The Most Important Factor When Choosing The Job
The Most Important Factor When Choosing The Job
Many people choose their jobs based on the size of the salary offered. Personally, I disagree with the
idea that money is the key consideration when deciding on a career, because I believe that other
factors are equally important.
First of all, I believe that other considerations are just as important as what we earn in our jobs.
Firstly, personal relationships and the atmosphere in a workplace are extremely important when
choosing a job. Having a good manager or friendly colleagues, for example, can make a huge
difference to workers’ levels of happiness and general quality of life.
Secondly, many people’s feelings of job satisfaction come from their professional achievements, the
skills they learn, and the position they reach, rather than the money they earn. Finally, some people
choose a career because they want to help others and contribute something positive to society.
Nevertheless, I agree that money is necessary in order for people to meet their basic needs. For
example, we all need money to pay for housing, food, bills, health care, and education. Most people
consider it a priority to at least earn a salary that allows them to cover these needs and have a
reasonable quality of life. If people chose their jobs based on enjoyment or other non-financial factors,
they might find it difficult to support themselves. Artists and musicians, for instance, are known for
choosing a career path that they love, but that does not always provide them with enough money to
live comfortably and raise a family.
In conclusion, while salaries certainly affect people’s choice of profession, I do not believe that
money outweighs all other motivators.
Outline:
Agree:
+ personal relationships and the atmosphere in a workplace: mối quan hệ cá nhân và bầu không khí ở
nơi làm việc
+ feelings of job satisfaction: cảm giác hài lòng với công việc
+ want to help others: muốn giúp đỡ người khác
Disagree:
+ money is necessary in order for people to meet basic needs: tiền là cần thiết để mọi người đáp ứng
các nhu cầu cơ bản
+ Ex: need money to pay for housing, food, bills, health care, education: cần tiền để trả tiền nhà, thực
phẩm, hóa đơn, chăm sóc sức khỏe, giáo dục.
+ might find it difficult finance: có thể thấy khó khăn về tài chính