Introducing English Grammar: Third Edition
Introducing English Grammar: Third Edition
ENGLISH
GRAMMAR
THIRD EDITION
KEY TO EXERCISES
a. Cats occurs 1550 times, dogs 4347 times. (Cat occurs 3847 times, dog 7846.)
b. The most common phrase is bacon and eggs (62 occurrences).
c. It’s stupid cow.
d. An arm and a leg typically occurs after the verbs cost and pay. There can also be a
pronoun, such as cost him an arm and a leg. In such contexts, an arm and a leg means
“a lot of money”.
e. Pretty girl is slightly more common than beautiful girl.
2 Word classes of the italicized words and possible clues to arrive at the right alternative.
a. The lexical verbs in the text: begin, get, sit, have, do, peep, read, have, be, think
b. The nouns in the text: Alice, sister, bank, book, pictures, conversations, use
c. The prepositional phrases in the text: of sitting, by her sister, on the bank, of having
nothing to do, into the book her sister was reading, in it, without pictures or conver-
sation
4 The answers are based on the Corpus of Contemporary American English as of spring
2018.
a. There are slightly more occurrences of been as an auxiliary among the first 20 hits.
b. In and out.
c. The most common phrases are at the end of, at the university of, at the top of, at the
time of, at the beginning of. End, university, top, time and beginning are all nouns.
d. At the end of the day/year/first/month/season. It is a prepositional phrase. Day is most
common.
e. Many examples of the end of the day have a meaning equivalent to når alt kommer
til alt, which is obviously not a literal meaning.
1 Choose the correct alternative in the following sentences. In case both alternatives
are acceptable, explain any difference in meaning.
2 Correct what is wrong (or awkward) in the following sentences and explain your cor-
rections.
3 Explain the difference in form and meaning between the members of each pair.
I can fully understand why Brits are leaving Australia and wish I could be one of them. My
family emigrated in 2005 with three young children. Although my husband’s job in the
Australian healthcare service allows him a much better quality of life than the NHS, for
the rest of us life has been very hard. The children struggled to fit into the school system
here, the cost of living is more than it used to be and life away from the major cities is so
soulless. You would be amazed how much you can end up missing UK things like regional
accents, a sense of history and belonging. On a recent trip back, my eight-year-old rolled
about laughing in the lush greenness of a local lawn and announced that she loved English
grass. (bbc.co.uk)
TIME, PEOPLE, WAY, YEARS, YEAR, WORK, GOVERNMENT, DAY, MAN, WORLD,
LIFE, MR, NUMBER, PART, HOUSE, CHILDREN, SYSTEM, PLACE, CASE, END
b. Use the “Top 20” list from question (5a) and give the following information on each
noun: is it proper or common? Countable or uncountable? Singular or plural? Collec-
tive?
c. Above the list of frequent nouns (on the corpus website) click on “COCA” after
“COMPARE”. This will give you a similar list of the most frequent nouns in the Ameri-
can corpus. Which words occur among the top 20 in COCA that do not occur in the
BNC top 20 list? Do any of them reflect American culture?
Frequent references to the president of the US and states reflect the political system
of the country. Frequent references to words such as school and students indicate
that education is a very important value in American culture. In the same manner
family may reflect the importance of family values. Note, however, that some of the
differences may be due to other things as well, for example the kinds of texts that
have gone into the two corpora or spelling conventions: percent is more frequent
in the American corpus because it is most commonly spelt as two words (per cent)
in British English. Similarly, students may be more frequent than in British English
because it has a wider meaning in American English (American students = British
pupils and students).
1 Fill in the blanks with the indefinite article, the definite article, or Ø (zero article).
Discuss any difference in meaning in case you find that two solutions are equally
acceptable. Note that the choice of article should make sense in the context.
When Ø temperatures dropped to one degree Fahrenheit and my pipes froze this week, I
was reminded of how lucky we are, under Ø most circumstances, to be able to turn a valve
(In this case the definite article could be used. The meaning would then be less general
and more specific. It could for instance refer to the main water valve.) and watch copious
amounts of Ø clean water flow into our sinks, showers, toilets, and washing machines.
In the U.S., we use an average of 100 gallons each day for Ø washing, cooking, cleaning,
drinking, and lawn watering. This doesn’t account for the water that’s required to grow
our food, manufacture our computers, or refine the fuels we rely on to drive our cars
and keep our homes, and water, warm. In other parts of the world, nearly 900 million
people do not have Ø access to the daily minimum water requirement of 5–13 clean and
safe gallons, according to the United Nations. (From National Geographic)
2 Choose the correct alternative in the sentences below. If both alternatives are accept-
able, explain any difference in meaning.
3 Explain the difference in form and meaning between the members of each pair.
a. 1 We went to church.
2 We went to the church.
In sentence (a1) the zero article (no article) is used, whereas in sentence (a2) the
definite article is used as a determiner in the noun phrase that functions as adverbial.
In sentence (a1) the focus is on the church as an institution. They went to take part
in church activities. The definite article in (a2) is used to focus on the building. They
went to the church building.
There was a table set out under a tree in front of the house, and the March Hare and the
Hatter were having tea at it: a Dormouse was sitting between them, fast asleep, and the
other two were using it as a cushion, resting their elbows on it, and talking over its head.
‘Very uncomfortable for the Dormouse,’ thought Alice; ‘only, as it’s asleep, I suppose it
doesn’t mind.’
The table was a large one, but the three were all crowded together at one corner of
it: ‘No room! No room!’ they cried out when they saw Alice coming. ‘There’s plenty of
room!’ said Alice indignantly, and she sat down in a large arm-chair at one end of the table.
‘Have some wine,’ the March Hare said in an encouraging tone.
Alice looked all round the table, but there was nothing on it but tea. ‘I don’t see any
wine,’ she remarked.
‘There isn’t any,’ said the March Hare.
‘Then it wasn’t very civil of you to offer it,’ said Alice angrily.
‘It wasn’t very civil of you to sit down without being invited,’ said the March Hare.
a. Identify all the determiners in the text and group them according to their category
(see Table 4.1).
There was a (article) table set out under a (article) tree in front of the (article) house,
and the (article) March Hare and the (article) Hatter were having tea at it: a (article)
Dormouse was sitting between them, fast asleep, and the (article) other two* were using
it as a (article) cushion, resting their (possessive determiner) elbows on it, and talking
over its (possessive determiner) head. ‘Very uncomfortable for the (article) Dormouse,’
thought Alice; ‘only, as it’s asleep, I suppose it doesn’t mind.’
The table was a (article) large one, but the (article) three* were all crowded together
at one (quantifying determiner) corner of it: ‘No (quantifying determiner) room! No
(quantifying determiner) room!’ they cried out when they saw Alice coming. ‘There’s
b. Identify all the pronouns in the text and group them according to their category (see
Table 4.2).
There was a table set out under a tree in front of the house, and the March Hare and the
Hatter were having tea at it (personal): a Dormouse was sitting between them (personal),
fast asleep, and the other two (indefinite) were using it (personal) as a cushion, resting
their elbows on it (personal), and talking over its head. ‘Very uncomfortable for the Dor-
mouse,’ thought Alice; ‘only, as it (personal)’s asleep, I suppose it (personal) doesn’t mind.’
The table was a large one (indefinite), but the three (indefinite) were all (indefinite)
crowded together at one corner of it (personal): ‘No room! No room!’ they (personal)
cried out when they (personal) saw Alice coming. ‘There’s plenty of room!’ said Alice
indignantly, and she (personal) sat down in a large arm-chair at one end of the table.
‘Have some wine,’ the March Hare said in an encouraging tone.
Alice looked all round the table, but there was nothing (indefinite) on it (personal)
but tea. ‘I don’t see any wine,’ she (personal) remarked.
‘There isn’t any (indefinite),’ said the March Hare.
‘Then it (personal) wasn’t very civil of you (personal) to offer it (personal),’ said Alice
angrily.
‘It (personal) wasn’t very civil of you (personal) to sit down without being invited,’
said the March Hare.
a. In COCA “to the hospital” is far more frequent. In the BNC “to hospital” is more
frequent.
b. Double negation occurs in the COCA corpus, but it is very infrequent in academic
texts. It is more frequent in newspapers and magazines and most frequent in fiction
and in spoken language.
c. Most examples of “you got any” occur in interrogative sentences (Have you got any …).
Often have is omitted, so we get what looks like declarative sentences that function
as questions, for example You got any tips? Indirect questions also occur, e.g. So I
wondered if you got any viewpoints on that this morning.
d. Search for “you got some”. Is it more or less frequent than “you got any”? Does it
occur in interrogative or declarative sentences, or both? Positive or negative? If “you
got some” occurs in a question (in the top 15–20 hits), why do you think the speaker/
writer chose some instead of any?
You got some is slightly less frequent than you got any (292 vs 340 hits, June 2018).
It occurs mostly in positive declarative sentences, but interrogative sentences occur.
“Some” is then selected because a positive answer is anticipated or expected. You
got some is also found in that-clauses, for example I read that that you got some
culinary training.
1 Choose the correct alternative in the sentences below. If you find both alternatives
acceptable, explain any difference in meaning.
2 Explain the difference in form and meaning between the members of each pair.
b. 1 I prefer blue.
2 I prefer the blue one.
In sentence (b1), “blue” is used as a nominalized adjective and refers to the colour in
general, and it behaves as an uncountable noun. In sentence (b2) the adjective “blue”
is used to identify a concrete object and functions as a premodifier in the noun phrase
“the blue one”, premodifying the pronoun “one”. The meaning of (b1) is roughly “My
favourite colour is blue”, while (b2) means “I choose the blue thing over those that
have other colours”.
For Christmas shoppers watching their pennies closely, the offer of a half-price frozen
turkey sounds too good to miss. Unfortunately, Tesco’s heavily promoted deal is not all
that it seems. Rival supermarkets are selling their own frozen turkeys for around the same
price – without the supposed 50 per cent discount. A Tesco half-price, extra-large frozen
turkey is reduced to £25 from £50, while the equivalent bird sold by Asda is available at
the full price of £24.
In theory, stores are supposed to advertise a product at the higher price for at least
28 days before using it as a benchmark for any price cut promotions. Tesco insists that
it complied with this rule because they sold the turkeys at their full original price during
the summer months of August and September – when very few shoppers would want a
frozen turkey. The Tesco offer reinforces the view that supermarkets try to pull the wool
over customers’ eyes with bogus deals. Some 42 per cent of shoppers do not believe that
all offers are genuine, according to an Ipsos MORI survey.
a. The adjectives in the text that function as premodifiers of nouns have been marked
in blue.
b. Find an adjective in the text that is not followed by a noun, but describes the subject.
In the last line of the text the adjective “genuine” describes the subject “offers”. In
line 6 “available” functions as head of the adjective phrase (“available at the full price
of £24”) that describes the subject (“the equivalent bird sold by Asda”).
c. Analyse the structure of the adjective phrase too good to miss (line 2).
It is a split modifier with “good” as head, “too” as first part and “to miss” as second part.
d. Why is the form heavily preferable to heavy in the second sentence?
The adjective “heavy” would describe or premodify “deal”. In this case the purpose
is to modify the adjective “promoted”. The adverb “heavily” says something about
how the deal is promoted.
a. Search for the rich and go through the first 20 hits on the list. Decide in each case
whether rich is a nominalized adjective or a premodifier.
In a search (June 2018), the rich occurred as a nominalized adjective (functioning as
head of a noun phrase) in 17 of the first 20 cases, but this may vary. An example is
… while cutting taxes for the rich. The adjective is a premodifier of another noun in
the remaining 3 cases, e.g. The rich wood frame was scarred…
c. Search for the word likely and study the first fifteen occurrences of it. Does it function
as an adjective or an adverb? How can you tell in each case?
In the sample studied here, seven cases were adjectives in the constructions “be likely
to do something” or “it is likely that”, e.g. agencies are most likely to modify rules; it is
far more likely culpable behavior will be uncovered. Thus, as an adjective, likely func-
tions as a subject predicative in these sentences; it gives a description of the subject.
(In addition it can be a premodifier as a noun, but this function was not found in our
sample.) Likely is an adverb (and an adverbial) in the remaining nine cases, where it
is placed between an auxiliary and a main verb, as in it would likely be unacceptable,
between the main verb and a following obligatory clause element, as in there are likely
far stronger proxies, or before an adjective that it modifies, as in Posner’s theory would
only apply to the, likely rare, individual. As an adverb, likely either modifies an adjective
(or another adverb) or gives the speaker’s evaluation of the content of a sentence, in
which case it can often be paraphrased as “I think”.
d. Here are the three most frequent adverbs modifying the adjectives nice, smart, beau-
tiful, unkind, stupid and ugly in the COCA corpus (as of June 2018).
very/really/so nice
very/so/too smart
most/so/very beautiful
so/very/too unkind
so/how/too stupid
very/so/as ugly
e. Here are the three most frequent adjectives premodifying the nouns man, woman,
boy, girl, child in the COCA corpus.
young/old/unidentified man
unidentified/young/old woman
little/young/good boy
little/young/good girl
only/young/small child
The most obvious combinations are a+d, b+f, c+e, g+h, but others may be possible too.
2 Explain the difference in form and meaning between the members of each pair.
(i) The Mondana “school bus” picks up dozens of children every morning along the
banks of the River Napo. (ii) The Napo flows from Ecuador into the Amazon. (iii) It’s
one of the Amazon’s greatest tributaries, and in Mondana it’s also the local highway. (iv)
There are very few roads deep in the rainforest. (v) Without the school canoe, most of
these children would miss out on an education altogether because the journey to school
would be too difficult. (vi) But last year a road was built across the river from the school,
through the village. (vii) Lizbeth, age 17, lives next to the new road with her mother Rosa.
(viii) Now Lizbeth and her family can catch the bus to the local market town, which
has changed their lives.
a. Subjects are marked with green and verbals with red in sentences (i), (ii), (vii) and
(viii).
b. Only sentence (iii) is a compound sentence.
c. Dependent clauses in the text have been underlined.
a. Because seems to occur most often later in the sentence, but is not uncommon in
the beginning of sentences either.
b. Especially some of the sentences that start with because are incomplete sentences,
such as Because I like it. This is a dependent clause that occurs on its own, and is thus
an incomplete sentence.
c. Seventeen instances of the word sentence probably refer to its grammar/linguistics
sense (one or two are a bit unclear in their meaning). Three refer to prison sentences.
d. The great majority of occurrences of the phrase main clause are in texts about gram-
mar/linguistics. But there is at least one from a legal text, where clause means “part of
a legal document or law that officially states that something must be done” (definition
from Macmillan Dictionary).
1 Identify the syntactic function of the underlined element in each of the following
sentences.
2 Explain the difference in form and meaning between the members of each pair.
Detectives investigating a drive-by style shotgun attack in Leeds have arrested a man on
suspicion of attempted murder. Two men were injured when a shotgun was fired from
one car at another in Maud Avenue, Beeston. Police said it was fired twice from a black
BMW after it pulled alongside a Toyota Yaris at around 11pm on Wednesday. The two
victims suffered minor injuries, including a pellet wound to the hand, in the shooting. A
24-year-old man was arrested as part of a planned firearms operation at an address in
Beeston at 3.30am today. West Yorkshire Police’s Firearms Prevent Team are continuing
to carry out extensive enquiries into the shooting.
a. One example where considered is followed only by a direct object: …they considered
canceling the project… (canceling the project is dO)
b. One example where considered is followed by a direct object and an object predica-
tive: …because they considered him a lowly hairdresser (him = dO, a lowly hairdresser
= oP)
c. The verb send can occur with either an indirect object or a prepositional phrase with
to functioning as an adverbial. Sent a message to is much more common than sent *
a message in the corpus.
d. The adverb negatively could have been used instead of in a negative manner in most
cases, with no difference in meaning. However, there are some cases in which nega-
tively would seem unidiomatic, e.g. to behave in a negative manner; They listen for a
heart beat and shake their heads in a negative manner. As regards certainly and in a
certain manner, the adverb tends to be interpreted as a stance adverbial, so in order
to emphasize the circumstantial meaning of manner, the phrase in a certain manner
may be a better option.
e. The phrase during the * occurs with both adjectives and nouns in the place of the
asterisk. The five most frequent nouns in the pattern during the * are day, war, sum-
mer, course, campaign. Some of these are also frequent after the adjectives following
during the (first, past, last, early).
f. Furthermore occurs 14459 times in the corpus. It is most frequent in academic English
(judged by frequency per million words), and least frequent in spoken English and
fiction. The adverb typically functions as a linking adverbial.
1 Analyse the following sentences syntactically. The clause elements that contain more
than one word have been bracketed.
a. [Until he was four year old,] [James Henry Trotter] had [a happy life]. A- S-V-dO
b. He lived peacefully [with his mother and father]. S-V-A-A
c. There were [plenty of other children] there. aS-V-S-A
d. [Roald Dahl] was born [in 1916]. S-V-A
e. [His parents] were Norwegian. S-V-sP
f. [Roald Dahl’s many books] [are read] [by children all over the world]. S-V-A
g. [Quentin Blake] is [a well-known illustrator]. S-V-sP
h. He illustrated [a number of Roald Dahl’s books] [during the author’s lifetime]. S-V-
dO-A
2 Analyse the following sentences and explain the difference in form and meaning
between the members of each pair.
An unfinished self-portrait by the Dutch master Rembrandt has been discovered under
another painting using advanced scientific techniques. No detail is visible in the face, but
experts say it matches a reproductive print from 1633 that has an inscription saying it is
by Rembrandt. X-ray scanning was used to detect the pigments in hidden layers of paint.
A leading expert on Rembrandt said he was convinced of its authenticity based on simi-
larities in painting style. The unfinished self-portrait was discovered under another panel
said to be by the master – “Old Man with a Beard”.
a. Identify the phrase that functions as verbal in the first sentence (line 1–2).
has been discovered
b. Analyse the underlined part of the second sentence.
subject (No detail) – verbal (is) – subject predicative (visible) – adverbial (in the face).
c. What is the syntactic function of the underlined clause to detect … paint?
adverbial (circumstantial)
d. Analyse the underlined part of the last sentence.
subject (The unfinished self-portrait) – verbal (was discovered) – adverbial (under
another panel).
a. Look up the word told. Among the first 25–30 hits, find two sentences where told is
followed by an indirect object, and two where been told has a subject that refers to
the recipient of the message.
For instance:
Bandar told him (iO) his partner was still up on the Monument.
I’d told myself (iO) something that sounded good at the time.
…they were told which condition would be operative.
I mean he hasn’t been talked to by everyone and told what to say…
For instance told a story, told a lie, told a joke. Also phrases such as told a little…, told
a long…, told a good…, told a sad…, etc.
c. Search for keeping. Study the first 20 hits closely. What are the grammatical patterns
keeping occurs in? (Compare your findings to the examples in section 8.5.)
For instance:
S-V-dO (keeping those mittens)
S-V-dO-A (keeping global warming below 1.5 degrees Celsius)
S-V-sP (keeping trim)
S-V-do-oP (keeping his mouth shut)
d. Look at the two expressions subject to and object of. Which one is more common in
COCA? How would you translate the two expressions into Norwegian based on the
first 10 examples of each in the corpus?
1 Identify and correct any errors in the sentences below. Explain your corrections. (NB:
not all the sentences contain errors!)
There are many kinds of changes that you can make in your home to make it the kind
of home that you are looking for. Starting with your bedroom, we suggest you install
sliding wardrobe doors to get instant and easy access to your clothing. There is a choice
of everything from contemporary designer doors to the traditional-looking Japanese
looking doors. When planning to install closet entryways, it is a good idea to think about
what look you are going for. In addition, it is important to think about the function of the
wardrobe bypass entry. Considering these things makes it possible for you to find the
greatest solution there is. If it/there is a completely unique look that you are after, there
are custom-fitted wardrobes in a range of materials from different suppliers.
In the one case where both it and there can be used, there creates an existential sentence
(such a unique look exists, and “you” are looking for it), while it is part of a cleft sentence,
giving extra focus to unique look , and possibly contrasting it with e.g. an ordinary look.
(The original text had it.)
As a long-time supporter of cricket it has been wonderful to see some great Test matches
played in good spirit by up and coming young players and legends alike. However, I hope
the snarling and bullying aggressiveness shown by James Pattinson is not a sign that the
Australian team is going to return to the bad old days when it might have been the best
team in the world but not very popular. At the conclusion of the game, it looked likely that
the team was not going to shake hands with the two Indian batsmen remaining. There is
no need for such displays. In the old days, it was the “best and fairest” that received the
award rather than the “Man of the Match”. It might be a good idea to restore this tradition.
Play the game hard, fast and aggressive but above all respect the opposition, respect the
rules and respect the game itself. That’s what cricket and, indeed, life is all about. (From
the Sydney Morning Herald, adapted.)
a. Study all uses of it in the text and classify them according to their type.
As a long-time supporter of cricket it (anticipatory it) has been wonderful to see
some great Test matches played in good spirit by up and coming young players and
legends alike. However, I hope the snarling and bullying aggressiveness shown by
James Pattinson is not a sign that the Australian team is going to return to the bad
old days when it (referential it) might have been the best team in the world but not
very popular. At the conclusion of the game, it (anticipatory it) looked likely that the
team was not going to shake hands with the two Indian batsmen remaining. There is
no need for such displays. In the old days, it (cleft-it) was the “best and fairest” that
received the award rather than the “Man of the Match”. It (anticipatory it) might be a
good idea to restore this tradition. Play the game hard, fast and aggressive but above
all respect the opposition, respect the rules and respect the game itself. That’s what
cricket and, indeed, life is all about.
c. In the last sentence of the text, that would correspond to Norwegian det. Could it
have been used instead of that? If so, would there be any difference in meaning or
stylistic effect?
It could have been used with a very similar meaning. However, the referential it would
refer back to the previous text in a neutral way, without special emphasis on it . The use
of the demonstrative pronoun that underscores the statement more because it will
naturally be pronounced with extra stress, thus making it a good way to end the text.
I (i) am glad that Taronga Zoo’s and Sydney Wildlife animals (ii) are not affected by the
firework displays on New Year’s Eve. It’s a pity our pets (iii) do not have the opportunity
to get prepared for all the firework displays which (iv) happen all year round with no
warnings. We (v) know to keep our pets in on New Year’s and Queen’s Birthday; as a
wildlife carer with young animals in care, I (vi) make sure they (vii) are kept inside and in
a darkened area so as not to get stressed, but I can’t do much about fireworks that (viii)
go off at private parties all year round. I would like to know who (ix) gives out permits
for these private firework displays and why neighbours (x) are not given any warnings so
as to prepare their pets.
2 Identify and correct any concord errors in the text below. Explain your corrections.
(NB: not all the sentences contain errors!)
Everyone know knows that literary festivals are big business. The festival at Hay turns
over £9m–£10m; Edinburgh approach approaches £2m; and, my favourite, Bath, £1.3m.
But – and here’s the catch – this quasi-literary bonanza rely relies on the goodwill of the
authors who, in exchange for vital publicity, appears appear for nothing, as in “free” or
“gratis”. Well, not quite. At Hay, the author get gets half a case of Spanish fizz and a red
rose. It’s hardly a living wage. Most people acknowledge that the creative artist must be
Explanation of corrections :
Everyone is an indefinite pronoun that counts as third person singular, so the verb
should have the s-form.
Edinburgh is singular and third person.
This quasi-literary bonanza is singular and third person.
The subject of appear is who , a relative pronoun with a plural noun phrase, the authors,
as antecedent.
The author is singular and third person.
The subject of the clause is that living, which is third person and singular.
Money is an uncountable noun that behaves as third person singular.
3 Explain the difference in form and meaning between the members of each pair.
a. That follows: the s-form is used because the relative pronoun that has a singular
antecedent. What’s: what is a pronoun that behaves as third person singular. Is: the
a. Government is is more common (1501 hits) than government are (444 hits). The two
different verb forms can both be used because government is a collective noun. The
use of a singular verb phrase gives the noun a unit reading, while the use of the plural
gives it a distributive reading.
b. There are 9 instances of everybody have in the corpus. In most cases have is the
infinitive form, for example in does everybody have… In one case have is an imperative:
everybody (please) have a yawn. This is probably also the case in So everybody have
document and hit shift F ten.
c. The search for most of the * is and most of the * are shows that the noun following
most of the determines the form of the verb. Most of the + a singular noun combines
with a singular verb phrase (e.g. is), and most of the + a plural noun combines with
a plural verb phrase (e.g. are). An apparent exception seems to be most of the time
are. But in each of these cases most of the time is an adverbial and not the subject of
are. Another apparent exception is most of the staff are, but staff is a collective noun
that tends to get distributive reading.
d. The nouns occurring in the phrase a million * is are mostly units and measurements
(pounds, tonnes, …). The nouns occurring in the phrase a million * are have various
references (e.g. people, copies, children). The “units and measurement” nouns thus
indicate notional concord along the lines of a sum of money, a distance…, while a mil-
lion in front of other types of plural nouns does not indicate any kind of unit reading.
1 Choose between the progressive and the non-progressive verb form in each of these
sentences. In case both alternatives seem acceptable, explain any difference in meaning
between them.
a. That evening Mr. Peterson came / was coming home to his bachelor house in sombre
spirits. (The progressive was coming would imply that he was on his way home, which
is not a likely interpretation here.)
b. He sat / was sitting down to dinner without relish. (The simple past form sat implies
completed action, that is, he took a seat.)
c. Six o’clock struck / was striking on the bells of the church, and still he dug / was digging
at the problem. (In the first case both the simple past and the past progressive are
possible. Struck implies that the action is seen as completed, while was striking implies
that the church bells had not finished ringing yet at the time we are looking at. In the
second case the progressive is natural as the process of digging at the problem is still
ongoing.)
d. “I see you go / are going in,” said the lawyer. (The progressive must be used because
the action is ongoing at the moment of speaking.)
e. “How did you know / were you knowing me?” he asked. (Only the non-progressive
form can be used with a stative verb like know.)
f. The problem he debated / was debating as he walked / was walking was one of a class
that is rarely solved. (Both verb forms are possible in both cases, but the progressive
2 Describe the structure of the italicized verb phrase in each of the sentences below in
terms of auxiliaries, tense, aspect and voice.
a. For my generation, the word “austerity” is associated (simple present + passive voice
+ lexical verb; passive auxiliary be in the present tense + past participle) with the
rationing regulations that were introduced (simple past + passive voice + lexical verb;
passive auxiliary be in the past tense + past participle) during World War II.
b. Sweet rationing did not end (simple past; grammatical auxiliary do + negative + lexical
verb) until 1953.
c. My mother used to count out (marginal modal in past tense + infinitive marker + lexical
verb) our scanty sweet allocation once a week.
d. In 1942 the Making of Civilian Clothing (restriction order) was passed (simple past +
passive voice + lexical verb; passive auxiliary be in the past tense + past participle).
e. Dresses could have (modal + lexical verb) no more than two pockets and five buttons.
f. The recent financial crisis has brought on (present perfect; present tense + past
participle form of lexical verb) a new sense of austerity.
g. We are all feeling (present progressive; present tense + progressive aspect + lexical
verb) a little bit less well off.
h. Things have been going (present perfect progressive; present tense + perfect aspect
+ progressive aspect + lexical verb) in the wrong direction.
i. Let’s hope that the situation will have improved (modal perfect; modal auxiliary +
perfect aspect + lexical verb in past participle form) by next year.
3 Explain the difference in form and meaning between the members of each pair.
In a village near Lyon in south-east France, a couple have become local celebrities by
virtue of their adopted “child”. Digit, as she is known, has been living in the same room as
Pierre and Elaine Thivillon for nearly 13 years. Their relationship began in 1999, when the
young primate came into the care of the couple, who manage the zoo at Saint Martin la
Plaine where she was born. Within three days of her birth, it was clear that Digit’s mother
Pamela was refusing to feed her. The Thivillons took her into their care, bottle-feeding
her during the day and returning her to her enclosure at night.
By 18 months old, the baby gorilla had begun to show a deep attachment to her foster
parents. After an illness left her requiring 24-hour care, Pierre and Elaine took her into their
bedroom at night, where she has slept ever since. For the first 10 years, she snuggled up
between the couple, but now at 130 kg she has to have a bed of her own. (From bbc.co.uk)
a. Have become is in the present perfect form. The past tense form became would be
possible if the sentence was taken out of its context. But since the following sentence
has the present tense, the present perfect is a much better choice. The notion of
present relevance associated with the present perfect gives the first two sentences
of the text a sense of news value.
b. Has been living consists of a grammatical auxiliary in the present tense, which marks
the perfect aspect together with the following past participle. Been is the past parti-
ciple form of the progressive auxiliary be, which is followed by an -ing participle. The
verb phrase can be characterized as present perfect progressive. The meaning of this
verb form is that the action started in the past, but continues into the present. That
is, Digit still lives with Pierre and Elaine.
c. The text switches to the past tense to recount events that are further back in time.
d. Since refuse denotes an action that cannot stretch out in time, the past progressive
aspect (was refusing) implies that the event was repeated over a period of time. The
simple past (refused) would indicate that it was a one-time event.
e. The perfect aspect (present or past) would not have been appropriate in this context
because snuggled refers to an activity that took place over a specific period of time
in the past.
f. There is a comparison between the past and the present. The shift to the present
time reference is marked by the time adverb now, which makes the use of the present
tense natural.
a. The first ten hits that come up for was being in the COCA corpus will vary (because the
corpus keeps being added to), so you may not get the same hits as we did. However,
many of our examples of was being are part of a passive construction (for instance
was being done), indicating duration over time in the past. Sentences where being
is the main verb (for instance he was being grumpy) indicate that the subject was
behaving in a certain way (in this case being grumpy on purpose) over a limited period
of time. That is, in contrast to he was grumpy, the progressive form of be refers to a
situation which is not permanent.
b. One corpus example of the framing effect of the progressive is the following:
As they were leaving, Teo spoke to Furad. …The leaving was in progress, and the
speaking occurred in the middle of it.
c. We found (at least) two examples of had left which was not a past perfect verb phrase,
namely It was the only thing of monetary value he had left from his past and …he’d
clung to them as all he had left of his brother. In both cases left is part of the phrase
“to have something left”, meaning “to still have something that has not disappeared
or been used (yet)”. Two examples that illustrate how the past perfect refers to a time
prior to another point of time in the past are the following: (i) Mom motioned to the
young Amish woman who had left their table after filling the glasses with fresh iced
tea. (ii) …he turned and looked once more at the bridge and the figure they had left
there…
d. In our hits, most examples of she works occur in sentences that contain an adver-
bial referring to “her workplace”, for example, She works in a restaurant, or to her
employer, as in And she works for the company now. Some sentences describe the
way in which she works as a rule (the habitual simple present), for example, She works
hard is a manner adverbial. Some of the examples of the present progressive, such as
she is working on a new book…, refer to ongoing activity (rather than regular activity).
Another example that suggests activity that is not habitual or permanent is Seven
months before the Summer Olympics, she is working hard to find her stride. This is
due to the time adverbial, which limits the period in which she is working hard.
1 Note that there may be acceptable alternatives to the following suggested translations.
2 The expressions that have been marked in red and bold are the ones that occurred in
the original text.
3 Explain the difference in form and meaning between the members of each pair.
You can’t live off a view – but nothing feeds the soul like the wilderness
You might (epistemic) think that after 30 years in one of Britain’s most isolated homes,
Mike and Joyce Simpson, who have just announced their intention to sell up and move
nearer civilisation, are about to put their trials behind them. Their house, overlooking the
Isle of Skye, is nine miles from the nearest village. There is no road; to get to the village
they have to (root, obligation) embark on either a three-hour trek or a journey by quad
bike and 4x4. A visit to the post office requires an hour-long boat trip.
Mr Simpson, 62, talked about weeks at the mercy of the weather, and the recurring
nightmare of gales. But although the comforts of the 21st century must (epistemic) come
a. The expression are about to suggests immediate future. If it were replaced by are
going to, this immediacy would disappear, and the focus would be on their intention
of moving.
b. The meanings of the italicized modal auxiliaries have been added in brackets in the
text.
c. The implication of be going to is that the “easy but tame life” seems a likely outcome
of the present evidence.
a. As per June 2018, the numbers are as follows (they may increase as the corpus is
being expanded):
will 293793
would 232441
may 89283
should 73212
might 49396
shall 1470
b. The first ten hits for should, in the sample studied, were the following (there may be
other acceptable translations as well)
a. Very soon the Rabbit noticed Alice. J Very soon Alice was noticed by the Rabbit.
b. Alice was just going to leave the room. J The room was just going to be left by Alice.
The passive is awkward here, because the room does not seem to be a suitable subject;
it is not affected by the action.
c. She hastily put the bottle down. J The bottle was hastily put down (by her). The
agent phrase seems superfluous when the agent is realized by a pronoun (i.e. it is
given information).
d. The Rabbit ordered Alice about. J Alice was ordered about by the Rabbit.
e. After a few minutes she heard a voice outside. J After a few minutes a voice was heard
from the outside (by her). Again the agent seems superfluous. In addition the passive
would be more idiomatic with an added modal (could be heard), so as to imply that
there was a voice that anyone could hear.
f. They heard the sound of broken glass. J The sound of broken glass was / could be
heard (by them). The agent can be omitted, and a modal should be added to the verb
phrase (see above).
g. They could not hear anything else. J Nothing else could be heard (by them). The
agent can be omitted.
a. The Web site was created by the people behind Kodak Gallery. J The people behind
Kodak Gallery created the Web site.
b. Tuesday’s power failure was caused by heavy rain, lightning and strong winds. J Heavy
rain, lightning and strong winds caused Tuesday’s power failure.
c. Each offer was accompanied by whooping laughter. J Whooping laughter accom-
panied each offer. (The active sentence sounds a bit awkward because it seems to
violate the information principle.)
d. She was surrounded by her friends and family. J Her friends and family surrounded her.
e. Teague was found hiding under a porch of a house. J Somebody found Teague hiding
under a porch of a house. Since the passive is short, a subject needs to be added in
the active version.
f. The victim was taken to the hospital. J Somebody / the ambulance drivers took the
victim to the hospital. Since the passive is short, a subject needs to be added in the
active version. Note that in British English the definite article the would be omitted.
g. His red hair could be seen from quite a distance. J We/people could see his red hair
from quite a distance. Since the passive is short, a subject needs to be added in the
active version.
3 Explain the difference in form and meaning between the members of each pair.
An email asking people to reconsider their cancellation of home delivery from The New
York Times accidentally was sent to some eight million people on Wednesday, but was
intended to reach only a few hundred.
Robert Christie, a Times spokesman, initially tweeted that the emails appeared to be
spam. But minutes later, that was recanted in a tweet from Amy Chozick, a corporate media
reporter for the paper. Her tweet said the emails were, in fact, sent by the newspaper,
but they were supposed to only reach about 300 people. Instead, they were errantly
delivered to more than eight million.
The paper issued a statement: “An email was sent earlier today from The New York
Times in error,” it said. “This email should have been sent to a very small number of
a. The short passives that occur in the first paragraph do not have an identified agent, so
a long passive (or an active sentence) would have been hard to produce. The second
sentence in the second paragraph could have had the active voice (But minutes later,
Amy Chozick, a corporate media reporter for the paper recanted that in a tweet) or
a long passive (But minutes later, that was recanted by Amy Chozick, a corporate
media reporter for the paper, in a tweet). The active version gets a very long subject
that violates the principle of end weight, while the long passive seems a bit awkward
if the phrase “in a tweet” is to be retained in the sentence. However, an agent is easily
found, in the postmodifier to tweet. For the passive they were delivered an agent is
hard to find, as emails are hardly delivered by people. In the rest of the short passive,
the speaker (= the New York Times) has probably avoided mentioning the agent, which
is the paper itself, because of the embarrassment associated with the unintentional
sending of emails.
b. The two long passives in the text are marked in red and bold. Their active counter-
parts might be, respectively, “In fact, the newspaper sent the emails” and “the email,
which the SC Magazine received”. The passive versions are better suited to their
context because the information in the agent phrases is new in both cases, while
email is given information. In addition the text is structured in such a way that email
occurs in subject position in many of the sentences.
a. In the case of was made there are only two long passives among the first 15. Was said
and was sold occur only with the short passive. Was found has one example of the
long passive among the first 15. This suggests that the short passive is vastly more
frequent than the long passive. It also suggests that the passive voice is often chosen
when the speaker cannot or does not want to mention the agent of the action.
b. The top ten verbs to occur in the passive are: used, made, seen, taken, found, done,
given, born, considered, held. Note that some of the lexical verbs occur several times
on the list because they occur with different forms of the auxiliary be.
c. The passive is most frequent in the text type called “Academic” and least frequent in
the spoken part of the corpus.
1
a. Chocolate did she really love. J Chocolate she really loved (She really loved chocolate.)
There is no inversion after a fronted direct object in English.
b. They went never further north than the Scottish border. J They never went further
north than the Scottish border . The verb comes after the adverb never .
c. Never once did they consider giving up. J Correct (inversion after negative sentence
opener).
d. Why on earth you have bought that very expensive outfit? J Why on earth have you
bought that very expensive outfit? An interrogative sentence has the finite auxiliary
before the subject.
e. After several hours of walking came they to a pub in a small village. J After several
hours of walking they came to a pub in a small village. No inversion after an optional
adverbial in initial position.
f. The authorities have because of a shortage of nurses been unable to implement the
health reform. J Because of a shortage of nurses the authorities have been unable
to implement the health reform. The adverbial is too long and heavy to be placed
in medial position and must be moved either to the beginning or to the end of the
sentence.
g. “Keep calm and carry on,” said the policeman. J Correct (inversion is normal in
reporting clauses with a simple verb phrase and a full noun phrase as subject).
h. “So you’re back again,” said she. J “So you’re back again,” she said. No inversion in
reporting clauses where the subject is realized by a pronoun.
a. A 30-year-old man from Lanarkshire who had participated in the race three years in a
row was the winner. J The winner was a 30-year-old man from Lanarkshire who had
participated in the race three years in a row.
b. Why they could not solve the riddle even after hours of trying was difficult to under-
stand. J It was difficult to understand why they could not solve the riddle even after
hours of trying.
c. To be out on one’s own during dark and stormy nights can be scary. J It can be scary
to be out on one’s own during dark and stormy nights.
d. The leading contemporary philosopher, Professor Jerry Fodor, wrote the article. J
The article was written by the leading contemporary philosopher, Professor Jerry
Fodor.
e. The question of what cause there is for celebration was asked. J The question was
asked of what cause there is for celebration. (Somebody asked the question of what
cause there is for celebration.)
f. We sent a letter explaining the details of the investigation to him. J We sent him a
letter explaining the details of the investigation.
3 Explain the difference in form and meaning between the members of each pair.
The current issue of the magazine Psychologies has attracted a lot of attention from
tweeters, readers and, funnily enough, newsagents. The reason? It features an Indian cover
star, British-born actress Archie Panjabi.
It seems odd that such a cover choice should elicit much attention. Magazines, not
just in the UK but globally, tend to be incredibly conservative (i.e. white) about their
choice of covers, yet recently there have been signs of change. In the past few months,
Kelly Rowland, Rihanna and Thandie Newton have appeared on the covers of Marie
Claire, Cosmo and InStyle respectively, while Red magazine’s January cover featured
chef Lorraine Pascale.
Despite the current vogue for magazines using more racially diverse stars, Asian faces
on the newsstand are still a rarity. “We’ve seen in the past how publishers were reluctant
a. The first sentence of the text is declarative; it starts with the subject, which is followed
by the verbal (has attracted).
b. That such a cover choice should elicit much attention seems odd. The original sentence
agrees better with the principle of end weight, since the notional subject is so much
longer than the verbal. The other sentence with the anticipatory it is It’s encouraging
to see more black and Asian women on mainstream magazines.
c. The current trend for “racially diverse stars” to feature on the cover of magazines has
already been described, so it is given information. The fact that Asian faces are still
a rarity on the newsstand seems to contradict what has just been said, so it is new
information (which is also elaborated on in the next sentences).
d. Initial position: … yet recently there have been signs of change.
Medial position: The pleasure of magazines has always been about a certain deluded
aspiration…
End position: However, we have a long way to go before this becomes the norm.
e. The adverbial in the past occurs in medial position (between the main verb and the
direct object). If it had been moved to end position, it would lose contact with the
main verb seen and instead seem to modify affect sales. It could have been placed in
initial position; however, the speaker probably wanted to start the sentence with the
subject rather than focusing on the past from the outset.
f. The sentence is a wh-interrogative. Its subject contains a relative clause.
c A v |-----------------------------S----------------------------------| V A
But why does the ethnicity of the faces that greet us on the newsstand matter anyway?
S V dO |--------A----------|
that greet us on the newsstand
a. The sentences starting with not until have subject-auxiliary inversion, as in Not until
1918 was universal manhood suffrage introduced.
b. Most examples of then came represent subject-verbal inversion. We give two examples
of then came which do not represent inversion; there are more examples of both
types in the corpus: (i) The young chap then came down stairs; here then is in medial
position after the subject. (ii) we went to see my cousins at West Suffolk and and,
and then came home again; the subject has been omitted in a coordinated clause.
c. Of course occurs in all three adverbial positions, but seems most common in initial
position.
d. Three among the first 20 occurrences of maybe in our sample are misspellings of
may be. Some of the positions are difficult to classify, particularly when maybe does
not occur in a complete clause structure. Of those that can safely be classified, we
found 7 in initial position and 5 in medial position. Perhaps occurs initially in 11 cases,
3 times in medial position and twice in end position, in addition to a few that are hard
to classify as clause elements.
In our sample, it was more difficult to classify maybe because almost half of them
occurred in unplanned speech with a less clear sentence structure than we usually find
in writing. The first 20 examples of perhaps, on the other hand, all occurred in writing.
Note, however, that if the search is restricted to the written genres of newspapers
and magazines, initial position is clearly preferred for both adverbs, but perhaps is
medial more often than maybe is.
1 Note that other alternatives than those shown here may be possible:
2 A real-life Robinson Crusoe (a) who has spent 20 years on a desert island says he’s glad he
doesn’t have to worry about terrorist attacks. Former millionaire David Glasheen moved
to the idyllic Restoration Island, (b) which is located off North East Australia, after losing
his fortune in 1997. The ex-gold mining tycoon and property magnate, (c) who at his most
successful was worth about $27 million, now lives in a wooden beach shack with his loyal
dog Polly (d) who/which keeps him company. Self-sufficient David added there is nowhere
(e) that/Ø he’d rather be than on his “heaven on earth” natural paradise. “When I came
here I was sick of money – (f) which is what makes people sick – and my marriage had
broken apart.”
When David first arrived he swapped his former luxury home for his a wooden beach
shack (g) which/that dates back to pre-WWII. He has a limited supply of electricity, (h)
which relies on solar panels and a backup generator – and limited running water, (i)
which was only installed a few years ago. There is an internet connection (j) which/that
Reasons for choices: in each case where who is chosen, the antecedent is personal, except
in (d), where it is a dog, thus allowing the choice between who and which. Some of the
relative clauses with who and which are non-restrictive, as marked with commas or dashes,
so that and Zero are not alternatives. In the cases where both which and that are possible,
we have restrictive relative clauses with non-personal antecedents.
a. The great oak door was opened before we had a chance to knock. J finite adverbial
clause functioning as a circumstantial adverbial (time).
b. The door was opened by a tall elegant man dressed in a tail coat and black tie. J
non-finite -ed participle clause functioning as postmodifier of man.
c. He informed us that he was Adams, the butler. J finite nominal that-clause functioning
as direct object.
d. He then escorted us to the morning room, where we were greeted by a large log fire.
J finite relative clause functioning as postmodifier of morning room.
e. Above the fireplace was a picture of a man who I presumed was Hamilton’s grandfather.
J finite restrictive relative clause functioning as postmodifier of man.
f. The one sculpture on display was of a Greek figure throwing a discus. J non-finite
-ing participle clause functioning as postmodifier of figure.
g. Looking around, I reflected that only the telephone belonged to the present century.
J (i) non-finite -ing participle functioning as circumstantial adverbial (time); (ii) finite
nominal that-clause functioning as direct object.
h. Hamilton entered the room as a gale might hit an unhappy seaside town. J finite
adverbial clause functioning as circumstantial adverbial (manner).
i. We took our places around an oak table that could comfortably have seated twenty.
J finite restrictive relative clause functioning as postmodifier of table.
j. Hamilton waited for the butler to go round the table and fill the glasses. J non-finite
infinitive clause functioning as direct object of the prepositional verb wait for.
4 Explain the difference in form and meaning between the members of each pair.
It’s nice to have a friendly work environment. But in some cases, “work friends” shouldn’t
be Facebook friends. Why not? A status update published on a Tuesday night can easily
turn into office gossip on Wednesday morning. Even worse: Co-workers and managers
could take you less seriously, you could be skipped over for promotions, and you might
find yourself first in line when layoffs occur, all based on your activity on Facebook.
In a new report conducted by my company, Millennial Branding, and Identified.com,
we gathered information from 4 million Gen-Y Facebook profiles to see how their per-
sonal and professional online identities overlap. We discovered that, to some degree,
most users limit what details of their professional lives get onto Facebook. Nearly two-
thirds (64%) of Gen-Y Facebook users don’t list their employer in their profiles, some
likely out of worries that they could be easily searchable by co-workers – a situation
they’d prefer to avoid.
There’s even reason to be careful about friending people you don’t work with right
now. The data shows that young people are job hoppers. They spend just over two years
at their first corporate job before moving on. The Bureau of Labor Statistics reports that
the average American will have about nine jobs between the ages of 18 and 32. All of this
job hopping increases the likelihood that a Facebook friend will someday be a colleague
at work – perhaps even an in-office rival, or the person who decides whether you get a
promotion. (Time Magazine, excerpts)
a. Most of the examples of whom follow a preposition; the two that do not follow a
preposition function as direct object in the relative clause. This is in line with the rules
given in 15.3.1B. Whom is most frequent in the academic part of the corpus and least
in the spoken.
b. Because is more than twice as frequent as since in COCA. Because could have been
used in the following example: But the opening of the Erie Canal changed that, since
goods from Europe no longer needed to go through Pittsburgh, but not when since
has temporal meaning, as in It probably hadn’t been more than seven or eight years
since this man had been in high school himself. Furthermore, since does not seem
to be a good alternative to because as the answer to a why-question, as in The next
year, an election year, it was fifty-six percent. Why? Because Republicans in Congress
changed their behavior. (Besides, since cannot replace because in the complex prep-
osition because of, but because of does not introduce clauses.)
c. Start *ing is much more common in this corpus. The five most common verbs
following start to are finish, get, see, feel, think (and since finish probably functions
as a noun in most of the examples of start to finish, we add the sixth: look). The
five most common -ing verbs following start are talking, thinking, looking, getting,
making.
d. There are many hits for the word that following a preposition. In most of the cases that
is a demonstrative determiner or pronoun (and thus does not introduce a that-clause).
Though many people dream of becoming self-employed, there are a number of advantages
to working for an employer. In many ways, it is simpler and much less stressful to have
a job working for an employer than it is to be self-employed. However, there are also
disadvantages to working for an employer. Before making the decision to be an employee
or self-employed, a person should thus carefully consider the differences.
With regard to taxes, there are two clear advantages of being employed. First, the
employer takes care of a making a tax withholding for an employee through payroll
deductions while self-employed person must make quarterly tax payments. Secondly,
an employer pays a percentage of the employee’s Social Security tax, while a self-em-
ployed person pays all of it himself. For example, in 2011 the Social Security tax rate was
10.4 percent. The employer paid 6.2 percent and the employee paid 4.2 percent of the
employee’s income.
1. A volcano beneath the Red Sea has given Earth a New Year’s gift: a new island about
40 miles (60 kilometers) off the coast of Yemen.
2. The currently unnamed landmass first appeared in NASA satellite photos taken on
December 23.
3. By January 7, it had grown to a size of 1,730 by 2,300 feet (530 by 710 meters).
4. By January 15, the volcano had stopped erupting, NASA’s Earth Observatory reported.
In the second sentence the currently unnamed landmass refers back to the new island
from sentence 1. Sentences (3) and (4) start with dates that follow on from December 23
in sentence (2). Sentence (5) starts with the new island – it could thus have been suitable
as a second sentence as well. But it is better placed as number (5) because the new island
is formed only after the volcano has stopped erupting, which we know from sentence (4).
Sentence (6) continues the topic of Iceland but sets up a contrast (but) to return to the
new island in the Red Sea. Sentences (7) and (8) represent “what the experts say” (= the
end of sentence 6); (8) fits better as the last sentence because the speaker is presented
more fully in (7) and is thus given information in (8) where he is referred to only by his
last name.
3 The members of the following sentence pairs differ in terms of vocabulary. Describe
the difference in terms of synonymy, hyponymy or lexical opposite.
a. Flowers is a superordinate term and roses is a hyponym. Sentence (a2) thus gives
more specific information about the flowers.
b. Very ill and quite healthy are lexical opposites (antonyms), thus the sentences con-
tradict each other.
c. Police and cops are synonyms, but they differ in style. The second sentence is thus
more informal than the first (which is neutral in style).
d. Withhold and give out are lexical opposites (antonyms). Thus the sentences contradict
each other.
e. Criticism and condemnation both convey negative judgements, but to different
degrees, so they are only near-synonyms. Condemnation is much stronger than crit-
icism.
Will first saw Angie – or, as it turned out, he didn’t see her – in Championship Vinyl, a little
record shop off the Holloway Road. He was browsing, filling up the time, vaguely trying to
hunt down an old R & B anthology he used to own when he was younger, one of those
he had loved and lost; he heard her tell the surly and depressive assistant that she was
looking for a Pinky and Perky record for her niece. He was trawling through the racks
while she was being served, so he never caught a glimpse of her face, but he saw a lot
of honey-blond hair, and he heard the kind of vaguely husky voice that he and everyone
else thought of as sexy, so he listened while she explained that her niece didn’t even
know who Pinky and Perky were. (From About a Boy by Nick Hornby)
a. The personal pronouns in the text have been marked with red and bold. All the
instances of he refer back to Will and all those of she/her refer to Angie. Two instances
of her have not been marked because they are possessive determiners rather than
personal pronouns. Similarly, it in the first line has not been marked, as it is an example
of a dummy it, and part of the construction it turned out.
b. Examples of lexical repetition in the text include record and forms of the verb see.
c. Words in the text that belong to the lexical field of “record shop” include: Champi-
onship Vinyl, record, R & B anthology, racks, assistant, browse, serve. The last three
(or even four) are more general, i.e. typical of more kinds of shops than just “record
shops”.
d. The definite article is natural with the shop assistant because people know that shops
have shop assistants, and so the presence of the assistant is a given, even if he/she
has not been mentioned earlier.
e. An example (though not a whole sentence): He was trawling through the racks while
she was being served, so he never caught a glimpse of her face… The subject (he) is
given information from the previous sentence, what he was doing is new information,
and also what Angie was doing (being served). After so, the subject he is still given
information, never caught a glimpse of echoes didn’t see in the first sentence, but her
face is new information. These clauses thus agree well with the information principle,
with given information first and new information last.
f. The conjunctions that connect clauses or sentences in the text have been underlined.
Or expresses addition (i.e. an added alternative); as is a subordinating conjunction
expressing comparison; when signals a temporal relationship; that (occurring twice)
is a subordinating conjunction introducing a nominal clause; while (occurring twice)
is a subordinating conjunction signaling a temporal relationship; so (occurring twice)
5 The passages given under questions 5b–5d are just a few of the possible examples found
in the British National Corpus. You may have found others that illustrate the patterns
equally well.
a. In general, those connectors that occur most in spoken English are informal, par-
ticularly as the spoken English of the BNC contains a lot of informal conversation.
Academic language and newspaper language are considered more formal.
b. The phrase the question is most typically brings out the question-answer pattern, but
problem-solution can also be found:
[PROBLEM – stated as a series of questions] the question is, how exactly should
they be interpreted? What is it that makes them intelligible? What kind of facts do the
propositions communicating such claims express? [OUTLINE OF SOLUTION] One
well-known and well-publicised attempt in recent philosophy to address this problem
in a “non-reductivist” spirit has gone under the name of Existentialism, and I shall now
comment briefly on what I take to be the main features of the existentialist approach
before outlining my own position.
The question is, what constitutes wild salmon at its best? [ANSWER 1] Not the
sexually played-out kelt, nor a fish that has undergone an exhausting twenty minutes
or so battling with a master angler. Fighting for its life causes chemical changes in the
flesh. That does not render it inedible if you cook it within a few hours – or freeze it
immediately. [ANSWER 2] If you want to eat a salmon at its best, try to find one that
has been netted at the river mouth or offshore early in the spring…
c. Note that most examples of the cause-effect structure have the effect before the
cause, as shown in the following:
Those readers who like the gossip found in “Heard on my Rounds” will have noticed
[EFFECT] that the column has not appeared in this issue. [CAUSE] The reason is
that there is nothing to put in.
Though commercial banks have lent the majority of the capital, [EFFECT] the debt-ser-
vicing burden is lower. [CAUSE] The reason is that Malaysia’s exports have been
much stronger.
d. In the first example below the fact is introduces an elaboration of the statement
preceding it; in the second it introduces a correction to a false statement (the true-
false pattern).
1 The following sentences are suggestions – other alternatives will also be acceptable.
2 The following words/phrases are suggestions – other alternatives will also be acceptable.
a. If past or extant life is discovered on Mars, two possible outcomes follow, both pro-
foundly cool. J interesting
b. Three-ply Bristol board has a surface kind of like illustration board. J reminiscent of
c. The undersigned hereby acknowledges receipt of the stuff described on the annexed
invoice. J goods
d. Every author who has ever eyeballed a blank page knows the primary difficulty in
telling a story. J beheld, contemplated
e. The success of the program is directly related to the presence of highly motivated,
savvy teachers. J insightful, knowledgeable
3 In what way(s) do the members of each of the following pairs differ in terms of topic,
target group, purpose and/or wording?
c. 1 Steel is an alloy of iron and carbon in which the carbon content ranges up to
2 percent (with a higher carbon content, the material is defined as cast iron).
By far the most widely used material for building the world’s infrastructure and
industries, it is used to fabricate everything from sewing needles to oil tankers.
2 Steel is a hard metal that people use to make many different products. Car bodies,
bridges, building frames, and containers are just a few of the things made from
steel.
The topic of passages (c1) and (c2) is roughly the same, and the purpose of both is to
inform about steel. However, (c1) contains much more information and uses a much
more specialized vocabulary, while (c2) uses everyday words. This suggests that the
d. 1 The new Prius offers something for everyone. An EPA-estimated combined 50 mpg
rating for those who’d like to spend less on gas.
2 The current Prius is rated at 72.4 mpg based on European mileage testing, though
it registers 50 mpg in combined city/highway driving based on U.S. testing.
The topic of passages (d1) and (d2) is the same, namely a car called Prius. However,
(d1) contains more everyday language and makes reference to users of the car. Pas-
sage (d2) has more specialized vocabulary and refers to testing of the car. While (d1)
seems to offer the car and its features to a potential user, (d2) is merely informative.
This makes it likely that the purpose of d1 is to sell the Prius, while the purpose of
(d2) is to give information about the car to a relatively knowledgeable readership.
4 Newspaper-style versions of this text will vary greatly, so we make no attempt here at
producing a model text. However, the kinds of changes that would be required (even
for a local newspaper) include the following:
P The text must have a title that is likely to arouse interest, such as “Dead Duck Drama
in Regent’s Park” or “Local lad (11) kills duck with sandwich”.
P The text should start with an introduction of the incident and the people in it (and
since this is for a local newspaper, probably also their approximate addresses).
P The free indirect speech style of the fiction text will have to be changed, with more
focus on facts. Some of Marcus’s thoughts might be converted to statements from
him to the journalist, though.
P The dialogue cannot be kept in its original form: it can either be omitted altogether,
or just summarized. One or two of the utterances can be kept as statements to the
journalist, but possibly in a less colloquial style. For instance “That’s not a sandwich,
that’s a bloody French loaf. No wonder it keeled over. That would have killed me.”
might be turned into: Will Freeman (36), who witnessed the incident, says “It wasn’t
a sandwich, it was a French loaf which could have killed anyone”.
a. I and you are most frequent in spoken English (and least in the academic genre) while
me is most frequent in fiction. So we may conclude that spoken (conversational)