Calming The Storm: The Story of A Second Grade Writing Project
Calming The Storm: The Story of A Second Grade Writing Project
1-1-1991
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PROJECT
Mary M. Dekker
Dear Mark,
Your .fri.end. ..
The idea of my students wrttlng letters to soldiers stationed in Saudi
Arabia came one night in September 1990 as I was reading a newspaper
article about the Persian Gulf crisis. The article Included an address to send
letters to MAny soldier." I thoughtwrtting letters to soldiers might prove to be
a meaningful wrtting experience for my students since they would be wrtting
for a real purpose and to a real audience.
The next day I talked about the problems in the Persian Gulfwtth my
second grade class. I told them what I understood about the lives of the
soldiers there. I explained that when people are far away from their homes
in a place that is strange to them, they like to receive mail that reminds them
of home. We composed a letter together and each student drew a picture to
send: some drew pictures of military planes or helicopters or the flag; others
drew pictures of Bart Simpson or one or more of the Teenage Mutant Ninja
Turtles. Many wrote messages like "We're thinking abou t you. I explained
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to the class that we might not ever get a response since we were sending our
package to "Any soldier, and it was possible that the person who received It
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would not want to wrtte back. I told them we would have to wait and see.
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pictures and asked them to write back. One soldier told us that everyone liked
our drawings. which were posted on the company bulletin board for all to see.
He said they brought a smile to everyone although Msome guys with kids
started crying." Many of the soldiers sent pictures they drew of helicopters
or the clothing they wore. They also sent sand. money, and a page ofArabic
writing. The commander of the unit sent a collection of postcards of places
in Saudi Arabia and encouraged us to continue writing.
The students were eager to write letters to their new pen pals. Afterwe
received letters from four soldiers, the students chose the soldier to whom
they wanted to write. As more and more letters arrived, I sometimes assigned
and at other times asked for volunteers to write to a new soldier. As It worked
out. most students were writing to two or more pen pals. We wrote ourletters
durlng our regular dailywriting time. Ourprlnc1pal supported the proJect and
offered to pay the postage.
The first time we wrote pen pal letters, we brainstormed ideas about
what to write. The students suggested writing abou t things they did at home
or In school. I explained some of the technical features of letter writing such
as the date. the greeting, the indenting of paragraphs in the body, and the
clOSing. Then the students wrote their first letters. Unfortunately, I did not
save copies of any of them. The following letters, written after the students
returned from Christmas vacation, are good examples, however, of how the
students told the soldiers about themselves:
Dear Dick,
How have you been? I have been fine. I like to play in the snow
and go snowmobiling, I like to go skiing on ice at home. Do you like
to go skiing? I might go to a friend's house Friday until Saturday but
my mom and dad have to think about it.
Dear Dick,
HI. I have written to you before. How are you? I had a Merry
Christmas. Did you? I was sick most of the time, And I stepped on
a nail. I have to go.
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Dear Jerry.
I rode a snowmobile last night. My dad let me drlve the
snowmobile and I got stuck. My dad pulled me out. I got ahead ofhtm
and I jumped in the yard. The end.
Dear Jerry.
I like outer space. And I know all the planets: Mercury. Venus.
Earth. Mars. Jupiter. Saturn. Uranus. Neptune. Pluto. These are the
nine planets.
As the days and weeks of the school year passed. the letter exchange
continued with the students telltng the pen pals about their lJves. and the
soldiers descrlbingwhat theycould about their immediate situation. Our pen
pals. we learned. were called "1he Night Stalkers." Some were pilots and
others did maintenance or other jobs on the helicopters.
The students learned a great deal as they wrote to their pen pals. Not
only did they learn how to wrlte letters. but they learned about the Middle
East. They often talked about Iraq. Saudi Arabia. and Kuwait. Many ofthem
could locate these countrles on a world map. Because of this project. the
students had an awareness of parts of the world and current world events.
As time passed. and the threat of war became a reality. the students had a
personal connection with what was happening in the Persian Gulf. Many of
them watched the news and talked about it in class. The day after the war
broke out. we talked about how we hoped it would end soon. how we hoped
people would not get hurt. and how we hoped our pen pals would be safe.
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A few weeks after the war started the students had a surprise visit by
one of our pen pals. He was on leave and made arrangements to visit our
classroom. He talked to the students about hts job working on heltcopters.
He brought photographs to show them. He said he hoped the military action
in the Middle East would be over soon. Then he asked the students If they
had any questions. There were plenty: what was his rank? what were his
badges for? what was the food like? what was the desert like? what did he
think of Saddam Hussein? why were hts boots so shiny? He answered their
questions for a long while. Later. I arranged for the students to visit with him
in small groups. He used a globe to show the students various places around
the world where he had been stationed. Several students showed him stories
they had written; one girl read one ofher favorite books to him. His visit made
for a special day.
As the weeks of the war went on. the students did notrecetve any mail.
but we continued to write. In the letters below. the students tell the soldiers
what was happening in their lives in early March:
Dear Mark,
Howareyou? Iamftne. My birthday is March 7. Todaymymom
and my brothers are going to Meljers. And my mom will have me show
them what I want for my birthday. They might buy me a present.
DearP. J.
How are you? I'm fine. I had to get my tonsils out. It was not
fun. I did not like the food I had to eat. I had to stay home from school
for two weeks. I had lots of homework. The first week I had eleven
sheets and the second week I had thirteen sheets...
Dear Jeny,
We had a dinosaur museum. It was fun. Half the school came.
I did all the jobs there were. I did a few of them two times. My birthday
Is next week, March 10th, but I'm having two parties...
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Dear Mark,
How are you? I'mftne. I'm hoping you don't get hurt. llikeyour
outfit. You are nice. I want to tell you my dinosaur museum puppet
act:
~Hi. I'm1)rrannosaurus Rex and I eat meat and my teeth are six
inches long. Don't get too close or I wtll eat you in one gulp. I am a vety
mean dinosaur. I ltved in the Late Cretaceous Period. That's almost
65 mlllion years ago. The End-...
By late March and early April our pen pals were again writing to us
this time mostly from locations in the United States. Most of the letters were
the last oneswe received from our soldier pen pals. Many ofthem talked about
their good fortune to be back home. All of them thanked the students for
making the experience a little easier. Spectftcally, they said things like:
~ou'll never know how important you are to me. You kept me gOing.- and
·You've done far more than you know." One soldier requested that we
continue writing. We sent our last letters to him at the end of May.
As I look back over the project, three positive aspects linger. First, my
students perceived themselves as writers. They were not only engaged in
stoty, poetry, play, and informational writing and sharing within the class
room, but they wrote and received letters from people outside the classroom.
Except for those weeks whUe the war was in progress, some matI arrived for
students evety week. It was a thr1I1 for students to find letters addressed to
them on their desks. They almost always shared these with the class.
Second. the students revealed how the project was meantngful to them
in many ways. Some students wrote letters to their pen pals at home in
addition to the letters they wrote in school. One boy acquired the addresses
of local soldiers stationed in Saudi Arabia and wrote to them from home.
Another student. who rarely opted for extra work, decided to send his letter
for Valentine's Day on hearts. This meant he had to cut and paste the entire
letter on eight small hearts, which took him most ofone morning to complete.
Late in the year the principal of our school asked the students in each
classroom to write down one or two projects ofwhich they were really proud.
Evetyone in our room agreed that writing letters to the soldiers was one of
those projects.
Third, this activity was more than a meaningful writing experience for
my students. Not only were the students writing for a particular purpose to
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an authentic audience. but they were affectlng the lives of other people, In
Uving Between the Lines. Lucy Calkins talks about thJs powerful aspect of
wrtting In thJs way: "Sending wrtting out into the world is important for what
it does to wrtters. But it is equally important for what it does to the world"
(112). In addition. Calkins suggests that a wrtter's empowerment means
more than having a final say In revision. Empowerment. she asserts, "must
also mean that children learn that their words can make a difference in the
world" (113).
This. then, was the final lesson of the pen pal project: the students
learned they could -make a difference In the world." They learned it from the
soldier who wrote, "The reason I wrote this letter is to let the chUdren know
what a great boost their letters and pictures were to me: and from other
soldiers who wrote along stmilar lines. In our efforts during this school year
we had affected the lives of soldiers. Perhaps In future years the students
might wrtte to student pen pals from other countries, or senior citizens. But
at this moment, an important lesson for my eight-year-old students was an
equally important lesson for me, a teacher for sixteen years: realiztng new
possibilities for our wrttlng. To paraphrase one ofour soldier friends, we had
done far more than we knewl
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CAPrURlNG SfORIES:
PameJa Gates-DufBeld
Two years ago, I attended a session of the MSU IMCI'E Bright Ideas
Conference led by Dr. Jeff Charnley in which he explained how he required
his students to research a particular htstorical pertod through interviews. I
left his session fascinated but perplexed about how to use an oral history
assignment in the composition courses I taught. My students did experiment
with a variety of writing modes in assignments which encouraged outside
research, and I did expect them to practice some research techniques in at
least one formal paper, although I didn't require the extensive documentation
that Dr. Charnley demanded within his oral history project. I had, therefore,
frequently attempted to provide opportunities for them to research primary
sources by suggesting that they interview fellow students, friends, or instruc
tors as a means of gathering information about their speciftc topiCS. I had
tried to move students out of their comfort zones and into the world of
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Throughout the semester, I remind them that they need to think about
whom they might want to interview and to find time to meet with someone.
(Generally these meetings take place over ThanksgMng weekend In the fall
or Easter break in the spring.l. As the time for actually doing the asSignment
grows closer, the students begin to have many questions about the upcoming
assignment. ~Who will I interview?" ~What ifthey don't have anything to say?"
~How should the paper be written?" At that time, I try to address their
concerns by discussing the historical eras their family members might have
experienced. For instance, most ofmy students were born in the early 1970's.
which means their parents were products ofthe 1960's, with the Beatles. rock
concerts, a variety of protests, and Vietnam. Their grandparents are usually
of the World War II or post-war eras, with the cold war, McCarthy, and the big
band sounds; some are possibly old enough to remember the Great Depres
sion. I have also suggested to some of my students that they conSider
interviewtngsevera.l people over the age ofthirty-five and simply asking them,
"What were you doing the day JFK was assassinated?" or some similar
question.
Often theywill smile and nod, but it is not until I begin the oral histoxy I
storytelling unit and begin to share the stories that students from previous
semesters have written that they actually begin to understand their own
possibilities. The stories I read are about Vietnam, Woodstock, World War II,
the Great DepresSion, assassinations, and meeting people who have become
important; they are varied In type and subject matter, but they are always
personal pieces of someone's memoxy, pieces of the past that become
narrative gifts, gifts of writing for the storyteller and the writer.
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...In Vietnam, when you hear yourselfscream, the end is In sight. You
can almost count on it being the last sound anyone will ever hear from
you. Ifyou're not dead, you might as well be. because your life, as you
know it, is over.
There are many sounds I will never forget; the sound of bullets
as they pierce through my buddies' flesh. and then the immediate cry
of pain. Those cries enter my dreams and wake me up at night. My
nights are filled with images of death. fire, and screams.
This excerpt is just one of the several Vietnam stories that have been
shared in class. Although many are not as graphic as this one. they each have
their own sense of horror, of tragedy. Some stories seem almost technical in
their reporting, eliciting an aura of routineness. as the following excerpt
shows:
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Weeks later we were back In Ben Cat as part ofa blocking force.
We pushed the V. C. past the Bong Song river where the 10 1 statrborne
division was waiting for them. The V. C. were pinned between
Cambodia and the 101st, while artilleI)' and arc Utes were used to
destroy them. Arc lites are air strikes by B-52 bombers. When the B
52s were flying, we never saw them, but we could always feel them.
Finally. in another stoI)', a young soldier tells about the chaos and
confusion he felt about the jungle warfare both In Vietnam and when he
arrived back in the States. His stoI)' ends with the follOwing:
When my year term was finally over and I arrived back In the
United States, people were waiting for us at the airport. I walked to the
gate and a pregnant woman walked up to me. "You are not killing my
baby!" she yelled, and threw a cup ofblood on me. I ran to the barracks
and cried, literally cried for hours. I had no idea what was going on at
home or over there.
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completion of this unit. which provides time for the interview process, small
group discussions. student/teacher conferences. peer editing. and. fmally.
whole class sharing of the final piece. The students are expected to make
decisions about all aspects of the process. from whom and when they will
interview to how they ultimately retell the story effectively and accurately. As
examples of successful literacy experiences. the stories I read in class serve
as models of successful researching and writing.
Also. the incentive to discover more about the history of the era and
how it might have affected or influenced an interviewee is inherent in the
writing process the students go through for this assignment. I never "require"
them to do library research about the era; however. probably 900/0 of them
choose to study the era simply because they have discovered an interest. a
need to know more about the time period their interviewees discuss so freely
and knowledgeably.
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• When developing the written text. be accurate about the
facts and sensitive to the issues.
• Write a note of thanks to your storyteller for his or her
time and enclose a copy of your finished work.
Throughout the next several classes (we usually spend the last three
weeks of the semester working formally on thts p~ect). I continue to share the
story gifts written by former students. Agatn and again, they are surprised by
the stories-stories about World War II, stortes about the depression. stories
about the assassinations of JFK and Martin Luther King. stories about the
TItanic, the riots of the 1960's, Vietnam, the IRA. and even Woodstock. These
stortes are stories about people, about patn, about insight, and about honesty.
The stories explode from the memories of their parents. their grandparents, and
their older friends. and my students listen and respond through in-class
writings and small group talks.
One student interested in the question "What were you doing the day
JFK was assassinated?" was astounded that people could remember exactly
what they were doing at the moment they heard the news. even a quarter of
a century later. She explained to me that she felt compelled to read as much
as she could about John Kennedy's assassination. Another student was
surprised when she asked an older friend about the assassination and was
shown the newspaper clippings. clippings which had been packed away
twenty-seven years. Still another stUdent asked several people about the
event and received one detailed account after another. She was so interested
in hearing the stories that she even managed to contact James Blanchard,
then Governor of Michigan. He. like each of her other interviewees. remem
bered the day clearly:
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begin to wrtte. I encourage them to frame the stories they have heard by
explaining them in terms of the era in which they occurred. Many students
preface their story by introducing the person interviewed and by providing
enough historical information to ground the story in time. After the preface.
most students choose to become a ghost writer by telling the story first
person- through the eyes of the storyteller. By doing this, they are able to
escape the pitfalls normally associated with traditional question and answer
type interviews. One student chose to tell his father's story about attending
Woodstock in 1969:
The traffic was really getting bad and we were still several mUes
from the concert site. People were stopping, pulling over to the edge
ofthe road. getting outand walking. I looked at my buddy and he shook
his head. so I pull the bus (VW van) off as much as I could and we
grabbed our gear. People were jamming the road. smiling. laughing.
smoking. We all knew this was history in the making and we were part
of it.
Most of my students find that listening to the stories people tell can
create learning experiences that extend far beyond the initial assignment.
Many of my students have created extraordinary pieces of wrttlng through
this particular assignment, while many more have discovered pieces of their
own history. They have discovered that people do indeed have stories to tell
and wish to share them if given the opportunity.
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wrtting, and their reactions to this assignment are best captured in a
comment used by one of my students as she introduced the story about her
grandmother, a World War II navy nurse:
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