Meaningful Work: How The History Research Paper Prepares Students For College and Life
Meaningful Work: How The History Research Paper Prepares Students For College and Life
By Will Fitzhugh A junior from a public high school wrote these words as part
of her grand-prize-winning essay in a national civics competition.
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ithout history, there is no way to learn from The competition asked students to write about what history meant
mistakes or remember the good times to them in 500 to 700 words. What it did not ask students to do was
through the bad. History is more than a read any history books or journal articles or primary sources on
teacher to me; it’s an understanding of why which to base their writing, nor did it ask students to give refer-
I am who I am. It’s a part of my life on which I can never turn ences for the works they used. The competition did not ask stu-
back.... In a sense, history is me, and I am the history of the future. dents to develop a thesis statement or a narrative, support it with
History does not mean series of events; history means stories and research, or write numerous drafts—all hallmarks of good writing.
pictures; history means people, and yet, history means much And so, the prize-winning essay excerpted above is really no prize.
more. History means the people of yesterday, today, and tomor- The student who wrote it read nothing to prepare for her short
row. History means me.” “essay” and so wrote nothing substantive.
ILLUSTRATIONS BY PAUL ZWOLAK
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n 1987, I founded the Concord Review, the only quarterly sciences, mathematics and computer science, and the arts. The IB
journal that publishes history research papers by high school program provides explicit steps, such as constructing an argu-
students from across the country and around the world. The ment, referencing sources, and setting deadlines that students
papers, which average 5,500 words with endnotes and bibli- must take to complete the essay, the purpose of which is to help
ographies, focus on a variety of topics and times, such as the hijab them “develop the skills of independent research that will be
in Islam, the Bar Kokhba revolt, the Alaska pipeline, Irish national- expected at university,” according to the program’s website. In
ism, and Chinese immigration. I receive nearly 400 submissions addition to teachers in the IB program, some Advanced Placement
for each issue, and I have the pleasure of selecting the best to (AP) teachers still assign research papers, even though the College
publish. So far, essays in the Concord Review have come from 44 Board, which runs AP, does not require them.
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n May 1844, Democratic Party leaders met to the position.7 1795 in Mecklenburg County, North
in Baltimore to nominate their candidate For the next four years, Polk tirelessly Carolina, a place “where men lived simply
for the presidential election to be held devoted himself to achieving each and on the fruits of their own labor without
later that year. They passed over leading every one of the goals he set during his expectations of easy wealth and dealt
contenders, including Martin Van Buren, presidency. Yet, despite his many accom- honestly with each other on a basis of
Lewis Cass, John C. Calhoun, and Thomas plishments, Polk did not escape his four rough equality and mutual respect.”11 Polk
Hart Benton, and instead nominated James years in office with his reputation was the first of 10 children. His father,
Knox Polk, a relatively unknown former unscathed. Despite America’s victory in the Samuel Polk, was of Scots-Irish descent, and
Congressman from Tennessee.1 Many Mexican War, the Whigs, led by Abraham was a slaveholder, a successful farmer, and a
people thought Polk’s political career was Lincoln, harshly criticized Polk for his role in surveyor. His mother, Jane Knox Polk, was
over following his second failed bid to win the outbreak of the war, which led to his the great-grandniece of Scottish Reforma-
reelection as Governor of Tennessee just censure by the House of Representatives in tion leader John Knox.12
nine months before.2 The nomination of 1848.8 Several years later, Ulysses S. Grant Polk’s childhood was marked by several
this “dark horse” candidate—which concurred with Lincoln’s assessment of Polk distinct influences that would later affect
surprised no one more than Polk himself— in his memoirs, referring to the Mexican him as President. Significantly, Polk’s
was met with ridicule and derision by the War as “the most unjust war ever waged by grandfather, Ezekial, and his father Samuel,
opposing Whig Party.3 “Who is James K. a stronger against a weaker nation.”9 These were staunch supporters of Jefferson’s
nomination in 1844, Polk announced that if decision-making process in the White 44. Borneman, p. 11.
he were elected President, he would not House, and offers insight into the day-to- 45. Bergeron, “The Presidency,” p. 11.
seek a second term.66 Aware that the day administration of the government 46. Seigenthaler, p. 25.
Democratic Party had been splintered into during one of the most critical and exciting 47. Ibid., p. 25.
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The best writing emerges from a rich suggest that our schools start assigning a page per year: each
first-grader would be required to write a one-page paper on
store of knowledge that the author a subject other than himself or herself, with at least one
is trying to pass on. Without that source. At least one page and one source would be added
each year to the required academic writing, so that fifth-graders,
knowledge and the for example, would have to write
motivation to share it, a five-page paper with five
sources, ninth-graders would
all the strategies in the have to write a nine-page paper
with nine sources, and so on,
world will not make until each and every high school
much difference. senior could be asked to prepare
a 12-page history research paper
with 12 sources.
Such a plan would gradually
Foundation, and Daniel T. Willing- prepare students for future aca-
ham, a professor of psychology who demic writing and could also
focuses on applying cognitive sci- reduce the need for remedial
ence to K–12 classrooms, have writ- instruction in writing (and per-
ten, teachers have erroneously been haps in remedial reading as well)
told to focus on reading compre- when students enroll in college.
hension strategies, such as finding If school districts adopted such a
the main idea and identifying the plan, it wouldn’t take high school
author ’s audience.* Such an teachers nearly as much time as
approach is time-consuming and it does now to teach students to
shifts the emphasis away from texts that build students’ knowl- write history research papers; students could draw on the knowl-
edge and vocabulary. As a result, students tend to spend more edge they gained in previous grades to distinguish between pri-
time practicing strategies with trivial fiction than acquiring the mary and secondary sources, formulate an argument or a
knowledge (found in serious fiction and nonfiction) that drives narrative based on those sources, develop a bibliography, and
comprehension. In middle and high school, students are expected write and revise numerous drafts.
to independently read nonfiction science and social studies texts, As long as we leave it to chance whether students encounter
but far too many of them struggle because they haven’t acquired teachers who somehow manage to carve out time to guide stu-
the necessary foundation in elementary school. dents through the research and writing process, students like
As for writing, many elementary teachers do teach students to Laura Arandes will continue to “scrape by” in college writing.
write, but this writing tends to focus only on students writing “Modern public high schools have an obligation not to simply
about themselves or writing short stories. Because students don’t pump out graduates at the end of the year, but also to prepare
spend enough time in the early grades reading nonfiction in sci- them for the intellectual rigors of college,” Arandes wrote in her
letter to me. As she learned, there is no better preparation for col-
lege than having students write history research papers.
*For more on why reading comprehension depends largely on knowledge, see the
Spring 2006 issue of American Educator, available at www.aft.org/newspubs/ So I urge teachers to do their best to assign them. I look forward
periodicals/ae/spring2006/index.cfm. to reading them. ☐