28 Civil Lines, Gwalior, bought a colour T.V. set from
Messrs Ram Electronics, 14 Bazaar Marg, Gwalior a month ago. Now he
finds that the sound is not clear and the picture changes to black and
white from time to time. He writes a letter to the dealer complaining
about the same and requesting him to attend it at the earliest. Write the
letter.
ACCEPTING AN ORDER
DECLINING AN ORDER