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SB Writing Module 1 Lesson 1 - Writing A Good Paragraph

The document provides instructions for writing a good paragraph. It discusses the structure of paragraphs, including having a clear topic sentence and three main points. It also explains the writing process of brainstorming, reorganizing ideas, writing a draft, and editing. Activities are included for students to practice reordering sentences into coherent paragraphs and choosing effective topic sentences. A review tests students' understanding of paragraph structure and vocabulary from the lesson. For homework, students are assigned to plan paragraphs on given topics and practice vocabulary.

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SB Writing Module 1 Lesson 1 - Writing A Good Paragraph

The document provides instructions for writing a good paragraph. It discusses the structure of paragraphs, including having a clear topic sentence and three main points. It also explains the writing process of brainstorming, reorganizing ideas, writing a draft, and editing. Activities are included for students to practice reordering sentences into coherent paragraphs and choosing effective topic sentences. A review tests students' understanding of paragraph structure and vocabulary from the lesson. For homework, students are assigned to plan paragraphs on given topics and practice vocabulary.

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Writing a Good Paragraph

Writing Module 1 – Paragraphs


Lesson 1
Writing Module 1
After this module, you can
• write a well-structured paragraph
• write correct simple, compound and complex sentences
The fastest route to higher band score!
A. The Structure of a Paragraph
Activity 1
• Groups of 4
• Worksheet
• Re-order the sentences to make a paragraph
Activity 1: Sentence Re-ordering
Activity 1: Sentence Re-ordering
There were a number of benefits to living in a small village. Firstly, people knew each other and, in the village

my grandparents came from, everyone spoke to everyone else, so no one ever felt lonelycô đơn. Secondly, there

was always someone to look after the children and to teach them good behaviour, so children grew up being

polite and respectful . Also, they could play safely in the street, and there was little crime. It was a simple life,

but everyone was happy.

However, there were a number of disadvantages. The nearest school was in the next village and the nearest

secondary school in a town some miles away. This meant that most children did not get a good education, and

most people had to work in agriculture. If young people were ambitious , they had to move away from the

village, and few people had the chance to do this. Also, when someone was ill, it was a long way to the nearest

hospital.
3 Features of a Good Paragraph
(Drawing)
B. A Good Topic Sentence
2 Features of a Good Topic Sentence
Having a boyfriend/girlfriend can be __________.
2 Features of a Good Topic Sentence
Having a boyfriend/girlfriend can be __________.

[Topic] [Controlling idea]


2 Features of a Good Topic Sentence
• An example of a paragraph without [Controlling idea].
Read this paragraph and find the main idea.

eBook readers are very popular in Vietnam. Reading eBooks is just like reading a normal book without
having to hold the book or turn the pages. These devices save students energy. Before eBook readers, students had
to carry many heavy books with them each day. However, eBook readers are extremely lightweight and usually

weigh less than a pound. eBook readers are more efficient and convenient than a regular book. They are wireless, so
students can use them anywhere. They are comfortable to hold and are clear even in bright sunlight. Finally,
purchasing a new book for an eBook reader is simple and cheap. There are now millions of eBooks available, and
many eBooks cost less than traditional books. It is clear that eBook readers have certainly made students lives much
easier.
2 Features of a Good Topic Sentence
• An example of a paragraph without [Controlling idea].
Now read this. Is it easier?

eBook readers are excellent devices for students. Reading eBooks is just like reading a normal book
without having to hold the book or turn the pages. These devices save students energy. Before eBook readers,

students had to carry many heavy books with them each day. However, eBook readers are extremely lightweight

and usually weigh less than a pound. eBook readers are more efficient and convenient than a regular book. They are
wireless, so students can use them anywhere. They are comfortable to hold and are clear even in bright sunlight.
Finally, purchasing a new book for an eBook reader is simple and cheap. There are now millions of eBooks available,
and many eBooks cost less than traditional books. It is clear that eBook readers have certainly made students lives
much easier.
Activity 3
Choose the topic sentences for these paragraphs
Activity 3 (poll)
A. There are several advantages when you go shopping in a small shops.
B. There are several disadvantages when you go shopping in a small shops.
C. You can find unique items when you go shopping in a small shops.
D. Small shops can have a few advantages.

_______. Firstly, small, independent shops are more interesting places to shop. You can find unique items

which other people will admire. I have a friend who collects antiques and he finds them in local shops, not

supermarkets or websites. Secondly, some small shops specialise in one area, which is very useful. For instance,

in music shops, the staff are very knowledgeable about music and instruments. You can get advice about what

to buy. Finally, small, local shops give character to a town. In my parents' village there are a few shops selling

boating equipment, which suits the place as it is near the sea.


Activity 3 (poll)
A. For children, taking part in a lot of afterschool activities can be a good thing.
B. For children, taking part in a lot of afterschool activities can help them become artists, musicians and
sportsmen and women.
C. There are several reasons why children are taking part in a lot of afterschool activities.

____. Firstly, if we think of all the great artists, musicians and sportsmen1 and women in the world, they all

started by doing their activity as a hobby. They found they had a talent and developed their skills to become

world class. Secondly, children usually enjoy their activities, make friends and become well-developed people.

Thirdly, parents think that being busy will stop the children getting into trouble. Their parents know what they

are doing at all times.


Activity 3 (poll)
A. Parents want children to take part in a lot of afterschool activities because of the following reasons.
B. When children take part in a lot of afterschool activities, there can be some negative effects.
C. Children need time to relax.
D. There are good reasons for parents not to put too many activities on children’s schedules.

____. Firstly, children can become stressed when they have to run from activity to activity. In addition, they

need time to play freely and use their imaginations. They can get to know themselves and their likes and

dislikes during this time. It is also important to give them time to relax, watch TV, read and be with their parents,

grandparents and siblings1.


C. Finding Good Ideas
The Writing Process
The Writing Process
1. Brainstorm
1. Listing, as many as you can
2. Re-organize
3. Write
4. Edit
Activity 4
Advantages of shopping online
more convenient
there are more products to choose
there are more discount
it’s dangerous
last week, I bought a new shirt, delivery was quick
the price is cheaper
you can compare the prices between different sellers
the people who sell things online don’t need to pay the costs of store renting
they deliver the wrong thing
when it’s raining, you can stay inside
Plan
Activity 4
Problems in big cities
too crowded
many people live in one place
too much rubbish
noisy
my bike was broken
very few trees
some people sing karaoke at night
neighbors don’t know each other
the dog next door is so noisy
traffic accidents are frequent
it takes lots of time to go to work / school
children don’t have enough safe space to play
Plan
D. Review and Homework
Review Questions
• What are 3 features of a good paragraph
• What are 2 features of a good topic sentence
• What are the 4 stages in the writing process?
Vocab Review
1. Behavior (n), 1. Equipment (n),
2. Respectful (adj), 2. In addition (từ nối),
3. Agriculture (n), 3. Imagination (n),
4. Ill (adj), 4. Discount (n),
5. Independent (adj), 5. Delivery (n),
6. Unique (adj), 6. Deliver (v),
7. Item (n), 7. Compare (v),
8. Admire (v), 8. Rent (v)
9. Specialise (v), 9. Rubbish (n),
10. Instrument (n), 10. Frequent (adj),
Vocab Review
1. Behavior (n), hành vi (teach children good ~) 1. Equipment (n), thiết bị
2. Respectful (adj), biết tôn trọng (teach children 2. In addition (từ nối), thêm vào đó
to be ~)
3. Imagination (n), trí tưởng tượng
3. Agriculture (n), nông nghiệp
4. Discount (n), giảm giá
4. Ill (adj), ốm (when you’re ~, go to hospital)
5. Delivery (n), vận chuyển (I ordered some food to
5. Independent (adj), độc lập eat but ~ was too slow)
6. Unique (adj), độc đáo 6. Compare (v), so sánh
7. Item (n), món đồ (in this shop we have lots of 7. Rent (v), thuế (I’d like to ~ a house)
unique ~)
8. Rubbish (n), rác
8. Admire (v), ngưỡng mộ
9. Frequent (adj), thường xuyên (She makes ~
9. Specialise (v), chuyên biệt (this shop ~ in boating mistakes with grammar)
equipment)
10. Instrument (n), công cụ
Homework

Today: Answer
Day 1: Plan Day 2: Plan
Review
Topic 1 Topic 2
Questions

Day 3: Plan Day 4: Plan Day 5: Quizlet


Topic 3 Topic 4 Practice
Topics
1. People live alone or in small family units rather than in large family.
Advantages? Disadvantages? (2 paragraphs)
2. Today many children spend a lot of time playing computer games
and little time on sports. Why is it?
3. Some people think that it is good for a country's culture to import
foreign movies and TV programmes. What are the benefits?
Topics
1. People live alone or in small family units rather than in large family.
Advantages? Disadvantages? (2 paragraphs)
2. Some people think that it is good for a country's culture to import
foreign movies and TV programmes. What are the benefits? What
are the drawbacks?
Quizlet
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