Sample Stylistic Analysis
Sample Stylistic Analysis
Introduction
The analysis of style is an attempt to find the artistic principles underlying a writer’s
choice of language. All writers, and for that matter, all texts, have individual qualities.
Therefore the features which call themselves to the readers’ attention in one text will not
infallible technique for selecting what is significant for each text, for the artistic effect of
the whole, and in the way linguistic details fit into this whole. Analyzing a text stylistically
is not the usual 'literary' analysis as it needs to be much more objective and rooted in
fact. With stylistics, the aim is to explain how the words of a text create the feelings and
Stylistics, a yoking of style and linguistics, is a discipline which has been approached
from many perspectives. Its meaning varies, based on the theory that is adopted. When
carrying out different activities either in spoken or written forms, certain devices of
thought and the rules of language are used. However, there are variations so as to
change meanings or say the same thing in different. At the time stylistics developed, the
study of authorial style was a major critical concern, and linguistic analysis, allied to
statistics, was popular with the ways. This is what the concept of style is based upon:
the use of language in different ways, all for the purpose of achieving a common goal -
Moreover, stylistics and stylistic analysis have been extensively studied in recent years.
The term stylistics became associated with detailed linguistic criticism because,
according to Stylistic Analysis (2016), it has focused on how meanings and effects are
produced by literary texts. According to Jaafar (2014), stylistics takes a close look at the
text and analyzes its significant language forms for the sake of interpretation, it comes
very close to practical criticism. Even in the reader response theory criticism or
reception theory stylistics has a role to play. Stylistics, in fact, has a great effect in
almost every kind of critical approach. According to various dictionaries, the term
―stylistics means
―the science of literary style‖ or the ―art of forming good style in writing. Leech and
With its objectivity, insights from linguistics and useful terminology, stylistics makes the
readers’ interpretation valid and enhances their enjoyment of literature. Thus, stylistics
has become an inseparable part of contemporary criticism that should not be ignored.
This is one of the reasons why literary critics do not always separate stylistic study from
a wider theory of literature. The fabrication of situations and resulting moral evaluation
are the writer‘s purpose and this purpose cannot be entirely separated from style which
is its means and its fine texture. (Carter & Stockwell, 2008, as cited in Jafaar, 2014).
Analyzing a text stylistically is not the usual 'literary' analysis as it needs to be much
more objective and rooted in fact. With stylistics, the aim is to explain how the words of
a text create the feelings and responses that readers get upon reading them (McIntyre,
n.d.).
Meanwhile, this paper is primarily concerned with the literary and stylistics analysis of
the major plot parts of “XXXXXXXXX”, a short story written by XXXX XXXXX. This prose
has been included in the Grade X required reading material for public schools. Being a
secondary public school teacher herself, the writer found the material relatable and its
literature among high school learners. Looking into this aim, this paper would largely
focus on the analysis of the major parts of the plot in terms of its lexical and grammatical
Objectives
1. to classify and analyze the language use in major plot parts of the story based on
1.1.1 vocabulary,
1.1.2.1 nouns,
1.1.2.2 adjectives,
1.1.2.3 verbs,
1.1.2.4 adverbs,
This analysis focused on the major plot parts of the story, XXXX XXXX. Covering the
exposition, rising action, climax, falling action and resolution, this paper also specified
details relevant to classifying and analyzing language use based only on the lexical and
include any pertinent analysis on the clauses and phrases. This paper also excludes
scrutiny of the figures of speech, context and cohesion. Therefore, the identified deviant
style of the writer in presenting the major plot parts would only be lexically and
intention to deconstruct the meaning of the text through any other methods or
Literature Review
Divided into three distinct themes: lexical categories, grammatical categories and
deviant writing style, this portion interrelates various literature to determine the
significance of this analysis and to aid in the succeeding analysis of the different parts of
the plot.
Lexical categories
The lexical categories differ from language to language. Regarded as the linguistic
elements at the word level, lexical categories are the syntactic categories that are part
vary depending on how the word is used in discourse. These categories may further be
subdivided as major and minor. In English, included in the major lexical categories are
the noun, verb, adjectives and adverbs while part of the minor lexical categories are
pronoun, conjunctions, particles and prepositions (SIL, 2003). Wardaugh (2005) made
simple definitions of parts of speech: noun as names of person, thing or place; verb as
quantity or extent; adverb that expresses manner, quality, place, time, degree, number,
location or origin.
Meanwhile, Leech and Short (1981) listed categories that are necessary in the stylistics
analysis of text. Under lexical categories, they included nouns, adjectives and adverbs
while sentence types, sentence complexity, clause types, clause structure, none
phrases, verb phrases and other phrase types are placed under grammatical
categories.
To elaborate the concepts of lexical categories, the subsequent paragraphs provide
It is important to note that nouns have various aspects which have been explained by
Talib (2017). One of these aspects includes countability or number. Nouns can be
countable or uncountable and a countable noun can either be singular or plural. The
plural is usually indicated by adding the appropriate plural morpheme at the end (such
relevance, in the analysis of a passage, to ask the question whether it is possible for the
vice versa. We may also note here that there are some uncountable nouns which are
Another distinction found in traditional grammar, is that between proper and common
nouns. Proper nouns are often capitalized and are specific name of something or
someone whereas common nouns form the bulk of the nouns in an English dictionary.
In a text, the use of a proper noun as against a common noun may be of stylistic
significance. Repeating a person's name, for example, instead of using the appropriate
common noun or pronoun, may make the text sound formal, or even reverential,
Traditionally, nouns are also regarded as either abstract or concrete. A concrete noun
refers to an object which can be directly perceived by the senses, like 'tree' or 'building',
Stylistically, the frequent use of abstract nouns in a text may lead to describing the text
as thoughtful, scholarly, pedantic etc., especially when it is possible to use concrete
Meanwhile, gender refers to the male or female variants of certain nouns, such as
prominent issue in the study of stylistics today. It becomes especially significant in the
study of the style (and ideology) of recent writing when the writer (or narrator, character,
speaker etc.) can resort to a gender-neutral lexical item, but resorts instead to a
Also connected to nouns are the numerals. Stylistically, a person who is fond of giving
numerical figures such as '501' or '56' instead of less precise quantifiers such as
what is known as the genitive or possessive case, is indicated at the end of the noun
with an ’s’ (in writing, a singular noun ends with an apostrophe followed by an 's', and a
plural noun ends with an ’s’ followed by an apostrophe). The noun with this construction
usually indicates that the person/being/thing which it refers to owns the referent of the
noun which immediately follows it, but other meanings are possible in the genitive case
in English (e.g. that the referent of the second noun is located within the first one.).
Another lexical category is the adjective. In traditional terms, adjective modifies the
meaning of the noun. It describes a person, place, quantity or a value. It has two main
and post positive. Attributive adjectives emphasize action by being a permanent part of
the subject whereas predicative adjectives qualify the noun or the subject.
Adjectives can be easily located in English when they precede nouns, such as,
'the red house' and 'the wonderful party'. These adjectives are described as attributive.
But adjectives can also function predicatively, in which case they can be found
elsewhere in the clause, such as following the verb 'to be' like: 'the house is red', and
'the party is wonderful'. In some instances, adjectives can follow the direct object, in
which case it is described as postposed, such as 'he paints the house red', and 'they
Many adjectives can be modified by the intensifier 'very' and other intensifiers such as
'fairly' and 'quite', and many of them have comparative and superlative forms, or, the
appropriate comparative and superlative words can be added before them, that is to say
the suffix '-er' (or '-ier') or the premodifying word 'more' for comparatives, and the suffix
Adjectives which can have comparative and superlative versions, or which can be
modified by intensifying words such as 'very', 'so', 'utterly', etc. are sometimes described
as gradable adjectives. It is also important to note that the words 'more' and 'most' need
not always qualify adjectives, as they can also qualify nouns; e.g. 'most people
disagreed with the ruling', 'more students are coming forward to voice their opinion'.
As regards the analysis of adjectives in stylistics, one of the first questions one asks is
whether there are many of them in a text, or whether they are used sparingly. One of
the main functions adjectives serve is to give more description to the entities found in a
text; so, the use of more adjectives will result in the descriptive richness of the text,
adjectives may however make the style of the text ornate (or flowery), and slows down
the action in the text, as one feels that one has to concentrate one's attention on the
The use of comparatives is self-explanatory, and shows the interest the text has in
assumed yardstick (this of course gives rise to another question: the basis for the
assumed yardstick, which you may want to question in your analysis). Superlatives may
also serve the same purpose, but they may reveal the interest the text has in viewing
colloquially, may even be exaggerated, and this may be a point of interest in your
In analyzing the adjectives, it is also possible to put them in lexical sets, like placing
them in terms of certain categories, such as adjectives describing color, shape, size,
speed, etc. Similarly, the analysis may also look into lexical sets of the nouns, and
whether there is a variation in the use of the adjectives in relation to them: e g. concrete
or abstract nouns, animate / inanimate entities, male / female etc. In relation to the
abstract / concrete division, this distinction may also apply in relation to some of the
'regretful' is abstract. However, there are quite a few adjectives which are problematic;
many in fact appear to be concrete, but because they are used to describe abstract
Lexical sets work not only in relation to adjectives, but in relation to other grammatical
features or categories as well. Lexical sets that are assembled according to features of
nouns – for example, whether they are countable or uncountable, abstract or concrete –
The same can be said about the features of verbs, which may also be assembled
according to their lexical sets for stylistic analysis, such as whether they are transitive or
intransitive, whether their tense is past or present, or the significance of auxiliary verbs,
important is not the mere assembling of such features, but it must be connected to the
Moreover, the next lexical category, the verbs in English can be generally categorized
in terms of auxiliary and lexical (or content, or what Hughes describes as 'ordinary')
verbs. The auxiliary verbs perform their function only in relation to the lexical verbs (and
are hence sometimes also known as function verbs). Auxiliary verbs, unlike lexical
verbs, are sometimes described as a closed category, as their total number is limited,
and has not changed very much in the recent history of the language. Due to their
limited number, all the auxiliary verbs in English, unlike the lexical verbs, can be
conveniently listed in a typical grammar of English. Some of the auxiliary verbs are
categorized as modal, whereas the others can be categorized as primary. The primary
auxiliary verbs in English are do, have, and be while the modal auxiliary verbs are can,
could, may, might, shall, should, will, would, must, used to, need, and dare.
One must be careful with these examples, because some of them can function as
lexical verbs. All the primary auxiliary verbs for example, depending on their meaning,
can function as lexical verbs, and this is also true for some of the modal auxiliaries, such
as need and dare (and arguably, will and would, although their meanings are different
In order to see whether a verb functions as an auxiliary, one must identify the essential
functions to modify another verb; if the verb stands on its own, then it should be
regarded as a lexical verb. Verbs in English can also be finite or non-finite. Non-finite
verbs in English are usually indicated by the word 'to' preceding the verb, or by the
morpheme '-ing' at the end of the verb. A finite verb has tense, i.e. past or present
tense. The one in the present tense also has a relationship of concord with the subject
of the clause. This means that the verb has to agree in number with the subject (i.e.
whether it is singular or plural). If the subject is singular, the (present tense) verb ends
with an 's', 'ies' etc., but if it is plural, this morpheme is not present.
However, it is important to note that number concord is not present (at least in form) in
the modal auxiliaries (and this may be one way by which we can judge whether these
verbs function as modal auxiliary or lexical verbs: i.e. if number concord is evident, then
the verb is a lexical verb). A finite verb has a relationship of concord with the subject of
the clause, but this does not mean that for a noun to be regarded as a subject, the
succeeding verb has to have a relationship of grammatical concord with it, nor need the
verb be finite.
Considering verb tense, past tense in English is usually indicated by a morpheme spelt
with a '-d' or '-ed' at the end of the verb. However, there are a number of irregular verbs
where past tense is indicated by other means, e.g. 'to see'--'saw', 'to go' -- 'went', 'to
sing' -- 'sang', etc. In forming the future tense, the auxiliary verb 'will' is indicated before
Related to tense is aspect, where one specifies whether the action denoted by a verb
has been done or is going on. One uses the perfect aspect, which is indicated by the
auxiliary verb 'to have', followed by a lexical verb in the form of what is sometimes called
the '-ed participle' in the grammar of English, to specify that an action has already been
done at a particular point of time. The perfective in English can either be in the present
or past tense (indicating that the action has been done at the present moment of the
discourse, or at a point of time to the past of the discourse). The progressive aspect is
indicated by the auxiliary verb 'to be', followed by the lexical verb, which is in the form of
what is called the '-ing participle' in the grammar of English, to specify that an action is
(or was) still going on at a particular point of time. Again, the progressive in English can
either be in the present or past tense (indicating that the action is going on at the
present moment of the discourse, or at a point of time to the past of the discourse).
Finally, another concept essential to verb is its transitive. One way by which this
concept can be understood, is to look at the verb in relation to the subject, and the
presence or absence of the direct and indirect objects. A verb which carries both the
direct and indirect objects is known as a ditransitive verb, that which carries only the
direct object is called a transitive verb, and finally, that which does not carry the direct
Some verbs consist of two or even three words, such as 'round off' and 'face up to'.
These are called phrasal verbs. In each of the given examples, the preposition or
prepositions following the first word are not prepositions in their own right, but part of the
phrasal verb. Some phrasal verbs allow a word or phrase to be inserted between their
earlier and later components, thus splitting the phrasal verb into two. Talib (2017)
emphasized that in literary stylistics, the primary interest is not on the various categories
of the verbs but on how the verbs function in the given work or abstract. The usefulness
of a primary auxiliary verb for stylistic analysis may depend on the aspectual function it
serves in relation to the lexical verb: for example, whether an action is still going on, no
longer functioning etc. These verbs may be of concern in relation to the accuracy of
The modal auxiliaries are usually a rich source for the interpretation of opinions,
evaluations, feelings and emotional reactions, judgments of certainty, and the issuing of
commands etc. Furthermore, the finite verbs can be regarded as being anchored to a
more definite time, and related in more definite ways to their subjects, whereas the
nonfinite verbs do seem to have, comparatively speaking, a less certain linkage to time
and person; however, one needs to be warned here that this linkage may be indicated
or implied by the tensed verb to which the non-finite verb grammatically relates, or by
time adverbials.
to determining whether an event is in the past or the present: notice for example, the
use of the present tense in a narrative written in the past tense, which may indicate that
The use of a lot intransitive verbs in a text may indicate the description of actions which
exist by themselves, and are not done on objects, things or people, while the frequent
use of transitive verbs may signify the opposite of this; ditransitive verbs quite often
The last lexical category to be elaborated is adverb. Adverbs are words that are used in
adverb. They add a description to the sentence to make it more detailed and interesting.
The following types are explained by the ESL Grammar (2019) for illustration purposes:
The adverb of time answers the question when did/is/will the action take place like
yesterday, later, never, and tomorrow. The adverb of place specifies the place where
the action occurs like there, everywhere, anywhere, somewhere, near and far. The
adverb of manner tells the way in which the action was carried out like quietly, fast,
The adverb of frequency tells the frequency or amount of time spent in doing the verb.
These adverbs are used to show the duration or timing of the action that is
happening/had happened/will happen. They also tell us how often and how long these
actions would be, like frequently, often, yearly, and briefly. The adverbs of degree are
used to show to what extent or how much has an action been done or will be done, like
almost, fully, partially, and altogether. The adverbs of confirmation and negation either
confirm or deny the action of the verb. They are also used to reinforce the action that is
described by the verb. For confirmation, examples are definitely, absolutely, certainly
and surely; for denial or negation are never, no, don’t, can’t, etc. The adverbs of
comment are used to make a comment on the entire sentence. They give a look at the
speaker’s viewpoint or opinion about the sentence. These adverbs do not just change or
describe the verb; they influence the whole sentence. Like in the example:
Unfortunately, they found his secret easily. The addition of the adverb, unfortunately,
has changed the entire tone of the sentence. The adverbs of conjunction are used to
They are used to show consequence or effect or the relation between the two
clauses, like however – yet, on the other hand, in spite of; consequently – as a result,
resulting in; moreover – beside, in addition; and conversely – opposite of, contrary to.
Adverbs can be used in diverse ways, which means that they are very flexible in
sentences; they can be moved around quite a bit without causing any grammatical
irregularities.
adjectives, give more description to a passage. Unlike adjectives however, they do not
merely serve the function of qualifying only one type of lexical category. Their stylistic
significance may therefore vary according to the function they serve in a clause, and the
functions they serve are more diverse than that of adjectives – for example. Lexical sets
of adverbs or adverbials may also be useful for stylistic analysis. Adverbials can be
Grammatical Categories
sentence structure, it begins with a capital letter, ends with a punctuation (period,
question mark or exclamation point), contains a subject that is given only once, contains
a verb or verb phrase, follows the S-V-O or the subject-verb-object word order, and
must have a complete idea that stands alone, and which can also be called a clause.
only one clause (i.e. only one subject - predicator set, or -- as subjects can be missing --
one predicator) then it is regarded as a simple sentence (note that all the examples
given earlier are simple sentences). However, a sentence may have more than one
clause in it, in which case, in traditional grammar, the sentence is regarded as either
coordinate relationship with each other. A complex sentence is one in which one or
more clauses have a subordinate relationship with the main clause. According to
Rambo (2012), a complex sentence joins an independent clause with one or more
dependent clauses. The dependent clauses can go first in the sentence, followed by the
independent clause. When the dependent clause comes first, a comma should be used
Conversely, the independent clauses can go first in the sentence, followed by the
dependent clause. When the independent clause comes first, a comma should not be
used to separate the two clauses. Complex sentences are often more effective than
compound sentences because a complex sentence indicates clearer and more specific
relationships between the main parts of the sentence. The word "before," for instance,
tells readers that one thing occurs before another. A word such as "although" conveys a
The term periodic sentence is used to refer to a complex sentence beginning with
a dependent clause and ending with an independent clause. Periodic sentences can be
especially effective because the completed thought occurs at the end of it, so the first
part of the sentence can build up to the meaning that comes at the end. Beginning a
sentence with "and," "or," "but," or the other coordinating conjunctions should be
avoided. These words generally are used to join together parts of a sentence, not to
However, such sentences can be used effectively. Because sentences beginning with
these words stand out, they are sometimes used for emphasis. If you use sentences
beginning with one of the coordinating conjunctions, you should use these sentences
sparingly and carefully. Because each type of sentence can serve various functions, the
writer should use the type of sentence that best communicates the purpose of his or her
idea (Andersen, 2014): Simple sentences are used to present a limited amount of
information.
Although simple sentences may be shorter, they are not any less academic than other
sentence types. These are used to declare a direct statement, to display a list, to give
sentences can serve similar purposes. The writer can tailor the amount of information
These sentences combine similar ideas, compare or contrast ideas, convey cause and
effect or chain of events, and elaborate on a claim or extend reasoning. In terms of their
command, question, and exclamation (Zhang, 1999 as cited in Song, 2009, p. 120).
exclamations, show emphasis. Unlike the other three sentences purposes, exclamatory
sentences are not a distinct sentence type. Instead, declarative, interrogative, and
common of all these sentence types is the declarative. It typically follows the structure:
subject + verb, and has a full-stop final punctuation or the period. It can be in positive or
also some declarative sentences that ask a question, give command or even express
emotion. Secondly, the interrogative sentence follows the structure: auxiliary verb +
subject + verb and always has a question mark. It can also be stated in positive or
negative form and in any tense. There are basic question types like the yes/no question,
the WH question, the choice or alternative question and the tag question.
Next is the imperative sentence, which can be as simple as the verb itself. Typically,
imperatives use the base verb and has no subject. It can be ended with either a full-
imperatives can also give instructions more politely than a straight command.
strong feelings or opinion in one or two forms. The usual function of an exclamative
sentence is to help the speaker express a strong (often extreme) opinion about a
assessment of the situation while the final punctuation is usually, but not necessarily an
Generally, exclamatory statements are used less than the other sentence types.
Linguistic deviation arises/happens/occurs when the writer or the poet choose not to
abide by the rules of his language when he transcends its norms and exceeds the limits
of the linguistic protocols that characterize it. Deviation is the breaking of rules which
others obey. In literary circle, deviation is taken as poetic license or writer’s license and
devices for violating the norms. He explains deviations as a pervading feature of poetic
Deviance in sentences and their interpretation has provided interesting insights into the
breach of the rules. Writers resort to deviation to achieve certain artistic aims and
effects as Leech say "a poet may transcend the limits of the language to explore and
Through this phenomenon, writers can communicate unique experiences which cannot
human tongue – the native normal language. Deviance is also used to realize specific
effects on the reader by striking him with something unexpected forcing him to focus his
Moreover, its important psychological effect on the readers (or hearers) is made
English, 2015). In this sense, foreground in is the intentional violation of the scheme by
means of which an item brought into artistic emphasis and thus stands out from its
apportionment of invariants and variables .In any pattern of parallelism there must be an
element of identity and an element of contrast but the absolute duplication or the exact
repetition is the repeated use of the same word or word pattern as a rhetorical device in
language. Leech for example considers it to be the principle underlying all versification
& refers to its "overriding importance in the structure and significance of works of
literature".
of "coupling". Levin considers "coupling" to be the essence of poetry and argues that
poetic language maximizes the use of such figures as "couples". Coupling, according to
Levin, accounts for the convergence of a pair of equivalent phonic and/or semantic
Deviation from linguistic or other socially accepted norms has been claimed to be a
basic principle of aesthetic communication and is essential for the study of poetic
language. The creative writer's dilemma is that he is never satisfied with the normal
communicative resources of his language and always feels the need to find other ways
of using the language that are particular to himself and through which he can convey
what he has to say. In his strife for linguistic creativity a writer may violate the rules of
the normal usage of his language in a number of ways: He can infringe these rules, add
This motivated violation of linguistic rules, known as linguistic deviation, and results
when the writer makes choices that are not permissible in terms of the accepted
code .and effects a disruption of the normal process of communication that is justified
only when the reader can assign some significance, some communication value to the
deviation, i.e. It has its significance through the reader knowledge of it, and it is
unintelligible unless the reader can, by some effort of his mind, provide an interpretation
Synthesis
concrete quantifiable data and applied in a systematic way. It uses specialized technical
terms and concepts which derive from the science of linguistics. Stylistics analysis is
interpretation and the field of linguistics had little to say about literature beyond the
sentence level.
Meanwhile, literary texts can be described in linguistic terms. Language remains as the
most formidable tool that writers use for literary creativity. It also serves as an avenue
through which literature delights and instructs and remains indispensable to the creative
artists and to the literary critics, who have a facility of words. Moreover, any
language. Thus, linguistics, which is the scientific study of language and language use,
determine the internal structure of sentences in a language and the way they function
and put through an analysis to find out the foregrounding and the deviation.
explicit in analysis, to lay one's interpretative cards, as it were, clearly on the table. If the
number of interpretations that a text can hold is not indefinitely large, then interpretative
argumentation and testing will have to depend not upon something as unreliable as
what we know about the psychological and social processes involved in textual
Stylistics, therefore, requires the peeling off of linguistic features of a text layer by layer
Synthesis
As a literary criticism approach, stylistics deal with the interpretation of texts from a
linguistic perspective. (Bramlette & Arellano, 2013). Using this approach can be traced
back even before time it was founded by Charles Bally in the latter half of the twentieth
century. Aristotle, along with other ancient figures in history used stylistics to interpret
the written word and to examine their thoughts. Literary works were primarily analyzed
in a more logical and structural way until Bally introduced the idea of looking deeper into
text.
This approach is selected to analyze the reasons why the author chose to use the
techniques and language they do and to analyze the overall attitude of the piece. Since
Applying the stylistics approach in the five major plot parts of the short story this paper
employed classifying and analyzing language use in terms of lexical and grammatical
categories. Specifically, this analysis utilized the checklist of linguistic and stylistic
categories suggested by Leech and Short (2007, pp. 61-62): On one hand, in terms of
evaluative? General or specific? How far does the writer make use of the emotive and
other associations of words, as opposed to their referential meaning? Does the text
contain idiomatic phrases or notable collocations, and if so, with what kind of dialect
or register are these idioms or collocations associated? Is there any use of rare or
compound words, words with particular suffixes)? To what semantic fields do words
belong?
2. Nouns. Are the nouns abstract or concrete? What kinds of abstract nouns occur
Attributive or predicative?
4. Verbs. Do the verbs carry an important part of the meaning? Are they stative
perceptions, etc.? Are they transitive, intransitive, linking (intensive), etc.? Are they
factive or nonfactive?
5. Adverbs. Are adverbs frequent? What semantic functions do they perform (manner,
place, direction, time, degree, etc.)? Is there any significant use of sentence adverbs
(conjuncts such as so, therefore, however; disjuncts such as certainly, obviously,
frankly)?
On the other hand, the following sets of questions were used to guide the analysis in
1. Sentence Types. Does the author use only statements (declarative sentences),
with no verb) also occur in the text? If these other types appear, what is their function?
structure? What is the average sentence length (in number of words)? What is the ratio
parataxis
does complexity tend to occur? For instance, is there any notable occurrence of
clauses preceding the subject of a main clause)? In analyzing the text in terms of lexical
density, an online text analyzer accessible through Online-Utility.org was also utilized.
However, a great deal of manual quantification was made to generate figures and data
that helped in analyzing the major plot parts of the short story. A web-based lexical and
syntactic complexity analyzer was also used to generate figures on the lexical variations
in terms of nouns, adjectives, verbs and adverbs. Finally, the result of the first two parts
of analysis (grammatical and lexical) would be used to determine the deviant style of the
Discussion
This portion aims to identify the deviant literary style of XXXX XXXX in his short story
XXXX XXXX by classifying and analyzing the language use in major plot parts based on
identify what events compose the major plot parts. Considered as the narrative
exposition are the first paragraph, which describes the setting and gives a picture of the
first scene in the story and the succeeding paragraphs that provide a detailed flashback.
The succeeding items methodically present the classification and analysis of the
language used in major plot parts of the short story. These parts include the exposition,
rising action, climax, falling action and resolution or ending. Findings are presented
twofolds: first, on matters pertinent to lexical categories, and second on the bases of
grammatical categories:
In determining lexical complexity, the syllabic complexity was analyzed among only the
content words (noun, adjective, verb and adverb) in the major plot parts. Analysis
revealed that the text is generally simple as evident by the majority of monosyllabic and
disyllabic words used by the author in all the plot parts. There were also occasional
appearance of familiar words that have three syllables like in the title and other common
words like disappeared, finally, cautiously, and suddenly. There were also rare
appearance of four-syllable words like the nouns adaptation, perversity and embroidery,
the adjective incredible, and the adverb malignantly. Lastly, a fivesyllable word
appeared only once in the whole text, i.e., is alternatively in the exposition part of the
Table 1
Comparing all plot parts, the author is consistent in using monosyllabic and disyllabic
content words in almost 90% of the text. In terms of formality or informality, the text was
written in an informal but figurative manner. Although, no colloquial terms are recorded
from the short story. The characters’ names used by the writer do not necessarily
Moreover, in all the plot parts, word contraction is only evident within dialogues. It
occurred 22 times in a total of 45 lines exchanged by the characters in the entire story.
do not necessarily affect formality but result to more natural and realistic dialogues. The
author employed both descriptive and evaluative words in the text. Highly descriptive
language are scattered all over the exposition part which mostly appeal to senses and
create imagery. The author showcased an effective practice of giving a vivid picture of
the setting and the identity of the characters weaving simple descriptive words to create
As shown in Table 2, nouns and verbs recorded the highest number of words in all the
major plot parts while the modifiers: adjectives and adverbs were noted to have the
least number. This figure is quite normal since, basically, nouns and verbs form the
major parts of the sentence, which are subject and predicate. Nevertheless, the
existence of word modifiers, adjectives and adverbs, also plays significant roles in
completing the picture of the story and all its elements. Thus, varied content words carry
the meaning and theme of the story. Such variety can be observed in the next figure.
Figure 1
and adverbs have the lowest rate in all parts of the plot. Indicators and effects made by
these varieties would be tackled in the specified analysis for each content word.
1.1.2.1. Nouns
Figure 2
impression that most of the subjects or objects in the text are largely physical or
perceivable by the senses and just around a quarter is consist of ideas, emotions, time
indicators and the like. Aside from the quantity above, this phenomenon can also be
Table 3
Thus, looking at colored items, the author is consistent in including concrete nouns that
can be associated to animals, parts of the body and family members in all parts of the
plot, and abstract nouns relative to emotions and time concepts in most parts of the
text.
1.1.2.2. Adjectives
their main function in the sentence. These words also play important roles in every part
Table 4
Table 4 presents the number of adjectives used in different parts of the plot. Aside from
having the highest number of words among plot parts, rising action and exposition also
listed the greatest number of adjectival use while the falling action and resolution have
noticeably low number of adjective use. Aside from counting numbers, it is also
important to analyze the modifier in terms of its positioning in the text. An adjective can
sentence’s predicate.
Figure 3
plot parts. It can be observed that majority of the adjectives used across the plot parts
are attributive. Some also use predicative, except only in the case of the falling action.
adjective choice and use is categorizing modifiers as presented in the next table.
Table 5
attribution (physical emotive, referential and evaluative) across the different parts of the
plot. In terms of adjectival type, descriptive adjectives appear in all parts of the plot.
There were also frequent use of coordinate adjectives noted from exposition and rising
action. Although rare, there are distributive, sequence and indefinite adjectives in
exposition and rising action. Aside from their appearance in different parts of the text,
the manner by which the author uses this lexical category can be regarded as
normative.
1.1.2.3. Verbs
Verbs carry important meanings in the text. Sentences are incomplete without verbs.
Thus, it analyzing verbs also contributes in interpreting the meaning of the text.
Figure 4
Figure 4 is a twin chart which demonstrates the distribution of verb use in different parts
of the plot. The one on the left shows that more than half of the verbs in the text are
action verbs while the one on the write show the almost evenly distributed stative and
Like adjectives, adverbs modify certain words in the statement. This function of adverb
Table 6
Table 6 details the frequency of adverb use in the major plot parts. The highest number
of adverb (40) is listed under the rising action. This part of the plot is the seat for nearly
half the quantity of adverbs that appeared in the entire text. Meanwhile, exposition and
climax also had certain numbers of adverbs but falling action and resolution had only
one each. To understand the roles that these adverbs have in the text, the information in
Table 7
be observed that there is a decrement in the number of adverb types used from
applying six (6) in exposition and rising action, four (4) in climax and one (1) each for the
falling action and resolution. This may be brought by the decreasing number of words
and sentences in this parts or by the author’s writing style. Some examples of the
aesthetic and sophisticate use of adverb in the text are found in the subsequent
sentences taken from different plot parts. The adverbs of manner, negation, degree,
frequency, time, place, and confirmation cited below are those that appear to be
Figure 5
It can be observed that the rising action recorded the most number of sentences, verb
phrase, clauses, and tone units. In all the plot parts, there is more number of verb
phrases than sentences and clauses. The quantity of tone units in all plot parts show
resemblance with that of the sentences. There is always a drastic decrease in the
quantity of all grammatical categories in when it comes to falling action and resolution.
The mean length of sentence are almost similar in the cases of exposition, rising action
and falling action while those of the climax and the resolution are both lower than the
rest.
This variation in the syntax of the text can be elaborated through an analysis of two of
Figure 6
Sentence types in the major plot parts
Figure 6 shows the variation of sentence types used in the major plot parts of the text. It
can be deduced that the sentences are generally declarative. It can be noted that there
absence of exclamation in the climax is supposed to make the readers calm, the series
of simple declarative sentences gave the adverse effect to the readers – making the
Figure 7
plot parts. From the data, it can be deduced that the majority or more than half of the
text is written in the simple sentence. Although, some plot parts also utilize compound
and very few minor (or no-verb) sentences. The exposition has a combination of all
sentence structures. Rising action has all the four major sentence structures. The climax
only uses simple, compound and complex while the falling action has only simple and
compound sentences. Lastly, the text ended with its resolution having only simple and
complex sentence.
Figure 8
Average number of words per sentence in the major plot parts of the text
Figure 8 shows the average number of words per sentence in the major plot parts.
From the illustration, it can be noted that the highest mean length of sentence (MLS) is
in the falling action while the lowest is in the climax. However, this does not indicated
the least number of words per sentences since the longest (74-word sentence) is found
in the rising action while the shortest (one-word sentence) is found in both the climax
All numbers indicating the MLS denote that the sentences in the text are within the
internal structure of sentences in a language and the way they function on sequences.
Clauses, phrases, words, nouns, verbs, etc. need to be distinguished and put through
Hence, adhering to this process, this portion attempts to determine the author’s deviant
style in writing each part of the plot in terms of the lexical and grammatical categories.
Lexical categories
The pervading atmosphere of action and the palpable details that evoke
sensations are just two of the domineering impressions from an initial reading of the
text. With 90% of the content words in the text being monosyllabic and disyllabic, it can
be deduced that most of the words used in the story are simple. Thus, the author’s style
is presenting intricacies of events through the use of short yet impactful terms. This style
has been effective in bringing the readers in the fictional world (exposition), creating a
thrilling intensity and palpability of the physical and emotional setup (rising action),
generating a relevant feel of the story’s peak (climax), guiding the assessment of
character’s actions (falling action), and leaving an open finale to evaluate what actually
The author demonstrates a balanced use of content words and function words in all
parts of the plot. Majority of the nouns are concrete and common ones. However, there
are interesting group of nouns that fall under specific themes. The author is consistent in
including concrete nouns, which can be associated to animals, parts of the body, family
members and spatial quality of topography, and abstract nouns, which are pertinent to
emotions, concepts of time and other processes or conditions. This has been relevant to
the lexical analysis of Tarrayo (2014), where he pointed out that the majority of such
theme. Likewise, the dominant use of concrete nouns generally accentuates the idea of
The language used in the text is basically descriptive and figurative, which Liu (2010)
had characterized as “full of images, concrete verbal pictures appealing to the senses,
author in all the plot parts are attributive. This has resulted to what Talib (2017) called
whereas predicative adjectives qualify the noun or the subject. Concomitantly, these
placements result in specific functions of these adjectives (Faiz, Azher, Asghar &
Jabeen, 2018, p. 336). Similarly, the use of attributive adjectives is suggestive of their
Given that most of the verbs used in text are action verbs, what is important to note as
the author’s deviant style is his ability to use and sustain themed or associated verbs in
all major plot parts and his knack in palpably elaborating intricate negative actions in
syllabically simple words. Talib (2017) emphasized that in literary stylistics, the primary
interest is not on the various categories of the verbs but on how the verbs function in the
given work or abstract. The usefulness of a primary auxiliary verb for stylistic analysis
may depend on the aspectual function it serves in relation to the lexical verb: for
example, whether an action is still going on, no longer functioning etc. These verbs may
be of concern in relation to the accuracy of analysis of time in the literary work. The
author used a combination of the varied types of adverbs in all parts of the plot.
However, distinct in the text is the frequent use of the adverb of negation ‘not’. The use
of adverbial phrases and clauses is another deviant style of the author. There are plenty
of them in the exposition and rising action which have effectively served the purpose of
connecting possible ideas, scenes, feelings and dominant behavior in the story prior to
sentences in the climax. The author has a distinct skill in using adverbials, which are
are words that modify a verb, an adjective or another adverb. However, adverbials are
Grammatical Categories
There are three distinct features of the text’s grammatical categories. First, the most
number of sentences, clauses, verb phrases and tone units are found in the rising
action. Second, in all parts of the plot, the author favored the use of more verb phrases
than clauses. Third, there is a drastic decrease in the number of sentences in the falling
action and resolution. Generally, the sentences used in all parts of the plot are
declarative.
However, there are also other sentence types like exclamatory and what is notable is
that all of these exclamatives are found to be part of Character 1 dialogue. Similar with
the analysis of Tarrayo (2014), the majority of the simple sentences in all parts of the
plot run parallel with the simplicity of the vocabulary used in the story. There are
subordination but most of the complexities in the text occurs at phrasal level, and the
coordinated together. The writer’s style of combining all sentence types in the exposition
and rising action opens the reader to many possibilities that are about to occur. The
Anticipatory and trailing constituents are present in most sentences in the exposition
Conclusions
Based on the stylistic analysis of the major plot parts of the text, the following
1.1.1. In all parts of the plot, the vocabulary used are mostly short and
the subjects and objects in the text are largely perceivable by the
senses. There are also dominant themes for nouns, which are
1.1.2.4. Most adverbs are located in the rising action while the
and exclamatory.
reading material.
By using a huge number of monosyllabic and disyllabic words, the author has been
successful in presenting intricacies of the events through the use of simple yet
impactful terms. There is also a distinct knack in weaving descriptive and evaluative
language in the whole text. The author also has a balanced quantifiable use of content
words and function words in all the plot parts. Majority of the nouns used leaves an
impression of accessibility to or congruity with the story’s theme. However, there is also
marked deviation in the authors use and repetition of the character’s name in some
parts of the plot. Furthermore, the author was able to sophisticatedly use attributive
adjectives which suggest permanence in quality of the words being modified. The
presence of adjectival attitude is also evident in the text. Other than the author’s use of
extensive adjectives, another prominent feature of writing is the use of adjectives that
are apparently contradicting. Like how the author was able to theme up his nouns, the
same goes with verbs, which can largely be relevant to the main theme –
Although the presence of the adverb of negation ‘not’ is highly distinguished, what is
adverbials.
The author follows a pattern of placing anticipatory and trailing constituents in a large
of sentences, including the simple ones. There was also a notable deviation from the
maxim of manner and tense violation in the narrative – which are both contributory to
the complex appeal of the text to its readers. The author also favors subordination over
coordination.
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Conclusions
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