Creative Writing Week 3 4
Creative Writing Week 3 4
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CREATIVE WRITING/
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Quarter 1 – Module 2
Reading and Writing Poetry
by educators from public and private schools, colleges, and/or universities. This
instructional material was collaboratively developed and reviewed
OVERVIEW
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Before you go further, you should remember the
o following:
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Lesson ELEMENTS OF THE GENRE
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What I Need To Know
What I Know
Answer the following questions to know how much you know about
poetry.
sentence
A. mood C. speaker
B. tone D. theme
6. The pattern of beats made by stressed and unstressed syllables in the lines
of a poem is ______.
A. rhyme C. rhythm
B. stress D. tone
A. sonnet C. haiku
B. limerick D. tanaga
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8. A theme that the author does not express directly, but suggests in a poem.
A. stated theme C. implied theme
B. Love D. Survival
What’s In
1. Creative writing is written mainly to entertain with the creativity of the mind.
2. Technical writing is written mainly to inform in a formal manner or to incite the
reader to make an action such as purchase the writer’s product.
3. Sensory details include sight, sound, touch, smell and taste.
4. Another note about sensory details, there’s no one sense that’s more important
than the other. It all depends on the scene you are trying to create. However,
the sight sense is a common feature in vivid writing.
5. Image is a representation of an experience or object perceived through the
senses – sight, smell, taste, touch and hearing.
6. Imagery on the other hand refers to words and phrases that create vivid
sensory. It is categorized into five (5) - visual imagery, auditory imagery,
olfactory imagery, tactile imagery and gustatory imagery.
7. Diction is the author’s choice or selection of words or vocabulary; the artistic
arrangement that words constitute. Inappropriate use of diction is called diction
error.
8. There are countless figures of speech but there are those which are commonly
used by authors - simile, metaphor, onomatopoeia, personification, apostrophe,
hyperbole, alliteration, synecdoche, metonymy, oxymoron and paradox.
Reading and Writing Poetry
For most of us, we love poetry because it is a unique kind of language that expresses
our ideas, feelings and emotions in a meaningful way; not only using words but also
sounds, gestures, signs and symbols. Through poetry, we can relate our human
experiences and observations about life and the universe around us. While a song has
lyrics and is musically composed to move us emotionally, a poem is written in verses
that attempt to enhance our understanding of the world we live.
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What Is It
When I say essential elements, these are things that we can find in most if not all
forms and types of poetry. Every poem consists of a theme or an underlying message
of what the poem wanted to tell us.
There are several types of themes we find in poetry. Here are examples of
universal themes common to literature:
• abundance/scarcity • peer pressure
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Equally important element in every poem is a tone. A tone is the attitude that we
feel when we read or listen to a poem. Some words that can describe the tone of a
poem are:
• Serious • Cheerful
• Humorous • Sad
• Amused • Gloomy
Angry
Poetry can evoke our emotions and feelings when we read it out loud. These
emotions and feelings help establish a certain atmosphere or mood. Some words
that
can describe the mood of a poem are:
• Romantic • Gloomy
• Realistic • Mournful
• Optimistic • Sorrowful
• Pessimistic
What’s More
1. "The little house stood in the twilight with its gate ajar, creaking as the wind
blew. A shutter slammed against the house, and a curtain fluttered in the
breeze." What's the mood?
a) Happiness c) Sadness
b) Suspense d) Depressed
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c) Dad cooking on the grill d) Head of lettuce
a) ironic c) Cheerful
b) Suspenseful d) Humorous
6. “The sun was bright and the sky was clear. Joan jogged down the path with
Rex at her side and smiled about last night's victory.”
What's the tone?
a. Cheerful c. Determined
b. Depressing d. Suspenful
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Assessment
-
Pickwick Papers by Charles
Dickens
_____ 3. Mood C. Teacher: “Congratulations everyone for a
project well done. You all deserve
good grades.”
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Lesson CONVENTIONAL FORMS OF
2 POETRY
What I Know
B. diona
2. tool that brings rhythm or
musicality in every poem
F. haiku
G. rhythm
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What Is It
Poetry has always been a part of what we call kwentong bayan or folk stories.
We have passion for words; we love exploring the meaning of words. We enjoy writing
poems, in any poetic form. We have a diverse and rich Philippine literature mostly told
in poetry and passed down to us in oral form by our ancestors. Below are some types
of these poems or verses in poetic forms.
1. Tanaga is an indigenous type of Filipino short poem that is used traditionally in the
Tagalog language to impart lessons and reminders of our folks to young people. The
poetic art uses four (4) lines (quatrain) with each line having seven (7) syllables only.
Nagkabunga ng ginto
A tanaga traditionally does not have a title. It is a poetic form that should speak
for itself. Most of these types of poems are handed down by oral history, and contain
proverbial forms, moral lessons, and snippets of a code of ethics.
Kabibi, ano ka ba? taynga,
May perlas, maganda Nagbubuntung-
ka; Kung idiit sa
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hininga! (KABIBI ni nadarama’t
Ildefonso Santos) nalalasap
ang pag-ibig na
matapat.
Wala iyan sa
(PAG-IBIG ni Emelita
pabalat at sa puso
Perez Baes)
nakatatak,
2. Dalit is an indigenous type of Filipino short poem that consists of eight syllables in
each line. There are four lines in each stanza with a single rhyme. Nag-aral siyang
pilit
Sa guro ay di sumipsip.
(Zoren Mercurio)
3. Diona is an indigenous type of Filipino short poem that consists of seven syllables
in each line. There are three lines in each stanza with a single rhyme.
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Lesson RHYME & METER
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What I Need To Know
At the end of this lesson, you are expected to be able to: distinguish
rhyme and meter.
(HUMSS_CW/MP11/12c-f-7)
What Is It
Lesson 2.3. Rhyme and Meter
(TAG-INIT)
ni Ildefonso Santos
A meter refers to the pattern formed by the beats in a line of poetry. Each pattern
is called a foot.
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A-li-pa-tong | lu-ma-pag Sa kahoy nalugayak,
Other Meters
Each set of meter is called a foot. The name of the meter is based on this pattern
and the length of the line:
1 foot monometer
2 feet dimeter
3 feet Trimeter
4 feet Tetrameter
5 feet Pentameter
6 feet Hexameter
7 feet Heptameter
8 feet octameter
Let’s summarize!
1. Theme is the underlying message of what the poem wanted to tell us.
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4. Tanaga is an indigenous type of Filipino short poem with four (4) lines (quatrain) with
each line having seven (7) syllables only.
5. Dalit is an indigenous type of Filipino short poem that consists of eight syllables in
each line. There are four lines in each stanza with a single rhyme.
6. Diona is an indigenous type of Filipino short poem that consists of seven syllables
in each line. There are three lines in each stanza with a single rhyme.
7. Rhyme is a tool utilizing repeating patterns that bring rhythm.
8. Rhythm or the musicality to poems is the pattern created by rhyme.
9. Meter refers to the pattern formed by the beats in a line of poetry. The forms of meter
are: iamb (unstressed syllable followed by a stressed syllable), pyrrhic foot (two
unstressed syllables), spondee (stressed syllable followed by an unstressed
syllable), anapest (two unstressed syllables followed by a stressed syllable) and
dactyl (one stressed syllable followed by two unstressed syllables).
10. Each set of meter is called a foot. One foot is monometer, 2 feet is dimeter, 3
feet is trimester, 4 feet is tetrameter, 5 feet is pentameter, six feet is hexameter, 7
feet is heptameter and 8 feet is octameter.
Assessment
Write TRUE if the statement is correct. Otherwise, write FALSE.
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Lesson FREE VERSE
What I Know
What’s New
Have you ever wanted to be somewhere with no rules to follow? Even
in poetry, some poets prefer to write poetry that doesn't follow any
rules. In this lesson, you will learn about free verse poetry.
What Is It
FREE VERSE
Free verse is also called vers libre, which is a French word meaning “free
verse.” It is a literary device that can be defined as poetry that is free from limitations
of regular meter or rhythm, and does not rhyme with fixed forms. Such poems are
without rhythm and rhyme schemes, do not follow regular rhyme scheme rules, yet still
provide artistic expression.
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In this way, the poet can give his own shape to a poem however he or she
desires. However, it still allows poets to use alliteration, rhyme, cadences, and rhythms
to get the effects that they consider are suitable for the piece.
Source: https://literarydevices.net/free-verse/
Yummy
Green balls of nutrition I
love them.
Drizzling in butter I want more.
Source: https://study.com/academy/lesson/free-verse-poems-lesson-for-kids.html
I Missed You
When i again heard your voice
As it echoed through the strings in my ears
I felt remorseful
For it makes me wonder
Was i not one of the lucky ones
Who stripped out the street
Dancing to the rhythm of 'I MISSED YOU'
What’s More
Making use of the subject matters given below, choose one and write a free verse
poem.
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Assessment
3. Which of the following lines would most likely be included in a free verse poem?
A. The clouds are blue B. Now it’s time to give a shout and you are too
Our team caught it; you are out!
C. Red, orange D. Math is so very fun
Color of the sun because I know 1 + 1 Angry
rays are everywhere
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Lesson LINE BREAK &
5 ENJAMBMENTS
What I Know
A B
1. Imagery A. a figure of speech that makes an implicit, implied, or
hidden comparison between two things that are
unrelated, but which share some common
characteristics.
2. Typography B. refers to the typical structures used by writers in their
works to convey his or her messages in a simple manner
to the readers
3. Enjambments C. This type of written text is different from poetry in that
it has complete sentences organized into paragraphs
5. Line Breaks D. is an attitude of a writer toward a subject or an
audience
7. Tone E. a “no rules” poems that doesn’t have to have rhyme,
patterns, or meter.
8. Prose Poetry F. a poetic device that used at the end of the line
G. uses figures of speech to be more effective,
9. Literary Device persuasive, and impactful.
10. Metaphor H. means moving over from one line to another without
terminating punctuation mark
I. is the style, arrangement or appearance of printed
letters on a page
J. the visual of figurative language to create imaginary
visual representations of actions, objects, and ideas
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Source: https://literarydevices.net
If all your answers are correct, very good! This shows that you already know
much about the topic. You may still study the module to review what you already know.
Who knows, you might learn some new things as well.
If you got a low score, don’t feel bad. This means that this module is for you. It
will help you understand some innovative techniques in writing poetry in your daily life.
If you study this module carefully, you will learn the answers to all the items in the test
and a lot more! Are you ready?
You may now go to exploring the innovative techniques in writing free verse
which are: line breaks, enjambment, and metaphor. You will also get to encounter
other experimental texts like typography and genre-crossing text. Lastly, dive into the
different tones of poetry.
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Read the lyrics/sing the song “Pero Atik Ra” by Jacky Chang.
“Pero Atik Ra” by Jacky Chang
Source:https://www.musixmatch.com/lyrics/Clark-Mantilla/Pero-
AtikRa/translation/english
What Is It
In this lesson, we are going to focus on how line, line breaks can affect
the meaning of the song/poem and how structure of the song/poem can actually be
used by the poet/songwriter to help them develop the theme of their poems or songs.
Poems/songs just like stories, have patterns that can help readers/audience interpret
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the poet/songwriter’s message. The way that a poem/song is organized is called its
poetic structure. This refers to the so-called line, line breaks and enjambment. These
are present in free verse.
A Line Break is a poetic device which is used at the end of a line and the beginning
of the next line in a poem. It could be employed without traditional punctuation. A line
break in poetry is a method by which lines of poetry are divided to show a change in a
metrical pattern. Unlike prose, the poetry’s rhythmic pattern can be visually seen when
written using line breaks (Jose and Laroque, 2017: 96).
Looking at the lyrics of the song, it is broken down into stanzas with no exact
number of lines in each. There are 4 lines in the first stanza, followed by 3 lines and so
on. Take note that there is no exact metrical pattern for each line and no rhyme is
required as long as the writer is able to convey his/her message in a free verse style
of writing poem/song. This is now the beauty of writing a free verse poetry/song
because there are instances that we should go away with the traditional type of writing
poetry/song especially in our modern writers today. This writing style gives rise to
modern writers/aspirant writers to showcase their ideas/subject creatively and
uniquely. This is one of the evolutions of writing poetry today.
Line-breaks may or may not deal with different lines of thoughts. Each line of poetry
should seamlessly blend into the next line of poetry like the waves meet together at the
shore yet each holds on to its identity. Line breaks can be loosely classified into *end-
stopped line, enjambments, and *caesuras. Some additional key details about line
breaks:
• Line breaks divide poems into lines, and the length of lines determines the
appearance of the poem on the page: long and skinny, short and wide, or a
shape entirely its own.
• The location of a line break is often dictated by the number of syllables in the
line, but just as often it is freely chosen by the poet.
• Line breaks serve as an important function in setting the rhythm of a poem, since
they insert a pause between the final word of one line and the first word of the
next line. For this reason, line breaks conventionally occur where natural pauses
in language also occur—such as after punctuation, at the end of a thought, or
between distinct images.
Example
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There are two line break examples in the given passage. One line break cuts
the line, “I have ta’en his head from him” in the middle, placing the line break at the
end of the second line.
Another line break is used in the fourth line, “I” being a person has an absolute
meaning. These line breaks are determining the visual shape of this text.
Source: https://www.litcharts.com/literary-devices-and-terms/line-break
Notes to Teacher:
*End-stopped line put a rhythmic break at the end of each line, often reinforced by a
comma or period (Jose & Larioque, 2017). Look at these lines from William Wordsworth’s
poem “She Dwelt Among the Untrodden Ways”:
Explanation: Each line of the poem is an individual sentence of fragment of thought and is
in independent of the rest of the poem to make a meaning.
*Caesuras is a Latin word for cut. Caesura is a natural pause in a verse or a sentence, usually
reinforced by punctuation. When it is accompanied by a punctuation mark, it is called a
strong caesura. If there no punctuation, it is a weak caesura. More than one caesura can
occur in the same line or verse (Jose & Larioque, 2017).
Weak Caesura: Alas if I but known the trials of life a little earlier
What Is It
Features of an Enjambment
Functions of Enjambment
Enjambment can be used to surprise readers by delaying the meaning of a line
until the following line is read. Some writers use this technique to bring humorous
effects to their work. It is good to use in verse in order to create a sense of natural
motion.
In poetry, the role of enjambment is normally to let an idea carry on beyond the
restrictions of a single line. Another purpose of enjambment is to continue a rhythm
that is stronger than a permanent end-stop, wherein complicated ideas are expressed
in multiple lines.
It is a Beauteous Evening
William Wordsworth
What’s More
Below are texts with specified cues on line break and enjambment. Identify the
item utilizes line break or enjambment. Write Line Break or Enjambment.
1. The poet labors all his 5. Ice crystals reflect the rays // Of
days// To build the beauty in his blazing sunrise.
rhyme. Lovely nature has something to
2. When rain drops are offer//
Exposed to sunlight, even you; so inhale the fresh air//
Colorless become vibrant. And, beautifully, learn by
3. Amongst the bushes and deciding where to go.
thorns// Beautiful red rose
blooms.
4. Cold morning time //
Assessment
Perfect Match!
Match the words in the box with the following statements/words below. Write A or B
as your answer.
A. Line Break B. enjambment
1. These are devices used to separate one line of the poetry from the other.
2. These are the lines where the line ends in the middle of the sentence. Therefore, the
line continues across several lines of the poem.
3. It helps the poet emphasize important words and hint at double meanings.
4. It can be classified into end stopped line, enjambment, and caesuras.
5. It is also called run on lines as it run into each other. Through this, it run forwards in
sense and punctuation into the next line.
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Lesson METAPHOR
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What I Know
Metaphoric Magic! Choose which between the two sentences in each item is an
example of metaphor. Write the answer of your choice.
1. A. My dad is a bear.
B. My dad is as big as a bear.
What Is It
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contradictory or different objects is made based on a single or some common
characteristics.
In simple English, when you portray a person, place, thing, or an action as being
something else, even though it is not actually that “something else,” you are speaking
metaphorically. For example, the phrase, “My brother is the black sheep of the family,”
is a metaphor because he is not a sheep, nor is he black. However, we can use this
comparison to describe an association of a black sheep with that person. A black sheep
is an unusual animal, which typically stays away from the herd, and the person being
described shares similar characteristics.
What I Can Do
Metaphorical Magic
Directions: Write 3 sentences describing yourself using metaphor. The first one is
done for you.
5. ______________________________________________________________
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Lesson OTHER EXPERIMENTAL
7 TEXTS
1. Write typographical
poem.
2. Write concrete poem 3.
Write acrostic poem.
What Is It
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III. Acrostic Poem uses the letter in a topic word to begin each line. All lines in the poem should
relate to or describe the poem.
Here’s the ‘free-form’ style, or ‘free verse’ structure that gives much freedom to
let your creativity flourish. Whether or not the lines in the poem should rhyme, is
optional. Below is an example of acrostic poem dedicated to ALMA.
Sample 1 Sample 2
A A – Amazing persona
L- Lady of L – Loving teacher
M- Many M – Most beautiful inside out
A - An angel on earth
A- Admirers
Sample 3
A is for ATTRACTIVE, you charm with your beauty
L is for LIMBER, flexible in nature
M is for MODEST, to the core A is for ANGELIC, you have a
kind heart
ALMA, a once-in-a-lifetime persona!
What I Can Do
Have fun about your name (can be your first name, nick name, or last name) using
acrostic poem. Choose words that can speak/describe about your character, personality and
behavior.
What’s More
The Challenge: Now it is your time to give a shot on writing your own shape poem. Write a
poem about LOVE in a heart form by following the steps below. Do this in a separate coupon
bond.
Step 1.
Draw an outline of a heart which symbolizes love. Make sure it is big enough
because you will write your poem inside it.
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Step 2: Brainstorming
Write at least 10 words or phrases about it (LOVE or Heart).
Brainstorm Box:
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What Is It
A GENRE-CROSSING TEXT
Have you ever imagined that poems can also be transformed onto prose or the
other way around? Yes! You can do some tricks and tweaks like making your poems
become narrative essays, descriptive paragraphs, scripts, and many more. We call
this work as GENRE-CROSSING TEXTS.
Sample 1
Sample 1
It was the best of times, it was the It was the best of times, it was the worst of
worst of times, it was the age of times, it was the age of wisdom, it was the age
wisdom, it was the age of foolishness, of foolishness, it was the epoch of belief, it was
it was the epoch of belief, it was the the epoch of incredulity, it was the season of
epoch of incredulity, it was the Light, it was the season of Darkness, it was the
season of Light, it was the season of spring of hope, it was the winter of despair, we
Darkness, it was the spring of hope, it had everything before us, we had nothing before
was the winter of despair, we had us, we were all going direct to Heaven, we were
everything before us, we had nothing all going direct the other way — in short, the
period was so far like the present period, that
before us, we were all going direct to
some of its noisiest authorities insisted on its
Heaven, we were all going direct the
being received, for good or for evil, in the
other way—in short, the period was
superlative degree of comparison only.
so far like the present period, that
some of its noisiest authorities Source https://zumpoems.com/2011/10/12/
insisted on its being received, for wednesday-poetry-challenge-1/
good or for evil, in the superlative
degree of comparison only.
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Source https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/
A_Tale_of_Two_Cities
Explanation
Prose is written in a paragraph form, while poetry is in verse/stanza style. In the evolution
of prose poetry, this has become a new trend in poetry writing today. Based from the example,
it shows how poetic has become the opening to Charles Dickens’s A Tale of Two Cities.
The above examples just simply pick a passage from a novel, essay or short
story that qualifies as prose, but for you is particularly poetic. Then without
changing a word or punctuation mark, reformat that so it appears to be poetry.
Another way is you may choose to convert the text into poetry is by imposing
regular meter on the text such as given below:
Assessment
1. Write at least five words or phrase about your knowledge about GENRE-
CROSSING TEXT. Write it in each circle below.
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Lesson TONE
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What I Need To Know
What I Know
“Tone Me Up”
Directions: Read and analyze the given lines from the selected poems. Extract the
tone conveyed in the lines of each item. Write only the letter of your answer.
1. All that I love?
Why, yes, but for the moment- And
for all time, both. A. loneliness
Something that folds and keeps easy,
B. sorrow
Son’s note or Dad’s one gaudy tie,
C. love
A roto picture of a queen, A
D. apathy
blue Indian shawl, even A
money bill.
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4. I shall be telling this with a sigh
Somewhere ages and ages hence:
Two roads diverged in a wood, and I—
I took the one less traveled by, And
that has made all the difference.
“The Road Not Taken” by Robert Frost
A. Apathy
B. Gladness
C. Loneliness
D. nostalgic
What Is It
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Function of Tone
Tone, in a piece of literature, decides how the readers read a literary piece, and
how they should feel while they are reading it. It stimulates the readers to read a piece
of literature as a serious, comical, spectacular, or distressing manner. In addition,
tone lends shape and life to a piece of literature because it creates a mood. Moreover,
tone bestows voice to characters, and throws light on the personalities and
dispositions of characters that readers understand better.
Example #1
Father: “We are going on a vacation.”
Son: “That’s great!!!” – The tone of son’s response is very
cheerful. Example #2
Father: “We can’t go on vacation this summer.”
Son: “Yeah, great! That’s what I expected.” –
The son’s tone is sarcastic.
Example #3
“Yeah, your grades on this exam will be as good as the previous
exams.” – The tone is pessimistic in this example. Example #4
“Can someone tell me what the hell is going on here?” –
This has an aggressive tone.
Examples in Literature
“And the trees all died. They were orange trees. I don’t know why
they died, they just died. Something wrong with the soil possibly or
maybe the stuff we got from the nursery wasn’t the best. We complained
about it. So we’ve got thirty kids there, each kid had his or her own little
tree to plant and we’ve got these thirty dead trees. All these kids looking
at these little brown sticks, it was depressing.”
Explanation
The use of the adjectives “dead” and “depressing” sets a gloomy tone in the
passage. As trees signify life here, their unexpected “death” from an unknown cause
gives the above passage an unhappy and pessimistic tone.
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Example #2: The Road Not Taken (By Robert Frost)
Robert Frost, in the last stanza of his poem The Road Not Taken, gives us an
insight into the effect of tone:
1. Free Verse is also called vers libre, which is a French word meaning “free verse.” It
is a literary device that is free from limitations of regular meter or rhythm, and does
not rhyme with fixed forms
2. Line Break is a poetic device which is used at the end of a line and the beginning of
the next line in a poem. It could be employed without traditional punctuation. It is a
method by which lines of poetry are divided to show a change in a metrical pattern.
3. Enjambment is derived from the French word enjambment which means to step
over, or put legs across. Enjambed lines are the lines in the middle of a sentence.
Therefore, the sentence continues across several lines of the poem
4. Metaphor is a figure of speech that makes an implicit, implied, or hidden
comparison between two things that are unrelated, but which share some
common characteristics. In other words, a resemblance of two contradictory or
different objects is made based on a single or some common characteristics.
5. Topography or shape poetry , in creative writing, is the style, arrangement, or
appearance of printed letters on a page.
6. Concrete poetry, or also known as visual poetry, is written to represent objects
which they describe.
7. Acrostic poetry uses the letter in a topic word to begin each line. All lines in the poem
should relate to or describe the poem.
8. Genre-crossing texts are a type of technique employed to transform prose into
poetry or the other way around.
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9. Tone is an attitude of a writer toward a subject or an audience. Tone is
generally conveyed through the choice of words, or the viewpoint of a writer
on a particular subject.
Assessment
Hundreds of years ago a very wicked king named Loku ruled the Philippines. He was
cruel and unjust, and condemned to death all who refused to do his bidding. He had
vast armies and made war on all until his name was feared everywhere.
His power was very great. He conquered every nation that opposed him and
killed so many people that the god, viewing the slaughter from his throne above,
sent an angel to order him to cease from warfare and to rule the land in peace.
Loku was in his palace, planning an assault on his neighbors, when a soft
light filled the chamber, and a beautiful angel appeared and delivered the mandate
of the master.
The cruel king paid no heed, but dismissed the holy messenger in scorn.
"Tell your master," said he, "to deliver his message in person. I do not deal with
messengers. I am Loku. All fear my name. I am the great Loku."
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Hardly had he spoken when the palace shook to its foundations and a mighty
voice thundered, "Is it thus thou Slightest my word? Thou art Loku. All shall indeed
know thy name. From every crevice thou shalt forever cry it in a form that suits thy
ill nature."
The courtiers, alarmed by the shock, rushed to the king's chamber, but Loku
was nowhere to be found. The royal robes lay scattered on the floor and the only
living thing to be seen was an ugly lizard that blinked at them from among the plans
on the table.
They searched far and wide, and when no trace of the king could be found the
courtiers divided the kingdom and ruled so wisely and well that there was peace
for many years.
As for Loku, you may still hear him fulfilling his punishment. From crack and crevice,
tree and shrub, he calls his name from dark till dawn: "Lok-u! Lok-u! Lok-
u!"
And he must cry it forever.
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